Comments received on poems by Neville
When Things Were Perfectly Perfect
Bella Shepard said:
How beautiful those memories, seen through the mist of time, can be. They seem to pop up just when we need them. Lovingly written my friend, and thoroughly enjoyed!
November 23rd, 2022 11:23
Bella Shepard said:
How beautiful those memories, seen through the mist of time, can be. They seem to pop up just when we need them. Lovingly written my friend, and thoroughly enjoyed!
November 23rd, 2022 11:23
When Things Were Perfectly Perfect
Neil Higgins said:
Memories of long ago Nev.I treasure them all ( mostly)
November 23rd, 2022 11:06
Neil Higgins said:
Memories of long ago Nev.I treasure them all ( mostly)
November 23rd, 2022 11:06
For an Old Man We Met on a Mountain
Dove said:
Very insightful, schizophrenia is a mystery to me. My sister has it, and though I can read all about it, walking around it is hard. I never know what to say.
November 23rd, 2022 10:01
Dove said:
Very insightful, schizophrenia is a mystery to me. My sister has it, and though I can read all about it, walking around it is hard. I never know what to say.
November 23rd, 2022 10:01
For an Old Man We Met on a Mountain
Accidental Poet said:
Why the compassion of man can be felt and given by some and not others is a mystery that evades us, your scribble is heartfelt and speaks for so many. Thank you, N, for your compassionate write.
November 22nd, 2022 08:30
Accidental Poet said:
Why the compassion of man can be felt and given by some and not others is a mystery that evades us, your scribble is heartfelt and speaks for so many. Thank you, N, for your compassionate write.
November 22nd, 2022 08:30
For an Old Man We Met on a Mountain
dusk arising said:
where are any of us going anyway?
November 22nd, 2022 07:32
dusk arising said:
where are any of us going anyway?
November 22nd, 2022 07:32
For an Old Man We Met on a Mountain
Doggerel Dave said:
Although I willingly give it, you don\'t really need an endorsement from me, do you Nev?
Encouraging to see the responses above.
You illustrate those ritualised repetitive behaviours, which above all, do not, I repeat, do not signal violent intent.
Of course, these folks are ignored because they are assessed as having little or no economic value.......
Thanks for putting it out there.
November 22nd, 2022 07:21
Doggerel Dave said:
Although I willingly give it, you don\'t really need an endorsement from me, do you Nev?
Encouraging to see the responses above.
You illustrate those ritualised repetitive behaviours, which above all, do not, I repeat, do not signal violent intent.
Of course, these folks are ignored because they are assessed as having little or no economic value.......
Thanks for putting it out there.
November 22nd, 2022 07:21
For an Old Man We Met on a Mountain
arqios said:
Your compassion is quite moving and inspiring. Of late we have met a couple of like persons but these were \'mountain folk\' of another sort. But the compassion exerted has to be the same as they had their proverbial bowls out in one hand and the other rubbing their grumbling belly. A bit of an inverse in method but the need is quite similar to their well being.
November 22nd, 2022 03:45
arqios said:
Your compassion is quite moving and inspiring. Of late we have met a couple of like persons but these were \'mountain folk\' of another sort. But the compassion exerted has to be the same as they had their proverbial bowls out in one hand and the other rubbing their grumbling belly. A bit of an inverse in method but the need is quite similar to their well being.
November 22nd, 2022 03:45
For an Old Man We Met on a Mountain
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
That’s sad ( maybe he thought the sparrows might accept him . I’m sure he didn’t mean to frighten anyone . Some people are very judgemental . I know that I have felt judged at times .. or treated differently . And it’s never nice . People with problems need compassion .
November 22nd, 2022 03:37
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
That’s sad ( maybe he thought the sparrows might accept him . I’m sure he didn’t mean to frighten anyone . Some people are very judgemental . I know that I have felt judged at times .. or treated differently . And it’s never nice . People with problems need compassion .
November 22nd, 2022 03:37
For an Old Man We Met on a Mountain
orchidee said:
And - there\'s often a similar man or woman in some churches. A \'regular\' who can get different responses from others - welcome, acceptance, embarrassment, ignorance, etc.
