Comments received on poems by Neville
At The End of The Line
orchidee said:
Those ... dots imply more words to come.
At the end of the line I get off the train. Doh! But I buy KP a one-way ticket to Australia. lol.
February 6th, 2024 03:18
orchidee said:
Those ... dots imply more words to come.
At the end of the line I get off the train. Doh! But I buy KP a one-way ticket to Australia. lol.
February 6th, 2024 03:18
At The End of The Line
Teddy.15 said:
Hopefully some fond memories for who we spent our time with. ❤️
February 6th, 2024 03:15
Teddy.15 said:
Hopefully some fond memories for who we spent our time with. ❤️
February 6th, 2024 03:15
Spillage
Goldfinch60 said:
Those moistened lips are obviously ready to quench your thirst Neville - and my it ever be so.
Andy
February 6th, 2024 02:36
Goldfinch60 said:
Those moistened lips are obviously ready to quench your thirst Neville - and my it ever be so.
Andy
February 6th, 2024 02:36
Spillage
Bella Shepard said:
Wow! I\'d say the imagery is explosive, I sincerely hope that everything came out all right. Cheekily delightful you naughty boy!
February 5th, 2024 15:51
Bella Shepard said:
Wow! I\'d say the imagery is explosive, I sincerely hope that everything came out all right. Cheekily delightful you naughty boy!
February 5th, 2024 15:51
Famine
Garth Rakumakoe said:
When famine walks the land. Brought to life so vividly, by your pen sir. A moving piece.
February 5th, 2024 08:32
Garth Rakumakoe said:
When famine walks the land. Brought to life so vividly, by your pen sir. A moving piece.
February 5th, 2024 08:32
Spillage
Doggerel Dave said:
Difficult to determine precisely just what is the situation here..............😇!!!
February 5th, 2024 06:32
Doggerel Dave said:
Difficult to determine precisely just what is the situation here..............😇!!!
February 5th, 2024 06:32
Spillage
Teddy.15 said:
Sounds like some one\'s Damn is about to burst. Such emotion. ❤️
February 5th, 2024 05:47
Teddy.15 said:
Sounds like some one\'s Damn is about to burst. Such emotion. ❤️
February 5th, 2024 05:47
Famine
Goldfinch60 said:
So true Neville, no calories in memories.
Now where is my sausage egg and bacon breakfast!
Andy
February 5th, 2024 02:25
Goldfinch60 said:
So true Neville, no calories in memories.
Now where is my sausage egg and bacon breakfast!
Andy
February 5th, 2024 02:25
Once When She Tasted of Apples
Christina8 said:
I read a lot of passion into this beautifully crafted poem.
February 4th, 2024 16:12
Christina8 said:
I read a lot of passion into this beautifully crafted poem.
February 4th, 2024 16:12
Just a Few Odd Diary Notes
Dove said:
Oh run, and run, but you can never escape the sea!
🎶🎶🎶🎶 Perhaps she\'s just a mermaid.
February 4th, 2024 15:41
Dove said:
Oh run, and run, but you can never escape the sea!
🎶🎶🎶🎶 Perhaps she\'s just a mermaid.
February 4th, 2024 15:41
Once When She Tasted of Apples
Dove said:
An Apple delicious and sweet, crisp with fond memories. How divine🍊🍋🍎🍎🍎
February 4th, 2024 15:38
Dove said:
An Apple delicious and sweet, crisp with fond memories. How divine🍊🍋🍎🍎🍎
February 4th, 2024 15:38
Famine
Dove said:
\"Memories never get fat\" How sweet to know that they never go to the waist, but never get wasted. Sorry, time passes quickly. Nice to read you again Dear.
February 4th, 2024 15:36
Dove said:
\"Memories never get fat\" How sweet to know that they never go to the waist, but never get wasted. Sorry, time passes quickly. Nice to read you again Dear.
February 4th, 2024 15:36
Famine
orchidee said:
A fine write N. KP\'s not fat, but she\'s a bloated trout. lol.
February 4th, 2024 10:54
orchidee said:
A fine write N. KP\'s not fat, but she\'s a bloated trout. lol.
February 4th, 2024 10:54
Famine
Dayena said:
your words delicately captures the essence of longing and memory. just awesome..
February 4th, 2024 10:30
Dayena said:
your words delicately captures the essence of longing and memory. just awesome..
