Comments received on poems by spilleronsheet
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Paul Bell said:
Nature does provide some beautiful killers. Haiku\'s sure are hard to do and get over to the reader, but you\'ve achieved it.
April 30th, 2022 11:47
Paul Bell said:
Nature does provide some beautiful killers. Haiku\'s sure are hard to do and get over to the reader, but you\'ve achieved it.
April 30th, 2022 11:47
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Vamsi Sudha said:
Haiku Spiller, Few words and loads of meaning ..
Crisp, short and powerful !!
April 30th, 2022 00:38
Vamsi Sudha said:
Haiku Spiller, Few words and loads of meaning ..
Crisp, short and powerful !!
April 30th, 2022 00:38
Dreams
Goldfinch60 said:
May those dreams always be with you spilleronsheet.
Andy
April 29th, 2022 01:00
Goldfinch60 said:
May those dreams always be with you spilleronsheet.
Andy
April 29th, 2022 01:00
Dreams
Rozina said:
Simply stunning! I\'m inspired now to write about a dream I just woke up from.
April 28th, 2022 18:06
Rozina said:
Simply stunning! I\'m inspired now to write about a dream I just woke up from.
April 28th, 2022 18:06
Dreams
Bella Shepard said:
Our dreams are to our sleeping brain as food is to our body, necessary. They provide order, inspiration, resolution, and while we sleep our brains are more active than when we are awake. Such a beautiful expression of this in your poem. I loved every line.
April 28th, 2022 15:01
Bella Shepard said:
Our dreams are to our sleeping brain as food is to our body, necessary. They provide order, inspiration, resolution, and while we sleep our brains are more active than when we are awake. Such a beautiful expression of this in your poem. I loved every line.
April 28th, 2022 15:01
Dreams
Neville said:
there are so many great lines that weave in and out of \'Dreams\' I would be hard pushed to decide which among them were my favourites ..
now visited several times to try and make up my mind .. I now conclude that there could very easily be two distinctly separate or individual poems pinned to this particular page ... Neville
April 28th, 2022 14:19
Neville said:
there are so many great lines that weave in and out of \'Dreams\' I would be hard pushed to decide which among them were my favourites ..
now visited several times to try and make up my mind .. I now conclude that there could very easily be two distinctly separate or individual poems pinned to this particular page ... Neville
April 28th, 2022 14:19
Dreams
dusk arising said:
Indeed, just what are dreams for I have had some very strange ones over the last few nights... last night found me cutting up liver with scissors and feeling the texture and the blades progressed... very odd, followed my more oddness.
Reality of bridge like a quiz show in our minds eye yet we fall to sleep... fall being such a word in itself there.
Interesting poem upon which i dwelled reflecting upon my dream and waking condition.
April 28th, 2022 09:56
dusk arising said:
Indeed, just what are dreams for I have had some very strange ones over the last few nights... last night found me cutting up liver with scissors and feeling the texture and the blades progressed... very odd, followed my more oddness.
Reality of bridge like a quiz show in our minds eye yet we fall to sleep... fall being such a word in itself there.
Interesting poem upon which i dwelled reflecting upon my dream and waking condition.
April 28th, 2022 09:56
Dreams
Rocky Lagou said:
\"as heavy as boulders,\" wow talk about a simile. This is so so delicate and ready to be consumed by the eye. I literally love this. Those \"dreams\" or those apirations we hold so close to heart can truly leave us restless.
April 28th, 2022 08:41
Rocky Lagou said:
\"as heavy as boulders,\" wow talk about a simile. This is so so delicate and ready to be consumed by the eye. I literally love this. Those \"dreams\" or those apirations we hold so close to heart can truly leave us restless.
April 28th, 2022 08:41
Dreams
Saxon Crow said:
Another stunning piece of poetry. I must say I really do enjoy all your work
April 28th, 2022 06:39
Saxon Crow said:
Another stunning piece of poetry. I must say I really do enjoy all your work
April 28th, 2022 06:39
Dreams
Nicholas Browning said:
I gotta say the repetition of \"all night\" was a lovely touch. Dreams and desires burn like firewood sometimes. A thought provoking read and a unique use of language. Enjoyed!
April 28th, 2022 05:07
Nicholas Browning said:
I gotta say the repetition of \"all night\" was a lovely touch. Dreams and desires burn like firewood sometimes. A thought provoking read and a unique use of language. Enjoyed!
