Comments received on poems by Neville
When it Gets That Bad it Must be Broken
Doggerel Dave said:
Painful reminder of a wrong place wrong time situation I\'d like to keep a distant memory (it\'s OK - already filed away again and the drawer locked)
Never the less I do admire the concision, Neville.
January 28th, 2024 18:10
Doggerel Dave said:
Painful reminder of a wrong place wrong time situation I\'d like to keep a distant memory (it\'s OK - already filed away again and the drawer locked)
Never the less I do admire the concision, Neville.
January 28th, 2024 18:10
When it Gets That Bad it Must be Broken
Bella Shepard said:
Life turns on a dime my friend. You\'ve poured everything into this, and it grabs the reader by the shoulders, and gives a good shake. Bravely written dear Nev!
January 28th, 2024 15:32
Bella Shepard said:
Life turns on a dime my friend. You\'ve poured everything into this, and it grabs the reader by the shoulders, and gives a good shake. Bravely written dear Nev!
January 28th, 2024 15:32
When it Gets That Bad it Must be Broken
Teddy.15 said:
And teddy would say nothing is ever as bad as it seems my dear Nev. Excellent 🤗
January 28th, 2024 14:59
Teddy.15 said:
And teddy would say nothing is ever as bad as it seems my dear Nev. Excellent 🤗
January 28th, 2024 14:59
How Many More Planets
Christina8 said:
I wholeheartedly agree with you that time might be running out. Knowing the human race, we would fuck up a second chance at it too!
January 27th, 2024 17:44
Christina8 said:
I wholeheartedly agree with you that time might be running out. Knowing the human race, we would fuck up a second chance at it too!
January 27th, 2024 17:44
How Many More Planets
Cassie58 said:
Not content with polluting our own planet, our species wants to travel further and cause mayhem elsewhere. What a thought. Leave the lovely moon alone. She is aloof for a reason. She just wants to be looked at. Good Saturday morning Neville. Have a happy weekend.
January 27th, 2024 03:00
Cassie58 said:
Not content with polluting our own planet, our species wants to travel further and cause mayhem elsewhere. What a thought. Leave the lovely moon alone. She is aloof for a reason. She just wants to be looked at. Good Saturday morning Neville. Have a happy weekend.
January 27th, 2024 03:00
How Many More Planets
Goldfinch60 said:
Such true words Neville, maybe one day those in power may see what they are doing to our world.....but don\'t hold your breath.
Andy
January 27th, 2024 02:23
Goldfinch60 said:
Such true words Neville, maybe one day those in power may see what they are doing to our world.....but don\'t hold your breath.
Andy
January 27th, 2024 02:23
How Many More Planets
MendedFences27 said:
It\'s already too late, because we haven\'t learned the necessary skills to cooperate and care for this planet. We are too busy warring over land or race or religion. If we could travel elsewhere, we wouldn\'t last there any longer than we will here. We are ignorant of planet care. - Phil A.
January 26th, 2024 19:18
MendedFences27 said:
It\'s already too late, because we haven\'t learned the necessary skills to cooperate and care for this planet. We are too busy warring over land or race or religion. If we could travel elsewhere, we wouldn\'t last there any longer than we will here. We are ignorant of planet care. - Phil A.
January 26th, 2024 19:18
How Many More Planets
Bella Shepard said:
Great point! I fear though, if we saw the light it would probably be neon, advertising. We have a small town in my state of Missouri that advertises a fudge shop, we\'ve seen the billboard as we travel the highway. It reads \"The best fudge in the world comes from Uranus\", which is the name of the town. I don\'t know, maybe it wouldn\'t be such a bad planet to go to, if they have fudge. It is in truth no laughing matter, and I wonder when the tipping point will come. Good write my friend!
January 26th, 2024 14:38
Bella Shepard said:
Great point! I fear though, if we saw the light it would probably be neon, advertising. We have a small town in my state of Missouri that advertises a fudge shop, we\'ve seen the billboard as we travel the highway. It reads \"The best fudge in the world comes from Uranus\", which is the name of the town. I don\'t know, maybe it wouldn\'t be such a bad planet to go to, if they have fudge. It is in truth no laughing matter, and I wonder when the tipping point will come. Good write my friend!
January 26th, 2024 14:38
How Many More Planets
Teddy.15 said:
Ah I often wonder this too, let\'s hope humans don\'t get a chance, such a powerful subject dear Nev. 🌎 Ps even E.T couldn\'t stand us. 🤗
January 26th, 2024 12:34
Teddy.15 said:
Ah I often wonder this too, let\'s hope humans don\'t get a chance, such a powerful subject dear Nev. 🌎 Ps even E.T couldn\'t stand us. 🤗
January 26th, 2024 12:34
How Many More Planets
Thomas W Case said:
The answer is 13. I just hope it\'s not Uranus. I couldn\'t resist. Great writing brother.
January 26th, 2024 10:21
Thomas W Case said:
The answer is 13. I just hope it\'s not Uranus. I couldn\'t resist. Great writing brother.
January 26th, 2024 10:21
How Many More Planets
Doggerel Dave said:
Maybe one or two….but it’s a very local issue – the Universe won’t notice….. or mind….. So cheer up Neville – Eternity or Infinity won’t even have to scratch the itch.
January 26th, 2024 06:28
Doggerel Dave said:
Maybe one or two….but it’s a very local issue – the Universe won’t notice….. or mind….. So cheer up Neville – Eternity or Infinity won’t even have to scratch the itch.
