Comments received on poems by Neville
That Afterwards Feeling
Christina8 said:
All those beautiful endorphins released to make \"that afterwards feeling\" are quite similar to what I feel now after reading your poem. Great job, N!
October 13th, 2023 07:51
Christina8 said:
All those beautiful endorphins released to make \"that afterwards feeling\" are quite similar to what I feel now after reading your poem. Great job, N!
October 13th, 2023 07:51
That Afterwards Feeling
Pop64 said:
What a feeling to read this! It reminds me of moments, some special, some not so much, but yet welcomed, comfortable moments. Lovely read, mt friend!
October 13th, 2023 07:30
Pop64 said:
What a feeling to read this! It reminds me of moments, some special, some not so much, but yet welcomed, comfortable moments. Lovely read, mt friend!
October 13th, 2023 07:30
That Afterwards Feeling
L. B. Mek said:
My favourite
of all my favourite\'s
from your Genius INK over the years!
\'THE POET\'
I bow low to your superior talent
!!!BRILLIANT!!!
oh i\'ll be reading this again and again
October 13th, 2023 07:04
L. B. Mek said:
My favourite
of all my favourite\'s
from your Genius INK over the years!
\'THE POET\'
I bow low to your superior talent
!!!BRILLIANT!!!
oh i\'ll be reading this again and again
October 13th, 2023 07:04
The Measure of a Single Year
L. B. Mek said:
I measure it in blinks
makes it easier to understand
how I time-travelled
from one to the next
forgetting where all the Time went
in-between...
still that great Scottish poem being sang
by the world, while holding hands
will never get old
(to me, at least)
October 13th, 2023 07:01
L. B. Mek said:
I measure it in blinks
makes it easier to understand
how I time-travelled
from one to the next
forgetting where all the Time went
in-between...
still that great Scottish poem being sang
by the world, while holding hands
will never get old
(to me, at least)
October 13th, 2023 07:01
Me My Bro and A Chainsaw
L. B. Mek said:
sadly
no, first one\'s are tepid cuts
because we hadn\'t learnt to fall
deep,
yet
but hey, later we learn
that barbies just like ken\'s
are to be played with, only
and eventually
we find ourselves a real person
to hope with...
(so graphic!
i think there\'s a horror director
trapped inside you
waiting for the right timing....
do you have a brother?
forgive me for being a little jealous
that Hyung, is more than a word to me
lol)
an energetic write this one...
Halloween themed one could suggest..
but always depth, wise Poet
always something to peel back
and appreciate
with all your poems!
October 13th, 2023 06:57
L. B. Mek said:
sadly
no, first one\'s are tepid cuts
because we hadn\'t learnt to fall
deep,
yet
but hey, later we learn
that barbies just like ken\'s
are to be played with, only
and eventually
we find ourselves a real person
to hope with...
(so graphic!
i think there\'s a horror director
trapped inside you
waiting for the right timing....
do you have a brother?
forgive me for being a little jealous
that Hyung, is more than a word to me
lol)
an energetic write this one...
Halloween themed one could suggest..
but always depth, wise Poet
always something to peel back
and appreciate
with all your poems!
October 13th, 2023 06:57
Why Else Wish Him So Blind
L. B. Mek said:
ermm one of your more
ermm \'literal\' poems my friend
that imbues more emotionality
than any words could, clever
(but hey
it could have just been
a Blighty bank holiday
since, you know
how we love our screws
and hammers, and making a mess
on those Monday\'s
we\'re left having a staring match
with Time and our home..)
too much comfort
always
a prerequisite, trait
of all
two-timing morons!
(there is no gun
to your fckn head
save your partner
from needles heartache
wait, one fckn night
have a conversation
say your goodbyes
then be all the randy rabbit
you want...)
morons! I\'ll never get it
ever
there is no why to it
(unless they\'re
emotionally pushed in-to it
by their own partner\'s actions
like a retaliation thing
but that\'s not \'cheating\' per say
that\'s just a release of wrath..)
..
I got carried away again Hyung
forgive me
October 13th, 2023 06:50
L. B. Mek said:
ermm one of your more
ermm \'literal\' poems my friend
that imbues more emotionality
than any words could, clever
(but hey
it could have just been
a Blighty bank holiday
since, you know
how we love our screws
and hammers, and making a mess
on those Monday\'s
we\'re left having a staring match
with Time and our home..)
too much comfort
always
a prerequisite, trait
of all
two-timing morons!
(there is no gun
to your fckn head
save your partner
from needles heartache
wait, one fckn night
have a conversation
say your goodbyes
then be all the randy rabbit
you want...)
morons! I\'ll never get it
ever
there is no why to it
(unless they\'re
emotionally pushed in-to it
by their own partner\'s actions
like a retaliation thing
but that\'s not \'cheating\' per say
that\'s just a release of wrath..)
..
