Comments received on poems by Neville
That Last Time Look
arqios said:
To name valuable things after someone, that sure is fine!
November 29th, 2022 04:23
arqios said:
To name valuable things after someone, that sure is fine!
November 29th, 2022 04:23
That Last Time Look
Fay Slimm. said:
Ah -is it a boat or a woman I wonder -- the sadness of love\'s final adieu intrigues yet again mon ami. This glimpse of endings only your pen can poem so very enthrallingly...........x
November 29th, 2022 03:36
Fay Slimm. said:
Ah -is it a boat or a woman I wonder -- the sadness of love\'s final adieu intrigues yet again mon ami. This glimpse of endings only your pen can poem so very enthrallingly...........x
November 29th, 2022 03:36
That Last Time Look
Doggerel Dave said:
The distance, the the resultant emptiness (will it ever be filled again?)
Not particularly worried if I got this wrong, Nev. I found plenty to cogitate over.
November 29th, 2022 03:13
Doggerel Dave said:
The distance, the the resultant emptiness (will it ever be filled again?)
Not particularly worried if I got this wrong, Nev. I found plenty to cogitate over.
November 29th, 2022 03:13
That Last Time Look
orchidee said:
It shore is a good write - spelling mistake intended in this comment. lol.
November 29th, 2022 02:45
orchidee said:
It shore is a good write - spelling mistake intended in this comment. lol.
November 29th, 2022 02:45
Just Another Zen Thing
SureshG said:
We are so enraptured by the part we are, that the whole completely alludes us. But that aside, your words are composition for meditation
November 28th, 2022 17:00
SureshG said:
We are so enraptured by the part we are, that the whole completely alludes us. But that aside, your words are composition for meditation
November 28th, 2022 17:00
Just Another Zen Thing
Bella Shepard said:
The zen of life meets the enigma of existence in two 3 line stanzas. Short and sweet, and has my head reeling. Things that confound me a lot more these days, you have very simply put into words. Extraordinary write dear Nev!
November 28th, 2022 12:18
Bella Shepard said:
The zen of life meets the enigma of existence in two 3 line stanzas. Short and sweet, and has my head reeling. Things that confound me a lot more these days, you have very simply put into words. Extraordinary write dear Nev!
November 28th, 2022 12:18
Just Another Zen Thing
sorenbarrett said:
A great analogy and wonderful poem put very succinctly and words as smooth as honey.
November 28th, 2022 06:23
sorenbarrett said:
A great analogy and wonderful poem put very succinctly and words as smooth as honey.
November 28th, 2022 06:23
Just Another Zen Thing
L. B. Mek said:
thew words, express
why, at times
during a meditative state
we feel like, we\'re being pulled apart
torn both that sincerity in our now
and that all-consuming chaos
awaiting, a blink or two away
this is why the yin and yang, states
remain constant
never one or the other in sole authority
like regret and hope, co-existing
in one momentous yet insiginficant
moment...
(another subtle gem, dear Poet
imagery smacks us in the face
but its brevity is so hidden
ever-so subtly
most will read, fish their Cod\'s of poetic delight
never realising, those more rewarding eels and vendace, depths
that await, those who linger
over these seawater words
and contemplate...)
November 28th, 2022 04:44
L. B. Mek said:
thew words, express
why, at times
during a meditative state
we feel like, we\'re being pulled apart
torn both that sincerity in our now
and that all-consuming chaos
awaiting, a blink or two away
this is why the yin and yang, states
remain constant
never one or the other in sole authority
like regret and hope, co-existing
in one momentous yet insiginficant
moment...
(another subtle gem, dear Poet
imagery smacks us in the face
but its brevity is so hidden
ever-so subtly
most will read, fish their Cod\'s of poetic delight
never realising, those more rewarding eels and vendace, depths
that await, those who linger
over these seawater words
and contemplate...)
November 28th, 2022 04:44
Song for Gene Malloy
L. B. Mek said:
this is inked, testament
to why only those truly invested
should ever pen, tributes
simply mesmeric in flow
melodious, in poetic eloquence
a great read!
thank you, Hyung
November 28th, 2022 04:33
L. B. Mek said:
this is inked, testament
to why only those truly invested
should ever pen, tributes
simply mesmeric in flow
melodious, in poetic eloquence
a great read!
thank you, Hyung
November 28th, 2022 04:33
Just Another Zen Thing
Doggerel Dave said:
Orchi conducted a preemptive strike and pinched my corny one liner, Nev...so...
