Comments received on poems by Neville
Another Perfect Day
Bella Shepard said:
Do I detect a playful smile on her lips, as she rcounts the delights of Another Perfect Day ? But then I suppose, it\'s the male way. I think you smiled as well, it was that obvious. Good write!
September 11th, 2023 12:40
Bella Shepard said:
Do I detect a playful smile on her lips, as she rcounts the delights of Another Perfect Day ? But then I suppose, it\'s the male way. I think you smiled as well, it was that obvious. Good write!
September 11th, 2023 12:40
Another Perfect Day
Doggerel Dave said:
What ? she wanted rough - was this a message to me or you? She spoilt it when she suggested there might be a crack there. Still, \"There is a crack, a crack in everything. That\'s how the light gets in.\"
Smoked Gauloises bleus but never achieved perfect smoke rings.....
September 11th, 2023 06:50
Doggerel Dave said:
What ? she wanted rough - was this a message to me or you? She spoilt it when she suggested there might be a crack there. Still, \"There is a crack, a crack in everything. That\'s how the light gets in.\"
Smoked Gauloises bleus but never achieved perfect smoke rings.....
September 11th, 2023 06:50
Another Perfect Day
L. B. Mek said:
life\'s at its most resplendent
when anchored
in our everyday hassles aside grim
cloudy clouds
see, that\'s when the efficacy
of our smoke rings
chime a Time of veracity, in our
intentions and shared
amiably mundane, undefined serenity
(just love the ambience of this poem Hyung
it puts a flavour of a sharp margarita
in our tongues)
a delightful sip, in a read
September 11th, 2023 02:56
L. B. Mek said:
life\'s at its most resplendent
when anchored
in our everyday hassles aside grim
cloudy clouds
see, that\'s when the efficacy
of our smoke rings
chime a Time of veracity, in our
intentions and shared
amiably mundane, undefined serenity
(just love the ambience of this poem Hyung
it puts a flavour of a sharp margarita
in our tongues)
a delightful sip, in a read
September 11th, 2023 02:56
With No Cage to Hold Her She Learnt How to Fly
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant! and so penetratingly acute
\'So he chose\'
indecision, as plague
of self-deceiving traits
yet if we but acknowledge
our fear, in its entirety
it grants us a semblance
of empathetic sincerity
yet we, who make
monsters of ourselves
while trying to escape
becoming the monsters
defined
by society\'s value systems
can but, pretend and hide..
8 billion people in the world
we can pick and choose
all we want
but we stick to that we hate
out of fear
this, is all there is
breaking wings of the angels
who once meant everything
to us...
what a cruel, slipper slope
trust can devolve in-to
in the hands of weak men
September 11th, 2023 02:49
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant! and so penetratingly acute
\'So he chose\'
indecision, as plague
of self-deceiving traits
yet if we but acknowledge
our fear, in its entirety
it grants us a semblance
of empathetic sincerity
yet we, who make
monsters of ourselves
while trying to escape
becoming the monsters
defined
by society\'s value systems
can but, pretend and hide..
8 billion people in the world
we can pick and choose
all we want
but we stick to that we hate
out of fear
this, is all there is
breaking wings of the angels
who once meant everything
to us...
what a cruel, slipper slope
trust can devolve in-to
in the hands of weak men
September 11th, 2023 02:49
When You Know You Are Blessed
L. B. Mek said:
\'And
when you
look in your
new
grandchild’s
eyes
and she smiles ..\'
!Brilliant!
(oh and
what a show stopper
of a smile...!)
September 11th, 2023 02:38
L. B. Mek said:
\'And
when you
look in your
new
grandchild’s
eyes
and she smiles ..\'
!Brilliant!
(oh and
what a show stopper
of a smile...!)
September 11th, 2023 02:38
Another Perfect Day
LIZ said:
Sounds delightful!! Don\'t spoil it! 😉Perfect indeed! 💜
September 11th, 2023 02:36
LIZ said:
Sounds delightful!! Don\'t spoil it! 😉Perfect indeed! 💜
September 11th, 2023 02:36
Another Perfect Day
orchidee said:
Good write N.
Not them figs again - oohh, I can\'t have figs myself. lol.
Can ya beat a gauloise thingy?!
September 11th, 2023 02:07
orchidee said:
Good write N.
