Comments received on poems by Doggerel Dave



All Hail to the Restโ€ฆ.
Goldfinch60 said:

I hope I don\'t get pruned Dave.

Andy

September 18th, 2024 02:04

My System
Thad Wilk said:

Hi Dave!! ๐Ÿถ
Great poem and system
you came up with here! ๐Ÿ˜
You\'re right on target ๐ŸŽฏ
once again l fear!! ๐Ÿ’ฏ YES!
Best regards โœŒ๏ธ ๐Ÿ•Š๏ธ Thad

September 17th, 2024 09:39

Screw Top.
Doggerel Dave said:

But do they know when to laugh and to laugh appropriately without name calling? I don\'t particularly wish this to degenerate into a feud, so let\'s cease this now.๐Ÿ•Š๏ธ ?

September 17th, 2024 02:28

Screw Top.
Teddy.15 said:

The title above tells you the story, if this is the case why did you bother to write the rest? LoL ๐Ÿคฃ ๐Ÿคฃ ๐Ÿคฃ ๐Ÿคฃ ๐Ÿคฃ ๐Ÿคฃ ๐Ÿคฃ
Keep calm and Carry on dearest David, I\'m only screwing with you. ๐Ÿ‡ฎ๐Ÿ‡น๐Ÿด๓ ง๓ ข๓ ฅ๓ ฎ๓ ง๓ ฟ๐Ÿ‡ฎ๐Ÿ‡น๐Ÿด๓ ง๓ ข๓ ฅ๓ ฎ๓ ง๓ ฟ๐Ÿ‡ฎ๐Ÿ‡น๐Ÿด๓ ง๓ ข๓ ฅ๓ ฎ๓ ง๓ ฟ๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿค—

September 16th, 2024 11:06

Patriotism
Thad Wilk said:

A deep, evocative
and thought
provoking write! ๐Ÿค”
I\'ll have to
sleep ๐Ÿ˜ด on this
one tonight! ๐ŸŒ—
Best regards โœŒ๏ธ Thad

September 15th, 2024 19:12

Patriotism
Neville said:


and would probably result in time out .. or worse .. okay let\'s say it was hermit crab .. neither of your folks were tho were they .. Got\'cha .. N

September 14th, 2024 08:41

Patriotism
Goldfinch60 said:

You have found your own way in life Dave and that is all life needs.

Andy

September 14th, 2024 01:16

Patriotism
Dan Williams said:

Heavy. Makes one wonder what does make a patriot? Nice work.

September 14th, 2024 00:26

Patriotism
MendedFences27 said:

OK, Dave, no fealty to anything? I agree that patriotism should only be used in terms of survival, but one can still love one\'s country. It\'s OK to enjoy the freedom one has. Stirring the pot again, hey? - Phil A.

September 13th, 2024 10:05

Patriotism
Tony36 said:

Excellent write

September 13th, 2024 09:52

Patriotism
Cassie58 said:

Iโ€™m gonna upset the apple cart here because every bone in my body is patriotic ๐Ÿ˜‚. I thought it was religion that caused all the wars? Iโ€™m laughing at what Teddy said to you ๐Ÿ˜‚. Has she got you summed up Dave?

September 13th, 2024 09:32

Patriotism
sorenbarrett said:

Dave I think that patriotism should begin with oneself. \"To thine own self be true\" Yea Dave I\'m with you.

September 13th, 2024 05:38

Patriotism
Teddy.15 said:

You got the gene of misery and agro though ๐Ÿคฃ lol

September 13th, 2024 04:33

Patriotism
orchidee said:

Sir Orchi NS here - you found that Prodigal son yet? He may have come home by now!

September 13th, 2024 01:50

War Veterans
Thad Wilk said:

Intriguing, poignant,
captivating and true! ๐Ÿ˜ข
I agree ๐Ÿ’ฏ percent
with you!! ๐Ÿ‘
Great share Dave!!
Best regards โœŒ๏ธ Thad

September 12th, 2024 22:33

Screw Top.
2781 said:

You need a jar and bottle opener for seniors. Very affordable and a must for the draw. Beware though, some are better than others.

