Comments received on poems by spilleronsheet
Cape
Vamsi Sudha said:
Dear Spiller
\"working all night
with panda eyes
Eating like a bear
moving like a sloth
which zoo do you belong ?
appearance on your sleeve\"
Very humorous on the same side your simile\'s are mind blowing. Totally loved the poem. All the best Spiller.
Sport , Confidence on your Sleeve
Then everything is under the veil..:)
June 15th, 2022 13:14
Vamsi Sudha said:
Dear Spiller
\"working all night
with panda eyes
Eating like a bear
moving like a sloth
which zoo do you belong ?
appearance on your sleeve\"
Very humorous on the same side your simile\'s are mind blowing. Totally loved the poem. All the best Spiller.
Sport , Confidence on your Sleeve
Then everything is under the veil..:)
June 15th, 2022 13:14
Cape
dusk arising said:
Looks? What a decietful disguise is this - our given birthright. I look nothing like i ought. Or is it because I look this way that my insides, my mind, my perception has striven to be so different?
Thought provoking stuff spiller.
June 14th, 2022 13:33
dusk arising said:
Looks? What a decietful disguise is this - our given birthright. I look nothing like i ought. Or is it because I look this way that my insides, my mind, my perception has striven to be so different?
Thought provoking stuff spiller.
June 14th, 2022 13:33
Slowly slowly….
Neville said:
some things in life .. at least this one, simply can not be rushed ..
Indeed, I shall savour these words time and time again ........ Neville
June 10th, 2022 04:35
Neville said:
some things in life .. at least this one, simply can not be rushed ..
Indeed, I shall savour these words time and time again ........ Neville
June 10th, 2022 04:35
Slowly slowly….
Rocky Lagou said:
Dear Spiller, this is truly spectacular. I love how the title already instantly sets the sedate tone of this poem. I feel your images and it all feels so tangible, it feels gloomy, but nonetheless I feel an underlying need for hope.
As an aside I just wanted to say that you\'ve truly been one of the poets here on MPS that have uplifted and inspired me in many ways. Your poems speak a thousand words in only a few stanzas and the power of them are impactful. I\'ll be on a hiatus until August and I can\'t wait to see what marvels you\'ve created when I return. Until then!
June 8th, 2022 10:01
Rocky Lagou said:
Dear Spiller, this is truly spectacular. I love how the title already instantly sets the sedate tone of this poem. I feel your images and it all feels so tangible, it feels gloomy, but nonetheless I feel an underlying need for hope.
As an aside I just wanted to say that you\'ve truly been one of the poets here on MPS that have uplifted and inspired me in many ways. Your poems speak a thousand words in only a few stanzas and the power of them are impactful. I\'ll be on a hiatus until August and I can\'t wait to see what marvels you\'ve created when I return. Until then!
June 8th, 2022 10:01
Slowly slowly….
JudyStella said:
Love the use of imagery! It brings that hopelessness so well.
June 8th, 2022 06:08
JudyStella said:
Love the use of imagery! It brings that hopelessness so well.
June 8th, 2022 06:08
Slowly slowly….
dusk arising said:
Speaks of perseverence, tenacity in the face of adversity.
I count myself lucky in having a positive mindset which is such a strength in times of the challenges life brings. Though i have times of depression i believe i do not sink so far as those not so lucky who have a negative mindset.
Which are you?
June 8th, 2022 04:54
dusk arising said:
Speaks of perseverence, tenacity in the face of adversity.
I count myself lucky in having a positive mindset which is such a strength in times of the challenges life brings. Though i have times of depression i believe i do not sink so far as those not so lucky who have a negative mindset.
Which are you?
June 8th, 2022 04:54
Slowly slowly….
Vamsi Sudha said:
Dear Spiller, the Strong showers are done, now its time for lush greens. Fresh feel for the day. Nice Write :)
June 8th, 2022 00:10
Vamsi Sudha said:
Dear Spiller, the Strong showers are done, now its time for lush greens. Fresh feel for the day. Nice Write :)
June 8th, 2022 00:10
Watching and working
SureshG said:
Life is a chase - your words a dusting of hope
June 3rd, 2022 09:41
SureshG said:
Life is a chase - your words a dusting of hope
June 3rd, 2022 09:41
Watching and working
Vamsi Sudha said:
Dear Spiller, Your poems are a true depiction of your feeling and you really interweave them exceptionally.
