Comments received on poems by Neville
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sorenbarrett said:
Anthropomorphism at its best. A most picturesque ride through a scenic landscape. Sign me up for the next tour.
July 26th, 2024 05:08
sorenbarrett said:
Anthropomorphism at its best. A most picturesque ride through a scenic landscape. Sign me up for the next tour.
July 26th, 2024 05:08
Thanks for Coming But ..
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful emotive words Neville.
Andy
July 26th, 2024 01:11
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful emotive words Neville.
Andy
July 26th, 2024 01:11
Thanks for Coming But ..
MendedFences27 said:
Friend or lover, it matters naught. A relationship falls apart and the leaving or going begins. Sometimes the love has turned to hatred, and you can\'t wait to be rid of them, and sometimes it remains, which makes the parting more painful. Once in a while, it\'s a bit of both. Then, the emotions become tangled. One way or the other, it is probably best to have parted. It certainly makes for better poetry. - Phil A,
July 25th, 2024 15:12
MendedFences27 said:
Friend or lover, it matters naught. A relationship falls apart and the leaving or going begins. Sometimes the love has turned to hatred, and you can\'t wait to be rid of them, and sometimes it remains, which makes the parting more painful. Once in a while, it\'s a bit of both. Then, the emotions become tangled. One way or the other, it is probably best to have parted. It certainly makes for better poetry. - Phil A,
July 25th, 2024 15:12
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Tom Dylan said:
That one packed a punch, mate. A fine write.
July 25th, 2024 09:15
Tom Dylan said:
That one packed a punch, mate. A fine write.
July 25th, 2024 09:15
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sorenbarrett said:
Well written and it pretty much says it all. \"Parting is such sweet sorrow.\" Here I hear irritation covered with a thin blanket of civility. Lovely
July 25th, 2024 05:44
sorenbarrett said:
Well written and it pretty much says it all. \"Parting is such sweet sorrow.\" Here I hear irritation covered with a thin blanket of civility. Lovely
July 25th, 2024 05:44
Thanks for Coming But ..
orchidee said:
They say this to be then add..... \'but you\'ve overstayed your welcome\'. The intention is for me to \'get my coat\' but I don\'t get the hint, and I stay around like a bad smell/apple/penny/ bad whatever! lol.
July 25th, 2024 05:23
orchidee said:
They say this to be then add..... \'but you\'ve overstayed your welcome\'. The intention is for me to \'get my coat\' but I don\'t get the hint, and I stay around like a bad smell/apple/penny/ bad whatever! lol.
July 25th, 2024 05:23
Light Bites
MendedFences27 said:
Spiders win in my book. Flies are a nuisance. Clever that you gave them the power of speech (and drooling?).
- Phil A.
July 24th, 2024 15:14
MendedFences27 said:
Spiders win in my book. Flies are a nuisance. Clever that you gave them the power of speech (and drooling?).
- Phil A.
July 24th, 2024 15:14
Light Bites
Bella Shepard said:
Quite a write, I shall never look at a spider web in the same way again. Poor fly!
July 24th, 2024 13:35
Bella Shepard said:
Quite a write, I shall never look at a spider web in the same way again. Poor fly!
July 24th, 2024 13:35
False Promises and Little White Lies
Bobby O said:
Let’s talk about it. I felt chagrin in your pen as you offered your view on the current
View. I want to jump in and carry w you an unspoken regret. No time frame or words directly aimed , just a melancholy him that surely says and do wants to gather that other Also ? With you? All we nodding together that the way was better and sometimes even tickled honor.
July 24th, 2024 08:50
Bobby O said:
Let’s talk about it. I felt chagrin in your pen as you offered your view on the current
View. I want to jump in and carry w you an unspoken regret. No time frame or words directly aimed , just a melancholy him that surely says and do wants to gather that other Also ? With you? All we nodding together that the way was better and sometimes even tickled honor.
July 24th, 2024 08:50
Light Bites
Doggerel Dave said:
So this spider, in conformity with modern taste, has dispensed with the parlour and all that palaver and went straight.....even avoided the chase...?
July 24th, 2024 08:49
Doggerel Dave said:
So this spider, in conformity with modern taste, has dispensed with the parlour and all that palaver and went straight.....even avoided the chase...?
July 24th, 2024 08:49
Light Bites
sorenbarrett said:
Oh what a tangled web we weave....
Reminded me of my grandfather that used to sing to the kids \"Baby bye there\'s a fly let us watch him you and I.....\" Oh yes I know it has much deeper meaning as well.
July 24th, 2024 06:30
sorenbarrett said:
Oh what a tangled web we weave....
