Comments received on poems by Saxon Crow
The Anguish of Lazarus
orchidee said:
Though he was dead, he was \'sleeping\' as it were. Was he having a good snooze?!
Yet an amazing thing to have been there - bit spooky too?
May 16th, 2022 02:14
orchidee said:
Though he was dead, he was \'sleeping\' as it were. Was he having a good snooze?!
Yet an amazing thing to have been there - bit spooky too?
May 16th, 2022 02:14
For the love of clouds
Caring dove said:
The rhythm of our hearts keep us in time
Beating out I am yours and you are mine
Lovely lines ))
May 16th, 2022 01:21
Caring dove said:
The rhythm of our hearts keep us in time
Beating out I am yours and you are mine
Lovely lines ))
May 16th, 2022 01:21
For the love of clouds
Caring dove said:
Love your poem ! Dancing on clouds .. so nicely expressed .
May 16th, 2022 01:20
Caring dove said:
Love your poem ! Dancing on clouds .. so nicely expressed .
May 16th, 2022 01:20
The Anguish of Lazarus
Goldfinch60 said:
Painful words SC, I hope this is not reality.
Andy
May 16th, 2022 00:37
Goldfinch60 said:
Painful words SC, I hope this is not reality.
Andy
May 16th, 2022 00:37
The Shamens Eyes
Rozina said:
I truly enjoyed reading your poem. I thought it would be about an evil spirit wanting something back from you if he healed the land! Super read.
May 15th, 2022 18:11
Rozina said:
I truly enjoyed reading your poem. I thought it would be about an evil spirit wanting something back from you if he healed the land! Super read.
May 15th, 2022 18:11
The Shamens Eyes
Neville said:
mightily impressed and very much enjoyed ................................ Neville
May 15th, 2022 11:27
Neville said:
mightily impressed and very much enjoyed ................................ Neville
May 15th, 2022 11:27
The Shamens Eyes
Christina8 said:
That was a wonderful write and a very enjoyable read!! Awesome!
May 15th, 2022 09:48
Christina8 said:
That was a wonderful write and a very enjoyable read!! Awesome!
May 15th, 2022 09:48
The Shamens Eyes
Accidental Poet said:
I was thinking your visitor was an angel who\'d come to enlighten your thoughts. Great read Sax. 😉
May 15th, 2022 07:32
Accidental Poet said:
I was thinking your visitor was an angel who\'d come to enlighten your thoughts. Great read Sax. 😉
May 15th, 2022 07:32
The Wood is Green
Caring dove said:
Spring is my favourite season too .Lovely writing ))
May 15th, 2022 04:49
Caring dove said:
Spring is my favourite season too .Lovely writing ))
May 15th, 2022 04:49
The Shamens Eyes
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good words SC, we must be at one with ourselves before healing others.
Andy
May 15th, 2022 01:00
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good words SC, we must be at one with ourselves before healing others.
Andy
May 15th, 2022 01:00
The Shamens Eyes
Caring dove said:
Brilliant ! Like your poem )) ‘ To heal the land
I must first heal me
Love that line
Great writing
May 15th, 2022 00:58
Caring dove said:
Brilliant ! Like your poem )) ‘ To heal the land
I must first heal me
Love that line
Great writing
May 15th, 2022 00:58
The Explorers
Rozina said:
I reflected for some time after reading your poem. For some of us, it is not easy to share our emotions. Learning to write is 1 issue but learning to share our writings takes courage and trust. MPS has been very good for both aspects. Thank you for this thought provoking poem.
May 14th, 2022 22:32
Rozina said:
I reflected for some time after reading your poem. For some of us, it is not easy to share our emotions. Learning to write is 1 issue but learning to share our writings takes courage and trust. MPS has been very good for both aspects. Thank you for this thought provoking poem.
May 14th, 2022 22:32
Oh to be Young
geekslutnerdgirl said:
Love your writing. and 4 year olds will do that to ya.
May 14th, 2022 18:26
geekslutnerdgirl said:
Love your writing. and 4 year olds will do that to ya.
May 14th, 2022 18:26
The Whisperers
Bella Shepard said:
You\'ve hit the spot where evil lies. Those who plant the seeds of discontent and cultivate it. They play with our heads in a most unforgiving way. Great, thought provoking write!
