Comments received on poems by Neville
Different Measures
Doggerel Dave said:
Time and distance are quite different in a Newtonian world, aren\'t they....But what of beyond? I\'m well on my way to personally find out.....perhaps!!!
June 2nd, 2024 17:52
Doggerel Dave said:
Time and distance are quite different in a Newtonian world, aren\'t they....But what of beyond? I\'m well on my way to personally find out.....perhaps!!!
June 2nd, 2024 17:52
Different Measures
MendedFences27 said:
All those \"different times\" and \"distant\" places become \"shams\" as we age and face the end of reality Very powerful words well-spoken and laden with wisdom.\" Loved it. - Phil A.
June 2nd, 2024 16:02
MendedFences27 said:
All those \"different times\" and \"distant\" places become \"shams\" as we age and face the end of reality Very powerful words well-spoken and laden with wisdom.\" Loved it. - Phil A.
June 2nd, 2024 16:02
Different Measures
orchidee said:
I\'m there waiting too - for the No.7 bus to take me away from KP! lol.
June 2nd, 2024 14:53
orchidee said:
I\'m there waiting too - for the No.7 bus to take me away from KP! lol.
June 2nd, 2024 14:53
Different Measures
Alan R said:
time and distance
were both quite distinctly
different measures
That\'s quite thought provoking!
June 2nd, 2024 11:31
Alan R said:
time and distance
were both quite distinctly
different measures
That\'s quite thought provoking!
June 2nd, 2024 11:31
It is What it Is
Thomas W Case said:
Superbly written. I love this. I have used the C word in a few poems too. At least one. Lol.
June 2nd, 2024 06:26
Thomas W Case said:
Superbly written. I love this. I have used the C word in a few poems too. At least one. Lol.
June 2nd, 2024 06:26
It is What it Is
Doggerel Dave said:
Sounds a bit competitive here, Neville.....
June 1st, 2024 08:25
Doggerel Dave said:
Sounds a bit competitive here, Neville.....
June 1st, 2024 08:25
It is What it Is
Alan R said:
Feels like sin to love this poem the way I love this poem!!
June 1st, 2024 03:43
Alan R said:
Feels like sin to love this poem the way I love this poem!!
June 1st, 2024 03:43
It is What it Is
orchidee said:
KP\'s a fish, as ya know - an old trout. Are there plenty more fish in the sea for me? If so, I\'ll throw her back into the sea. lol.
June 1st, 2024 01:39
orchidee said:
KP\'s a fish, as ya know - an old trout. Are there plenty more fish in the sea for me? If so, I\'ll throw her back into the sea. lol.
June 1st, 2024 01:39
Oh’ to Be Vaporized
Goldfinch60 said:
True love is certainly sweet tasting and perfumed in my life Neville.
Andy
June 1st, 2024 00:48
Goldfinch60 said:
True love is certainly sweet tasting and perfumed in my life Neville.
Andy
June 1st, 2024 00:48
Oh’ to Be Vaporized
aDarkerMind said:
bang!
that hit me on all sides....
worthy of much applause Neville;
May 31st, 2024 10:15
aDarkerMind said:
bang!
that hit me on all sides....
worthy of much applause Neville;
May 31st, 2024 10:15
Oh’ to Be Vaporized
orchidee said:
Vaporised like a puff of smoke from those vape thingys. A wish from me for KP! lol.
May 31st, 2024 01:34
orchidee said:
Vaporised like a puff of smoke from those vape thingys. A wish from me for KP! lol.
May 31st, 2024 01:34
Too Long In the Tooth
MendedFences27 said:
Closure upon a relationship is a heartfelt and wonderful thing. Yet, we can survive and flourish without it. Perhaps it is best, to leave well enough alone. Rekindling a fire upon ashes can get one burnt.
\"I could feel it in the tone of your broken voice,\" may be a warning.
An honest and heartfelt poem. Very personal and biographical in nature. Avoid ghosts from the past - Phil A.
