Comments received on poems by rebmasters
the little she
L. B. Mek said:
a thought provoking read, although
that \'little she\' has me a little confused/concerned
is this a she, looking back at a little she
or someone else\'s perspective, your words voice?
I think that essential context
may be necessarily to prevent our misinterpretation
and free our imagination, to trust
your artistry\'s conceptualisation...
if that makes any sense, lol
June 7th, 2021 05:18
L. B. Mek said:
a thought provoking read, although
that \'little she\' has me a little confused/concerned
is this a she, looking back at a little she
or someone else\'s perspective, your words voice?
I think that essential context
may be necessarily to prevent our misinterpretation
and free our imagination, to trust
your artistry\'s conceptualisation...
if that makes any sense, lol
June 7th, 2021 05:18
Finite
Saxon Crow said:
It\'s all the same and one and like this poetry beautiful
June 5th, 2021 15:17
Saxon Crow said:
It\'s all the same and one and like this poetry beautiful
June 5th, 2021 15:17
Burn Me
L. B. Mek said:
when love is so far out of reach
for a lost generation
all they can do, is fantastically dramatize - it
as a fantasy concept, so devoid of realism
we can hardly recognise, what they\'re talking about...
what a pathetic regression
June 4th, 2021 05:30
L. B. Mek said:
when love is so far out of reach
for a lost generation
all they can do, is fantastically dramatize - it
as a fantasy concept, so devoid of realism
we can hardly recognise, what they\'re talking about...
what a pathetic regression
June 4th, 2021 05:30
Cat
L. B. Mek said:
if this is a dedication to your cat
then that\'s one lucky feline, lol
really like your exotic wording and imagery
a fun read (islet, was a brilliantly quirky twist)..
btw my friend, have you read
\'Kafka on the Shore\' by Haruki Murakami?
June 4th, 2021 03:44
L. B. Mek said:
if this is a dedication to your cat
then that\'s one lucky feline, lol
really like your exotic wording and imagery
a fun read (islet, was a brilliantly quirky twist)..
btw my friend, have you read
\'Kafka on the Shore\' by Haruki Murakami?
June 4th, 2021 03:44
Cat
Saxon Crow said:
NICE. of coloured, spiral stars,
oceanic vistas of black,
but yet we part. Great verse.
June 3rd, 2021 05:00
Saxon Crow said:
NICE. of coloured, spiral stars,
oceanic vistas of black,
but yet we part. Great verse.
June 3rd, 2021 05:00
blood red moon
L. B. Mek said:
I\'m sorry my friend, without context
I found this hard to grasp
but in trying to comprehend
I read it a few more times
and then appreciated, the flow
and subtle: word choice placement..
a unique write, truly
June 3rd, 2021 04:02
L. B. Mek said:
I\'m sorry my friend, without context
I found this hard to grasp
but in trying to comprehend
I read it a few more times
and then appreciated, the flow
and subtle: word choice placement..
a unique write, truly
June 3rd, 2021 04:02
Alive
dusk arising said:
I believe it does.... I wonder what we\'ll get next time around?
June 1st, 2021 05:21
dusk arising said:
I believe it does.... I wonder what we\'ll get next time around?
June 1st, 2021 05:21
Reverence
L. B. Mek said:
really good shorty!
it may seem straightforward, but in actuality
it cuts deep with precision
to the nucleus origins of the pain..
a succinct write and a really good read
June 1st, 2021 04:12
L. B. Mek said:
really good shorty!
it may seem straightforward, but in actuality
it cuts deep with precision
to the nucleus origins of the pain..
a succinct write and a really good read
June 1st, 2021 04:12
Hedgehog
L. B. Mek said:
\'I don\'t know how to articulate my
endless wandering words
whose walls: I just try to surround\'
\'You know so much more than maladroit me\'..
(“The only true wisdom is in knowing you know nothing.”
“The unexamined life is not worth living.”
\"Gnothi Seauton - Know Thyself\")..
true wisdom, is showcasing transformative knowledge
without ever realising it...
thanks for sharing dear poet
May 31st, 2021 05:19
L. B. Mek said:
\'I don\'t know how to articulate my
endless wandering words
whose walls: I just try to surround\'
\'You know so much more than maladroit me\'..
(“The only true wisdom is in knowing you know nothing.”
“The unexamined life is not worth living.”
\"Gnothi Seauton - Know Thyself\")..
true wisdom, is showcasing transformative knowledge
without ever realising it...
thanks for sharing dear poet
May 31st, 2021 05:19
Existence
L. B. Mek said:
\'Perfectly formed;\'
\'merely magicked from a moody maelstrom.\'
\'Never less than just you,\'
\'fighting forcefully to flower.
You bloom.\'
\'Iridescent under eternal, eager eyes,
you materialised,\'
\'merely for a moment
by my missed time.
