Comments received on poems by spilleronsheet
Does sky have space ?
Neville said:
You ask a series of 64 billion dollar questions dear spills .. whether there is a definitive answer to any of them, is beyond me .. and my guess is we shall just have to wait and see .. But with my hand on my heart, I have a feeling everything will work out fine in the end .. N :)
July 24th, 2022 11:54
Neville said:
You ask a series of 64 billion dollar questions dear spills .. whether there is a definitive answer to any of them, is beyond me .. and my guess is we shall just have to wait and see .. But with my hand on my heart, I have a feeling everything will work out fine in the end .. N :)
July 24th, 2022 11:54
Cold heart
Neville said:
I swear to the great architect of the universe .. A shiver ran up and down my spine when I opened this page and gazed upon these eight words so strategically placed ...
Neville
July 15th, 2022 02:59
Neville said:
I swear to the great architect of the universe .. A shiver ran up and down my spine when I opened this page and gazed upon these eight words so strategically placed ...
Neville
July 15th, 2022 02:59
Do you regret now ?
Neville said:
Regrets eh\' who would have em .. I know only too well how they can eat into one\'s soul ... enjoyed deeply spills .. I hope others will eventually pass by this way to .. N
July 9th, 2022 02:00
Neville said:
Regrets eh\' who would have em .. I know only too well how they can eat into one\'s soul ... enjoyed deeply spills .. I hope others will eventually pass by this way to .. N
July 9th, 2022 02:00
Blossom
Neville said:
this is absolutely bloomin splendid
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there, I\'ve drawn the line beyond which this particular form has now been breached ... excellent aint good enough a word in my humble opinion .................... Neville
July 7th, 2022 01:49
Neville said:
this is absolutely bloomin splendid
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there, I\'ve drawn the line beyond which this particular form has now been breached ... excellent aint good enough a word in my humble opinion .................... Neville
July 7th, 2022 01:49
Cape
Neville said:
I simply love the title and it gets even better as one reads through each strategically well placed word and also, what lays there, between the lines too ....... Neville
July 7th, 2022 01:40
Neville said:
I simply love the title and it gets even better as one reads through each strategically well placed word and also, what lays there, between the lines too ....... Neville
July 7th, 2022 01:40
Thorns
Goldfinch60 said:
Powerful words spilleronsheet and very well written.
Andy
July 6th, 2022 00:12
Goldfinch60 said:
Powerful words spilleronsheet and very well written.
Andy
July 6th, 2022 00:12
A tune to ears….
Caring dove said:
We all need comfort and hope in difficult times . A lovely poem spiller 🙂
June 29th, 2022 02:30
Caring dove said:
We all need comfort and hope in difficult times . A lovely poem spiller 🙂
June 29th, 2022 02:30
Balancing
L. B. Mek said:
\'managing the words of supervisor \'
(you understand well, dear Poet
\'above it all\'
we must traverse, one
shaky step, at a time
on our tightrope of fate
accounting for the worst
hoping for the best
knowing
so many, before us have passed
such a test and lived to paint
ink, their victory\'s into memorable
motivational, songs
or comforting
nursery, rhymes...!)
a great read
thanks for sharing, dear Poet
stay Strong!
June 27th, 2022 04:38
L. B. Mek said:
\'managing the words of supervisor \'
(you understand well, dear Poet
\'above it all\'
we must traverse, one
shaky step, at a time
on our tightrope of fate
accounting for the worst
hoping for the best
knowing
so many, before us have passed
such a test and lived to paint
ink, their victory\'s into memorable
motivational, songs
or comforting
nursery, rhymes...!)
a great read
thanks for sharing, dear Poet
stay Strong!
June 27th, 2022 04:38
Balancing
dusk arising said:
To bite one\'s tongue or not? A waiting game maybe the wisest play. A balance of one\'s own temperament with the sweet art of revenge (best served cold) at the most opportune moment.
Alternatively, test the safety net in real time lol.
June 26th, 2022 23:30
dusk arising said:
To bite one\'s tongue or not? A waiting game maybe the wisest play. A balance of one\'s own temperament with the sweet art of revenge (best served cold) at the most opportune moment.
Alternatively, test the safety net in real time lol.
June 26th, 2022 23:30
The starting
L. B. Mek said:
life-affirmingly, empowering!
\'if you survive
the underscore remains
you lost
mustering the courage
hard and difficult
but you practised not to be torn
you wash your wounds
leave them untended
to remind the harshness
you must survive
survive the storms
to live gracefully\'..
onwards then, dear Poet
lets see what this twisted Fate
has to throw at us
knowing, its all
been seen before
felt, before
and survived, before
by someone, who existed
before antibiotics
and credit cards
and freedom, to choose
our paths in life..
yeah, You\'ve got this!
aim high
fall hard and brush yourself off
then soar, ever higher
laughing
at how simple it all becomes
when you believe in yourself
and forgive, yourself!
