Comments received on poems by Saxon Crow
Oh to be Young
geekslutnerdgirl said:
Love your writing. and 4 year olds will do that to ya.
May 14th, 2022 18:26
geekslutnerdgirl said:
Love your writing. and 4 year olds will do that to ya.
May 14th, 2022 18:26
The Whisperers
Bella Shepard said:
You\'ve hit the spot where evil lies. Those who plant the seeds of discontent and cultivate it. They play with our heads in a most unforgiving way. Great, thought provoking write!
May 14th, 2022 09:44
Bella Shepard said:
You\'ve hit the spot where evil lies. Those who plant the seeds of discontent and cultivate it. They play with our heads in a most unforgiving way. Great, thought provoking write!
May 14th, 2022 09:44
The Explorers
dusk arising said:
Hmm but there again we are all different. Some will only write a few pieces about their broken heart whilst others can\'t seem to stop writing (and many wish they would LOL).
But whatever... it seems to be a part of me and in my humble way I plod on. Seeking what I wonder? I don\'t really know beyond it being cathartic to let my heart fight with words until a modicum of satisfation prompts me to say a piece is finished (though, you\'ll probably agree pieces are rarely \'finished\').
Thank you for a piece which made me reflect right down to the bare bones of what this poetry thing is for me.
May 14th, 2022 07:10
dusk arising said:
Hmm but there again we are all different. Some will only write a few pieces about their broken heart whilst others can\'t seem to stop writing (and many wish they would LOL).
But whatever... it seems to be a part of me and in my humble way I plod on. Seeking what I wonder? I don\'t really know beyond it being cathartic to let my heart fight with words until a modicum of satisfation prompts me to say a piece is finished (though, you\'ll probably agree pieces are rarely \'finished\').
Thank you for a piece which made me reflect right down to the bare bones of what this poetry thing is for me.
May 14th, 2022 07:10
The Explorers
0121_Pedro said:
It’s good to get your feelings out there, nicely put
May 14th, 2022 02:08
0121_Pedro said:
It’s good to get your feelings out there, nicely put
May 14th, 2022 02:08
The Explorers
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Great poem crow )) this is so nicely expressed
Especially love these lines
But melancholy is a beautiful thing
It creates many wonderful hues
For a poet knows with an artist\'s eye
That words have their shades too
Because the world we paint with
Jumbled letters
Makes every dream come real
May 14th, 2022 00:49
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Great poem crow )) this is so nicely expressed
Especially love these lines
But melancholy is a beautiful thing
It creates many wonderful hues
For a poet knows with an artist\'s eye
That words have their shades too
Because the world we paint with
Jumbled letters
Makes every dream come real
May 14th, 2022 00:49
Because of Her
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Beautiful last lines
May 13th, 2022 16:14
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Beautiful last lines
May 13th, 2022 16:14
Because of Her
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
These words really speak to me ‘ she is me and I am her ‘
Honestly makes me think of soulmates or even twin flames
A lovely writing ))
May 13th, 2022 15:57
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
These words really speak to me ‘ she is me and I am her ‘
Honestly makes me think of soulmates or even twin flames
A lovely writing ))
May 13th, 2022 15:57
The Whisperers
dusk arising said:
I can tell when you\'re having one of these dreams... your paws start to run and you quietly bark. I\'d wake you but I might get bitten.
May 13th, 2022 08:33
dusk arising said:
I can tell when you\'re having one of these dreams... your paws start to run and you quietly bark. I\'d wake you but I might get bitten.
May 13th, 2022 08:33
The Whisperers
Rocky Lagou said:
A truly eye-opening piece Saxon. Could these whispers be like those voices in our heads that tell us we aren\'t good enough or worthy? Maybe. Nonetheless, it\'s truly engaging and your rhymes are always spectacular.
May 13th, 2022 08:20
Rocky Lagou said:
A truly eye-opening piece Saxon. Could these whispers be like those voices in our heads that tell us we aren\'t good enough or worthy? Maybe. Nonetheless, it\'s truly engaging and your rhymes are always spectacular.
May 13th, 2022 08:20
The Whisperers
orchidee said:
Probably old gossips - whisperers. Not necessarily old in age, but in the sense of \'continuous gossips\'! lol.
May 13th, 2022 01:53
orchidee said:
Probably old gossips - whisperers. Not necessarily old in age, but in the sense of \'continuous gossips\'! lol.
May 13th, 2022 01:53
No, I\'m Not
PridelessIdiot said:
Beautiful poem. Rhymes and imagery were employed really well to describe the pain that was gone through. I thoroughly felt the pain that the persona was going through. *thumbs up*
May 12th, 2022 23:05
PridelessIdiot said:
Beautiful poem. Rhymes and imagery were employed really well to describe the pain that was gone through. I thoroughly felt the pain that the persona was going through. *thumbs up*
May 12th, 2022 23:05
No, I\'m Not
Rozina said:
Very touching and very relatable. Many relatives are also going through this now as the older generation is lost one by one.