You are much more than mine.\'
(sublime Poetry
harrowing, in depth of detail
yet still a work of artistic brevity)
keep working on perfecting that unique style, dear poet
with every read, its free flowing form
is manifesting smoothly and becoming more defined
in my humble opinion..
thanks for sharing, a great read!
May 27th, 2021 04:06
L. B. Mek said:
\'Perfectly formed;\'
\'merely magicked from a moody maelstrom.\'
\'Never less than just you,\'
\'fighting forcefully to flower.
You bloom.\'
\'Iridescent under eternal, eager eyes,
you materialised,\'
\'merely for a moment
by my missed time.
You are much more than mine.\'
(sublime Poetry
harrowing, in depth of detail
yet still a work of artistic brevity)
keep working on perfecting that unique style, dear poet
with every read, its free flowing form
is manifesting smoothly and becoming more defined
in my humble opinion..
thanks for sharing, a great read!
May 27th, 2021 04:06
did you come from the sea?
L. B. Mek said:
a wonderful write, reminded me of these eternally truthful words
from that most poignant of Forrest Gump scenes:
\'It looks like there were two skies, one on top of the other.
And then in the desert, when the sun comes up,
I couldn\'t tell where heavens stopped
and the earth began. It was so beautiful.\'
( https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ISJ0VsnCvDo )
May 25th, 2021 04:39
L. B. Mek said:
a wonderful write, reminded me of these eternally truthful words
from that most poignant of Forrest Gump scenes:
\'It looks like there were two skies, one on top of the other.
And then in the desert, when the sun comes up,
I couldn\'t tell where heavens stopped
and the earth began. It was so beautiful.\'
( https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ISJ0VsnCvDo )
May 25th, 2021 04:39
Let Go
jarcher54 said:
Advice we all consider and usually reject... things are so compelling! Politics, sick friends, needy charities, work... but thanks for trying! (-:
You put what we all think so aptly into words with this:
You can\'t read thoughts;
people don\'t think at all.
May 23rd, 2021 10:19
jarcher54 said:
Advice we all consider and usually reject... things are so compelling! Politics, sick friends, needy charities, work... but thanks for trying! (-:
You put what we all think so aptly into words with this:
You can\'t read thoughts;
people don\'t think at all.
May 23rd, 2021 10:19
Words
L. B. Mek said:
\'Say once was too many.
Wild, wilful & wistful,
fallen far at my feet.
Stand strong, sturdy & secure.\'
what a wonderful stanza
you imbue so much passion in each line you ink
don\'t ever lose that trait, dear poet
it makes anything you write
simply a joy to read..
thank you! for choosing to share
May 21st, 2021 02:39
L. B. Mek said:
\'Say once was too many.
Wild, wilful & wistful,
fallen far at my feet.
Stand strong, sturdy & secure.\'
what a wonderful stanza
you imbue so much passion in each line you ink
don\'t ever lose that trait, dear poet
it makes anything you write
simply a joy to read..
thank you! for choosing to share
May 21st, 2021 02:39
Bird
rebmasters said:
Thank you and no need to apologise - they are never finished, just abandoned as some writer (I forget who) once said
May 14th, 2021 06:34
rebmasters said:
Thank you and no need to apologise - they are never finished, just abandoned as some writer (I forget who) once said
May 14th, 2021 06:34
Bird
L. B. Mek said:
\'Bound me in your nutshell,
build me a brave bird’s nest.
Let our fragile egg find rest\'
\'if I mishandle it, it will shatter
& this moment will be gone, lost.
I’m afraid it’s not real.\'
\'we can cover it.
You’ll keep it warm
& I’ll whisper\'...
Brilliant!
How well you depict our crippling tension of apprehension
that consumes us, when anything worthwhile
enters our lives
(please forgive me for rearranging the layout of your poetry
I meant no disrespect, just my overzealous nature
to showcase the unassuming craft you put in to your style
of instinctively woven artistry)
May 14th, 2021 04:49
L. B. Mek said:
\'Bound me in your nutshell,
build me a brave bird’s nest.
Let our fragile egg find rest\'
\'if I mishandle it, it will shatter
& this moment will be gone, lost.
I’m afraid it’s not real.\'
\'we can cover it.
You’ll keep it warm
& I’ll whisper\'...
Brilliant!
How well you depict our crippling tension of apprehension
that consumes us, when anything worthwhile
enters our lives
(please forgive me for rearranging the layout of your poetry
I meant no disrespect, just my overzealous nature
to showcase the unassuming craft you put in to your style
of instinctively woven artistry)
May 14th, 2021 04:49
Boy
L. B. Mek said:
there is an intimate quality, in the relationships you depict
and however sad their trajectory, we readers can\'t help
but relate and empathise with the unvarnished veracity
of your poignant words
May 13th, 2021 03:27
L. B. Mek said:
there is an intimate quality, in the relationships you depict
and however sad their trajectory, we readers can\'t help
but relate and empathise with the unvarnished veracity
of your poignant words
May 13th, 2021 03:27
Misunderstandings
L. B. Mek said:
that stormy uncertainty
where pulses beat with confidence
while eyes stutter with hesitance
indivisible, from afar : they frictionally, collide...
