Comments received on poems by Saxon Crow
Mother Nature #1
orchidee said:
Good write SC.
You know Mrs or Ms Nature? Now I\'m being anthropom-wotsit. Word is so long I forgot the end of it. lol.
May 25th, 2022 02:25
orchidee said:
Good write SC.
You know Mrs or Ms Nature? Now I\'m being anthropom-wotsit. Word is so long I forgot the end of it. lol.
May 25th, 2022 02:25
Mother Nature #1
dusk arising said:
On ciompleting reading your post I was left reflecting upon human nature and how it has become our nature to take for granted mother earth amongst the vast majority of folk as we grow from tender shoots in short pants through adolescence. Perhaps as young adults we begin to realise the importance of the nature of our living planet.
So much to be said for human intelligence when we care so little.
For me, yours is are very thought provoking words.
May 25th, 2022 01:30
dusk arising said:
On ciompleting reading your post I was left reflecting upon human nature and how it has become our nature to take for granted mother earth amongst the vast majority of folk as we grow from tender shoots in short pants through adolescence. Perhaps as young adults we begin to realise the importance of the nature of our living planet.
So much to be said for human intelligence when we care so little.
For me, yours is are very thought provoking words.
May 25th, 2022 01:30
Mother Nature #1
Aradhya said:
this is an exceptional piece, saxon.
absolutely stunning!
May 25th, 2022 01:10
Aradhya said:
this is an exceptional piece, saxon.
absolutely stunning!
May 25th, 2022 01:10
Original Thinking?
LMTobin said:
When I think of original, I think of Milton and \'Paradise Lost\'. He broke all the rules and made the demons kind of \'cool\'. I don\'t know how he was originally received--of course now everyone calls him a genius, but did they then?
May 24th, 2022 14:47
LMTobin said:
When I think of original, I think of Milton and \'Paradise Lost\'. He broke all the rules and made the demons kind of \'cool\'. I don\'t know how he was originally received--of course now everyone calls him a genius, but did they then?
May 24th, 2022 14:47
Original Thinking?
dusk arising said:
In an age of questionable civility
to step up to ones responsibility
being true to that nagging conscience
when all around are speaking nonesense
if originality be one\'s holy grail
look to history and miserably fail.
May 24th, 2022 10:40
dusk arising said:
In an age of questionable civility
to step up to ones responsibility
being true to that nagging conscience
when all around are speaking nonesense
if originality be one\'s holy grail
look to history and miserably fail.
May 24th, 2022 10:40
Original Thinking?
Rocky Lagou said:
Saxon, dear poet, just with the first two lines \"We are nothing but a by product / Of the times we live in\" I literally wanted to desist and just go straight to the comments to say \"YOU ARE A GENIUS\" but I decided to venture a little further before being that premature. Nonetheless, you did not fail to deliver. This is glorious because of it\'s truth, we\'re all \"chained to the rhythm\" like that Katy Perry song says, and we fail to accept anything that isn\'t already a \"norm.\" Wonderful job.
May 24th, 2022 09:15
Rocky Lagou said:
Saxon, dear poet, just with the first two lines \"We are nothing but a by product / Of the times we live in\" I literally wanted to desist and just go straight to the comments to say \"YOU ARE A GENIUS\" but I decided to venture a little further before being that premature. Nonetheless, you did not fail to deliver. This is glorious because of it\'s truth, we\'re all \"chained to the rhythm\" like that Katy Perry song says, and we fail to accept anything that isn\'t already a \"norm.\" Wonderful job.
May 24th, 2022 09:15
Original Thinking?
Aradhya said:
I believe original thoughts still do exist inside every person just that sometimes it\'s incredibly hard to voice them out or even to identify your own thoughts because of the pressure from society. it takes quite a lot of courage to embrace your own ideas and come forward knowing a whole world might laugh at you, deem you silly and stupid... what is rare is such courage and bravery, i believe. great lines saxon, got me thinking. beautifully done!
May 24th, 2022 08:13
Aradhya said:
I believe original thoughts still do exist inside every person just that sometimes it\'s incredibly hard to voice them out or even to identify your own thoughts because of the pressure from society. it takes quite a lot of courage to embrace your own ideas and come forward knowing a whole world might laugh at you, deem you silly and stupid... what is rare is such courage and bravery, i believe. great lines saxon, got me thinking. beautifully done!
May 24th, 2022 08:13
Original Thinking?
L. B. Mek said:
\'So who are we if we climb out this echo chamber life?
Would we be free of our labels and fabricated strifes?\'
\'To be truly original is a terrible thing
The loneliest of mountains to singularly climb
In a range of finite product based living
And borrowed time\'..
if every Poet, is owed a legacy
of lines
may these be yours, dear Poet..
