Comments received on poems by Neville
Talk About Stupid
Teddy.15 said:
Maybe she was shy? I like this very much dear Nev. ❤️
October 1st, 2023 02:47
Teddy.15 said:
Maybe she was shy? I like this very much dear Nev. ❤️
October 1st, 2023 02:47
The Dance of Overshadowed Children
Parisab said:
So hard to read this but too important of a piece to ignore…
October 1st, 2023 01:46
Parisab said:
So hard to read this but too important of a piece to ignore…
October 1st, 2023 01:46
The Dance of Overshadowed Children
Goldfinch60 said:
Very emotive words Neville.
Andy
October 1st, 2023 01:12
Goldfinch60 said:
Very emotive words Neville.
Andy
October 1st, 2023 01:12
So Much More Than A Madness
Goldfinch60 said:
We all have our fifteen minutes of fame Neville (or is that infamy).
Andy
October 1st, 2023 01:02
Goldfinch60 said:
We all have our fifteen minutes of fame Neville (or is that infamy).
Andy
October 1st, 2023 01:02
The Dance of Overshadowed Children
Bella Shepard said:
This breaks the heart dear Nev, for those who are used and abused. Very deeply felt.
September 30th, 2023 15:33
Bella Shepard said:
This breaks the heart dear Nev, for those who are used and abused. Very deeply felt.
September 30th, 2023 15:33
The Dance of Overshadowed Children
Christina8 said:
Oh how sad! Very well done N!
September 30th, 2023 08:39
Christina8 said:
Oh how sad! Very well done N!
September 30th, 2023 08:39
So Much More Than A Madness
LIZ said:
Yes indeed! We want to be SEEN...without all the fake sh#$ in between!! 💜
September 29th, 2023 07:08
LIZ said:
Yes indeed! We want to be SEEN...without all the fake sh#$ in between!! 💜
September 29th, 2023 07:08
So Much More Than A Madness
Christina8 said:
This is really great and said with a rawness not often seen...At the end of your poem, I think we all need to be seen and noticed.....really great stuff!
September 29th, 2023 07:01
Christina8 said:
This is really great and said with a rawness not often seen...At the end of your poem, I think we all need to be seen and noticed.....really great stuff!
September 29th, 2023 07:01
So Much More Than A Madness
L. B. Mek said:
!!!BRILLIANT!!!
\'But refuse
to eat rainbows or play
silly leaving games ..\'
(I think our write\'s are in sync
today
that\'s always a cherished gift)
what can I say Hyung
I simply bow to your superior talent
oh Supreme poet!
humbly (I read and learn)
September 29th, 2023 04:54
L. B. Mek said:
!!!BRILLIANT!!!
\'But refuse
to eat rainbows or play
silly leaving games ..\'
(I think our write\'s are in sync
today
that\'s always a cherished gift)
what can I say Hyung
I simply bow to your superior talent
oh Supreme poet!
humbly (I read and learn)
September 29th, 2023 04:54
In the Wake of a Wish
L. B. Mek said:
I so relate, cherished Poet
How many have inked their regrets
On those clouds of hope
Wishing their heart\'s may be heard
By those they miss the most..
(I really like the simple delivery
as the content and subject
Is already so heavy, your subtlety
At its refined best)
thank you! Hyung
September 29th, 2023 04:36
L. B. Mek said:
I so relate, cherished Poet
How many have inked their regrets
On those clouds of hope
Wishing their heart\'s may be heard
By those they miss the most..
(I really like the simple delivery
as the content and subject
Is already so heavy, your subtlety
At its refined best)
thank you! Hyung
September 29th, 2023 04:36
So Much More Than A Madness
orchidee said:
A fine write N.
I never knew it was 11.45pm now - eh?! 15 mins left.
I was famous in my life for 15 mins (so far). KP was famous for all of her life except 15 seconds - so she says.
September 29th, 2023 03:54
orchidee said:
A fine write N.
