Comments received on poems by Neville
Twisted History the Rape of the Plains People
orchidee said:
A fine write N.
I burnt garlic - what a pong! If one can burn garlic?
November 3rd, 2023 03:08
orchidee said:
A fine write N.
I burnt garlic - what a pong! If one can burn garlic?
November 3rd, 2023 03:08
Twisted History the Rape of the Plains People
LIZ said:
Sometimes what we do doesn\'t feel enough, and we end up being condemned! Trying to heal our generation is a full-time job!! So, personally, I try healing myself every day, in hopes it carries on!!! \"Then he burnt both sage and saffron to heal and to colour his rage and his anger\" THIS...is so powerful to me!!! Not sure if this was the intention but....thank you! 💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜
November 3rd, 2023 02:22
LIZ said:
Sometimes what we do doesn\'t feel enough, and we end up being condemned! Trying to heal our generation is a full-time job!! So, personally, I try healing myself every day, in hopes it carries on!!! \"Then he burnt both sage and saffron to heal and to colour his rage and his anger\" THIS...is so powerful to me!!! Not sure if this was the intention but....thank you! 💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜
November 3rd, 2023 02:22
Chat Up Lies
MendedFences27 said:
Some \"chat up\" lines seem phony. Yours at least has some truth to it. I truly believe it\'s more a matter of chemistry, than anything else.
Your poem speaks of some failures as well as connections. It reminds one how cumbersome such cold intros can be. A great reflection on one of life\'s difficult experiences. - Phil A.
November 2nd, 2023 19:26
MendedFences27 said:
Some \"chat up\" lines seem phony. Yours at least has some truth to it. I truly believe it\'s more a matter of chemistry, than anything else.
Your poem speaks of some failures as well as connections. It reminds one how cumbersome such cold intros can be. A great reflection on one of life\'s difficult experiences. - Phil A.
November 2nd, 2023 19:26
Chat Up Lies
Bella Shepard said:
Can\'t argue with this empirical evidence. The true test would be if others tried your method and got the same results, then there might be a \"Nevlaw\" there. I also had to google \"teach granny to suck eggs\", hadn\'t heard that one before. Such a delight-filled write my friend, and always a pleasure.
November 2nd, 2023 15:15
Bella Shepard said:
Can\'t argue with this empirical evidence. The true test would be if others tried your method and got the same results, then there might be a \"Nevlaw\" there. I also had to google \"teach granny to suck eggs\", hadn\'t heard that one before. Such a delight-filled write my friend, and always a pleasure.
November 2nd, 2023 15:15
Chat Up Lies
arqios said:
Going blind if only that would eradicate mental imprints.... as for chatting up ... *shivers*
November 2nd, 2023 07:11
arqios said:
Going blind if only that would eradicate mental imprints.... as for chatting up ... *shivers*
November 2nd, 2023 07:11
Chat Up Lies
LIZ said:
Oh Neville!! I think any \"chat up\" line would work for you!!! But ummmmm yeah please don\'t use the eggs thing.....although.....personally I would just laugh 🫢🫢🫢🫢 and still talk to you!! 💜💜💜💜💜
November 2nd, 2023 05:17
LIZ said:
Oh Neville!! I think any \"chat up\" line would work for you!!! But ummmmm yeah please don\'t use the eggs thing.....although.....personally I would just laugh 🫢🫢🫢🫢 and still talk to you!! 💜💜💜💜💜
November 2nd, 2023 05:17
Chat Up Lies
Christina8 said:
LOL I was gonna mention what teddy said! Of course I\'m sure you don\'t need a line
November 2nd, 2023 03:35
Christina8 said:
LOL I was gonna mention what teddy said! Of course I\'m sure you don\'t need a line
November 2nd, 2023 03:35
Chat Up Lies
orchidee said:
I always wear a face mask blindfold thingy at bedtimes. To rest my eyes - and so I don\'t see KP! I would never recover, as she always sleeps nude! lol.
