Comments received on poems by Neville



From a Collection of First Times Remembered
Bella Shepard said:

A beautiful memory, preserved in every detail, such happy ones are a treasure. On the other end of that spectrum, no pun intended, I remember my first colonoscopy, in all its horror. I much prefer your memory, keep them positive ones coming my friend. Just lovely!

March 6th, 2024 16:13

From a Collection of First Times Remembered
Cassie58 said:

What a special memory of time aboard a cruise ship. Sounds absolutely perfect. Lucky you Neville.

March 6th, 2024 13:51

On Waking Up in Rio
Cloie said:

Your poem is like a rollercoaster for the imagination! It paints a vivid picture of wonder. The imagery is striking. Great job!

March 6th, 2024 12:24

Arc
Bella Shepard said:

You create an ambiance of comfort, and sweet familiarity in these three, visually pleasing lines. Subtle and oh so beautiful!

March 6th, 2024 09:03

From a Collection of First Times Remembered
Christina8 said:

What a wonderful memory, N., captured and perfectly retold.

March 6th, 2024 08:35

From a Collection of First Times Remembered
Tom Dylan said:

Another fine write, Neville, and another moment perfectly captured.

March 6th, 2024 06:45

From a Collection of First Times Remembered
Doggerel Dave said:

2023??? I dooon\'t belieeeve it....!!!

March 6th, 2024 05:59

From a Collection of First Times Remembered
orchidee said:

I suppose I remember the moment I met KP, though I\'d like to forget it! lol.

March 6th, 2024 02:59

From a Collection of First Times Remembered
Teddy.15 said:

What a charmed life you do lead Mr Neville. So very well written into a moment and memory of time. ❤️💜❤️

March 6th, 2024 02:56

On Waking Up in Rio
Goldfinch60 said:

Those dreams can take you to some very strange places Neville.

Andy

March 6th, 2024 02:13

Recall
Bobby O said:

Any stone yet turned still presents gifts for perspective

March 6th, 2024 01:52

On Waking Up in Rio
Bobby O said:

The seamless aspect of that “bundling” speaks of a great acquired existing comfort of soul and body atwixt and represents an accordance of high value and is a constant gift and lift and makes me happy that is within your possession.

March 6th, 2024 01:47

On Waking Up in Rio
MendedFences27 said:

Waking up in Rio, disoriented and confused, sounds like movie plotline.
The poetry comes from the fact you were not alone.
A small yet intriguing poem. One wants to know what happened next. - Phil A.

March 5th, 2024 17:47

On Waking Up in Rio
Thomas W Case said:

It\'s fantastic and very relatable.

March 5th, 2024 13:28

On Waking Up in Rio
Cassie58 said:

Disorientated maybe after jet lag. You woke up on holiday, not having a clue where you were. Been there and done that Neville. Lucky you travelling to Rio. Fab.

March 5th, 2024 13:22

On Waking Up in Rio
Teddy.15 said:

Seems like a dream to me, waking up anywhere in Rio 🌹 Neville slumberbashing in Brazil how wonderful 💜

March 5th, 2024 13:00

On Waking Up in Rio
orchidee said:

Good write N.

March 5th, 2024 11:04

On Waking Up in Rio
Neilton said:

That\'s literally me after my afternoon sleep!Great poem.

March 5th, 2024 10:53

On Waking Up in Rio
Doggerel Dave said:

Lifting your head could have been a very risky enterprise, Neville...best to take such extraordinary moves extremely gently indeed.......

March 5th, 2024 07:51

On Waking Up in Rio
Tom Dylan said:

Nicely done, Neville. Perfectly captured the feeling of waking up and wondering where you are and what\'s going on. :-)

March 5th, 2024 06:02

Entres
Cassie58 said:

Now there are munchies and munchies. I prefer the chocolate sort. The taste of chocolate can certainly give me a high.Look where I drifted with your lines Neville. Good sunny day to ya.

March 5th, 2024 03:14

Recall
Cassie58 said:

Memories can be pleasant to visit once in a while, but lingering in the what ifs is not living in the now, where you can be building stronger. I guess that’s not easy when we live in times of such rapid and sometimes unwelcome change. Collisions are often painful. That!s where I drifted to Neville. Have a happy Tuesday my friend.

March 5th, 2024 02:28

Recall
Goldfinch60 said:

We must always move forward Neville, we can do nothing about our past except use our experience to make the future better.

Andy

March 5th, 2024 02:20

Fleeced
Bella Shepard said:

Memories and emotions, inextricably linked. They run the gamut of who we are, and how we deal with them. Your poem is such food for thought, for those days will come when we\'re lost in them.

March 4th, 2024 14:00

Recall
Cloie said:

Your poem beautifully reflects on the act of reminiscing. It\'s a poignant reminder to cherish our memories and reflect on our past. Well said!

March 4th, 2024 13:01

Recall
Teddy.15 said:

A painful bump at the very least 🌹

March 4th, 2024 12:26

Recall
Doggerel Dave said:

Wot? to look back on what might have been but wasn\'t....I don\'t feel that\'s much fun at all.....unless, it has to be admitted, there are certain situations (no details lest it gives orchi the vapours) where an extension of the reality in my head is simple straightforward and with no complicated aftertaste.

March 4th, 2024 06:26

Recall
orchidee said:

You could walk backwards and be able to see those pleasant things of the past in front of you! lol.

March 4th, 2024 05:48

Entres
Goldfinch60 said:

It all depends how big a breakfast you have Neville. LOL

Andy

March 4th, 2024 02:14

Entres
Thomas W Case said:

Sharp and vivid imagery. Powerful work my friend.

March 3rd, 2024 17:40



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