Comments received on poems by peto
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Teddy.15 said:
Mr Peto did you go to venice without meeee? LoL 🤣 awe, I hope with all my heart you find that special arm that holds onto yours. 💖
September 11th, 2023 16:03
Teddy.15 said:
Mr Peto did you go to venice without meeee? LoL 🤣 awe, I hope with all my heart you find that special arm that holds onto yours. 💖
September 11th, 2023 16:03
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Pop64 said:
Events and experiences are always better when shared or seen through a loved one\'s eyes. You\'ve eloquently displayed that with this write. Beautiful
September 11th, 2023 14:42
Pop64 said:
Events and experiences are always better when shared or seen through a loved one\'s eyes. You\'ve eloquently displayed that with this write. Beautiful
September 11th, 2023 14:42
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Introverted Sage said:
You\'ve seen the world it seems and that along with your writing is an amazing gift.
Great write!
Thanks for sharing
September 11th, 2023 13:01
Introverted Sage said:
You\'ve seen the world it seems and that along with your writing is an amazing gift.
Great write!
Thanks for sharing
September 11th, 2023 13:01
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Bella Shepard said:
Your poems have the most beautiful, flowing cadence of rhyme that I just love. You\'ve taken us on an amazing journey to far away places with all of their attractions, and back home again to hearth and home where love awaits. I was oohing and aahing!
September 11th, 2023 11:50
Bella Shepard said:
Your poems have the most beautiful, flowing cadence of rhyme that I just love. You\'ve taken us on an amazing journey to far away places with all of their attractions, and back home again to hearth and home where love awaits. I was oohing and aahing!
September 11th, 2023 11:50
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Christina8 said:
This is an absolutely beautiful and well written piece that left me breathless!!!! Just wonderful!!
September 11th, 2023 09:28
Christina8 said:
This is an absolutely beautiful and well written piece that left me breathless!!!! Just wonderful!!
September 11th, 2023 09:28
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Christina8 said:
This is phenomenal stevie!! You mentioned Ancient Egypt....I love it so much I have a hieroglyph tattooed on my arm! What woman wouldn\'t want to hear/see the words you\'ve displayed here....so romantic! Great job!!
September 11th, 2023 09:21
Christina8 said:
This is phenomenal stevie!! You mentioned Ancient Egypt....I love it so much I have a hieroglyph tattooed on my arm! What woman wouldn\'t want to hear/see the words you\'ve displayed here....so romantic! Great job!!
September 11th, 2023 09:21
Missing
LIZ said:
Awwwwww things just don\'t feel the same when that person\'s missing! Beautiful!!
September 11th, 2023 05:08
LIZ said:
Awwwwww things just don\'t feel the same when that person\'s missing! Beautiful!!
September 11th, 2023 05:08
Clear
Introverted Sage said:
This is magical!
\'When the heart sees it all becomes clear\'
It truly does!
Great write!
September 10th, 2023 12:35
Introverted Sage said:
This is magical!
\'When the heart sees it all becomes clear\'
It truly does!
Great write!
September 10th, 2023 12:35
Candlewitch you tube version
LIZ said:
Oh my God!!! I love it!!!!! ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
September 10th, 2023 08:38
LIZ said:
Oh my God!!! I love it!!!!! ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
September 10th, 2023 08:38
Candlewitch
LIZ said:
😵😵😵😵😵😵 I\'m right here!! 🧙♀️ 🪄 🧹 I\'m a good witch though....sometimes!!! You realize this is almost....goth!!! Don\'t play with me!!!! LOVED IT!!!!
September 10th, 2023 08:24
LIZ said:
😵😵😵😵😵😵 I\'m right here!! 🧙♀️ 🪄 🧹 I\'m a good witch though....sometimes!!! You realize this is almost....goth!!! Don\'t play with me!!!! LOVED IT!!!!
September 10th, 2023 08:24
Clear
Bobby O said:
Ritz to the Pawn
Crease in the fold
Reading the phrasing you choose never gets old
September 10th, 2023 07:41
Bobby O said:
Ritz to the Pawn
Crease in the fold
Reading the phrasing you choose never gets old
September 10th, 2023 07:41
Clear
LIZ said:
Doesn\'t seem clear at times. But I\'m grabbing my bag and heels!!! Yes, they match!!! Ayyyyyy this is just incredible!!! \"If it isn\'t too late Readjust twists of fate\"- Now I\'m putting on my crown!! Let\'s go!!! ❤️
September 10th, 2023 07:07
LIZ said:
Doesn\'t seem clear at times. But I\'m grabbing my bag and heels!!! Yes, they match!!! Ayyyyyy this is just incredible!!! \"If it isn\'t too late Readjust twists of fate\"- Now I\'m putting on my crown!! Let\'s go!!! ❤️
September 10th, 2023 07:07
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Introverted Sage said:
This is so beautiful!
