Comments received on poems by Neville



Different Measures
Doggerel Dave said:

Time and distance are quite different in a Newtonian world, aren\'t they....But what of beyond? I\'m well on my way to personally find out.....perhaps!!!

June 2nd, 2024 17:52

Different Measures
MendedFences27 said:

All those \"different times\" and \"distant\" places become \"shams\" as we age and face the end of reality Very powerful words well-spoken and laden with wisdom.\" Loved it. - Phil A.

June 2nd, 2024 16:02

Different Measures
orchidee said:

I\'m there waiting too - for the No.7 bus to take me away from KP! lol.

June 2nd, 2024 14:53

Different Measures
Alan R said:

time and distance

were both quite distinctly

different measures


That\'s quite thought provoking!

June 2nd, 2024 11:31

It is What it Is
2781 said:

Sounds a bit fishy

June 2nd, 2024 09:03

It is What it Is
Thomas W Case said:

Superbly written. I love this. I have used the C word in a few poems too. At least one. Lol.

June 2nd, 2024 06:26

It is What it Is
Goldfinch60 said:

meaningful words Neville.

Andy

June 2nd, 2024 01:25

It is What it Is
Doggerel Dave said:

Sounds a bit competitive here, Neville.....

June 1st, 2024 08:25

It is What it Is
Alan R said:

Feels like sin to love this poem the way I love this poem!!

June 1st, 2024 03:43

It is What it Is
orchidee said:

KP\'s a fish, as ya know - an old trout. Are there plenty more fish in the sea for me? If so, I\'ll throw her back into the sea. lol.

June 1st, 2024 01:39

Oh’ to Be Vaporized
Goldfinch60 said:

True love is certainly sweet tasting and perfumed in my life Neville.

Andy

June 1st, 2024 00:48

Oh’ to Be Vaporized
aDarkerMind said:

bang!
that hit me on all sides....
worthy of much applause Neville;

May 31st, 2024 10:15

Oh’ to Be Vaporized
orchidee said:

Vaporised like a puff of smoke from those vape thingys. A wish from me for KP! lol.

May 31st, 2024 01:34

Too Long In the Tooth
Goldfinch60 said:

Wonderful word Neville.

Andy

May 31st, 2024 01:03

Too Long In the Tooth
MendedFences27 said:

Closure upon a relationship is a heartfelt and wonderful thing. Yet, we can survive and flourish without it. Perhaps it is best, to leave well enough alone. Rekindling a fire upon ashes can get one burnt.
\"I could feel it in the tone of your broken voice,\" may be a warning.
An honest and heartfelt poem. Very personal and biographical in nature. Avoid ghosts from the past - Phil A.

May 30th, 2024 14:58

Too Long In the Tooth
Doggerel Dave said:

I like to assemble my own take with words I choose, Neville, but:
\"Let it be, let it be, let it be, let it be
There will be an answer, let it be\"

May 30th, 2024 07:05

Too Long In the Tooth
Cassie58 said:

Beautiful write Neville.While closures are best, they don’t always happen. Speaks to me about ghosts from the past.

May 30th, 2024 06:31

Too Long In the Tooth
orchidee said:

Good write N.

May 30th, 2024 04:09

Too Long In the Tooth
Neilton said:

Your poem is very beautiful!I enjoyed it !


May 30th, 2024 03:55

Too Long In the Tooth
2781 said:

Autumn is a beautiful season

May 30th, 2024 02:48

A Day Out in The Country
jarcher54 said:

Light-hearted on the surface, but a gut punch of a lament for a more peaceful, undisturbed time of tradition and natural rhythms. Sigh.

May 29th, 2024 17:53

So Very Lightly Hued
MendedFences27 said:

Like every fire ever created it is reduced to ashes, but during its passion it shone brighter than fire itself. Your poem describes a maturing relationship in the best way possible, loved it. - Phil A.

May 29th, 2024 16:27

So Very Lightly Hued
Thomas W Case said:

Beautiful work.

May 29th, 2024 15:48

So Very Lightly Hued
Bobby O said:

We fade to a status that can’t match the world we inhabit.

May 29th, 2024 11:08

So Very Lightly Hued
Eugene S. said:

A pale moon within a husk of straw. Love the imagery, and where you went with this!

May 29th, 2024 03:55

So Very Lightly Hued
Doggerel Dave said:

Hallucinatory write, Neville.

May 29th, 2024 02:53

So Very Lightly Hued
Cassie58 said:

This little piece of brevity is exquisite in both its sadness and delicate beauty. Where the ashes lay strewn in the grate, there once burned and thrived the heat of a memorable fire. The moon knows that, sees everything and is eternal. The glow of the moon is dazzling. Have a lovely Wednesday Neville.

May 29th, 2024 02:21

So Very Lightly Hued
orchidee said:

Good write N.

May 29th, 2024 01:40

So Very Lightly Hued
Goldfinch60 said:

May that moon always shine on your life Neville.

Andy

May 29th, 2024 01:06

That Time of Year Again
Goldfinch60 said:

So true and so wonderful to believe that Nature will always be there for as as it increases.

Andy

May 29th, 2024 00:49



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