Comments received on poems by peto
Colour
LIZ said:
I really like how clearly you display the fact that....yes, she\'s been through hell...but she fought back, and survived! \"She is glowing again getting ready to shine-Put herself a bit closer to front of the line -Ditched the shame she took on with her no entry sign\" Strong independent woman! I relate to this piece so much! Loved it!!
September 3rd, 2023 01:50
LIZ said:
I really like how clearly you display the fact that....yes, she\'s been through hell...but she fought back, and survived! \"She is glowing again getting ready to shine-Put herself a bit closer to front of the line -Ditched the shame she took on with her no entry sign\" Strong independent woman! I relate to this piece so much! Loved it!!
September 3rd, 2023 01:50
Colour
Parisab said:
Such rare empathy to tell the story of this woman-your words carry compassion and hope for her-amazing that you identify so closely
September 3rd, 2023 01:37
Parisab said:
Such rare empathy to tell the story of this woman-your words carry compassion and hope for her-amazing that you identify so closely
September 3rd, 2023 01:37
Colour
kai-leah said:
“Pushed the rapids toward a sheer drop waterfall “ - I like this line a lot.
September 3rd, 2023 01:26
kai-leah said:
“Pushed the rapids toward a sheer drop waterfall “ - I like this line a lot.
September 3rd, 2023 01:26
Colour
Caring dove said:
I really like the words in this )
I especially like ‘ colour of love ‘ how you repeat these words in every verse
And these lines
‘ Cut to ribbons she tied in a butterfly bow
Sorrow\'s bouquet’
‘dancing free in the rain
She is glowing again getting ready to shine
A good writing .. and yes love can be healing .. love from others , and ‘ self love ‘
An engaging well written poem
September 3rd, 2023 01:10
Caring dove said:
I really like the words in this )
I especially like ‘ colour of love ‘ how you repeat these words in every verse
And these lines
‘ Cut to ribbons she tied in a butterfly bow
Sorrow\'s bouquet’
‘dancing free in the rain
She is glowing again getting ready to shine
A good writing .. and yes love can be healing .. love from others , and ‘ self love ‘
An engaging well written poem
September 3rd, 2023 01:10
Lunar
Bella Shepard said:
We have always been fascinated by the myth of the wolf howling at the full moon, unable to resist its pull. Your poem, full of mystery and intrigue, paints a graphic and eerie picture with wonderful imagery. Great write!
September 2nd, 2023 15:48
Bella Shepard said:
We have always been fascinated by the myth of the wolf howling at the full moon, unable to resist its pull. Your poem, full of mystery and intrigue, paints a graphic and eerie picture with wonderful imagery. Great write!
September 2nd, 2023 15:48
Lunar
lenore_inNeverland said:
The moon as always being the muse to some of the greatest poets since time immemorial!
September 2nd, 2023 05:13
lenore_inNeverland said:
The moon as always being the muse to some of the greatest poets since time immemorial!
September 2nd, 2023 05:13
Lunar
Bobby O said:
I thought this…
All alone with conquered prey
He howls and his haunches sway…
Dead deer , hmmmm
September 1st, 2023 16:21
Bobby O said:
I thought this…
All alone with conquered prey
He howls and his haunches sway…
Dead deer , hmmmm
September 1st, 2023 16:21
Lunar
Bobby O said:
I thought this…
All alone with conquered prey
He howls and his haunches sway…
Dead deer , hmmmm
September 1st, 2023 16:09
Bobby O said:
I thought this…
All alone with conquered prey
He howls and his haunches sway…
Dead deer , hmmmm
September 1st, 2023 16:09
Lunar
Christina8 said:
The supermoon in this poem and the description makes me think of a werewolf. Beautiful imagery throughout. Love this poem!!
September 1st, 2023 14:33
Christina8 said:
The supermoon in this poem and the description makes me think of a werewolf. Beautiful imagery throughout. Love this poem!!
September 1st, 2023 14:33
Massage
Christina8 said:
This is an incredible poem! It invokes so many emotions. Is it hot in here? Loved the last line! She deserves an 0 for the third time! Awesome job!
