Comments received on poems by Neville



It’s Not What it Used to Be
orchidee said:

Good write N.
Egg and chips?! mmm.

December 30th, 2023 08:44

It’s Not What it Used to Be
Cassie58 said:

Bloomin awful summer, apart from June. I too can remember long hot summers. That was an age ago. Six weeks summer holiday when I was at school seemed like a life time. Out in the fresh air every day. Packed lunch and off to Churchill’s swimming pool. Those were the days:) Reflecting here Neville, not moaning. And as I look out my window, more dull and more wet. Still not moaning.

December 30th, 2023 06:53

It’s Not What it Used to Be
2781 said:

Reverse climate change or selective memory?
The sun down here will fry an egg but maybe it\'s always been that way?

December 30th, 2023 04:21

Not Guilty as Charged
Goldfinch60 said:

At one time I was a postman for a short time and the only person that came to the door naked was a man!!

Good words Neville glad it worked out well for you, some people arr just exhibitionists and are out to cause trouble.

December 30th, 2023 02:21

Not Guilty as Charged
Bobby O said:

That insertion of ugly was twisted departure from not just most , but all.
So here’s this ugly chick who on purpose lets me see her naked and then tries to leverage that?? I heard that Beyoncé song playing in my head
“You must not know about me?”

December 29th, 2023 22:21

Not Guilty as Charged
orchidee said:

You seen that Bavarian cuckoo clock you mentioned the other day?!
I\'m talking nonsense now. lol.

December 29th, 2023 10:48

Not Guilty as Charged
Cassie58 said:

Ah, a provocative exhibitionist out to cause trouble. Her in the window stark naked. The put down is wonderful. I only hope that everyone sees her for what she is. Don’t tell me this is true? Surely not Neville?

December 29th, 2023 10:36

Not Guilty as Charged
2781 said:

We a righteous judge...

December 29th, 2023 09:09

Not Guilty as Charged
orchidee said:

Someone was stalking KP. They found him insane and talking to real trouts! lol.

December 29th, 2023 05:59

Genuine Fakes Going Dirt Cheap
Goldfinch60 said:

Most forgers of art are genuine artists in their own right but cannot get in money from their own pictures, which I believe is a shame.

Andy

December 29th, 2023 02:25

A Snog is For Life Not Just for Christmas
sorenbarrett said:

We all tolerate the intolerable when love is involved. This brings it into focus . Well done Neville

December 28th, 2023 12:50

Genuine Fakes Going Dirt Cheap
Thomas W Case said:

Brilliant work.

December 28th, 2023 12:43

Genuine Fakes Going Dirt Cheap
Cassie58 said:

I’m not an admirer of fake anything. I would rather have a print of the original than a fake of it. The painter has to make a living. I would be more inclined to pay interest if he painted in his own genuine style. You’d think that filthy rich tourists would have more savvy. I ain’t rich but I reckon I can tell the difference between an original Van Gogh and one knocked up in a couple of hours. The smell and colour of the paint would be a giveaway. Such an interesting observational poem Neville. Loved it. You are a man of great taste. I know you wouldn’t approve.

December 28th, 2023 09:14

Genuine Fakes Going Dirt Cheap
sorenbarrett said:

Neville this structure takes this poem a step above the subject itself. Loved it.

December 28th, 2023 08:53

Genuine Fakes Going Dirt Cheap
orchidee said:

I thought KP looked fake. I said to her \'Take off that mask dear, you look dreadful\'. Shie replied \'I have taken it off!\' lol. (I knew that really, when I asked her. heehee).

December 28th, 2023 08:05

Mirrors Don’t Care Do They Darling
Goldfinch60 said:

Mirrors only show you in reverse Neville.

Andy

December 28th, 2023 02:20

Going Against the Flow
Parisab said:

There is always true intimacy in your poetry, even when forever bonded with a being detached from our world! I also love the metaphor of the bridge, even when it was part of your true story…

December 27th, 2023 23:55

Mirrors Don’t Care Do They Darling
Cassie58 said:

I don’t look in mirrors. They tell lies :)

December 27th, 2023 08:54

Mirrors Don’t Care Do They Darling
orchidee said:

I got no mirrors left. KP looked in each one, and they all broke! heehee. She said it was because I looked in them. Doh!

December 27th, 2023 07:55

Mirrors Don’t Care Do They Darling
2781 said:

I prefer not to look.

December 27th, 2023 07:40

Don’t Suppose You Remember
Goldfinch60 said:

My memories of that time became reality and they it is still with me Neville.

Andy

December 27th, 2023 02:16

Don’t Suppose You Remember
Bobby O said:

In the parlance of happenstance a great plan is to love when it comes together.

December 26th, 2023 23:12

Don’t Suppose You Remember
orchidee said:

I of course remember!😁🙄

December 26th, 2023 11:37

Don’t Suppose You Remember
Thomas W Case said:

Beautiful work.

December 26th, 2023 11:22

Don’t Suppose You Remember
2781 said:

I can\'t spell the word, but I feel I remember.

December 26th, 2023 08:38

What He Really Wants for Christmas
Cassie58 said:

Your Christmas list was a HUGE ask. I hope though that Santa was kind to you and you had a fab day.

December 26th, 2023 05:12

What He Really Wants for Christmas
Goldfinch60 said:

May you Christmas wishes come true Neville.

Merry Christmas.

Andy

December 25th, 2023 02:24

What He Really Wants for Christmas
sorenbarrett said:

That\'s what I had on my Christmas list, how did you know? Great write Neville

December 24th, 2023 06:11

A Snog is For Life Not Just for Christmas
Cassie58 said:

All you wish for. Much joy to you and yours dear Neville 💜

December 24th, 2023 06:07

What He Really Wants for Christmas
orchidee said:

A Merry one to you too!

December 24th, 2023 05:40



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