Comments received on poems by Neville



Sorry
Cassie58 said:

The hardest word for some and yet when said with conviction, the most powerful of all. Ghosts and guilt, what a combination. A car wreck if not handled with care. Thought provoking brevity here Neville. Sorry a five letter word that can move mountains. Your brevity shows much wisdom my friend.

January 31st, 2024 05:53

Just a Few Odd Diary Notes
Cassie58 said:

Two out of three ain’t bad. That’s Meat Loaf. See her and run like hell - like a bat out of hell, more Meat Loaf.

But these diary entries in stanza three, sound very much like you my friend. Well two of them do. Happy Monday.

January 31st, 2024 05:46

Just a Few Odd Diary Notes
orchidee said:

Yes, I score two out of three. I tried the middle line, but there\'s no escape from KP. lol.

January 31st, 2024 05:42

Just a Few Odd Diary Notes
Doggerel Dave said:

I have a a sneaking suspicion that some of your lines might be very well known (just not by me!) quotes from an era shared by you and I.... but with so little time and despite much benign intent ....the caravan moves on....

January 31st, 2024 05:34

Just a Few Odd Diary Notes
Teddy.15 said:

Seafood and eat it, well when I\'m anywhere near borough market that\'s my rule. oh who was you running from? And autumn could stay forever in my eyes. 🤗

January 31st, 2024 05:29

Just a Few Odd Diary Notes
Tom Dylan said:

Some good lines here, Neville. Feels like the out-takes from a poem.

January 31st, 2024 04:54

Sorry
Goldfinch60 said:

That sorrow may be appreciated and take you both to a better path Neville.

Andy

January 31st, 2024 02:13

When I Found Myself on eBay
Doggerel Dave said:

I do tend to agree..... Amazon (damn \'em)are very swift, whereas with eBay it will depend on the dealer how quickly you managed to retrieve them copies............lol

January 30th, 2024 21:12

Sorry
Bella Shepard said:

Amazing, the power one word can hold, when spoken with sincerity. Kudos dear Nev, complete honesty.

January 30th, 2024 16:24

Sorry
Teddy.15 said:

Simple as that ❤️

January 30th, 2024 12:34

When it Hurts So Good Why Not Just Bring it On
spilleronsheet said:

In world of greater digital connectivity, we are loosing the hearts that spoke…it’s the ode of cry, & attention…

January 30th, 2024 12:11

Sorry
spilleronsheet said:

Apologies come from one whose caring and benevolent…wise words

January 30th, 2024 12:09

Sorry
Accidental Poet said:

May your sorrow be motivation for rejoice tomorrow. 😊

January 30th, 2024 08:56

Sorry
orchidee said:

I said to KP: \'Sorry I called you an old trout KP, though you gotta admit it\'s true!\' lol. I\'m horrible to her. heehee.

January 30th, 2024 08:34

Sorry
Tom Dylan said:

A nice write, Neville. My wife always says I don\'t apologise enough.

January 30th, 2024 04:41

New Wine From Old Vines
Reynaldo Casison said:

Sweet, felt the cool, warmth of its Beauty

Reynaldo

January 30th, 2024 04:07

When I Found Myself on eBay
Goldfinch60 said:

How many bids did you get?

Andy

January 30th, 2024 03:21

When it Gets That Bad it Must be Broken
sorenbarrett said:

With the quality of workmanship now days, the state of the world, complicated technology, high expectations, short duration of relationships, I\'m surprised it ever worked. I assume everything is broken from the beginning and will need to be fixed or thrown out. Great write my friend the repetitive focus kept bringing me back again and again.

January 29th, 2024 08:12

When I Found Myself on eBay
Christina8 said:

You have definitely made it as a writer. I should think it a good thing that you found yourself on ebay!!

January 29th, 2024 07:11

When I Found Myself on eBay
2781 said:

It\'s not a bad sign.

January 29th, 2024 05:48

When I Found Myself on eBay
Tom Dylan said:

You\'ve made it. As seen on ebay! :-) And I love the way your poems on here are laid out the same as in the book. Nicely done. Cheers, Tom.

January 29th, 2024 05:43

When I Found Myself on eBay
sorenbarrett said:

This reminds me of Willie Nelson waking up to find the news reporting him as dead. Yes indeed I don\'t think I would bring much of a price. Yea and i worry about that discarded pile, maybe to be sent back for a credit or refund. Fun read Neville

January 29th, 2024 05:42

When I Found Myself on eBay
Teddy.15 said:

LoL oh never to be thrown away my dear Nev. I love your humour. 💜

January 29th, 2024 05:22

When I Found Myself on eBay
Accidental Poet said:

Presently, I have 5 copies of your books from Amazon. 😉👍

January 29th, 2024 05:19

When I Found Myself on eBay
orchidee said:

KP\'s in the \'Fish for Sale\' section (if there was one), under \'Old Trouts\'.

January 29th, 2024 04:55

When it Gets That Bad it Must be Broken
Tom Dylan said:

This poem hits home on so many levels, Neville.

January 29th, 2024 03:19

When it Gets That Bad it Must be Broken
orchidee said:

Yep, me marriage to KP sure is broken. It was that bad from the start. lol. If it ain\'t broken, don\'t fix it, they say. So should we try to fix our marriage?

January 29th, 2024 02:54

When it Gets That Bad it Must be Broken
Goldfinch60 said:

So much emotion in those words Neville.

Andy

January 29th, 2024 02:28

When it Gets That Bad it Must be Broken
Accidental Poet said:

that just means it must get fixed. 😉

January 28th, 2024 21:18

Another One of Those Café Moments
Reynaldo Casison said:

very cool the sixties has alot of beautiful tunes

January 28th, 2024 20:54



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