I never knew it was 11.45pm now - eh?! 15 mins left.
I was famous in my life for 15 mins (so far). KP was famous for all of her life except 15 seconds - so she says.
September 29th, 2023 03:54
So Much More Than A Madness
Teddy.15 said:
Beautiful dear Nev, your reflection and pain is raw in this and I have to say your last lines are truly goosebump lines, because we all need to feel noticed at some point. ❤️
September 29th, 2023 03:27
Teddy.15 said:
Beautiful dear Nev, your reflection and pain is raw in this and I have to say your last lines are truly goosebump lines, because we all need to feel noticed at some point. ❤️
September 29th, 2023 03:27
In the Wake of a Wish
Bella Shepard said:
I love the title, it applies both personally and collectively to so many things. Much of life hangs on a wish, \"if only\". Your introspective nature truly shines through these days, and it\'s wonderful.
September 28th, 2023 11:04
Bella Shepard said:
I love the title, it applies both personally and collectively to so many things. Much of life hangs on a wish, \"if only\". Your introspective nature truly shines through these days, and it\'s wonderful.
September 28th, 2023 11:04
Ned’s View
Bella Shepard said:
Sometimes I fear we might technoligize ourselves out of existence as homo sapiens. Pyhsicist Alan Lightman suggests we may be evolving into homo techno in the far distant future, and I have to agree with him. We forget that we are part of the natural world, and we will return to it, one way or another. Great write my friend, you touch on the apprehension in all of us.
September 28th, 2023 10:55
Bella Shepard said:
Sometimes I fear we might technoligize ourselves out of existence as homo sapiens. Pyhsicist Alan Lightman suggests we may be evolving into homo techno in the far distant future, and I have to agree with him. We forget that we are part of the natural world, and we will return to it, one way or another. Great write my friend, you touch on the apprehension in all of us.
September 28th, 2023 10:55
In the Wake of a Wish
Bobby O said:
The wish is such that our wonderment is true.
September 28th, 2023 00:41
Bobby O said:
The wish is such that our wonderment is true.
September 28th, 2023 00:41
In the Wake of a Wish
Goldfinch60 said:
We are back to the \"What if....\" scenario once more Neville.
Andy
September 27th, 2023 01:14
Goldfinch60 said:
We are back to the \"What if....\" scenario once more Neville.
Andy
September 27th, 2023 01:14
In the Wake of a Wish
Christina8 said:
I have wondered that same thing....I think \"what might have been\" is a thought on many peoples minds from time to time. Great write!
September 26th, 2023 10:27
Christina8 said:
I have wondered that same thing....I think \"what might have been\" is a thought on many peoples minds from time to time. Great write!
September 26th, 2023 10:27
In the Wake of a Wish
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful metaphor at many levels. Every once in a while such a metaphor comes to mind and this is one. Nicely done Neville
September 26th, 2023 05:03
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful metaphor at many levels. Every once in a while such a metaphor comes to mind and this is one. Nicely done Neville
September 26th, 2023 05:03
In the Wake of a Wish
Doggerel Dave said:
Much depended on the hand I was delt - not a good \'un, but I played it to the full....didn\'t fold unless left with little choice and there were moments when I could\'ve made a better call but overall never went bust.
Got me contemplating, reminiscing again, Neville......
September 26th, 2023 04:57
Doggerel Dave said:
Much depended on the hand I was delt - not a good \'un, but I played it to the full....didn\'t fold unless left with little choice and there were moments when I could\'ve made a better call but overall never went bust.
Got me contemplating, reminiscing again, Neville......
September 26th, 2023 04:57
In the Wake of a Wish
LIZ said:
You never know.....wishes...do come true. Maybe not how we expected! But they do come true!! 💜
September 26th, 2023 02:35
LIZ said:
You never know.....wishes...do come true. Maybe not how we expected! But they do come true!! 💜
September 26th, 2023 02:35
Ned’s View
Doggerel Dave said:
OK – going to attempt to parse this conundrum.