Not them figs again - oohh, I can\'t have figs myself. lol.
Can ya beat a gauloise thingy?!
September 11th, 2023 02:07
With No Cage to Hold Her She Learnt How to Fly
Doggerel Dave said:
It is said (I said? - Nah) It is said - If yer can\'t make it, don\'t break it.....
September 10th, 2023 06:34
Doggerel Dave said:
It is said (I said? - Nah) It is said - If yer can\'t make it, don\'t break it.....
September 10th, 2023 06:34
With No Cage to Hold Her She Learnt How to Fly
LIZ said:
Just the title alone has my mind running. Because...that\'s the only way....freedom! 💜
September 10th, 2023 03:24
LIZ said:
Just the title alone has my mind running. Because...that\'s the only way....freedom! 💜
September 10th, 2023 03:24
With No Cage to Hold Her She Learnt How to Fly
orchidee said:
KP\'s taking up a new hobby - aiming to be \'The Birdwoman\'! heehee.
September 10th, 2023 02:24
orchidee said:
KP\'s taking up a new hobby - aiming to be \'The Birdwoman\'! heehee.
September 10th, 2023 02:24
With No Cage to Hold Her She Learnt How to Fly
Bobby O said:
Nice message.
September 10th, 2023 02:14
Bobby O said:
Nice message.
September 10th, 2023 02:14
When You Know You Are Blessed
Goldfinch60 said:
That smile form youngsters is so very special Neville.
Andy
September 10th, 2023 02:02
Goldfinch60 said:
That smile form youngsters is so very special Neville.
Andy
September 10th, 2023 02:02
When You Know You Are Blessed
MendedFences27 said:
Nothing can steal your heart away like the eyes of your granddaughter. She will rule your life if you let her. Your poem makes this ever so possible. The truth is as you conclude that you are \"blessed.\" What will you do if she shows signs of becoming a poetess? This rang true for me. - Phil A.
September 9th, 2023 21:30
MendedFences27 said:
Nothing can steal your heart away like the eyes of your granddaughter. She will rule your life if you let her. Your poem makes this ever so possible. The truth is as you conclude that you are \"blessed.\" What will you do if she shows signs of becoming a poetess? This rang true for me. - Phil A.
September 9th, 2023 21:30
When You Know You Are Blessed
Bella Shepard said:
So often it\'s the smallest things that mean so much, and for which you are truly grateful. At the end of the day, when you count your blessings, you realize how wonderful your life is. Beautifully, and thoughtfully written dear Nev!
September 9th, 2023 15:00
Bella Shepard said:
So often it\'s the smallest things that mean so much, and for which you are truly grateful. At the end of the day, when you count your blessings, you realize how wonderful your life is. Beautifully, and thoughtfully written dear Nev!
September 9th, 2023 15:00
When You Know You Are Blessed
orchidee said:
Good write N.
Now my poem \'Life with KP\' subtitled \'When you know you\'re not blessed!\' lol.
September 9th, 2023 09:10
orchidee said:
Good write N.
Now my poem \'Life with KP\' subtitled \'When you know you\'re not blessed!\' lol.
September 9th, 2023 09:10
When You Know You Are Blessed
Doggerel Dave said:
Grandad role suits you.....but I hope it doesn\'t become (don\'t think it will) all of you...
September 9th, 2023 07:51
Doggerel Dave said:
Grandad role suits you.....but I hope it doesn\'t become (don\'t think it will) all of you...
September 9th, 2023 07:51
When You Know You Are Blessed
Bobby O said:
When it’s your day then rejoice be it blessed or luck or mathematical inevitability. Cuz those other days when dog bites and the bees sting and lightning hits like a Lou Christie song, well those days might also occur. That warm outside toilet might not be thoughts I’d think about though?
September 9th, 2023 06:44
Bobby O said:
When it’s your day then rejoice be it blessed or luck or mathematical inevitability. Cuz those other days when dog bites and the bees sting and lightning hits like a Lou Christie song, well those days might also occur. That warm outside toilet might not be thoughts I’d think about though?
