Comments received on poems by Doggerel Dave
Kindness.
Goldfinch60 said:
I though about going to a gym once, but went and lay down in a darkened room until the thought went away
Andy
July 26th, 2024 01:15
Goldfinch60 said:
I though about going to a gym once, but went and lay down in a darkened room until the thought went away
Andy
July 26th, 2024 01:15
Kindness.
MendedFences27 said:
Why do they call it a GYM? Was it named after a fella called Jim, and they got the M right. but the GY are two keys left of where they wanted to be?
Does this mean a new beginning for DD? - Phil A.
July 25th, 2024 15:26
MendedFences27 said:
Why do they call it a GYM? Was it named after a fella called Jim, and they got the M right. but the GY are two keys left of where they wanted to be?
Does this mean a new beginning for DD? - Phil A.
July 25th, 2024 15:26
Kindness.
orchidee said:
Ohh I\'ve a one-track mind - it goes prodigal, prodigal,..... lol.
July 25th, 2024 09:51
orchidee said:
Ohh I\'ve a one-track mind - it goes prodigal, prodigal,..... lol.
July 25th, 2024 09:51
Kindness.
Bella Shepard said:
I think beneath that misanthropic sociopathy there is a kind and loving person who perhaps just needs a good work out. Let it shine my friend, let it shine!!!
July 25th, 2024 08:13
Bella Shepard said:
I think beneath that misanthropic sociopathy there is a kind and loving person who perhaps just needs a good work out. Let it shine my friend, let it shine!!!
July 25th, 2024 08:13
Kindness.
sorenbarrett said:
A gym can do that to you. Used to work out all the time but too many moves and too many years have passed
July 25th, 2024 06:05
sorenbarrett said:
A gym can do that to you. Used to work out all the time but too many moves and too many years have passed
July 25th, 2024 06:05
Polite Enquiry:
Thad Wilk said:
Dang good poem a
short and succinct treat! 😜
Technology,
just can\'t be beat! 😢
Best regards ✌️ Thad
July 24th, 2024 18:47
Thad Wilk said:
Dang good poem a
short and succinct treat! 😜
Technology,
just can\'t be beat! 😢
Best regards ✌️ Thad
July 24th, 2024 18:47
Polite Enquiry:
Neville said:
I know where you are coming from and I\'m with you all the way sir Dog ..
July 23rd, 2024 01:46
Neville said:
I know where you are coming from and I\'m with you all the way sir Dog ..
July 23rd, 2024 01:46
CrowdStrike
sorenbarrett said:
Dave this goes hard. For a man that has problems with metaphors this one is highly symbolic. Nicely done Dave.
July 21st, 2024 13:17
sorenbarrett said:
Dave this goes hard. For a man that has problems with metaphors this one is highly symbolic. Nicely done Dave.
July 21st, 2024 13:17
Polite Enquiry:
Goldfinch60 said:
Everything changes in time and we just have to deal with it as we have done for very many years Dave.
Andy
July 21st, 2024 00:47
Goldfinch60 said:
Everything changes in time and we just have to deal with it as we have done for very many years Dave.
Andy
July 21st, 2024 00:47
Polite Enquiry:
Thomas W Case said:
Technology can drive me crazy...actually, it\'s a short putt. lol
July 20th, 2024 23:56
Thomas W Case said:
Technology can drive me crazy...actually, it\'s a short putt. lol
July 20th, 2024 23:56
Polite Enquiry:
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good write, Dave. So you.
The red banner seems to be in your profile see if you can edit it from there. The dotted line around the box sometimes denotes an edit glitch.
July 20th, 2024 17:53
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good write, Dave. So you.
The red banner seems to be in your profile see if you can edit it from there. The dotted line around the box sometimes denotes an edit glitch.
July 20th, 2024 17:53
Polite Enquiry:
sorenbarrett said:
Now Dave here is one from you close to cryptic and symbolism but short. Well said my friend I think I\'m part of the plot.
July 20th, 2024 11:10
sorenbarrett said:
Now Dave here is one from you close to cryptic and symbolism but short. Well said my friend I think I\'m part of the plot.
July 20th, 2024 11:10
Polite Enquiry:
Doggerel Dave said:
I\'d like to plot the number of moves you\'ve made to avoid the Prodigal Son, orchi.
I think you privately messaged Management and asked them to throw obstacles in my way in order to save you from the Prodigal Son.
July 20th, 2024 06:21
Doggerel Dave said:
I\'d like to plot the number of moves you\'ve made to avoid the Prodigal Son, orchi.
I think you privately messaged Management and asked them to throw obstacles in my way in order to save you from the Prodigal Son.
July 20th, 2024 06:21
CrowdStrike
orchidee said:
We will always need cash. What about those not used to using cards or computers?
A silly advert said \'Crypto coins only\', and so a customer could not buy anything.
July 20th, 2024 01:35
orchidee said:
We will always need cash. What about those not used to using cards or computers?
