Comments received on poems by Neville
Just a Man With a Thing About Bees
orchidee said:
Send them bees to me - killer bees? Like some horror flick. I will set them on KP. I\'m horrible to her! lol.
But the bees will be allergic to her botox. heehee.
May 7th, 2023 02:06
orchidee said:
Send them bees to me - killer bees? Like some horror flick. I will set them on KP. I\'m horrible to her! lol.
But the bees will be allergic to her botox. heehee.
May 7th, 2023 02:06
Just a Man With a Thing About Bees
Bobby O said:
Playful and a tad irreverent , perhaps to set you off guard ? And my recent profound revelation is certainly more fact than theory — any poem that correctly inserts that most quixotic word -SUPERCILIOUS is truly close to perfect.
May 7th, 2023 00:54
Bobby O said:
Playful and a tad irreverent , perhaps to set you off guard ? And my recent profound revelation is certainly more fact than theory — any poem that correctly inserts that most quixotic word -SUPERCILIOUS is truly close to perfect.
May 7th, 2023 00:54
Upon Recalling Youth and Poetry
arqios said:
Yes, poetry that was the voice of a generation and for the most part embraced as such.
May 6th, 2023 17:10
arqios said:
Yes, poetry that was the voice of a generation and for the most part embraced as such.
May 6th, 2023 17:10
Upon Recalling Youth and Poetry
Bella Shepard said:
These days, youth seems something I dreamt of once. And poetry, the crutch that that helps me hobble along. Now the past becomes stronger, by virtue of it being sweeter in reflection. A very estimable write dear friend.
May 6th, 2023 09:27
Bella Shepard said:
These days, youth seems something I dreamt of once. And poetry, the crutch that that helps me hobble along. Now the past becomes stronger, by virtue of it being sweeter in reflection. A very estimable write dear friend.
May 6th, 2023 09:27
Upon Recalling Youth and Poetry
Bobby O said:
It so flows
Omnidirectional keeping readers transfixed w contents and weaponry words, nicotine shackled to Thesaurus , I’m happy w your choice to unsheath..,
May 6th, 2023 03:28
Bobby O said:
It so flows
Omnidirectional keeping readers transfixed w contents and weaponry words, nicotine shackled to Thesaurus , I’m happy w your choice to unsheath..,
May 6th, 2023 03:28
Upon Recalling Youth and Poetry
orchidee said:
Good write N.
Yes, KP and I went to a Greek island. I only bought her a one-way ticket! heehee.
May 6th, 2023 01:59
orchidee said:
Good write N.
Yes, KP and I went to a Greek island. I only bought her a one-way ticket! heehee.
May 6th, 2023 01:59
Echoes Seldom Lie These Days
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
This poem is a poignant reflection on the endurance of love and the unpredictability of life.
May 5th, 2023 13:40
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
This poem is a poignant reflection on the endurance of love and the unpredictability of life.
May 5th, 2023 13:40
Echoes Seldom Lie These Days
arqios said:
P\'raps echoes are reflections sounding off in our hearing.
May 5th, 2023 08:30
arqios said:
P\'raps echoes are reflections sounding off in our hearing.
May 5th, 2023 08:30
Echoes Seldom Lie These Days
Accidental Poet said:
But what of your surprise, when out from robin\'s egg pops Orchi in swooning song. 😁
May 5th, 2023 07:19
Accidental Poet said:
But what of your surprise, when out from robin\'s egg pops Orchi in swooning song. 😁
May 5th, 2023 07:19
Echoes Seldom Lie These Days
Fay Slimm. said:
Long-lasting relationships deserve a tribute and this is surely one of the best penned reminders to listen to nought but the heart - --Great stuff my friend - reminds me of that long-ago song - \"They tried to tell us we were too young\"
May 5th, 2023 04:39
Fay Slimm. said:
Long-lasting relationships deserve a tribute and this is surely one of the best penned reminders to listen to nought but the heart - --Great stuff my friend - reminds me of that long-ago song - \"They tried to tell us we were too young\"
May 5th, 2023 04:39
Echoes Seldom Lie These Days
L. B. Mek said:
so glad you\'re on the right side
of that capricious echo, dear Poet
(this, that cruelty of callous fate
what\'s granted to one, is echoed
rarely
to those majority, who spend
an eternity trying to remember
\'the colour of that dress\'
\'from that one Time\'
when for a brief, teasing shadow
it felt like, this moment would
foreshadow future nights, where
we would replay this scene
again n again, till forevermore
was a fact
we had realised and cherished
as part of life...)
