Comments received on poems by Neville
Smiling Depressives
Alan R said:
Indeed something off with the like button
Such na accurate piece, such a see through!
May 1st, 2024 11:38
Alan R said:
Indeed something off with the like button
Such na accurate piece, such a see through!
May 1st, 2024 11:38
Smiling Depressives
Cassie58 said:
Good morning Neville. So much to think about with this write. The eyes are a give away. You can tell by someone’s eyes whether the smile on their face is genuine or not. You can’t hide that and they are unlikely to tell you what’s causing their blackness. The eyes are the windows of the soul. I have observed many an old man in my local drinking his pain. I have also written about it. Have a glorious sunny Wednesday. (I tried to like you, but computer says no)
May 1st, 2024 06:43
Cassie58 said:
Good morning Neville. So much to think about with this write. The eyes are a give away. You can tell by someone’s eyes whether the smile on their face is genuine or not. You can’t hide that and they are unlikely to tell you what’s causing their blackness. The eyes are the windows of the soul. I have observed many an old man in my local drinking his pain. I have also written about it. Have a glorious sunny Wednesday. (I tried to like you, but computer says no)
May 1st, 2024 06:43
Smiling Depressives
Teddy.15 said:
Reminds me of Robin Williams. Beautiful sad yet very loud because it\'s the norm now a days for so many, at least it\'s spoken about now thanks to some pretty cool people such as you dear Nev. 🌹
May 1st, 2024 05:26
Teddy.15 said:
Reminds me of Robin Williams. Beautiful sad yet very loud because it\'s the norm now a days for so many, at least it\'s spoken about now thanks to some pretty cool people such as you dear Nev. 🌹
May 1st, 2024 05:26
Smiling Depressives
orchidee said:
I \'like\' this but it won\'t let me \'like\' it. a blip on the like button?
May 1st, 2024 02:44
orchidee said:
I \'like\' this but it won\'t let me \'like\' it. a blip on the like button?
May 1st, 2024 02:44
Smiling Depressives
orchidee said:
Talking to ourselves is not really a sign of madness, as some say!
We can talk positively to ourselves.
But no use me talking to KP. it\'s like talking to a trout botox mask! lol.
May 1st, 2024 02:43
orchidee said:
Talking to ourselves is not really a sign of madness, as some say!
We can talk positively to ourselves.
But no use me talking to KP. it\'s like talking to a trout botox mask! lol.
May 1st, 2024 02:43
Smiling Depressives
Tom Dylan said:
A thought provoking piece, Neville. And when asked, they say I\'m fine.
May 1st, 2024 02:07
Tom Dylan said:
A thought provoking piece, Neville. And when asked, they say I\'m fine.
May 1st, 2024 02:07
Thirteen Times the Cuckoo Called
Doggerel Dave said:
(send him over here - I\'d settle for a cuckoo which only called thirteen or fourteen times.....)
I\'m totally insensitive to nuance sometimes...............
May 1st, 2024 01:06
Doggerel Dave said:
(send him over here - I\'d settle for a cuckoo which only called thirteen or fourteen times.....)
I\'m totally insensitive to nuance sometimes...............
May 1st, 2024 01:06
Smiling Depressives
Doggerel Dave said:
Thanks for the thought, Neville...I\'ll look out for it.
The smile that really gets to me, though is the big one from day one, coupled withe overbearing niceness. I spy a sociopath..
May 1st, 2024 00:54
Doggerel Dave said:
Thanks for the thought, Neville...I\'ll look out for it.
The smile that really gets to me, though is the big one from day one, coupled withe overbearing niceness. I spy a sociopath..
May 1st, 2024 00:54
Smiling Depressives
Bobby O said:
I hold out hope that I can keep all type of shriveling to a minimum.
I’m back on the block so we can rock with some poems, so rhythm, jazz, and hip-hop
May 1st, 2024 00:49
Bobby O said:
I hold out hope that I can keep all type of shriveling to a minimum.
I’m back on the block so we can rock with some poems, so rhythm, jazz, and hip-hop
May 1st, 2024 00:49
Smiling Depressives
2781 said:
Reminds me of that saying (not sure why?)-we are only as sick as our secrets.
May 1st, 2024 00:48
2781 said:
Reminds me of that saying (not sure why?)-we are only as sick as our secrets.
May 1st, 2024 00:48
Thirteen Times the Cuckoo Called
Bella Shepard said:
Perhaps \'twas the only time he could be heard, he got your attention and you counted. It doth mean something, to another cuckoo. Good write!
April 30th, 2024 14:18
Bella Shepard said:
Perhaps \'twas the only time he could be heard, he got your attention and you counted. It doth mean something, to another cuckoo. Good write!
April 30th, 2024 14:18
Forsaken
Bella Shepard said:
The one that got away, forever regreted, but ever present, bruised heart that aches with remembrance. This hauntingly beautiful poem is exquisite.
April 30th, 2024 13:26
Bella Shepard said:
The one that got away, forever regreted, but ever present, bruised heart that aches with remembrance. This hauntingly beautiful poem is exquisite.
