Comments received on poems by Neville
Upon Leaving One’s Shadow Behind
Teddy.15 said:
Sometimes we can certainly be our own worst enemy. Beautiful and reading it 3 times gives even more power. 🩷
November 9th, 2023 02:47
Teddy.15 said:
Sometimes we can certainly be our own worst enemy. Beautiful and reading it 3 times gives even more power. 🩷
November 9th, 2023 02:47
Upon Leaving One’s Shadow Behind
orchidee said:
Good write N.
KP\'s my shadow - haunts me - my ball and chain! lol.
November 9th, 2023 02:27
orchidee said:
Good write N.
KP\'s my shadow - haunts me - my ball and chain! lol.
November 9th, 2023 02:27
Behold All My Literary Demons
Goldfinch60 said:
So true Neville, mine will be there as well, but not yet!
Andy
November 9th, 2023 02:12
Goldfinch60 said:
So true Neville, mine will be there as well, but not yet!
Andy
November 9th, 2023 02:12
Behold All My Literary Demons
Thomas W Case said:
Excellent work. I really enjoyed this.
November 8th, 2023 20:56
Thomas W Case said:
Excellent work. I really enjoyed this.
November 8th, 2023 20:56
Behold All My Literary Demons
Bella Shepard said:
True confessions, eh? I love your literary demons; a legacy of sauciness, sensuousness, naughtiness, but also of compassion, empathy, love and deep understanding. It\'s the whole package that is wonderful you! Oh, and this is a very good write!
November 8th, 2023 15:49
Bella Shepard said:
True confessions, eh? I love your literary demons; a legacy of sauciness, sensuousness, naughtiness, but also of compassion, empathy, love and deep understanding. It\'s the whole package that is wonderful you! Oh, and this is a very good write!
November 8th, 2023 15:49
Behold All My Literary Demons
LIZ said:
That\'s right!!!! Ummm \"I am not just
typing out words metaphorically\".......you better recognize!!!!! 💜💜💜💜
November 8th, 2023 13:50
LIZ said:
That\'s right!!!! Ummm \"I am not just
typing out words metaphorically\".......you better recognize!!!!! 💜💜💜💜
November 8th, 2023 13:50
Behold All My Literary Demons
Teddy.15 said:
LOL be sure to back it all up my dear Nev. 🤗
November 8th, 2023 03:01
Teddy.15 said:
LOL be sure to back it all up my dear Nev. 🤗
November 8th, 2023 03:01
Behold All My Literary Demons
orchidee said:
A fine write N.
Dreams of KP remain to haunt me in my hutch! lol.🐇🐀🦖
November 8th, 2023 02:39
orchidee said:
A fine write N.
Dreams of KP remain to haunt me in my hutch! lol.🐇🐀🦖
November 8th, 2023 02:39
When the Balance Wheel is Broken
dtrusss said:
I\'ve been saying this to most today, but I\'ll say it again. Go out and get some sunshine right now or when it shines again. You are a wonderful expressive. Thanks for your sharing.
November 7th, 2023 17:20
dtrusss said:
I\'ve been saying this to most today, but I\'ll say it again. Go out and get some sunshine right now or when it shines again. You are a wonderful expressive. Thanks for your sharing.
November 7th, 2023 17:20
When the Balance Wheel is Broken
MendedFences27 said:
Hope you\'re OK. Ignore my last comments to you. They were in jest.
Maybe you\'ve got tech problems. I get them from time to time. Your words are always \"first class.\"
A few years ago, I lost my computer to a massive failure and consequently, lost a few years\' worth of work. Hope get back to normal soon. - Phil A.
November 7th, 2023 12:49
MendedFences27 said:
Hope you\'re OK. Ignore my last comments to you. They were in jest.
Maybe you\'ve got tech problems. I get them from time to time. Your words are always \"first class.\"
A few years ago, I lost my computer to a massive failure and consequently, lost a few years\' worth of work. Hope get back to normal soon. - Phil A.
November 7th, 2023 12:49
When the Balance Wheel is Broken
Christina8 said:
never a good thing to feel off kilter. This has a very sad tone to it. May there be no final goodbyes....
November 7th, 2023 08:38
Christina8 said:
never a good thing to feel off kilter. This has a very sad tone to it. May there be no final goodbyes....
November 7th, 2023 08:38
View Before Lunch
Sunsetmet said:
Yes all the things I remember calling us in to eat so many fond memories lovely
November 7th, 2023 07:20
Sunsetmet said:
Yes all the things I remember calling us in to eat so many fond memories lovely
November 7th, 2023 07:20
When the Balance Wheel is Broken
orchidee said:
I\'m always here for ya too - but I may be a fat lot of help! Doh!
November 7th, 2023 05:02
orchidee said:
I\'m always here for ya too - but I may be a fat lot of help! Doh!
November 7th, 2023 05:02
When the Balance Wheel is Broken
LIZ said:
If it makes you feel better, you\'re not alone!!! 💜💜💜💜💜💜
November 7th, 2023 04:33
LIZ said:
If it makes you feel better, you\'re not alone!!! 💜💜💜💜💜💜
November 7th, 2023 04:33
When the Balance Wheel is Broken
Bobby O said:
I love the phrasing and how the message spins but am personally a bit fearful or ambivalent about all that content and meaning potentially within.