Ned…Ned Kelly? Nah, I think not - he was more into steel rather than loom woven vests… but he did swing….
Looms? Much empathy and sympathy for the Luddites… as the benefits of new technology have not been uniformly distributed.
Thanks for the thought (or two), Neville.
September 25th, 2023 04:34
Doggerel Dave said:
OK – going to attempt to parse this conundrum.
Ned…Ned Kelly? Nah, I think not - he was more into steel rather than loom woven vests… but he did swing….
Looms? Much empathy and sympathy for the Luddites… as the benefits of new technology have not been uniformly distributed.
Thanks for the thought (or two), Neville.
September 25th, 2023 04:34
Ned’s View
L. B. Mek said:
\'brand new loom ..\'
it all started with those pesky looms
trying to glean and weave, fate
programming our lives in binary
mythical, code..
should have left it all, well alone
we were dashing
in our ignorance and animal skin...
Brilliant!
(I bow to your superior talent
I am fan, because of poetry
like this, you share so regularly)
thank you! Hyung
hope you n yours have a peaceful week
🍻
September 25th, 2023 04:10
L. B. Mek said:
\'brand new loom ..\'
it all started with those pesky looms
trying to glean and weave, fate
programming our lives in binary
mythical, code..
should have left it all, well alone
we were dashing
in our ignorance and animal skin...
Brilliant!
(I bow to your superior talent
I am fan, because of poetry
like this, you share so regularly)
thank you! Hyung
hope you n yours have a peaceful week
🍻
September 25th, 2023 04:10
Feels Like There’s a Stranger in the House
L. B. Mek said:
seven days and a month early..
also, reduce the amount of mirrors
in the house..
also..... (don\'t place these thoughts in my head)
also.. Thank you! Hyung
for another great read
lol
(forgive me I\'m in a playful mood)
September 25th, 2023 04:02
L. B. Mek said:
seven days and a month early..
also, reduce the amount of mirrors
in the house..
also..... (don\'t place these thoughts in my head)
also.. Thank you! Hyung
for another great read
lol
(forgive me I\'m in a playful mood)
September 25th, 2023 04:02
When My Heart Fell in Love
L. B. Mek said:
\'and fresh laundered sheets ..\'
honeymoon phases be da best
the rest can just, wait
in the wise words of Quagmire
\'giggidy, giggidy\' heat
🍻😎😉
September 25th, 2023 04:00
L. B. Mek said:
\'and fresh laundered sheets ..\'
honeymoon phases be da best
the rest can just, wait
in the wise words of Quagmire
\'giggidy, giggidy\' heat
🍻😎😉
September 25th, 2023 04:00
Ned’s View
LIZ said:
Oh Neville....it\'s definitely changing our human environment. It can be scary. Definitely not a solution to real world problems....but one can only hope....it\'s realized....before it\'s too late....or is it already? 💜
September 25th, 2023 03:21
LIZ said:
Oh Neville....it\'s definitely changing our human environment. It can be scary. Definitely not a solution to real world problems....but one can only hope....it\'s realized....before it\'s too late....or is it already? 💜
September 25th, 2023 03:21
Ned’s View
Teddy.15 said:
You are talking of robots taking over our jobs and lives. Powerful stuff dear Nev. Unfortunately here they are everywhere even the banks have cyber pens to use now. 💜
September 25th, 2023 03:16
Teddy.15 said:
You are talking of robots taking over our jobs and lives. Powerful stuff dear Nev. Unfortunately here they are everywhere even the banks have cyber pens to use now. 💜
September 25th, 2023 03:16
Ned’s View
Goldfinch60 said:
It may well be Neville but hopefully some time soon people in power will realise they are destroying the world.
Andy
September 25th, 2023 02:49
Goldfinch60 said:
It may well be Neville but hopefully some time soon people in power will realise they are destroying the world.
Andy
September 25th, 2023 02:49
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