Comments received on poems by Neville
Famine
orchidee said:
A fine write N. KP\'s not fat, but she\'s a bloated trout. lol.
February 4th, 2024 10:54
orchidee said:
A fine write N. KP\'s not fat, but she\'s a bloated trout. lol.
February 4th, 2024 10:54
Famine
Dayena said:
your words delicately captures the essence of longing and memory. just awesome..
February 4th, 2024 10:30
Dayena said:
your words delicately captures the essence of longing and memory. just awesome..
February 4th, 2024 10:30
Famine
Teddy.15 said:
Worth reading multiple times dear Nev, I\'m still trying to get my head around it it\'s so powerful. 🤗
February 4th, 2024 07:26
Teddy.15 said:
Worth reading multiple times dear Nev, I\'m still trying to get my head around it it\'s so powerful. 🤗
February 4th, 2024 07:26
Once When She Tasted of Apples
orchidee said:
The only juice from KP is bitter lemon juice. It\'s my fault - I make her bitter by slagging her off every day. lol.
I might swoon if I look for too many meanings in this.
February 4th, 2024 03:15
orchidee said:
The only juice from KP is bitter lemon juice. It\'s my fault - I make her bitter by slagging her off every day. lol.
I might swoon if I look for too many meanings in this.
February 4th, 2024 03:15
Once When She Tasted of Apples
Goldfinch60 said:
May that juice run down your lips once more Neville.
Andy
February 4th, 2024 02:24
Goldfinch60 said:
May that juice run down your lips once more Neville.
Andy
February 4th, 2024 02:24
Once When She Tasted of Apples
Thomas W Case said:
Very hot work, thirsty for some cider.
February 3rd, 2024 21:37
Thomas W Case said:
Very hot work, thirsty for some cider.
February 3rd, 2024 21:37
Once When She Tasted of Apples
Accidental Poet said:
Not exactly sure of what\'s going on here N, or maybe I think I know. But regardless, I\'d gladly pay you Monday for some apple pie today. 🍎 😉
February 3rd, 2024 21:12
Accidental Poet said:
Not exactly sure of what\'s going on here N, or maybe I think I know. But regardless, I\'d gladly pay you Monday for some apple pie today. 🍎 😉
February 3rd, 2024 21:12
The Gagging of Gaza
Doggerel Dave said:
Neville - I\'m not sure you are OK. Just a feeling.....
February 3rd, 2024 16:47
Doggerel Dave said:
Neville - I\'m not sure you are OK. Just a feeling.....
February 3rd, 2024 16:47
Once When She Tasted of Apples
2781 said:
I said, I will go up to the palm tree,I will take hold of the boughs thereof: now also thy breasts shall be like clusters on the vine, and the smell of thy nose like apples;
February 3rd, 2024 15:51
2781 said:
I said, I will go up to the palm tree,I will take hold of the boughs thereof: now also thy breasts shall be like clusters on the vine, and the smell of thy nose like apples;
February 3rd, 2024 15:51
The Gagging of Gaza
Parisab said:
Seems like the lives you pictured are victims who are in disbelief of their own demise-the denial of these atrocities will haunt us with trauma for generations to come-thank you for using your sensitive and honest pen, Neville
February 2nd, 2024 20:58
Parisab said:
Seems like the lives you pictured are victims who are in disbelief of their own demise-the denial of these atrocities will haunt us with trauma for generations to come-thank you for using your sensitive and honest pen, Neville
February 2nd, 2024 20:58
The Gagging of Gaza
Doggerel Dave said:
There\'s nothing I can add to the last three entries above, ignoring for the moment the penultimate usual diversion....
History from forever seems to be the mechanism which generates the ongoing conflict and characterises humankind\'s warlike behaviour.
Your piece is spot on as it defines this point in time.
Please give it wider circulation, Neville.
February 2nd, 2024 16:38
Doggerel Dave said:
There\'s nothing I can add to the last three entries above, ignoring for the moment the penultimate usual diversion....
History from forever seems to be the mechanism which generates the ongoing conflict and characterises humankind\'s warlike behaviour.
Your piece is spot on as it defines this point in time.
Please give it wider circulation, Neville.
February 2nd, 2024 16:38
The Gagging of Gaza
Bella Shepard said:
Your poem poses the question, is a strip of land more valuable than human life? Sadly, the answer is yes? This fight, over a strip of land, has been going on for 75 years, I should think the land is exhausted with the wars, and just wants peace. It\'s a pity that this strip of land cannot speak, for if it could I think it would welcome all. Brilliantly written my friend, you capture the senseless of continued conflict and wars, when all they accomplish is devestation.
February 2nd, 2024 16:05
Bella Shepard said:
Your poem poses the question, is a strip of land more valuable than human life? Sadly, the answer is yes? This fight, over a strip of land, has been going on for 75 years, I should think the land is exhausted with the wars, and just wants peace. It\'s a pity that this strip of land cannot speak, for if it could I think it would welcome all. Brilliantly written my friend, you capture the senseless of continued conflict and wars, when all they accomplish is devestation.
February 2nd, 2024 16:05
The Gagging of Gaza
orchidee said:
A sensitive write N.
Meanwhile - some garotting going on between KP and I?! That\'s going too far, you naughty guinea pig, says Fido.
