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Silence
L. B. Mek said:
when we submit:
and quietude, becomes a bane
in our lives
than a sheltering harbour of solace..
oft
our face of demise, hints little
of the lifetime\'s we invested
in fighting, to find our corner
of sunshine kindness
in the face of life\'s unending
typhoon\'s of strife..
before, this hollow Silence
you\'re witnessing in the now
of the defeated, listless
they too, strived, hoped and coloured
the airwaves, bright
with their thirst for life..
before, the before
of a poet\'s words of empathetic mercy
exude her worth
in-spite of her, state
of self-loathing
lifeless, stealth...
(dear Poet
when my defeat, comes
remember me, kindly
in your sincerity of ink
and like her, even wrapped
within finite silence
I shall rest easy...)
Brilliant!!!
March 15th, 2022 05:58
L. B. Mek said:
when we submit:
and quietude, becomes a bane
in our lives
than a sheltering harbour of solace..
oft
our face of demise, hints little
of the lifetime\'s we invested
in fighting, to find our corner
of sunshine kindness
in the face of life\'s unending
typhoon\'s of strife..
before, this hollow Silence
you\'re witnessing in the now
of the defeated, listless
they too, strived, hoped and coloured
the airwaves, bright
with their thirst for life..
before, the before
of a poet\'s words of empathetic mercy
exude her worth
in-spite of her, state
of self-loathing
lifeless, stealth...
(dear Poet
when my defeat, comes
remember me, kindly
in your sincerity of ink
and like her, even wrapped
within finite silence
I shall rest easy...)
Brilliant!!!
March 15th, 2022 05:58
Silence
Vamsi Sudha said:
Dear Spiller !!
That\'s heart wrenching !!
\"resorted to face of silence…
that silence which meant graver than fiercest storms…\"
Extremely powerful lines !!
Very well written !!
March 14th, 2022 23:56
Vamsi Sudha said:
Dear Spiller !!
That\'s heart wrenching !!
\"resorted to face of silence…
that silence which meant graver than fiercest storms…\"
Extremely powerful lines !!
Very well written !!
March 14th, 2022 23:56
The hypocritic
sorenbarrett said:
Wonderful images, although the overt message of hypocrisy is clear it seems that this poem is far deeper. The madness that it brings and the emptiness that surrounds it.
March 13th, 2022 19:32
sorenbarrett said:
Wonderful images, although the overt message of hypocrisy is clear it seems that this poem is far deeper. The madness that it brings and the emptiness that surrounds it.
March 13th, 2022 19:32
Past, a moment to look upon
Vamsi Sudha said:
Dear Spiller ,
Dont know how I missed this.
You were awesome and continue tooo ...
Be your best version and you are unbeatable !! Great One Dear !!
March 11th, 2022 10:12
Vamsi Sudha said:
Dear Spiller ,
Dont know how I missed this.
You were awesome and continue tooo ...
Be your best version and you are unbeatable !! Great One Dear !!
March 11th, 2022 10:12
An ode to thyself
Rocky Lagou said:
\"you have to be, / what you never wanted to be…\" Omg Spiller you literally have such a talent! I mean it couldn\'t get any realer than that. If we don\'t eventually face our fears and do what we once thought was the undoable, than we won\'t ever revolutionize our being. Preach!!!!!!!! 💖
March 10th, 2022 11:47
Rocky Lagou said:
\"you have to be, / what you never wanted to be…\" Omg Spiller you literally have such a talent! I mean it couldn\'t get any realer than that. If we don\'t eventually face our fears and do what we once thought was the undoable, than we won\'t ever revolutionize our being. Preach!!!!!!!! 💖
March 10th, 2022 11:47
An ode to thyself
Vamsi Sudha said:
Dear Spiller,
Break the Shackles
Reach the Targets
Never look back on Problems
They are Stepping stones, in all terms !!
You rock Spiller !! Emotions spill in every stanza of yours.
