Comments received on poems by spilleronsheet
Watching and working
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
(forgive me, dear Poet
if I rudely, yet favourably
compare your words
to one of my favourite poems
of all time:
from, \'A psalm of life\'
by that Great Longfellow:
\'In the world\'s broad field of battle,
In the bivouac of Life,
Be not like dumb, driven cattle!
Be a hero in the strife!
Trust no Future, howe\'er pleasant!
Let the dead Past bury its dead!
Act, -- act in the living Present!\'
\'Let us, then, be up and doing,
With a heart for any fate;
Still achieving, still pursuing,
Learn to labor and to wait.\')
https://mypoeticside.com/show-classic-poem-17171
May 30th, 2022 06:30
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
(forgive me, dear Poet
if I rudely, yet favourably
compare your words
to one of my favourite poems
of all time:
from, \'A psalm of life\'
by that Great Longfellow:
\'In the world\'s broad field of battle,
In the bivouac of Life,
Be not like dumb, driven cattle!
Be a hero in the strife!
Trust no Future, howe\'er pleasant!
Let the dead Past bury its dead!
Act, -- act in the living Present!\'
\'Let us, then, be up and doing,
With a heart for any fate;
Still achieving, still pursuing,
Learn to labor and to wait.\')
https://mypoeticside.com/show-classic-poem-17171
May 30th, 2022 06:30
Watching and working
dusk arising said:
A small crowd of work in progress was mown down in Texas as you will know. Parents know why they started (why you started after all) but in their grief and those feeling totally disallusioned with what has become \'normal\' the question takes on a new depth... why they started after all. A plea for a less painful existence in a world which has punished so cruelly and mindlessly.
May 30th, 2022 05:31
dusk arising said:
A small crowd of work in progress was mown down in Texas as you will know. Parents know why they started (why you started after all) but in their grief and those feeling totally disallusioned with what has become \'normal\' the question takes on a new depth... why they started after all. A plea for a less painful existence in a world which has punished so cruelly and mindlessly.
May 30th, 2022 05:31
Watching and working
Caring dove said:
Nice words spiller .. interesting words . Like your poem 🙂
May 30th, 2022 04:06
Caring dove said:
Nice words spiller .. interesting words . Like your poem 🙂
May 30th, 2022 04:06
Blackboard
Neville said:
I can imagine these words spilling (excuse the pun) from your pen .. or from beneath quick and blurred fingers .. and falling perfectly upon the page or the screen for which they were intended .. You are indeed good at this word game we all love so very much ........ Brava Spills .... Neville
May 27th, 2022 00:58
Neville said:
I can imagine these words spilling (excuse the pun) from your pen .. or from beneath quick and blurred fingers .. and falling perfectly upon the page or the screen for which they were intended .. You are indeed good at this word game we all love so very much ........ Brava Spills .... Neville
May 27th, 2022 00:58
Blackboard
Bella Shepard said:
So ingenious, looking at the nature of art from the perspective of the medium. I love the way you\'ve played with the words, what a wonderful outcome.
May 24th, 2022 15:52
Bella Shepard said:
So ingenious, looking at the nature of art from the perspective of the medium. I love the way you\'ve played with the words, what a wonderful outcome.
May 24th, 2022 15:52
Blackboard
Aradhya said:
exceptional use of imagery, dear poet. absolutely stunning!
\'on contours undefined
paintings are being made
yet what canvas to choose
and which colours to draw upon
the white canvas can’t describe\'
i loved these lines. truly an enchanting and delightful read, thank you!
May 24th, 2022 15:34
Aradhya said:
exceptional use of imagery, dear poet. absolutely stunning!
\'on contours undefined
paintings are being made
yet what canvas to choose
and which colours to draw upon
the white canvas can’t describe\'
i loved these lines. truly an enchanting and delightful read, thank you!