One I know went from drug use rehab, to church, then back to the streets again sadly. Don\'t know where he is now.
November 22nd, 2022 03:04
orchidee said:
And - there\'s often a similar man or woman in some churches. A \'regular\' who can get different responses from others - welcome, acceptance, embarrassment, ignorance, etc.
One I know went from drug use rehab, to church, then back to the streets again sadly. Don\'t know where he is now.
November 22nd, 2022 03:04
For an Old Man We Met on a Mountain
Fay Slimm. said:
Those who don\'t fit into society\'s expectations are pushed aside to its fringes like your poemed old man still homeless and holding his lonely bowl - ---- a heart-touching write of misinformed shunning and found almost everywhere..............x
November 22nd, 2022 02:52
Fay Slimm. said:
Those who don\'t fit into society\'s expectations are pushed aside to its fringes like your poemed old man still homeless and holding his lonely bowl - ---- a heart-touching write of misinformed shunning and found almost everywhere..............x
November 22nd, 2022 02:52
For an Old Man We Met on a Mountain
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words Neville, many people do not understand others problems.
There was a guy in my town who used to sit there playing a tin whistle, I got to know him quite well and often wondered how he got by with the problems he had.
Andy
November 22nd, 2022 02:49
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words Neville, many people do not understand others problems.
There was a guy in my town who used to sit there playing a tin whistle, I got to know him quite well and often wondered how he got by with the problems he had.
Andy
November 22nd, 2022 02:49
Three Summers
Goldfinch60 said:
Sounds like a great youthful way of spending the summer Neville.
Andy
November 22nd, 2022 02:40
Goldfinch60 said:
Sounds like a great youthful way of spending the summer Neville.
Andy
November 22nd, 2022 02:40
Three Summers
dusk arising said:
You certainly know how to make your reader feel envious.
November 21st, 2022 11:29
dusk arising said:
You certainly know how to make your reader feel envious.
November 21st, 2022 11:29
Three Summers
arqios said:
Thanks for the tip! If ever by that way, sleeping outdoors would be awesome to do again.So much better than Algarve.
November 21st, 2022 08:24
arqios said:
Thanks for the tip! If ever by that way, sleeping outdoors would be awesome to do again.So much better than Algarve.
November 21st, 2022 08:24
Three Summers
Doggerel Dave said:
Like the old fisherman\'s craft has such a central role in the craft of your poetry here. I have slept on the beach, but not recently,... and not under an OFC.... not in a draughty place like Devon and no, on this occasion, alas....
November 21st, 2022 07:27
Doggerel Dave said:
Like the old fisherman\'s craft has such a central role in the craft of your poetry here. I have slept on the beach, but not recently,... and not under an OFC.... not in a draughty place like Devon and no, on this occasion, alas....
November 21st, 2022 07:27
Three Summers
Fay Slimm. said:
How weird that we both posted verses today on summers ago - - loving your recall of sleeping outside under boats on the beach - to which I say Snap - poetic minds must think alike - - or can you read my mind.............x
November 21st, 2022 04:29
Fay Slimm. said:
How weird that we both posted verses today on summers ago - - loving your recall of sleeping outside under boats on the beach - to which I say Snap - poetic minds must think alike - - or can you read my mind.............x
November 21st, 2022 04:29
Three Summers
L. B. Mek said:
\'And if it ever dared rain
or to blow even,
neath the warm yet still
salty and rough
tarpaulined hull\'
(the \'dared\' in these lines
defines your poetry\'s subtlety
so acutely, dear Poet
when gripped within love\'s embrace
even nature \'dare\' not disturb)
a great read! thank you Hyung
November 21st, 2022 04:19
L. B. Mek said:
\'And if it ever dared rain
or to blow even,
neath the warm yet still
salty and rough
tarpaulined hull\'
(the \'dared\' in these lines
defines your poetry\'s subtlety
so acutely, dear Poet
when gripped within love\'s embrace
even nature \'dare\' not disturb)
a great read! thank you Hyung
November 21st, 2022 04:19
Between Courses
L. B. Mek said:
great title Hyung!
