Comments received on poems by Saxon Crow
Last Journey?
dusk arising said:
A spiritual journey indeed... and who knows where to.. but a positive faith in that which awaits is a wholesome thing.
May 31st, 2022 01:08
dusk arising said:
A spiritual journey indeed... and who knows where to.. but a positive faith in that which awaits is a wholesome thing.
May 31st, 2022 01:08
Last Journey?
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words SC, strangely as you put on dusk arisings poem today my poem today will be of the same ilk. Great minds.......
Andy
May 31st, 2022 00:56
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words SC, strangely as you put on dusk arisings poem today my poem today will be of the same ilk. Great minds.......
Andy
May 31st, 2022 00:56
Last Journey?
tallisman said:
This hit a spot! Really enjoyed the gentle flow of this poem, which matched the flow of the river, beautifully written, I bow before you!
May 31st, 2022 00:51
tallisman said:
This hit a spot! Really enjoyed the gentle flow of this poem, which matched the flow of the river, beautifully written, I bow before you!
May 31st, 2022 00:51
Fate #2
Aradhya said:
long distance love... never expected this ending at the beginning of the poem! you have however beautifully expressed with powerful imagery, the loneliness of a man whose lover is seas apart. beautiful work, saxon!
May 26th, 2022 23:52
Aradhya said:
long distance love... never expected this ending at the beginning of the poem! you have however beautifully expressed with powerful imagery, the loneliness of a man whose lover is seas apart. beautiful work, saxon!
May 26th, 2022 23:52
Fate #2
JudyStella said:
I love the narrative style, it flows effortlessly like a waterfall! Seems like you’d be a good writer too in addition to a poet!
May 26th, 2022 11:42
JudyStella said:
I love the narrative style, it flows effortlessly like a waterfall! Seems like you’d be a good writer too in addition to a poet!
May 26th, 2022 11:42
Fate #2
L. B. Mek said:
\'Driving to work not a word yet spoken
A vow of silence not consciously given\'..
there is a tenderness in these words
that resonates, with so many diverse
feelings..
(showcasing Great
story telling skill, dear Poet
I\'ll make sure to read it all
would be a great help
if you could give us links
to the corresponding parts)
May 26th, 2022 05:30
L. B. Mek said:
\'Driving to work not a word yet spoken
A vow of silence not consciously given\'..
there is a tenderness in these words
that resonates, with so many diverse
feelings..
(showcasing Great
story telling skill, dear Poet
I\'ll make sure to read it all
would be a great help
if you could give us links
to the corresponding parts)
May 26th, 2022 05:30
Fate #2
dusk arising said:
Nicely written. I sensed lonliness and of course the last three lines stopped me dead in my tracks... unkind of you saxon - you made me think LOL. I recall a time when i had an online \'thing\' with a lady abroad. She was 5 hours behind and I had a clock showing this. Strange days upon reflection.
May 26th, 2022 02:35
dusk arising said:
Nicely written. I sensed lonliness and of course the last three lines stopped me dead in my tracks... unkind of you saxon - you made me think LOL. I recall a time when i had an online \'thing\' with a lady abroad. She was 5 hours behind and I had a clock showing this. Strange days upon reflection.
May 26th, 2022 02:35
Fate #2
Caring dove said:
I like your writing 🙂 really like how you have expressed yourself .. it’s almost like a story , really . ‘ wiping dream dust away ‘ love that line .
Feel sorry for the guy who’s only able to smile for one moment
May 26th, 2022 01:46
Caring dove said:
I like your writing 🙂 really like how you have expressed yourself .. it’s almost like a story , really . ‘ wiping dream dust away ‘ love that line .
Feel sorry for the guy who’s only able to smile for one moment
May 26th, 2022 01:46
Fate #2
orchidee said:
Did ya overdo it - put the clock back (or forward) five and half hours, instead of one hour?!
May 26th, 2022 01:36
orchidee said:
Did ya overdo it - put the clock back (or forward) five and half hours, instead of one hour?!
May 26th, 2022 01:36
Fate #2
Goldfinch60 said:
Intriguing words at the end of these good words SC.
Andy
May 26th, 2022 00:33
Goldfinch60 said:
Intriguing words at the end of these good words SC.
Andy
May 26th, 2022 00:33
Mother Nature #1
Fay Slimm. said:
Living with nature is vital as this food-for-thought poem describes Sax - we all need to look deeper to see where this planet is going by selfish behaviour - this gem goes into my list of faves dear friend.