May 12th, 2022 23:01
Rozina said:
Very touching and very relatable. Many relatives are also going through this now as the older generation is lost one by one.
May 12th, 2022 23:01
No, I\'m Not
dusk arising said:
I\'ve read this through a few times and have the feeling that this piece needed to be written. It is so well written that i sense it took time to compose and now appears as a statement of the great loss of a much loved figure in your life.
And then I read your author\'s note lol. Well i was going to delete my comment above and start again but, no... it\'s a credit to you skills as a creative writer. Well done poet.
May 12th, 2022 09:59
dusk arising said:
I\'ve read this through a few times and have the feeling that this piece needed to be written. It is so well written that i sense it took time to compose and now appears as a statement of the great loss of a much loved figure in your life.
And then I read your author\'s note lol. Well i was going to delete my comment above and start again but, no... it\'s a credit to you skills as a creative writer. Well done poet.
May 12th, 2022 09:59
No, I\'m Not
Rocky Lagou said:
Truly written well. To everyone who has lost loved ones, like myself, I know this will hit home. Your descriptions are really interesting and the rhyme ties it all together.
May 12th, 2022 09:41
Rocky Lagou said:
Truly written well. To everyone who has lost loved ones, like myself, I know this will hit home. Your descriptions are really interesting and the rhyme ties it all together.
May 12th, 2022 09:41
Oh to be Young
arqios said:
Youth finally shut out from the current day when I realised that for everything, I had to pay! As a youth everything was offered, gifted, handed out and presented. But soon as the bills came lining up, youth dulled and greyed, the spark was jaded over time. Splendid read. Thanks for sharing this poem. /Rik.
May 12th, 2022 08:21
arqios said:
Youth finally shut out from the current day when I realised that for everything, I had to pay! As a youth everything was offered, gifted, handed out and presented. But soon as the bills came lining up, youth dulled and greyed, the spark was jaded over time. Splendid read. Thanks for sharing this poem. /Rik.
May 12th, 2022 08:21
No, I\'m Not
Christina8 said:
Very well written poem on a poignant subject. I couldn\'t imagine being without my husband. Great poem about grief in general!
May 12th, 2022 06:12
Christina8 said:
Very well written poem on a poignant subject. I couldn\'t imagine being without my husband. Great poem about grief in general!
May 12th, 2022 06:12
No, I\'m Not
Distant View said:
A poignant scene. Departure and death take their toll.
May 12th, 2022 05:01
Distant View said:
A poignant scene. Departure and death take their toll.
May 12th, 2022 05:01
No, I\'m Not
L. B. Mek said:
really well written
shows great skill, to word
such a sensitive topic
whilst staying in control
of your delivery..
and crafting an emotive read
with graceful subtlety
than dramatic exaggeration..
thanks for sharing, dear Poet
\'A ringing bell upon the ear
Is an echo fading in this home
So loudly silent now I\'m on my own
The photographs all gather dust
And pots and pans all turn to rust\'
May 12th, 2022 04:54
L. B. Mek said:
really well written
shows great skill, to word
such a sensitive topic
whilst staying in control
of your delivery..
and crafting an emotive read
with graceful subtlety
than dramatic exaggeration..
thanks for sharing, dear Poet
\'A ringing bell upon the ear
Is an echo fading in this home
So loudly silent now I\'m on my own
The photographs all gather dust
And pots and pans all turn to rust\'
May 12th, 2022 04:54
No, I\'m Not
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
And a great expression too , crow ) well written . Grief is very difficult to deal with ..
May 12th, 2022 01:07
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
And a great expression too , crow ) well written . Grief is very difficult to deal with ..
May 12th, 2022 01:07
Dawn Chorus
Rozina said:
A beautiful scene of nature with bird sounds filling the air.
May 12th, 2022 01:02
Rozina said:
A beautiful scene of nature with bird sounds filling the air.
May 12th, 2022 01:02
Dawn Chorus
dusk arising said:
We had a silent dawqn chorus today - the birds are out in protest about their energy bills going up and now claim theres less stale bread put out fot them... people are eating it.
Looks like their feathers are well and truly ruffled.
Lovely poem in praise of re-awakening each day to the beauty of the natural world all around us.
May 11th, 2022 06:12
dusk arising said:
We had a silent dawqn chorus today - the birds are out in protest about their energy bills going up and now claim theres less stale bread put out fot them... people are eating it.
Looks like their feathers are well and truly ruffled.
Lovely poem in praise of re-awakening each day to the beauty of the natural world all around us.
May 11th, 2022 06:12
« Return to the profile of Saxon Crow
