Comments received on poems by Neville



When the Balance Wheel is Broken
dtrusss said:

I\'ve been saying this to most today, but I\'ll say it again. Go out and get some sunshine right now or when it shines again. You are a wonderful expressive. Thanks for your sharing.

November 7th, 2023 17:20

When the Balance Wheel is Broken
MendedFences27 said:

Hope you\'re OK. Ignore my last comments to you. They were in jest.
Maybe you\'ve got tech problems. I get them from time to time. Your words are always \"first class.\"
A few years ago, I lost my computer to a massive failure and consequently, lost a few years\' worth of work. Hope get back to normal soon. - Phil A.

November 7th, 2023 12:49

When the Balance Wheel is Broken
Christina8 said:

never a good thing to feel off kilter. This has a very sad tone to it. May there be no final goodbyes....

November 7th, 2023 08:38

View Before Lunch
Sunsetmet said:

Yes all the things I remember calling us in to eat so many fond memories lovely

November 7th, 2023 07:20

When the Balance Wheel is Broken
orchidee said:

I\'m always here for ya too - but I may be a fat lot of help! Doh!

November 7th, 2023 05:02

When the Balance Wheel is Broken
LIZ said:

If it makes you feel better, you\'re not alone!!! ๐Ÿ’œ๐Ÿ’œ๐Ÿ’œ๐Ÿ’œ๐Ÿ’œ๐Ÿ’œ

November 7th, 2023 04:33

When the Balance Wheel is Broken
Bobby O said:

I love the phrasing and how the message spins but am personally a bit fearful or ambivalent about all that content and meaning potentially within.

November 7th, 2023 04:28

When the Balance Wheel is Broken
Teddy.15 said:

Well I just want to cry โค๏ธ

November 7th, 2023 04:12

When the Balance Wheel is Broken
orchidee said:

Good wishes N.
Meanwhile - that\'ll cost ya - sending more first class letters!

November 7th, 2023 03:01

When the Balance Wheel is Broken
Goldfinch60 said:

I am always here for you Neville.

Andy

November 7th, 2023 02:51

When the Balance Wheel is Broken
arqios said:

Always good to there be that place, that home to go back to when things go awry. Being off kilter is personally for me a killer. Hope the situation has changed for the better since this writing and posting.

November 7th, 2023 02:40

View Before Lunch
Goldfinch60 said:

Maybe \'those were the days\" Neville. Such strange days can be with us now so always look on the good side of life and enjoy your lunch.
I\'ll meet you in the pub for lunch and a pint soon.

Andy

November 7th, 2023 02:20

View Before Lunch
Bella Shepard said:

I might think I see someone reminiscing, but I could be wrong. If it is, it\'s beautiful. And if it isn\'t, it\'s still beautiful.

November 6th, 2023 17:23

View Before Lunch
MendedFences27 said:

This morning I saw a man feeding Seagulls from out of his hand. Thought that to be a bit risky. 10-15 flying above his head and as he raised his hand one would swoop in to take the morsel.
Great poem of observation. I believe you\'ve coined a new word \"tai chiing.\" - Phil A.

November 6th, 2023 14:16

Floating Down On a Whisper
Dove said:

Love the Title, very inspiringโ€ฆ โ€œFloating Down on a Whisperโ€

In dreams I sail upon a whisperโ€™s breath
A tender Breeze that carries me afar
My sprit soars , unburdened by the earth,
To realms unknown, where wonders truly are

With gentle grace , I drift upon its tide
Through ethereal mists, a tranquil flight
Embracing silence, I let go of my pride
And lose myself in this celestial light

Best to youโ€ฆ โค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธ

November 6th, 2023 13:05

Somewhere Beyond Our Goodbyes
Dove said:

Heartfelt Write Dear, parting is so sad, but an embrace so sweet. Enjoy the moments while they are here.

November 6th, 2023 12:55

View Before Lunch
Dove said:

๐Ÿ’โค๏ธ๐Ÿ’๐ŸŒนโค๏ธ

November 6th, 2023 12:51

View Before Lunch
2781 said:

Who\'s watching who, I thought.

November 6th, 2023 08:01

View Before Lunch
LIZ said:

Better make it home on time!!! Asking for a friend huh ๐Ÿซข I see you!! ๐Ÿ‘€ ๐Ÿ’œ๐Ÿ’œ๐Ÿ’œ

November 6th, 2023 06:59

View Before Lunch
orchidee said:

I had a view before supper but it put me off food for a month - KP ready for bed, with her curlers in! lol.

November 6th, 2023 04:57

View Before Lunch
Teddy.15 said:

Gorgeous Nev. And don\'t be late home for your Yorkshire puddings โค๏ธ

November 6th, 2023 03:43

Somewhere Beyond Our Goodbyes
Goldfinch60 said:

May that light always bring happiness to your memories Neville.

Andy

November 6th, 2023 01:26

Somewhere Beyond Our Goodbyes
Christina8 said:

Wonderful poem and I think \"let us sip the moments\" sums it up perfectly!

November 5th, 2023 08:17

Somewhere Beyond Our Goodbyes
LIZ said:

Which is why it\'s important to enjoy every single moment!! Beautiful!!! ๐Ÿ’œ๐Ÿ’œ๐Ÿ’œ๐Ÿ’œ๐Ÿ’œ๐Ÿ’œ๐Ÿ’œ

November 5th, 2023 06:40

Somewhere Beyond Our Goodbyes
Thomas W Case said:

Truly beautiful.

November 5th, 2023 05:12

Somewhere Beyond Our Goodbyes
orchidee said:

A fine write N.
I said to KP \'Goodbye\' a thousand times, but she comes back every time! I told her there\'s no need to hurry back, then under my breath said \'good riddance!\' heehee.

November 5th, 2023 04:30

How Many Ways Precisely
Goldfinch60 said:

Love is the strongest of al emotions and can be seen in many different ways, may it always be with you Neville.

Andy

November 5th, 2023 02:26

Twisted History the Rape of the Plains People ย 
Goldfinch60 said:

Very good words Neville, we do not realise the damage we are causing in our world.

Andy

November 5th, 2023 02:14

Chat Up Lies
Goldfinch60 said:

May those moments be forever with you Neville.

Andy

November 5th, 2023 01:55

How Many Ways Precisely
MendedFences27 said:

Will anyone ever know how many there are, \"Precisely?\" There may be as many as there are people in the world.
Your poem asks the reader as well as the intended and each one may answer differently. That is the power of your poem. How many ways, indeed? A thought-provoking piece. -Phil A.


November 4th, 2023 20:59



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