Comments received on poems by rebmasters
Love/Lover #2
beano said:
A personal and sensual encapsulation of love and loving. Clever write!
August 31st, 2021 14:22
beano said:
A personal and sensual encapsulation of love and loving. Clever write!
August 31st, 2021 14:22
Valium Day
Coyote said:
Mystically metaphorical and dreamy, this takes the reader on quite a ride. Nicely done Reb🙂
August 31st, 2021 14:20
Coyote said:
Mystically metaphorical and dreamy, this takes the reader on quite a ride. Nicely done Reb🙂
August 31st, 2021 14:20
Valium Day
L. B. Mek said:
\'Later, at a party,
I overdo it on caffeine
trying to be human,
but speaking another language.
Hits of sugar to sweeten waking sleep,
like wearing shoes just half a size too big,\'
what a great read! thank you dear poet
August 31st, 2021 06:06
L. B. Mek said:
\'Later, at a party,
I overdo it on caffeine
trying to be human,
but speaking another language.
Hits of sugar to sweeten waking sleep,
like wearing shoes just half a size too big,\'
what a great read! thank you dear poet
August 31st, 2021 06:06
Valium Day
Lorna said:
I\'m spacey enough to not need the valium but I loved floating away with this one!
August 31st, 2021 05:08
Lorna said:
I\'m spacey enough to not need the valium but I loved floating away with this one!
August 31st, 2021 05:08
I Think
A Boy With Roses said:
Very kind of you sir to fav my last poem. I\'ve been quite woozy and inconsistent on here recently. I\'m very chaotic! But wanna say you\'re my favourite poet on this shitty site, and this write is, um, something I wish I possessed the talent to create I guess. Stay poetic X
August 29th, 2021 13:50
A Boy With Roses said:
Very kind of you sir to fav my last poem. I\'ve been quite woozy and inconsistent on here recently. I\'m very chaotic! But wanna say you\'re my favourite poet on this shitty site, and this write is, um, something I wish I possessed the talent to create I guess. Stay poetic X
August 29th, 2021 13:50
I Think
Caring dove said:
This is really beautiful , Becky 🙂 I love this . You express yourself so nicely
August 29th, 2021 02:52
Caring dove said:
This is really beautiful , Becky 🙂 I love this . You express yourself so nicely
August 29th, 2021 02:52
Original
dusk arising said:
But the diversity of human intelligence flies in the face of this. Some minds roam the stars feeling spiritually moved whereas others plot revenge and death. There are beggars and cheats in our streets and comfortably off people secured behind their locked doors. Humanity is not one thing only... until mankind as a whole is threatened, then it will stand together.... but two generations later it is back to square one.
Those are the lessons of what is called \'human nature\'.
August 28th, 2021 08:19
dusk arising said:
But the diversity of human intelligence flies in the face of this. Some minds roam the stars feeling spiritually moved whereas others plot revenge and death. There are beggars and cheats in our streets and comfortably off people secured behind their locked doors. Humanity is not one thing only... until mankind as a whole is threatened, then it will stand together.... but two generations later it is back to square one.
Those are the lessons of what is called \'human nature\'.
August 28th, 2021 08:19
Original
Caring dove said:
Really like this ) sometimes people can seem so uncaring . A very good poem
August 28th, 2021 02:48
Caring dove said:
Really like this ) sometimes people can seem so uncaring . A very good poem
August 28th, 2021 02:48
Like Love
myself and me said:
\"it’s travelled through the final mile
from your eyes to mine\"
Marvelous.
August 27th, 2021 14:33
myself and me said:
\"it’s travelled through the final mile
from your eyes to mine\"
Marvelous.
August 27th, 2021 14:33
Like Love
flyingfish said:
A great poem that creates many images and emotions. Best Wishes
August 27th, 2021 13:56
flyingfish said:
A great poem that creates many images and emotions. Best Wishes
August 27th, 2021 13:56
Like Love
Floreann said:
An excellent write I could feel this gem of a poem..
