Comments received on poems by Saxon Crow
Sleep?!
ChrisLyn🕊 said:
Omg that’s so true .. sleepless nights are some kind of torture . I end up feeling drowsy the next day . But I tell you just 5 mins of meditation before bed has really helped me sleep well. And of course shutting off my phone coz that’s the root of my problem. Well described saxon ✨
April 29th, 2022 06:22
ChrisLyn🕊 said:
Omg that’s so true .. sleepless nights are some kind of torture . I end up feeling drowsy the next day . But I tell you just 5 mins of meditation before bed has really helped me sleep well. And of course shutting off my phone coz that’s the root of my problem. Well described saxon ✨
April 29th, 2022 06:22
Sleep?!
Fay Slimm. said:
I can relate to each line Sax -- the final few words say it all for me too - a fine and poetic outcry against waking up tired.
April 29th, 2022 04:14
Fay Slimm. said:
I can relate to each line Sax -- the final few words say it all for me too - a fine and poetic outcry against waking up tired.
April 29th, 2022 04:14
Sleep?!
Laura🌻 said:
Dear Sax,
Good Morning! ☀️
Perhaps you’re suffering from ‘sleep apnea’.
I hope your ‘power nap’ will energize you.
Thank you for sharing your wonderful poem.
Laura🌻
April 29th, 2022 02:40
Laura🌻 said:
Dear Sax,
Good Morning! ☀️
Perhaps you’re suffering from ‘sleep apnea’.
I hope your ‘power nap’ will energize you.
Thank you for sharing your wonderful poem.
Laura🌻
April 29th, 2022 02:40
Sleep?!
dusk arising said:
I know whay you mean, those aliens always leave me knackered after theyve done their stuff to me and the obligatory very sore bottom means I cant readily return to sleep. It\'s all very distressing. You were very lucky if they only stuffed you in a pillow sack, I got stuffed where it hurts it seems.
Great poem Saxon and (ahem) you got my juices flowing (poetic juices).
April 29th, 2022 02:05
dusk arising said:
I know whay you mean, those aliens always leave me knackered after theyve done their stuff to me and the obligatory very sore bottom means I cant readily return to sleep. It\'s all very distressing. You were very lucky if they only stuffed you in a pillow sack, I got stuffed where it hurts it seems.
Great poem Saxon and (ahem) you got my juices flowing (poetic juices).
April 29th, 2022 02:05
Sleep?!
Goldfinch60 said:
You will be pleased to know that I had a great nights sleep last night and am up, wide awake and just can\'t wait to get out on the croquet lawn this morning!
Andy
April 29th, 2022 01:35
Goldfinch60 said:
You will be pleased to know that I had a great nights sleep last night and am up, wide awake and just can\'t wait to get out on the croquet lawn this morning!
Andy
April 29th, 2022 01:35
Sleep?!
Caring dove said:
Sometimes I wake up tired too ! We need to be refreshed and awake after sleep .. strange isn’t it . I feel tired myself
April 29th, 2022 01:01
Caring dove said:
Sometimes I wake up tired too ! We need to be refreshed and awake after sleep .. strange isn’t it . I feel tired myself
April 29th, 2022 01:01
In-between Moments of Dusk and Night
Bella Shepard said:
I love the weary sun and Mrs. Moon, such personalities you\'ve given them. We are, after all ruled by day and night, it\'s lovely to think of the way you\'ve presented it. Wonderful!
April 28th, 2022 15:50
Bella Shepard said:
I love the weary sun and Mrs. Moon, such personalities you\'ve given them. We are, after all ruled by day and night, it\'s lovely to think of the way you\'ve presented it. Wonderful!
April 28th, 2022 15:50
In-between Moments of Dusk and Night
dusk arising said:
My favourite time of day Saxon and I love your take on it, absolutely love it!
A must for my favourites, Great stuff>
April 28th, 2022 09:20
dusk arising said:
My favourite time of day Saxon and I love your take on it, absolutely love it!
A must for my favourites, Great stuff>
April 28th, 2022 09:20
In-between Moments of Dusk and Night
Rocky Lagou said:
Thank you for this spectacle. You truly have a gift to wed imagery with metaphor in such a fine way. A wonderful description!
April 28th, 2022 09:05
Rocky Lagou said:
Thank you for this spectacle. You truly have a gift to wed imagery with metaphor in such a fine way. A wonderful description!
April 28th, 2022 09:05
In-between Moments of Dusk and Night
spilleronsheet said:
Truly enjoyed the imagery…yesterday I wrote about breaking dawn and now I am awestruck to your details of fantasising dusk….very beautiful dear Saxon Crow…
April 28th, 2022 05:34
spilleronsheet said:
Truly enjoyed the imagery…yesterday I wrote about breaking dawn and now I am awestruck to your details of fantasising dusk….very beautiful dear Saxon Crow…
April 28th, 2022 05:34
In-between Moments of Dusk and Night
Caring dove said:
Really like this crow .. so many good lines and so nicely expressed
I especially like these lines
‘Mrs Moon stirs from day dream slumbers
Half awake refusing to break the spell of her imagination,’
Lovely to read 🙂
Glad you had a nice walk .