April 30th, 2024 13:26
Thirteen Times the Cuckoo Called
Teddy.15 said:
enjoying your free time a new job just being free perhaps! Cuckoo is one of my favourite birds hard to see but very easy on the ear. Enjoy it all my dear Nev. 🌹
April 30th, 2024 11:13
Teddy.15 said:
enjoying your free time a new job just being free perhaps! Cuckoo is one of my favourite birds hard to see but very easy on the ear. Enjoy it all my dear Nev. 🌹
April 30th, 2024 11:13
Thirteen Times the Cuckoo Called
Tom Dylan said:
Love this, Neville. It feels ancient yet really modern all at the same time. A cracking poem.
April 30th, 2024 02:22
Tom Dylan said:
Love this, Neville. It feels ancient yet really modern all at the same time. A cracking poem.
April 30th, 2024 02:22
Thirteen Times the Cuckoo Called
orchidee said:
Ahh, must be Cuckoo Land! lol.
April 30th, 2024 02:15
orchidee said:
Ahh, must be Cuckoo Land! lol.
April 30th, 2024 02:15
Thirteen Times the Cuckoo Called
2781 said:
We run to a different calendar.
He\'s probably correct.
April 30th, 2024 01:41
2781 said:
We run to a different calendar.
He\'s probably correct.
April 30th, 2024 01:41
Thirteen Times the Cuckoo Called
Goldfinch60 said:
That cuckoo is heralding the start of spring Neville with a baker\'s dozen of calls .
Andy
April 30th, 2024 01:19
Goldfinch60 said:
That cuckoo is heralding the start of spring Neville with a baker\'s dozen of calls .
Andy
April 30th, 2024 01:19
Forsaken
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Neville, keep breathing and all will be well.
Andy
April 30th, 2024 01:09
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Neville, keep breathing and all will be well.
Andy
April 30th, 2024 01:09
Thirteen Times the Cuckoo Called
Cassie58 said:
You are still here. Let that be a lesson to ya. Superstition can plague a person to death. A most elusive bird. I’ve never seen one, only heard its call. I’m still here too., I think!
April 30th, 2024 00:55
Cassie58 said:
You are still here. Let that be a lesson to ya. Superstition can plague a person to death. A most elusive bird. I’ve never seen one, only heard its call. I’m still here too., I think!
April 30th, 2024 00:55
Forsaken
orchidee said:
But I am half human, half guinea pig. Thats\'s them in my pic. They\'re not giant hamsters or rats, as some say, or else we need to be afraid, be very afraid, of the mutations. lol.
April 29th, 2024 07:53
orchidee said:
But I am half human, half guinea pig. Thats\'s them in my pic. They\'re not giant hamsters or rats, as some say, or else we need to be afraid, be very afraid, of the mutations. lol.
April 29th, 2024 07:53
Forsaken
Doggerel Dave said:
The other pussy is a little mysterious, is she not?
April 29th, 2024 07:42
Doggerel Dave said:
The other pussy is a little mysterious, is she not?
April 29th, 2024 07:42
Forsaken
Teddy.15 said:
Ah stunning and so relatable today dear Nev. Beautiful. 🌹
April 29th, 2024 04:59
Teddy.15 said:
Ah stunning and so relatable today dear Nev. Beautiful. 🌹
April 29th, 2024 04:59
Forsaken
Cassie58 said:
This poem truly does draw breath from this reader. So intense is the feeling of need and longing. Both memorable and remarkable poetry Neville. It’s a peach. Have a lovely day .
April 29th, 2024 04:05
Cassie58 said:
This poem truly does draw breath from this reader. So intense is the feeling of need and longing. Both memorable and remarkable poetry Neville. It’s a peach. Have a lovely day .
April 29th, 2024 04:05
The Cruelest of All Bed Partners
mirrorball said:
truth and time stole the beliefs....woah. i love how you\'ve put this
April 29th, 2024 04:03
mirrorball said:
truth and time stole the beliefs....woah. i love how you\'ve put this
April 29th, 2024 04:03
Forsaken
orchidee said:
I moved like a guinea pig. Is that the same?! (first line of your poem). lol.
April 29th, 2024 02:58
orchidee said:
I moved like a guinea pig. Is that the same?! (first line of your poem). lol.
April 29th, 2024 02:58
The Cruelest of All Bed Partners
Goldfinch60 said:
Time does change many things in our life Neville but if we are strong enough the best things in our lives can be kept in it.
Andy
April 29th, 2024 01:24
Goldfinch60 said:
Time does change many things in our life Neville but if we are strong enough the best things in our lives can be kept in it.
Andy
April 29th, 2024 01:24
The Cruelest of All Bed Partners
Bella Shepard said:
To be clear eyed in love seems an oxymoron, when the headiness of romance clouds ones vision. And when the cracks begin to appear there comes the hurt of disillutionment. You wrap it all beautifully in this poem my friend. The last line perfect!
April 28th, 2024 12:07
Bella Shepard said:
To be clear eyed in love seems an oxymoron, when the headiness of romance clouds ones vision. And when the cracks begin to appear there comes the hurt of disillutionment. You wrap it all beautifully in this poem my friend. The last line perfect!
April 28th, 2024 12:07
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