April 28th, 2022 05:07
Dreams
L. B. Mek said:
love! the poetic and
socio philosophical, ambitions
in this well considered write,
really unfurled your concept
covered its impact on such a wide spectrum
of societal, groups..
making your complex theory
that much easier to grasp and relate to..
great to see you challenging
those deeper, philosophical problems
sharing opinions on macro perspectives
instead of our generations
\'work our way back\'
from easy-fix, micro problems..
thanks for sharing, dear Poet
April 28th, 2022 04:57
L. B. Mek said:
love! the poetic and
socio philosophical, ambitions
in this well considered write,
really unfurled your concept
covered its impact on such a wide spectrum
of societal, groups..
making your complex theory
that much easier to grasp and relate to..
great to see you challenging
those deeper, philosophical problems
sharing opinions on macro perspectives
instead of our generations
\'work our way back\'
from easy-fix, micro problems..
thanks for sharing, dear Poet
April 28th, 2022 04:57
Dreams
Caring dove said:
Beautiful writing , spiller 🙂🙂 a lovely expression throughout
April 28th, 2022 04:26
Caring dove said:
Beautiful writing , spiller 🙂🙂 a lovely expression throughout
April 28th, 2022 04:26
The breaking dawn
Rozina said:
Such wonderful imagery appearing as I read your lines. So nice to read!
April 27th, 2022 18:15
Rozina said:
Such wonderful imagery appearing as I read your lines. So nice to read!
April 27th, 2022 18:15
The breaking dawn
Distant View said:
Each new day is to be welcomed. Another page turned in the great book of life!
April 27th, 2022 02:27
Distant View said:
Each new day is to be welcomed. Another page turned in the great book of life!
April 27th, 2022 02:27
The breaking dawn
Neville said:
that\'s what we all wanna see, read and hear ..
optimism personified and all snuggled up comfortably within its very own poem
and not only that dear spills, but your image must surely rank among my all time favourites ... N
April 27th, 2022 02:18
Neville said:
that\'s what we all wanna see, read and hear ..
optimism personified and all snuggled up comfortably within its very own poem
and not only that dear spills, but your image must surely rank among my all time favourites ... N
April 27th, 2022 02:18
The breaking dawn
Vamsi Sudha said:
Dear spiller,
That was a absolute dawn and you really make it great with your portrait of the morning. you really made a picture in my mind...
Dawn is not Long
So complete your works and dont prolong :)
April 27th, 2022 01:55
Vamsi Sudha said:
Dear spiller,
That was a absolute dawn and you really make it great with your portrait of the morning. you really made a picture in my mind...
Dawn is not Long
So complete your works and dont prolong :)
April 27th, 2022 01:55
The breaking dawn
Caring dove said:
I love this ! Such a great read 🙂 honestly liking your words .. a truly lovely read , spiller )) had to favourite this one
April 26th, 2022 23:54
Caring dove said:
I love this ! Such a great read 🙂 honestly liking your words .. a truly lovely read , spiller )) had to favourite this one
April 26th, 2022 23:54
Scar
Crowns4Christ said:
Scars definitely affect us and never goes away,we learn how to handle having them, and eventually figure out that if it wasn\'t for these scars,being literal or emotional scars,we wouldn\'t have learned those life lessons and become who we are
April 25th, 2022 11:08
Crowns4Christ said:
Scars definitely affect us and never goes away,we learn how to handle having them, and eventually figure out that if it wasn\'t for these scars,being literal or emotional scars,we wouldn\'t have learned those life lessons and become who we are
April 25th, 2022 11:08
Scar
Rocky Lagou said:
This is beyond. That line \"but those pains aren’t big, as your dreams\" literally made me smile. Our battle scars and past hurts can burden us so immensely, but your words today spoke directly to that pain and rejuvenated it. Everyone must read this, it\'ll help heal the wounds. Thank you for this marvel.
April 25th, 2022 10:30
Rocky Lagou said:
This is beyond. That line \"but those pains aren’t big, as your dreams\" literally made me smile. Our battle scars and past hurts can burden us so immensely, but your words today spoke directly to that pain and rejuvenated it. Everyone must read this, it\'ll help heal the wounds. Thank you for this marvel.
