Comments received on poems by Neville
The Long Drop
Fay Slimm. said:
The final stanza changed my mind about all the foregoing - - it is a love-song and appeal to that special one whom you need to understand how close you really are........... I love this one Nev....... x
August 12th, 2019 03:48
Fay Slimm. said:
The final stanza changed my mind about all the foregoing - - it is a love-song and appeal to that special one whom you need to understand how close you really are........... I love this one Nev....... x
August 12th, 2019 03:48
Kunoichi no Geisha
PoeticBiscuit said:
Without danger would being safe feel as comforting? Just a thought. This was well written Neville!
August 11th, 2019 21:54
PoeticBiscuit said:
Without danger would being safe feel as comforting? Just a thought. This was well written Neville!
August 11th, 2019 21:54
Kunoichi no Geisha
Neville said:
You are write of course, and thank you for popping in today my friend... I am struggling making contact as am travelling and my phone is playing up....
August 11th, 2019 11:49
Neville said:
You are write of course, and thank you for popping in today my friend... I am struggling making contact as am travelling and my phone is playing up....
August 11th, 2019 11:49
Kunoichi no Geisha
Suresh said:
Everything beautiful is dangerous, but what is life without a little danger, and mystery as so well penned by you
August 11th, 2019 11:41
Suresh said:
Everything beautiful is dangerous, but what is life without a little danger, and mystery as so well penned by you
August 11th, 2019 11:41
Flawed
Suresh said:
OHHHHHH!!!! The torment of a mans mind in love or is it lust that questions his insecurities,
Your poetry so well deserves all the comments above
August 11th, 2019 11:36
Suresh said:
OHHHHHH!!!! The torment of a mans mind in love or is it lust that questions his insecurities,
Your poetry so well deserves all the comments above
August 11th, 2019 11:36
Kunoichi no Geisha
Neville said:
Thank you so very much Christina, your impression and comment are both much appreciated... Neville
August 11th, 2019 11:31
Neville said:
Thank you so very much Christina, your impression and comment are both much appreciated... Neville
August 11th, 2019 11:31
Kunoichi no Geisha
Christina8 said:
Very interesting and beautiful write Neville! \"Tho softly and broken like a bruised....\"....An amazing metaphor!
August 11th, 2019 11:21
Christina8 said:
Very interesting and beautiful write Neville! \"Tho softly and broken like a bruised....\"....An amazing metaphor!
August 11th, 2019 11:21
Kunoichi no Geisha
Michael Edwards said:
Another top notch write - your pen is magical.
August 11th, 2019 09:00
Michael Edwards said:
Another top notch write - your pen is magical.
August 11th, 2019 09:00
Kunoichi no Geisha
dusk arising said:
Love for sale can have many a price offered by many a seller at a bidding from the highest bidder. The bidding is not always monetary. These underworld is a cruel and powerful entity.
Another of your haunting mystery pieces penned to thrill today.
August 11th, 2019 05:14
dusk arising said:
Love for sale can have many a price offered by many a seller at a bidding from the highest bidder. The bidding is not always monetary. These underworld is a cruel and powerful entity.
Another of your haunting mystery pieces penned to thrill today.
August 11th, 2019 05:14
Kunoichi no Geisha
Fay Slimm. said:
Your talent for taking readers into poignant situations is first rate my friend - I could feel your lonely darkness revealing a remembered loving togetherness with an extraordinary geisha who is now no more............. an emotive read.
August 11th, 2019 03:09
Fay Slimm. said:
Your talent for taking readers into poignant situations is first rate my friend - I could feel your lonely darkness revealing a remembered loving togetherness with an extraordinary geisha who is now no more............. an emotive read.
August 11th, 2019 03:09
Kunoichi no Geisha
Goldfinch60 said:
Trust is a wonderful thing but we need to be so careful who we do trust - and love.
I too like sushi.
August 11th, 2019 01:20
Goldfinch60 said:
Trust is a wonderful thing but we need to be so careful who we do trust - and love.
I too like sushi.
August 11th, 2019 01:20
Flawed
PoeticBiscuit said:
Giving just enough information to paint a vivid picture yet remain mysterious to leave me wondering. Well done.
August 10th, 2019 21:26
PoeticBiscuit said:
Giving just enough information to paint a vivid picture yet remain mysterious to leave me wondering. Well done.
August 10th, 2019 21:26
Flawed
Goldfinch60 said:
An intriguing writethat pulled me right into it and made me wonder.
August 10th, 2019 15:29
Goldfinch60 said:
An intriguing writethat pulled me right into it and made me wonder.
