Preservation
Coyote said:

Ah, such beautiful sentiment. I wouldn\'t want to wake either🙂

August 21st, 2021 09:19

Rainbow
L. B. Mek said:

ah, what a fantastically surreal
depiction of reality, dear poet
a joy to behold, even if only
for those precious, minutes
lost in your dreamscape, syllables
thank you!

August 20th, 2021 05:18

Flow
Noah Malice said:

absolutely beautiful write, feelings i haven\'t been able to put into words

August 19th, 2021 13:18

Flow
L. B. Mek said:

\'as each miraculous, melodious
moment
flows, to the next
like this aromatic river, the end of which
we call a mouth
because
it speaks to us;\'
that depicted yearning is worded fingertip, tangible
I can\'t help and recall
my own regretted, failed opportunities
and that repressed ache, stirring awake
like it all happened yesterday...
thanks for sharing, dear poet

August 19th, 2021 04:57

from this angle
dusk arising said:

Well expressed, the abstract of those quiet shared moments when love is new and knowing mutual.
A very gentle piece with great depth.

August 17th, 2021 13:32

from this angle
L. B. Mek said:

what an exquisitely worded first stanza
simply beautiful! a great read
thanks for sharing, dear poet
\'Black velvet shirt, on soft
soft skin: breathing you in.
Bright red wine scars
& the sound of your voice
singing along
to sad sad songs.
Hands tangled in my hair
wish they would forever
rest there.\'

August 17th, 2021 05:24

Silken Thread
Caring dove said:

Just lovely 🙂

August 16th, 2021 16:15

the air was warm
Coyote said:

A beautiful write Reb.

August 16th, 2021 12:41

the air was warm
L. B. Mek said:

steamy sensuality, expressed tastefully
nicely done, dear poet
really liked these lines
\'The stars were like feathers;
soft to the touch
& oh so white;
within our grasp\'

August 16th, 2021 04:34

five o\'clock
Coyote said:

The anguish pours from every line of this masterful work. Reminds me of Sarte\'s \'The Wall\'. Ninely done.

August 15th, 2021 11:23

five o\'clock
Eugene S. said:

A powerful perspective from an incarcerated soul. The despair is so vivid. Well coined.

August 15th, 2021 05:02

of sand
Goldfinch60 said:

So many things can be done by and with sand remasters.

Andy

August 14th, 2021 11:52

the near future
L. B. Mek said:

\'Golden visions,
marks on our skin,
ticks on a list,
dreams unbidden.\'
worded melancholy
in our moonlit yearnings,
sometimes there is comfort in just sharing
and realising, we\'re not alone
as other\'s have survived, where we\'ve stalled..
thanks for sharing, dear Poet


August 13th, 2021 05:06

to look
L. B. Mek said:

\'the actor’s voice unheard;

stripped bare,
you’ll find it there,
*if you, just
loved me enough*

to care\'..
I cherish the pacing you\'ve managed to weave
and laud, your tone of vulnerable boldness
as-if, you\'re crystallising that moment
in words, so as to shed your frustrations
in a relationship, that\'s chained itself to you
unrelentingly, tight..
(and worded so accessible
this was such a relatable read for me
thanks for sharing, dear poet)


August 12th, 2021 05:23

The Rain
Coyote said:

Wow, love this one. Really good imagery.

August 10th, 2021 13:52