Comments received on poems by Saxon Crow
What once was ours
Accidental Poet said:
Great write Sax. If only those with selective hearing would really listen.
April 15th, 2022 15:17
Accidental Poet said:
Great write Sax. If only those with selective hearing would really listen.
April 15th, 2022 15:17
What once was ours
L. B. Mek said:
even devoid of any theological alignment
I relate to the positivity in your theme
let us hope
a day will be realised, when such ideal\'s
can breach our reality
and offer us, a tangible path
towards
consideration and equality
for all, in our beautifully diverse
humanity..
thanks for sharing, dear poet
April 14th, 2022 04:31
L. B. Mek said:
even devoid of any theological alignment
I relate to the positivity in your theme
let us hope
a day will be realised, when such ideal\'s
can breach our reality
and offer us, a tangible path
towards
consideration and equality
for all, in our beautifully diverse
humanity..
thanks for sharing, dear poet
April 14th, 2022 04:31
What once was ours
dusk arising said:
Great words of rebirth in this our wicked world.
April 14th, 2022 04:02
dusk arising said:
Great words of rebirth in this our wicked world.
April 14th, 2022 04:02
What once was ours
chella said:
We are all connected (reminds me of Manifest). Love it.
April 14th, 2022 02:14
chella said:
We are all connected (reminds me of Manifest). Love it.
April 14th, 2022 02:14
What once was ours
orchidee said:
Good write SC.
I\'m hearing that woodpecker - and crow?!
April 14th, 2022 02:09
orchidee said:
Good write SC.
I\'m hearing that woodpecker - and crow?!
April 14th, 2022 02:09
Untitled
Goldfinch60 said:
When we step outside ourselves it throws a whole new perspective on life SC.
Andy
April 14th, 2022 01:21
Goldfinch60 said:
When we step outside ourselves it throws a whole new perspective on life SC.
Andy
April 14th, 2022 01:21
Endless
Rozina said:
I really enjoyed your lovely lines and how it all came together.
April 13th, 2022 04:23
Rozina said:
I really enjoyed your lovely lines and how it all came together.
April 13th, 2022 04:23
Endless
Christina8 said:
Excellent poem, Saxon (great name too!) Anyway I love the rhyming, I love the metaphors. Yes our minds especially as poets do go on like a vast ocean. Thanks for sharing your poem!
April 12th, 2022 12:06
Christina8 said:
Excellent poem, Saxon (great name too!) Anyway I love the rhyming, I love the metaphors. Yes our minds especially as poets do go on like a vast ocean. Thanks for sharing your poem!
April 12th, 2022 12:06
Endless
Universal_guarantee said:
I love how you tied it all together at the end, if that makes sense!
April 12th, 2022 04:33
Universal_guarantee said:
I love how you tied it all together at the end, if that makes sense!
April 12th, 2022 04:33
Endless
Fay Slimm. said:
Great read of inner-sight when holding a pebble - -- you have such a good grasp of real poetry Sax which comes from your talented mind.
April 12th, 2022 02:32
Fay Slimm. said:
Great read of inner-sight when holding a pebble - -- you have such a good grasp of real poetry Sax which comes from your talented mind.
April 12th, 2022 02:32
Endless
dusk arising said:
Lovely writing Saxon. I share your vision of a continuum since first glimpsing the amazing minds of science fiction writers and then to sit before the ocean beneath a blanket of stars and wonder.
Thank you for sharing and giving me these moments of reflection upon just how tiny we all are but how wonderful we each are.
So relateable to your dad\'s post of today too.
April 12th, 2022 01:56
dusk arising said:
Lovely writing Saxon. I share your vision of a continuum since first glimpsing the amazing minds of science fiction writers and then to sit before the ocean beneath a blanket of stars and wonder.
Thank you for sharing and giving me these moments of reflection upon just how tiny we all are but how wonderful we each are.
So relateable to your dad\'s post of today too.
April 12th, 2022 01:56
Layers
dusk arising said:
Astral meditation hmmm yes please. I only managed to really meditate once and went so deep that it has changed my life for the better.
Would I like to do it again, yes but i have no idea how to. Do i need to do it again, no.
Great poem for me Saxon as it reminded me of something important.
