Comments received on poems by Saxon Crow
Farmer\'s Lament
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words SC, the antipathy of your previous verse showing that we need to be aware of all the circumstances of why things are done.
Andy
May 2nd, 2022 01:12
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words SC, the antipathy of your previous verse showing that we need to be aware of all the circumstances of why things are done.
Andy
May 2nd, 2022 01:12
Skylark
Goldfinch60 said:
Such sad words SC, nature being destroyed is deplorable.
Andy
May 2nd, 2022 00:50
Goldfinch60 said:
Such sad words SC, nature being destroyed is deplorable.
Andy
May 2nd, 2022 00:50
Farmer\'s Lament
Caring dove said:
Good writing , crow đ sometimes we can judge but they might think their doing their best .. Iâm sure farmers care .. but I guess they are maybe just not perfect . A well expressed poem .
May 2nd, 2022 00:38
Caring dove said:
Good writing , crow đ sometimes we can judge but they might think their doing their best .. Iâm sure farmers care .. but I guess they are maybe just not perfect . A well expressed poem .
May 2nd, 2022 00:38
Skylark
Fay Slimm. said:
Oh how very sad Sax - skylarks have long gone from walks I take on the Cornish coast towans here whereas I used to thrill at the first song in the year they sang - -shame on the greed shown by those who ignore the diverse gift of nature.
May 1st, 2022 10:38
Fay Slimm. said:
Oh how very sad Sax - skylarks have long gone from walks I take on the Cornish coast towans here whereas I used to thrill at the first song in the year they sang - -shame on the greed shown by those who ignore the diverse gift of nature.
May 1st, 2022 10:38
Skylark
Michael Edwards said:
Sadly it\'s a me me society these days - your poem admirably draws attention to the fate of these poor birds.
May 1st, 2022 08:32
Michael Edwards said:
Sadly it\'s a me me society these days - your poem admirably draws attention to the fate of these poor birds.
May 1st, 2022 08:32
Skylark
ChrisLynđ said:
Itâs like blindly jumping to conclusions, doing stuff for your own greed , not caring about others but just yourself . I liked the flow of the poem . Good one Saxon đđ
May 1st, 2022 07:03
ChrisLynđ said:
Itâs like blindly jumping to conclusions, doing stuff for your own greed , not caring about others but just yourself . I liked the flow of the poem . Good one Saxon đđ
May 1st, 2022 07:03
Skylark
dusk arising said:
The sad reality of farming though unfair for us to consider farmers to be an uncaring lot. The\'ye the one\'s who are in very close contact with the natural life of our lands more than anyone and from my little experience of contact with them i have found them to nurture and care.
Yet death beneath our tyres on the roadway goes largely unseen and un commented upon unless it is a fox ,badger or another beautiful beast. The lowly insect crushed under tyre or splattered on a windscreen gets little consideration. All are god\'s creations. Mohandas Ghandi would not use transport and walked everywhere on foot so that he took no life upon his path.
A thought provoking post today saxon revealing just how callous and dismissive of life we all have become as we go about our day yet we are horrified when presented with film of a big cat taking down an antelope for sustenance.
A guilt hangs over in the air but is gone within the next few breaths.
Disturbing to think about.
May 1st, 2022 06:43
dusk arising said:
The sad reality of farming though unfair for us to consider farmers to be an uncaring lot. The\'ye the one\'s who are in very close contact with the natural life of our lands more than anyone and from my little experience of contact with them i have found them to nurture and care.
Yet death beneath our tyres on the roadway goes largely unseen and un commented upon unless it is a fox ,badger or another beautiful beast. The lowly insect crushed under tyre or splattered on a windscreen gets little consideration. All are god\'s creations. Mohandas Ghandi would not use transport and walked everywhere on foot so that he took no life upon his path.
A thought provoking post today saxon revealing just how callous and dismissive of life we all have become as we go about our day yet we are horrified when presented with film of a big cat taking down an antelope for sustenance.
A guilt hangs over in the air but is gone within the next few breaths.
Disturbing to think about.
