Comments received on poems by Neville



Amen
Doggerel Dave said:

This is giving me a bit of a headache....but.... I\'ll definitely forgo my prayers tonight, as nothing, but nothing is going to interfere with my subconscious if I can avoid it.

November 21st, 2023 07:53

Amen
arqios said:

Amen has almost exclusively been associated with prayer 🙏🏻 where it retains its core meaning of agreement: “let it be so” to what was beforehand declared.

November 21st, 2023 04:24

Amen
orchidee said:

A fine write N.

November 21st, 2023 03:03

Amen
Bobby O said:

Bigly smled, he watched the
Manchurian candidate dress nary a smile unable to resist someone else’s plan. Bigly shrugged subliminallly soon to reside w a Dalmatian and a joint and Bigly knew that type of Love , was “What I Got?”

November 21st, 2023 02:45

Amen
Goldfinch60 said:

We can pray anytime during the day Neville, getting to sleep at night and getting that first cup of tea in the morning are more important. LOL

Andy

November 21st, 2023 01:54

A Taste of Hope
Thomas W Case said:

Superb work.

November 20th, 2023 17:17

Womb Envy
arqios said:

O.B.’s not quite the job for most but in the back of many minds, the title is sharper than is possible to elaborate; and one to stick to Freud & Co.

November 20th, 2023 06:28

Womb Envy
2781 said:

What\'s that saying: it took nine months to get out of one....

November 20th, 2023 04:25

Womb Envy
orchidee said:

Yes, an musing write N.
Meanwhile - good job KP and I can\'t have any baby trouts! The world would be even ghastlier. lol.


November 20th, 2023 03:28

Womb Envy
Goldfinch60 said:

Well I found it amusing but then I am so inexperienced in looking at so many wombs. LOL

Andy

November 20th, 2023 02:50

A Taste of Hope
Goldfinch60 said:

It certainly does Neville.

Andy

November 20th, 2023 02:23

A Taste of Hope
Bella Shepard said:

That mellow, yellow hints of honey, how sweet the poem, the sentiment and the poet.

November 19th, 2023 13:35

A Taste of Hope
Teddy.15 said:

The positivity in here is certainly hopeful, my dear Nev, loved your imagery and your message darling, without hope nothing would be bright. ❤️

November 19th, 2023 08:39

A Taste of Hope
arqios said:

Yellow is a grand colour that would trump a stoic smile with a tooth bared grin 😁

November 19th, 2023 06:58

A Taste of Hope
orchidee said:

KP got her own back on me. I read this to her and she gave me a yellow banana filled with botox! lol.
That\'s Adventure Number, oh I dunno, 7638495 or summat. I lost count.

November 19th, 2023 05:58

An Uncertain Kind of Aloneness
Thomas W Case said:

Excellent work my friend.

November 18th, 2023 16:59

The Wife of a Dead Russian Diplomat
Christina8 said:

Very interesting poem. There are still asylums? Sounds like you enjoyed each others company.

November 18th, 2023 11:34

The Wife of a Dead Russian Diplomat
Thomas W Case said:

Very intriguing. Great work.

November 18th, 2023 09:21

The Wife of a Dead Russian Diplomat
arqios said:

The mink coat said it all!

November 18th, 2023 07:09

The Wife of a Dead Russian Diplomat
Goldfinch60 said:

Sounds like a very interesting lady Neville, it\'s a shame she went away.

Andy

November 18th, 2023 02:48

An Uncertain Kind of Aloneness
Goldfinch60 said:

That pride and dignity can be re-awakened Neville and all will be fine.

Andy

November 18th, 2023 02:28

The Wife of a Dead Russian Diplomat
orchidee said:

Would that be 39F in Russia, not 39C?
And should I meet her? lol.

November 18th, 2023 02:07

The Wife of a Dead Russian Diplomat
Doggerel Dave said:

This is too much with too little, Neville. Needs a book or at least an extended essay......................................

November 18th, 2023 02:01

Old Dick and the Swearmonger’s Daughter
Parisab said:

That is a good economic policy, when words are a few and to the point! Keeps the time, energy, and emotional resources protected. I wish I were that sensible…

November 17th, 2023 21:59

An Uncertain Kind of Aloneness
Doggerel Dave said:

Best not the open beach, sadly .
Lock the door, draw the curtains...oh, and leave the mandolin outside.... Evokes though a strong feeling of nostalgia of course, the first part - the rest I\'ll take with a grain of....sand....

November 17th, 2023 17:39

Old Dick and the Swearmonger’s Daughter
Bella Shepard said:

You\'ve given me the biggest smile with this one! Opposites attract and even meld when it\'s just right. I can imagine the fun they had coming up with those imaginative, rude words, Iand can alomost hear them laughing now. Priceless!!!

November 17th, 2023 14:49

An Uncertain Kind of Aloneness
amysliterature said:

this really touched me thank you it feels so vulnerable and distant at the same time :)

November 17th, 2023 14:35

An Uncertain Kind of Aloneness
orchidee said:

Good write N.
I wanted to write \'A certain kind of aloneness - without KP\'. Well, I suppose I hardly see her in person - only on TV, in papers, etc, or if I collect her from the botox clinic. She\'s there 23 hours of every day. lol.

November 17th, 2023 07:45

An Uncertain Kind of Aloneness
LIZ said:

Mmmmmm long, lost, abused love? Just a thought....💜💜💜💜💜

November 17th, 2023 06:23

An Uncertain Kind of Aloneness
arqios said:

Mandolin eye and a belly-full of strumming…makes for interesting days.

November 17th, 2023 05:32



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