Comments received on poems by Neville
Trapped
orchidee said:
OOhh, I\'m all faint now. I\'ve heard some horror stories. \'Cutting up\' happens, but I would rather cut up a joint of meat.
I\'m all of a shudder now. I hate the theme really - hate hearing details, that is.
A cry for help? Yet desperately so.
August 28th, 2019 02:54
orchidee said:
OOhh, I\'m all faint now. I\'ve heard some horror stories. \'Cutting up\' happens, but I would rather cut up a joint of meat.
I\'m all of a shudder now. I hate the theme really - hate hearing details, that is.
A cry for help? Yet desperately so.
August 28th, 2019 02:54
Trapped
dusk arising said:
Ouch! It is truly tragic to hear of young people self harming for whatever reason. I have to admit that i cannot get my head around understanding the phenomenon.
A really powerful, punchy and disturbing piece from you today Neville.
August 28th, 2019 02:23
dusk arising said:
Ouch! It is truly tragic to hear of young people self harming for whatever reason. I have to admit that i cannot get my head around understanding the phenomenon.
A really powerful, punchy and disturbing piece from you today Neville.
August 28th, 2019 02:23
The Wind Cried Mary
sylviasearcher said:
What a warm and tender tribute, I am so sorry for your loss 😔💫
August 27th, 2019 02:18
sylviasearcher said:
What a warm and tender tribute, I am so sorry for your loss 😔💫
August 27th, 2019 02:18
Love and Warm Toast
Suresh said:
One can never forget the smell of Mom\'s love and warm toast.
August 26th, 2019 00:54
Suresh said:
One can never forget the smell of Mom\'s love and warm toast.
August 26th, 2019 00:54
Love and Warm Toast
Christina8 said:
A loving and beautiful write Neville....you are in my thoughts at this difficult time...Christina
August 25th, 2019 12:39
Christina8 said:
A loving and beautiful write Neville....you are in my thoughts at this difficult time...Christina
August 25th, 2019 12:39
Love and Warm Toast
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks NEVILLE ! A very evocative title and a Perfect Pome ! This week Brother Boris has been touring the Hospitals and telling the Staff & Residents all they need is WARM BUTTERED TOAST ! Personally its a throwback to traditional fare in Public Schools & Oxford Colleges ~ and a bid to save the NHS 95% of its Catering Bill ! However I agree with him *Hot Buttered Toast* is indeed *CIBUS DEI !* TOAST without LOVE is just scorched bread ! Toast is a Generational thing ! WAGS make Toast ~ Mums make BETTER Toast ~ Grannies make the BEST Toast ~ AMEN.
Blessings & Peace & Granny Toast
Yours ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡💙🧡💙🧡
August 25th, 2019 10:55
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks NEVILLE ! A very evocative title and a Perfect Pome ! This week Brother Boris has been touring the Hospitals and telling the Staff & Residents all they need is WARM BUTTERED TOAST ! Personally its a throwback to traditional fare in Public Schools & Oxford Colleges ~ and a bid to save the NHS 95% of its Catering Bill ! However I agree with him *Hot Buttered Toast* is indeed *CIBUS DEI !* TOAST without LOVE is just scorched bread ! Toast is a Generational thing ! WAGS make Toast ~ Mums make BETTER Toast ~ Grannies make the BEST Toast ~ AMEN.
Blessings & Peace & Granny Toast
Yours ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡💙🧡💙🧡
August 25th, 2019 10:55
Love and Warm Toast
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
A good feeling write wrapped with love!
The first two stanzas remind me of my great grandparents...
...and the last one of my maternal grandmother...
love and warmth...
my security blanket!
~Laura~
August 25th, 2019 09:47
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
A good feeling write wrapped with love!
The first two stanzas remind me of my great grandparents...
...and the last one of my maternal grandmother...
love and warmth...
my security blanket!
~Laura~
August 25th, 2019 09:47
Love and Warm Toast
dusk arising said:
A toast in a country bar always takes me back.
Seldom does the landlord let me back.
August 25th, 2019 02:52
dusk arising said:
A toast in a country bar always takes me back.
