Comments received on poems by rebmasters
Break
Goldfinch60 said:
May that closeness be there without the need to break anything.
Andy
April 27th, 2021 00:10
Goldfinch60 said:
May that closeness be there without the need to break anything.
Andy
April 27th, 2021 00:10
Rebellion
L. B. Mek said:
\'Pieces falling into
place, swept away
by past pain in your eternal, infinite eyes,
those heavenly hazel eyes, not just on mine, but in them.\'
beautifully worded dear poet!
really like the humility you wove within that last stanza\'s: worded defiance..
a great read, in my humble opinion
April 26th, 2021 04:39
L. B. Mek said:
\'Pieces falling into
place, swept away
by past pain in your eternal, infinite eyes,
those heavenly hazel eyes, not just on mine, but in them.\'
beautifully worded dear poet!
really like the humility you wove within that last stanza\'s: worded defiance..
a great read, in my humble opinion
April 26th, 2021 04:39
Why Do I Dream of Monsters?
rosiedm said:
I liked this ..comical read
Keep dreaming! You never know what you could remember next time
April 25th, 2021 15:09
rosiedm said:
I liked this ..comical read
Keep dreaming! You never know what you could remember next time
April 25th, 2021 15:09
Love #2
L. B. Mek said:
\'the resonance,
my senses attuned to each one of yours,
flowing into acquiescence\'..
simply, brilliant!
April 23rd, 2021 06:42
L. B. Mek said:
\'the resonance,
my senses attuned to each one of yours,
flowing into acquiescence\'..
simply, brilliant!
April 23rd, 2021 06:42
drunk on sun
L. B. Mek said:
immersive, to say the least
heated: pulsation, within words of magnetic attraction!
a good read, (and thanks for inspiring my little scribbled reply)..
\'ahem - well dear poet, this reads
as one hell of a pulsating nightmare
you\'ve dreamed - as idyllic scenes of poetry
in reality, the Sand in our feelings
trespass into every nut and cranny
insuring, we seldom get a chance
to accumulate, such pristine memories
of unscathed: bliss...\'
April 23rd, 2021 05:46
L. B. Mek said:
immersive, to say the least
heated: pulsation, within words of magnetic attraction!
a good read, (and thanks for inspiring my little scribbled reply)..
\'ahem - well dear poet, this reads
as one hell of a pulsating nightmare
you\'ve dreamed - as idyllic scenes of poetry
in reality, the Sand in our feelings
trespass into every nut and cranny
insuring, we seldom get a chance
to accumulate, such pristine memories
of unscathed: bliss...\'
April 23rd, 2021 05:46
Love #2
dusk arising said:
How is it we can elevate one so high with love that we don\'t want to love them..... i know just what that means. You cover a very complex set of feelings here quite beautifully.
April 23rd, 2021 05:28
dusk arising said:
How is it we can elevate one so high with love that we don\'t want to love them..... i know just what that means. You cover a very complex set of feelings here quite beautifully.
April 23rd, 2021 05:28
drunk on sun
Neville said:
its what beaches were made for .......... certainly & surely enjoyed by me :)
April 22nd, 2021 11:36
Neville said:
its what beaches were made for .......... certainly & surely enjoyed by me :)
April 22nd, 2021 11:36
Grace
Bragee said:
WOW.
I love this poem.
Knowing ones worth is probably the most important thing anyone can know.
April 16th, 2021 11:32
Bragee said:
WOW.
I love this poem.
Knowing ones worth is probably the most important thing anyone can know.
April 16th, 2021 11:32
Grace
L. B. Mek said:
rustic and unflinchingly bold
yet beneath all the bravado
there\'s a vulnerability: depicted so distinctly
and ain\'t that just so damn relatable
such an ugly visage we find, in honesty\'s mirror - at times..
an intriguing read, liked the bravery
thanks for sharing
April 16th, 2021 05:11
L. B. Mek said:
rustic and unflinchingly bold
yet beneath all the bravado
there\'s a vulnerability: depicted so distinctly
and ain\'t that just so damn relatable
such an ugly visage we find, in honesty\'s mirror - at times..
an intriguing read, liked the bravery
thanks for sharing
April 16th, 2021 05:11
Never Change
L. B. Mek said:
\'Your elliptical eyes seek mine & find them every time.
Struggling through tears and blame,
shame-faced; I did you wrong.\'
how refreshingly honest a write,
I especially like the lack of excuses or overt emotionality reads like a surgical self-analysis of owned mistakes, while standing-up - straight and exclaiming, humbly
\'knowingly: I will ask my dear
want you take me back
and give our love
just one more chance\'
humility - exemplified, without bending that backbone
a true demonstration of \'purposed introspection\'..
April 16th, 2021 03:57
L. B. Mek said:
\'Your elliptical eyes seek mine & find them every time.
Struggling through tears and blame,
shame-faced; I did you wrong.\'
how refreshingly honest a write,
I especially like the lack of excuses or overt emotionality reads like a surgical self-analysis of owned mistakes, while standing-up - straight and exclaiming, humbly
\'knowingly: I will ask my dear
want you take me back
and give our love
just one more chance\'
humility - exemplified, without bending that backbone
a true demonstration of \'purposed introspection\'..
