Comments received on poems by Saxon Crow



Friends of the Pen
Rozina said:

But we could have food and drink together can\'t we? After some drinks some people get along very well together!

May 18th, 2022 01:09

Friends of the Pen
Goldfinch60 said:

So you don\'t want to meet me then!!! LOL.

Andy

May 18th, 2022 01:02

Friends of the Pen
Caring dove said:

Good writing crow 🙂 and in some ways I agree . We can’t always get along with everyone and even online we might think we would want to meet them .. but if we did it might upset us or yeah thjngs might not go as expected

May 18th, 2022 00:21

Everyday
Rozina said:

I walk or cycle every morning around my quiet neighbourhood and your poem is very much like my morning jaunts. It is most enjoyable outside in the fresh air. Might see a neighbour walking the dog or someone else out for a jog. Your poem is just right! So nice.

May 17th, 2022 18:00

Everyday
Rocky Lagou said:

What a great poem Saxon! I felt as if it were really me going through your morning routine. I\'m glad you feel at peace when connected with the outdoors. May you have many more walks to come!

May 17th, 2022 08:09

Everyday
Christina8 said:

Beautiful introspective write.......Great read!! Christina

May 17th, 2022 06:25

Everyday
L. B. Mek said:

\'There\'s only rain
On dew soaked grass
Down the street
I follow feet
Around the corner
To the farmers field
The view is green
Where I look
It\'s peaceful here\'..
(a journey, in a read!
Brilliantly realised, jam packed
with such intricate details
making it all, so vividly immersive..)
thank you!
for sharing, such an introvertedly
fulfilling, reading experience
dear Poet

May 17th, 2022 05:30

Everyday
orchidee said:

Good write SC.
I was gonna write an unprintable poem called \'Everyday I\'m gonna sing!\' Arrgghhh, it\'s too horrific and terrifying to publish. lol.

May 17th, 2022 01:29

Everyday
Caring dove said:

Hi crow , )) we can all have our routines , but sometimes they can feel mundane abs boring can’t they . Nature can make things feel a bit brighter tho . A nice writing 🙂

May 17th, 2022 00:38

Everyday
Goldfinch60 said:

Each morning will bring us more wonder SC, as mine do every day.

Andy

May 17th, 2022 00:37

The Anguish of Lazarus
Rozina said:

Different, morbid but interesting!

May 16th, 2022 18:20

The Anguish of Lazarus
Paul Bell said:

They do say the 60s were the decade to be around, so If I was Lazarus, I would want to come back then. Mind you, he might hate music.

May 16th, 2022 11:51

The Anguish of Lazarus
L. B. Mek said:

wonderful characterisation
a perspective and tone
that\'s very understandable..
(and that whole chapter and verse
reads to me
like a morbid fantasy within
a fantastical fantasy..
on so many levels
see, like you
I would consider
being saved from death
as a mercy, maybe..
but
being brought back, from death
that\'s more like
a human mind\'s, ill-conceived
horrific, fairy-tale!
goes to show, whoever came up with that story
in the \'good\' book
was as obsessed with death
as we are..
and that\'s an indication of how far
removed
from godliness, those words are...\'
(forgive me if my opinions cause offence
this is just my feeble perspective,
nothing more
although, nothing less - either)
thanks for sharing, dear Poet

May 16th, 2022 05:54

The Anguish of Lazarus
orchidee said:

Though he was dead, he was \'sleeping\' as it were. Was he having a good snooze?!
Yet an amazing thing to have been there - bit spooky too?

May 16th, 2022 02:14

For the love of clouds
Caring dove said:

The rhythm of our hearts keep us in time
Beating out I am yours and you are mine

Lovely lines ))

May 16th, 2022 01:21

For the love of clouds
Caring dove said:

Love your poem ! Dancing on clouds .. so nicely expressed .

May 16th, 2022 01:20

The Anguish of Lazarus
Goldfinch60 said:

Painful words SC, I hope this is not reality.

Andy

May 16th, 2022 00:37

The Shamens Eyes
Rozina said:

I truly enjoyed reading your poem. I thought it would be about an evil spirit wanting something back from you if he healed the land! Super read.

May 15th, 2022 18:11

The Shamens Eyes
Neville said:


mightily impressed and very much enjoyed ................................ Neville

May 15th, 2022 11:27

The Shamens Eyes
Christina8 said:

That was a wonderful write and a very enjoyable read!! Awesome!

May 15th, 2022 09:48

The Wood is Green
Caring dove said:

Spring is my favourite season too .Lovely writing ))

May 15th, 2022 04:49

The Shamens Eyes
orchidee said:

Was that crow a relative of yours?! heehee.

May 15th, 2022 02:08

The Shamens Eyes
Goldfinch60 said:

Very good words SC, we must be at one with ourselves before healing others.

Andy

May 15th, 2022 01:00

The Shamens Eyes
Caring dove said:

Brilliant ! Like your poem )) ‘ To heal the land
I must first heal me

Love that line

Great writing

May 15th, 2022 00:58

The Explorers
Rozina said:

I reflected for some time after reading your poem. For some of us, it is not easy to share our emotions. Learning to write is 1 issue but learning to share our writings takes courage and trust. MPS has been very good for both aspects. Thank you for this thought provoking poem.

May 14th, 2022 22:32

Oh to be Young
geekslutnerdgirl said:

Love your writing. and 4 year olds will do that to ya.

May 14th, 2022 18:26

The Whisperers
Bella Shepard said:

You\'ve hit the spot where evil lies. Those who plant the seeds of discontent and cultivate it. They play with our heads in a most unforgiving way. Great, thought provoking write!

May 14th, 2022 09:44

The Explorers
dusk arising said:

Hmm but there again we are all different. Some will only write a few pieces about their broken heart whilst others can\'t seem to stop writing (and many wish they would LOL).
But whatever... it seems to be a part of me and in my humble way I plod on. Seeking what I wonder? I don\'t really know beyond it being cathartic to let my heart fight with words until a modicum of satisfation prompts me to say a piece is finished (though, you\'ll probably agree pieces are rarely \'finished\').

Thank you for a piece which made me reflect right down to the bare bones of what this poetry thing is for me.


May 14th, 2022 07:10

The Explorers
0121_Pedro said:

It’s good to get your feelings out there, nicely put

May 14th, 2022 02:08

The Explorers
orchidee said:

Good write SC.

May 14th, 2022 01:26



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