May 14th, 2022 09:44
Bella Shepard said:
You\'ve hit the spot where evil lies. Those who plant the seeds of discontent and cultivate it. They play with our heads in a most unforgiving way. Great, thought provoking write!
May 14th, 2022 09:44
The Explorers
dusk arising said:
Hmm but there again we are all different. Some will only write a few pieces about their broken heart whilst others can\'t seem to stop writing (and many wish they would LOL).
But whatever... it seems to be a part of me and in my humble way I plod on. Seeking what I wonder? I don\'t really know beyond it being cathartic to let my heart fight with words until a modicum of satisfation prompts me to say a piece is finished (though, you\'ll probably agree pieces are rarely \'finished\').
Thank you for a piece which made me reflect right down to the bare bones of what this poetry thing is for me.
May 14th, 2022 07:10
dusk arising said:
Hmm but there again we are all different. Some will only write a few pieces about their broken heart whilst others can\'t seem to stop writing (and many wish they would LOL).
But whatever... it seems to be a part of me and in my humble way I plod on. Seeking what I wonder? I don\'t really know beyond it being cathartic to let my heart fight with words until a modicum of satisfation prompts me to say a piece is finished (though, you\'ll probably agree pieces are rarely \'finished\').
Thank you for a piece which made me reflect right down to the bare bones of what this poetry thing is for me.
May 14th, 2022 07:10
The Explorers
0121_Pedro said:
It’s good to get your feelings out there, nicely put
May 14th, 2022 02:08
0121_Pedro said:
It’s good to get your feelings out there, nicely put
May 14th, 2022 02:08
The Explorers
Caring dove said:
Great poem crow )) this is so nicely expressed
Especially love these lines
But melancholy is a beautiful thing
It creates many wonderful hues
For a poet knows with an artist\'s eye
That words have their shades too
Because the world we paint with
Jumbled letters
Makes every dream come real
May 14th, 2022 00:49
Caring dove said:
Great poem crow )) this is so nicely expressed
Especially love these lines
But melancholy is a beautiful thing
It creates many wonderful hues
For a poet knows with an artist\'s eye
That words have their shades too
Because the world we paint with
Jumbled letters
Makes every dream come real
May 14th, 2022 00:49
Because of Her
Caring dove said:
These words really speak to me ‘ she is me and I am her ‘
Honestly makes me think of soulmates or even twin flames
A lovely writing ))
May 13th, 2022 15:57
Caring dove said:
These words really speak to me ‘ she is me and I am her ‘
Honestly makes me think of soulmates or even twin flames
A lovely writing ))
May 13th, 2022 15:57
The Whisperers
dusk arising said:
I can tell when you\'re having one of these dreams... your paws start to run and you quietly bark. I\'d wake you but I might get bitten.
May 13th, 2022 08:33
dusk arising said:
I can tell when you\'re having one of these dreams... your paws start to run and you quietly bark. I\'d wake you but I might get bitten.
May 13th, 2022 08:33
The Whisperers
Rocky Lagou said:
A truly eye-opening piece Saxon. Could these whispers be like those voices in our heads that tell us we aren\'t good enough or worthy? Maybe. Nonetheless, it\'s truly engaging and your rhymes are always spectacular.
May 13th, 2022 08:20
Rocky Lagou said:
A truly eye-opening piece Saxon. Could these whispers be like those voices in our heads that tell us we aren\'t good enough or worthy? Maybe. Nonetheless, it\'s truly engaging and your rhymes are always spectacular.
May 13th, 2022 08:20
The Whisperers
orchidee said:
Probably old gossips - whisperers. Not necessarily old in age, but in the sense of \'continuous gossips\'! lol.
May 13th, 2022 01:53
orchidee said:
Probably old gossips - whisperers. Not necessarily old in age, but in the sense of \'continuous gossips\'! lol.
May 13th, 2022 01:53
No, I\'m Not
PridelessIdiot said:
Beautiful poem. Rhymes and imagery were employed really well to describe the pain that was gone through. I thoroughly felt the pain that the persona was going through. *thumbs up*
May 12th, 2022 23:05
PridelessIdiot said:
Beautiful poem. Rhymes and imagery were employed really well to describe the pain that was gone through. I thoroughly felt the pain that the persona was going through. *thumbs up*
May 12th, 2022 23:05
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