September 1st, 2023 14:28
Christina8 said:
This is an incredible poem! It invokes so many emotions. Is it hot in here? Loved the last line! She deserves an 0 for the third time! Awesome job!
September 1st, 2023 14:28
Lunar
Introverted Sage said:
Vivid imagery! The magic of the Moon and how it evokes dormant remnants of our Soul or our deepest desires.. Letting our inner out to play has its benefits!
Great write!
September 1st, 2023 13:17
Introverted Sage said:
Vivid imagery! The magic of the Moon and how it evokes dormant remnants of our Soul or our deepest desires.. Letting our inner out to play has its benefits!
Great write!
September 1st, 2023 13:17
Lunar
peto said:
Lol I took a couple of pics also
Not great results
Thanks for the education re super moon
Totally agree
If not released they are caged
September 1st, 2023 06:06
peto said:
Lol I took a couple of pics also
Not great results
Thanks for the education re super moon
Totally agree
If not released they are caged
September 1st, 2023 06:06
Lunar
peto said:
Not the only one LIZ
Couldn\'t help but admire it
I don\'t know what defines a \"super moon \" as this one is classified
It did seem so much brighter last night
Glad this struck a chord with you
Nothing wrong with scattered emotions
We\'d be a bit robotic otherwise
Thank you very much for such encouragement
It\'s priceless
September 1st, 2023 05:33
peto said:
Not the only one LIZ
Couldn\'t help but admire it
I don\'t know what defines a \"super moon \" as this one is classified
It did seem so much brighter last night
Glad this struck a chord with you
Nothing wrong with scattered emotions
We\'d be a bit robotic otherwise
Thank you very much for such encouragement
It\'s priceless
September 1st, 2023 05:33
Lunar
LIZ said:
OH MY GOD! I love this one!! I thought I was the only one who saw or even noticed the full moon!!! This is so descriptive and vivid! I found myself hunting with the pack! Pisces ♓️ Full moon!! That\'s why all the love and lust poems. Emotions all over the place! All the poets are in their feelings! 😆
September 1st, 2023 05:14
LIZ said:
OH MY GOD! I love this one!! I thought I was the only one who saw or even noticed the full moon!!! This is so descriptive and vivid! I found myself hunting with the pack! Pisces ♓️ Full moon!! That\'s why all the love and lust poems. Emotions all over the place! All the poets are in their feelings! 😆
September 1st, 2023 05:14
I need your love
Introverted Sage said:
A love that is addicting..
I hope your match is equally addicted!
Nice write!
August 31st, 2023 15:47
Introverted Sage said:
A love that is addicting..
I hope your match is equally addicted!
Nice write!
August 31st, 2023 15:47
Massage
Bella Shepard said:
In Greek phylosophy the number 3 was considered as the perfect number of harmony, wisdom and understanding. I\'d say you hit all three with a bang (no pun intended) in this one. Wow!
August 31st, 2023 14:10
Bella Shepard said:
In Greek phylosophy the number 3 was considered as the perfect number of harmony, wisdom and understanding. I\'d say you hit all three with a bang (no pun intended) in this one. Wow!
August 31st, 2023 14:10
Massage
Parisab said:
‘The tenderness that lust evokes’ capturing the right balance between, is talent, in your poem-and then my favorite is the stanza about treating the canvas for more oil-nicely done poet peer-
August 31st, 2023 09:22
Parisab said:
‘The tenderness that lust evokes’ capturing the right balance between, is talent, in your poem-and then my favorite is the stanza about treating the canvas for more oil-nicely done poet peer-
August 31st, 2023 09:22
Massage
Pop64 said:
The imagery in this really allows the reader to be part of the write, the actual stimulating sensation of the massage. Wonderful read!
August 31st, 2023 06:39
Pop64 said:
The imagery in this really allows the reader to be part of the write, the actual stimulating sensation of the massage. Wonderful read!