(distilled, Veracity
at its most
empathetically: sincere)
I read and learn, and laud
and laud
and Laud!
thank you
May 24th, 2022 05:30
L. B. Mek said:
\'So who are we if we climb out this echo chamber life?
Would we be free of our labels and fabricated strifes?\'
\'To be truly original is a terrible thing
The loneliest of mountains to singularly climb
In a range of finite product based living
And borrowed time\'..
if every Poet, is owed a legacy
of lines
may these be yours, dear Poet..
(distilled, Veracity
at its most
empathetically: sincere)
I read and learn, and laud
and laud
and Laud!
thank you
May 24th, 2022 05:30
Original Thinking?
Distant View said:
This is doubtless true of some people. The original thinker still exists among us though, in large numbers. We must all learn to be our own person, and not be swayed by peer pressure, or what is considered the norm - if we think otherwise.
May 24th, 2022 04:36
Distant View said:
This is doubtless true of some people. The original thinker still exists among us though, in large numbers. We must all learn to be our own person, and not be swayed by peer pressure, or what is considered the norm - if we think otherwise.
May 24th, 2022 04:36
Original Thinking?
Fay Slimm. said:
Originality of thought has always been met with outright objection to the establishment - fine points made here on the loneliness caused for those brave souls who stood and still stand for singular conviction . Great read Sax.
May 24th, 2022 04:01
Fay Slimm. said:
Originality of thought has always been met with outright objection to the establishment - fine points made here on the loneliness caused for those brave souls who stood and still stand for singular conviction . Great read Sax.
May 24th, 2022 04:01
Original Thinking?
Rozina said:
Original thinking did lead to new ideas, inventions, improvisations. Yes lonely for that person at the start; must have been terrifying but exhilarating at the same time. You got me thinking...
Good one.
May 24th, 2022 02:16
Rozina said:
Original thinking did lead to new ideas, inventions, improvisations. Yes lonely for that person at the start; must have been terrifying but exhilarating at the same time. You got me thinking...
Good one.
May 24th, 2022 02:16
Original Thinking?
JudyStella said:
A different view to creativity, but hey, variety is what makes everyone unique. How I understood you poem is that how much ever we think differently we go through similar experiences of love ,rejection, sadness etc and the same -like cycle of life where we end in death. There could be sarcasm hinted as well. Nice rhymming scheme!
May 24th, 2022 02:16
JudyStella said:
A different view to creativity, but hey, variety is what makes everyone unique. How I understood you poem is that how much ever we think differently we go through similar experiences of love ,rejection, sadness etc and the same -like cycle of life where we end in death. There could be sarcasm hinted as well. Nice rhymming scheme!
May 24th, 2022 02:16
Original Thinking?
orchidee said:
What? No original thought? No light bulb moments with \'idea!\' springing up?!
Your user name \'By Product\' now? heehee.
May 24th, 2022 01:28
orchidee said:
What? No original thought? No light bulb moments with \'idea!\' springing up?!
Your user name \'By Product\' now? heehee.
May 24th, 2022 01:28
Original Thinking?
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Well expressed . Interesting and engaging read , crow 🙂
May 24th, 2022 01:13
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Well expressed . Interesting and engaging read , crow 🙂
May 24th, 2022 01:13
Original Thinking?
Goldfinch60 said:
But thinking outside the box can bring so much clarity to our own minds,
Good words SC.
Andy
May 24th, 2022 00:26
Goldfinch60 said:
But thinking outside the box can bring so much clarity to our own minds,
Good words SC.
Andy
May 24th, 2022 00:26
Recapturing Innocence
Goldfinch60 said:
The innocence of children is so wonderful to be with SC.
Andy
May 24th, 2022 00:12
Goldfinch60 said:
The innocence of children is so wonderful to be with SC.
Andy
May 24th, 2022 00:12
Recapturing Innocence
Rozina said:
I like your poem - it brought back memories of \'fun\' activities the children wanted me to see/do with them - \"jump in the puddles Mum and see the splash and who gets wetter\"!
I like Rocky\'s explanation too.
May 23rd, 2022 18:20
Rozina said:
I like your poem - it brought back memories of \'fun\' activities the children wanted me to see/do with them - \"jump in the puddles Mum and see the splash and who gets wetter\"!
I like Rocky\'s explanation too.
