Comments received on poems by spilleronsheet
The glimmer
Vamsi Sudha said:
That was a beautiful one and you spilled positivity today in a grandeur way...Thanks Dear Spiller !! Spread your wings wide , the world is inviting You .....
PATIENCE need us to be PATIENT !!
MIRACLE...jumbled is RECLAIM !! And its time you reclaim your good days back !!
March 7th, 2022 09:25
Vamsi Sudha said:
That was a beautiful one and you spilled positivity today in a grandeur way...Thanks Dear Spiller !! Spread your wings wide , the world is inviting You .....
PATIENCE need us to be PATIENT !!
MIRACLE...jumbled is RECLAIM !! And its time you reclaim your good days back !!
March 7th, 2022 09:25
The glimmer
dusk arising said:
I think it would be wise to say that patience is slowly gained after the experience of awaiting many disappointments in life. Hope should never be orphaned in light of this though.
Nice to read poetry which provokes my dusty old mind into thought.
March 7th, 2022 08:06
dusk arising said:
I think it would be wise to say that patience is slowly gained after the experience of awaiting many disappointments in life. Hope should never be orphaned in light of this though.
Nice to read poetry which provokes my dusty old mind into thought.
March 7th, 2022 08:06
The glimmer
L. B. Mek said:
\'an up thrust from somewhere
Binge of cheer
someone gave hope
One who earlier laughed and teased
Could give a hand to support
in the garden of blood
water seemed thicker\'..
Poetry\'s eloquent, wording of steadfast Hope..
Brilliant!
thanks for sharing, dear Poet
(\'glimmer\' indeed, let\'s throw our nets wide
and fish
our future\'s, horizon skies
for what gifts we can glean
of life
ask, not
if we be worthy, or ready
simply
strive, reach, grapple and fight
for our opportunities
to that survival and triumph, in life!)
March 7th, 2022 07:52
L. B. Mek said:
\'an up thrust from somewhere
Binge of cheer
someone gave hope
One who earlier laughed and teased
Could give a hand to support
in the garden of blood
water seemed thicker\'..
Poetry\'s eloquent, wording of steadfast Hope..
Brilliant!
thanks for sharing, dear Poet
(\'glimmer\' indeed, let\'s throw our nets wide
and fish
our future\'s, horizon skies
for what gifts we can glean
of life
ask, not
if we be worthy, or ready
simply
strive, reach, grapple and fight
for our opportunities
to that survival and triumph, in life!)
March 7th, 2022 07:52
The hypocritic
Vamsi Sudha said:
Dear Spiller !!
Hypocrites punish themselves, a turmoil which they can\'t express but face with a sweet smile. Its better to be transparent and face the challenge than being hypocritic. Dare the truth , and you Win !! As usual magic of words by you :)
March 5th, 2022 00:18
Vamsi Sudha said:
Dear Spiller !!
Hypocrites punish themselves, a turmoil which they can\'t express but face with a sweet smile. Its better to be transparent and face the challenge than being hypocritic. Dare the truth , and you Win !! As usual magic of words by you :)
March 5th, 2022 00:18
The hypocritic
Paul Bell said:
There is nothing worse than shaking the hand of a dickhead, but sadly at some point we\'re put in a position where we need to grin and bare it.
As long as we can still think bad thoughts of them.
March 4th, 2022 05:41
Paul Bell said:
There is nothing worse than shaking the hand of a dickhead, but sadly at some point we\'re put in a position where we need to grin and bare it.
As long as we can still think bad thoughts of them.
March 4th, 2022 05:41
The hypocritic
Neville said:
the fact they exist at all does not sadden me .. the fact that there are so many of them saddens me as does the fact that we are the only species on the planet that behaves in such a way ............................nice one spills .............................. Neville
March 4th, 2022 01:13
Neville said:
the fact they exist at all does not sadden me .. the fact that there are so many of them saddens me as does the fact that we are the only species on the planet that behaves in such a way ............................nice one spills .............................. Neville
March 4th, 2022 01:13
The hypocritic
Rozina said:
Hypocrites abound. They say things to make themselves look good, but do something else entirely. Cannot be trusted. Very real.
March 3rd, 2022 22:18
Rozina said:
Hypocrites abound. They say things to make themselves look good, but do something else entirely. Cannot be trusted. Very real.
March 3rd, 2022 22:18
The hypocritic
dusk arising said:
Well I think you weighed me up rather well in this piece. Though i have been assured many a time that duplicity is my fine point.
March 3rd, 2022 10:46
dusk arising said:
Well I think you weighed me up rather well in this piece. Though i have been assured many a time that duplicity is my fine point.