May 24th, 2022 15:34
Blackboard
JudyStella said:
Exquisite use of language! I also loved the images used❤️
May 24th, 2022 14:08
JudyStella said:
Exquisite use of language! I also loved the images used❤️
May 24th, 2022 14:08
Remote control
Goldfinch60 said:
The controls in life are within us spilleronsheet but we must never press restart but must always move forward towards the wonderful life that is there for us..
Andy
May 21st, 2022 00:28
Goldfinch60 said:
The controls in life are within us spilleronsheet but we must never press restart but must always move forward towards the wonderful life that is there for us..
Andy
May 21st, 2022 00:28
Remote control
Vamsi Sudha said:
Dear Spiller , There is ONLY ONLY... PLAY Button...with nothing beyond it..So enjoy the play while it goes..Dont look for Replay , Rewind and Pause.
Live the Moment Completely and Fully...then these controls are superflous.
May 20th, 2022 12:25
Vamsi Sudha said:
Dear Spiller , There is ONLY ONLY... PLAY Button...with nothing beyond it..So enjoy the play while it goes..Dont look for Replay , Rewind and Pause.
Live the Moment Completely and Fully...then these controls are superflous.
May 20th, 2022 12:25
Remote control
Rocky Lagou said:
Haha, oh Spiller I\'ve been looking for them my whole life! I can\'t even count the times I\'ve sadly said to myself, \"If only I can go back in time,\" or to those \"good old days.\" Sometimes the past can seem inescapable, but life only goes forward, and we have no choice but to follow its rhythm. A wonderful poem.
May 20th, 2022 08:36
Rocky Lagou said:
Haha, oh Spiller I\'ve been looking for them my whole life! I can\'t even count the times I\'ve sadly said to myself, \"If only I can go back in time,\" or to those \"good old days.\" Sometimes the past can seem inescapable, but life only goes forward, and we have no choice but to follow its rhythm. A wonderful poem.
May 20th, 2022 08:36
Sleeping eyes
Vamsi Sudha said:
Dear Spiller,
You are an enigma. I just feel like floating on a wave, reading your poetries. You traverse at the event so beautifully, it just presents itself before my eyes.
No wonder it was said \" Poetry speaks\" and your poetry speaks volumes. Thanks for a wonderful one again.
All the very best for your exams. On a lighter note pls don\'t write poetries in your exam :))
May 19th, 2022 12:29
Vamsi Sudha said:
Dear Spiller,
You are an enigma. I just feel like floating on a wave, reading your poetries. You traverse at the event so beautifully, it just presents itself before my eyes.
No wonder it was said \" Poetry speaks\" and your poetry speaks volumes. Thanks for a wonderful one again.
All the very best for your exams. On a lighter note pls don\'t write poetries in your exam :))
May 19th, 2022 12:29
Sleeping eyes
Bella Shepard said:
A beautiful write dear poet. The wonderful phrasing of each stanza builds to an exquisite culmination. Loved it.
May 18th, 2022 14:25
Bella Shepard said:
A beautiful write dear poet. The wonderful phrasing of each stanza builds to an exquisite culmination. Loved it.
May 18th, 2022 14:25
Sleeping eyes
Rocky Lagou said:
Wow, I was adoring this artistical awakening with the line \"Sleepy yet awaken eyes / writing poetries of all kinds\" and then we reach then end and I was like: \"Oh, c\'mon!\" Hehe, no but seriously this is wonderful, I sense this wistful sensation, a type of yearning. Magnificent.
May 18th, 2022 10:21
Rocky Lagou said:
Wow, I was adoring this artistical awakening with the line \"Sleepy yet awaken eyes / writing poetries of all kinds\" and then we reach then end and I was like: \"Oh, c\'mon!\" Hehe, no but seriously this is wonderful, I sense this wistful sensation, a type of yearning. Magnificent.
May 18th, 2022 10:21
Scar
arqios said:
Our scars remind us that we lived another day. To survivor in us moves on. Thanks for sharing.
