Comments received on poems by Neville



Fondly and Truly
Michael Edwards said:

Now if I was a woman - fine write N

September 17th, 2019 15:26

Fondly and Truly
Goldfinch60 said:

Beautiful words Neville, those thoughts of love from the past are always there.

September 17th, 2019 13:19

Fondly and Truly
Laura🌻 said:

Neville,

“Fondly and Truly” indeed!
An enjoyable read that resonates...
Wonderful memories never to be forgotten if we’re lucky enough to have experienced them!

~Laura~🌻

September 17th, 2019 12:09

Fondly and Truly
Alta H Mabin said:

Beautifully tender. Loved it.

September 17th, 2019 11:56

Fondly and Truly
SerenWise said:

Very sweet little write

September 17th, 2019 11:52

Fondly and Truly
orchidee said:

A fine write N.

September 17th, 2019 10:51

Fondly and Truly
sylviasearcher said:

I am not sure I have or will ever fondly and truly

September 17th, 2019 08:12

Fondly and Truly
dusk arising said:

Beautifully phrased the unspoken desire with us all to be remembered affectionately by past \'nearly right\' lovers.
I know i look back with positive thoughts, as can be seen in my poetry.
Memories my life would be all the sadder without.

September 17th, 2019 07:46

Fondly and Truly
Christina8 said:

Oh wow this is truly beautiful Nev....Fay is correct when she says it will set female hearts asighing!!

September 17th, 2019 06:24

Fondly and Truly
Fay Slimm. said:

An appeal to set female hearts asighing - you win again Nev with your gently expressed fondly and truly romantic reminders. Great stuff.

September 17th, 2019 04:58

Client
Goldfinch60 said:

Captivating write Neville, it needs several reads as so much can be seen in it. Thank you for waking my brain this morning.

September 17th, 2019 00:27

Client
kevin browne said:

The captivating saying of judge and jury, but there\'s no mention of the executionist in this well crafted crafty, watch out below the Judges seat before she\'d be paid for some under the desk work. As for as the executionare well he landed a pretty blow on his rent arrears...

September 16th, 2019 16:45

Client
Michael Edwards said:

Well I\'m still pondericating but I guess dusk sums it up best. an intriguing write.

September 16th, 2019 12:27

Client
Poetic Dan said:

Tick... Tick.... Boom!
Thank you

September 16th, 2019 12:05

Client
orchidee said:

I of course didn\'t see the hidden single universal truth! lol.

September 16th, 2019 09:32

Client
Christina8 said:

Interesting twist on words on these clever lines....alot can be read into them

September 16th, 2019 06:57

Client
dusk arising said:

An accessory to the crime of..... mmmm.... nay she was the prize for ten bob and a half hour of fun.
She knew how to find justice in his old bailey once she had his wig off and doing her jury service was a sunday regular......

...... it\'s all there as my perverse mind grapples with the opportunities presented by you today.

Some said \'let her dangle\' others had community service in mind.

September 16th, 2019 05:06

Client
Fay Slimm. said:

Letting that be so is wisest methinks......... clients are clients of all sorts of people.......... another to ponder on Nev.............

September 16th, 2019 04:21

Client
sylviasearcher said:

Well I read quite a lot into these clever lines...

September 16th, 2019 03:52

Inside Her Pants
sylviasearcher said:

Inside her pants
There was a chance
But with rhymes like pussy
He learned, unlike he, she was fussy


September 16th, 2019 02:37

Inside Her Pants
Goldfinch60 said:

Has romance left your world Neville,
Perhaps you never gave it a chance,
When you picked that lance,
To make your advance,
Through the fields of France.

September 16th, 2019 00:27

Inside Her Pants
Suresh said:

Try as hard, as I may, focus on my daily chants
Thoughts uncontrolled, veer off, to inside her pants
Fight as I might, sexual urge is too strong
No matter how it\'s sung, it\'s a great song


September 15th, 2019 15:15

Inside Her Pants
Fay Slimm. said:

I like a dare specially a double but can only think of these two .........

Inside her pants
Hides sweet Nancy - - - -- OR

Inside her pants
cheeky Nancy.

Howz that then !! - -- bum bum !! ............. from Fay

September 15th, 2019 08:57

Inside Her Pants
orchidee said:

Ants in ya pants - and even that\'s enough to make me swoon! It would be! Pass me the purple tablets.

September 15th, 2019 07:26

Inside Her Pants
Andrew Charles Forrest said:

Remnants of Rembrandt implant their confidants
While Durant decants the sycophant plant

DO NOT get me started on Knickers! Michael

September 15th, 2019 07:04

Inside Her Pants
dusk arising said:

I\'ve taken your challenge
and hoping theres a chance
i can find a rhyming word
as i enter a trance
i hope its quite suitable and worth
perhaps a second glance
or i\'ll look quite ridiculous
for taking this stance.

He he he, thanks for this opportunity of being more silly than usual.




September 15th, 2019 06:07

Inside Her Pants
Michael Edwards said:

They found romance
inside her pants
whilst only stickers rhymes with knickers.

September 15th, 2019 04:59

Food for Thought
Goldfinch60 said:

Ah breakfast!

September 15th, 2019 01:17

A Blue Toothbrush
Fay Slimm. said:

I knew this ruse at one time and fell for it hook line and sinker - - your telling never loses its magic my friend........... grand master plans can sometimes work and then can also back-fire......... but morning \"nooky\" to quote Michael can heal much need for those daring to
try the blue toothbrush allure ........................ Fay

September 14th, 2019 13:47

Food for Thought
dusk arising said:

Sounds absolutely edible mate. Get fat!

September 14th, 2019 13:03



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