Comments received on poems by Neville
On Waking Up in Rio
Goldfinch60 said:
Those dreams can take you to some very strange places Neville.
Andy
March 6th, 2024 02:13
Goldfinch60 said:
Those dreams can take you to some very strange places Neville.
Andy
March 6th, 2024 02:13
On Waking Up in Rio
Bobby O said:
The seamless aspect of that “bundling” speaks of a great acquired existing comfort of soul and body atwixt and represents an accordance of high value and is a constant gift and lift and makes me happy that is within your possession.
March 6th, 2024 01:47
Bobby O said:
The seamless aspect of that “bundling” speaks of a great acquired existing comfort of soul and body atwixt and represents an accordance of high value and is a constant gift and lift and makes me happy that is within your possession.
March 6th, 2024 01:47
On Waking Up in Rio
MendedFences27 said:
Waking up in Rio, disoriented and confused, sounds like movie plotline.
The poetry comes from the fact you were not alone.
A small yet intriguing poem. One wants to know what happened next. - Phil A.
March 5th, 2024 17:47
MendedFences27 said:
Waking up in Rio, disoriented and confused, sounds like movie plotline.
The poetry comes from the fact you were not alone.
A small yet intriguing poem. One wants to know what happened next. - Phil A.
March 5th, 2024 17:47
On Waking Up in Rio
Cassie58 said:
Disorientated maybe after jet lag. You woke up on holiday, not having a clue where you were. Been there and done that Neville. Lucky you travelling to Rio. Fab.
March 5th, 2024 13:22
Cassie58 said:
Disorientated maybe after jet lag. You woke up on holiday, not having a clue where you were. Been there and done that Neville. Lucky you travelling to Rio. Fab.
March 5th, 2024 13:22
On Waking Up in Rio
Teddy.15 said:
Seems like a dream to me, waking up anywhere in Rio 🌹 Neville slumberbashing in Brazil how wonderful 💜
March 5th, 2024 13:00
Teddy.15 said:
Seems like a dream to me, waking up anywhere in Rio 🌹 Neville slumberbashing in Brazil how wonderful 💜
March 5th, 2024 13:00
On Waking Up in Rio
Neilton said:
That\'s literally me after my afternoon sleep!Great poem.
March 5th, 2024 10:53
Neilton said:
That\'s literally me after my afternoon sleep!Great poem.
March 5th, 2024 10:53
On Waking Up in Rio
Accidental Poet said:
Sounds like one of those dreams where you wake up and nothing makes sense. Been there done that. 😉
March 5th, 2024 10:00
Accidental Poet said:
Sounds like one of those dreams where you wake up and nothing makes sense. Been there done that. 😉
March 5th, 2024 10:00
On Waking Up in Rio
Doggerel Dave said:
Lifting your head could have been a very risky enterprise, Neville...best to take such extraordinary moves extremely gently indeed.......
March 5th, 2024 07:51
Doggerel Dave said:
Lifting your head could have been a very risky enterprise, Neville...best to take such extraordinary moves extremely gently indeed.......
March 5th, 2024 07:51
On Waking Up in Rio
Tom Dylan said:
Nicely done, Neville. Perfectly captured the feeling of waking up and wondering where you are and what\'s going on. :-)
March 5th, 2024 06:02
Tom Dylan said:
Nicely done, Neville. Perfectly captured the feeling of waking up and wondering where you are and what\'s going on. :-)
March 5th, 2024 06:02
Entres
Cassie58 said:
Now there are munchies and munchies. I prefer the chocolate sort. The taste of chocolate can certainly give me a high.Look where I drifted with your lines Neville. Good sunny day to ya.
March 5th, 2024 03:14
Cassie58 said:
Now there are munchies and munchies. I prefer the chocolate sort. The taste of chocolate can certainly give me a high.Look where I drifted with your lines Neville. Good sunny day to ya.
March 5th, 2024 03:14
Recall
Cassie58 said:
Memories can be pleasant to visit once in a while, but lingering in the what ifs is not living in the now, where you can be building stronger. I guess that’s not easy when we live in times of such rapid and sometimes unwelcome change. Collisions are often painful. That!s where I drifted to Neville. Have a happy Tuesday my friend.
March 5th, 2024 02:28
Cassie58 said:
Memories can be pleasant to visit once in a while, but lingering in the what ifs is not living in the now, where you can be building stronger. I guess that’s not easy when we live in times of such rapid and sometimes unwelcome change. Collisions are often painful. That!s where I drifted to Neville. Have a happy Tuesday my friend.
March 5th, 2024 02:28
Recall
Goldfinch60 said:
We must always move forward Neville, we can do nothing about our past except use our experience to make the future better.