May 11th, 2022 21:17
arqios said:
Our scars remind us that we lived another day. To survivor in us moves on. Thanks for sharing.
May 11th, 2022 21:17
Hope, a blooming flower
theneophiles_words said:
Solely stunning spilleronsheet. A beautiful message conveyed with utmost sincerity. I liked how this one shows a glimpse of everything humanity has suffered (from Wars to Vaccines). We are humans first with that never-ending hope and should stick to it till the end. Lastly, it very well mentions rather than looking out. It is us who we are searching for, A memorable one!
May 11th, 2022 14:29
theneophiles_words said:
Solely stunning spilleronsheet. A beautiful message conveyed with utmost sincerity. I liked how this one shows a glimpse of everything humanity has suffered (from Wars to Vaccines). We are humans first with that never-ending hope and should stick to it till the end. Lastly, it very well mentions rather than looking out. It is us who we are searching for, A memorable one!
May 11th, 2022 14:29
Wings of dreams
Caring dove said:
Nicely expressed poem spiller .. you made me feel really sorry for the caterpillar who cried and couldn’t be that butterfly she so wanted to be . (( sometimes we can look around so jealous of others , sad in our place in the world wanting to be something more than we are .. and that can cause us a lot of pain when we’re not in the place we want to be
A great poem 🙂
May 11th, 2022 14:22
Caring dove said:
Nicely expressed poem spiller .. you made me feel really sorry for the caterpillar who cried and couldn’t be that butterfly she so wanted to be . (( sometimes we can look around so jealous of others , sad in our place in the world wanting to be something more than we are .. and that can cause us a lot of pain when we’re not in the place we want to be
A great poem 🙂
May 11th, 2022 14:22
Searching the silver line
Rozina said:
I believe so in answer to your positive start.
May 7th, 2022 22:42
Rozina said:
I believe so in answer to your positive start.
May 7th, 2022 22:42
Searching the silver line
SureshG said:
If not now, then maybe in the next, or the one after that, a sun shall shine upon all of us. Uplifting poem indeed
May 7th, 2022 19:13
SureshG said:
If not now, then maybe in the next, or the one after that, a sun shall shine upon all of us. Uplifting poem indeed
May 7th, 2022 19:13
Searching the silver line
Bella Shepard said:
A question to ponder, but never find the answer to. You cause us to pause and reflect, I thank you for that.
May 7th, 2022 14:09
Bella Shepard said:
A question to ponder, but never find the answer to. You cause us to pause and reflect, I thank you for that.
May 7th, 2022 14:09
Searching the silver line
Nicholas Browning said:
The fulfillment of a daydream, or the reward of life that\'s promised upon death. Will sentience accompany that existence? A very formidable question. May you find your answer.
May 7th, 2022 03:02
Nicholas Browning said:
The fulfillment of a daydream, or the reward of life that\'s promised upon death. Will sentience accompany that existence? A very formidable question. May you find your answer.
May 7th, 2022 03:02
Searching the silver line
orchidee said:
Good write S.
I should think existence will be there to greet that heavenly morning.
I don\'t think that morning will come to just \'nothingness\' or annihilation, or as if one visits a friend but finds no one home.
May 7th, 2022 02:32
orchidee said:
Good write S.
I should think existence will be there to greet that heavenly morning.
I don\'t think that morning will come to just \'nothingness\' or annihilation, or as if one visits a friend but finds no one home.
May 7th, 2022 02:32
Searching the silver line
Vamsi Sudha said:
Yes it will be there., and you would be there to pen it beautifully..~ Good one spiller....
May 7th, 2022 01:35
Vamsi Sudha said:
Yes it will be there., and you would be there to pen it beautifully..~ Good one spiller....
May 7th, 2022 01:35
Searching the silver line
Goldfinch60 said:
Very intriguing question spilleronsheet.
Andy
May 7th, 2022 01:04
Goldfinch60 said:
Very intriguing question spilleronsheet.
Andy
May 7th, 2022 01:04
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