Comments received on poems by Saxon Crow



Skylark
Nicholas Browning said:

This is a wonderful read about the corruption of man. Greed ultimately destroyed a home, and it\'s saddening. A much enjoyed walk through your words.

May 1st, 2022 04:30

Sleep?!
Rozina said:

The story of my life too! Exactly like your lines.

April 29th, 2022 18:30

Sleep?!
Michael Edwards said:

I can sleep on a flag pole but often wake upo drowsy so I have empathy - plenty of coffee does the trick but plays havoc with the bladder.

April 29th, 2022 11:07

Sleep?!
Accidental Poet said:

I could say, \"Go to bed sooner at night,\" but I\'ve tried that. What I always find as being odd, my dreams never seem to make sense. Various people with no relation to each other in the same place and time. Very strange, but such is life. 😏

April 29th, 2022 09:55

In-between Moments of Dusk and Night
Accidental Poet said:

What better way to recharge one\'s life batteries than with a walk in Nature? Something I\'ve been wanting to do for some time now. Great write Sax. 😉

April 29th, 2022 09:31

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Rocky Lagou said:

I relate so much. I literally never remember my dreams and whenever I do they feel like little glimpses that I just can\'t fully grasp. You truly explained it amazingly here, awesome job!


April 29th, 2022 09:12

Sleep?!
Nicholas Browning said:

Story of my entire life. Bless you Mr. Crow D:

April 29th, 2022 07:27

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Distant View said:

I got a smile from reading this one! You were probably on a tropical island with a beautiful young maiden, having the time of your life in your dream! Pity you can\'t remember! Good poem though!

April 29th, 2022 06:39

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ChrisLyn🕊 said:

Omg that’s so true .. sleepless nights are some kind of torture . I end up feeling drowsy the next day . But I tell you just 5 mins of meditation before bed has really helped me sleep well. And of course shutting off my phone coz that’s the root of my problem. Well described saxon ✨

April 29th, 2022 06:22

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Fay Slimm. said:

I can relate to each line Sax -- the final few words say it all for me too - a fine and poetic outcry against waking up tired.

April 29th, 2022 04:14

Sleep?!
Laura🌻 said:

Dear Sax,

Good Morning! ☀️

Perhaps you’re suffering from ‘sleep apnea’.
I hope your ‘power nap’ will energize you.

Thank you for sharing your wonderful poem.

Laura🌻

April 29th, 2022 02:40

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orchidee said:

Good write SC.

April 29th, 2022 02:07

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dusk arising said:

I know whay you mean, those aliens always leave me knackered after theyve done their stuff to me and the obligatory very sore bottom means I cant readily return to sleep. It\'s all very distressing. You were very lucky if they only stuffed you in a pillow sack, I got stuffed where it hurts it seems.

Great poem Saxon and (ahem) you got my juices flowing (poetic juices).

April 29th, 2022 02:05

Sleep?!
Goldfinch60 said:

You will be pleased to know that I had a great nights sleep last night and am up, wide awake and just can\'t wait to get out on the croquet lawn this morning!

Andy

April 29th, 2022 01:35

Sleep?!
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:

Sometimes I wake up tired too ! We need to be refreshed and awake after sleep .. strange isn’t it . I feel tired myself

April 29th, 2022 01:01

In-between Moments of Dusk and Night
Rozina said:

So good.

April 28th, 2022 18:14

In-between Moments of Dusk and Night
Bella Shepard said:

I love the weary sun and Mrs. Moon, such personalities you\'ve given them. We are, after all ruled by day and night, it\'s lovely to think of the way you\'ve presented it. Wonderful!

April 28th, 2022 15:50

In-between Moments of Dusk and Night
dusk arising said:

My favourite time of day Saxon and I love your take on it, absolutely love it!

A must for my favourites, Great stuff>

April 28th, 2022 09:20

In-between Moments of Dusk and Night
Rocky Lagou said:

Thank you for this spectacle. You truly have a gift to wed imagery with metaphor in such a fine way. A wonderful description!


April 28th, 2022 09:05

In-between Moments of Dusk and Night
spilleronsheet said:

Truly enjoyed the imagery…yesterday I wrote about breaking dawn and now I am awestruck to your details of fantasising dusk….very beautiful dear Saxon Crow…

April 28th, 2022 05:34

In-between Moments of Dusk and Night
ChrisLyn🕊 said:

This is beautiful!

April 28th, 2022 03:51

In-between Moments of Dusk and Night
orchidee said:

Good write SC.

April 28th, 2022 02:25

In-between Moments of Dusk and Night
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:

Really like this crow .. so many good lines and so nicely expressed


I especially like these lines

‘Mrs Moon stirs from day dream slumbers

Half awake refusing to break the spell of her imagination,’

Lovely to read 🙂

Glad you had a nice walk .

I think we can sometimes just not be in touch with who we truly are and be a bit out of sync with the world . Like your mention of the 5 g world



April 28th, 2022 01:44

In-between Moments of Dusk and Night
Goldfinch60 said:

Super words SC, that period between dusk and night is so wonderful in many ways.

Andy

April 28th, 2022 01:01

The Caterpillar Slaughter
Hakikur Rahman said:

Some good pointers on life. Flows well.

April 27th, 2022 23:08

The Caterpillar Slaughter
Rozina said:

Enjoyed this fun poem very much.

April 27th, 2022 18:12

The Caterpillar Slaughter
dusk arising said:

Now i\'m wondering if caterpillers are a delicacy in the bird world or is it a pre-emptive strike to prevent the airways being clutterd with butterflies and moths?
I shall have to interview one of our feathered friends. As for those badgers, I can\'t get near them.

Great fun read Saxon.

April 27th, 2022 05:56

The Caterpillar Slaughter
Fay Slimm. said:

The fun poem brings food for thought about insecticides etc. - nature provides for its own and humanity kills off many needed meals for decreasing numbers of birds and badgers - - a smile a line at your poetic interpretation of greed my friend.

April 27th, 2022 03:53

The Caterpillar Slaughter
Michael Edwards said:

A real fun read

April 27th, 2022 03:26

The Caterpillar Slaughter
Empathic.writings said:

Man humorously informed. Thank youu needed to read this

April 27th, 2022 02:27



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