May 25th, 2022 06:42
Fay Slimm. said:
Living with nature is vital as this food-for-thought poem describes Sax - we all need to look deeper to see where this planet is going by selfish behaviour - this gem goes into my list of faves dear friend.
May 25th, 2022 06:42
Mother Nature #1
Michael Edwards said:
Your poetry goes from strength to strength - some read this.
May 25th, 2022 04:44
Michael Edwards said:
Your poetry goes from strength to strength - some read this.
May 25th, 2022 04:44
Mother Nature #1
orchidee said:
Good write SC.
You know Mrs or Ms Nature? Now I\'m being anthropom-wotsit. Word is so long I forgot the end of it. lol.
May 25th, 2022 02:25
orchidee said:
Good write SC.
You know Mrs or Ms Nature? Now I\'m being anthropom-wotsit. Word is so long I forgot the end of it. lol.
May 25th, 2022 02:25
Mother Nature #1
dusk arising said:
On ciompleting reading your post I was left reflecting upon human nature and how it has become our nature to take for granted mother earth amongst the vast majority of folk as we grow from tender shoots in short pants through adolescence. Perhaps as young adults we begin to realise the importance of the nature of our living planet.
So much to be said for human intelligence when we care so little.
For me, yours is are very thought provoking words.
May 25th, 2022 01:30
dusk arising said:
On ciompleting reading your post I was left reflecting upon human nature and how it has become our nature to take for granted mother earth amongst the vast majority of folk as we grow from tender shoots in short pants through adolescence. Perhaps as young adults we begin to realise the importance of the nature of our living planet.
So much to be said for human intelligence when we care so little.
For me, yours is are very thought provoking words.
May 25th, 2022 01:30
Mother Nature #1
Aradhya said:
this is an exceptional piece, saxon.
absolutely stunning!
May 25th, 2022 01:10
Aradhya said:
this is an exceptional piece, saxon.
absolutely stunning!
May 25th, 2022 01:10
Original Thinking?
LMTobin said:
When I think of original, I think of Milton and \'Paradise Lost\'. He broke all the rules and made the demons kind of \'cool\'. I don\'t know how he was originally received--of course now everyone calls him a genius, but did they then?
May 24th, 2022 14:47
LMTobin said:
When I think of original, I think of Milton and \'Paradise Lost\'. He broke all the rules and made the demons kind of \'cool\'. I don\'t know how he was originally received--of course now everyone calls him a genius, but did they then?
May 24th, 2022 14:47
Original Thinking?
dusk arising said:
In an age of questionable civility
to step up to ones responsibility
being true to that nagging conscience
when all around are speaking nonesense
if originality be one\'s holy grail
look to history and miserably fail.
May 24th, 2022 10:40
dusk arising said:
In an age of questionable civility
to step up to ones responsibility
being true to that nagging conscience
when all around are speaking nonesense
if originality be one\'s holy grail
look to history and miserably fail.
May 24th, 2022 10:40
Original Thinking?
Rocky Lagou said:
Saxon, dear poet, just with the first two lines \"We are nothing but a by product / Of the times we live in\" I literally wanted to desist and just go straight to the comments to say \"YOU ARE A GENIUS\" but I decided to venture a little further before being that premature. Nonetheless, you did not fail to deliver. This is glorious because of it\'s truth, we\'re all \"chained to the rhythm\" like that Katy Perry song says, and we fail to accept anything that isn\'t already a \"norm.\" Wonderful job.
May 24th, 2022 09:15
Rocky Lagou said:
Saxon, dear poet, just with the first two lines \"We are nothing but a by product / Of the times we live in\" I literally wanted to desist and just go straight to the comments to say \"YOU ARE A GENIUS\" but I decided to venture a little further before being that premature. Nonetheless, you did not fail to deliver. This is glorious because of it\'s truth, we\'re all \"chained to the rhythm\" like that Katy Perry song says, and we fail to accept anything that isn\'t already a \"norm.\" Wonderful job.
May 24th, 2022 09:15
Original Thinking?
Aradhya said:
I believe original thoughts still do exist inside every person just that sometimes it\'s incredibly hard to voice them out or even to identify your own thoughts because of the pressure from society. it takes quite a lot of courage to embrace your own ideas and come forward knowing a whole world might laugh at you, deem you silly and stupid... what is rare is such courage and bravery, i believe. great lines saxon, got me thinking. beautifully done!