April 25th, 2022 10:30
Scar
Neville said:
I leave this page feeling a little bit sad .. maybe that\'s because you got such a strong message across today .. and although I rarely read what others have left behind, I couldn\'t help seeing orchidee\'s contribution to this page and find myself agreeing with every one of his words ...
... I will sign out now in the hope any residual scars heal regardless of cause .. and that as you journey through life and all the knocks, bumps and setbacks you may ever experience .. that you receive only the mildest of golden shaped bruises ............................ Neville x
April 25th, 2022 08:13
Neville said:
I leave this page feeling a little bit sad .. maybe that\'s because you got such a strong message across today .. and although I rarely read what others have left behind, I couldn\'t help seeing orchidee\'s contribution to this page and find myself agreeing with every one of his words ...
... I will sign out now in the hope any residual scars heal regardless of cause .. and that as you journey through life and all the knocks, bumps and setbacks you may ever experience .. that you receive only the mildest of golden shaped bruises ............................ Neville x
April 25th, 2022 08:13
Scar
L. B. Mek said:
\'but
*it\'s not easy
like
footprints on beach
instead, *it\'s the marking
on coral reefs, the movement
of waves on pebbles\'..
Brilliant!
April 25th, 2022 04:37
L. B. Mek said:
\'but
*it\'s not easy
like
footprints on beach
instead, *it\'s the marking
on coral reefs, the movement
of waves on pebbles\'..
Brilliant!
April 25th, 2022 04:37
Scar
Rozina said:
Powerful words. Emotional scars, hidden, may be harder to heal. I have seen women in my previous practice who had been abused verbally, emotionally and psychologically and after so many years they were still trying to overcome their pain.
April 25th, 2022 04:22
Rozina said:
Powerful words. Emotional scars, hidden, may be harder to heal. I have seen women in my previous practice who had been abused verbally, emotionally and psychologically and after so many years they were still trying to overcome their pain.
April 25th, 2022 04:22
Scar
orchidee said:
Good write S.
Can we \'unlearn\' some things? I don\'t think we can. But I think we can think different or new things - better things..
April 25th, 2022 01:55
orchidee said:
Good write S.
Can we \'unlearn\' some things? I don\'t think we can. But I think we can think different or new things - better things..
April 25th, 2022 01:55
Wings of dreams
Neville said:
the grass is not always greener on the other side .. but leaves it seems, often are .. what a delightfully wistful poem spills to be sure ........... Neville x
April 24th, 2022 06:55
Neville said:
the grass is not always greener on the other side .. but leaves it seems, often are .. what a delightfully wistful poem spills to be sure ........... Neville x
April 24th, 2022 06:55
Wings of dreams
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words spilleronsheet, we all become what we are meant to be in this life and all is good.
Andy
April 24th, 2022 00:44
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words spilleronsheet, we all become what we are meant to be in this life and all is good.
Andy
April 24th, 2022 00:44
Wings of dreams
Vamsi Sudha said:
Dear Spiller,
Wings of dreams. Named it beautifully...
Weaved so beautifully ,
Was carried to the virtual imaginary !!
Great one indeed !!
April 24th, 2022 00:25
Vamsi Sudha said:
Dear Spiller,
Wings of dreams. Named it beautifully...
Weaved so beautifully ,
Was carried to the virtual imaginary !!
Great one indeed !!
April 24th, 2022 00:25
Wings of dreams
Crowns4Christ said:
Very nice and nicely descriptive, beautiful imagery, I think moths are also beautiful as butterflies
April 23rd, 2022 18:12
Crowns4Christ said:
Very nice and nicely descriptive, beautiful imagery, I think moths are also beautiful as butterflies
April 23rd, 2022 18:12
Wings of dreams
Rozina said:
Oh dear, never mind, still able to fly like them! Really enjoyed reading this, but felt sorry for his feelings!
April 23rd, 2022 17:49
Rozina said:
Oh dear, never mind, still able to fly like them! Really enjoyed reading this, but felt sorry for his feelings!
April 23rd, 2022 17:49
Wings of dreams
Distant View said:
We are destined to be whatever we are destined to be. Each one having its own special place in this world. Nice poem!
April 23rd, 2022 06:20
Distant View said:
We are destined to be whatever we are destined to be. Each one having its own special place in this world. Nice poem!
April 23rd, 2022 06:20
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