March 9th, 2022 21:51
Vamsi Sudha said:
Dear Spiller,
Break the Shackles
Reach the Targets
Never look back on Problems
They are Stepping stones, in all terms !!
You rock Spiller !! Emotions spill in every stanza of yours.
March 9th, 2022 21:51
An ode to thyself
Neville said:
....... this is so cool, .. infused with determination from beginning to end .. and when conviction of this calibre is so focussed .. there aint nothing gonna stop ya ...... Neville x
March 9th, 2022 17:22
Neville said:
....... this is so cool, .. infused with determination from beginning to end .. and when conviction of this calibre is so focussed .. there aint nothing gonna stop ya ...... Neville x
March 9th, 2022 17:22
An ode to thyself
Rozina said:
Absolutely. No one can break us out of our caged minds except ourselves.
March 9th, 2022 04:50
Rozina said:
Absolutely. No one can break us out of our caged minds except ourselves.
March 9th, 2022 04:50
The glimmer
Goldfinch60 said:
That patience will be with us all one day spilleronsheet.
Andy
March 8th, 2022 01:49
Goldfinch60 said:
That patience will be with us all one day spilleronsheet.
Andy
March 8th, 2022 01:49
The glimmer
Rozina said:
This is so very true. Someone who seemed so critical of my work kept pushing me to make changes, think outside the box, do better. And I am eternally grateful now. Brilliant lines.
March 7th, 2022 22:26
Rozina said:
This is so very true. Someone who seemed so critical of my work kept pushing me to make changes, think outside the box, do better. And I am eternally grateful now. Brilliant lines.
March 7th, 2022 22:26
The glimmer
Rocky Lagou said:
I could literally cry from how damn beautiful this is.
\"in the garden of blood
water seemed thicker\"
Is a line that stood out to me as special, not only is it crafted so finely,
it possesses a slap of Meaning. It revolves around the absence of hope,
and the engulfment of despair. I feel it also alludes to the Creation of mankind,
and the first sin. Which is so apt for the message of the poem.
The last line also really serves as a line for the People.
It embraces patience, and \"patience is a virtue.\"
This poem is hopeful. You are special Spiller!
✨
March 7th, 2022 10:04
Rocky Lagou said:
I could literally cry from how damn beautiful this is.
\"in the garden of blood
water seemed thicker\"
Is a line that stood out to me as special, not only is it crafted so finely,
it possesses a slap of Meaning. It revolves around the absence of hope,
and the engulfment of despair. I feel it also alludes to the Creation of mankind,
and the first sin. Which is so apt for the message of the poem.
The last line also really serves as a line for the People.
It embraces patience, and \"patience is a virtue.\"
This poem is hopeful. You are special Spiller!
✨
March 7th, 2022 10:04
The glimmer
Vamsi Sudha said:
That was a beautiful one and you spilled positivity today in a grandeur way...Thanks Dear Spiller !! Spread your wings wide , the world is inviting You .....
PATIENCE need us to be PATIENT !!
MIRACLE...jumbled is RECLAIM !! And its time you reclaim your good days back !!
March 7th, 2022 09:25
Vamsi Sudha said:
That was a beautiful one and you spilled positivity today in a grandeur way...Thanks Dear Spiller !! Spread your wings wide , the world is inviting You .....
PATIENCE need us to be PATIENT !!
MIRACLE...jumbled is RECLAIM !! And its time you reclaim your good days back !!
March 7th, 2022 09:25
The glimmer
dusk arising said:
I think it would be wise to say that patience is slowly gained after the experience of awaiting many disappointments in life. Hope should never be orphaned in light of this though.
Nice to read poetry which provokes my dusty old mind into thought.
March 7th, 2022 08:06
dusk arising said:
I think it would be wise to say that patience is slowly gained after the experience of awaiting many disappointments in life. Hope should never be orphaned in light of this though.
Nice to read poetry which provokes my dusty old mind into thought.
March 7th, 2022 08:06
The glimmer
L. B. Mek said:
\'an up thrust from somewhere
Binge of cheer
someone gave hope
One who earlier laughed and teased
Could give a hand to support
in the garden of blood
water seemed thicker\'..
