Comments received on poems by Neville
Haiku 4 Having Me She Said
orchidee said:
KP said Haiku - she was sneezing in a foreign language! lol. (achoo!)
January 1st, 2024 08:41
orchidee said:
KP said Haiku - she was sneezing in a foreign language! lol. (achoo!)
January 1st, 2024 08:41
Haiku 4 Having Me She Said
Cassie58 said:
There is gratitude in your title. Probably much more elsewhere as well.
Your embu should meet the approval of all those who deplore violence and suffering of any sort.
Happy New Year Neville.
January 1st, 2024 08:30
Cassie58 said:
There is gratitude in your title. Probably much more elsewhere as well.
Your embu should meet the approval of all those who deplore violence and suffering of any sort.
Happy New Year Neville.
January 1st, 2024 08:30
Well Done
orchidee said:
With that title I thought this was gonna be about you congratulating me for having spent another year (in agony) with KP! lol.
December 31st, 2023 07:45
orchidee said:
With that title I thought this was gonna be about you congratulating me for having spent another year (in agony) with KP! lol.
December 31st, 2023 07:45
Well Done
Cassie58 said:
Holidays. Cooking nicely on the balcony. Plenty of heat here, sea view, sunset and drinks. Perfect harmony I reckon. A well done poem Neville :)
December 31st, 2023 06:53
Cassie58 said:
Holidays. Cooking nicely on the balcony. Plenty of heat here, sea view, sunset and drinks. Perfect harmony I reckon. A well done poem Neville :)
December 31st, 2023 06:53
It’s Not What it Used to Be
Goldfinch60 said:
May your summer always be with you in the New Year Neville.
Andy
December 31st, 2023 02:23
Goldfinch60 said:
May your summer always be with you in the New Year Neville.
Andy
December 31st, 2023 02:23
Not Guilty as Charged
Dev Parth said:
Not Guilty as Charged\' is a clever and humorous exploration of miscommunication. The poem combines a serious theme with playful elements, using irony and a legal metaphor. The speaker\'s plea for understanding and the unexpected twist at the end make it an engaging and relatable read. Overall, it prompts reflection on the consequences of hasty judgments and the complexities of human interaction.\"
Thank you for your lovely poetry 😊😊. I enjoyed it.
December 30th, 2023 09:31
Dev Parth said:
Not Guilty as Charged\' is a clever and humorous exploration of miscommunication. The poem combines a serious theme with playful elements, using irony and a legal metaphor. The speaker\'s plea for understanding and the unexpected twist at the end make it an engaging and relatable read. Overall, it prompts reflection on the consequences of hasty judgments and the complexities of human interaction.\"
Thank you for your lovely poetry 😊😊. I enjoyed it.
December 30th, 2023 09:31
It’s Not What it Used to Be
orchidee said:
Good write N.
Egg and chips?! mmm.
December 30th, 2023 08:44
orchidee said:
Good write N.
Egg and chips?! mmm.
December 30th, 2023 08:44
It’s Not What it Used to Be
Cassie58 said:
Bloomin awful summer, apart from June. I too can remember long hot summers. That was an age ago. Six weeks summer holiday when I was at school seemed like a life time. Out in the fresh air every day. Packed lunch and off to Churchill’s swimming pool. Those were the days:) Reflecting here Neville, not moaning. And as I look out my window, more dull and more wet. Still not moaning.
December 30th, 2023 06:53
Cassie58 said:
Bloomin awful summer, apart from June. I too can remember long hot summers. That was an age ago. Six weeks summer holiday when I was at school seemed like a life time. Out in the fresh air every day. Packed lunch and off to Churchill’s swimming pool. Those were the days:) Reflecting here Neville, not moaning. And as I look out my window, more dull and more wet. Still not moaning.
December 30th, 2023 06:53
It’s Not What it Used to Be
2781 said:
Reverse climate change or selective memory?
The sun down here will fry an egg but maybe it\'s always been that way?
December 30th, 2023 04:21
2781 said:
Reverse climate change or selective memory?
The sun down here will fry an egg but maybe it\'s always been that way?
December 30th, 2023 04:21
Not Guilty as Charged
Goldfinch60 said:
At one time I was a postman for a short time and the only person that came to the door naked was a man!!
Good words Neville glad it worked out well for you, some people arr just exhibitionists and are out to cause trouble.
December 30th, 2023 02:21
Goldfinch60 said:
At one time I was a postman for a short time and the only person that came to the door naked was a man!!
Good words Neville glad it worked out well for you, some people arr just exhibitionists and are out to cause trouble.
December 30th, 2023 02:21
Not Guilty as Charged
Bobby O said:
That insertion of ugly was twisted departure from not just most , but all.
So here’s this ugly chick who on purpose lets me see her naked and then tries to leverage that?? I heard that Beyoncé song playing in my head
“You must not know about me?”
December 29th, 2023 22:21
Bobby O said:
That insertion of ugly was twisted departure from not just most , but all.
So here’s this ugly chick who on purpose lets me see her naked and then tries to leverage that?? I heard that Beyoncé song playing in my head
“You must not know about me?”
December 29th, 2023 22:21
Not Guilty as Charged
orchidee said:
You seen that Bavarian cuckoo clock you mentioned the other day?!