I got carried away again Hyung
forgive me
October 13th, 2023 06:50
That Afterwards Feeling
LIZ said:
This reminds me of the song \"When we were young\" by Adele! Those moments are so beautiful!! Young feelings!! 💜💜💜💜💜
October 13th, 2023 03:09
LIZ said:
This reminds me of the song \"When we were young\" by Adele! Those moments are so beautiful!! Young feelings!! 💜💜💜💜💜
October 13th, 2023 03:09
That Afterwards Feeling
Bobby O said:
Love the poem love the honest admittance. As an aside , the only English girl I dated was all excited to make me breakfast and it ended up being just beans and toast and eggs and I started looking around waiting for the what I thought was a certain to come punchline and when noticed her feelings got hurt and I was forever denied more English
“Dessert”!
October 13th, 2023 02:50
Bobby O said:
Love the poem love the honest admittance. As an aside , the only English girl I dated was all excited to make me breakfast and it ended up being just beans and toast and eggs and I started looking around waiting for the what I thought was a certain to come punchline and when noticed her feelings got hurt and I was forever denied more English
“Dessert”!
October 13th, 2023 02:50
That Afterwards Feeling
orchidee said:
A good write N, but as for me -
I never even get the \'before\' feeling with KP. And as for any bodily contact with her - bleeuurggh! Well, would we kiss a trout?! lol.
October 13th, 2023 02:18
orchidee said:
A good write N, but as for me -
I never even get the \'before\' feeling with KP. And as for any bodily contact with her - bleeuurggh! Well, would we kiss a trout?! lol.
October 13th, 2023 02:18
That Afterwards Feeling
Parisab said:
The release and relief in a gentle and English fashion…
October 13th, 2023 02:18
Parisab said:
The release and relief in a gentle and English fashion…
October 13th, 2023 02:18
The Measure of a Single Year
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true Neville and the older I get the shorter the years seem to become.
Andy
October 13th, 2023 01:05
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true Neville and the older I get the shorter the years seem to become.
Andy
October 13th, 2023 01:05
The Measure of a Single Year
MendedFences27 said:
Someone once said, I think it was me, that, \"The only good year is the one in Yearning,\" for it gives tomorrow a reason to exist.
Your poem says, \"The making,\" and \"The length of a single year mean nothing.\" This is true as it is with all of time, what you do with it is all that matters. Loved this one. - Phil A.
October 12th, 2023 18:43
MendedFences27 said:
Someone once said, I think it was me, that, \"The only good year is the one in Yearning,\" for it gives tomorrow a reason to exist.
Your poem says, \"The making,\" and \"The length of a single year mean nothing.\" This is true as it is with all of time, what you do with it is all that matters. Loved this one. - Phil A.
October 12th, 2023 18:43
The Measure of a Single Year
SureshG said:
No, it means nothing
or is it
Yes, it means nothing
If I can’t even phrase it
It must mean NOTHING
You son ………………….
My brain is already scrambled!!!!
October 12th, 2023 08:03
SureshG said:
No, it means nothing
or is it
Yes, it means nothing
If I can’t even phrase it
It must mean NOTHING
You son ………………….
My brain is already scrambled!!!!
October 12th, 2023 08:03
The Measure of a Single Year
orchidee said:
That means next year I got an extra day with KP in leap year. Argghh! I won\'t survive it. lol.
October 12th, 2023 05:20
orchidee said:
That means next year I got an extra day with KP in leap year. Argghh! I won\'t survive it. lol.
October 12th, 2023 05:20
The Measure of a Single Year
LIZ said:
Every breath, every touch, all the kisses and the hugs!! Hard times, troubles, work and all...a lapse in time, an hour lost! The length means nothing...so we\'re told....but every moment....IS gold!! 😊😊😊 Just saying! 💜💜💜💜💜
October 12th, 2023 05:01
LIZ said:
Every breath, every touch, all the kisses and the hugs!! Hard times, troubles, work and all...a lapse in time, an hour lost! The length means nothing...so we\'re told....but every moment....IS gold!! 😊😊😊 Just saying! 💜💜💜💜💜
October 12th, 2023 05:01
The Measure of a Single Year
Teddy.15 said:
Hustle and bustle. I personally appreciate every day some are harder than others and some are simply wonderful. ❤️
October 12th, 2023 03:47
Teddy.15 said:
Hustle and bustle. I personally appreciate every day some are harder than others and some are simply wonderful. ❤️
October 12th, 2023 03:47
Me My Bro and A Chainsaw
Goldfinch60 said:
Yes Barbie should be beheaded.
Andy
October 12th, 2023 01:16
Goldfinch60 said:
Yes Barbie should be beheaded.
Andy
October 12th, 2023 01:16
Me My Bro and A Chainsaw
MendedFences27 said:
Was this before or after the visit to your local. Either way a topiary of \"Barbie\" never seems a good idea. Maybe if you could salvage the important parts and cover the rest with \"very cool pink clothing\" it might just be passable.
Why would you even attempt such a zany venture? Oh well, it made for a very humorous poem. - Phil A.
P.S. - At first, I envisioned a disaster of the proportions in Frost\'s \"Out, Out.\" thank God no one was injured. Or maybe it was just an episode of \"Only Fools and Horses.\"
October 11th, 2023 14:58
MendedFences27 said:
Was this before or after the visit to your local. Either way a topiary of \"Barbie\" never seems a good idea. Maybe if you could salvage the important parts and cover the rest with \"very cool pink clothing\" it might just be passable.