November 2nd, 2023 03:02
orchidee said:
I always wear a face mask blindfold thingy at bedtimes. To rest my eyes - and so I don\'t see KP! I would never recover, as she always sleeps nude! lol.
November 2nd, 2023 03:02
Chat Up Lies
Teddy.15 said:
lol well just don\'t use the Granny sucks eggs line when you meet her. Love this I can feel all your emotion. ❤️
November 2nd, 2023 02:12
Teddy.15 said:
lol well just don\'t use the Granny sucks eggs line when you meet her. Love this I can feel all your emotion. ❤️
November 2nd, 2023 02:12
Chat Up Lies
Thomas W Case said:
Truly superb. I love what isn\'t stated lol
November 2nd, 2023 02:08
Thomas W Case said:
Truly superb. I love what isn\'t stated lol
November 2nd, 2023 02:08
Floating Down On a Whisper
LIZ said:
Mmmmm your own reflection? Understanding, looking at what was? Just thinking out loud!!! 🫢💜💜💜
November 1st, 2023 15:37
LIZ said:
Mmmmm your own reflection? Understanding, looking at what was? Just thinking out loud!!! 🫢💜💜💜
November 1st, 2023 15:37
Floating Down On a Whisper
Teddy.15 said:
Very powerful my dear Nev, especially the ending. ❤️
November 1st, 2023 15:20
Teddy.15 said:
Very powerful my dear Nev, especially the ending. ❤️
November 1st, 2023 15:20
Floating Down On a Whisper
Bella Shepard said:
R.I.P. old red silk scarf, as it \"Floats down on a whisper\", seems like closure. Beautifully crafted dear Nev!
November 1st, 2023 14:34
Bella Shepard said:
R.I.P. old red silk scarf, as it \"Floats down on a whisper\", seems like closure. Beautifully crafted dear Nev!
November 1st, 2023 14:34
Floating Down On a Whisper
MendedFences27 said:
Ole! As a bull charges toward that falling \"red silk.\" Ole! And that \"dangerous sidewalk\" (What, not a pavement?) gets a whole lot more threatening. At last, some passive resistance to a \"nemesis\" pays off.
A great tale of retribution. - Phil A.
November 1st, 2023 12:09
MendedFences27 said:
Ole! As a bull charges toward that falling \"red silk.\" Ole! And that \"dangerous sidewalk\" (What, not a pavement?) gets a whole lot more threatening. At last, some passive resistance to a \"nemesis\" pays off.
A great tale of retribution. - Phil A.
November 1st, 2023 12:09
Floating Down On a Whisper
Neville said:
You are clearly besotted and far too reliant on the mental defence mechanism of reaction formation .. you are also more nutty than a topic ..
November 1st, 2023 03:24
Neville said:
You are clearly besotted and far too reliant on the mental defence mechanism of reaction formation .. you are also more nutty than a topic ..
November 1st, 2023 03:24
Floating Down On a Whisper
orchidee said:
Good write N.
I caught a brief glimpse of KP - though it looked like an old trout! lol.
November 1st, 2023 02:58
orchidee said:
Good write N.
I caught a brief glimpse of KP - though it looked like an old trout! lol.
November 1st, 2023 02:58
Tu Es Tout Pour Moi
arqios said:
That, the exquisite ache signifying we live and not merely exist!
October 31st, 2023 19:22
arqios said:
That, the exquisite ache signifying we live and not merely exist!
October 31st, 2023 19:22
Tu Es Tout Pour Moi
Bobby O said:
The frown hanging there adds a weight to my shoulders, it’s cumbersome especially when it may be predicted and yet doesn’t slow us down. It’s irrational and yet most who have committed resource in the past feel it’s due to turn, so we stumble forward with unreasoned plan, but the frown is honest and therefore a base of advantaged certainty.
October 31st, 2023 18:46
Bobby O said:
The frown hanging there adds a weight to my shoulders, it’s cumbersome especially when it may be predicted and yet doesn’t slow us down. It’s irrational and yet most who have committed resource in the past feel it’s due to turn, so we stumble forward with unreasoned plan, but the frown is honest and therefore a base of advantaged certainty.