Superficial as my knowledge of Zen is (very), I cannot help but feel those Zen Masters might find a fresh....
And the last three lines - I marvel sometimes at the way ordinary words attached to one another confirm that indeed \'the whole is greater than the sum of its parts\'.
November 27th, 2022 16:10
Doggerel Dave said:
Orchi conducted a preemptive strike and pinched my corny one liner, Nev...so...
Superficial as my knowledge of Zen is (very), I cannot help but feel those Zen Masters might find a fresh....
And the last three lines - I marvel sometimes at the way ordinary words attached to one another confirm that indeed \'the whole is greater than the sum of its parts\'.
November 27th, 2022 16:10
Just Another Zen Thing
orchidee said:
A good write zen (then) there N. Corny jokes time from me!
November 27th, 2022 11:21
orchidee said:
A good write zen (then) there N. Corny jokes time from me!
November 27th, 2022 11:21
Just Another Zen Thing
Fay Slimm. said:
You describe the after-effects of making two into one most invitingly mi amigo - - love those stolen moments of honey-gold fragments as pulse slows to. norm. -- -- great stuff........ x
November 27th, 2022 10:09
Fay Slimm. said:
You describe the after-effects of making two into one most invitingly mi amigo - - love those stolen moments of honey-gold fragments as pulse slows to. norm. -- -- great stuff........ x
November 27th, 2022 10:09
Song for Gene Malloy
Doggerel Dave said:
Dear Sir, (I do this all the time to big companies and Govt depts - are you either?)
I am unhappy with the quality of your product. I feel more instruction should be provided.
What was a futile search of both Google and Utube yielded no relevant results for Gene Malloy….and so on…
Regards,
November 26th, 2022 21:01
Doggerel Dave said:
Dear Sir, (I do this all the time to big companies and Govt depts - are you either?)
I am unhappy with the quality of your product. I feel more instruction should be provided.
What was a futile search of both Google and Utube yielded no relevant results for Gene Malloy….and so on…
Regards,
November 26th, 2022 21:01
Song for Gene Malloy
Fay Slimm. said:
A tribute that introduces so well a poet who is new to me Nev. -your prose is first rate and leaves fans and readers like me always wanting a bit more..........x
November 26th, 2022 12:40
Fay Slimm. said:
A tribute that introduces so well a poet who is new to me Nev. -your prose is first rate and leaves fans and readers like me always wanting a bit more..........x
November 26th, 2022 12:40
Song for Gene Malloy
orchidee said:
A comment here from Gene, erm, Orchi - good write N! lol.
November 26th, 2022 11:37
orchidee said:
A comment here from Gene, erm, Orchi - good write N! lol.
November 26th, 2022 11:37
Song for Gene Malloy
arqios said:
Very inviting and very comforting in a way. Makes one want to read his words and verse.
November 26th, 2022 09:10
arqios said:
Very inviting and very comforting in a way. Makes one want to read his words and verse.
November 26th, 2022 09:10
Gladding
Goldfinch60 said:
I can remember many years ago when I was sitting in my local when one of my friends came in with a conger that he had caught.
Andy
November 26th, 2022 03:54
Goldfinch60 said:
I can remember many years ago when I was sitting in my local when one of my friends came in with a conger that he had caught.
Andy
November 26th, 2022 03:54
Gladding
SureshG said:
I looked at the dictionary and came back disappointed, but then DA!, saw your notes - well thank you sir.
The amazing feat of accomplishment has its own reward, as your words in taking us there
November 25th, 2022 18:16
SureshG said:
I looked at the dictionary and came back disappointed, but then DA!, saw your notes - well thank you sir.
The amazing feat of accomplishment has its own reward, as your words in taking us there
November 25th, 2022 18:16
Gladding
Fay Slimm. said:
Thanks for a new word and its meaning - - I like the sound gladding makes and am sure it would be fun just as your look back moon ago at you and more boys \"poking around at eel-pits\" - - will look soon at some video vintage practice of gladding - - and agreed as your last lines admit to need of self-caught eel-fish as food even in these days of easy bought meal-time abundance. A stunning piece of prose Nev.