Like a warm-squishy eternal flame kind of love!
Love it!
September 9th, 2023 18:18
Introverted Sage said:
This is so beautiful!
Like a warm-squishy eternal flame kind of love!
Love it!
September 9th, 2023 18:18
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Bella Shepard said:
Seamlessly written, flowing like a beautiful stream, this poem has achieved all that it set out to do, describing a love for the ages. You continue to amaze me!
September 9th, 2023 14:52
Bella Shepard said:
Seamlessly written, flowing like a beautiful stream, this poem has achieved all that it set out to do, describing a love for the ages. You continue to amaze me!
September 9th, 2023 14:52
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Parisab said:
These actions made epics and universal love stories, truly a classic :I would carry the world on my shoulder, and die a thousand times each day, should your eyes say yes, none of it is a chore (translations from the lyrics of a Persian song) Thank you for writing this, Peto
September 9th, 2023 09:24
Parisab said:
These actions made epics and universal love stories, truly a classic :I would carry the world on my shoulder, and die a thousand times each day, should your eyes say yes, none of it is a chore (translations from the lyrics of a Persian song) Thank you for writing this, Peto
September 9th, 2023 09:24
Open
Bobby O said:
I will build you a castle with the tower so high it reaches the moon I’ll gather melodies from birdies that fly and compose you a tune
September 9th, 2023 06:38
Bobby O said:
I will build you a castle with the tower so high it reaches the moon I’ll gather melodies from birdies that fly and compose you a tune
September 9th, 2023 06:38
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LIZ said:
Ohhhhhh wait....wait....I\'m catching my breath!!! Jesus!!!! Ok., my favorite lines: \"As you silence my screams When you tell me You\'ll always be mine\". Ahhhh forever! I\'m falling! AND \"Tickling at the core Of my soul\"- I felt it! Thank you!!
September 9th, 2023 04:01
LIZ said:
Ohhhhhh wait....wait....I\'m catching my breath!!! Jesus!!!! Ok., my favorite lines: \"As you silence my screams When you tell me You\'ll always be mine\". Ahhhh forever! I\'m falling! AND \"Tickling at the core Of my soul\"- I felt it! Thank you!!
September 9th, 2023 04:01
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Introverted Sage said:
Looking at our darkness.. sometimes forgiveness of self is the hardest.
\'And probably do the same things yet again\'
Yes 1000 times! We are who we are! Great write!
September 8th, 2023 18:42
Introverted Sage said:
Looking at our darkness.. sometimes forgiveness of self is the hardest.
\'And probably do the same things yet again\'
Yes 1000 times! We are who we are! Great write!
September 8th, 2023 18:42
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Bella Shepard said:
First of all, impeccable rhyming and flow. Bare the soul and find inspiration for this amazing poem. Too good to be painful!
September 8th, 2023 14:55
Bella Shepard said:
First of all, impeccable rhyming and flow. Bare the soul and find inspiration for this amazing poem. Too good to be painful!
September 8th, 2023 14:55
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Christina8 said:
Your words are purge of feelings...I like your honesty! And you would probably do the same things yet again. I love this piece!! Difficult to write it down so it rhymes, and so eloquently, I believe.
September 8th, 2023 13:08
Christina8 said:
Your words are purge of feelings...I like your honesty! And you would probably do the same things yet again. I love this piece!! Difficult to write it down so it rhymes, and so eloquently, I believe.
September 8th, 2023 13:08
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Teddy.15 said:
Yes Peto this is what love is truly made of, emotions tragedy guilt sorrow it\'s all in here with the truth which is if it was like that in the first place going back would only be the second play! This is wonderful I can feel your soul my friend. And I am beside you as I once had this type of love. Bravo amico 💖
September 8th, 2023 03:14
Teddy.15 said:
Yes Peto this is what love is truly made of, emotions tragedy guilt sorrow it\'s all in here with the truth which is if it was like that in the first place going back would only be the second play! This is wonderful I can feel your soul my friend. And I am beside you as I once had this type of love. Bravo amico 💖
September 8th, 2023 03:14
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LIZ said:
Oh I know, and I\'m enjoying it! 🙂 And...still to be accepted...definitely uplifting!
