Comments received on poems by Neville
Tu Es Tout Pour Moi
Teddy.15 said:
Ah the romantic side of Nev, yes yes yes. β€οΈ
October 31st, 2023 01:29
Teddy.15 said:
Ah the romantic side of Nev, yes yes yes. β€οΈ
October 31st, 2023 01:29
Tu Es Tout Pour Moi
LIZ said:
Ayyyyyyyy π«£π«£π«£π«£ your everything!! Dirt AND rainbows! Worth it, with all that it comes!! ππππ
October 31st, 2023 01:03
LIZ said:
Ayyyyyyyy π«£π«£π«£π«£ your everything!! Dirt AND rainbows! Worth it, with all that it comes!! ππππ
October 31st, 2023 01:03
She Wore Him So Well
Bella Shepard said:
As I read I could almost hear the words whispered in a slow, southern drawl, alluring and sensuous. You\'ve outdone yourself with the tenor of this poem my friend. Sublime!
October 30th, 2023 15:24
Bella Shepard said:
As I read I could almost hear the words whispered in a slow, southern drawl, alluring and sensuous. You\'ve outdone yourself with the tenor of this poem my friend. Sublime!
October 30th, 2023 15:24
She Wore Him So Well
orchidee said:
Good write N.
I wrote a similar poem (did I?). It said ...the cream of the botox of KP\'s thigh... Not a pretty sight. heehee.
Fido says I best not let anyone ride on my mastery this time of day! lol
October 30th, 2023 10:24
orchidee said:
Good write N.
I wrote a similar poem (did I?). It said ...the cream of the botox of KP\'s thigh... Not a pretty sight. heehee.
Fido says I best not let anyone ride on my mastery this time of day! lol
October 30th, 2023 10:24
She Wore Him So Well
MendedFences27 said:
Better a \"glove\" than a mitten, five times the fun. Seriously, this erotic poem is subtle, such that it becomes a love poem. A great piece of work. - Phil A,
October 30th, 2023 09:58
MendedFences27 said:
Better a \"glove\" than a mitten, five times the fun. Seriously, this erotic poem is subtle, such that it becomes a love poem. A great piece of work. - Phil A,
October 30th, 2023 09:58
She Wore Him So Well
Thomas W Case said:
Excellent on all levels. Truly genius.
October 30th, 2023 08:03
Thomas W Case said:
Excellent on all levels. Truly genius.
October 30th, 2023 08:03
She Wore Him So Well
arqios said:
A perfect fit it would appear to be. Always good to have exquisite velvet.
October 30th, 2023 07:29
arqios said:
A perfect fit it would appear to be. Always good to have exquisite velvet.
October 30th, 2023 07:29
She Wore Him So Well
LIZ said:
Well.....well......I hope he had the time of his life!! π€π€ππππ
October 30th, 2023 04:45
LIZ said:
Well.....well......I hope he had the time of his life!! π€π€ππππ
October 30th, 2023 04:45
A Handful of Water
Parisab said:
Your poem creates one singular moment of beauty and brings attention to the value of water and the labor it requires in the most parts of this earthβ¦
October 30th, 2023 00:20
Parisab said:
Your poem creates one singular moment of beauty and brings attention to the value of water and the labor it requires in the most parts of this earthβ¦
October 30th, 2023 00:20
This is Us ..
Bobby O said:
A forever testimony that is a credi owned and assumed by both
October 30th, 2023 00:05
Bobby O said:
A forever testimony that is a credi owned and assumed by both
October 30th, 2023 00:05
On Moving On
Bobby O said:
I guessing that you are forever woven into the fabric of her existence. If DNA could move and take residence that would be you.
October 30th, 2023 00:02
Bobby O said:
I guessing that you are forever woven into the fabric of her existence. If DNA could move and take residence that would be you.
October 30th, 2023 00:02
On Moving On
MendedFences27 said:
The burden of being of a certain age. We never think of these things when we are young. You have captured the \'fear\" of being forgotten ever so well. I noticed the \"maybe\" at the end and know full well why it is there. - Phil A.
October 29th, 2023 14:00
MendedFences27 said:
The burden of being of a certain age. We never think of these things when we are young. You have captured the \'fear\" of being forgotten ever so well. I noticed the \"maybe\" at the end and know full well why it is there. - Phil A.
October 29th, 2023 14:00
On Moving On
LIZ said:
Mmmmmm so romantic, so beautiful! And because I know you\'re a gentleman......so gentle!! How can she not think of you every now and then?! ππππ
October 29th, 2023 11:57
LIZ said:
Mmmmmm so romantic, so beautiful! And because I know you\'re a gentleman......so gentle!! How can she not think of you every now and then?! ππππ
October 29th, 2023 11:57
On Moving On
orchidee said:
A fine write N.