Be Persistent and
Perseverance be your shield
And nothing stops you to yield !!
All the Best Spiller, thanks for yet another spark from you.
June 1st, 2022 21:42
Vamsi Sudha said:
Dear Spiller, Your poems are a true depiction of your feeling and you really interweave them exceptionally.
Be Persistent and
Perseverance be your shield
And nothing stops you to yield !!
All the Best Spiller, thanks for yet another spark from you.
June 1st, 2022 21:42
Watching and working
Goldfinch60 said:
Persevering in this world can bring so much joy and happiness spilleronsheet.
Andy
May 31st, 2022 00:40
Goldfinch60 said:
Persevering in this world can bring so much joy and happiness spilleronsheet.
Andy
May 31st, 2022 00:40
Watching and working
JudyStella said:
Perseverance is truly the key to success! A great message brought out❤️ Loved it! I love how the community has so much lessons to share to the world. I am so lucky to have met you all!
May 30th, 2022 10:24
JudyStella said:
Perseverance is truly the key to success! A great message brought out❤️ Loved it! I love how the community has so much lessons to share to the world. I am so lucky to have met you all!
May 30th, 2022 10:24
Watching and working
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
(forgive me, dear Poet
if I rudely, yet favourably
compare your words
to one of my favourite poems
of all time:
from, \'A psalm of life\'
by that Great Longfellow:
\'In the world\'s broad field of battle,
In the bivouac of Life,
Be not like dumb, driven cattle!
Be a hero in the strife!
Trust no Future, howe\'er pleasant!
Let the dead Past bury its dead!
Act, -- act in the living Present!\'
\'Let us, then, be up and doing,
With a heart for any fate;
Still achieving, still pursuing,
Learn to labor and to wait.\')
https://mypoeticside.com/show-classic-poem-17171
May 30th, 2022 06:30
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
(forgive me, dear Poet
if I rudely, yet favourably
compare your words
to one of my favourite poems
of all time:
from, \'A psalm of life\'
by that Great Longfellow:
\'In the world\'s broad field of battle,
In the bivouac of Life,
Be not like dumb, driven cattle!
Be a hero in the strife!
Trust no Future, howe\'er pleasant!
Let the dead Past bury its dead!
Act, -- act in the living Present!\'
\'Let us, then, be up and doing,
With a heart for any fate;
Still achieving, still pursuing,
Learn to labor and to wait.\')
https://mypoeticside.com/show-classic-poem-17171
May 30th, 2022 06:30
Watching and working
dusk arising said:
A small crowd of work in progress was mown down in Texas as you will know. Parents know why they started (why you started after all) but in their grief and those feeling totally disallusioned with what has become \'normal\' the question takes on a new depth... why they started after all. A plea for a less painful existence in a world which has punished so cruelly and mindlessly.
May 30th, 2022 05:31
dusk arising said:
A small crowd of work in progress was mown down in Texas as you will know. Parents know why they started (why you started after all) but in their grief and those feeling totally disallusioned with what has become \'normal\' the question takes on a new depth... why they started after all. A plea for a less painful existence in a world which has punished so cruelly and mindlessly.
May 30th, 2022 05:31
Watching and working
Caring dove said:
Nice words spiller .. interesting words . Like your poem 🙂
May 30th, 2022 04:06
Caring dove said:
Nice words spiller .. interesting words . Like your poem 🙂
May 30th, 2022 04:06
Blackboard
Neville said:
I can imagine these words spilling (excuse the pun) from your pen .. or from beneath quick and blurred fingers .. and falling perfectly upon the page or the screen for which they were intended .. You are indeed good at this word game we all love so very much ........ Brava Spills .... Neville
May 27th, 2022 00:58
Neville said:
I can imagine these words spilling (excuse the pun) from your pen .. or from beneath quick and blurred fingers .. and falling perfectly upon the page or the screen for which they were intended .. You are indeed good at this word game we all love so very much ........ Brava Spills .... Neville
May 27th, 2022 00:58
Blackboard
Bella Shepard said:
So ingenious, looking at the nature of art from the perspective of the medium. I love the way you\'ve played with the words, what a wonderful outcome.
May 24th, 2022 15:52
Bella Shepard said:
So ingenious, looking at the nature of art from the perspective of the medium. I love the way you\'ve played with the words, what a wonderful outcome.
May 24th, 2022 15:52
Blackboard
Aradhya said:
exceptional use of imagery, dear poet. absolutely stunning!
