Comments received on poems by Saxon Crow
No, I\'m Not
Rozina said:
Very touching and very relatable. Many relatives are also going through this now as the older generation is lost one by one.
May 12th, 2022 23:01
Rozina said:
Very touching and very relatable. Many relatives are also going through this now as the older generation is lost one by one.
May 12th, 2022 23:01
No, I\'m Not
dusk arising said:
I\'ve read this through a few times and have the feeling that this piece needed to be written. It is so well written that i sense it took time to compose and now appears as a statement of the great loss of a much loved figure in your life.
And then I read your author\'s note lol. Well i was going to delete my comment above and start again but, no... it\'s a credit to you skills as a creative writer. Well done poet.
May 12th, 2022 09:59
dusk arising said:
I\'ve read this through a few times and have the feeling that this piece needed to be written. It is so well written that i sense it took time to compose and now appears as a statement of the great loss of a much loved figure in your life.
And then I read your author\'s note lol. Well i was going to delete my comment above and start again but, no... it\'s a credit to you skills as a creative writer. Well done poet.
May 12th, 2022 09:59
No, I\'m Not
Rocky Lagou said:
Truly written well. To everyone who has lost loved ones, like myself, I know this will hit home. Your descriptions are really interesting and the rhyme ties it all together.
May 12th, 2022 09:41
Rocky Lagou said:
Truly written well. To everyone who has lost loved ones, like myself, I know this will hit home. Your descriptions are really interesting and the rhyme ties it all together.
May 12th, 2022 09:41
Oh to be Young
arqios said:
Youth finally shut out from the current day when I realised that for everything, I had to pay! As a youth everything was offered, gifted, handed out and presented. But soon as the bills came lining up, youth dulled and greyed, the spark was jaded over time. Splendid read. Thanks for sharing this poem. /Rik.
May 12th, 2022 08:21
arqios said:
Youth finally shut out from the current day when I realised that for everything, I had to pay! As a youth everything was offered, gifted, handed out and presented. But soon as the bills came lining up, youth dulled and greyed, the spark was jaded over time. Splendid read. Thanks for sharing this poem. /Rik.
May 12th, 2022 08:21
No, I\'m Not
Christina8 said:
Very well written poem on a poignant subject. I couldn\'t imagine being without my husband. Great poem about grief in general!
May 12th, 2022 06:12
Christina8 said:
Very well written poem on a poignant subject. I couldn\'t imagine being without my husband. Great poem about grief in general!
May 12th, 2022 06:12
No, I\'m Not
Distant View said:
A poignant scene. Departure and death take their toll.
May 12th, 2022 05:01
Distant View said:
A poignant scene. Departure and death take their toll.
May 12th, 2022 05:01
No, I\'m Not
L. B. Mek said:
really well written
shows great skill, to word
such a sensitive topic
whilst staying in control
of your delivery..
and crafting an emotive read
with graceful subtlety
than dramatic exaggeration..
thanks for sharing, dear Poet
\'A ringing bell upon the ear
Is an echo fading in this home
So loudly silent now I\'m on my own
The photographs all gather dust
And pots and pans all turn to rust\'
May 12th, 2022 04:54
L. B. Mek said:
really well written
shows great skill, to word
such a sensitive topic
whilst staying in control
of your delivery..
and crafting an emotive read
with graceful subtlety
than dramatic exaggeration..
thanks for sharing, dear Poet
\'A ringing bell upon the ear
Is an echo fading in this home
So loudly silent now I\'m on my own
The photographs all gather dust
And pots and pans all turn to rust\'
May 12th, 2022 04:54
No, I\'m Not
Caring dove said:
And a great expression too , crow ) well written . Grief is very difficult to deal with ..
May 12th, 2022 01:07
Caring dove said:
And a great expression too , crow ) well written . Grief is very difficult to deal with ..
May 12th, 2022 01:07
Dawn Chorus
Rozina said:
A beautiful scene of nature with bird sounds filling the air.
May 12th, 2022 01:02
Rozina said:
A beautiful scene of nature with bird sounds filling the air.
May 12th, 2022 01:02
Dawn Chorus
dusk arising said:
We had a silent dawqn chorus today - the birds are out in protest about their energy bills going up and now claim theres less stale bread put out fot them... people are eating it.
Looks like their feathers are well and truly ruffled.
Lovely poem in praise of re-awakening each day to the beauty of the natural world all around us.
May 11th, 2022 06:12
dusk arising said:
We had a silent dawqn chorus today - the birds are out in protest about their energy bills going up and now claim theres less stale bread put out fot them... people are eating it.
Looks like their feathers are well and truly ruffled.
Lovely poem in praise of re-awakening each day to the beauty of the natural world all around us.
May 11th, 2022 06:12
Dawn Chorus
Goldfinch60 said:
Superb words SC we must always connect with Nature every time we are able.
Andy
May 11th, 2022 02:33
Goldfinch60 said:
Superb words SC we must always connect with Nature every time we are able.
