Love/Lover #2
beano said:

A personal and sensual encapsulation of love and loving. Clever write!

August 31st, 2021 14:22

Valium Day
L. B. Mek said:

\'Later, at a party,
I overdo it on caffeine
trying to be human,
but speaking another language.
Hits of sugar to sweeten waking sleep,
like wearing shoes just half a size too big,\'
what a great read! thank you dear poet

August 31st, 2021 06:06

I Think
A Boy With Roses said:

Very kind of you sir to fav my last poem. I\'ve been quite woozy and inconsistent on here recently. I\'m very chaotic! But wanna say you\'re my favourite poet on this shitty site, and this write is, um, something I wish I possessed the talent to create I guess. Stay poetic X

August 29th, 2021 13:50

Original
dusk arising said:

But the diversity of human intelligence flies in the face of this. Some minds roam the stars feeling spiritually moved whereas others plot revenge and death. There are beggars and cheats in our streets and comfortably off people secured behind their locked doors. Humanity is not one thing only... until mankind as a whole is threatened, then it will stand together.... but two generations later it is back to square one.
Those are the lessons of what is called \'human nature\'.

August 28th, 2021 08:19

Like Love
myself and me said:

\"it’s travelled through the final mile
from your eyes to mine\"
Marvelous.

August 27th, 2021 14:33

Like Love
Floreann said:

An excellent write I could feel this gem of a poem..

August 27th, 2021 07:04

Like Love
L. B. Mek said:

wonderful imagery!
indeed, so much of attraction
comes down to that \'final mile\'
in a fleetingly shared, \'enticing smile\'
of our magnetically instinctive, communication
and its gift of a meaningful: connection...
(another, unapologetic - modern ode
to that romantic wondrousness of love
thanks for sharing, dear poet)

August 27th, 2021 05:12

Bed
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:

Lovely write , ) nice choice of words , flows nicely x

August 26th, 2021 03:43

Align
Coyote said:

And the Caterpillar must die to be reborn as a Butterfly. A very beautiful write Reb.

August 25th, 2021 11:51

Life is Elsewhere*
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:

But yeah life is everywhere .

It’s an intelligent poem ) not sure I could write one like that

August 24th, 2021 15:59

Absorption
L. B. Mek said:

\'like Scandinavian florals,
draws me to you.

Cover me in hay
harvested in sunlight.

Enfold me, subsume me
so we can coalesce\'..
you\'re just getting more and more refined
with your distinct imagery, in my humble opinion
its such a pleasure
to watch your talents blossom, dear poet
keep striving and climbing, so happy for you!

August 24th, 2021 05:47

Absorption
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:

So beautiful ! 🙂🙂 great writing

August 24th, 2021 01:16

Silver Trees
L. B. Mek said:

\'Red heart by the side of the road;
no one picks up hitchhikers anymore.\'
that\'s why the world is split
between those who choose to strut
as oblivious, self-absorbed stray cats
distrusting everything and hiding behind
that nihilistic bleak mindset, to life..
and those, remnant few
who seek a connection
an answer, to wage their war of defiance
insuring this, their one experience of life
will be worth all that inevitable suffering..
(found this to be such a measured take
on modernity\'s
warped, experience of life for so many)
thanks for sharing, dear poet
(colour doesn\'t matter really,
as long as we\'re still daring enough
to share our heart\'s) lol

August 23rd, 2021 06:09

Silver Trees
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:

Maybe you could but it’s what you wrote at the time .

I especially like the first verse in this

Red heart by the side of the road ‘ I wasn’t totally sure what this meant but I found it interesting way with words . Sounds like someone a bit lonely ... just guessing

August 23rd, 2021 03:50

Stasis
Coyote said:

Beautiful write!

August 22nd, 2021 11:36