September 8th, 2023 03:07
LIZ said:
Oh I know, and I\'m enjoying it! 🙂 And...still to be accepted...definitely uplifting!
September 8th, 2023 03:07
Again
LIZ said:
Jesus!!! And you talk about me??? An explosion of feelings! And I hope, just like me, you\'re just purging, releasing, and letting go! \"Reality irrelevant, Enough to drop an elephant\" Lord have mercy!!! But you\'re right, given the chance, I\'d probably do it again!! Loved it!!!!
September 8th, 2023 02:04
LIZ said:
Jesus!!! And you talk about me??? An explosion of feelings! And I hope, just like me, you\'re just purging, releasing, and letting go! \"Reality irrelevant, Enough to drop an elephant\" Lord have mercy!!! But you\'re right, given the chance, I\'d probably do it again!! Loved it!!!!
September 8th, 2023 02:04
Real
Bella Shepard said:
I hear Cole Porter\'s \"I\'ve got you under my skin\", playing in the background as you maneuver your way through the tangled web of love, with the eternal hope of a silver lining at the end. This poem has it all in spades my friend!
September 7th, 2023 15:51
Bella Shepard said:
I hear Cole Porter\'s \"I\'ve got you under my skin\", playing in the background as you maneuver your way through the tangled web of love, with the eternal hope of a silver lining at the end. This poem has it all in spades my friend!
September 7th, 2023 15:51
Real
Pop64 said:
The cadence in this right is flowing and smooth, while your words speak with vivid imagery, successfully providing the clarity and strong meaning of the piece. Beautiful work!
September 7th, 2023 14:01
Pop64 said:
The cadence in this right is flowing and smooth, while your words speak with vivid imagery, successfully providing the clarity and strong meaning of the piece. Beautiful work!
September 7th, 2023 14:01
Real
peto said:
Thank you sage
I really enjoy your insight
\"Other worldly magical \"
Such a poetic response
Very much appreciated
September 7th, 2023 11:54
peto said:
Thank you sage
I really enjoy your insight
\"Other worldly magical \"
Such a poetic response
Very much appreciated
September 7th, 2023 11:54
Real
Introverted Sage said:
\'How cruel must it all get
For this one of a kind
To see sunrise announce a new day\'
.. it seems the love that must come out of this is other worldly magical.. that must be why the one under your skin holds hope.. the soul never forgets or so it seems.
September 7th, 2023 10:57
Introverted Sage said:
\'How cruel must it all get
For this one of a kind
To see sunrise announce a new day\'
.. it seems the love that must come out of this is other worldly magical.. that must be why the one under your skin holds hope.. the soul never forgets or so it seems.
September 7th, 2023 10:57
Eclipse
Introverted Sage said:
\'I witnessed this magnificence
Pale into insignificance\'
To have such a deep love and reverence for a person is so beautiful, yet incredibly difficult I imagine. Your poetry always describes the visceral dichotomy so incredibly. Sometimes discreetly sometimes raw, all times brilliant!
September 7th, 2023 10:32
Introverted Sage said:
\'I witnessed this magnificence
Pale into insignificance\'
To have such a deep love and reverence for a person is so beautiful, yet incredibly difficult I imagine. Your poetry always describes the visceral dichotomy so incredibly. Sometimes discreetly sometimes raw, all times brilliant!
September 7th, 2023 10:32
Real
lenore_inNeverland said:
Oh peto- I agree with everyone else, \"Still that age old romantic
Who\'s under my skin
Hopes one day you\'ll return
With the demons within \"
this is beautiful, beautiful, beautiful! And real, and so so so similar to exactly how I feel at the moment that I am almost considering calling this telepathy!
September 7th, 2023 10:30
lenore_inNeverland said:
Oh peto- I agree with everyone else, \"Still that age old romantic
Who\'s under my skin
Hopes one day you\'ll return
With the demons within \"
this is beautiful, beautiful, beautiful! And real, and so so so similar to exactly how I feel at the moment that I am almost considering calling this telepathy!
September 7th, 2023 10:30
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