Why would you even attempt such a zany venture? Oh well, it made for a very humorous poem. - Phil A.
P.S. - At first, I envisioned a disaster of the proportions in Frost\'s \"Out, Out.\" thank God no one was injured. Or maybe it was just an episode of \"Only Fools and Horses.\"
October 11th, 2023 14:58
Me My Bro and A Chainsaw
LIZ said:
OH MY LORD! 😂😂😂😂😂 Neville!!! I just pictured barbie cut up in a lot of small pieces!! What a picture!! But ummmm...why did your bro have to get involved??? Although....nah never mind. LOL 💜💜💜
October 11th, 2023 07:55
LIZ said:
OH MY LORD! 😂😂😂😂😂 Neville!!! I just pictured barbie cut up in a lot of small pieces!! What a picture!! But ummmm...why did your bro have to get involved??? Although....nah never mind. LOL 💜💜💜
October 11th, 2023 07:55
Me My Bro and A Chainsaw
orchidee said:
Fido was OK until the last line, then he swooned! lol.
October 11th, 2023 07:17
orchidee said:
Fido was OK until the last line, then he swooned! lol.
October 11th, 2023 07:17
No Contest
Bobby O said:
So true. I used to play tournament Table Tennis and on occasion find played that claimed to have never lost. I knew immediately they had no chance to beat me because if they didn’t respect the game enough to search out and find their “level” then they preferred the comfort of fiction
October 11th, 2023 06:42
Bobby O said:
So true. I used to play tournament Table Tennis and on occasion find played that claimed to have never lost. I knew immediately they had no chance to beat me because if they didn’t respect the game enough to search out and find their “level” then they preferred the comfort of fiction
October 11th, 2023 06:42
Me My Bro and A Chainsaw
Bobby O said:
I did smile at the finish and really like how equal and aligned it placed Topiary and Barbie. Other than you and the catalyst that mixes in your mind that logical equanimity would be left forever undiscovered.
October 11th, 2023 06:28
Bobby O said:
I did smile at the finish and really like how equal and aligned it placed Topiary and Barbie. Other than you and the catalyst that mixes in your mind that logical equanimity would be left forever undiscovered.
October 11th, 2023 06:28
Me My Bro and A Chainsaw
Teddy.15 said:
LOL oh my dear Nev, you haven\'t lost your sense of humour my friend, it is well and truly stuck inside you. ❤️ ere I never liked Barbie either, chainsaw away LoL
October 11th, 2023 03:44
Teddy.15 said:
LOL oh my dear Nev, you haven\'t lost your sense of humour my friend, it is well and truly stuck inside you. ❤️ ere I never liked Barbie either, chainsaw away LoL
October 11th, 2023 03:44
Why Else Wish Him So Blind
Teddy.15 said:
Powerful. Not much of a loss though is it Nev. You are free ❤️
October 11th, 2023 02:37
Teddy.15 said:
Powerful. Not much of a loss though is it Nev. You are free ❤️
October 11th, 2023 02:37
Why Else Wish Him So Blind
Goldfinch60 said:
Betrayal can be found in many ways Neville.
Andy
October 11th, 2023 02:32
Goldfinch60 said:
Betrayal can be found in many ways Neville.
Andy
October 11th, 2023 02:32
Why Else Wish Him So Blind
Bella Shepard said:
All I can say is \"What goes around...comes around\", and it sounds like the offending party is more than deserving. Take care dear friend, you deserve way better!
October 10th, 2023 14:53
Bella Shepard said:
All I can say is \"What goes around...comes around\", and it sounds like the offending party is more than deserving. Take care dear friend, you deserve way better!
October 10th, 2023 14:53
Why Else Wish Him So Blind
MendedFences27 said:
If one was blind, they could feel more about a person than they could while sighted. A blind person hears more and, honestly, they feel more in the spoken word.
Loved your poem. It was honest and to the point. - Phil A.
October 10th, 2023 14:20
MendedFences27 said:
If one was blind, they could feel more about a person than they could while sighted. A blind person hears more and, honestly, they feel more in the spoken word.
Loved your poem. It was honest and to the point. - Phil A.
October 10th, 2023 14:20
Why Else Wish Him So Blind
orchidee said:
KP won\'t be ashamed, she will just get more publicity. Doh! Her outlook is \'me, me, me!;
October 10th, 2023 13:30
orchidee said:
KP won\'t be ashamed, she will just get more publicity. Doh! Her outlook is \'me, me, me!;
October 10th, 2023 13:30
Why Else Wish Him So Blind
LIZ said:
Need me to F somebody up? 😡 Damn! This is oozing annoyance and disrespect!! Not having it! 💜💜💜
October 10th, 2023 08:41
LIZ said:
Need me to F somebody up? 😡 Damn! This is oozing annoyance and disrespect!! Not having it! 💜💜💜
October 10th, 2023 08:41
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