June 23rd, 2022 04:49
L. B. Mek said:
life-affirmingly, empowering!
\'if you survive
the underscore remains
you lost
mustering the courage
hard and difficult
but you practised not to be torn
you wash your wounds
leave them untended
to remind the harshness
you must survive
survive the storms
to live gracefully\'..
onwards then, dear Poet
lets see what this twisted Fate
has to throw at us
knowing, its all
been seen before
felt, before
and survived, before
by someone, who existed
before antibiotics
and credit cards
and freedom, to choose
our paths in life..
yeah, You\'ve got this!
aim high
fall hard and brush yourself off
then soar, ever higher
laughing
at how simple it all becomes
when you believe in yourself
and forgive, yourself!
June 23rd, 2022 04:49
The starting
dusk arising said:
Survival is indeed a prime motivator. Heroes are remembered by most once or twice a year but they are dead history unless you fought alongside them.
Many storms confront every life. We have a choice. Do we confront the storms head on (risky) or batten down the hatches and ride it out?
June 23rd, 2022 03:21
dusk arising said:
Survival is indeed a prime motivator. Heroes are remembered by most once or twice a year but they are dead history unless you fought alongside them.
Many storms confront every life. We have a choice. Do we confront the storms head on (risky) or batten down the hatches and ride it out?
June 23rd, 2022 03:21
The starting
Poetic Dan said:
That it most definitely did, turn after turn but hopefully now I\'ve found cruise control!
Great read and good to see you my friend, I always see your crown from my angel.
June 23rd, 2022 01:28
Poetic Dan said:
That it most definitely did, turn after turn but hopefully now I\'ve found cruise control!
Great read and good to see you my friend, I always see your crown from my angel.
June 23rd, 2022 01:28
The starting
Goldfinch60 said:
Each day is wonderful spilleronsheet and we will survice them.
Andy
June 23rd, 2022 00:48
Goldfinch60 said:
Each day is wonderful spilleronsheet and we will survice them.
Andy
June 23rd, 2022 00:48
Blossom
Paul Bell said:
Just when you think, this is it, it turns on its head. Life seems to be a bit cruel today.
June 22nd, 2022 10:59
Paul Bell said:
Just when you think, this is it, it turns on its head. Life seems to be a bit cruel today.
June 22nd, 2022 10:59
Bitter
Vamsi Sudha said:
Dear Spiller, Bitterness is good at times to cleanse. You are done with it. Time to embrace the sweetness of life...
June 21st, 2022 23:55
Vamsi Sudha said:
Dear Spiller, Bitterness is good at times to cleanse. You are done with it. Time to embrace the sweetness of life...
June 21st, 2022 23:55
Blossom
Vamsi Sudha said:
Oh Spiller, haiku....again. 3lines speaks volumes. Good one
June 21st, 2022 23:43
Vamsi Sudha said:
Oh Spiller, haiku....again. 3lines speaks volumes. Good one
June 21st, 2022 23:43
Dead corpse
Goldfinch60 said:
May that darkness soon become light in your life spilleronsheet.
Andy
June 17th, 2022 00:28
Goldfinch60 said:
May that darkness soon become light in your life spilleronsheet.
Andy
June 17th, 2022 00:28
Cape
Paul Bell said:
Sadly, I\'ve seen kids like this, little creations heading for a mental breakdown before they reach 12.
Social media, really should be shot.
June 15th, 2022 15:24
Paul Bell said:
Sadly, I\'ve seen kids like this, little creations heading for a mental breakdown before they reach 12.
Social media, really should be shot.
June 15th, 2022 15:24
Cape
Vamsi Sudha said:
Dear Spiller
\"working all night
with panda eyes
Eating like a bear
moving like a sloth
which zoo do you belong ?
appearance on your sleeve\"
Very humorous on the same side your simile\'s are mind blowing. Totally loved the poem. All the best Spiller.
Sport , Confidence on your Sleeve
Then everything is under the veil..:)
June 15th, 2022 13:14
Vamsi Sudha said:
Dear Spiller
\"working all night
with panda eyes
Eating like a bear
moving like a sloth
which zoo do you belong ?
appearance on your sleeve\"
Very humorous on the same side your simile\'s are mind blowing. Totally loved the poem. All the best Spiller.
Sport , Confidence on your Sleeve
Then everything is under the veil..:)
June 15th, 2022 13:14
Cape
dusk arising said:
Looks? What a decietful disguise is this - our given birthright. I look nothing like i ought. Or is it because I look this way that my insides, my mind, my perception has striven to be so different?
