Comments received on poems by spilleronsheet
Slow burn
Rocky Lagou said:
Wow idk why but the word \"tingling\" came to mind when reading this piece. I love the way you described these strong feelings like fear in such interesting images and honestly this is richly portrayed. Maybe it\'s a feeling of tingling uncertainty. Well done!
March 28th, 2022 13:24
Rocky Lagou said:
Wow idk why but the word \"tingling\" came to mind when reading this piece. I love the way you described these strong feelings like fear in such interesting images and honestly this is richly portrayed. Maybe it\'s a feeling of tingling uncertainty. Well done!
March 28th, 2022 13:24
Bend and blend
theneophiles_words said:
This one is fine as the blade of a knife! Sharp yet nuanced. Fate does come looking like a coincidence. So If you let it pass by, it is a coincidence. And if you grab on to it, it is fate.
March 28th, 2022 12:36
theneophiles_words said:
This one is fine as the blade of a knife! Sharp yet nuanced. Fate does come looking like a coincidence. So If you let it pass by, it is a coincidence. And if you grab on to it, it is fate.
March 28th, 2022 12:36
Silence
theneophiles_words said:
Wonderful work! Use of words as clever as ever! But that last sentence explains it all.
March 28th, 2022 12:27
theneophiles_words said:
Wonderful work! Use of words as clever as ever! But that last sentence explains it all.
March 28th, 2022 12:27
Slow burn
Neville said:
a brilliant title for a great post that
I am sure will burn long ................. N
March 26th, 2022 14:29
Neville said:
a brilliant title for a great post that
I am sure will burn long ................. N
March 26th, 2022 14:29
Slow burn
Poetic Dan said:
Many directions in this inspiring write my friend..
Thank you
March 26th, 2022 03:42
Poetic Dan said:
Many directions in this inspiring write my friend..
Thank you
March 26th, 2022 03:42
Lines
Bella Shepard said:
Love the allusion to \"the coast of desires, built upon the dream of childhood\". Those dreams were sweet and ours to strive for. Beautiful!
March 23rd, 2022 14:56
Bella Shepard said:
Love the allusion to \"the coast of desires, built upon the dream of childhood\". Those dreams were sweet and ours to strive for. Beautiful!
March 23rd, 2022 14:56
Lines
Fay Slimm. said:
Love this take on palmistry with its lines leading to fate etc. An inspiring read spills that urges us run our own course to define our own future.
March 23rd, 2022 07:29
Fay Slimm. said:
Love this take on palmistry with its lines leading to fate etc. An inspiring read spills that urges us run our own course to define our own future.
March 23rd, 2022 07:29
Rare the sight
Neville said:
any poem with a hare incorporated in it is gonna be loved by me .. they are such sacred creatures and I truly have a thing for them ..
Personally, I am a tawny owl ........ :)
March 22nd, 2022 17:34
Neville said:
any poem with a hare incorporated in it is gonna be loved by me .. they are such sacred creatures and I truly have a thing for them ..
Personally, I am a tawny owl ........ :)
March 22nd, 2022 17:34
Rare the sight
Bella Shepard said:
Your words are tumbling around in my brain in the most delightful way, beckoning and challenging. A great write!
March 22nd, 2022 12:41
Bella Shepard said:
Your words are tumbling around in my brain in the most delightful way, beckoning and challenging. A great write!
March 22nd, 2022 12:41
The greatest player
L. B. Mek said:
indeed, and conditioning of that mind
rewarding us
with our most valuable gifts in life..
wise words, and a meditative reading experience
thanks for sharing, dear poet
March 21st, 2022 07:01
L. B. Mek said:
indeed, and conditioning of that mind
rewarding us
with our most valuable gifts in life..
wise words, and a meditative reading experience
thanks for sharing, dear poet
March 21st, 2022 07:01
Bend and blend
Neville said:
These words are more than just a collection of words that together, comprise a poem .. they are food for thought ................N
March 20th, 2022 03:02
Neville said:
These words are more than just a collection of words that together, comprise a poem .. they are food for thought ................N
March 20th, 2022 03:02
Bend and blend
Caring dove said:
Great poem ! I really like this ! Good choice of words , spiller 🙂
March 19th, 2022 15:23
Caring dove said:
Great poem ! I really like this ! Good choice of words , spiller 🙂
March 19th, 2022 15:23
Bend and blend
Vamsi Sudha said:
Great Rush of thoughts !!