September 12th, 2024 18:25

Screw Top.
Goldfinch60 said:

I have a glass cutter Dave to cut the tops off. |LOL

Andy

September 12th, 2024 01:21

Screw Top.
Thad Wilk said:

Awesome poem and
story! ๐Ÿ˜ฒ
Kinda sad yet funny! ๐Ÿคฃ
Sounds like cross threaded
Screw tops, you
Needed a collage degree ยฟ?ยฟ
Thanks for sharing with me...
Best regards โœŒ๏ธ Thad
๐Ÿ˜

September 11th, 2024 21:27

Screw Top.
Cassie58 said:

Being in this position can cause a certain amount of aggravation. I have never resorted to knives. Reading about YOU however Dave, I couldnโ€™t help but smile. My solution, I have a man who can. An engineer in the house helps:) Hope your day has been trouble free. A fun write.

September 11th, 2024 14:15

Screw Top.
Cheeky Missy said:

Mansplaining is a term one of my brothers introduced to me while carrying on his usual conversation, throwing it in as if to add extra flavor. And if I never dreamed such a topic as you\'ve chosen could be grand for this genre, thank you for showing me. Delightfully rendered with excellent details and a a delicious poignancy and humor. Thank you for sharing.

September 11th, 2024 09:04

Screw Top.
sorenbarrett said:

Not only have I been anticipating your next release but you hit upon a subject that I have had recent encounters with. You made me laugh Dave and that deserves a fave.

September 11th, 2024 06:06

Screw Top.
Neville said:



You need an angle grinder mate .. problem halved .. :)

September 11th, 2024 03:01

A Heavy Load
Thad Wilk said:

A very captivating
and intriguing poem!! ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ„
Great rhyme scheme
Much enjoyed!! โ˜บ๏ธ
And that\'s not bull! ๐Ÿ‚
Best regards โœŒ๏ธ Thad

September 10th, 2024 23:03

Get Me Out of Hereโ€ฆ
Saleh Ben Saleh said:

In search of peace of mind and happiness people tend to get lost. Everything in life is temporary and we are passing through. Love, compassion and good deeds do grant us some sort of self-satisfaction and contentment.
I enjoyed reading your poem and I fully understand your point of view.

September 10th, 2024 01:57

I Seek it Here, I Seek it There, I Seek it Everywhere..
Thad Wilk said:

Great read indeed! ๐Ÿ‘
Glad I \'sniffed\' this out! โ˜บ๏ธ
I baked a mouse!! ๐Ÿญ
I\'n my oven by
accident,
stunk up my whole dang house. ๐Ÿ˜ณ
Best regards โœŒ๏ธ Thad




September 9th, 2024 19:21

Belief
Thad Wilk said:

A great read
awesome brevity!! ๐Ÿ‘
Thanks for sharing
your wisdom with me! ๐Ÿ˜‰
Best regards my friend!
โœŒ๏ธ Thad

September 3rd, 2024 22:01

Quite Potty.
Cheeky Missy said:

Aww, you had to go and make me laugh! This is too fun, beautifully expressive and wonderfully rhymed, infused with subtle humor. Me loves. Thank you very much for sharing.

September 3rd, 2024 19:56

My Sod itโ€ฆsorry, Sonnetโ€ฆbut then againโ€ฆ.
Cheeky Missy said:

Wow! [Clammers in vain for my own copy of this to squirrel away.] What a beauty just to prove what, eh? And Google couldn\'t locate the article from that link?! Try this:
https://aeon.co/essays/sonnets-are-machines-for-thinking-through-complex-emotions?

September 3rd, 2024 18:53

Get Me Out of Hereโ€ฆ
orchidee said:

I just popped in to say summat completely NS - or rather Fido has. He says \'Woof, how\'s ya day going?!\' lol.
Do eccentric UK people have talking dogs?

September 3rd, 2024 10:33

Troll.
Thad Wilk said:

Howdy Dave! ๐Ÿ‘‹ ๐Ÿถ ๐Ÿ˜
Great read,
I let a Troll move
Into my living space
recently, all is well still! ๐Ÿคฃ
Best regards โœŒ๏ธ Thad



September 1st, 2024 22:21



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