Comments received on poems by peto



Lunar
peto said:

Not the only one LIZ
Couldn\'t help but admire it
I don\'t know what defines a \"super moon \" as this one is classified
It did seem so much brighter last night
Glad this struck a chord with you
Nothing wrong with scattered emotions
We\'d be a bit robotic otherwise
Thank you very much for such encouragement
It\'s priceless



September 1st, 2023 05:33

Lunar
LIZ said:

OH MY GOD! I love this one!! I thought I was the only one who saw or even noticed the full moon!!! This is so descriptive and vivid! I found myself hunting with the pack! Pisces ♓️ Full moon!! That\'s why all the love and lust poems. Emotions all over the place! All the poets are in their feelings! 😆

September 1st, 2023 05:14

I need your love
Introverted Sage said:

A love that is addicting..
I hope your match is equally addicted!
Nice write!

August 31st, 2023 15:47

Massage
Bella Shepard said:

In Greek phylosophy the number 3 was considered as the perfect number of harmony, wisdom and understanding. I\'d say you hit all three with a bang (no pun intended) in this one. Wow!

August 31st, 2023 14:10

Massage
Parisab said:

‘The tenderness that lust evokes’ capturing the right balance between, is talent, in your poem-and then my favorite is the stanza about treating the canvas for more oil-nicely done poet peer-

August 31st, 2023 09:22

Massage
Pop64 said:

The imagery in this really allows the reader to be part of the write, the actual stimulating sensation of the massage. Wonderful read!

August 31st, 2023 06:39

Massage
MissD said:

uuhhhhhmmmm SO WELL WRIITTEN
it made me take a deep breath after reading it

August 31st, 2023 05:39

Massage
LIZ said:

Mmmmm 🥵 Did you know number 3 during intimacy means you love trying out new things? So ummmmm yeah...definitely running free! Loved this!

August 31st, 2023 03:22

Witches brew
Destined Perspectives said:

I love your style, rhyme, flow and imagery! Perfection!

August 30th, 2023 17:17

I need your love
Bella Shepard said:

I had to read this poem aloud for the beauty of its rhyme and cadence. Such an outpouring of love, all consuming and quite breathtaking. A Master Class in Romantic Poetry!

August 30th, 2023 14:24

I need your love
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:

Some very lovely words in this writing 🙂 love the mention of the sun and rain .. the star needs the sky ( sometimes another can make us feel more ‘complete ‘ and we can feel wrong without them ..

I like your poem )

August 30th, 2023 12:07

I need your love
lenore_inNeverland said:

People fall in love with other people.
I fell in love with the words
Peto you are AMAZING!!!

August 30th, 2023 11:50

I need your love
buzzybee4you said:

Wow. This poem is a masterpiece! Keep them coming!

August 30th, 2023 11:25

Witches brew
MissD said:

proud of you

August 30th, 2023 09:55

I need your love
peto said:

Christina
You really do give me a lift with such kindness
Couldn\'t do it without such encouragement
Many thanks dear poetess x

August 30th, 2023 09:15

I need your love
Christina8 said:

all I know is it\'s a lucky gal you wrote this about. It seems like your poetry gets better and better! The last line says it all! I also had to fan myself when reading certain lines of this poem....MORE please!! x

August 30th, 2023 09:06

I need your love
LIZ said:

This is such a powerful declaration of love! \"It\'s a magical thing, if you\'re wearing my ring\"- I had to fan myself when I read this line! \"Like my blood needs a vein Or the flowers need rain\"! Mmmmmm I love it! ALL OR NOTHING! ❤️

August 30th, 2023 05:28

Witches brew
Pop64 said:

Wonderful imagery you provide in this well rhyming write! Love the last line to this, as it not only summarizes,, but truly emphasizes. Great writing

August 29th, 2023 13:57

Witches brew
Christina8 said:

Oh wow, Stevie! This is truly a masterpiece! As I read it aloud, I had to slow down so I could get in all the detail. Superb! Simply excellent! What more can I say? This really took the cake! Christina

August 29th, 2023 13:50

Witches brew
Bella Shepard said:

She\'s intense, electrifying, dangerous, all wrapped up in wonderful verse, with a great zinger at the end. Love it all!

August 29th, 2023 12:49

Witches brew
Introverted Sage said:

This flows like a spell or a song. Great rhythm!

August 29th, 2023 11:27

Witches brew
lenore_inNeverland said:

Bewitchingly perfect!

August 29th, 2023 05:44

Witches brew
LIZ said:

Ohhhhh boy!! Dangerous!! I love the title too (Witches brew). FYI I have a cauldron where I burn letters and create spells. 😆 Loved it!

August 29th, 2023 05:39

Line
Introverted Sage said:

The duality and darkness this shows is intense! There\'s always another side to the spectrum.
Thanks for sharing!

August 27th, 2023 01:45

Line
Christina8 said:

Despite the negatives, this woman sounds strong to me! She\'s gone through a lot but has come out the other side. \"still the star of the show, And the reason we all stand in line\" such a wonderful homage to this woman! She sounds wonderful. Awesome poem, Stevie!! x

August 24th, 2023 03:13

Leap year
hzugman said:

Great poem, peto. It reminds me how very grateful I am to have a wonderful friend and lover without any of the encumbrances that your poem outlines. I read your poem twice. I wanted to \"user favorite\" it but don\'t know how to do so.

August 14th, 2023 09:53

Ace spades
Christina8 said:

This poem/story is mindblowing! You pay such attention to detail. I tend to agree with Bobby O on this one! Thank you for entertaining us with poetry beyond what one would expect on a site like this....x

August 14th, 2023 09:12

Leap year
Christina8 said:

I will re-read these words while you take your break, you will be missed!! This rhyme scheme is different than your usual. It was quite nice! Nothing better than a romantic poem! It\'s so sweet! x

August 14th, 2023 09:07

Leap year
2781 said:

I\'ll miss you.

August 14th, 2023 07:16

Leap year
LIZ said:

I love it!!! This is so beautifully sad. My kind of poetry. Forbidden or distant love. But hey, looks like a risk was taken; and that\'s better than wondering what if...maybe you opened a portal for her to get inspired, and give love/romance a chance? Thank you for sharing! ✨️

August 14th, 2023 06:37



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