October 31st, 2023 18:46
Tu Es Tout Pour Moi
MendedFences27 said:
I was taken aback by this one. You \"ache, long, bleed, and love\" and receive a \"frown.\" Otherwise, a great piece of poetry, \"and again upon rainbows,\" \"the sense of you.\" \" are yet to be remembered.\" Not just your average phrasing. - Phil A.
October 31st, 2023 15:52
MendedFences27 said:
I was taken aback by this one. You \"ache, long, bleed, and love\" and receive a \"frown.\" Otherwise, a great piece of poetry, \"and again upon rainbows,\" \"the sense of you.\" \" are yet to be remembered.\" Not just your average phrasing. - Phil A.
October 31st, 2023 15:52
Tu Es Tout Pour Moi
Thomas W Case said:
Another one gets slammed out of the park. Nice work.
October 31st, 2023 02:55
Thomas W Case said:
Another one gets slammed out of the park. Nice work.
October 31st, 2023 02:55
Tu Es Tout Pour Moi
orchidee said:
Good write N.
Bit of German there in the title?!
I don\'t long for the pong of botox when KP is near me. lol.
Does it have any smell?
October 31st, 2023 02:45
orchidee said:
Good write N.
Bit of German there in the title?!
I don\'t long for the pong of botox when KP is near me. lol.
Does it have any smell?
October 31st, 2023 02:45
Tu Es Tout Pour Moi
Teddy.15 said:
Ah the romantic side of Nev, yes yes yes. ❤️
October 31st, 2023 01:29
Teddy.15 said:
Ah the romantic side of Nev, yes yes yes. ❤️
October 31st, 2023 01:29
Tu Es Tout Pour Moi
LIZ said:
Ayyyyyyyy 🫣🫣🫣🫣 your everything!! Dirt AND rainbows! Worth it, with all that it comes!! 💜💜💜💜
October 31st, 2023 01:03
LIZ said:
Ayyyyyyyy 🫣🫣🫣🫣 your everything!! Dirt AND rainbows! Worth it, with all that it comes!! 💜💜💜💜
October 31st, 2023 01:03
She Wore Him So Well
Bella Shepard said:
As I read I could almost hear the words whispered in a slow, southern drawl, alluring and sensuous. You\'ve outdone yourself with the tenor of this poem my friend. Sublime!
October 30th, 2023 15:24
Bella Shepard said:
As I read I could almost hear the words whispered in a slow, southern drawl, alluring and sensuous. You\'ve outdone yourself with the tenor of this poem my friend. Sublime!
October 30th, 2023 15:24
She Wore Him So Well
orchidee said:
Good write N.
I wrote a similar poem (did I?). It said ...the cream of the botox of KP\'s thigh... Not a pretty sight. heehee.
Fido says I best not let anyone ride on my mastery this time of day! lol
October 30th, 2023 10:24
orchidee said:
Good write N.
I wrote a similar poem (did I?). It said ...the cream of the botox of KP\'s thigh... Not a pretty sight. heehee.
Fido says I best not let anyone ride on my mastery this time of day! lol
October 30th, 2023 10:24
She Wore Him So Well
MendedFences27 said:
Better a \"glove\" than a mitten, five times the fun. Seriously, this erotic poem is subtle, such that it becomes a love poem. A great piece of work. - Phil A,
October 30th, 2023 09:58
MendedFences27 said:
Better a \"glove\" than a mitten, five times the fun. Seriously, this erotic poem is subtle, such that it becomes a love poem. A great piece of work. - Phil A,
October 30th, 2023 09:58
She Wore Him So Well
Thomas W Case said:
Excellent on all levels. Truly genius.
October 30th, 2023 08:03
Thomas W Case said:
Excellent on all levels. Truly genius.
October 30th, 2023 08:03
She Wore Him So Well
arqios said:
A perfect fit it would appear to be. Always good to have exquisite velvet.
October 30th, 2023 07:29
arqios said:
A perfect fit it would appear to be. Always good to have exquisite velvet.
October 30th, 2023 07:29
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