Andy
May 11th, 2022 02:33
Dawn Chorus
Caring dove said:
‘ I’m singing with the dawn chorus ‘ love that line
May 11th, 2022 00:53
Caring dove said:
‘ I’m singing with the dawn chorus ‘ love that line
May 11th, 2022 00:53
Dawn Chorus
Caring dove said:
Lovely writing , crow 🙂 so nicely expressed . Yes , we just have to look out of our window .. and nature is so nice , I am in awe of it too ..
May 11th, 2022 00:52
Caring dove said:
Lovely writing , crow 🙂 so nicely expressed . Yes , we just have to look out of our window .. and nature is so nice , I am in awe of it too ..
May 11th, 2022 00:52
Prude for a reason
Rocky Lagou said:
Teehee. This one was worth a good chuckle. Sometimes being a \"prude\" is the most PRUDEnt choice! ;)
May 10th, 2022 09:20
Rocky Lagou said:
Teehee. This one was worth a good chuckle. Sometimes being a \"prude\" is the most PRUDEnt choice! ;)
May 10th, 2022 09:20
Prude for a reason
dusk arising said:
Somewhere along the line in this ageing process it becomes quite acceptable to realise that what we feel in bed with our passionate partner is just history repeating itself. We will go on into our later years and passion will not stop. Undenyably it will change as we change, as our elders do and have.
Human nature doesn\'t change. Though we earnestly wish the violent aspects of it should.
May 10th, 2022 02:43
dusk arising said:
Somewhere along the line in this ageing process it becomes quite acceptable to realise that what we feel in bed with our passionate partner is just history repeating itself. We will go on into our later years and passion will not stop. Undenyably it will change as we change, as our elders do and have.
Human nature doesn\'t change. Though we earnestly wish the violent aspects of it should.
May 10th, 2022 02:43
Prude for a reason
Rozina said:
So funny! Laughing this whole morning. I\'m going to post about hair, my hairdo!
May 10th, 2022 02:33
Rozina said:
So funny! Laughing this whole morning. I\'m going to post about hair, my hairdo!
May 10th, 2022 02:33
Prude for a reason
orchidee said:
Good write SC.
You mean a little more decorum from me?! lol.
May 10th, 2022 02:00
orchidee said:
Good write SC.
You mean a little more decorum from me?! lol.
May 10th, 2022 02:00
Prude for a reason
Goldfinch60 said:
Well I wonder what this is all about , I was only making a cup of tea!
Andy
May 10th, 2022 01:53
Goldfinch60 said:
Well I wonder what this is all about , I was only making a cup of tea!
Andy
May 10th, 2022 01:53
Oh to be Young
L. B. Mek said:
so relatable!
thank you, dear Poet
\'To be free to do
Whatever you want
Not hampered by tiredness
And a ticking clock
Oh to be young
Something once tasted
It really is true
On the young
Youth is wasted\'
May 9th, 2022 05:51
L. B. Mek said:
so relatable!
thank you, dear Poet
\'To be free to do
Whatever you want
Not hampered by tiredness
And a ticking clock
Oh to be young
Something once tasted
It really is true
On the young
Youth is wasted\'
May 9th, 2022 05:51
Oh to be Young
dusk arising said:
Here here.
But i have a secret, for there is still a youngster at play in my head.
May 9th, 2022 04:07
dusk arising said:
Here here.
But i have a secret, for there is still a youngster at play in my head.
May 9th, 2022 04:07
Oh to be Young
Rozina said:
Sometimes I feel this way too but more often than not I am pleased at how I\'m coping with ageing. Health is the main concern, everything else not so significant. An interesting discussion point.
May 9th, 2022 03:06
Rozina said:
Sometimes I feel this way too but more often than not I am pleased at how I\'m coping with ageing. Health is the main concern, everything else not so significant. An interesting discussion point.
May 9th, 2022 03:06
Oh to be Young
Caring dove said:
The young aren’t always happy . I was never happy as a child or a teenager , or even confident . A good writing tho .
I think we can all look back .. wanting to be younger or to have had things differently .. I wander how am I 37 , as if I don’t understand where the time has gone .. makes me sad sometimes .. anyway
May 9th, 2022 01:44
Caring dove said:
The young aren’t always happy . I was never happy as a child or a teenager , or even confident . A good writing tho .
I think we can all look back .. wanting to be younger or to have had things differently .. I wander how am I 37 , as if I don’t understand where the time has gone .. makes me sad sometimes .. anyway
May 9th, 2022 01:44
Oh to be Young
Goldfinch60 said:
You will not be vacated yet from this world SC you have a long way to go to catch me up.
Even at my age I am still active and still think that my life is so wonderful and am so grateful for it to be this way.
Andy
May 9th, 2022 01:42
Goldfinch60 said:
You will not be vacated yet from this world SC you have a long way to go to catch me up.
Even at my age I am still active and still think that my life is so wonderful and am so grateful for it to be this way.
Andy
May 9th, 2022 01:42
Smith Johnsons Diet
SureshG said:
Humor, no matter it’s shape or form, is mostly welcomed, like your poem indeed.
May 8th, 2022 12:09
SureshG said:
Humor, no matter it’s shape or form, is mostly welcomed, like your poem indeed.
May 8th, 2022 12:09
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