August 27th, 2021 07:04
Floreann said:
An excellent write I could feel this gem of a poem..
August 27th, 2021 07:04
Like Love
Caring dove said:
Lovely words , Becky ! 🙂🙂 beautiful poem .
I think I have wrote about love once although I havnt been in love before .
August 27th, 2021 06:23
Caring dove said:
Lovely words , Becky ! 🙂🙂 beautiful poem .
I think I have wrote about love once although I havnt been in love before .
August 27th, 2021 06:23
Like Love
L. B. Mek said:
wonderful imagery!
indeed, so much of attraction
comes down to that \'final mile\'
in a fleetingly shared, \'enticing smile\'
of our magnetically instinctive, communication
and its gift of a meaningful: connection...
(another, unapologetic - modern ode
to that romantic wondrousness of love
thanks for sharing, dear poet)
August 27th, 2021 05:12
L. B. Mek said:
wonderful imagery!
indeed, so much of attraction
comes down to that \'final mile\'
in a fleetingly shared, \'enticing smile\'
of our magnetically instinctive, communication
and its gift of a meaningful: connection...
(another, unapologetic - modern ode
to that romantic wondrousness of love
thanks for sharing, dear poet)
August 27th, 2021 05:12
Bed
L. B. Mek said:
\'Has it really only been hours?
Whole lifetimes seem to have passed by.
An echoed sigh
whispers in your delicious voice
borne on the wind.
When will I be with you again?\'..
awesome, love the book-end
first and last questioning, lines
you\'re really starting to play with form
and direction, while maintaining your unique
free flowing - wonderful, signature traits..
a great read
thanks for sharing dear poet
August 26th, 2021 04:41
L. B. Mek said:
\'Has it really only been hours?
Whole lifetimes seem to have passed by.
An echoed sigh
whispers in your delicious voice
borne on the wind.
When will I be with you again?\'..
awesome, love the book-end
first and last questioning, lines
you\'re really starting to play with form
and direction, while maintaining your unique
free flowing - wonderful, signature traits..
a great read
thanks for sharing dear poet
August 26th, 2021 04:41
Align
myself and me said:
A lovely choice to fuse into your lover and to be one forever.
August 25th, 2021 13:45
myself and me said:
A lovely choice to fuse into your lover and to be one forever.
August 25th, 2021 13:45
Align
Coyote said:
And the Caterpillar must die to be reborn as a Butterfly. A very beautiful write Reb.
August 25th, 2021 11:51
Coyote said:
And the Caterpillar must die to be reborn as a Butterfly. A very beautiful write Reb.
August 25th, 2021 11:51
Absorption
Jay-Lee Jane said:
the last stanza has given me goosebumps!! i love it!
August 24th, 2021 18:22
Jay-Lee Jane said:
the last stanza has given me goosebumps!! i love it!
August 24th, 2021 18:22
Life is Elsewhere*
Caring dove said:
But yeah life is everywhere .
It’s an intelligent poem ) not sure I could write one like that
August 24th, 2021 15:59
Caring dove said:
But yeah life is everywhere .
It’s an intelligent poem ) not sure I could write one like that
August 24th, 2021 15:59
Life is Elsewhere*
Caring dove said:
Interesting read , Becky 🙂 there’s a sadness within this , within your words ... it flows nicely and is well expressed
August 24th, 2021 15:37
Caring dove said:
Interesting read , Becky 🙂 there’s a sadness within this , within your words ... it flows nicely and is well expressed
August 24th, 2021 15:37
Absorption
L. B. Mek said:
\'like Scandinavian florals,
draws me to you.
Cover me in hay
harvested in sunlight.
Enfold me, subsume me
so we can coalesce\'..
you\'re just getting more and more refined
with your distinct imagery, in my humble opinion
its such a pleasure
to watch your talents blossom, dear poet
keep striving and climbing, so happy for you!
August 24th, 2021 05:47
L. B. Mek said:
\'like Scandinavian florals,
draws me to you.
Cover me in hay
harvested in sunlight.