September 9th, 2023 06:44
When You Know You Are Blessed
LIZ said:
Awwwwww Neville! I love it!! I smiled big at this! Enjoy! 💜
September 9th, 2023 03:49
LIZ said:
Awwwwww Neville! I love it!! I smiled big at this! Enjoy! 💜
September 9th, 2023 03:49
When You Know You Are Blessed
Neville said:
I am just off out to pick her up in the car .. christening the new kiddies car seat .. and the suns shining .. Salut 🍷🍷
September 9th, 2023 02:54
Neville said:
I am just off out to pick her up in the car .. christening the new kiddies car seat .. and the suns shining .. Salut 🍷🍷
September 9th, 2023 02:54
When You Know You Are Blessed
Teddy.15 said:
Blessed you are dear Nev. Enjoy her every single day and never forget how quickly these beautiful children grow up. 💖
September 9th, 2023 02:48
Teddy.15 said:
Blessed you are dear Nev. Enjoy her every single day and never forget how quickly these beautiful children grow up. 💖
September 9th, 2023 02:48
Miss. Esme G. Cameron
Doggerel Dave said:
Neville – I am in trouble here.. I need some guidance. I’ve tried to locate Esme’s magnum opus.
This I remember with absolute clarity – Her discovery, insight into the creation of the universe, nay multiverses while perched on the throne in the smallest room in the house, knickers absent from her ankles as she eschewed such a garment. Perfectly rounded material exploded from her haunches in quantity followed by an incredible fart which represented the dark matter yet to be fully accounted for…..
Any advice would be gratefully received.
September 8th, 2023 22:04
Doggerel Dave said:
Neville – I am in trouble here.. I need some guidance. I’ve tried to locate Esme’s magnum opus.
This I remember with absolute clarity – Her discovery, insight into the creation of the universe, nay multiverses while perched on the throne in the smallest room in the house, knickers absent from her ankles as she eschewed such a garment. Perfectly rounded material exploded from her haunches in quantity followed by an incredible fart which represented the dark matter yet to be fully accounted for…..
Any advice would be gratefully received.
September 8th, 2023 22:04
That Certain Something
Bella Shepard said:
Emotion flows freely and beautifully in this tribute to a beloved friend. Such a lovely write for I\'m sure a lovely man.
September 8th, 2023 14:45
Bella Shepard said:
Emotion flows freely and beautifully in this tribute to a beloved friend. Such a lovely write for I\'m sure a lovely man.
September 8th, 2023 14:45
That Certain Something
Pop64 said:
That certain something is something some are never lucky enough to have or experience. Quite a read.
September 8th, 2023 13:39
Pop64 said:
That certain something is something some are never lucky enough to have or experience. Quite a read.
September 8th, 2023 13:39
That Certain Something
Christina8 said:
This reflective piece took a romantic turn....Loved this!
September 8th, 2023 13:11
Christina8 said:
This reflective piece took a romantic turn....Loved this!
September 8th, 2023 13:11
That Certain Something
MendedFences27 said:
Don\'t know who, but was a great man from your description, and these are great words you\'ve penned in his honor. A great ode. - Phil A.
September 8th, 2023 11:20
MendedFences27 said:
Don\'t know who, but was a great man from your description, and these are great words you\'ve penned in his honor. A great ode. - Phil A.
September 8th, 2023 11:20
That Certain Something
LIZ said:
More intense Neville! Because, now, you know how rare it is, and can appreciate it more! So, yes, it\'s possible! That certain something.... I wonder, who he is. Enlighten me! 💜
September 8th, 2023 06:44
LIZ said:
More intense Neville! Because, now, you know how rare it is, and can appreciate it more! So, yes, it\'s possible! That certain something.... I wonder, who he is. Enlighten me! 💜
September 8th, 2023 06:44
That Certain Something
L. B. Mek said:
not sure if this is an elegy, but
you have me feeling
for a person I know nothing about
only, that he meant
something, to someone I care about
and sometimes, that\'s enough..
(such an aching mournful tone
to your words, Hyung)
September 8th, 2023 06:03
L. B. Mek said:
not sure if this is an elegy, but
you have me feeling
for a person I know nothing about
only, that he meant
something, to someone I care about
and sometimes, that\'s enough..
(such an aching mournful tone
to your words, Hyung)
September 8th, 2023 06:03
That Certain Something
Teddy.15 said:
Beautiful Neville, I enjoyed this stroll through reflection very much. 💖
September 8th, 2023 05:57
Teddy.15 said:
Beautiful Neville, I enjoyed this stroll through reflection very much. 💖
September 8th, 2023 05:57
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