KP\'s threatened to go away (hooray!) but she always comes back for more money from me for botox! π
October 29th, 2023 02:00
orchidee said:
A fine write N.
KP\'s threatened to go away (hooray!) but she always comes back for more money from me for botox! π
October 29th, 2023 02:00
This is Us ..
Garth Rakumakoe said:
I read this, Neville, and failing to find the words, I read it again, and still failed. I am mightily impressed how you find words so hard to find.
This write stays with me. It hits hard sir. ππΌ
October 28th, 2023 13:26
Garth Rakumakoe said:
I read this, Neville, and failing to find the words, I read it again, and still failed. I am mightily impressed how you find words so hard to find.
This write stays with me. It hits hard sir. ππΌ
October 28th, 2023 13:26
A Handful of Water
LIZ said:
Neville!! I think I told you before, but, your titles are amazing!! \"A creation made out of hard work\"!! \"Nothing, but everything\"! ππππ
October 28th, 2023 04:21
LIZ said:
Neville!! I think I told you before, but, your titles are amazing!! \"A creation made out of hard work\"!! \"Nothing, but everything\"! ππππ
October 28th, 2023 04:21
A Handful of Water
Christina8 said:
The imagery in this poem is astonishing, Neville! Also very delicate.
October 28th, 2023 03:43
Christina8 said:
The imagery in this poem is astonishing, Neville! Also very delicate.
October 28th, 2023 03:43
A Handful of Water
Teddy.15 said:
Your imagery is just gorgeous dear Nev. Diamonds for sure. β€οΈ
October 28th, 2023 01:58
Teddy.15 said:
Your imagery is just gorgeous dear Nev. Diamonds for sure. β€οΈ
October 28th, 2023 01:58
A Handful of Water
orchidee said:
Good write N.
Yep, KP\'s hands are rough, calloused, etc. The botox don\'t make any difference. Dunno why she has it. π
October 28th, 2023 01:52
orchidee said:
Good write N.
Yep, KP\'s hands are rough, calloused, etc. The botox don\'t make any difference. Dunno why she has it. π
October 28th, 2023 01:52
This is Us ..
Teddy.15 said:
My dear Nev, such sadness in such beauty, I have a great friend who literally went through this, it fathoms me how he did it with such dignity but he did. A stunning capture of soulmates and Indeed many other types of love, when I was really young it\'s what I felt about my mother. β€οΈ
October 28th, 2023 00:39
Teddy.15 said:
My dear Nev, such sadness in such beauty, I have a great friend who literally went through this, it fathoms me how he did it with such dignity but he did. A stunning capture of soulmates and Indeed many other types of love, when I was really young it\'s what I felt about my mother. β€οΈ
October 28th, 2023 00:39
This is Us ..
MendedFences27 said:
This is beautiful and real. It hit me like a gut punch, the last two lines especially. It\'s difficult to deal with and harder, I imagine, to write about it. I have no more to say except I hope you all find the peace you seek. - Phil A.
October 27th, 2023 18:37
MendedFences27 said:
This is beautiful and real. It hit me like a gut punch, the last two lines especially. It\'s difficult to deal with and harder, I imagine, to write about it. I have no more to say except I hope you all find the peace you seek. - Phil A.
October 27th, 2023 18:37
This is Us ..
arqios said:
That is the sweetest and most painful thing.... who goes first can be such a pain. A contemporary film captures this scene: The Notebook; where the couple expire together atop the hospital bed.
October 27th, 2023 05:31
arqios said:
That is the sweetest and most painful thing.... who goes first can be such a pain. A contemporary film captures this scene: The Notebook; where the couple expire together atop the hospital bed.
October 27th, 2023 05:31
And All Before Our Awakening
LIZ said:
I\'m not familiar....but still...the emotions are felt. ππππ sending prayers!
October 27th, 2023 04:31
LIZ said:
I\'m not familiar....but still...the emotions are felt. ππππ sending prayers!
October 27th, 2023 04:31
This is Us ..
LIZ said:
When....you become....ONE.....ππππππ
October 27th, 2023 04:24
LIZ said:
When....you become....ONE.....ππππππ
October 27th, 2023 04:24
This is Us ..
Christina8 said:
Oh yes, you can always feel your spouses pain. And the end is a thought we must not think about too much or we\'ll go mad--who will pass first?
October 27th, 2023 02:32
Christina8 said:
Oh yes, you can always feel your spouses pain. And the end is a thought we must not think about too much or we\'ll go mad--who will pass first?
October 27th, 2023 02:32
This is Us ..
orchidee said:
You can feel the pain of your loved ones. Me? I don\'t care about KP\'s pain. She brought it all on herself - the pain of botox going saggy! lol.
October 27th, 2023 01:51
orchidee said:
You can feel the pain of your loved ones. Me? I don\'t care about KP\'s pain. She brought it all on herself - the pain of botox going saggy! lol.
October 27th, 2023 01:51
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