Comments received on poems by Neville
An Autumn Harvest
Fay Slimm. said:
I was there in that orchard so clear was your picture of autumn long past Nev. A fresh morning read of times when living was simple - - and I loved every line.
September 7th, 2019 00:58
Fay Slimm. said:
I was there in that orchard so clear was your picture of autumn long past Nev. A fresh morning read of times when living was simple - - and I loved every line.
September 7th, 2019 00:58
Infinity
Alta H Mabin said:
Beautifully respectful write. Extremely well written, Neville.
September 6th, 2019 11:55
Alta H Mabin said:
Beautifully respectful write. Extremely well written, Neville.
September 6th, 2019 11:55
Infinity
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
“When you go Home, tell them of us and say,
For your Tomorrow, we gave our Today”
John Maxwell Edmunds
1916
Perfect Neville just perfect you bloody poet
September 6th, 2019 07:34
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
“When you go Home, tell them of us and say,
For your Tomorrow, we gave our Today”
John Maxwell Edmunds
1916
Perfect Neville just perfect you bloody poet
September 6th, 2019 07:34
Infinity
Christina8 said:
Excellently penned poem---I too believe this is one of your best poems! wonderful tribute to the fallen.
September 6th, 2019 06:43
Christina8 said:
Excellently penned poem---I too believe this is one of your best poems! wonderful tribute to the fallen.
September 6th, 2019 06:43
Infinity
dusk arising said:
Outstanding tribute to the fallen and the futility of warfare.
I have never been to such a place as you describe but even photos of them resound with a spiritual reverence which also pours from your words today.
Finely crafted piece which im honoured to place amongst my favourites.
September 6th, 2019 01:51
dusk arising said:
Outstanding tribute to the fallen and the futility of warfare.
I have never been to such a place as you describe but even photos of them resound with a spiritual reverence which also pours from your words today.
Finely crafted piece which im honoured to place amongst my favourites.
September 6th, 2019 01:51
Infinity
Clara said:
Wow. A fine write Neville.
Even reading this, everything was still for me. Almost as if your words commanded respect and attention. Beautiful worded yet haunting as Fay mentioned above.
CLARA X
September 6th, 2019 00:37
Clara said:
Wow. A fine write Neville.
Even reading this, everything was still for me. Almost as if your words commanded respect and attention. Beautiful worded yet haunting as Fay mentioned above.
CLARA X
September 6th, 2019 00:37
Infinity
Fay Slimm. said:
Perfectly poemed these sacred places of fallen heroes - - time stands to attention where blood has been spilled and you capture that silence in this haunt of a read. One of your best again Nev.
September 6th, 2019 00:17
Fay Slimm. said:
Perfectly poemed these sacred places of fallen heroes - - time stands to attention where blood has been spilled and you capture that silence in this haunt of a read. One of your best again Nev.
September 6th, 2019 00:17
Somewhere Behind These Eyes
Seek said:
Poignancy coming to life as inspired words fall on deaf ears answered with silence. A fine write, Neville!
September 5th, 2019 08:42
Seek said:
Poignancy coming to life as inspired words fall on deaf ears answered with silence. A fine write, Neville!
September 5th, 2019 08:42
Somewhere Behind These Eyes
Christina8 said:
Wonderful write dear Nev! A read much enjoyed.
September 5th, 2019 06:25
Christina8 said:
Wonderful write dear Nev! A read much enjoyed.
September 5th, 2019 06:25
Somewhere Behind These Eyes
FineB said:
Hello Neville,
A wonderful and poignant write.
Keep writing FineB
September 5th, 2019 04:09
FineB said:
Hello Neville,
A wonderful and poignant write.
Keep writing FineB
September 5th, 2019 04:09
Somewhere Behind These Eyes
Michael Edwards said:
Broken words that fall on arid lands
will no more grow again
nor will the words you sow on unreceptive minds.
Just had a little poetic moment inspired by your fine write N.
September 5th, 2019 03:08
Michael Edwards said:
Broken words that fall on arid lands
will no more grow again
nor will the words you sow on unreceptive minds.
Just had a little poetic moment inspired by your fine write N.
September 5th, 2019 03:08
Somewhere Behind These Eyes
dusk arising said:
Reads like wishful thinking. The desire to forget that which haunts ones mind.