May 1st, 2022 06:43
Skylark
spilleronsheet said:
Greed in facade of needâŚwell penned dear SaxonâŚthe murder in name of necessity, wish could be considered, other ways of harmonious livingâŚworld peace and sustainability so much neededâŚ.
May 1st, 2022 05:08
spilleronsheet said:
Greed in facade of needâŚwell penned dear SaxonâŚthe murder in name of necessity, wish could be considered, other ways of harmonious livingâŚworld peace and sustainability so much neededâŚ.
May 1st, 2022 05:08
Skylark
orchidee said:
Yes, some just blunder in and blunder on, trampling all over others.
Not everyone, but in some places of nature, all is OK - then man turns up and mucks it up! Good write SC.
May 1st, 2022 04:59
orchidee said:
Yes, some just blunder in and blunder on, trampling all over others.
Not everyone, but in some places of nature, all is OK - then man turns up and mucks it up! Good write SC.
May 1st, 2022 04:59
Skylark
Caring dove said:
Some people simply are selfish ., and do not think ! Nature is so beautiful ., birds are lovely .
Thatâs really sad ((( feel sorry for those birds , they deserve a life and to live .
Itâs strange the actions some people take without thinking or caring about what they are doing .. and the impact they are going to have
May 1st, 2022 04:47
Caring dove said:
Some people simply are selfish ., and do not think ! Nature is so beautiful ., birds are lovely .
Thatâs really sad ((( feel sorry for those birds , they deserve a life and to live .
Itâs strange the actions some people take without thinking or caring about what they are doing .. and the impact they are going to have
May 1st, 2022 04:47
Skylark
Nicholas Browning said:
This is a wonderful read about the corruption of man. Greed ultimately destroyed a home, and it\'s saddening. A much enjoyed walk through your words.
May 1st, 2022 04:30
Nicholas Browning said:
This is a wonderful read about the corruption of man. Greed ultimately destroyed a home, and it\'s saddening. A much enjoyed walk through your words.
May 1st, 2022 04:30
Sleep?!
Michael Edwards said:
I can sleep on a flag pole but often wake upo drowsy so I have empathy - plenty of coffee does the trick but plays havoc with the bladder.
April 29th, 2022 11:07
Michael Edwards said:
I can sleep on a flag pole but often wake upo drowsy so I have empathy - plenty of coffee does the trick but plays havoc with the bladder.
April 29th, 2022 11:07
Sleep?!
Accidental Poet said:
I could say, \"Go to bed sooner at night,\" but I\'ve tried that. What I always find as being odd, my dreams never seem to make sense. Various people with no relation to each other in the same place and time. Very strange, but such is life. đ
April 29th, 2022 09:55
Accidental Poet said:
I could say, \"Go to bed sooner at night,\" but I\'ve tried that. What I always find as being odd, my dreams never seem to make sense. Various people with no relation to each other in the same place and time. Very strange, but such is life. đ
April 29th, 2022 09:55
In-between Moments of Dusk and Night
Accidental Poet said:
What better way to recharge one\'s life batteries than with a walk in Nature? Something I\'ve been wanting to do for some time now. Great write Sax. đ
April 29th, 2022 09:31
Accidental Poet said:
What better way to recharge one\'s life batteries than with a walk in Nature? Something I\'ve been wanting to do for some time now. Great write Sax. đ
April 29th, 2022 09:31
Sleep?!
Rocky Lagou said:
I relate so much. I literally never remember my dreams and whenever I do they feel like little glimpses that I just can\'t fully grasp. You truly explained it amazingly here, awesome job!
April 29th, 2022 09:12
Rocky Lagou said:
I relate so much. I literally never remember my dreams and whenever I do they feel like little glimpses that I just can\'t fully grasp. You truly explained it amazingly here, awesome job!
April 29th, 2022 09:12
Sleep?!
Nicholas Browning said:
Story of my entire life. Bless you Mr. Crow D:
April 29th, 2022 07:27
Nicholas Browning said:
Story of my entire life. Bless you Mr. Crow D:
April 29th, 2022 07:27
Sleep?!
