Comments received on poems by Neville
Glow
Cassie58 said:
That glow and the drawn curtains makes me think of a working gal. A lady of the night, maybe. Sackcloth though? Would have thought she might have worn something a little softer to the touch. It seems she was troubled by all her shadows. I can understand that. Bills have to be paid. Children have to be fed. What an intriguing write. My imagination seems to have gone awol with this write Neville. Glow though, has a certain warmth to it. Captivating writing for sure from your prolific and varied pen.
December 19th, 2023 12:03
Cassie58 said:
That glow and the drawn curtains makes me think of a working gal. A lady of the night, maybe. Sackcloth though? Would have thought she might have worn something a little softer to the touch. It seems she was troubled by all her shadows. I can understand that. Bills have to be paid. Children have to be fed. What an intriguing write. My imagination seems to have gone awol with this write Neville. Glow though, has a certain warmth to it. Captivating writing for sure from your prolific and varied pen.
December 19th, 2023 12:03
Glow
Goldfinch60 said:
That glow will always be with her and in your mind though Neville.
Andy
December 19th, 2023 02:27
Goldfinch60 said:
That glow will always be with her and in your mind though Neville.
Andy
December 19th, 2023 02:27
From Big Things Small
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words Neville and so true in many people, whey do they do it?
Andy
December 19th, 2023 01:31
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words Neville and so true in many people, whey do they do it?
Andy
December 19th, 2023 01:31
From Big Things Small
Accidental Poet said:
Some can\'t help themselves. Like when their head swells thinking it\'s all about them. Egotistical minds like birds flock together. Great write though N. 😉
December 18th, 2023 15:06
Accidental Poet said:
Some can\'t help themselves. Like when their head swells thinking it\'s all about them. Egotistical minds like birds flock together. Great write though N. 😉
December 18th, 2023 15:06
From Big Things Small
Cassie58 said:
Maybe some people just have too much to say? There are times when a bit of quiet is appreciated. This little piece of brevity can generate much thought and different thinking Neville. Second reading of this, I sensed a little frustration.
December 18th, 2023 15:01
Cassie58 said:
Maybe some people just have too much to say? There are times when a bit of quiet is appreciated. This little piece of brevity can generate much thought and different thinking Neville. Second reading of this, I sensed a little frustration.
December 18th, 2023 15:01
From Big Things Small
Parisab said:
‘Tired and we’ll stretched truth’ when we realize that we are past the ‘The big thongs from small’ I’m glad that you took time to write your lovely and interesting words as always and I enjoyed my time paying attention…
December 18th, 2023 11:56
Parisab said:
‘Tired and we’ll stretched truth’ when we realize that we are past the ‘The big thongs from small’ I’m glad that you took time to write your lovely and interesting words as always and I enjoyed my time paying attention…
December 18th, 2023 11:56
From Big Things Small
Christina8 said:
A wonderful write, I\'ve known people like this!
December 18th, 2023 10:16
Christina8 said:
A wonderful write, I\'ve known people like this!
December 18th, 2023 10:16
From Big Things Small
Jerry Reynolds said:
A fine write, Neville.
But it\'s so much fun.
December 18th, 2023 09:27
Jerry Reynolds said:
A fine write, Neville.
But it\'s so much fun.
December 18th, 2023 09:27
From Big Things Small
arqios said:
For some the appearance of more diminishes that shrinking feeling of nothingness and of being of no consequence.
December 18th, 2023 07:50
arqios said:
For some the appearance of more diminishes that shrinking feeling of nothingness and of being of no consequence.
December 18th, 2023 07:50
From Big Things Small
orchidee said:
Ahh, this is what KP says to me about our marriage! lol.
An \'e\'ermore\' has crept into my poem again. Do shut up Orchi, talking rot, says Fido. lol.
December 18th, 2023 05:51
orchidee said:
Ahh, this is what KP says to me about our marriage! lol.
An \'e\'ermore\' has crept into my poem again. Do shut up Orchi, talking rot, says Fido. lol.
December 18th, 2023 05:51
Shadowbright
Goldfinch60 said:
May her light always be with you Neville.
Andy
December 18th, 2023 02:53
Goldfinch60 said:
May her light always be with you Neville.
Andy
December 18th, 2023 02:53
From a Little Book of Sins
Goldfinch60 said:
So true Neville, those words we write can explain our life.
Andy
December 18th, 2023 02:51
Goldfinch60 said:
So true Neville, those words we write can explain our life.
Andy
December 18th, 2023 02:51
Suburban Sunflower
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words Neville, how big a portion of her did you get?