Last verse is a nice twist.
September 5th, 2019 02:18
dusk arising said:
Reads like wishful thinking. The desire to forget that which haunts ones mind.
Last verse is a nice twist.
September 5th, 2019 02:18
Somewhere Behind These Eyes
Fay Slimm. said:
Words that break needed silence are but as this strong poem relates - a sin of sorts........... behind the eyes is where memory stores hurts....... An engaging read again Nev.
September 5th, 2019 02:15
Fay Slimm. said:
Words that break needed silence are but as this strong poem relates - a sin of sorts........... behind the eyes is where memory stores hurts....... An engaging read again Nev.
September 5th, 2019 02:15
Somewhere Behind These Eyes
orchidee said:
A fine write N. I won\'t punish ya with silence - rather with sound - of me singing! heehee.
I\'m cruel - I must punish everyone then! lol.
September 5th, 2019 01:29
orchidee said:
A fine write N. I won\'t punish ya with silence - rather with sound - of me singing! heehee.
I\'m cruel - I must punish everyone then! lol.
September 5th, 2019 01:29
Somewhere Behind These Eyes
Goldfinch60 said:
Those words will forever be within you and within others as we read them on the page.
September 5th, 2019 00:48
Goldfinch60 said:
Those words will forever be within you and within others as we read them on the page.
September 5th, 2019 00:48
A Ladies Man
Poetic Dan said:
Brilliant ! I still am and many came close but in the end I think I died as ever day I do feel reborn.
Never stop sailing, being who you are!
September 4th, 2019 16:36
Poetic Dan said:
Brilliant ! I still am and many came close but in the end I think I died as ever day I do feel reborn.
Never stop sailing, being who you are!
September 4th, 2019 16:36
A Ladies Man
Suresh said:
......ain\'t it so that in the end there\'s always the one for whom we will even choose death.....
September 4th, 2019 09:49
Suresh said:
......ain\'t it so that in the end there\'s always the one for whom we will even choose death.....
September 4th, 2019 09:49
A Ladies Man
Christina8 said:
Great cadence to this...and who wants to be single?? This is a superb write!!
September 4th, 2019 09:46
Christina8 said:
Great cadence to this...and who wants to be single?? This is a superb write!!
September 4th, 2019 09:46
A Ladies Man
Clara said:
N,
There\'s such a rhythm to these words that I enjoy! Thank you for sharing!
CLARA X
September 4th, 2019 08:33
Clara said:
N,
There\'s such a rhythm to these words that I enjoy! Thank you for sharing!
CLARA X
September 4th, 2019 08:33
A Ladies Man
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
Wow...
An extraordinary write which I enjoyed reading!
~Laura~
September 4th, 2019 04:16
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
Wow...
An extraordinary write which I enjoyed reading!
~Laura~
September 4th, 2019 04:16
A Ladies Man
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write Neville. Once you have found the right person the \' Ladies man\' need not exist anymore.
September 4th, 2019 01:43
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write Neville. Once you have found the right person the \' Ladies man\' need not exist anymore.
September 4th, 2019 01:43
A Ladies Man
dusk arising said:
Singleton lifestyle is freedom to do exactly as u like..... and retain that roaming eye (convinced of course one still has those ladykiller looks).
On the other hand, a good cook and bottlewasher?
September 4th, 2019 01:37
dusk arising said:
Singleton lifestyle is freedom to do exactly as u like..... and retain that roaming eye (convinced of course one still has those ladykiller looks).
On the other hand, a good cook and bottlewasher?
September 4th, 2019 01:37
A Ladies Man
orchidee said:
Some of these poems on this site will be the death of me - or the swoon of me! lol.
September 4th, 2019 01:35
orchidee said:
Some of these poems on this site will be the death of me - or the swoon of me! lol.
September 4th, 2019 01:35
For The Sake of Poetry
Goldfinch60 said:
The thoughts of the past are ever intriguing.
September 4th, 2019 01:07
Goldfinch60 said:
The thoughts of the past are ever intriguing.
September 4th, 2019 01:07
For The Sake of Poetry
FineB said:
Hello Neville,
A good write
Good.
Keep writing FineB
September 3rd, 2019 10:12
FineB said:
Hello Neville,
A good write
Good.
Keep writing FineB
September 3rd, 2019 10:12
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