April 8th, 2022 11:20
dusk arising said:
Astral meditation hmmm yes please. I only managed to really meditate once and went so deep that it has changed my life for the better.
Would I like to do it again, yes but i have no idea how to. Do i need to do it again, no.
Great poem for me Saxon as it reminded me of something important.
April 8th, 2022 11:20
Layers
L. B. Mek said:
Beautiful!
we all need, something
to grasp, when submerged
dogpaddling to survive
ill-fate\'s, waves..
thanks for sharing
April 8th, 2022 05:53
L. B. Mek said:
Beautiful!
we all need, something
to grasp, when submerged
dogpaddling to survive
ill-fate\'s, waves..
thanks for sharing
April 8th, 2022 05:53
Being One
theneophiles_words said:
\'What am I?\' The most straightforward as well as elaborate query one encounters in life. Simplistic beauty!
April 8th, 2022 02:48
theneophiles_words said:
\'What am I?\' The most straightforward as well as elaborate query one encounters in life. Simplistic beauty!
April 8th, 2022 02:48
Layers
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Great writing crow )especially like the lines ‘ around blue moons and rose pink suns ‘
Lovely words
April 8th, 2022 02:14
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Great writing crow )especially like the lines ‘ around blue moons and rose pink suns ‘
Lovely words
April 8th, 2022 02:14
Systemic Living?
Goldfinch60 said:
Stepping outside the box and thinking of how we can help others without following the callous codes of the many is the way to try and deal with the situation. All we can try and do is be ourselves and go our own way.
Andy
April 8th, 2022 00:27
Goldfinch60 said:
Stepping outside the box and thinking of how we can help others without following the callous codes of the many is the way to try and deal with the situation. All we can try and do is be ourselves and go our own way.
Andy
April 8th, 2022 00:27
Systemic Living?
L. B. Mek said:
\'Despair, the food for the thoughts of the one
No relent in diet as one new fad upgrades from another
And yet there is a famine in the soul
And while those in shadow grow fat through fear
We, the masses are starved of an education of what it truly means to be human
The needs of the many outweigh the needs of the one?\'..
(forgive me, dear poet
your words inspired me, into
yet another lengthy, rant
\'have no idea how y\'all put up with me\'
thank you! loved
your humanist championing, message)
w. h. Auden\'s
\'age of anxiety\'
birthing, regressive ideologies
where our New
is what was once, considered: Knew..
capitalism\'s, individual accountability
is a great, theory
yet, when even Twins
aren\'t born, \'equal\' in capability
its, just as flawed
as communism\'s, \'the whole
being more important
than the individual, trickery...\'
\'Humility
and accepting
that absolutism doesn\'t, exist
at our current level of evolution
is how, we can free ourselves
of mind warping, ideologies..\'
(I think, much better
if we, maintain a healthy
and robust
saving\'s account, and still
make time
to enjoy, that simple
beauty
in watching a butterfly, grace
our scope of life
while freely empowering, our empathy
at every opportunity..)
April 7th, 2022 06:14
L. B. Mek said:
\'Despair, the food for the thoughts of the one
No relent in diet as one new fad upgrades from another
And yet there is a famine in the soul
And while those in shadow grow fat through fear
We, the masses are starved of an education of what it truly means to be human
The needs of the many outweigh the needs of the one?\'..
(forgive me, dear poet
your words inspired me, into
yet another lengthy, rant
\'have no idea how y\'all put up with me\'
thank you! loved
your humanist championing, message)
w. h. Auden\'s
\'age of anxiety\'
birthing, regressive ideologies
where our New
is what was once, considered: Knew..
capitalism\'s, individual accountability
is a great, theory
yet, when even Twins
aren\'t born, \'equal\' in capability
its, just as flawed
as communism\'s, \'the whole
being more important
than the individual, trickery...\'
\'Humility
and accepting
that absolutism doesn\'t, exist
at our current level of evolution
is how, we can free ourselves
of mind warping, ideologies..\'
(I think, much better
if we, maintain a healthy
and robust
saving\'s account, and still
make time
to enjoy, that simple
beauty
in watching a butterfly, grace
our scope of life
while freely empowering, our empathy
at every opportunity..)
April 7th, 2022 06:14
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