Comments received on poems by Neville



Not Guilty as Charged
Bobby O said:

That insertion of ugly was twisted departure from not just most , but all.
So here’s this ugly chick who on purpose lets me see her naked and then tries to leverage that?? I heard that Beyoncé song playing in my head
“You must not know about me?”

December 29th, 2023 22:21

Not Guilty as Charged
Accidental Poet said:

But you got an eye full anyways. 😲

December 29th, 2023 18:33

Not Guilty as Charged
orchidee said:

You seen that Bavarian cuckoo clock you mentioned the other day?!
I\'m talking nonsense now. lol.

December 29th, 2023 10:48

Not Guilty as Charged
Cassie58 said:

Ah, a provocative exhibitionist out to cause trouble. Her in the window stark naked. The put down is wonderful. I only hope that everyone sees her for what she is. Don’t tell me this is true? Surely not Neville?

December 29th, 2023 10:36

Not Guilty as Charged
2781 said:

We a righteous judge...

December 29th, 2023 09:09

Not Guilty as Charged
orchidee said:

Someone was stalking KP. They found him insane and talking to real trouts! lol.

December 29th, 2023 05:59

Genuine Fakes Going Dirt Cheap
Goldfinch60 said:

Most forgers of art are genuine artists in their own right but cannot get in money from their own pictures, which I believe is a shame.

Andy

December 29th, 2023 02:25

A Snog is For Life Not Just for Christmas
sorenbarrett said:

We all tolerate the intolerable when love is involved. This brings it into focus . Well done Neville

December 28th, 2023 12:50

Genuine Fakes Going Dirt Cheap
Thomas W Case said:

Brilliant work.

December 28th, 2023 12:43

Genuine Fakes Going Dirt Cheap
Cassie58 said:

I’m not an admirer of fake anything. I would rather have a print of the original than a fake of it. The painter has to make a living. I would be more inclined to pay interest if he painted in his own genuine style. You’d think that filthy rich tourists would have more savvy. I ain’t rich but I reckon I can tell the difference between an original Van Gogh and one knocked up in a couple of hours. The smell and colour of the paint would be a giveaway. Such an interesting observational poem Neville. Loved it. You are a man of great taste. I know you wouldn’t approve.

December 28th, 2023 09:14

Genuine Fakes Going Dirt Cheap
Accidental Poet said:

Well N, most filthy rich tourists wouldn\'t care if its a fake or not. From what I\'ve seen of the filthy rich, all they care about is being filthy rich and that everyone knows it. But you Sir are as genuine as they come. 😉

December 28th, 2023 08:59

Genuine Fakes Going Dirt Cheap
sorenbarrett said:

Neville this structure takes this poem a step above the subject itself. Loved it.

December 28th, 2023 08:53

Genuine Fakes Going Dirt Cheap
orchidee said:

I thought KP looked fake. I said to her \'Take off that mask dear, you look dreadful\'. Shie replied \'I have taken it off!\' lol. (I knew that really, when I asked her. heehee).

December 28th, 2023 08:05

Mirrors Don’t Care Do They Darling
Goldfinch60 said:

Mirrors only show you in reverse Neville.

Andy

December 28th, 2023 02:20

Going Against the Flow
Parisab said:

There is always true intimacy in your poetry, even when forever bonded with a being detached from our world! I also love the metaphor of the bridge, even when it was part of your true story…

December 27th, 2023 23:55

Mirrors Don’t Care Do They Darling
Accidental Poet said:

But when a mirror reflects love, it is the truth. 😊👍

December 27th, 2023 11:13

Mirrors Don’t Care Do They Darling
Cassie58 said:

I don’t look in mirrors. They tell lies :)

December 27th, 2023 08:54

Mirrors Don’t Care Do They Darling
orchidee said:

I got no mirrors left. KP looked in each one, and they all broke! heehee. She said it was because I looked in them. Doh!

December 27th, 2023 07:55

Mirrors Don’t Care Do They Darling
2781 said:

I prefer not to look.

December 27th, 2023 07:40

Don’t Suppose You Remember
Goldfinch60 said:

My memories of that time became reality and they it is still with me Neville.

Andy

December 27th, 2023 02:16

Don’t Suppose You Remember
Bobby O said:

In the parlance of happenstance a great plan is to love when it comes together.

December 26th, 2023 23:12

Don’t Suppose You Remember
Accidental Poet said:

I remember well. Nicely penned N. 😊👍

December 26th, 2023 17:57

Don’t Suppose You Remember
orchidee said:

I of course remember!😁🙄

December 26th, 2023 11:37

Don’t Suppose You Remember
Thomas W Case said:

Beautiful work.

December 26th, 2023 11:22

Don’t Suppose You Remember
2781 said:

I can\'t spell the word, but I feel I remember.

December 26th, 2023 08:38

What He Really Wants for Christmas
Cassie58 said:

Your Christmas list was a HUGE ask. I hope though that Santa was kind to you and you had a fab day.

December 26th, 2023 05:12

What He Really Wants for Christmas
Goldfinch60 said:

May you Christmas wishes come true Neville.

Merry Christmas.

Andy

December 25th, 2023 02:24

What He Really Wants for Christmas
Accidental Poet said:

And may you get every one of your wishes N. 🎅🎄

December 24th, 2023 10:36

What He Really Wants for Christmas
sorenbarrett said:

That\'s what I had on my Christmas list, how did you know? Great write Neville

December 24th, 2023 06:11

A Snog is For Life Not Just for Christmas
Cassie58 said:

All you wish for. Much joy to you and yours dear Neville 💜

December 24th, 2023 06:07



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