August 10th, 2019 15:29
Flawed
kevin browne said:
The loving charms of the wizadry a women holds close to her majestic heart which lingers deep in a mans heart, also. It\'s enchanting motion of a desperation playing a hand dealt unturned as yet, She sounds like a tiger with claws attached. Brilliantly expressed with a deep feeling of saddened love and connections intertwined within both your loves....
August 10th, 2019 11:31
kevin browne said:
The loving charms of the wizadry a women holds close to her majestic heart which lingers deep in a mans heart, also. It\'s enchanting motion of a desperation playing a hand dealt unturned as yet, She sounds like a tiger with claws attached. Brilliantly expressed with a deep feeling of saddened love and connections intertwined within both your loves....
August 10th, 2019 11:31
Flawed
Christina8 said:
Very well written....so many questions to a female that really gets our attention......i also wonder about that scar but excellent last line.......christina
August 10th, 2019 09:53
Christina8 said:
Very well written....so many questions to a female that really gets our attention......i also wonder about that scar but excellent last line.......christina
August 10th, 2019 09:53
Flawed
FineB said:
Hello Neville,
An excellent write.
Vivid and brilliant!
Keep writing
FineB
August 10th, 2019 09:19
FineB said:
Hello Neville,
An excellent write.
Vivid and brilliant!
Keep writing
FineB
August 10th, 2019 09:19
Flawed
orchidee said:
Oh no, I took a blue pill (eh, you know them?) by mistake. Swoon!
August 10th, 2019 07:55
orchidee said:
Oh no, I took a blue pill (eh, you know them?) by mistake. Swoon!
August 10th, 2019 07:55
Flawed
orchidee said:
Someone having fun there? or a couple? The only buttercup Fido lets me have is the story of Buttercup The Cow, aimed at 3 year olds! heehee.
Oohh I could never have piercings *shudders*.
August 10th, 2019 07:51
orchidee said:
Someone having fun there? or a couple? The only buttercup Fido lets me have is the story of Buttercup The Cow, aimed at 3 year olds! heehee.
Oohh I could never have piercings *shudders*.
August 10th, 2019 07:51
Flawed
Michael Edwards said:
Well this really held the attention - she\'s some minx - wonder what that scar is all about - I\'m intrigued.
August 10th, 2019 05:04
Michael Edwards said:
Well this really held the attention - she\'s some minx - wonder what that scar is all about - I\'m intrigued.
August 10th, 2019 05:04
Flawed
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
A rose too has thorns on their stem
I wrote hat once and lost it... This is a much better interpretation very well done Neville
August 10th, 2019 04:38
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
A rose too has thorns on their stem
I wrote hat once and lost it... This is a much better interpretation very well done Neville
August 10th, 2019 04:38
Flawed
dusk arising said:
Find me the woman who doesn\'t hide the desire to leave such questioning pictures in mans brain. Pictures which will inspire the romantic poet to yearn his melancholy would yield as it does to wisdom and the smile of knowing human nature.
A great teaser you are sir, shrouded in poetic majesty.
August 10th, 2019 04:10
dusk arising said:
Find me the woman who doesn\'t hide the desire to leave such questioning pictures in mans brain. Pictures which will inspire the romantic poet to yearn his melancholy would yield as it does to wisdom and the smile of knowing human nature.
A great teaser you are sir, shrouded in poetic majesty.
August 10th, 2019 04:10
Flawed
Fay Slimm. said:
Caustic the questions addressed to a female playing the field and written so expertly it holds attention to that final revealing line. You are a word-smith par excellence mon ami.
August 10th, 2019 03:42
Fay Slimm. said:
Caustic the questions addressed to a female playing the field and written so expertly it holds attention to that final revealing line. You are a word-smith par excellence mon ami.
August 10th, 2019 03:42
Why When Where and How
orchidee said:
You seen any more \'e\'ermore\'s\' around? (Time for a pill, Orchi. Don\'t stop taking them! lol).
August 10th, 2019 02:01
orchidee said:
You seen any more \'e\'ermore\'s\' around? (Time for a pill, Orchi. Don\'t stop taking them! lol).
August 10th, 2019 02:01
Why When Where and How
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
You’ve wonderfully penned the ”Why When Where and How”...now I’m waiting for the What!
An enjoyable read!
~Laura~
August 10th, 2019 00:14
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
You’ve wonderfully penned the ”Why When Where and How”...now I’m waiting for the What!
An enjoyable read!
~Laura~
August 10th, 2019 00:14
Why When Where and How
PoeticBiscuit said:
Simple yet entertaining, keep it up!
August 9th, 2019 20:06
PoeticBiscuit said:
Simple yet entertaining, keep it up!
August 9th, 2019 20:06
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