Loved these lines
Flip the pages
the diary of efforts
take the pen of imagination
a ruler of discipline
draw a line\"
Bend to Blend ! speaks volumes.
Shed of ego on the Go,
So much is there for you to bestow
A tree which fruits bends
Only a matured soul bends and blends !!
Great message and very well written !!
March 18th, 2022 23:40
Vamsi Sudha said:
Great Rush of thoughts !!
Loved these lines
Flip the pages
the diary of efforts
take the pen of imagination
a ruler of discipline
draw a line\"
Bend to Blend ! speaks volumes.
Shed of ego on the Go,
So much is there for you to bestow
A tree which fruits bends
Only a matured soul bends and blends !!
Great message and very well written !!
March 18th, 2022 23:40
Bend and blend
FallenAngel1🕊 said:
Great concept of bending light to blend all we go through in life as we look for all the meanings. Not sure if I misunderstood your message here but this is how I perceive this little gem.🍻🌞🕊
March 18th, 2022 15:45
FallenAngel1🕊 said:
Great concept of bending light to blend all we go through in life as we look for all the meanings. Not sure if I misunderstood your message here but this is how I perceive this little gem.🍻🌞🕊
March 18th, 2022 15:45
Bend and blend
Fay Slimm. said:
Without that bend we would be immune to the euphoric should it favour our blending pens with fancy - love this glance at aiming to win life\'s races - thanks spills for sharing it with us.
March 18th, 2022 13:48
Fay Slimm. said:
Without that bend we would be immune to the euphoric should it favour our blending pens with fancy - love this glance at aiming to win life\'s races - thanks spills for sharing it with us.
March 18th, 2022 13:48
Silence
Rocky Lagou said:
I totally felt the emotion in this one. It\'s a strange feeling isn\'t it? The \"cold stares\" and \"crooked faces.\" You expressed this well and those final lines were really intense. The silence. ✨👍
March 15th, 2022 13:45
Rocky Lagou said:
I totally felt the emotion in this one. It\'s a strange feeling isn\'t it? The \"cold stares\" and \"crooked faces.\" You expressed this well and those final lines were really intense. The silence. ✨👍
March 15th, 2022 13:45
Silence
L. B. Mek said:
when we submit:
and quietude, becomes a bane
in our lives
than a sheltering harbour of solace..
oft
our face of demise, hints little
of the lifetime\'s we invested
in fighting, to find our corner
of sunshine kindness
in the face of life\'s unending
typhoon\'s of strife..
before, this hollow Silence
you\'re witnessing in the now
of the defeated, listless
they too, strived, hoped and coloured
the airwaves, bright
with their thirst for life..
before, the before
of a poet\'s words of empathetic mercy
exude her worth
in-spite of her, state
of self-loathing
lifeless, stealth...
(dear Poet
when my defeat, comes
remember me, kindly
in your sincerity of ink
and like her, even wrapped
within finite silence
I shall rest easy...)
Brilliant!!!
March 15th, 2022 05:58
L. B. Mek said:
when we submit:
and quietude, becomes a bane
in our lives
than a sheltering harbour of solace..
oft
our face of demise, hints little
of the lifetime\'s we invested
in fighting, to find our corner
of sunshine kindness
in the face of life\'s unending
typhoon\'s of strife..
before, this hollow Silence
you\'re witnessing in the now
of the defeated, listless
they too, strived, hoped and coloured
the airwaves, bright
with their thirst for life..
before, the before
of a poet\'s words of empathetic mercy
exude her worth
in-spite of her, state
of self-loathing
lifeless, stealth...
(dear Poet
when my defeat, comes
remember me, kindly
in your sincerity of ink
and like her, even wrapped
within finite silence
I shall rest easy...)
Brilliant!!!
March 15th, 2022 05:58
Silence
Vamsi Sudha said:
Dear Spiller !!
That\'s heart wrenching !!
\"resorted to face of silence…
that silence which meant graver than fiercest storms…\"
Extremely powerful lines !!
Very well written !!
March 14th, 2022 23:56
Vamsi Sudha said:
Dear Spiller !!
That\'s heart wrenching !!
\"resorted to face of silence…
that silence which meant graver than fiercest storms…\"
Extremely powerful lines !!
Very well written !!
March 14th, 2022 23:56
The hypocritic
sorenbarrett said:
Wonderful images, although the overt message of hypocrisy is clear it seems that this poem is far deeper. The madness that it brings and the emptiness that surrounds it.