Enfold me, subsume me
so we can coalesce\'..
you\'re just getting more and more refined
with your distinct imagery, in my humble opinion
its such a pleasure
to watch your talents blossom, dear poet
keep striving and climbing, so happy for you!
August 24th, 2021 05:47
Absorption
Caring dove said:
“ I will become a speck within your cosmos , forever happy there , and self aware , a part of you “
Love these lines
August 24th, 2021 01:18
Caring dove said:
“ I will become a speck within your cosmos , forever happy there , and self aware , a part of you “
Love these lines
August 24th, 2021 01:18
Silver Trees
Coyote said:
The lonesome traveler who lives in the moment of the next ride. You capture his/her perspective beautifully.
August 23rd, 2021 11:19
Coyote said:
The lonesome traveler who lives in the moment of the next ride. You capture his/her perspective beautifully.
August 23rd, 2021 11:19
Silver Trees
L. B. Mek said:
\'Red heart by the side of the road;
no one picks up hitchhikers anymore.\'
that\'s why the world is split
between those who choose to strut
as oblivious, self-absorbed stray cats
distrusting everything and hiding behind
that nihilistic bleak mindset, to life..
and those, remnant few
who seek a connection
an answer, to wage their war of defiance
insuring this, their one experience of life
will be worth all that inevitable suffering..
(found this to be such a measured take
on modernity\'s
warped, experience of life for so many)
thanks for sharing, dear poet
(colour doesn\'t matter really,
as long as we\'re still daring enough
to share our heart\'s) lol
August 23rd, 2021 06:09
L. B. Mek said:
\'Red heart by the side of the road;
no one picks up hitchhikers anymore.\'
that\'s why the world is split
between those who choose to strut
as oblivious, self-absorbed stray cats
distrusting everything and hiding behind
that nihilistic bleak mindset, to life..
and those, remnant few
who seek a connection
an answer, to wage their war of defiance
insuring this, their one experience of life
will be worth all that inevitable suffering..
(found this to be such a measured take
on modernity\'s
warped, experience of life for so many)
thanks for sharing, dear poet
(colour doesn\'t matter really,
as long as we\'re still daring enough
to share our heart\'s) lol
August 23rd, 2021 06:09
Silver Trees
jo said:
Nice one. I especially like, \"The sky above stone grey;
how could it ever have been blue?\"
\'Stone grey\' sends such coldness. And to ask if that sky could have ever been blue reminds me of how I react to the weather sometimes. When it\'s raining it feels to me like it can perhaps never be sunny again, and when it\'s really hot, it feels like the cool freshness will never return.
I\'m sure each individual could list situations where the sky above is stone grey for them. Well done on penning such a universal line.
August 23rd, 2021 04:24
jo said:
Nice one. I especially like, \"The sky above stone grey;
how could it ever have been blue?\"
\'Stone grey\' sends such coldness. And to ask if that sky could have ever been blue reminds me of how I react to the weather sometimes. When it\'s raining it feels to me like it can perhaps never be sunny again, and when it\'s really hot, it feels like the cool freshness will never return.
I\'m sure each individual could list situations where the sky above is stone grey for them. Well done on penning such a universal line.
August 23rd, 2021 04:24
Silver Trees
Caring dove said:
Maybe you could but it’s what you wrote at the time .
I especially like the first verse in this
Red heart by the side of the road ‘ I wasn’t totally sure what this meant but I found it interesting way with words . Sounds like someone a bit lonely ... just guessing
August 23rd, 2021 03:50
Caring dove said:
Maybe you could but it’s what you wrote at the time .
I especially like the first verse in this
Red heart by the side of the road ‘ I wasn’t totally sure what this meant but I found it interesting way with words . Sounds like someone a bit lonely ... just guessing
August 23rd, 2021 03:50
Silver Trees
Caring dove said:
You have such a good way with words , really like this )
August 23rd, 2021 03:32
Caring dove said:
You have such a good way with words , really like this )
August 23rd, 2021 03:32
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