May 23rd, 2022 18:20
Recapturing Innocence
Rocky Lagou said:
Omg, this was such a vivid picture. I feel that the smoke can be referring to the dad\'s cigarette, and the child is so innocent that he doesn\'t even realize what that\'s causing to his father. I feel that long pause as well until we reach the father\'s response, \"ok,\" is so deep. It\'s like the dad doesn\'t want to play, but rather decides to do so because he chose the life of a father and not because he wants to in actuality. Some profound stuff.
May 23rd, 2022 08:42
Rocky Lagou said:
Omg, this was such a vivid picture. I feel that the smoke can be referring to the dad\'s cigarette, and the child is so innocent that he doesn\'t even realize what that\'s causing to his father. I feel that long pause as well until we reach the father\'s response, \"ok,\" is so deep. It\'s like the dad doesn\'t want to play, but rather decides to do so because he chose the life of a father and not because he wants to in actuality. Some profound stuff.
May 23rd, 2022 08:42
Scarecrows Secret
Rocky Lagou said:
Wow, I never thought this deeply about scarecrows until today but it\'s true. They must feel a sense of loneliness but the way you conveyed this makes it seem like they\'re okay with their solitude. Maybe they live in peace. Wonderful poem.
May 23rd, 2022 08:06
Rocky Lagou said:
Wow, I never thought this deeply about scarecrows until today but it\'s true. They must feel a sense of loneliness but the way you conveyed this makes it seem like they\'re okay with their solitude. Maybe they live in peace. Wonderful poem.
May 23rd, 2022 08:06
Recapturing Innocence
L. B. Mek said:
depends on the smoke...
but yes, the matter of fact
wisdom
of children, is what we
lose
and try to recapture, in our
adult years..
an intriguing read, and
I really enjoyed, your succinct
wording
thanks for sharing, dear Poet
May 23rd, 2022 06:46
L. B. Mek said:
depends on the smoke...
but yes, the matter of fact
wisdom
of children, is what we
lose
and try to recapture, in our
adult years..
an intriguing read, and
I really enjoyed, your succinct
wording
thanks for sharing, dear Poet
May 23rd, 2022 06:46
Recapturing Innocence
Saxon Crow said:
disco lights, party food, magicians and party food, lots of games and did I mention party food?
May 23rd, 2022 05:55
Saxon Crow said:
disco lights, party food, magicians and party food, lots of games and did I mention party food?
May 23rd, 2022 05:55
Everyday
Kevin Michael Bloor said:
a good conversational poem, lovely lyrics, with an uplifting poetic voice. (It\'s peaceful here, I\'m feeling good) Some clear imagery we can all relate to. My fave words are: \"The stillness Of the flowering trees\" Lovely lines with a steady rhythm.
May 23rd, 2022 01:22
Kevin Michael Bloor said:
a good conversational poem, lovely lyrics, with an uplifting poetic voice. (It\'s peaceful here, I\'m feeling good) Some clear imagery we can all relate to. My fave words are: \"The stillness Of the flowering trees\" Lovely lines with a steady rhythm.
May 23rd, 2022 01:22
Scarecrows Secret
Bella Shepard said:
While your scarecrow may feel so very solitary, he is not encumbered by the worries of the world. There may be something to be said for having your head filled with straw, and a smile on your face. Does he know something we don\"t? Such a fun read, thank you for a wink and a smile.
May 22nd, 2022 12:20
Bella Shepard said:
While your scarecrow may feel so very solitary, he is not encumbered by the worries of the world. There may be something to be said for having your head filled with straw, and a smile on your face. Does he know something we don\"t? Such a fun read, thank you for a wink and a smile.
May 22nd, 2022 12:20
Scarecrows Secret
Accidental Poet said:
So wonderful that a crow could appreciate a scarecrow. I think the scarecrow loves a life of watching the world around him and wondering if the world can appreciate him. You\'ve done the scarecrow justice Sax. 😉
May 22nd, 2022 08:27
Accidental Poet said:
So wonderful that a crow could appreciate a scarecrow. I think the scarecrow loves a life of watching the world around him and wondering if the world can appreciate him. You\'ve done the scarecrow justice Sax. 😉
May 22nd, 2022 08:27
Friends of the Pen
Vaughn Walker said:
Well then that means you can just use your imaginative poetry mind to guess what we are all like. 🤔
May 22nd, 2022 06:47
Vaughn Walker said:
Well then that means you can just use your imaginative poetry mind to guess what we are all like. 🤔
May 22nd, 2022 06:47
Scarecrows Secret
Thekkinkkattil said:
A real tribute to the Scare crow from Saxon crow I enjoyed it
May 22nd, 2022 04:44
Thekkinkkattil said:
A real tribute to the Scare crow from Saxon crow I enjoyed it
May 22nd, 2022 04:44
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