Reminded me of my grandfather that used to sing to the kids \"Baby bye there\'s a fly let us watch him you and I.....\" Oh yes I know it has much deeper meaning as well.
July 24th, 2024 06:30
False Promises and Little White Lies
Goldfinch60 said:
So true in many ways Neville.
Andy
July 24th, 2024 01:49
Goldfinch60 said:
So true in many ways Neville.
Andy
July 24th, 2024 01:49
False Promises and Little White Lies
Dan Williams said:
People all too often make promises they are unable to keep, unrealistic or just insincere. All to casually used. Good work.
July 24th, 2024 00:41
Dan Williams said:
People all too often make promises they are unable to keep, unrealistic or just insincere. All to casually used. Good work.
July 24th, 2024 00:41
False Promises and Little White Lies
Bella Shepard said:
Promises are made these days to achieve a desired end. And when that end is attained, somehow the promise never existed, it is an alternate reality we live in. Will we ever be able to trust the word of another again? Quite a chilling write my friend, but a much needed one.
July 23rd, 2024 13:36
Bella Shepard said:
Promises are made these days to achieve a desired end. And when that end is attained, somehow the promise never existed, it is an alternate reality we live in. Will we ever be able to trust the word of another again? Quite a chilling write my friend, but a much needed one.
July 23rd, 2024 13:36
False Promises and Little White Lies
MendedFences27 said:
I suppose one could follow the trail of white tissues and get to know someone, but only their sad side. I like the subtlety of this poem. many meanings hidden i the tissue box. - Phil A.
July 23rd, 2024 12:04
MendedFences27 said:
I suppose one could follow the trail of white tissues and get to know someone, but only their sad side. I like the subtlety of this poem. many meanings hidden i the tissue box. - Phil A.
July 23rd, 2024 12:04
False Promises and Little White Lies
Doggerel Dave said:
Bitter, or merely observation, Neville?
July 23rd, 2024 09:28
Doggerel Dave said:
Bitter, or merely observation, Neville?
July 23rd, 2024 09:28
False Promises and Little White Lies
sorenbarrett said:
A great write Neville. I knew a man once who on his word alone with no written contract lost over a million dollars sending him into bankruptcy. A man of honor whose word was more valuable to him than his wealth. I see little of these days. it may be more of a black tissue of dark lies. Nicely done
July 23rd, 2024 05:55
sorenbarrett said:
A great write Neville. I knew a man once who on his word alone with no written contract lost over a million dollars sending him into bankruptcy. A man of honor whose word was more valuable to him than his wealth. I see little of these days. it may be more of a black tissue of dark lies. Nicely done
July 23rd, 2024 05:55
False Promises and Little White Lies
orchidee said:
I never knew I made false promises and told little white lies! lol.
July 23rd, 2024 03:16
orchidee said:
I never knew I made false promises and told little white lies! lol.
July 23rd, 2024 03:16
False Promises and Little White Lies
Tom Dylan said:
Nicely done, mate. Works on a lot of levels, relationships, politics... very good, Neville.
July 23rd, 2024 02:17
Tom Dylan said:
Nicely done, mate. Works on a lot of levels, relationships, politics... very good, Neville.
July 23rd, 2024 02:17
Living Like Ghosts
MendedFences27 said:
We all have secrets that we bury very deep inside. Your ghosts can extract those and use them. Are they therapists?
A very intriguing poem. I was left with questions without answers. _ Phil A.
July 22nd, 2024 17:22
MendedFences27 said:
We all have secrets that we bury very deep inside. Your ghosts can extract those and use them. Are they therapists?
A very intriguing poem. I was left with questions without answers. _ Phil A.
July 22nd, 2024 17:22
Living Like Ghosts
Bella Shepard said:
For some reason your words make me think of those living with mental illness, hiding in plain sight, but not really part of the world, unsuspecting lonely souls. At least that is my take. I love your phrasing, and I love a poem of contemplation. Kudos!!
July 22nd, 2024 13:49
Bella Shepard said:
For some reason your words make me think of those living with mental illness, hiding in plain sight, but not really part of the world, unsuspecting lonely souls. At least that is my take. I love your phrasing, and I love a poem of contemplation. Kudos!!
July 22nd, 2024 13:49
Living Like Ghosts
Doggerel Dave said:
..... without any question re the source of those secrets (opinions - \'truths\')...... Go for it Neville.
July 22nd, 2024 06:53
Doggerel Dave said:
..... without any question re the source of those secrets (opinions - \'truths\')...... Go for it Neville.
July 22nd, 2024 06:53
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