Thought provoking stuff spiller.
June 14th, 2022 13:33
dusk arising said:
Looks? What a decietful disguise is this - our given birthright. I look nothing like i ought. Or is it because I look this way that my insides, my mind, my perception has striven to be so different?
Thought provoking stuff spiller.
June 14th, 2022 13:33
Slowly slowly….
Neville said:
some things in life .. at least this one, simply can not be rushed ..
Indeed, I shall savour these words time and time again ........ Neville
June 10th, 2022 04:35
Neville said:
some things in life .. at least this one, simply can not be rushed ..
Indeed, I shall savour these words time and time again ........ Neville
June 10th, 2022 04:35
Slowly slowly….
Rocky Lagou said:
Dear Spiller, this is truly spectacular. I love how the title already instantly sets the sedate tone of this poem. I feel your images and it all feels so tangible, it feels gloomy, but nonetheless I feel an underlying need for hope.
As an aside I just wanted to say that you\'ve truly been one of the poets here on MPS that have uplifted and inspired me in many ways. Your poems speak a thousand words in only a few stanzas and the power of them are impactful. I\'ll be on a hiatus until August and I can\'t wait to see what marvels you\'ve created when I return. Until then!
June 8th, 2022 10:01
Rocky Lagou said:
Dear Spiller, this is truly spectacular. I love how the title already instantly sets the sedate tone of this poem. I feel your images and it all feels so tangible, it feels gloomy, but nonetheless I feel an underlying need for hope.
As an aside I just wanted to say that you\'ve truly been one of the poets here on MPS that have uplifted and inspired me in many ways. Your poems speak a thousand words in only a few stanzas and the power of them are impactful. I\'ll be on a hiatus until August and I can\'t wait to see what marvels you\'ve created when I return. Until then!
June 8th, 2022 10:01
Slowly slowly….
JudyStella said:
Love the use of imagery! It brings that hopelessness so well.
June 8th, 2022 06:08
JudyStella said:
Love the use of imagery! It brings that hopelessness so well.
June 8th, 2022 06:08
Slowly slowly….
dusk arising said:
Speaks of perseverence, tenacity in the face of adversity.
I count myself lucky in having a positive mindset which is such a strength in times of the challenges life brings. Though i have times of depression i believe i do not sink so far as those not so lucky who have a negative mindset.
Which are you?
June 8th, 2022 04:54
dusk arising said:
Speaks of perseverence, tenacity in the face of adversity.
I count myself lucky in having a positive mindset which is such a strength in times of the challenges life brings. Though i have times of depression i believe i do not sink so far as those not so lucky who have a negative mindset.
Which are you?
June 8th, 2022 04:54
Slowly slowly….
Vamsi Sudha said:
Dear Spiller, the Strong showers are done, now its time for lush greens. Fresh feel for the day. Nice Write :)
June 8th, 2022 00:10
Vamsi Sudha said:
Dear Spiller, the Strong showers are done, now its time for lush greens. Fresh feel for the day. Nice Write :)
June 8th, 2022 00:10
Watching and working
SureshG said:
Life is a chase - your words a dusting of hope
June 3rd, 2022 09:41
SureshG said:
Life is a chase - your words a dusting of hope
June 3rd, 2022 09:41
Watching and working
Vamsi Sudha said:
Dear Spiller, Your poems are a true depiction of your feeling and you really interweave them exceptionally.
Be Persistent and
Perseverance be your shield
And nothing stops you to yield !!
All the Best Spiller, thanks for yet another spark from you.
June 1st, 2022 21:42
Vamsi Sudha said:
Dear Spiller, Your poems are a true depiction of your feeling and you really interweave them exceptionally.
Be Persistent and
Perseverance be your shield
And nothing stops you to yield !!
All the Best Spiller, thanks for yet another spark from you.
June 1st, 2022 21:42
Watching and working
Goldfinch60 said:
Persevering in this world can bring so much joy and happiness spilleronsheet.
Andy
May 31st, 2022 00:40
Goldfinch60 said:
Persevering in this world can bring so much joy and happiness spilleronsheet.
Andy
May 31st, 2022 00:40
Watching and working
JudyStella said:
Perseverance is truly the key to success! A great message brought out❤️ Loved it! I love how the community has so much lessons to share to the world. I am so lucky to have met you all!
May 30th, 2022 10:24
JudyStella said:
Perseverance is truly the key to success! A great message brought out❤️ Loved it! I love how the community has so much lessons to share to the world. I am so lucky to have met you all!
May 30th, 2022 10:24
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