November 7th, 2023 04:28
Bobby O said:
I love the phrasing and how the message spins but am personally a bit fearful or ambivalent about all that content and meaning potentially within.
November 7th, 2023 04:28
When the Balance Wheel is Broken
orchidee said:
Good wishes N.
Meanwhile - that\'ll cost ya - sending more first class letters!
November 7th, 2023 03:01
orchidee said:
Good wishes N.
Meanwhile - that\'ll cost ya - sending more first class letters!
November 7th, 2023 03:01
When the Balance Wheel is Broken
Goldfinch60 said:
I am always here for you Neville.
Andy
November 7th, 2023 02:51
Goldfinch60 said:
I am always here for you Neville.
Andy
November 7th, 2023 02:51
When the Balance Wheel is Broken
arqios said:
Always good to there be that place, that home to go back to when things go awry. Being off kilter is personally for me a killer. Hope the situation has changed for the better since this writing and posting.
November 7th, 2023 02:40
arqios said:
Always good to there be that place, that home to go back to when things go awry. Being off kilter is personally for me a killer. Hope the situation has changed for the better since this writing and posting.
November 7th, 2023 02:40
View Before Lunch
Goldfinch60 said:
Maybe \'those were the days\" Neville. Such strange days can be with us now so always look on the good side of life and enjoy your lunch.
I\'ll meet you in the pub for lunch and a pint soon.
Andy
November 7th, 2023 02:20
Goldfinch60 said:
Maybe \'those were the days\" Neville. Such strange days can be with us now so always look on the good side of life and enjoy your lunch.
I\'ll meet you in the pub for lunch and a pint soon.
Andy
November 7th, 2023 02:20
View Before Lunch
Bella Shepard said:
I might think I see someone reminiscing, but I could be wrong. If it is, it\'s beautiful. And if it isn\'t, it\'s still beautiful.
November 6th, 2023 17:23
Bella Shepard said:
I might think I see someone reminiscing, but I could be wrong. If it is, it\'s beautiful. And if it isn\'t, it\'s still beautiful.
November 6th, 2023 17:23
View Before Lunch
MendedFences27 said:
This morning I saw a man feeding Seagulls from out of his hand. Thought that to be a bit risky. 10-15 flying above his head and as he raised his hand one would swoop in to take the morsel.
Great poem of observation. I believe you\'ve coined a new word \"tai chiing.\" - Phil A.
November 6th, 2023 14:16
MendedFences27 said:
This morning I saw a man feeding Seagulls from out of his hand. Thought that to be a bit risky. 10-15 flying above his head and as he raised his hand one would swoop in to take the morsel.
Great poem of observation. I believe you\'ve coined a new word \"tai chiing.\" - Phil A.
November 6th, 2023 14:16
Floating Down On a Whisper
Dove said:
Love the Title, very inspiring… “Floating Down on a Whisper”
In dreams I sail upon a whisper’s breath
A tender Breeze that carries me afar
My sprit soars , unburdened by the earth,
To realms unknown, where wonders truly are
With gentle grace , I drift upon its tide
Through ethereal mists, a tranquil flight
Embracing silence, I let go of my pride
And lose myself in this celestial light
Best to you… ❤️❤️❤️
November 6th, 2023 13:05
Dove said:
Love the Title, very inspiring… “Floating Down on a Whisper”
In dreams I sail upon a whisper’s breath
A tender Breeze that carries me afar
My sprit soars , unburdened by the earth,
To realms unknown, where wonders truly are
With gentle grace , I drift upon its tide
Through ethereal mists, a tranquil flight
Embracing silence, I let go of my pride
And lose myself in this celestial light
Best to you… ❤️❤️❤️
November 6th, 2023 13:05
Somewhere Beyond Our Goodbyes
Dove said:
Heartfelt Write Dear, parting is so sad, but an embrace so sweet. Enjoy the moments while they are here.
November 6th, 2023 12:55
Dove said:
Heartfelt Write Dear, parting is so sad, but an embrace so sweet. Enjoy the moments while they are here.
November 6th, 2023 12:55
View Before Lunch
LIZ said:
Better make it home on time!!! Asking for a friend huh 🫢 I see you!! 👀 💜💜💜
November 6th, 2023 06:59
LIZ said:
Better make it home on time!!! Asking for a friend huh 🫢 I see you!! 👀 💜💜💜
November 6th, 2023 06:59
View Before Lunch
orchidee said:
I had a view before supper but it put me off food for a month - KP ready for bed, with her curlers in! lol.
November 6th, 2023 04:57
orchidee said:
I had a view before supper but it put me off food for a month - KP ready for bed, with her curlers in! lol.
November 6th, 2023 04:57
View Before Lunch
Teddy.15 said:
Gorgeous Nev. And don\'t be late home for your Yorkshire puddings ❤️
November 6th, 2023 03:43
Teddy.15 said:
Gorgeous Nev. And don\'t be late home for your Yorkshire puddings ❤️
November 6th, 2023 03:43
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