August 31st, 2023 06:39
Massage
MissD said:
uuhhhhhmmmm SO WELL WRIITTEN
it made me take a deep breath after reading it
August 31st, 2023 05:39
MissD said:
uuhhhhhmmmm SO WELL WRIITTEN
it made me take a deep breath after reading it
August 31st, 2023 05:39
Massage
LIZ said:
Mmmmm 🥵 Did you know number 3 during intimacy means you love trying out new things? So ummmmm yeah...definitely running free! Loved this!
August 31st, 2023 03:22
LIZ said:
Mmmmm 🥵 Did you know number 3 during intimacy means you love trying out new things? So ummmmm yeah...definitely running free! Loved this!
August 31st, 2023 03:22
Witches brew
Destined Perspectives said:
I love your style, rhyme, flow and imagery! Perfection!
August 30th, 2023 17:17
Destined Perspectives said:
I love your style, rhyme, flow and imagery! Perfection!
August 30th, 2023 17:17
I need your love
Bella Shepard said:
I had to read this poem aloud for the beauty of its rhyme and cadence. Such an outpouring of love, all consuming and quite breathtaking. A Master Class in Romantic Poetry!
August 30th, 2023 14:24
Bella Shepard said:
I had to read this poem aloud for the beauty of its rhyme and cadence. Such an outpouring of love, all consuming and quite breathtaking. A Master Class in Romantic Poetry!
August 30th, 2023 14:24
I need your love
Caring dove said:
Some very lovely words in this writing 🙂 love the mention of the sun and rain .. the star needs the sky ( sometimes another can make us feel more ‘complete ‘ and we can feel wrong without them ..
I like your poem )
August 30th, 2023 12:07
Caring dove said:
Some very lovely words in this writing 🙂 love the mention of the sun and rain .. the star needs the sky ( sometimes another can make us feel more ‘complete ‘ and we can feel wrong without them ..
I like your poem )
August 30th, 2023 12:07
I need your love
lenore_inNeverland said:
People fall in love with other people.
I fell in love with the words
Peto you are AMAZING!!!
August 30th, 2023 11:50
lenore_inNeverland said:
People fall in love with other people.
I fell in love with the words
Peto you are AMAZING!!!
August 30th, 2023 11:50
I need your love
buzzybee4you said:
Wow. This poem is a masterpiece! Keep them coming!
August 30th, 2023 11:25
buzzybee4you said:
Wow. This poem is a masterpiece! Keep them coming!
August 30th, 2023 11:25
I need your love
peto said:
Christina
You really do give me a lift with such kindness
Couldn\'t do it without such encouragement
Many thanks dear poetess x
August 30th, 2023 09:15
peto said:
Christina
You really do give me a lift with such kindness
Couldn\'t do it without such encouragement
Many thanks dear poetess x
August 30th, 2023 09:15
I need your love
Christina8 said:
all I know is it\'s a lucky gal you wrote this about. It seems like your poetry gets better and better! The last line says it all! I also had to fan myself when reading certain lines of this poem....MORE please!! x
August 30th, 2023 09:06
Christina8 said:
all I know is it\'s a lucky gal you wrote this about. It seems like your poetry gets better and better! The last line says it all! I also had to fan myself when reading certain lines of this poem....MORE please!! x
August 30th, 2023 09:06
I need your love
LIZ said:
This is such a powerful declaration of love! \"It\'s a magical thing, if you\'re wearing my ring\"- I had to fan myself when I read this line! \"Like my blood needs a vein Or the flowers need rain\"! Mmmmmm I love it! ALL OR NOTHING! ❤️
August 30th, 2023 05:28
LIZ said:
This is such a powerful declaration of love! \"It\'s a magical thing, if you\'re wearing my ring\"- I had to fan myself when I read this line! \"Like my blood needs a vein Or the flowers need rain\"! Mmmmmm I love it! ALL OR NOTHING! ❤️
August 30th, 2023 05:28
Witches brew
Pop64 said:
Wonderful imagery you provide in this well rhyming write! Love the last line to this, as it not only summarizes,, but truly emphasizes. Great writing
August 29th, 2023 13:57
Pop64 said:
Wonderful imagery you provide in this well rhyming write! Love the last line to this, as it not only summarizes,, but truly emphasizes. Great writing
August 29th, 2023 13:57
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