February 2nd, 2024 12:30
orchidee said:
A sensitive write N.
Meanwhile - some garotting going on between KP and I?! That\'s going too far, you naughty guinea pig, says Fido.
February 2nd, 2024 12:30
The Gagging of Gaza
Teddy.15 said:
And right before all our eyes, I can\'t believe we live in this world to be honest. A magnificent piece of poetry that I wish wasn\'t real and going on as we speak. Kudos 👏
February 2nd, 2024 12:10
Teddy.15 said:
And right before all our eyes, I can\'t believe we live in this world to be honest. A magnificent piece of poetry that I wish wasn\'t real and going on as we speak. Kudos 👏
February 2nd, 2024 12:10
The Gagging of Gaza
Accidental Poet said:
And on and on it goes. It seems all it takes is two sides to oppose each other on anything and that\'s reason enough for a trigger happy military to launch rockets and missiles at each other. Barbaric mindsets will destroy the world for their own ego\'s sake. Great write N.
February 2nd, 2024 11:15
Accidental Poet said:
And on and on it goes. It seems all it takes is two sides to oppose each other on anything and that\'s reason enough for a trigger happy military to launch rockets and missiles at each other. Barbaric mindsets will destroy the world for their own ego\'s sake. Great write N.
February 2nd, 2024 11:15
The Gagging of Gaza
Lorenz said:
For 20 years I was in charge of souls in communities for the (so-called) mentally handicapped .I have built a reality...
February 2nd, 2024 09:02
Lorenz said:
For 20 years I was in charge of souls in communities for the (so-called) mentally handicapped .I have built a reality...
February 2nd, 2024 09:02
The Gagging of Gaza
Lorenz said:
Enough with the psychopath mattimala\'s call to kill !
February 2nd, 2024 06:43
Lorenz said:
Enough with the psychopath mattimala\'s call to kill !
February 2nd, 2024 06:43
Dare to Stray
Goldfinch60 said:
We must each go along our own paths Neville to get to the place where we want to be.
Andy
February 2nd, 2024 02:49
Goldfinch60 said:
We must each go along our own paths Neville to get to the place where we want to be.
Andy
February 2nd, 2024 02:49
Just a Few Odd Diary Notes
Goldfinch60 said:
So true Neville, who is counting, I\'m not.
Andy
February 2nd, 2024 02:21
Goldfinch60 said:
So true Neville, who is counting, I\'m not.
Andy
February 2nd, 2024 02:21
Dare to Stray
Bella Shepard said:
Tis safer to stray when the return route is well marked. Good judgement, and on occasion, a good pair of running shoes are essential. Love the visual of these lines, and love the poem!
February 1st, 2024 16:16
Bella Shepard said:
Tis safer to stray when the return route is well marked. Good judgement, and on occasion, a good pair of running shoes are essential. Love the visual of these lines, and love the poem!
February 1st, 2024 16:16
Dare to Stray
Accidental Poet said:
diversions, what\'s that? Oh look, a squirrel with a Top Hat and walking stick. 🤪
February 1st, 2024 10:01
Accidental Poet said:
diversions, what\'s that? Oh look, a squirrel with a Top Hat and walking stick. 🤪
February 1st, 2024 10:01
Dare to Stray
Doggerel Dave said:
Premier advice there, Sir - analyze, decide and move on.... Neat principle well defined.
February 1st, 2024 07:01
Doggerel Dave said:
Premier advice there, Sir - analyze, decide and move on.... Neat principle well defined.
February 1st, 2024 07:01
Dare to Stray
Teddy.15 said:
Being in the right place at the right time and there\'s being in the wrong place at the wrong time. Wonderful provoking the readers mind. ❤️
February 1st, 2024 03:25
Teddy.15 said:
Being in the right place at the right time and there\'s being in the wrong place at the wrong time. Wonderful provoking the readers mind. ❤️
February 1st, 2024 03:25
Dare to Stray
orchidee said:
It\'s a temptation to stray from KP - stray from old trouts, that is! lol. I never see her 99% of the time in person anyway, only at botox clinics, in the papers, magazines, etc. Dunno why I\'m complaining!
February 1st, 2024 03:18
orchidee said:
It\'s a temptation to stray from KP - stray from old trouts, that is! lol. I never see her 99% of the time in person anyway, only at botox clinics, in the papers, magazines, etc. Dunno why I\'m complaining!
February 1st, 2024 03:18
Just a Few Odd Diary Notes
Bobby O said:
I count but I reserve the right to refuse audit and to creatively classify. When you are in “observation mode w charachature as category “ I’d be good for a two hour session deeply coasting with an inveigled communique
February 1st, 2024 01:14
Bobby O said:
I count but I reserve the right to refuse audit and to creatively classify. When you are in “observation mode w charachature as category “ I’d be good for a two hour session deeply coasting with an inveigled communique
February 1st, 2024 01:14
Just a Few Odd Diary Notes
Accidental Poet said:
The best I can offer is Meatloaf... You want 1, 2 or 3 slices? 🤪
January 31st, 2024 10:53
Accidental Poet said:
The best I can offer is Meatloaf... You want 1, 2 or 3 slices? 🤪
January 31st, 2024 10:53
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