I\'m talking nonsense now. lol.
December 29th, 2023 10:48
orchidee said:
You seen that Bavarian cuckoo clock you mentioned the other day?!
I\'m talking nonsense now. lol.
December 29th, 2023 10:48
Not Guilty as Charged
Cassie58 said:
Ah, a provocative exhibitionist out to cause trouble. Her in the window stark naked. The put down is wonderful. I only hope that everyone sees her for what she is. Don’t tell me this is true? Surely not Neville?
December 29th, 2023 10:36
Cassie58 said:
Ah, a provocative exhibitionist out to cause trouble. Her in the window stark naked. The put down is wonderful. I only hope that everyone sees her for what she is. Don’t tell me this is true? Surely not Neville?
December 29th, 2023 10:36
Not Guilty as Charged
orchidee said:
Someone was stalking KP. They found him insane and talking to real trouts! lol.
December 29th, 2023 05:59
orchidee said:
Someone was stalking KP. They found him insane and talking to real trouts! lol.
December 29th, 2023 05:59
Genuine Fakes Going Dirt Cheap
Goldfinch60 said:
Most forgers of art are genuine artists in their own right but cannot get in money from their own pictures, which I believe is a shame.
Andy
December 29th, 2023 02:25
Goldfinch60 said:
Most forgers of art are genuine artists in their own right but cannot get in money from their own pictures, which I believe is a shame.
Andy
December 29th, 2023 02:25
A Snog is For Life Not Just for Christmas
sorenbarrett said:
We all tolerate the intolerable when love is involved. This brings it into focus . Well done Neville
December 28th, 2023 12:50
sorenbarrett said:
We all tolerate the intolerable when love is involved. This brings it into focus . Well done Neville
December 28th, 2023 12:50
Genuine Fakes Going Dirt Cheap
Cassie58 said:
I’m not an admirer of fake anything. I would rather have a print of the original than a fake of it. The painter has to make a living. I would be more inclined to pay interest if he painted in his own genuine style. You’d think that filthy rich tourists would have more savvy. I ain’t rich but I reckon I can tell the difference between an original Van Gogh and one knocked up in a couple of hours. The smell and colour of the paint would be a giveaway. Such an interesting observational poem Neville. Loved it. You are a man of great taste. I know you wouldn’t approve.
December 28th, 2023 09:14
Cassie58 said:
I’m not an admirer of fake anything. I would rather have a print of the original than a fake of it. The painter has to make a living. I would be more inclined to pay interest if he painted in his own genuine style. You’d think that filthy rich tourists would have more savvy. I ain’t rich but I reckon I can tell the difference between an original Van Gogh and one knocked up in a couple of hours. The smell and colour of the paint would be a giveaway. Such an interesting observational poem Neville. Loved it. You are a man of great taste. I know you wouldn’t approve.
December 28th, 2023 09:14
Genuine Fakes Going Dirt Cheap
sorenbarrett said:
Neville this structure takes this poem a step above the subject itself. Loved it.
December 28th, 2023 08:53
sorenbarrett said:
Neville this structure takes this poem a step above the subject itself. Loved it.
December 28th, 2023 08:53
Genuine Fakes Going Dirt Cheap
orchidee said:
I thought KP looked fake. I said to her \'Take off that mask dear, you look dreadful\'. Shie replied \'I have taken it off!\' lol. (I knew that really, when I asked her. heehee).
December 28th, 2023 08:05
orchidee said:
I thought KP looked fake. I said to her \'Take off that mask dear, you look dreadful\'. Shie replied \'I have taken it off!\' lol. (I knew that really, when I asked her. heehee).
December 28th, 2023 08:05
Mirrors Don’t Care Do They Darling
Goldfinch60 said:
Mirrors only show you in reverse Neville.
Andy
December 28th, 2023 02:20
Goldfinch60 said:
Mirrors only show you in reverse Neville.
Andy
December 28th, 2023 02:20
Going Against the Flow
Parisab said:
There is always true intimacy in your poetry, even when forever bonded with a being detached from our world! I also love the metaphor of the bridge, even when it was part of your true story…
December 27th, 2023 23:55
Parisab said:
There is always true intimacy in your poetry, even when forever bonded with a being detached from our world! I also love the metaphor of the bridge, even when it was part of your true story…
December 27th, 2023 23:55
Mirrors Don’t Care Do They Darling
Cassie58 said:
I don’t look in mirrors. They tell lies :)
December 27th, 2023 08:54
Cassie58 said:
I don’t look in mirrors. They tell lies :)
December 27th, 2023 08:54
Mirrors Don’t Care Do They Darling
orchidee said:
I got no mirrors left. KP looked in each one, and they all broke! heehee. She said it was because I looked in them. Doh!
December 27th, 2023 07:55
orchidee said:
I got no mirrors left. KP looked in each one, and they all broke! heehee. She said it was because I looked in them. Doh!
December 27th, 2023 07:55
Don’t Suppose You Remember
Goldfinch60 said:
My memories of that time became reality and they it is still with me Neville.
Andy
December 27th, 2023 02:16
Goldfinch60 said:
My memories of that time became reality and they it is still with me Neville.
Andy
December 27th, 2023 02:16
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