May 5th, 2023 03:29
L. B. Mek said:
so glad you\'re on the right side
of that capricious echo, dear Poet
(this, that cruelty of callous fate
what\'s granted to one, is echoed
rarely
to those majority, who spend
an eternity trying to remember
\'the colour of that dress\'
\'from that one Time\'
when for a brief, teasing shadow
it felt like, this moment would
foreshadow future nights, where
we would replay this scene
again n again, till forevermore
was a fact
we had realised and cherished
as part of life...)
May 5th, 2023 03:29
Five Seconds Into An Encounter
L. B. Mek said:
lol
that \'matter of fact\' veracity
as accent to a child\'s, as yet
untainted sincerity
is a life rejuvenating, delight
to witness..
(well, unless you\'re at the end
of their prickling observations)
😌
a wonderful slice of life, dear Poet
thank you for the chuckle
May 5th, 2023 03:19
L. B. Mek said:
lol
that \'matter of fact\' veracity
as accent to a child\'s, as yet
untainted sincerity
is a life rejuvenating, delight
to witness..
(well, unless you\'re at the end
of their prickling observations)
😌
a wonderful slice of life, dear Poet
thank you for the chuckle
May 5th, 2023 03:19
Are We Nearly There Yet
L. B. Mek said:
so relatable Hyung
\'thought provoking\' to say the least
a lovely read
(distance, is ever a conundrum
of our anxiety, status
yearning to know our limitations
we strive to measure
knowing, we never want to realise
those ending credits
instead, by trying to concentrate
on destination, we
approximate the time we have left
to cherish
mementos of our life\'s effervescent
sensations..)
the films were fun as well, lol
May 5th, 2023 03:15
L. B. Mek said:
so relatable Hyung
\'thought provoking\' to say the least
a lovely read
(distance, is ever a conundrum
of our anxiety, status
yearning to know our limitations
we strive to measure
knowing, we never want to realise
those ending credits
instead, by trying to concentrate
on destination, we
approximate the time we have left
to cherish
mementos of our life\'s effervescent
sensations..)
the films were fun as well, lol
May 5th, 2023 03:15
Mark Well the Purpose of Night
L. B. Mek said:
\'ten times more
invisible
to the naked eye\'
(and so, that much more
preciously, tattooed
within our heart\'s, walls...)
Brilliant!
dear Poet supreme
May 5th, 2023 03:03
L. B. Mek said:
\'ten times more
invisible
to the naked eye\'
(and so, that much more
preciously, tattooed
within our heart\'s, walls...)
Brilliant!
dear Poet supreme
May 5th, 2023 03:03
Echoes Seldom Lie These Days
Bobby O said:
Though perhaps written under guise as a cautionary tale , it didn’t fool me, the splendor of this optimistic Tome shone bright and made me glad. Plus I learned about echoes and reaffirmed my long love of Robin’s Eggs.
May 5th, 2023 02:57
Bobby O said:
Though perhaps written under guise as a cautionary tale , it didn’t fool me, the splendor of this optimistic Tome shone bright and made me glad. Plus I learned about echoes and reaffirmed my long love of Robin’s Eggs.
May 5th, 2023 02:57
Echoes Seldom Lie These Days
orchidee said:
Good write N,
You know I\'m gonna say this - I never got past the first verse with KP. I fainted at the removal of her dress. lol.
May 5th, 2023 02:06
orchidee said:
Good write N,
You know I\'m gonna say this - I never got past the first verse with KP. I fainted at the removal of her dress. lol.
May 5th, 2023 02:06
Five Seconds Into An Encounter
arqios said:
When we care for others with a fullness of attention juggling melting ice cream can become unwieldy.
May 5th, 2023 01:33
arqios said:
When we care for others with a fullness of attention juggling melting ice cream can become unwieldy.
May 5th, 2023 01:33
Five Seconds Into An Encounter
Christina8 said:
What a wonderful write! I was so engaged at the beginning...who knew she would be a toddler? Full of description, loved it!
May 4th, 2023 07:10
Christina8 said:
What a wonderful write! I was so engaged at the beginning...who knew she would be a toddler? Full of description, loved it!
