Comments received on poems by Neville



And All Before Our Awakening
Parisab said:

Neville it’s reassuring to know that you care so deeply, may you find some answers…

October 26th, 2023 19:17

And All Before Our Awakening
peto said:

Neville
I hope you find some answers
Dusk arising is always so kind when commenting
As for Fay slim
A diamond and I know how close you both are here and elsewhere
Heartfelt
Though shocked me a bit
Bit gutted if honest

October 26th, 2023 05:09

And All Before Our Awakening
orchidee said:

Good write N.

October 26th, 2023 04:47

And All Before Our Awakening
Bobby O said:

A really great tribute.

October 26th, 2023 04:16

And All Before Our Awakening
Christina8 said:

Sending out love to Fay and Dusk. they have been so missed on this site. Give them my love if you can. They would\'ve really liked the poetic nod.

October 26th, 2023 02:50

And All Before Our Awakening
Thomas W Case said:

Fantastic work. Beautiful.

October 26th, 2023 02:03

And All Before Our Awakening
Teddy.15 said:

Sending all my love to both Fay and Dusk and to you Nev, two of the most charming and kind poetic hearts who are forever missed here on site. Hoping they are both well. ❤️ ❤️ and one for you beautiful Nev. ❤️

October 26th, 2023 02:02

Conchetta - Voice of the Sea
Bobby O said:

I’d give that dude some advice. Like find a Conch? What thrills me the most is that I’m a million miles away from knowing how these thoughts possibly drift to your mind? Should I read that Timothy Leary book?

October 25th, 2023 23:59

Conchetta - Voice of the Sea
MendedFences27 said:

\"The Voice of the Sea\" has called many to her bosom, and all were thus enslaved. Life on the sea is slave labor at its very least. A sailor is but a droplet in a furious ocean.
Well-spoken and personified this poem of yours. \"She\" is what sailor\'s call the sea and all the boats upon her. Just a clever piece of imagery. - Phil A.

October 25th, 2023 15:53

Conchetta - Voice of the Sea
arqios said:

Compelling, N... what sway she has.

October 25th, 2023 03:23

Conchetta - Voice of the Sea
orchidee said:

KP did this - the clenched fist - I heard the sound of botox! Doh!

October 25th, 2023 01:46

Conchetta - Voice of the Sea
Teddy.15 said:

She can certainly persuade the most strongest of souls. Absolutely beautiful. ❤️

October 25th, 2023 01:06

Conchetta - Voice of the Sea
Thomas W Case said:

Wow. Powerful one bro.

October 25th, 2023 00:33

Conchetta - Voice of the Sea
LIZ said:

Mmmmm \"To him, and him alone\", a confession...private, intimate, pure!! Wrapped in calming, soothing sounds! 💜💜💜💜💜

October 25th, 2023 00:30

Advice on Learning to Fall
Bobby O said:

Alas , both. Prepare but never fear, and keep your wing tips shiny.

October 24th, 2023 20:10

Advice on Learning to Fall
MendedFences27 said:

Sound advice on how to break a fall and to survive a broken heart. A very clever poem. Much enjoyed. - Phil A

October 24th, 2023 11:19

Advice on Learning to Fall
LIZ said:

Welcome back!!!! You know....because I\'m a bodybuilder...the \"landing lightly\" makes a lot of sense to me. So, yes, give it your all, GO HARD, BUT, remember to pay attention to how and where you land! Loved it!!! 💜💜💜💜💜💜

October 24th, 2023 02:34

Advice on Learning to Fall
Teddy.15 said:

Ah welcome back my dear Nev, with sound advice as always. ❤️

October 24th, 2023 02:18

Advice on Learning to Fall
orchidee said:

Sounds like instructions for me as I train to become \'The Birdman!\' lol.

October 24th, 2023 01:59

That Afterwards Feeling
rhmn_7 said:

Last day of school, still remember that feeling...

October 22nd, 2023 09:11

That Afterwards Feeling
SureshG said:

For those who have not experienced That Afterwards Feeling, will positively exhale after reading these mesmerizing words.

October 19th, 2023 12:05

Accumulations
Thomas W Case said:

Love this, you bring it full circle.

October 18th, 2023 00:29

No Contest
Thomas W Case said:

I really like this.

October 17th, 2023 13:27

No Contest
Thomas W Case said:

What\'s victory anyway? Great job.

October 15th, 2023 01:09

That Afterwards Feeling
Goldfinch60 said:

That feeling of love from the past can be so strong Neville.

Andy

October 14th, 2023 01:20

Accumulations
Thomas W Case said:

I\'ve met a few. Fantastic work.

October 14th, 2023 00:49

Barely Heard Through All The Whispers
Thomas W Case said:

Excellent work.

October 14th, 2023 00:27

The Dance of Overshadowed Children
Thomas W Case said:

Powerful.

October 13th, 2023 19:53

That Afterwards Feeling
Christina8 said:

All those beautiful endorphins released to make \"that afterwards feeling\" are quite similar to what I feel now after reading your poem. Great job, N!

October 13th, 2023 07:51

That Afterwards Feeling
Pop64 said:

What a feeling to read this! It reminds me of moments, some special, some not so much, but yet welcomed, comfortable moments. Lovely read, mt friend!

October 13th, 2023 07:30



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