May 24th, 2022 08:13
Aradhya said:
I believe original thoughts still do exist inside every person just that sometimes it\'s incredibly hard to voice them out or even to identify your own thoughts because of the pressure from society. it takes quite a lot of courage to embrace your own ideas and come forward knowing a whole world might laugh at you, deem you silly and stupid... what is rare is such courage and bravery, i believe. great lines saxon, got me thinking. beautifully done!
May 24th, 2022 08:13
Original Thinking?
L. B. Mek said:
\'So who are we if we climb out this echo chamber life?
Would we be free of our labels and fabricated strifes?\'
\'To be truly original is a terrible thing
The loneliest of mountains to singularly climb
In a range of finite product based living
And borrowed time\'..
if every Poet, is owed a legacy
of lines
may these be yours, dear Poet..
(distilled, Veracity
at its most
empathetically: sincere)
I read and learn, and laud
and laud
and Laud!
thank you
May 24th, 2022 05:30
L. B. Mek said:
\'So who are we if we climb out this echo chamber life?
Would we be free of our labels and fabricated strifes?\'
\'To be truly original is a terrible thing
The loneliest of mountains to singularly climb
In a range of finite product based living
And borrowed time\'..
if every Poet, is owed a legacy
of lines
may these be yours, dear Poet..
(distilled, Veracity
at its most
empathetically: sincere)
I read and learn, and laud
and laud
and Laud!
thank you
May 24th, 2022 05:30
Original Thinking?
Distant View said:
This is doubtless true of some people. The original thinker still exists among us though, in large numbers. We must all learn to be our own person, and not be swayed by peer pressure, or what is considered the norm - if we think otherwise.
May 24th, 2022 04:36
Distant View said:
This is doubtless true of some people. The original thinker still exists among us though, in large numbers. We must all learn to be our own person, and not be swayed by peer pressure, or what is considered the norm - if we think otherwise.
May 24th, 2022 04:36
Original Thinking?
Fay Slimm. said:
Originality of thought has always been met with outright objection to the establishment - fine points made here on the loneliness caused for those brave souls who stood and still stand for singular conviction . Great read Sax.
May 24th, 2022 04:01
Fay Slimm. said:
Originality of thought has always been met with outright objection to the establishment - fine points made here on the loneliness caused for those brave souls who stood and still stand for singular conviction . Great read Sax.
May 24th, 2022 04:01
Original Thinking?
Rozina said:
Original thinking did lead to new ideas, inventions, improvisations. Yes lonely for that person at the start; must have been terrifying but exhilarating at the same time. You got me thinking...
Good one.
May 24th, 2022 02:16
Rozina said:
Original thinking did lead to new ideas, inventions, improvisations. Yes lonely for that person at the start; must have been terrifying but exhilarating at the same time. You got me thinking...
Good one.
May 24th, 2022 02:16
Original Thinking?
JudyStella said:
A different view to creativity, but hey, variety is what makes everyone unique. How I understood you poem is that how much ever we think differently we go through similar experiences of love ,rejection, sadness etc and the same -like cycle of life where we end in death. There could be sarcasm hinted as well. Nice rhymming scheme!
May 24th, 2022 02:16
JudyStella said:
A different view to creativity, but hey, variety is what makes everyone unique. How I understood you poem is that how much ever we think differently we go through similar experiences of love ,rejection, sadness etc and the same -like cycle of life where we end in death. There could be sarcasm hinted as well. Nice rhymming scheme!
May 24th, 2022 02:16
Original Thinking?
orchidee said:
What? No original thought? No light bulb moments with \'idea!\' springing up?!
Your user name \'By Product\' now? heehee.
May 24th, 2022 01:28
orchidee said:
What? No original thought? No light bulb moments with \'idea!\' springing up?!
Your user name \'By Product\' now? heehee.
May 24th, 2022 01:28
Original Thinking?
Caring dove said:
Well expressed . Interesting and engaging read , crow 🙂
May 24th, 2022 01:13
Caring dove said:
Well expressed . Interesting and engaging read , crow 🙂
May 24th, 2022 01:13
Original Thinking?
Goldfinch60 said:
But thinking outside the box can bring so much clarity to our own minds,
Good words SC.
Andy
May 24th, 2022 00:26
Goldfinch60 said:
But thinking outside the box can bring so much clarity to our own minds,
Good words SC.
Andy
May 24th, 2022 00:26
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