January 26th, 2024 06:28
How Many More Planets
2781 said:
\"Though thou exalt thyself as the eagle, and though thou set thy nest above the stars, thence I will bring thee down, saith the Lord.\"
January 26th, 2024 05:32
2781 said:
\"Though thou exalt thyself as the eagle, and though thou set thy nest above the stars, thence I will bring thee down, saith the Lord.\"
January 26th, 2024 05:32
How Many More Planets
orchidee said:
When one finds a far off planet, even futher than Pluto (if that\'s a planet now?) I will send KP on a one-way ticket there!
January 26th, 2024 05:12
orchidee said:
When one finds a far off planet, even futher than Pluto (if that\'s a planet now?) I will send KP on a one-way ticket there!
January 26th, 2024 05:12
How Many More Planets
Accidental Poet said:
Like one of my earlier poems, \"The Clock is Ticking People\". And it\'s not enough that we litter Earth, but now we also litter on the Moon and Mars. Really great write N. 👍
January 26th, 2024 04:50
Accidental Poet said:
Like one of my earlier poems, \"The Clock is Ticking People\". And it\'s not enough that we litter Earth, but now we also litter on the Moon and Mars. Really great write N. 👍
January 26th, 2024 04:50
Not Yet Quite Forgot
Goldfinch60 said:
Memories stay with us all Neville.
Andy
January 26th, 2024 02:47
Goldfinch60 said:
Memories stay with us all Neville.
Andy
January 26th, 2024 02:47
When it Hurts So Good Why Not Just Bring it On
Christina8 said:
Beautiful portrait you paint with your pen, N!
January 25th, 2024 23:35
Christina8 said:
Beautiful portrait you paint with your pen, N!
January 25th, 2024 23:35
Not Yet Quite Forgot
Accidental Poet said:
Another frisky girl? Well, her loss N. 😉👍
January 25th, 2024 11:10
Accidental Poet said:
Another frisky girl? Well, her loss N. 😉👍
January 25th, 2024 11:10
Not Yet Quite Forgot
Teddy.15 said:
Wonderful lines dear Nev. Love is nothing if not painfully honest ❤️
January 25th, 2024 05:59
Teddy.15 said:
Wonderful lines dear Nev. Love is nothing if not painfully honest ❤️
January 25th, 2024 05:59
Not Yet Quite Forgot
orchidee said:
That\'ll be me and KP you saw! lol. What, in bed? Swoon!
January 25th, 2024 05:44
orchidee said:
That\'ll be me and KP you saw! lol. What, in bed? Swoon!
January 25th, 2024 05:44
Not Yet Quite Forgot
Cassie58 said:
Ouch. That must have hurt. This scene plays out clearly before my eyes.
a memory foam mattress
of many years lieing - now that is quite brill Neville.
That tells a story. I saw her mouthing your name. The air was blue.
Brevity which turns into a movie. Not something you would forget easily, though time may soften the blow.
Hits the emotions. So well related. Have an easy day my friend.
January 25th, 2024 05:31
Cassie58 said:
Ouch. That must have hurt. This scene plays out clearly before my eyes.
a memory foam mattress
of many years lieing - now that is quite brill Neville.
That tells a story. I saw her mouthing your name. The air was blue.
Brevity which turns into a movie. Not something you would forget easily, though time may soften the blow.
Hits the emotions. So well related. Have an easy day my friend.
January 25th, 2024 05:31
Haiku 4 Having Me She Said
Teddy.15 said:
lol 🤣 that\'s a great senryu made me chuckle 🤭
January 25th, 2024 04:51
Teddy.15 said:
lol 🤣 that\'s a great senryu made me chuckle 🤭
January 25th, 2024 04:51
When it Hurts So Good Why Not Just Bring it On
Goldfinch60 said:
Cannot understand why anybody wants to be hurt Neville but it takes all types.
Andy
January 25th, 2024 02:22
Goldfinch60 said:
Cannot understand why anybody wants to be hurt Neville but it takes all types.
Andy
January 25th, 2024 02:22
When it Hurts So Good Why Not Just Bring it On
Accidental Poet said:
AKA an Attention Addict. 🤔
January 24th, 2024 09:38
Accidental Poet said:
AKA an Attention Addict. 🤔
January 24th, 2024 09:38
When it Hurts So Good Why Not Just Bring it On
orchidee said:
So - you know KP wants to be punished. She\'s got me - what could be worse for her?! lol.
I only \'punish\' her in saying \'I\'ve no money for you for botox today, dear\'. I\'m a naughty fluffy Guinea Pig.
January 24th, 2024 07:27
orchidee said:
So - you know KP wants to be punished. She\'s got me - what could be worse for her?! lol.
I only \'punish\' her in saying \'I\'ve no money for you for botox today, dear\'. I\'m a naughty fluffy Guinea Pig.
January 24th, 2024 07:27
When it Hurts So Good Why Not Just Bring it On
Cassie58 said:
A little poem that warrants more than a little thinking. I looked at your author notes. All I can add I guess, is that variety is said to be the spice of life. Each to his own. Is this anuvver day at the office?
You have a fab day Neville.
Chris
January 24th, 2024 06:11
Cassie58 said:
A little poem that warrants more than a little thinking. I looked at your author notes. All I can add I guess, is that variety is said to be the spice of life. Each to his own. Is this anuvver day at the office?
You have a fab day Neville.
Chris
January 24th, 2024 06:11
This is Not a Threat Okay
Bella Shepard said:
I suppose we\'ve all have experiences where we look back and think \"What the.....\". But when you squirrel them away, and keep them for a rainy day, therein the mystery lies. Naughty, but fun my friend, I say with a grin.
January 23rd, 2024 15:25
Bella Shepard said:
I suppose we\'ve all have experiences where we look back and think \"What the.....\". But when you squirrel them away, and keep them for a rainy day, therein the mystery lies. Naughty, but fun my friend, I say with a grin.
January 23rd, 2024 15:25
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