Comments received on poems by Neville
Guilty But Free as A Bird
sorenbarrett said:
Neville here master of words I bow to your ability to paint a work of art on such a small canvas. Beautifully done truly wonderful
July 30th, 2024 06:09
sorenbarrett said:
Neville here master of words I bow to your ability to paint a work of art on such a small canvas. Beautifully done truly wonderful
July 30th, 2024 06:09
Between Clouds
Tom Dylan said:
A fine write, mate. This piece was that little ray of sunlight.
July 30th, 2024 05:31
Tom Dylan said:
A fine write, mate. This piece was that little ray of sunlight.
July 30th, 2024 05:31
Guilty But Free as A Bird
orchidee said:
KP was sort of bruised, well emotionally. Seh thought I had given her botox, but it was porridge! lol. Kinda looks the same?
July 30th, 2024 02:39
orchidee said:
KP was sort of bruised, well emotionally. Seh thought I had given her botox, but it was porridge! lol. Kinda looks the same?
July 30th, 2024 02:39
Between Clouds
Cassie58 said:
Oh those glimpses of sunlight that brighten a cloudy day, they do give such a lift don’t they Neville? My dog Solo has a very happy life. I guess it’s because she is content with her lot. We all need a little sunshine in a cloudy world. A lovely read.
July 29th, 2024 22:02
Cassie58 said:
Oh those glimpses of sunlight that brighten a cloudy day, they do give such a lift don’t they Neville? My dog Solo has a very happy life. I guess it’s because she is content with her lot. We all need a little sunshine in a cloudy world. A lovely read.
July 29th, 2024 22:02
Between Clouds
Bella Shepard said:
Makes me think of morning walks, sky clouded over and the feeling of seeing a tiny chink in the clouds with a glimpse of bright sunlight. I love the metaphor and the sentiment it invokes.
July 29th, 2024 12:45
Bella Shepard said:
Makes me think of morning walks, sky clouded over and the feeling of seeing a tiny chink in the clouds with a glimpse of bright sunlight. I love the metaphor and the sentiment it invokes.
July 29th, 2024 12:45
Between Clouds
MendedFences27 said:
Overcast with bits of sunshine, sounds like a forecast for life. We all need to enjoy the bits more to overcome the gray clouds.
A poem that shows how personal bits of sunshine can salvage an otherwise dismal day. Loved it. - Phil A
July 29th, 2024 11:49
MendedFences27 said:
Overcast with bits of sunshine, sounds like a forecast for life. We all need to enjoy the bits more to overcome the gray clouds.
A poem that shows how personal bits of sunshine can salvage an otherwise dismal day. Loved it. - Phil A
July 29th, 2024 11:49
Between Clouds
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that is beautifully kind against a cloudy setting. Nicely said Neville
July 29th, 2024 09:48
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that is beautifully kind against a cloudy setting. Nicely said Neville
July 29th, 2024 09:48
Between Clouds
Doggerel Dave said:
A surprisingly brief encounter can sometimes linger in memory and lighten other longer social relations.
Got me recalling now, Neville
July 29th, 2024 07:56
Doggerel Dave said:
A surprisingly brief encounter can sometimes linger in memory and lighten other longer social relations.
Got me recalling now, Neville
July 29th, 2024 07:56
Friends With Benefits
Dan Williams said:
Well done. Remember, the price of life is death.
July 28th, 2024 22:38
Dan Williams said:
Well done. Remember, the price of life is death.
July 28th, 2024 22:38
Friends With Benefits
MendedFences27 said:
At a certain age we give up on \"friends with benefits\" and settle for friends who are breathing. Your poem is one that senses the later part of life, which is funny if your sense of humor becomes self-deprecating. Got a chuckle out of this one. - Phil A.
July 28th, 2024 11:37
MendedFences27 said:
At a certain age we give up on \"friends with benefits\" and settle for friends who are breathing. Your poem is one that senses the later part of life, which is funny if your sense of humor becomes self-deprecating. Got a chuckle out of this one. - Phil A.
July 28th, 2024 11:37
Friends With Benefits
Doggerel Dave said:
A day at a time, Neville...a day at a time....
July 28th, 2024 07:48
Doggerel Dave said:
A day at a time, Neville...a day at a time....
July 28th, 2024 07:48
Friends With Benefits
sorenbarrett said:
A proposal? At this age benefits are merger and coitus interruptus is usually by heart attack from over exertion. Great write
July 28th, 2024 05:57
sorenbarrett said:
A proposal? At this age benefits are merger and coitus interruptus is usually by heart attack from over exertion. Great write
July 28th, 2024 05:57
What Else is A Metaphor
sorenbarrett said:
Love is cryptic even as an anagram and meta is for anything beyond. Never the less I find this write a bit more cryptic than my brain can handle. Great write short and all around the point.