Distant View said:
I got a smile from reading this one! You were probably on a tropical island with a beautiful young maiden, having the time of your life in your dream! Pity you can\'t remember! Good poem though!
April 29th, 2022 06:39
Distant View said:
I got a smile from reading this one! You were probably on a tropical island with a beautiful young maiden, having the time of your life in your dream! Pity you can\'t remember! Good poem though!
April 29th, 2022 06:39
Sleep?!
ChrisLynđ said:
Omg thatâs so true .. sleepless nights are some kind of torture . I end up feeling drowsy the next day . But I tell you just 5 mins of meditation before bed has really helped me sleep well. And of course shutting off my phone coz thatâs the root of my problem. Well described saxon â¨
April 29th, 2022 06:22
ChrisLynđ said:
Omg thatâs so true .. sleepless nights are some kind of torture . I end up feeling drowsy the next day . But I tell you just 5 mins of meditation before bed has really helped me sleep well. And of course shutting off my phone coz thatâs the root of my problem. Well described saxon â¨
April 29th, 2022 06:22
Sleep?!
Fay Slimm. said:
I can relate to each line Sax -- the final few words say it all for me too - a fine and poetic outcry against waking up tired.
April 29th, 2022 04:14
Fay Slimm. said:
I can relate to each line Sax -- the final few words say it all for me too - a fine and poetic outcry against waking up tired.
April 29th, 2022 04:14
Sleep?!
Laurađť said:
Dear Sax,
Good Morning! âď¸
Perhaps youâre suffering from âsleep apneaâ.
I hope your âpower napâ will energize you.
Thank you for sharing your wonderful poem.
Laurađť
April 29th, 2022 02:40
Laurađť said:
Dear Sax,
Good Morning! âď¸
Perhaps youâre suffering from âsleep apneaâ.
I hope your âpower napâ will energize you.
Thank you for sharing your wonderful poem.
Laurađť
April 29th, 2022 02:40
Sleep?!
dusk arising said:
I know whay you mean, those aliens always leave me knackered after theyve done their stuff to me and the obligatory very sore bottom means I cant readily return to sleep. It\'s all very distressing. You were very lucky if they only stuffed you in a pillow sack, I got stuffed where it hurts it seems.
Great poem Saxon and (ahem) you got my juices flowing (poetic juices).
April 29th, 2022 02:05
dusk arising said:
I know whay you mean, those aliens always leave me knackered after theyve done their stuff to me and the obligatory very sore bottom means I cant readily return to sleep. It\'s all very distressing. You were very lucky if they only stuffed you in a pillow sack, I got stuffed where it hurts it seems.
Great poem Saxon and (ahem) you got my juices flowing (poetic juices).
April 29th, 2022 02:05
Sleep?!
Goldfinch60 said:
You will be pleased to know that I had a great nights sleep last night and am up, wide awake and just can\'t wait to get out on the croquet lawn this morning!
Andy
April 29th, 2022 01:35
Goldfinch60 said:
You will be pleased to know that I had a great nights sleep last night and am up, wide awake and just can\'t wait to get out on the croquet lawn this morning!
Andy
April 29th, 2022 01:35
Sleep?!
Caring dove said:
Sometimes I wake up tired too ! We need to be refreshed and awake after sleep .. strange isnât it . I feel tired myself
April 29th, 2022 01:01
Caring dove said:
Sometimes I wake up tired too ! We need to be refreshed and awake after sleep .. strange isnât it . I feel tired myself
April 29th, 2022 01:01
In-between Moments of Dusk and Night
Bella Shepard said:
I love the weary sun and Mrs. Moon, such personalities you\'ve given them. We are, after all ruled by day and night, it\'s lovely to think of the way you\'ve presented it. Wonderful!
April 28th, 2022 15:50
Bella Shepard said:
I love the weary sun and Mrs. Moon, such personalities you\'ve given them. We are, after all ruled by day and night, it\'s lovely to think of the way you\'ve presented it. Wonderful!
April 28th, 2022 15:50
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