Comments received on poems by Doggerel Dave
Disaster Trumps Competition.
Neville said:
ink well spilt in my opinion :)
December 20th, 2022 06:03
Neville said:
ink well spilt in my opinion :)
December 20th, 2022 06:03
Free Exchange
PoetVids - I am WriteBeLight only in Video Version :) said:
Such talent, like your writing! Great thought and presentation with your write - DD!
December 19th, 2022 18:48
PoetVids - I am WriteBeLight only in Video Version :) said:
Such talent, like your writing! Great thought and presentation with your write - DD!
December 19th, 2022 18:48
Concerning Some ‘C’ Words.
Neville said:
Its a dogs life innit .. but I get your point sir .. :)
December 19th, 2022 04:23
Neville said:
Its a dogs life innit .. but I get your point sir .. :)
December 19th, 2022 04:23
Concerning Some ‘C’ Words.
Fay Slimm. said:
Your write so cleverly composed on the subject of matings is full of poetic rhyming that leaves me with a wry smile - - thanks Dave - - I love the dry wit in this tale of \"unloosed copulation\" - - great read.
December 18th, 2022 03:27
Fay Slimm. said:
Your write so cleverly composed on the subject of matings is full of poetic rhyming that leaves me with a wry smile - - thanks Dave - - I love the dry wit in this tale of \"unloosed copulation\" - - great read.
December 18th, 2022 03:27
Concerning Some ‘C’ Words.
orchidee said:
A \'C\' word I must mention only in December is \'Christmas\', or else Gold/Andy will shoot me! lol.
December 18th, 2022 03:06
orchidee said:
A \'C\' word I must mention only in December is \'Christmas\', or else Gold/Andy will shoot me! lol.
December 18th, 2022 03:06
War Veterans
sorenbarrett said:
You make a good point. You would think that we would have reached a point where killing our fellow men for the good of money makers or power minded would no longer be tolerated.
December 16th, 2022 17:55
sorenbarrett said:
You make a good point. You would think that we would have reached a point where killing our fellow men for the good of money makers or power minded would no longer be tolerated.
December 16th, 2022 17:55
Mud, Mud, Glorious Mud
sorenbarrett said:
I remember her she put a damper on my spirits until we got a separation. Fun write Dave.
December 16th, 2022 07:25
sorenbarrett said:
I remember her she put a damper on my spirits until we got a separation. Fun write Dave.
December 16th, 2022 07:25
Serious Questions
sorenbarrett said:
Senior moments are becoming a regular expectation for me. Loved the forgotten rhyme. I find myself digging back through some of your older poems. What worries me is when I find in my poems of years ago speaking of my senior moments.
December 14th, 2022 20:46
sorenbarrett said:
Senior moments are becoming a regular expectation for me. Loved the forgotten rhyme. I find myself digging back through some of your older poems. What worries me is when I find in my poems of years ago speaking of my senior moments.
December 14th, 2022 20:46
The Chair.
PoetVids - I am WriteBeLight only in Video Version :) said:
I have one of those! Mine came the same way and needed the same effort to assemble. But, I like mine! Great fun to read DD!
December 12th, 2022 18:20
PoetVids - I am WriteBeLight only in Video Version :) said:
I have one of those! Mine came the same way and needed the same effort to assemble. But, I like mine! Great fun to read DD!
December 12th, 2022 18:20
Rampant Vegetation.
sorenbarrett said:
Dave I loved where this went. I too go to the bathroom when I have beans but for other purposes. This one seemed to grow out of control. Hope you find a pot of gold up there. Great piece.
December 8th, 2022 18:49
sorenbarrett said:
Dave I loved where this went. I too go to the bathroom when I have beans but for other purposes. This one seemed to grow out of control. Hope you find a pot of gold up there. Great piece.
December 8th, 2022 18:49
Rampant Vegetation.
arqios said:
At some stage you\'ll need a machete to navigate that room!
December 7th, 2022 03:54
arqios said:
At some stage you\'ll need a machete to navigate that room!
December 7th, 2022 03:54
Rampant Vegetation.
Goldfinch60 said:
You can get hooked by the cheese plant and taken out of that window Dave.
Andy
December 7th, 2022 02:48
Goldfinch60 said:
You can get hooked by the cheese plant and taken out of that window Dave.
Andy
December 7th, 2022 02:48
Balance.
Goldfinch60 said:
They only think of what they themselves want and don\'t care about anybody else.
As I have said many times: \"How do you know when a politician is lying?\" \"There lips move!\"
Andy
December 7th, 2022 02:26
Goldfinch60 said:
They only think of what they themselves want and don\'t care about anybody else.
As I have said many times: \"How do you know when a politician is lying?\" \"There lips move!\"
Andy
December 7th, 2022 02:26
Balance.
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good write, Dave.
I fear the fulcrum is up their bums.
December 6th, 2022 16:11
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good write, Dave.
I fear the fulcrum is up their bums.
December 6th, 2022 16:11
Balance.
Saxon Crow said:
Just walk away from it all mate. Don\'t even give them your time and energy. Let them play their little games.They are insignificant.
December 6th, 2022 05:29
Saxon Crow said:
Just walk away from it all mate. Don\'t even give them your time and energy. Let them play their little games.They are insignificant.