April 16th, 2021 03:57
Never Change
Bragee said:
\"I did you wrong. Don\'t remember that.\"
that line that hit he the hardest. We are often the creators of our worst pain.
April 15th, 2021 09:42
Bragee said:
\"I did you wrong. Don\'t remember that.\"
that line that hit he the hardest. We are often the creators of our worst pain.
April 15th, 2021 09:42
My Body; Your Wreckage
L. B. Mek said:
\'Complacency, comfort carried far off.
Bawling on bare & brutal bedroom floors.
Your body like a cozy blanket
stripped off.\'
I think those who have experienced that fast burning, all consuming - infatuation style love, will relate to your words easily
thanks for sharing
April 15th, 2021 04:32
L. B. Mek said:
\'Complacency, comfort carried far off.
Bawling on bare & brutal bedroom floors.
Your body like a cozy blanket
stripped off.\'
I think those who have experienced that fast burning, all consuming - infatuation style love, will relate to your words easily
thanks for sharing
April 15th, 2021 04:32
My Body; Your Wreckage
Goldfinch60 said:
True love is everlastingly wonderful.
Andy
April 15th, 2021 00:29
Goldfinch60 said:
True love is everlastingly wonderful.
Andy
April 15th, 2021 00:29
Love
L. B. Mek said:
erm, I\'m a just say - I too, am a fellow lover of words
an intriguing read - certainly engaging and somewhat challenging
and in this warped age of SEO (search engine optimisation) - threat to language, as we know it
possibly a prophetic foreshadowing of what awaits insta poetry\'s, cultural infiltration
at the bottomless grave of modernity\'s evolutionary need, for escapism fuelled regression..
(to quote a brilliant mind: \'and that\'s all I gottta say: bout daaat\')
thanks for sharing dear poet
April 13th, 2021 05:37
L. B. Mek said:
erm, I\'m a just say - I too, am a fellow lover of words
an intriguing read - certainly engaging and somewhat challenging
and in this warped age of SEO (search engine optimisation) - threat to language, as we know it
possibly a prophetic foreshadowing of what awaits insta poetry\'s, cultural infiltration
at the bottomless grave of modernity\'s evolutionary need, for escapism fuelled regression..
(to quote a brilliant mind: \'and that\'s all I gottta say: bout daaat\')
thanks for sharing dear poet
April 13th, 2021 05:37
The Door
L. B. Mek said:
somehow your narration style, reminds me of Proust\'s: \'In search of lost time\'
maybe its in your inclusion of childhood memories or in your ability to analyse a single object for all the meaning it has to yield, or maybe its in that searching tone of yearnful remembering..
a good read, thanks for sharing
April 12th, 2021 04:48
L. B. Mek said:
somehow your narration style, reminds me of Proust\'s: \'In search of lost time\'
maybe its in your inclusion of childhood memories or in your ability to analyse a single object for all the meaning it has to yield, or maybe its in that searching tone of yearnful remembering..
a good read, thanks for sharing
April 12th, 2021 04:48
Patch
Goldfinch60 said:
Very emotive write, there are strange things that we have in life that can bring us such loving memories.
Andy
April 10th, 2021 00:10
Goldfinch60 said:
Very emotive write, there are strange things that we have in life that can bring us such loving memories.
Andy
April 10th, 2021 00:10
Patch
Doggerel Dave said:
Go on - the jeans I observe (not wear) have been holed and worn through long before they reach their first owner...
All that aside, the underlying sentiment is clear and it is easy to empathise with the attachment you have to an otherwise insignificant piece of material.
April 9th, 2021 06:11
Doggerel Dave said:
Go on - the jeans I observe (not wear) have been holed and worn through long before they reach their first owner...
All that aside, the underlying sentiment is clear and it is easy to empathise with the attachment you have to an otherwise insignificant piece of material.
April 9th, 2021 06:11
Patch
L. B. Mek said:
such poignantly relatable words of yearning
insightfully inked with unflinching humility,
a great read
April 9th, 2021 05:41
L. B. Mek said:
such poignantly relatable words of yearning
insightfully inked with unflinching humility,
a great read
April 9th, 2021 05:41
Seaside Town
L. B. Mek said:
an explosion of unfiltered poetic talent, just a brilliant read
April 6th, 2021 04:39
L. B. Mek said:
an explosion of unfiltered poetic talent, just a brilliant read
April 6th, 2021 04:39
Seaside Town
Goldfinch60 said:
Going back can bring so many memories into our minds.
Andy
April 6th, 2021 00:33
Goldfinch60 said:
Going back can bring so many memories into our minds.
Andy
April 6th, 2021 00:33
Perception
L. B. Mek said:
a great first stanza and wonderful flow throughout, in my humble opinion
April 5th, 2021 05:51
L. B. Mek said:
a great first stanza and wonderful flow throughout, in my humble opinion
April 5th, 2021 05:51
Witches
L. B. Mek said:
a delectable serving of abstract poetry
a waterfall of worded imagery..
thanks for sharing dear poet
April 2nd, 2021 04:53
L. B. Mek said:
a delectable serving of abstract poetry
a waterfall of worded imagery..
thanks for sharing dear poet
April 2nd, 2021 04:53
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