Comments received on poems by Neville



She Wore Him So Well
LIZ said:

Well.....well......I hope he had the time of his life!! πŸ€­πŸ€­πŸ’œπŸ’œπŸ’œπŸ’œ

October 30th, 2023 04:45

On Moving On
Teddy.15 said:

Beautiful Nev. ❀️

October 30th, 2023 03:40

She Wore Him So Well
Teddy.15 said:

Puppet mastering by any chance?

October 30th, 2023 03:38

A Handful of Water
Parisab said:

Your poem creates one singular moment of beauty and brings attention to the value of water and the labor it requires in the most parts of this earth…

October 30th, 2023 00:20

This is Us ..
Bobby O said:

A forever testimony that is a credi owned and assumed by both

October 30th, 2023 00:05

On Moving On
Bobby O said:

I guessing that you are forever woven into the fabric of her existence. If DNA could move and take residence that would be you.

October 30th, 2023 00:02

On Moving On
MendedFences27 said:

The burden of being of a certain age. We never think of these things when we are young. You have captured the \'fear\" of being forgotten ever so well. I noticed the \"maybe\" at the end and know full well why it is there. - Phil A.

October 29th, 2023 14:00

On Moving On
LIZ said:

Mmmmmm so romantic, so beautiful! And because I know you\'re a gentleman......so gentle!! How can she not think of you every now and then?! πŸ’œπŸ’œπŸ’œπŸ’œ

October 29th, 2023 11:57

A Handful of Water
rhmn_7 said:

A beautiful poem, Neville!

October 29th, 2023 07:36

On Moving On
Thomas W Case said:

Nice work brother.

October 29th, 2023 04:43

On Moving On
orchidee said:

A fine write N.
KP\'s threatened to go away (hooray!) but she always comes back for more money from me for botox! 😁

October 29th, 2023 02:00

This is Us ..
Garth Rakumakoe said:

I read this, Neville, and failing to find the words, I read it again, and still failed. I am mightily impressed how you find words so hard to find.

This write stays with me. It hits hard sir. πŸ™πŸΌ

October 28th, 2023 13:26

A Handful of Water
LIZ said:

Neville!! I think I told you before, but, your titles are amazing!! \"A creation made out of hard work\"!! \"Nothing, but everything\"! πŸ’œπŸ’œπŸ’œπŸ’œ

October 28th, 2023 04:21

A Handful of Water
Christina8 said:

The imagery in this poem is astonishing, Neville! Also very delicate.

October 28th, 2023 03:43

A Handful of Water
Teddy.15 said:

Your imagery is just gorgeous dear Nev. Diamonds for sure. ❀️

October 28th, 2023 01:58

A Handful of Water
orchidee said:

Good write N.
Yep, KP\'s hands are rough, calloused, etc. The botox don\'t make any difference. Dunno why she has it. 😁

October 28th, 2023 01:52

This is Us ..
Teddy.15 said:

My dear Nev, such sadness in such beauty, I have a great friend who literally went through this, it fathoms me how he did it with such dignity but he did. A stunning capture of soulmates and Indeed many other types of love, when I was really young it\'s what I felt about my mother. ❀️

October 28th, 2023 00:39

This is Us ..
MendedFences27 said:

This is beautiful and real. It hit me like a gut punch, the last two lines especially. It\'s difficult to deal with and harder, I imagine, to write about it. I have no more to say except I hope you all find the peace you seek. - Phil A.

October 27th, 2023 18:37

This is Us ..
arqios said:

That is the sweetest and most painful thing.... who goes first can be such a pain. A contemporary film captures this scene: The Notebook; where the couple expire together atop the hospital bed.

October 27th, 2023 05:31

And All Before Our Awakening
LIZ said:

I\'m not familiar....but still...the emotions are felt. πŸ™πŸ™πŸ™πŸ™ sending prayers!

October 27th, 2023 04:31

This is Us ..
LIZ said:

When....you become....ONE.....πŸ’œπŸ’œπŸ’œπŸ’œπŸ’œπŸ’œ

October 27th, 2023 04:24

This is Us ..
Christina8 said:

Oh yes, you can always feel your spouses pain. And the end is a thought we must not think about too much or we\'ll go mad--who will pass first?

October 27th, 2023 02:32

This is Us ..
orchidee said:

You can feel the pain of your loved ones. Me? I don\'t care about KP\'s pain. She brought it all on herself - the pain of botox going saggy! lol.

October 27th, 2023 01:51

And All Before Our Awakening
Parisab said:

Neville it’s reassuring to know that you care so deeply, may you find some answers…

October 26th, 2023 19:17

And All Before Our Awakening
peto said:

Neville
I hope you find some answers
Dusk arising is always so kind when commenting
As for Fay slim
A diamond and I know how close you both are here and elsewhere
Heartfelt
Though shocked me a bit
Bit gutted if honest

October 26th, 2023 05:09

And All Before Our Awakening
orchidee said:

Good write N.

October 26th, 2023 04:47

And All Before Our Awakening
Bobby O said:

A really great tribute.

October 26th, 2023 04:16

And All Before Our Awakening
Christina8 said:

Sending out love to Fay and Dusk. they have been so missed on this site. Give them my love if you can. They would\'ve really liked the poetic nod.

October 26th, 2023 02:50

And All Before Our Awakening
Thomas W Case said:

Fantastic work. Beautiful.

October 26th, 2023 02:03

And All Before Our Awakening
Teddy.15 said:

Sending all my love to both Fay and Dusk and to you Nev, two of the most charming and kind poetic hearts who are forever missed here on site. Hoping they are both well. ❀️ ❀️ and one for you beautiful Nev. ❀️

October 26th, 2023 02:02



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