Seldom does the landlord let me back.
August 25th, 2019 02:52
Love and Warm Toast
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful feelings Neville. Love and warm toast are so memorable.
August 25th, 2019 01:09
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful feelings Neville. Love and warm toast are so memorable.
August 25th, 2019 01:09
Love and Warm Toast
orchidee said:
A lovely write N.
Meanwhile - Doh! I was in the wrong field. All I smelt was manure wafting across on the breeze. heehee.
Just a fun thing - nothing deep or psychological to read into this, compared to your \'field\'.
August 25th, 2019 00:55
orchidee said:
A lovely write N.
Meanwhile - Doh! I was in the wrong field. All I smelt was manure wafting across on the breeze. heehee.
Just a fun thing - nothing deep or psychological to read into this, compared to your \'field\'.
August 25th, 2019 00:55
The Wind Cried Mary
Suresh said:
Dear N
Please accept my deepest sympathies on your very personal loss. My mother passed away last year.
May your words be a true reflection of your mother, Mary\'s, resting place, and her star shine be the brightest, as she lives on, on the heavenly stage.
August 24th, 2019 09:35
Suresh said:
Dear N
Please accept my deepest sympathies on your very personal loss. My mother passed away last year.
May your words be a true reflection of your mother, Mary\'s, resting place, and her star shine be the brightest, as she lives on, on the heavenly stage.
August 24th, 2019 09:35
The Wind Cried Mary
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
Beautiful words for a bright new star that shall shine upon you forevermore...💫
My condolences to you and your family!
~Laura~
August 24th, 2019 05:55
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
Beautiful words for a bright new star that shall shine upon you forevermore...💫
My condolences to you and your family!
~Laura~
August 24th, 2019 05:55
The Wind Cried Mary
orchidee said:
Time to sing still.... but a lament? Yet thanks too, recalling happy times. Thinking of you N.
August 24th, 2019 05:44
orchidee said:
Time to sing still.... but a lament? Yet thanks too, recalling happy times. Thinking of you N.
August 24th, 2019 05:44
The Wind Cried Mary
Goldfinch60 said:
So sorry about your loss but that star will shine forever on you.
August 24th, 2019 03:35
Goldfinch60 said:
So sorry about your loss but that star will shine forever on you.
August 24th, 2019 03:35
The Wind Cried Mary
Fay Slimm. said:
The trauma of letting loved ones go is expressed in this tender tribute to your much loved mother - - Mary now bright as a star will I am sure comfort your sudden loss and is with you in spirit dear Neville - - sending sincere sympathy to you and the family...................... Fay
August 24th, 2019 02:51
Fay Slimm. said:
The trauma of letting loved ones go is expressed in this tender tribute to your much loved mother - - Mary now bright as a star will I am sure comfort your sudden loss and is with you in spirit dear Neville - - sending sincere sympathy to you and the family...................... Fay
August 24th, 2019 02:51
My Chest it Flutters
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
Metaphorically rich...
an enjoyable read...
indeed!
~Laura~
August 24th, 2019 01:48
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
Metaphorically rich...
an enjoyable read...
indeed!
~Laura~
August 24th, 2019 01:48
My Chest it Flutters
Goldfinch60 said:
That heart fluttering first feeling was enhanced by the growth of love throughout life.
August 24th, 2019 00:34
Goldfinch60 said:
That heart fluttering first feeling was enhanced by the growth of love throughout life.
August 24th, 2019 00:34
My Chest it Flutters
kevin browne said:
And how so many Moons away are there sat to discover the futility of ones life..This is a cheeky one though I must say...
August 23rd, 2019 09:46
kevin browne said:
And how so many Moons away are there sat to discover the futility of ones life..This is a cheeky one though I must say...
August 23rd, 2019 09:46
My Chest it Flutters
Fay Slimm. said:
A fluttering chest and a heart that dances could be time to see the Doc. but knowing why it is again happening shows a love that does not give up - a delicately worded verse of time flying and thanks for the read dear ageless friend..........