A silly advert said \'Crypto coins only\', and so a customer could not buy anything.
July 20th, 2024 01:35
Polite Enquiry:
orchidee said:
I\'ve lost the plot re. that Prodigal Son. He must have gone on holiday, or as it says, still \'spending his substance in riotous living\'. I\'ve too sheltered a life to know about that. lol.
July 20th, 2024 01:32
orchidee said:
I\'ve lost the plot re. that Prodigal Son. He must have gone on holiday, or as it says, still \'spending his substance in riotous living\'. I\'ve too sheltered a life to know about that. lol.
July 20th, 2024 01:32
CrowdStrike
Cassie58 said:
What a fiasco yesterday was Dave. And how long will it take to put right? We are doing our bit in our family to ensure that cash is still used. This four liner covers a huge amount of ground and what ifs. Governments everywhere should be very worried. All the best to you.
July 19th, 2024 23:25
Cassie58 said:
What a fiasco yesterday was Dave. And how long will it take to put right? We are doing our bit in our family to ensure that cash is still used. This four liner covers a huge amount of ground and what ifs. Governments everywhere should be very worried. All the best to you.
July 19th, 2024 23:25
CrowdStrike
Thad Wilk said:
Great read 💯
Short and succinct
Yes, cash forever!! 👍
Thanks for sharing 🙏
Best regards ✌️ Thad
July 19th, 2024 18:33
Thad Wilk said:
Great read 💯
Short and succinct
Yes, cash forever!! 👍
Thanks for sharing 🙏
Best regards ✌️ Thad
July 19th, 2024 18:33
UK OK?
orchidee said:
And now the poem of The Prodigal Son.
Noooo, not here in the Comments box, says Fido!
July 18th, 2024 07:16
orchidee said:
And now the poem of The Prodigal Son.
Noooo, not here in the Comments box, says Fido!
July 18th, 2024 07:16
The Titanic.
Thad Wilk said:
Great poem,
eloquently penned,
you
really touched the
tip of the iceberg here
my friend! 😉 ⚓
My pleasure to read!!
Best regards ✌️. Thad
July 17th, 2024 20:09
Thad Wilk said:
Great poem,
eloquently penned,
you
really touched the
tip of the iceberg here
my friend! 😉 ⚓
My pleasure to read!!
Best regards ✌️. Thad
July 17th, 2024 20:09
Save The Children
Thad Wilk said:
👍
Powerful penning
I have ta agree! 💯
Skillfully expressed
woven wonderfully!
Best regards ✌️ Thad
July 16th, 2024 21:38
Thad Wilk said:
👍
Powerful penning
I have ta agree! 💯
Skillfully expressed
woven wonderfully!
Best regards ✌️ Thad
July 16th, 2024 21:38
Who’s Responsible?
Doggerel Dave said:
The Guardian has been elaborating on the theme....
July 16th, 2024 18:47
Doggerel Dave said:
The Guardian has been elaborating on the theme....
July 16th, 2024 18:47
O Aspiring Poet
sorenbarrett said:
Dave don\'t know how I missed this one I thought I had read all of yours but after reviewing most all of your tonight I found I had missed this one. I too have found this to be true. When I first started writing I thought that my poems were better than they were since then I have found that they were not too good. I thought that it was common curtesy that if someone read your poem you would return the favor. My mother taught me that if you receive a letter you return one. It seems that you stirred up some controversy with some of the comments on this \"rant\" but I\'m on your side on this one. It is only by reading other poems that your own get any better. I recognize that mine are often a bit obtuse, obscure, obsequious or too metaphoric but then I usually write for myself not others. I have been on other sites and they are all the same so I guess it is human nature not just a problem with any site itself. These words needed to be said Dave.
July 15th, 2024 18:53
sorenbarrett said:
Dave don\'t know how I missed this one I thought I had read all of yours but after reviewing most all of your tonight I found I had missed this one. I too have found this to be true. When I first started writing I thought that my poems were better than they were since then I have found that they were not too good. I thought that it was common curtesy that if someone read your poem you would return the favor. My mother taught me that if you receive a letter you return one. It seems that you stirred up some controversy with some of the comments on this \"rant\" but I\'m on your side on this one. It is only by reading other poems that your own get any better. I recognize that mine are often a bit obtuse, obscure, obsequious or too metaphoric but then I usually write for myself not others. I have been on other sites and they are all the same so I guess it is human nature not just a problem with any site itself. These words needed to be said Dave.
July 15th, 2024 18:53
Who’s Responsible?
NafisaSB said:
small one, but with a wealth of meaning...keep it coming
July 9th, 2024 23:31
NafisaSB said:
small one, but with a wealth of meaning...keep it coming
July 9th, 2024 23:31
Who’s Responsible?
Neville said:
Well said & no No additional explanation required ..
July 9th, 2024 11:07
Neville said:
Well said & no No additional explanation required ..
July 9th, 2024 11:07
« Return to the profile of Doggerel Dave