Andy
March 5th, 2024 02:20
Goldfinch60 said:
We must always move forward Neville, we can do nothing about our past except use our experience to make the future better.
Andy
March 5th, 2024 02:20
Fleeced
Bella Shepard said:
Memories and emotions, inextricably linked. They run the gamut of who we are, and how we deal with them. Your poem is such food for thought, for those days will come when we\'re lost in them.
March 4th, 2024 14:00
Bella Shepard said:
Memories and emotions, inextricably linked. They run the gamut of who we are, and how we deal with them. Your poem is such food for thought, for those days will come when we\'re lost in them.
March 4th, 2024 14:00
Recall
Cloie said:
Your poem beautifully reflects on the act of reminiscing. It\'s a poignant reminder to cherish our memories and reflect on our past. Well said!
March 4th, 2024 13:01
Cloie said:
Your poem beautifully reflects on the act of reminiscing. It\'s a poignant reminder to cherish our memories and reflect on our past. Well said!
March 4th, 2024 13:01
Recall
Accidental Poet said:
Just another case of the future bumping into the past. 😉👍
March 4th, 2024 10:34
Accidental Poet said:
Just another case of the future bumping into the past. 😉👍
March 4th, 2024 10:34
Recall
Doggerel Dave said:
Wot? to look back on what might have been but wasn\'t....I don\'t feel that\'s much fun at all.....unless, it has to be admitted, there are certain situations (no details lest it gives orchi the vapours) where an extension of the reality in my head is simple straightforward and with no complicated aftertaste.
March 4th, 2024 06:26
Doggerel Dave said:
Wot? to look back on what might have been but wasn\'t....I don\'t feel that\'s much fun at all.....unless, it has to be admitted, there are certain situations (no details lest it gives orchi the vapours) where an extension of the reality in my head is simple straightforward and with no complicated aftertaste.
March 4th, 2024 06:26
Recall
orchidee said:
You could walk backwards and be able to see those pleasant things of the past in front of you! lol.
March 4th, 2024 05:48
orchidee said:
You could walk backwards and be able to see those pleasant things of the past in front of you! lol.
March 4th, 2024 05:48
Entres
Goldfinch60 said:
It all depends how big a breakfast you have Neville. LOL
Andy
March 4th, 2024 02:14
Goldfinch60 said:
It all depends how big a breakfast you have Neville. LOL
Andy
March 4th, 2024 02:14
Entres
orchidee said:
Is it the Honey Monster? No it\'s..... oh you know by now! lol.
March 3rd, 2024 11:40
orchidee said:
Is it the Honey Monster? No it\'s..... oh you know by now! lol.
March 3rd, 2024 11:40
Entres
Accidental Poet said:
Taking the time difference between us, it\'s your mid-day. And fortunately it\'s my morning as I couldn\'t wait for my mid-day. 😉👍
March 3rd, 2024 11:35
Accidental Poet said:
Taking the time difference between us, it\'s your mid-day. And fortunately it\'s my morning as I couldn\'t wait for my mid-day. 😉👍
March 3rd, 2024 11:35
Entres
Teddy.15 said:
I could actually name so may chocolate treats I so do miss being away from home and how many of them I\'d love to eat right now, I\'d also settle for the milk tray man too. lol oh Nev, my nostalgia of home just kicked in all it took was the on tray 🌹 thank you.
March 3rd, 2024 09:45
Teddy.15 said:
I could actually name so may chocolate treats I so do miss being away from home and how many of them I\'d love to eat right now, I\'d also settle for the milk tray man too. lol oh Nev, my nostalgia of home just kicked in all it took was the on tray 🌹 thank you.
March 3rd, 2024 09:45
Where Truth Lies
rhmn_7 said:
Having even a glimmer of truth inside, is better than nothing..
March 3rd, 2024 07:47
rhmn_7 said:
Having even a glimmer of truth inside, is better than nothing..
March 3rd, 2024 07:47
Entres
Cloie said:
Your poem paints a vivid picture of the sky and its slow, deliberate movements. The imagery of monsters emerging at midnight is striking and adds depth to the piece. The connection between these images and the hunger by midday is thought-provoking. It is such a great piece with a unique perspective!
March 3rd, 2024 05:34
Cloie said:
Your poem paints a vivid picture of the sky and its slow, deliberate movements. The imagery of monsters emerging at midnight is striking and adds depth to the piece. The connection between these images and the hunger by midday is thought-provoking. It is such a great piece with a unique perspective!
March 3rd, 2024 05:34
Where Truth Lies
Goldfinch60 said:
We seem not to be able to hear much truth in the world today Neville.
Andy
March 3rd, 2024 02:13
Goldfinch60 said:
We seem not to be able to hear much truth in the world today Neville.
Andy
March 3rd, 2024 02:13
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