Comments received on poems by rebmasters
pilgrim in the woods
Coyote said:
This is a MASTERPIECE! You hit it out of the park with this one Reb!
December 14th, 2021 17:24
Coyote said:
This is a MASTERPIECE! You hit it out of the park with this one Reb!
December 14th, 2021 17:24
More
L. B. Mek said:
\'soft caresses,
no promises,
the imprint of your mouth,
a stolen date
to meet again;\'
\'Slow, drip by drip,
beneath all the layers
our separate selves have built,
crystal liquid collects;
I never thought it would be so fluid.\'
December 2nd, 2021 05:40
L. B. Mek said:
\'soft caresses,
no promises,
the imprint of your mouth,
a stolen date
to meet again;\'
\'Slow, drip by drip,
beneath all the layers
our separate selves have built,
crystal liquid collects;
I never thought it would be so fluid.\'
December 2nd, 2021 05:40
your eyes
Nicholas Browning said:
I\'d pay good money to see a sight like that.
November 29th, 2021 07:18
Nicholas Browning said:
I\'d pay good money to see a sight like that.
November 29th, 2021 07:18
Owl
L. B. Mek said:
\'but tonight, the stars
are coming out like buttons
fastened, one at a time
on a navy blue coat.
Can you, see the same scene
from your skylight, like a postcard
frozen in time?\'
November 25th, 2021 06:09
L. B. Mek said:
\'but tonight, the stars
are coming out like buttons
fastened, one at a time
on a navy blue coat.
Can you, see the same scene
from your skylight, like a postcard
frozen in time?\'
November 25th, 2021 06:09
Frost
Caring dove said:
Beautiful words 🙂 I hope your feeling a bit better , in yourself
November 23rd, 2021 04:03
Caring dove said:
Beautiful words 🙂 I hope your feeling a bit better , in yourself
November 23rd, 2021 04:03
deceiving the dark
Coyote said:
Every line dripping with heartfelt emotion. This is honestly quite beautiful🙂
November 21st, 2021 18:41
Coyote said:
Every line dripping with heartfelt emotion. This is honestly quite beautiful🙂
November 21st, 2021 18:41
Gutter/Stars
L. B. Mek said:
\'Back home
(our home)
alone,
but together;
no longer a spectre
to hold me back from you,
I thought of truth;
there’s still so much to be gone through,\'
November 18th, 2021 06:31
L. B. Mek said:
\'Back home
(our home)
alone,
but together;
no longer a spectre
to hold me back from you,
I thought of truth;
there’s still so much to be gone through,\'
November 18th, 2021 06:31
Little Bird
Caring dove said:
Such lovely words . Beautiful read ! Flows with ease
November 11th, 2021 03:58
Caring dove said:
Such lovely words . Beautiful read ! Flows with ease
November 11th, 2021 03:58
Senses
shadow424 said:
Very nice.
life is that part left behind,
a voice, a shadow, the sense of belonging
November 6th, 2021 20:56
shadow424 said:
Very nice.
life is that part left behind,
a voice, a shadow, the sense of belonging
November 6th, 2021 20:56
Senses
dusk arising said:
Can\'t you sense the presence of those who did before what we do today in those places which take the mind to where it will go..... yes, we leave behind a part of the spirit of our souls and take away knowledge of the ethereal.
November 5th, 2021 09:15
dusk arising said:
Can\'t you sense the presence of those who did before what we do today in those places which take the mind to where it will go..... yes, we leave behind a part of the spirit of our souls and take away knowledge of the ethereal.
November 5th, 2021 09:15
Senses
Caring dove said:
Beautiful writing … with such sadness . I like your talk of nature .
November 5th, 2021 04:03
Caring dove said:
Beautiful writing … with such sadness . I like your talk of nature .
November 5th, 2021 04:03
Imperceptible
shadow424 said:
Very nice,.
the vision of life within a day.
A glimpse of what only a few will
see
November 4th, 2021 10:19
shadow424 said:
Very nice,.
the vision of life within a day.
A glimpse of what only a few will
see
November 4th, 2021 10:19
Imperceptible
Caring dove said:
Nice to see you posting poetry again , Becky 🙂 great poem … really like your words
November 4th, 2021 05:44
Caring dove said:
Nice to see you posting poetry again , Becky 🙂 great poem … really like your words
November 4th, 2021 05:44
Flood
shadow424 said:
Very nice
Well crafted
The reality of trying to save someone
October 11th, 2021 20:07
shadow424 said:
Very nice
Well crafted
The reality of trying to save someone
October 11th, 2021 20:07
Flood
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
(one day
if your inspiration for these words, reads this Poem
knowing,
their innocent, loving smile
allowed such warmth
to blossom in your heart
I hope, in-turn
there\'s Pride that swells, deep in their deserving heart)
October 11th, 2021 06:55
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
(one day
if your inspiration for these words, reads this Poem
knowing,
their innocent, loving smile
allowed such warmth
to blossom in your heart
I hope, in-turn
there\'s Pride that swells, deep in their deserving heart)
October 11th, 2021 06:55
Flood
Caring dove said:
This person sounds really sad ... it’s difficult to see someone else hurting jn life and we do want to save them . This is how I read your poem , seeing someone else in pain , that’s so difficult .
You really have a good way with words , in this one 🙂
October 11th, 2021 03:01
Caring dove said:
This person sounds really sad ... it’s difficult to see someone else hurting jn life and we do want to save them . This is how I read your poem , seeing someone else in pain , that’s so difficult .
You really have a good way with words , in this one 🙂
October 11th, 2021 03:01
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