February 4th, 2024 10:30
Famine
Teddy.15 said:
Worth reading multiple times dear Nev, I\'m still trying to get my head around it it\'s so powerful. 🤗
February 4th, 2024 07:26
Teddy.15 said:
Worth reading multiple times dear Nev, I\'m still trying to get my head around it it\'s so powerful. 🤗
February 4th, 2024 07:26
Once When She Tasted of Apples
orchidee said:
The only juice from KP is bitter lemon juice. It\'s my fault - I make her bitter by slagging her off every day. lol.
I might swoon if I look for too many meanings in this.
February 4th, 2024 03:15
orchidee said:
The only juice from KP is bitter lemon juice. It\'s my fault - I make her bitter by slagging her off every day. lol.
I might swoon if I look for too many meanings in this.
February 4th, 2024 03:15
Once When She Tasted of Apples
Goldfinch60 said:
May that juice run down your lips once more Neville.
Andy
February 4th, 2024 02:24
Goldfinch60 said:
May that juice run down your lips once more Neville.
Andy
February 4th, 2024 02:24
Once When She Tasted of Apples
Thomas W Case said:
Very hot work, thirsty for some cider.
February 3rd, 2024 21:37
Thomas W Case said:
Very hot work, thirsty for some cider.
February 3rd, 2024 21:37
The Gagging of Gaza
Doggerel Dave said:
Neville - I\'m not sure you are OK. Just a feeling.....
February 3rd, 2024 16:47
Doggerel Dave said:
Neville - I\'m not sure you are OK. Just a feeling.....
February 3rd, 2024 16:47
Once When She Tasted of Apples
2781 said:
I said, I will go up to the palm tree,I will take hold of the boughs thereof: now also thy breasts shall be like clusters on the vine, and the smell of thy nose like apples;
February 3rd, 2024 15:51
2781 said:
I said, I will go up to the palm tree,I will take hold of the boughs thereof: now also thy breasts shall be like clusters on the vine, and the smell of thy nose like apples;
February 3rd, 2024 15:51
The Gagging of Gaza
Parisab said:
Seems like the lives you pictured are victims who are in disbelief of their own demise-the denial of these atrocities will haunt us with trauma for generations to come-thank you for using your sensitive and honest pen, Neville
February 2nd, 2024 20:58
Parisab said:
Seems like the lives you pictured are victims who are in disbelief of their own demise-the denial of these atrocities will haunt us with trauma for generations to come-thank you for using your sensitive and honest pen, Neville
February 2nd, 2024 20:58
The Gagging of Gaza
Doggerel Dave said:
There\'s nothing I can add to the last three entries above, ignoring for the moment the penultimate usual diversion....
History from forever seems to be the mechanism which generates the ongoing conflict and characterises humankind\'s warlike behaviour.
Your piece is spot on as it defines this point in time.
Please give it wider circulation, Neville.
February 2nd, 2024 16:38
Doggerel Dave said:
There\'s nothing I can add to the last three entries above, ignoring for the moment the penultimate usual diversion....
History from forever seems to be the mechanism which generates the ongoing conflict and characterises humankind\'s warlike behaviour.
Your piece is spot on as it defines this point in time.
Please give it wider circulation, Neville.
February 2nd, 2024 16:38
The Gagging of Gaza
Bella Shepard said:
Your poem poses the question, is a strip of land more valuable than human life? Sadly, the answer is yes? This fight, over a strip of land, has been going on for 75 years, I should think the land is exhausted with the wars, and just wants peace. It\'s a pity that this strip of land cannot speak, for if it could I think it would welcome all. Brilliantly written my friend, you capture the senseless of continued conflict and wars, when all they accomplish is devestation.
February 2nd, 2024 16:05
Bella Shepard said:
Your poem poses the question, is a strip of land more valuable than human life? Sadly, the answer is yes? This fight, over a strip of land, has been going on for 75 years, I should think the land is exhausted with the wars, and just wants peace. It\'s a pity that this strip of land cannot speak, for if it could I think it would welcome all. Brilliantly written my friend, you capture the senseless of continued conflict and wars, when all they accomplish is devestation.
February 2nd, 2024 16:05
The Gagging of Gaza
orchidee said:
A sensitive write N.
Meanwhile - some garotting going on between KP and I?! That\'s going too far, you naughty guinea pig, says Fido.
February 2nd, 2024 12:30
orchidee said:
A sensitive write N.
Meanwhile - some garotting going on between KP and I?! That\'s going too far, you naughty guinea pig, says Fido.
February 2nd, 2024 12:30
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