Poetry\'s eloquent, wording of steadfast Hope..
Brilliant!
thanks for sharing, dear Poet
(\'glimmer\' indeed, let\'s throw our nets wide
and fish
our future\'s, horizon skies
for what gifts we can glean
of life
ask, not
if we be worthy, or ready
simply
strive, reach, grapple and fight
for our opportunities
to that survival and triumph, in life!)
March 7th, 2022 07:52
L. B. Mek said:
\'an up thrust from somewhere
Binge of cheer
someone gave hope
One who earlier laughed and teased
Could give a hand to support
in the garden of blood
water seemed thicker\'..
Poetry\'s eloquent, wording of steadfast Hope..
Brilliant!
thanks for sharing, dear Poet
(\'glimmer\' indeed, let\'s throw our nets wide
and fish
our future\'s, horizon skies
for what gifts we can glean
of life
ask, not
if we be worthy, or ready
simply
strive, reach, grapple and fight
for our opportunities
to that survival and triumph, in life!)
March 7th, 2022 07:52
The hypocritic
Vamsi Sudha said:
Dear Spiller !!
Hypocrites punish themselves, a turmoil which they can\'t express but face with a sweet smile. Its better to be transparent and face the challenge than being hypocritic. Dare the truth , and you Win !! As usual magic of words by you :)
March 5th, 2022 00:18
Vamsi Sudha said:
Dear Spiller !!
Hypocrites punish themselves, a turmoil which they can\'t express but face with a sweet smile. Its better to be transparent and face the challenge than being hypocritic. Dare the truth , and you Win !! As usual magic of words by you :)
March 5th, 2022 00:18
The hypocritic
Paul Bell said:
There is nothing worse than shaking the hand of a dickhead, but sadly at some point we\'re put in a position where we need to grin and bare it.
As long as we can still think bad thoughts of them.
March 4th, 2022 05:41
Paul Bell said:
There is nothing worse than shaking the hand of a dickhead, but sadly at some point we\'re put in a position where we need to grin and bare it.
As long as we can still think bad thoughts of them.
March 4th, 2022 05:41
The hypocritic
Neville said:
the fact they exist at all does not sadden me .. the fact that there are so many of them saddens me as does the fact that we are the only species on the planet that behaves in such a way ............................nice one spills .............................. Neville
March 4th, 2022 01:13
Neville said:
the fact they exist at all does not sadden me .. the fact that there are so many of them saddens me as does the fact that we are the only species on the planet that behaves in such a way ............................nice one spills .............................. Neville
March 4th, 2022 01:13
The hypocritic
Rozina said:
Hypocrites abound. They say things to make themselves look good, but do something else entirely. Cannot be trusted. Very real.
March 3rd, 2022 22:18
Rozina said:
Hypocrites abound. They say things to make themselves look good, but do something else entirely. Cannot be trusted. Very real.
March 3rd, 2022 22:18
The hypocritic
dusk arising said:
Well I think you weighed me up rather well in this piece. Though i have been assured many a time that duplicity is my fine point.
March 3rd, 2022 10:46
dusk arising said:
Well I think you weighed me up rather well in this piece. Though i have been assured many a time that duplicity is my fine point.
March 3rd, 2022 10:46
The hypocritic
Rocky Lagou said:
A message to the hypocrites. It\'s a façade that is drawn-out and overused. Everything will eventually come to light! Great use of imagery and the lines are filled with purpose! 💖💖✨✨✨
March 3rd, 2022 10:34
Rocky Lagou said:
A message to the hypocrites. It\'s a façade that is drawn-out and overused. Everything will eventually come to light! Great use of imagery and the lines are filled with purpose! 💖💖✨✨✨
March 3rd, 2022 10:34
In their
FallenAngel1🕊 said:
As I read,I couldn\'t help but think of what I heard in the news 2 days ago. They\'re saying \"What\'s happening over there can lead to WW3.\" Your words can certainly be interpretated in many ways,but I think you\'ve depicted the dark times we are in at the present time with pin point precision. Well exicuted.🕊🌞
March 2nd, 2022 12:46
FallenAngel1🕊 said:
As I read,I couldn\'t help but think of what I heard in the news 2 days ago. They\'re saying \"What\'s happening over there can lead to WW3.\" Your words can certainly be interpretated in many ways,but I think you\'ve depicted the dark times we are in at the present time with pin point precision. Well exicuted.🕊🌞
March 2nd, 2022 12:46
In their
Rozina said:
You have encapsulated the dark and painful time we are in. Stunning lines.