Poetic intimacy
that would make fifty shades, blush
lol
November 21st, 2022 04:14
L. B. Mek said:
great title Hyung!
Poetic intimacy
that would make fifty shades, blush
lol
November 21st, 2022 04:14
Olivetti Moments
L. B. Mek said:
(we accumulate scenic mementos
like you\'ve worded here, so poetic
so we may traverse those winter\'s
and make our way to those Spring
highlights moments of our lives...)
brilliant imagery! what a great read Hyung
thank you
November 21st, 2022 04:11
L. B. Mek said:
(we accumulate scenic mementos
like you\'ve worded here, so poetic
so we may traverse those winter\'s
and make our way to those Spring
highlights moments of our lives...)
brilliant imagery! what a great read Hyung
thank you
November 21st, 2022 04:11
Algarvia
L. B. Mek said:
this could be a chapter from a Mark Twain travel diary book
I just really enjoyed your enticing flow and pacing
was such a vivid read
effortlessly intimate and rewardingly romantic...
a Great write, dear Poet supreme!
thank you
November 21st, 2022 04:04
L. B. Mek said:
this could be a chapter from a Mark Twain travel diary book
I just really enjoyed your enticing flow and pacing
was such a vivid read
effortlessly intimate and rewardingly romantic...
a Great write, dear Poet supreme!
thank you
November 21st, 2022 04:04
Three Summers
orchidee said:
I thought it was about your time by the duck pond round the back of the Co-op! Well, it was for me, when I met a certain gal. lol.
November 21st, 2022 03:00
orchidee said:
I thought it was about your time by the duck pond round the back of the Co-op! Well, it was for me, when I met a certain gal. lol.
November 21st, 2022 03:00
Between Courses
Fay Slimm. said:
Who wouldn\'t remember that delectable eating and drinking and what happened after - - showers are fantastic together - - cool and hot read today my romantic dearling.
November 20th, 2022 05:50
Fay Slimm. said:
Who wouldn\'t remember that delectable eating and drinking and what happened after - - showers are fantastic together - - cool and hot read today my romantic dearling.
November 20th, 2022 05:50
Between Courses
arqios said:
A chipped champagne flute glass! Now that just won\'t do! Very observant with all that is about you Nev. Good man.
November 20th, 2022 04:59
arqios said:
A chipped champagne flute glass! Now that just won\'t do! Very observant with all that is about you Nev. Good man.
November 20th, 2022 04:59
Olivetti Moments
orchidee said:
I havea cue for a poem in the genre \'Horror\'. \'Neighbours\' is going to return to television. What could be worse? Aren\'t we in enough troubles?
But - why do people add to their own agonies and tortures by watching it?! lol.
November 19th, 2022 13:09
orchidee said:
I havea cue for a poem in the genre \'Horror\'. \'Neighbours\' is going to return to television. What could be worse? Aren\'t we in enough troubles?
But - why do people add to their own agonies and tortures by watching it?! lol.
November 19th, 2022 13:09
Olivetti Moments
Doggerel Dave said:
Come on Nev - you coulda at least hired a row boat and said \"hello\" to them. I Appreciate hydra woz and still is a fair distance, but that woulda been an experience in poetical/musical memory for you....
The Algarve Sounds great - even if it was a moment in time.....
November 19th, 2022 07:11
Doggerel Dave said:
Come on Nev - you coulda at least hired a row boat and said \"hello\" to them. I Appreciate hydra woz and still is a fair distance, but that woulda been an experience in poetical/musical memory for you....
The Algarve Sounds great - even if it was a moment in time.....
November 19th, 2022 07:11
Olivetti Moments
Fay Slimm. said:
Paint has never dried more clearly than on this poignant canvas of Box Brownie memories mon dear ami and it takes a real poet to resurrect past moments of loved Olivetti times. A sure fave for my list is this poetic masterpiece......x
November 19th, 2022 02:39
Fay Slimm. said:
Paint has never dried more clearly than on this poignant canvas of Box Brownie memories mon dear ami and it takes a real poet to resurrect past moments of loved Olivetti times. A sure fave for my list is this poetic masterpiece......x
November 19th, 2022 02:39
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