May 30th, 2024 14:58
MendedFences27 said:
Closure upon a relationship is a heartfelt and wonderful thing. Yet, we can survive and flourish without it. Perhaps it is best, to leave well enough alone. Rekindling a fire upon ashes can get one burnt.
\"I could feel it in the tone of your broken voice,\" may be a warning.
An honest and heartfelt poem. Very personal and biographical in nature. Avoid ghosts from the past - Phil A.
May 30th, 2024 14:58
Too Long In the Tooth
Doggerel Dave said:
I like to assemble my own take with words I choose, Neville, but:
\"Let it be, let it be, let it be, let it be
There will be an answer, let it be\"
May 30th, 2024 07:05
Doggerel Dave said:
I like to assemble my own take with words I choose, Neville, but:
\"Let it be, let it be, let it be, let it be
There will be an answer, let it be\"
May 30th, 2024 07:05
Too Long In the Tooth
Cassie58 said:
Beautiful write Neville.While closures are best, they don’t always happen. Speaks to me about ghosts from the past.
May 30th, 2024 06:31
Cassie58 said:
Beautiful write Neville.While closures are best, they don’t always happen. Speaks to me about ghosts from the past.
May 30th, 2024 06:31
A Day Out in The Country
jarcher54 said:
Light-hearted on the surface, but a gut punch of a lament for a more peaceful, undisturbed time of tradition and natural rhythms. Sigh.
May 29th, 2024 17:53
jarcher54 said:
Light-hearted on the surface, but a gut punch of a lament for a more peaceful, undisturbed time of tradition and natural rhythms. Sigh.
May 29th, 2024 17:53
So Very Lightly Hued
MendedFences27 said:
Like every fire ever created it is reduced to ashes, but during its passion it shone brighter than fire itself. Your poem describes a maturing relationship in the best way possible, loved it. - Phil A.
May 29th, 2024 16:27
MendedFences27 said:
Like every fire ever created it is reduced to ashes, but during its passion it shone brighter than fire itself. Your poem describes a maturing relationship in the best way possible, loved it. - Phil A.
May 29th, 2024 16:27
So Very Lightly Hued
Bobby O said:
We fade to a status that can’t match the world we inhabit.
May 29th, 2024 11:08
Bobby O said:
We fade to a status that can’t match the world we inhabit.
May 29th, 2024 11:08
So Very Lightly Hued
Eugene S. said:
A pale moon within a husk of straw. Love the imagery, and where you went with this!
May 29th, 2024 03:55
Eugene S. said:
A pale moon within a husk of straw. Love the imagery, and where you went with this!
May 29th, 2024 03:55
So Very Lightly Hued
Cassie58 said:
This little piece of brevity is exquisite in both its sadness and delicate beauty. Where the ashes lay strewn in the grate, there once burned and thrived the heat of a memorable fire. The moon knows that, sees everything and is eternal. The glow of the moon is dazzling. Have a lovely Wednesday Neville.
May 29th, 2024 02:21
Cassie58 said:
This little piece of brevity is exquisite in both its sadness and delicate beauty. Where the ashes lay strewn in the grate, there once burned and thrived the heat of a memorable fire. The moon knows that, sees everything and is eternal. The glow of the moon is dazzling. Have a lovely Wednesday Neville.
May 29th, 2024 02:21
So Very Lightly Hued
Goldfinch60 said:
May that moon always shine on your life Neville.
Andy
May 29th, 2024 01:06
Goldfinch60 said:
May that moon always shine on your life Neville.
Andy
May 29th, 2024 01:06
That Time of Year Again
Goldfinch60 said:
So true and so wonderful to believe that Nature will always be there for as as it increases.
Andy
May 29th, 2024 00:49
Goldfinch60 said:
So true and so wonderful to believe that Nature will always be there for as as it increases.
Andy
May 29th, 2024 00:49
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