\'on contours undefined
paintings are being made
yet what canvas to choose
and which colours to draw upon
the white canvas can’t describe\'
i loved these lines. truly an enchanting and delightful read, thank you!
May 24th, 2022 15:34
Aradhya said:
exceptional use of imagery, dear poet. absolutely stunning!
\'on contours undefined
paintings are being made
yet what canvas to choose
and which colours to draw upon
the white canvas can’t describe\'
i loved these lines. truly an enchanting and delightful read, thank you!
May 24th, 2022 15:34
Blackboard
JudyStella said:
Exquisite use of language! I also loved the images used❤️
May 24th, 2022 14:08
JudyStella said:
Exquisite use of language! I also loved the images used❤️
May 24th, 2022 14:08
Remote control
Goldfinch60 said:
The controls in life are within us spilleronsheet but we must never press restart but must always move forward towards the wonderful life that is there for us..
Andy
May 21st, 2022 00:28
Goldfinch60 said:
The controls in life are within us spilleronsheet but we must never press restart but must always move forward towards the wonderful life that is there for us..
Andy
May 21st, 2022 00:28
Remote control
Vamsi Sudha said:
Dear Spiller , There is ONLY ONLY... PLAY Button...with nothing beyond it..So enjoy the play while it goes..Dont look for Replay , Rewind and Pause.
Live the Moment Completely and Fully...then these controls are superflous.
May 20th, 2022 12:25
Vamsi Sudha said:
Dear Spiller , There is ONLY ONLY... PLAY Button...with nothing beyond it..So enjoy the play while it goes..Dont look for Replay , Rewind and Pause.
Live the Moment Completely and Fully...then these controls are superflous.
May 20th, 2022 12:25
Remote control
Rocky Lagou said:
Haha, oh Spiller I\'ve been looking for them my whole life! I can\'t even count the times I\'ve sadly said to myself, \"If only I can go back in time,\" or to those \"good old days.\" Sometimes the past can seem inescapable, but life only goes forward, and we have no choice but to follow its rhythm. A wonderful poem.
May 20th, 2022 08:36
Rocky Lagou said:
Haha, oh Spiller I\'ve been looking for them my whole life! I can\'t even count the times I\'ve sadly said to myself, \"If only I can go back in time,\" or to those \"good old days.\" Sometimes the past can seem inescapable, but life only goes forward, and we have no choice but to follow its rhythm. A wonderful poem.
May 20th, 2022 08:36
Sleeping eyes
Vamsi Sudha said:
Dear Spiller,
You are an enigma. I just feel like floating on a wave, reading your poetries. You traverse at the event so beautifully, it just presents itself before my eyes.
No wonder it was said \" Poetry speaks\" and your poetry speaks volumes. Thanks for a wonderful one again.
All the very best for your exams. On a lighter note pls don\'t write poetries in your exam :))
May 19th, 2022 12:29
Vamsi Sudha said:
Dear Spiller,
You are an enigma. I just feel like floating on a wave, reading your poetries. You traverse at the event so beautifully, it just presents itself before my eyes.
No wonder it was said \" Poetry speaks\" and your poetry speaks volumes. Thanks for a wonderful one again.
All the very best for your exams. On a lighter note pls don\'t write poetries in your exam :))
May 19th, 2022 12:29
Sleeping eyes
Bella Shepard said:
A beautiful write dear poet. The wonderful phrasing of each stanza builds to an exquisite culmination. Loved it.
May 18th, 2022 14:25
Bella Shepard said:
A beautiful write dear poet. The wonderful phrasing of each stanza builds to an exquisite culmination. Loved it.
May 18th, 2022 14:25
Sleeping eyes
Rocky Lagou said:
Wow, I was adoring this artistical awakening with the line \"Sleepy yet awaken eyes / writing poetries of all kinds\" and then we reach then end and I was like: \"Oh, c\'mon!\" Hehe, no but seriously this is wonderful, I sense this wistful sensation, a type of yearning. Magnificent.
May 18th, 2022 10:21
Rocky Lagou said:
Wow, I was adoring this artistical awakening with the line \"Sleepy yet awaken eyes / writing poetries of all kinds\" and then we reach then end and I was like: \"Oh, c\'mon!\" Hehe, no but seriously this is wonderful, I sense this wistful sensation, a type of yearning. Magnificent.
May 18th, 2022 10:21
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