August 23rd, 2019 07:29
Fay Slimm. said:
A fluttering chest and a heart that dances could be time to see the Doc. but knowing why it is again happening shows a love that does not give up - a delicately worded verse of time flying and thanks for the read dear ageless friend..........
August 23rd, 2019 07:29
My Chest it Flutters
orchidee said:
Glad someone\'s enjoying themselves! heehee.
August 23rd, 2019 03:26
orchidee said:
Glad someone\'s enjoying themselves! heehee.
August 23rd, 2019 03:26
My Chest it Flutters
dusk arising said:
I can\'t hold a candle to this kind of verse sir!
Though i did have concerns over your hitherto masked menopausal transsexuality until i read your author\'s comment.
Next time i pass the girls high school i shall carefully listen for juvenile coo-coo-ing.
Certainly had me scratching my smiling head today.
August 23rd, 2019 03:25
dusk arising said:
I can\'t hold a candle to this kind of verse sir!
Though i did have concerns over your hitherto masked menopausal transsexuality until i read your author\'s comment.
Next time i pass the girls high school i shall carefully listen for juvenile coo-coo-ing.
Certainly had me scratching my smiling head today.
August 23rd, 2019 03:25
Over The Hill
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
An interesting and thought provoking write! Many interpretations to be considered!
~Laura~
August 22nd, 2019 17:22
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
An interesting and thought provoking write! Many interpretations to be considered!
~Laura~
August 22nd, 2019 17:22
Over The Hill
Suresh said:
I no longer have a plot of land, thus all I can do is........
but that\'s OK too
no acre, just ache
Throughly enjoyed this one
P.S.
I was granted a wish to tweet-
In my excitement a typo error-
ache instead of acre
Well now I gotta live it- Cest la vie
August 22nd, 2019 11:47
Suresh said:
I no longer have a plot of land, thus all I can do is........
but that\'s OK too
no acre, just ache
Throughly enjoyed this one
P.S.
I was granted a wish to tweet-
In my excitement a typo error-
ache instead of acre
Well now I gotta live it- Cest la vie
August 22nd, 2019 11:47
Over The Hill
Fay Slimm. said:
That acre sounds familiar my friend cos I have one of those too..........such a clever concept Nev. and writ with beguiling covert.
August 22nd, 2019 02:34
Fay Slimm. said:
That acre sounds familiar my friend cos I have one of those too..........such a clever concept Nev. and writ with beguiling covert.
August 22nd, 2019 02:34
Over The Hill
dusk arising said:
Indeed we should all acknowledge our allotted acre of desire and tend it with ambition.
Today we see the sage within you.
August 22nd, 2019 02:25
dusk arising said:
Indeed we should all acknowledge our allotted acre of desire and tend it with ambition.
Today we see the sage within you.
August 22nd, 2019 02:25
Over The Hill
sylviasearcher said:
I started a poem like that once, it ended with a different kind of ache though
There was a longing in this one maybe?
August 22nd, 2019 02:20
sylviasearcher said:
I started a poem like that once, it ended with a different kind of ache though
There was a longing in this one maybe?
August 22nd, 2019 02:20
The Appetite of Voyeurs
orchidee said:
You seen any \'ne\'ermores\' with your binoculars? I wish I would go back to sleep! lol.
August 22nd, 2019 01:54
orchidee said:
You seen any \'ne\'ermores\' with your binoculars? I wish I would go back to sleep! lol.
August 22nd, 2019 01:54
Over The Hill
orchidee said:
I thought was on the theme of age - no?! Keep taking the tablets Orchi! A fine write N.
August 22nd, 2019 01:39
orchidee said:
I thought was on the theme of age - no?! Keep taking the tablets Orchi! A fine write N.
August 22nd, 2019 01:39
The Appetite of Voyeurs
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
Hmmm...
Voyeurs’ Insatiable appetite...
interesting and intriguing!
~Laura~
August 22nd, 2019 01:34
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
Hmmm...
Voyeurs’ Insatiable appetite...
interesting and intriguing!
~Laura~
August 22nd, 2019 01:34
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