Andy
December 18th, 2023 02:40
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words Neville, how big a portion of her did you get?
Andy
December 18th, 2023 02:40
Shadowbright
Cassie58 said:
Anyone who can turn darkness into light by words or otherwise is worth their salt, whether dead or alive. This brevity is in the past, maybe we are recalling ghosts here Neville. The shorter the poem, the further the mind can travel. Nice.
December 17th, 2023 15:18
Cassie58 said:
Anyone who can turn darkness into light by words or otherwise is worth their salt, whether dead or alive. This brevity is in the past, maybe we are recalling ghosts here Neville. The shorter the poem, the further the mind can travel. Nice.
December 17th, 2023 15:18
Shadowbright
MendedFences27 said:
She had her way with many things, words included. A great, though short, poem of appreciation. Loved it. - Phil A.
December 17th, 2023 15:17
MendedFences27 said:
She had her way with many things, words included. A great, though short, poem of appreciation. Loved it. - Phil A.
December 17th, 2023 15:17
From a Little Book of Sins
Accidental Poet said:
Your secrets safe with me, I don\'t know about Orchi though. 🙄
December 17th, 2023 10:12
Accidental Poet said:
Your secrets safe with me, I don\'t know about Orchi though. 🙄
December 17th, 2023 10:12
Shadowbright
Accidental Poet said:
N, you\'ve been most certainly missed by all here. Your poem sounds like someone I know. 😉👍
December 17th, 2023 09:46
Accidental Poet said:
N, you\'ve been most certainly missed by all here. Your poem sounds like someone I know. 😉👍
December 17th, 2023 09:46
Shadowbright
arqios said:
A sure brightness that we take with even in uncertain tomorrows!
December 17th, 2023 09:38
arqios said:
A sure brightness that we take with even in uncertain tomorrows!
December 17th, 2023 09:38
Shadowbright
orchidee said:
I bet you know I\'m gonna say this - there\'s a hymn including \'turns my darkness into light\'. Now KP turns my light into darkness, and that\'s a fact! lol.
She\'s not a dark horse, but a dark.... you know it, trout.
How long you gonna bore us with KP jokes, asks Fido?
December 17th, 2023 05:00
orchidee said:
I bet you know I\'m gonna say this - there\'s a hymn including \'turns my darkness into light\'. Now KP turns my light into darkness, and that\'s a fact! lol.
She\'s not a dark horse, but a dark.... you know it, trout.
How long you gonna bore us with KP jokes, asks Fido?
December 17th, 2023 05:00
From a Little Book of Sins
orchidee said:
Yes, I often write of my tribulations with KP. lol.
Water melons? Will I swoon?!
December 17th, 2023 02:56
orchidee said:
Yes, I often write of my tribulations with KP. lol.
Water melons? Will I swoon?!
December 17th, 2023 02:56
From a Little Book of Sins
Cassie58 said:
Wonderful. I saw the sharp angles of the pyramid, or triangle if you prefer, after time softening and becoming rounded like a circle. This is a little gem. A bauble to hang on my Christmas tree. 💜
December 17th, 2023 00:28
Cassie58 said:
Wonderful. I saw the sharp angles of the pyramid, or triangle if you prefer, after time softening and becoming rounded like a circle. This is a little gem. A bauble to hang on my Christmas tree. 💜
December 17th, 2023 00:28
From a Little Book of Sins
arqios said:
Poetry is often a person’s “little black book.”
December 16th, 2023 19:31
arqios said:
Poetry is often a person’s “little black book.”
December 16th, 2023 19:31
From a Little Book of Sins
Doggerel Dave said:
Delicious? Not much keen on tropical fruit actually prefer cool temperate - so its still plums and cherries for me... lychees make a close second...or third depending on how you count \'em; mind how you spit the pips....
That reminds me: water melons have something.. You can do delicious circles with the pips if you know how to form the lips....well maybe not a full circle, but certainly a classic parabola ...... memories....
I shot a watermelon pip in the air,
And it fell to earth I know exactly where.............Gotcha!
December 16th, 2023 19:09
Doggerel Dave said:
Delicious? Not much keen on tropical fruit actually prefer cool temperate - so its still plums and cherries for me... lychees make a close second...or third depending on how you count \'em; mind how you spit the pips....
That reminds me: water melons have something.. You can do delicious circles with the pips if you know how to form the lips....well maybe not a full circle, but certainly a classic parabola ...... memories....
I shot a watermelon pip in the air,
And it fell to earth I know exactly where.............Gotcha!
December 16th, 2023 19:09
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