July 28th, 2024 05:08
sorenbarrett said:
Love is cryptic even as an anagram and meta is for anything beyond. Never the less I find this write a bit more cryptic than my brain can handle. Great write short and all around the point.
July 28th, 2024 05:08
Friends With Benefits
Goldfinch60 said:
Unfortunately Neville we are nearer our end than our beginning but our end still has a long way to go before we reach it.
Andy
July 28th, 2024 02:07
Goldfinch60 said:
Unfortunately Neville we are nearer our end than our beginning but our end still has a long way to go before we reach it.
Andy
July 28th, 2024 02:07
Outsiders
Goldfinch60 said:
So true Neville, we just cannot do anything about the way the world is being led as nobody listens to us.
Andy
July 28th, 2024 01:50
Goldfinch60 said:
So true Neville, we just cannot do anything about the way the world is being led as nobody listens to us.
Andy
July 28th, 2024 01:50
Outsiders
Dan Williams said:
amen. lost in so many different ways. Bombs, plague, pollution of air and water, etc. etc.
July 28th, 2024 00:13
Dan Williams said:
amen. lost in so many different ways. Bombs, plague, pollution of air and water, etc. etc.
July 28th, 2024 00:13
Outsiders
Cassie58 said:
A poem which I have now read several times. Included in The Making of a Broken Man which is an another cracking anthology from you Neville. Read from back to front, front to back and at random:) The final three lines particularly meaningful and I am sure relatable to many at times of their lives.
July 27th, 2024 14:11
Cassie58 said:
A poem which I have now read several times. Included in The Making of a Broken Man which is an another cracking anthology from you Neville. Read from back to front, front to back and at random:) The final three lines particularly meaningful and I am sure relatable to many at times of their lives.
July 27th, 2024 14:11
Outsiders
MendedFences27 said:
Eastern promises are mostly hot air, but (I believe the number is 15) blasts worldwide and we no longer have a planet that can sustain life. So, whoever is guarding the big red button should shoot anyone who tries to push it. - Phil A.
July 27th, 2024 10:48
MendedFences27 said:
Eastern promises are mostly hot air, but (I believe the number is 15) blasts worldwide and we no longer have a planet that can sustain life. So, whoever is guarding the big red button should shoot anyone who tries to push it. - Phil A.
July 27th, 2024 10:48
Outsiders
Bobby O said:
When I read it a second time , I imagined that NOWHERE was a place close enough to travel to but was too far to travel back
July 27th, 2024 10:32
Bobby O said:
When I read it a second time , I imagined that NOWHERE was a place close enough to travel to but was too far to travel back
July 27th, 2024 10:32
Outsiders
Doggerel Dave said:
Yes - both metaphor and reality inextricably locked together Neville.
To call it chilling is almost too corny and obvious... but it is.
Short, I like here, Cold and hard.
July 27th, 2024 08:06
Doggerel Dave said:
Yes - both metaphor and reality inextricably locked together Neville.
To call it chilling is almost too corny and obvious... but it is.
Short, I like here, Cold and hard.
July 27th, 2024 08:06
Outsiders
sorenbarrett said:
Neville this metaphoric poem resonates out of my past into my present. Remembering walking the vast open expanses at times lost and now with age those expanse become something else but the same. Great write
July 27th, 2024 06:17
sorenbarrett said:
Neville this metaphoric poem resonates out of my past into my present. Remembering walking the vast open expanses at times lost and now with age those expanse become something else but the same. Great write
July 27th, 2024 06:17
By Invitation Only
Goldfinch60 said:
The scenic route will show you even more delight Neville, as I am sure that you now know.
Andy
July 27th, 2024 01:23
Goldfinch60 said:
The scenic route will show you even more delight Neville, as I am sure that you now know.
Andy
July 27th, 2024 01:23
By Invitation Only
MendedFences27 said:
Ah, the hills and valleys of exploring unmapped frontiers. I think I\'ll get my coonskin cap and search for a gap among the Cumberlands.
A great use of metaphor. Saying one thing and meaning another, or was this just a road trip through paradise? Loved this one. - Phil A.
July 26th, 2024 19:14
MendedFences27 said:
Ah, the hills and valleys of exploring unmapped frontiers. I think I\'ll get my coonskin cap and search for a gap among the Cumberlands.
A great use of metaphor. Saying one thing and meaning another, or was this just a road trip through paradise? Loved this one. - Phil A.
July 26th, 2024 19:14
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