March 2nd, 2022 09:28
Rozina said:
You have encapsulated the dark and painful time we are in. Stunning lines.
March 2nd, 2022 09:28
In their
Rocky Lagou said:
\"The black swan on streets\" What a message! This poem is so evolutionary as we\'re following this development of the tiara-wearing speaker. So lovely and the execution was glittering! 💖✨
March 2nd, 2022 09:24
Rocky Lagou said:
\"The black swan on streets\" What a message! This poem is so evolutionary as we\'re following this development of the tiara-wearing speaker. So lovely and the execution was glittering! 💖✨
March 2nd, 2022 09:24
In their
Vamsi Sudha said:
Good one, but very sorrowful to read ! Was it imaginary or implying any situation ?
March 2nd, 2022 07:20
Vamsi Sudha said:
Good one, but very sorrowful to read ! Was it imaginary or implying any situation ?
March 2nd, 2022 07:20
In their
Neville said:
What an amazing journey you have invited to take your readers on today dear spills .. a journey deceptively deep and dark and mysterious .. a journey that may be viewed in so many different ways .. the life story of a woman, a country or nation ........ of beauty and longsuffering and so many more things ........ a great and memorable poem as far as I am concerned .... Neville x
March 2nd, 2022 03:16
Neville said:
What an amazing journey you have invited to take your readers on today dear spills .. a journey deceptively deep and dark and mysterious .. a journey that may be viewed in so many different ways .. the life story of a woman, a country or nation ........ of beauty and longsuffering and so many more things ........ a great and memorable poem as far as I am concerned .... Neville x
March 2nd, 2022 03:16
In their
dusk arising said:
That lady of liberty gifted by the nation of France to a victorious North america. A great symbol of freedom through the years, now scarred with many sorrows where endeavor has met with disappointment and today do we fear disallusion as freedom itself is threatened with planetary destruction by yet another mad man.
Freedom is born of love..... let love prevail.
March 2nd, 2022 02:18
dusk arising said:
That lady of liberty gifted by the nation of France to a victorious North america. A great symbol of freedom through the years, now scarred with many sorrows where endeavor has met with disappointment and today do we fear disallusion as freedom itself is threatened with planetary destruction by yet another mad man.
Freedom is born of love..... let love prevail.
March 2nd, 2022 02:18
Unsettled
Paul Bell said:
I like this, you can play around with it.
Where destiny leads
listless autumn leaf
On whims of oceanic breeze.
I\'ll need to try it.
February 28th, 2022 12:28
Paul Bell said:
I like this, you can play around with it.
Where destiny leads
listless autumn leaf
On whims of oceanic breeze.
I\'ll need to try it.
February 28th, 2022 12:28
Unsettled
Rocky Lagou said:
Wow what a fine write! Very rich in meaning and interpretations! Destiny and our odds against the world we\'re living in! 💖
February 28th, 2022 09:45
Rocky Lagou said:
Wow what a fine write! Very rich in meaning and interpretations! Destiny and our odds against the world we\'re living in! 💖
February 28th, 2022 09:45
Missing
Rocky Lagou said:
What a finely expressed bundle of emotions. Eloquently expressed dear poet! 💖
February 28th, 2022 09:41
Rocky Lagou said:
What a finely expressed bundle of emotions. Eloquently expressed dear poet! 💖
February 28th, 2022 09:41
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