May 11th, 2021 04:22
L. B. Mek said:
that stormy uncertainty
where pulses beat with confidence
while eyes stutter with hesitance
indivisible, from afar : they frictionally, collide...
May 11th, 2021 04:22
Misunderstandings
dusk arising said:
I\'m reading the words of a lovestruck soul here who is being bounced around by a sea of if\'s and maybe\'s. Good luck if it works out for you but tomorrow and the life after tomorrow will happen either way.
May 10th, 2021 09:25
dusk arising said:
I\'m reading the words of a lovestruck soul here who is being bounced around by a sea of if\'s and maybe\'s. Good luck if it works out for you but tomorrow and the life after tomorrow will happen either way.
May 10th, 2021 09:25
Ether
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Woah this poem seems to depict a very cold callous person whom you describe effectively. The sarcastic phrasings all expressed in a sharp strong crisp way sound icy so poetic!! Kudos for this muse!
Plz do read and comment my newest poem too.
May 7th, 2021 09:23
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Woah this poem seems to depict a very cold callous person whom you describe effectively. The sarcastic phrasings all expressed in a sharp strong crisp way sound icy so poetic!! Kudos for this muse!
Plz do read and comment my newest poem too.
May 7th, 2021 09:23
Ether
L. B. Mek said:
cleverly weaved,
maybe because I also have an appreciation
for antiquity\'s marriage, between philosophy and poetry
this really spoke to me
May 7th, 2021 06:56
L. B. Mek said:
cleverly weaved,
maybe because I also have an appreciation
for antiquity\'s marriage, between philosophy and poetry
this really spoke to me
May 7th, 2021 06:56
In the Shadow of Flowers from My Love
L. B. Mek said:
we ambitious fallible petals, who
take so long to realise, our fated gifts
of enriching connections, accumulated
through this slipstream passageway of existence
we\'ve so boldly: titled, life...
(a wonderful read, and thanks for inspiring my little scribbled reply dear poet)
May 7th, 2021 06:08
L. B. Mek said:
we ambitious fallible petals, who
take so long to realise, our fated gifts
of enriching connections, accumulated
through this slipstream passageway of existence
we\'ve so boldly: titled, life...
(a wonderful read, and thanks for inspiring my little scribbled reply dear poet)
May 7th, 2021 06:08
Why Do I Dream of Monsters?
kaychee said:
“I’ve started to dream in poems,
But I can’t remember them when I wake.”
Sometimes it could be nightmares...
Or fantasies of things I’ve always wanted till date.
Your poem is so lovely.
May 7th, 2021 03:24
kaychee said:
“I’ve started to dream in poems,
But I can’t remember them when I wake.”
Sometimes it could be nightmares...
Or fantasies of things I’ve always wanted till date.
Your poem is so lovely.
May 7th, 2021 03:24
Hands
L. B. Mek said:
so relatable, I agree that at times
there\'s a palpable physical residue: from loss (in its various forms)
that we have to pointedly - overcome, in addition
to the mental trauma, of it all..
a clever take and wonderfully paced!
May 6th, 2021 04:44
L. B. Mek said:
so relatable, I agree that at times
there\'s a palpable physical residue: from loss (in its various forms)
that we have to pointedly - overcome, in addition
to the mental trauma, of it all..
a clever take and wonderfully paced!
May 6th, 2021 04:44
Hands
Doggerel Dave said:
I liked that one very much, reb.
Not just scars on hands.....
May 5th, 2021 07:09
Doggerel Dave said:
I liked that one very much, reb.
Not just scars on hands.....
May 5th, 2021 07:09
S
L. B. Mek said:
\'Transfixed by all that\'s beautiful,\'
\'What if everything I am is bound up in another?\'..
I fear we are all suckers for Nature\'s prevalence
for all-things: aesthetical decadent, my friend..
such relatable doubt\'s: you\'ve highlighted - brilliantly
a great read!
May 4th, 2021 05:06
L. B. Mek said:
\'Transfixed by all that\'s beautiful,\'
\'What if everything I am is bound up in another?\'..
I fear we are all suckers for Nature\'s prevalence
for all-things: aesthetical decadent, my friend..
such relatable doubt\'s: you\'ve highlighted - brilliantly
a great read!
May 4th, 2021 05:06
Break
L. B. Mek said:
\'ain\'t those the memories, that distil
the pure nectar: of love\'s promise..\'
brilliantly paced! such a great read
April 27th, 2021 04:27
L. B. Mek said:
\'ain\'t those the memories, that distil
the pure nectar: of love\'s promise..\'
brilliantly paced! such a great read
April 27th, 2021 04:27
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