May 4th, 2023 07:10
Five Seconds Into An Encounter
Fay Slimm. said:
What an engaging opener that sets the mind rolling - The start of a novel without a doubt as I can see a sensitive story unfolding from that precocious encounter mon ami........x
May 4th, 2023 06:41
Fay Slimm. said:
What an engaging opener that sets the mind rolling - The start of a novel without a doubt as I can see a sensitive story unfolding from that precocious encounter mon ami........x
May 4th, 2023 06:41
Five Seconds Into An Encounter
Accidental Poet said:
I fail to see how anyone could give a false smile to such a 5 year old girl. Excellently penned N. 🙂
May 4th, 2023 03:54
Accidental Poet said:
I fail to see how anyone could give a false smile to such a 5 year old girl. Excellently penned N. 🙂
May 4th, 2023 03:54
Five Seconds Into An Encounter
orchidee said:
A fine write N.
Would she recognise KP as a member of the Old Trout Club? lol.
May 4th, 2023 01:44
orchidee said:
A fine write N.
Would she recognise KP as a member of the Old Trout Club? lol.
May 4th, 2023 01:44
Are We Nearly There Yet
Bella Shepard said:
There are those journeys that you wish would never end, and it\'s always the anticipation of the next one that sparks desire. Simply delicious dear friend!
May 3rd, 2023 13:16
Bella Shepard said:
There are those journeys that you wish would never end, and it\'s always the anticipation of the next one that sparks desire. Simply delicious dear friend!
May 3rd, 2023 13:16
Are We Nearly There Yet
Christina8 said:
Loved this write! Reminds me of long road trips and adventure. x
May 3rd, 2023 13:09
Christina8 said:
Loved this write! Reminds me of long road trips and adventure. x
May 3rd, 2023 13:09
Mark Well the Purpose of Night
Bella Shepard said:
Tis true that the brain is more busy durning the night when we sleep, than when we are awake, storing wonderful memories of our days, that we may retrieve and relive once again. This poem has such a gentle touch, I can almost hear Michael Crawford singing \"Music of Night\" in the background. Exquisite dear friend!
May 3rd, 2023 13:09
Bella Shepard said:
Tis true that the brain is more busy durning the night when we sleep, than when we are awake, storing wonderful memories of our days, that we may retrieve and relive once again. This poem has such a gentle touch, I can almost hear Michael Crawford singing \"Music of Night\" in the background. Exquisite dear friend!
May 3rd, 2023 13:09
Are We Nearly There Yet
Fay Slimm. said:
A telling question your title here highlights dear Sir - - methinks after romps in hotel rooms with maybe a dram or two before play no wonder they\'re not looking for constructive answers - another intriguingly canny read ............ x
May 3rd, 2023 09:52
Fay Slimm. said:
A telling question your title here highlights dear Sir - - methinks after romps in hotel rooms with maybe a dram or two before play no wonder they\'re not looking for constructive answers - another intriguingly canny read ............ x
May 3rd, 2023 09:52
Are We Nearly There Yet
Accidental Poet said:
\'Tis the journey we seek, not the destination. Well penned my lyrical friend. 😉
May 3rd, 2023 04:02
Accidental Poet said:
\'Tis the journey we seek, not the destination. Well penned my lyrical friend. 😉
May 3rd, 2023 04:02
Are We Nearly There Yet
orchidee said:
Dunno if we\'re nearly there yet. Where we going?! Do shut up Orchi. lol.
May 3rd, 2023 01:48
orchidee said:
Dunno if we\'re nearly there yet. Where we going?! Do shut up Orchi. lol.
May 3rd, 2023 01:48
Mark Well the Purpose of Night
MendedFences27 said:
Dreams of love as \"the purpose of the night.\" Could anything be more purposeful? A wonderful ode to the mystery of the night. Protected by the lack of light they are\" invisible\" \"ghosts\" \"dancing on water.\"
For all of the darkness the images are crystal clear and brought to fruition by your last line. Your poem is a dream come true. Beautiful! - Phil A.
May 2nd, 2023 21:30
MendedFences27 said:
Dreams of love as \"the purpose of the night.\" Could anything be more purposeful? A wonderful ode to the mystery of the night. Protected by the lack of light they are\" invisible\" \"ghosts\" \"dancing on water.\"
For all of the darkness the images are crystal clear and brought to fruition by your last line. Your poem is a dream come true. Beautiful! - Phil A.
May 2nd, 2023 21:30
Mark Well the Purpose of Night
arqios said:
To slumber whence sleep may be found is a use of night that should it be lost leaves lingering fright.
May 2nd, 2023 17:52
arqios said:
To slumber whence sleep may be found is a use of night that should it be lost leaves lingering fright.
May 2nd, 2023 17:52
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