December 6th, 2022 05:29
Balance.
orchidee said:
Yep, we have Bozo, Coco, Thicko, etc..... as some newspapers call them.
One is in cuckoo land in a celebrity show on telly at the moment.
December 6th, 2022 05:04
orchidee said:
Yep, we have Bozo, Coco, Thicko, etc..... as some newspapers call them.
One is in cuckoo land in a celebrity show on telly at the moment.
December 6th, 2022 05:04
Balance.
arqios said:
That\'s a good one for the soapbox in the public square. If only people would listen and act accordingly.
December 6th, 2022 04:31
arqios said:
That\'s a good one for the soapbox in the public square. If only people would listen and act accordingly.
December 6th, 2022 04:31
The Chair.
Paul Bell said:
Flat pack is like a jail sentence.
Though there\'s bound to be someone in jail that can put it together.
December 4th, 2022 06:56
Paul Bell said:
Flat pack is like a jail sentence.
Though there\'s bound to be someone in jail that can put it together.
December 4th, 2022 06:56
The Chair.
Goldfinch60 said:
I know where you are coming from Dave and written instructions are becoming rare nowadays.
Andy
December 3rd, 2022 02:43
Goldfinch60 said:
I know where you are coming from Dave and written instructions are becoming rare nowadays.
Andy
December 3rd, 2022 02:43
The Chair.
Bella Shepard said:
I commiserate with your rant. Now in the good old days, I mean really old, instructions were very comprehensive, and parts neatly marked. What have we come to? A frustrating experience for you, but a fun read for me, couldn\'t help chuckling.
December 2nd, 2022 15:26
Bella Shepard said:
I commiserate with your rant. Now in the good old days, I mean really old, instructions were very comprehensive, and parts neatly marked. What have we come to? A frustrating experience for you, but a fun read for me, couldn\'t help chuckling.
December 2nd, 2022 15:26
The Chair.
sorenbarrett said:
I\'ve always had problems with these put together yourself items, the instructions are more misleading that helpful and sometimes the diagrams assume you have a forth dimensional view.
December 2nd, 2022 12:25
sorenbarrett said:
I\'ve always had problems with these put together yourself items, the instructions are more misleading that helpful and sometimes the diagrams assume you have a forth dimensional view.
December 2nd, 2022 12:25
The Chair.
arqios said:
Horrible when the shower chair disassembled itself mid-shower! But a very useful device to prevent bathroom falls.
December 2nd, 2022 06:05
arqios said:
Horrible when the shower chair disassembled itself mid-shower! But a very useful device to prevent bathroom falls.
December 2nd, 2022 06:05
The Chair.
orchidee said:
Or - you could do the \'empty chair therapy. Neville knows all about it.
December 2nd, 2022 05:26
orchidee said:
Or - you could do the \'empty chair therapy. Neville knows all about it.
December 2nd, 2022 05:26
The Chair.
orchidee said:
A missing screw?
My picnic (me) is missing a sandwich. I\'m a sandwich short of a picnic! lol.
December 2nd, 2022 05:25
orchidee said:
A missing screw?
My picnic (me) is missing a sandwich. I\'m a sandwich short of a picnic! lol.
December 2nd, 2022 05:25
The Chair.
Neville said:
I dunno whether you have ever seen or heard of the beloved yet incessantly bemoaning Victor Meldrew, the male lead in the tv comedy series One Foot in the Grave .. but I reckon you are turning into him you old dog ... Anyway, on this occasion, you make some very valid points under the unfortunate circumstances you outline & I feel sure that I would share them .. However, having now got that off my chest, I just wanna point out that I thought this was extremely cool and the tone of it would make permafrost look tame :)
December 2nd, 2022 04:54
Neville said:
I dunno whether you have ever seen or heard of the beloved yet incessantly bemoaning Victor Meldrew, the male lead in the tv comedy series One Foot in the Grave .. but I reckon you are turning into him you old dog ... Anyway, on this occasion, you make some very valid points under the unfortunate circumstances you outline & I feel sure that I would share them .. However, having now got that off my chest, I just wanna point out that I thought this was extremely cool and the tone of it would make permafrost look tame :)
December 2nd, 2022 04:54
The Chair.
Fay Slimm. said:
Ah - - Yes I relate to your rant my friend - - this read brought my first wry laugh of the day - I know the feeling dear Dave where hours of unwrapping and missing screws give \"fun\" a new meaning - -- no disjointed rhythm about this piece of witty outcry. Hoping your shower-chair has not yet let you down...............
December 2nd, 2022 03:43
Fay Slimm. said:
Ah - - Yes I relate to your rant my friend - - this read brought my first wry laugh of the day - I know the feeling dear Dave where hours of unwrapping and missing screws give \"fun\" a new meaning - -- no disjointed rhythm about this piece of witty outcry. Hoping your shower-chair has not yet let you down...............
December 2nd, 2022 03:43
Just Asking
sorenbarrett said:
Have you been reading my stuff again? You can recognize them by a couple of lines of crap. Oh wait a minute I let people make comments so I can comment back. Just more crap. Liked the piece though.
November 30th, 2022 22:12
sorenbarrett said:
Have you been reading my stuff again? You can recognize them by a couple of lines of crap. Oh wait a minute I let people make comments so I can comment back. Just more crap. Liked the piece though.
November 30th, 2022 22:12
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