I think we can sometimes just not be in touch with who we truly are and be a bit out of sync with the world . Like your mention of the 5 g world
April 28th, 2022 01:44
Caring dove said:
Really like this crow .. so many good lines and so nicely expressed
I especially like these lines
‘Mrs Moon stirs from day dream slumbers
Half awake refusing to break the spell of her imagination,’
Lovely to read 🙂
Glad you had a nice walk .
I think we can sometimes just not be in touch with who we truly are and be a bit out of sync with the world . Like your mention of the 5 g world
April 28th, 2022 01:44
In-between Moments of Dusk and Night
Goldfinch60 said:
Super words SC, that period between dusk and night is so wonderful in many ways.
Andy
April 28th, 2022 01:01
Goldfinch60 said:
Super words SC, that period between dusk and night is so wonderful in many ways.
Andy
April 28th, 2022 01:01
The Caterpillar Slaughter
Hakikur Rahman said:
Some good pointers on life. Flows well.
April 27th, 2022 23:08
Hakikur Rahman said:
Some good pointers on life. Flows well.
April 27th, 2022 23:08
The Caterpillar Slaughter
dusk arising said:
Now i\'m wondering if caterpillers are a delicacy in the bird world or is it a pre-emptive strike to prevent the airways being clutterd with butterflies and moths?
I shall have to interview one of our feathered friends. As for those badgers, I can\'t get near them.
Great fun read Saxon.
April 27th, 2022 05:56
dusk arising said:
Now i\'m wondering if caterpillers are a delicacy in the bird world or is it a pre-emptive strike to prevent the airways being clutterd with butterflies and moths?
I shall have to interview one of our feathered friends. As for those badgers, I can\'t get near them.
Great fun read Saxon.
April 27th, 2022 05:56
The Caterpillar Slaughter
Fay Slimm. said:
The fun poem brings food for thought about insecticides etc. - nature provides for its own and humanity kills off many needed meals for decreasing numbers of birds and badgers - - a smile a line at your poetic interpretation of greed my friend.
April 27th, 2022 03:53
Fay Slimm. said:
The fun poem brings food for thought about insecticides etc. - nature provides for its own and humanity kills off many needed meals for decreasing numbers of birds and badgers - - a smile a line at your poetic interpretation of greed my friend.
April 27th, 2022 03:53
The Caterpillar Slaughter
Empathic.writings said:
Man humorously informed. Thank youu needed to read this
April 27th, 2022 02:27
Empathic.writings said:
Man humorously informed. Thank youu needed to read this
April 27th, 2022 02:27
The Caterpillar Slaughter
Caring dove said:
Great poem .. you know sometimes people can be greedy cant they . I like how you have expressed yourself in this poem . Poor little caterpillars .. they do deserve to grow into butterfly’s !
April 27th, 2022 00:36
Caring dove said:
Great poem .. you know sometimes people can be greedy cant they . I like how you have expressed yourself in this poem . Poor little caterpillars .. they do deserve to grow into butterfly’s !
April 27th, 2022 00:36
To Snail
Rozina said:
Such an interesting and delightful read. I have many snails in my garden eating my plants. I shall go and look at them now with a different view!
April 26th, 2022 18:12
Rozina said:
Such an interesting and delightful read. I have many snails in my garden eating my plants. I shall go and look at them now with a different view!
April 26th, 2022 18:12
To Snail
Michael Edwards said:
I agree with VB - some absolute gem lines in this great write.
April 26th, 2022 14:12
Michael Edwards said:
I agree with VB - some absolute gem lines in this great write.
April 26th, 2022 14:12
To Snail
Rocky Lagou said:
I love how you can just pick any simple thing and give it new life. This is so descriptive and lovely! I enjoy your imagery and your wording. The snail is truly a fascinating creature.
April 26th, 2022 09:05
Rocky Lagou said:
I love how you can just pick any simple thing and give it new life. This is so descriptive and lovely! I enjoy your imagery and your wording. The snail is truly a fascinating creature.
April 26th, 2022 09:05
To Snail
Distant View said:
An unusual and inventive poem! An interesting ode to the humble snail!
April 26th, 2022 05:13
Distant View said:
An unusual and inventive poem! An interesting ode to the humble snail!
April 26th, 2022 05:13
To Snail
L. B. Mek said:
\'With your aureole home
You define
What it is to be free
Travelling along
At a pace of your choosing\'..
that innate, hue
of grace, nature
awards...
(simply Beautiful!
thank you, dear Poet)
April 26th, 2022 04:58
L. B. Mek said:
\'With your aureole home
You define
What it is to be free
Travelling along
At a pace of your choosing\'..
that innate, hue
of grace, nature
awards...
(simply Beautiful!
thank you, dear Poet)
April 26th, 2022 04:58
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