Comments received on poems by Doggerel Dave



Oh Please!
PoetVids - I am WriteBeLight only in Video Version :) said:

Those in politics will say whatever gets them elected. Like what you have done here. :)

October 9th, 2022 16:02

Hot or Wot?
sorenbarrett said:

Dave I love the humor at the expense of the suffering. I find it helpful to look at things this way. I too loved that you left the original in while supplying a substitution. I have many times decided to leave out options this was a great idea.

October 6th, 2022 09:40

Brahn Boots.
sorenbarrett said:

I love satire in any works, but poetry seems to lend itself to this. Inadvertently I have been wearing blue tennis shoes, does that count?

October 6th, 2022 07:12

I Seek it Here, I Seek it There, I Seek it Everywhere..
sorenbarrett said:

I think most of us can identify with that. My house I trapped over 80 rats in the attic one year. The worst was when the would die and fall down between the walls. The smell would raise through the vents until days later a swarm of flies would burst out of the vents and fill the house.

October 4th, 2022 06:38

Oh Please!
sorenbarrett said:

Politics has been a problem for some time. Plato wrote a book or two on it, back in the golden age of democracy. It didn\'t seem that he was much for democracy. He felt that a man should be selected to serve after being tested since childhood for complete honesty, trustworthiness and all that it takes to govern. He should be given housing, food, necessities, but no money and should he ever be found to have any put out of office and banished.

October 4th, 2022 06:32

Oh Please!
Bella Shepard said:

Here in the states we have a variety of names for them, but they all seem to be cut from the same cloth. May we commiserate with each other, quite possibly for ever.

October 3rd, 2022 13:26

Oh Please!
Fay Slimm. said:

Hope some of those \'pollies\' will read this lament and maybe through you Dave they change their ways. - - Well we can dream eh ? - Great read.

October 3rd, 2022 13:09

Oh Please!
Neville said:


You got it write sir .. \'pollies\' in my opinion may be responsible for more demises over time, than each of malaria, alcohol, drugs, war and despots combined .. Neville

October 3rd, 2022 05:26

Oh Please!
Goldfinch60 said:

Those politicians are a force of their own making and don\'t care about those they allegedly serve!!!

Andy

October 3rd, 2022 01:30

Oh Please!
arqios said:

Sleight of hand with millions and billions that disappear and reappear with panache!

October 3rd, 2022 01:26

I Seek it Here, I Seek it There, I Seek it Everywhere..
MendedFences27 said:

OK Dave. Loved this smell job. Never had a dead whatever in the wall but did have a live bird fly into the house and end up in the wall. Got it out within hours and it flew away. You did the right thing in moving, could have been years trying to find the damn thing, Got a chuckle out of this one. - Phil A.

October 1st, 2022 20:58

I Seek it Here, I Seek it There, I Seek it Everywhere..
PoetVids - I am WriteBeLight only in Video Version :) said:

This poem stinks! HA HA. Loved reading it! But, had to hold my nose. :)

October 1st, 2022 11:09

I Seek it Here, I Seek it There, I Seek it Everywhere..
Goldfinch60 said:

This reminds me of a time when there was an awful smell in our lounge - there was a dead mouse under the sofa!

Andy

October 1st, 2022 01:26

I Seek it Here, I Seek it There, I Seek it Everywhere..
Goldfinch60 said:

This reminds me of a time when there was an awful smell in our lounge - there was a dead mouse under the sofa!

Andy

October 1st, 2022 01:26

I Seek it Here, I Seek it There, I Seek it Everywhere..
Bella Shepard said:

Who knows what smells lurk in the depths of rental property? Did you consider an exorcism? Great fun to read, you now have me sniffing around my own dwelling.

September 30th, 2022 15:45

I Seek it Here, I Seek it There, I Seek it Everywhere..
Jerry Reynolds said:

Good read, Dave.
Dead rat in the wall renters nightmare.

September 30th, 2022 09:23

I Seek it Here, I Seek it There, I Seek it Everywhere..
Neville said:



Rest assured you old dog, you are not the only one to have encountered such a dreadful pong .. You demonstrated good scents in moving though when the origin could not be located easily .. Reminded me a bit of the horrors of 10 Rillington Place all those years ago .. and between you and me, of Annie behind the wallpaper of course .. wink wink Neville :)

September 30th, 2022 03:54

I Seek it Here, I Seek it There, I Seek it Everywhere..
arqios said:

Oh, reminds me of that dead possum that once stunk the whole place about 5 houses around. Somehow it can be that way to with human relations, a barometer of pressure or lack thereof... smelly but....

September 30th, 2022 02:46

Serious Questions
Bella Shepard said:

I have to say I\'ve never had a problem logging on or getting notifications. However, the rest of my life usually seems like an ongoing senior moment. So I\'ve decided to give it up and live in the moment, because a few moments later it may be gone. Ignorance can be bliss. Thank you for reminding me, I think.

September 29th, 2022 10:19

Serious Questions
Goldfinch60 said:

I too have never had that problem since being on MPS.. I know Orchi has that problem. All you can do is contact Julian.

Andy

September 29th, 2022 01:36

Serious Questions
Jerry Reynolds said:

I have not had a problem with MPS as yet. Sometimes I lose a response, but that is due to the sensitivity of my mouse. I use a Mac.

September 28th, 2022 15:35

Serious Questions
arqios said:

Re-register! Oh the horror! Had that happen to me on 4 sites.

September 28th, 2022 07:07

Serious Questions
Fay Slimm. said:

That\'s happened tp me at least twice Dave - - - I was refused a re-register too and when your password becomes unaccepted it becomes even worse to try to get in - -- I guess your words will be very familiar to more than a few on this site.

September 28th, 2022 06:39

Serious Questions
orchidee said:

When I was cut orf from here, I was on a rather complicated site. Found myself replying about 3 times to the same person. Not the same layout as MPS.

September 28th, 2022 06:09

Serious Questions
Paul Bell said:

You need to be hitting the pub, after ten pints senior moments disappear to be replaced with. Come with me sir, we\'ve got a cell with your name on it.

September 28th, 2022 05:35

Mud, Mud, Glorious Mud
Bella Shepard said:

My commiseration on the rain, hope you can find a semi-dry spot for the wedding. I was inspired to listen to Stanley Holloway\'s Brahn Boots, what a lovely story. You didn\'t by chance give your black or brown shoes away now did ya?

September 26th, 2022 14:30

Mud, Mud, Glorious Mud
Paul Bell said:

Noticed that when I hit the sun lounger this morning. It\'s bloody raining. It never rains here any more, what the hell is happening.

September 22nd, 2022 12:25

Mud, Mud, Glorious Mud
Neville said:



Congratulations sir Dave wot about sneakers ............................... :)

September 22nd, 2022 02:26

Mud, Mud, Glorious Mud
Doggerel Dave said:

Got that right, Andy - how did you guess? πŸ™ƒ

September 21st, 2022 02:00

Mud, Mud, Glorious Mud
Goldfinch60 said:

It\'s a bit damp I gather Dave. LOL

Andy😎😎😎

September 21st, 2022 01:40



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