November 25th, 2022 11:45
Fay Slimm. said:
Thanks for a new word and its meaning - - I like the sound gladding makes and am sure it would be fun just as your look back moon ago at you and more boys \"poking around at eel-pits\" - - will look soon at some video vintage practice of gladding - - and agreed as your last lines admit to need of self-caught eel-fish as food even in these days of easy bought meal-time abundance. A stunning piece of prose Nev.
November 25th, 2022 11:45
Gladding
L. B. Mek said:
devoid of your author\'s notes, these lines
transported me to that milieu you worded so vividly immersive:
\'Those grey remnants of waves
that repeatedly
spit and do laugh and do lap
at our feet
while we all squat like twats,\'
a poetic dreamscape in a read
November 25th, 2022 05:11
L. B. Mek said:
devoid of your author\'s notes, these lines
transported me to that milieu you worded so vividly immersive:
\'Those grey remnants of waves
that repeatedly
spit and do laugh and do lap
at our feet
while we all squat like twats,\'
a poetic dreamscape in a read
November 25th, 2022 05:11
Poem on a Plate
Doggerel Dave said:
Certainly one way of consolidating international relations is via a good feed (not into haute cuisine).
Just give us a few olives, a bucket of red wine n some goats cheese to wipe on the crusty bread….
An good will for everyone… I’m off for a nap after, as tranquility slowly seeps through my body.
Burp….
November 24th, 2022 18:32
Doggerel Dave said:
Certainly one way of consolidating international relations is via a good feed (not into haute cuisine).
Just give us a few olives, a bucket of red wine n some goats cheese to wipe on the crusty bread….
An good will for everyone… I’m off for a nap after, as tranquility slowly seeps through my body.
Burp….
November 24th, 2022 18:32
Poem on a Plate
Fay Slimm. said:
What a deeelishuss taste of simple dishes when love\'s on the menu my friend. - - methinks this needs a big \"origado\" for such a poetic platter Nev.- - - - (at least as I understand that Portugese word) ..............x
November 24th, 2022 15:30
Fay Slimm. said:
What a deeelishuss taste of simple dishes when love\'s on the menu my friend. - - methinks this needs a big \"origado\" for such a poetic platter Nev.- - - - (at least as I understand that Portugese word) ..............x
November 24th, 2022 15:30
Poem on a Plate
orchidee said:
Good write Obrigado, erm, Neville. lol.
Oh it\'s not a person. lol.
November 24th, 2022 11:16
orchidee said:
Good write Obrigado, erm, Neville. lol.
Oh it\'s not a person. lol.
November 24th, 2022 11:16
Poem on a Plate
dusk arising said:
Didn\'t quite bring back the romance of faggots and peas on the street corner.
November 24th, 2022 10:26
dusk arising said:
Didn\'t quite bring back the romance of faggots and peas on the street corner.
November 24th, 2022 10:26
Poem on a Plate
arqios said:
That’s the best poetry of all, a platter full of delicacies.
November 24th, 2022 08:21
arqios said:
That’s the best poetry of all, a platter full of delicacies.
November 24th, 2022 08:21
When Things Were Perfectly Perfect
Doggerel Dave said:
Them old mirrors (I frequent old junk and antique shops) reflect me perfectly. Enhanced reality check. Ta, Nev.
November 24th, 2022 04:26
Doggerel Dave said:
Them old mirrors (I frequent old junk and antique shops) reflect me perfectly. Enhanced reality check. Ta, Nev.
November 24th, 2022 04:26
When Things Were Perfectly Perfect
arqios said:
Haha, all of a sudden a memory flashed of Sophia posing by fridge light. Marcello could have been better to her. But ce la vie. My nan had a wall to wall, floor to ceiling mirror in the old house and we used to play in front of it. I think the aunt\'s went to ballet or something. But yeah, it was one big mirror! Rik.
November 23rd, 2022 19:54
arqios said:
Haha, all of a sudden a memory flashed of Sophia posing by fridge light. Marcello could have been better to her. But ce la vie. My nan had a wall to wall, floor to ceiling mirror in the old house and we used to play in front of it. I think the aunt\'s went to ballet or something. But yeah, it was one big mirror! Rik.
November 23rd, 2022 19:54
When Things Were Perfectly Perfect
dusk arising said:
ah those shadows, like the maturing crust on a good cheese. not forgetting a wry grin or two as they are savoured
November 23rd, 2022 13:12
dusk arising said:
ah those shadows, like the maturing crust on a good cheese. not forgetting a wry grin or two as they are savoured
November 23rd, 2022 13:12
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