March 13th, 2022 19:32
sorenbarrett said:
Wonderful images, although the overt message of hypocrisy is clear it seems that this poem is far deeper. The madness that it brings and the emptiness that surrounds it.
March 13th, 2022 19:32
Past, a moment to look upon
Vamsi Sudha said:
Dear Spiller ,
Dont know how I missed this.
You were awesome and continue tooo ...
Be your best version and you are unbeatable !! Great One Dear !!
March 11th, 2022 10:12
Vamsi Sudha said:
Dear Spiller ,
Dont know how I missed this.
You were awesome and continue tooo ...
Be your best version and you are unbeatable !! Great One Dear !!
March 11th, 2022 10:12
An ode to thyself
Rocky Lagou said:
\"you have to be, / what you never wanted to be…\" Omg Spiller you literally have such a talent! I mean it couldn\'t get any realer than that. If we don\'t eventually face our fears and do what we once thought was the undoable, than we won\'t ever revolutionize our being. Preach!!!!!!!! 💖
March 10th, 2022 11:47
Rocky Lagou said:
\"you have to be, / what you never wanted to be…\" Omg Spiller you literally have such a talent! I mean it couldn\'t get any realer than that. If we don\'t eventually face our fears and do what we once thought was the undoable, than we won\'t ever revolutionize our being. Preach!!!!!!!! 💖
March 10th, 2022 11:47
An ode to thyself
Vamsi Sudha said:
Dear Spiller,
Break the Shackles
Reach the Targets
Never look back on Problems
They are Stepping stones, in all terms !!
You rock Spiller !! Emotions spill in every stanza of yours.
March 9th, 2022 21:51
Vamsi Sudha said:
Dear Spiller,
Break the Shackles
Reach the Targets
Never look back on Problems
They are Stepping stones, in all terms !!
You rock Spiller !! Emotions spill in every stanza of yours.
March 9th, 2022 21:51
An ode to thyself
Neville said:
....... this is so cool, .. infused with determination from beginning to end .. and when conviction of this calibre is so focussed .. there aint nothing gonna stop ya ...... Neville x
March 9th, 2022 17:22
Neville said:
....... this is so cool, .. infused with determination from beginning to end .. and when conviction of this calibre is so focussed .. there aint nothing gonna stop ya ...... Neville x
March 9th, 2022 17:22
An ode to thyself
Rozina said:
Absolutely. No one can break us out of our caged minds except ourselves.
March 9th, 2022 04:50
Rozina said:
Absolutely. No one can break us out of our caged minds except ourselves.
March 9th, 2022 04:50
The glimmer
Goldfinch60 said:
That patience will be with us all one day spilleronsheet.
Andy
March 8th, 2022 01:49
Goldfinch60 said:
That patience will be with us all one day spilleronsheet.
Andy
March 8th, 2022 01:49
The glimmer
Rozina said:
This is so very true. Someone who seemed so critical of my work kept pushing me to make changes, think outside the box, do better. And I am eternally grateful now. Brilliant lines.
March 7th, 2022 22:26
Rozina said:
This is so very true. Someone who seemed so critical of my work kept pushing me to make changes, think outside the box, do better. And I am eternally grateful now. Brilliant lines.
March 7th, 2022 22:26
The glimmer
Rocky Lagou said:
I could literally cry from how damn beautiful this is.
\"in the garden of blood
water seemed thicker\"
Is a line that stood out to me as special, not only is it crafted so finely,
it possesses a slap of Meaning. It revolves around the absence of hope,
and the engulfment of despair. I feel it also alludes to the Creation of mankind,
and the first sin. Which is so apt for the message of the poem.
The last line also really serves as a line for the People.
It embraces patience, and \"patience is a virtue.\"
This poem is hopeful. You are special Spiller!
✨
March 7th, 2022 10:04
Rocky Lagou said:
I could literally cry from how damn beautiful this is.
\"in the garden of blood
water seemed thicker\"
Is a line that stood out to me as special, not only is it crafted so finely,
it possesses a slap of Meaning. It revolves around the absence of hope,
and the engulfment of despair. I feel it also alludes to the Creation of mankind,
and the first sin. Which is so apt for the message of the poem.
The last line also really serves as a line for the People.
It embraces patience, and \"patience is a virtue.\"
This poem is hopeful. You are special Spiller!
✨
March 7th, 2022 10:04
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