Comments received on poems by Neville



Silly Me
Doggerel Dave said:

The unreachable enigma of some relationships, Neville....

March 8th, 2024 07:51

The Difference in Our Similarities
Doggerel Dave said:

Sir I stand as an exception, not an unusual standing for me...(oh git orf yer soapbox yer cantankerous old git..)
It\'s not poetry per se, but yer content wot counts.....

March 8th, 2024 07:06

Silly Me
Alan R said:

Very touching

March 8th, 2024 03:46

Silly Me
Teddy.15 said:

I can see my relationship with my father in here, I love him but he was never any good as a dad. wow Neville this one is so very powerful and I just love the twist on the wishing well superb, love comes in so many forms and this is brilliantly written. 🌹 πŸ’œ 🌹

March 8th, 2024 03:39

Silly Me
Goldfinch60 said:

They can work for elders as well Neville but maybe you don\'t remember all the wishes you made.

Andy

March 8th, 2024 03:03

Silly Me
orchidee said:

Good write N.
You will know I threw the letters K and P into a well - or a cess-pit! lol.

March 8th, 2024 02:47

The Difference in Our Similarities
Goldfinch60 said:

So very true Neville, those humans have a great deal for which to answer!

Andy

March 8th, 2024 02:26

The Difference in Our Similarities
MendedFences27 said:

If all these fabled creatures were authors, they would be ruined by Hollywood. Yeti Jr. writes, \"My Life with Papa\" and gets $50 million from Universal.
Your poem is direct and to the point. Poetry is what binds us as we share our thoughts and experiences. Perhaps it is the glue for mankind, - Phil A.

March 7th, 2024 17:04

The Difference in Our Similarities
Bella Shepard said:

The beauty of poetry takes us to a different plane, away from the all too human foibles of life. That \"thing about poetry\" is unique, as is the poet that perceives it. Loved the write!

March 7th, 2024 15:26

The Difference in Our Similarities
Cassie58 said:

Oh the power of poetry:) What strength it has to unite. A fun write Neville. Always celebrate the similarities. I can’t believe you are an old grouch. Those fears and contempt of almost everything human:)) That needs intervention :)) Hope your Thursday has been happy and productive my friend.

March 7th, 2024 13:04

The Difference in Our Similarities
Cloie said:

This is such a fun and imaginative piece! I love how you\'ve brought together these mythical beings and yourself in such a lighthearted way. It\'s like a whimsical journey through the shared quirks and interests of the supernatural world. And the nod to poetry as the common thread among us adds a delightful twist! Great job capturing the playful side of storytelling.

March 7th, 2024 09:53

The Difference in Our Similarities
orchidee said:

After this my next poem has to be: The similarities in our differences. You knew it!

March 7th, 2024 08:57

The Difference in Our Similarities
Accidental Poet said:

A very provocative write N, two thumbs up from me. πŸ‘πŸ‘ If I may, I\'d like to add Angels to that list. Or at least to my own list. And I have to wonder, if all these beings could write poetry, how interesting that would be. πŸ€”

March 7th, 2024 07:12

The Difference in Our Similarities
Tom Dylan said:

A good write, Neville.. we do all have a thing for poetry. Spot on. :-)

March 7th, 2024 05:53

The Difference in Our Similarities
Teddy.15 said:

A thing for poetry lol indeed dear Nev, we all have a fave too. 🌹

March 7th, 2024 05:34

From a Collection of First Times Remembered
Goldfinch60 said:

I hope it was a good whisky Neville.

Cheers!

Andy

March 7th, 2024 02:03

From a Collection of First Times Remembered
Thomas W Case said:

Brilliant snapshot.

March 6th, 2024 23:48

On Waking Up in Rio
Rocky Lagou said:

As a Brazilian, this speaks to me on another level. That last line feels as if it were almost slurred by a drunken man: β€œtop to toe.” Everything is affected and everything surrounding the speaker is so captivating. ✨

March 6th, 2024 22:53

From a Collection of First Times Remembered
Bella Shepard said:

A beautiful memory, preserved in every detail, such happy ones are a treasure. On the other end of that spectrum, no pun intended, I remember my first colonoscopy, in all its horror. I much prefer your memory, keep them positive ones coming my friend. Just lovely!

March 6th, 2024 16:13

From a Collection of First Times Remembered
Cassie58 said:

What a special memory of time aboard a cruise ship. Sounds absolutely perfect. Lucky you Neville.

March 6th, 2024 13:51

On Waking Up in Rio
Cloie said:

Your poem is like a rollercoaster for the imagination! It paints a vivid picture of wonder. The imagery is striking. Great job!

March 6th, 2024 12:24

Arc
Bella Shepard said:

You create an ambiance of comfort, and sweet familiarity in these three, visually pleasing lines. Subtle and oh so beautiful!

March 6th, 2024 09:03

From a Collection of First Times Remembered
Christina8 said:

What a wonderful memory, N., captured and perfectly retold.

March 6th, 2024 08:35

From a Collection of First Times Remembered
Accidental Poet said:

And 6 days later you wished me a happy 67th birthday. 67 only comes once so that was a first and only. πŸ€”

March 6th, 2024 08:32

From a Collection of First Times Remembered
Tom Dylan said:

Another fine write, Neville, and another moment perfectly captured.

March 6th, 2024 06:45

From a Collection of First Times Remembered
Doggerel Dave said:

2023??? I dooon\'t belieeeve it....!!!

March 6th, 2024 05:59

From a Collection of First Times Remembered
orchidee said:

I suppose I remember the moment I met KP, though I\'d like to forget it! lol.

March 6th, 2024 02:59

From a Collection of First Times Remembered
Teddy.15 said:

What a charmed life you do lead Mr Neville. So very well written into a moment and memory of time. β€οΈπŸ’œβ€οΈ

March 6th, 2024 02:56

On Waking Up in Rio
Goldfinch60 said:

Those dreams can take you to some very strange places Neville.

Andy

March 6th, 2024 02:13

Recall
Bobby O said:

Any stone yet turned still presents gifts for perspective

March 6th, 2024 01:52



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