March 3rd, 2022 10:46
The hypocritic
Rocky Lagou said:
A message to the hypocrites. It\'s a façade that is drawn-out and overused. Everything will eventually come to light! Great use of imagery and the lines are filled with purpose! 💖💖✨✨✨
March 3rd, 2022 10:34
Rocky Lagou said:
A message to the hypocrites. It\'s a façade that is drawn-out and overused. Everything will eventually come to light! Great use of imagery and the lines are filled with purpose! 💖💖✨✨✨
March 3rd, 2022 10:34
In their
FallenAngel1🕊 said:
As I read,I couldn\'t help but think of what I heard in the news 2 days ago. They\'re saying \"What\'s happening over there can lead to WW3.\" Your words can certainly be interpretated in many ways,but I think you\'ve depicted the dark times we are in at the present time with pin point precision. Well exicuted.🕊🌞
March 2nd, 2022 12:46
FallenAngel1🕊 said:
As I read,I couldn\'t help but think of what I heard in the news 2 days ago. They\'re saying \"What\'s happening over there can lead to WW3.\" Your words can certainly be interpretated in many ways,but I think you\'ve depicted the dark times we are in at the present time with pin point precision. Well exicuted.🕊🌞
March 2nd, 2022 12:46
In their
Rozina said:
You have encapsulated the dark and painful time we are in. Stunning lines.
March 2nd, 2022 09:28
Rozina said:
You have encapsulated the dark and painful time we are in. Stunning lines.
March 2nd, 2022 09:28
In their
Rocky Lagou said:
\"The black swan on streets\" What a message! This poem is so evolutionary as we\'re following this development of the tiara-wearing speaker. So lovely and the execution was glittering! 💖✨
March 2nd, 2022 09:24
Rocky Lagou said:
\"The black swan on streets\" What a message! This poem is so evolutionary as we\'re following this development of the tiara-wearing speaker. So lovely and the execution was glittering! 💖✨
March 2nd, 2022 09:24
In their
Vamsi Sudha said:
Good one, but very sorrowful to read ! Was it imaginary or implying any situation ?
March 2nd, 2022 07:20
Vamsi Sudha said:
Good one, but very sorrowful to read ! Was it imaginary or implying any situation ?
March 2nd, 2022 07:20
In their
Neville said:
What an amazing journey you have invited to take your readers on today dear spills .. a journey deceptively deep and dark and mysterious .. a journey that may be viewed in so many different ways .. the life story of a woman, a country or nation ........ of beauty and longsuffering and so many more things ........ a great and memorable poem as far as I am concerned .... Neville x
March 2nd, 2022 03:16
Neville said:
What an amazing journey you have invited to take your readers on today dear spills .. a journey deceptively deep and dark and mysterious .. a journey that may be viewed in so many different ways .. the life story of a woman, a country or nation ........ of beauty and longsuffering and so many more things ........ a great and memorable poem as far as I am concerned .... Neville x
March 2nd, 2022 03:16
In their
dusk arising said:
That lady of liberty gifted by the nation of France to a victorious North america. A great symbol of freedom through the years, now scarred with many sorrows where endeavor has met with disappointment and today do we fear disallusion as freedom itself is threatened with planetary destruction by yet another mad man.
Freedom is born of love..... let love prevail.
March 2nd, 2022 02:18
dusk arising said:
That lady of liberty gifted by the nation of France to a victorious North america. A great symbol of freedom through the years, now scarred with many sorrows where endeavor has met with disappointment and today do we fear disallusion as freedom itself is threatened with planetary destruction by yet another mad man.
Freedom is born of love..... let love prevail.
March 2nd, 2022 02:18
Unsettled
Paul Bell said:
I like this, you can play around with it.
Where destiny leads
listless autumn leaf
On whims of oceanic breeze.
I\'ll need to try it.
February 28th, 2022 12:28
Paul Bell said:
I like this, you can play around with it.
Where destiny leads
listless autumn leaf
On whims of oceanic breeze.
I\'ll need to try it.
February 28th, 2022 12:28
Unsettled
Rocky Lagou said:
Wow what a fine write! Very rich in meaning and interpretations! Destiny and our odds against the world we\'re living in! 💖
February 28th, 2022 09:45
Rocky Lagou said:
Wow what a fine write! Very rich in meaning and interpretations! Destiny and our odds against the world we\'re living in! 💖
February 28th, 2022 09:45
Missing
Rocky Lagou said:
What a finely expressed bundle of emotions. Eloquently expressed dear poet! 💖
February 28th, 2022 09:41
Rocky Lagou said:
What a finely expressed bundle of emotions. Eloquently expressed dear poet! 💖
February 28th, 2022 09:41
Unsettled
Neville said:
I know for a fact these are not easy .. not even bad ones are easy .. but you make it look so bloomin easy and my word ... this is so much better than just GOOD ........ Neville :)
February 28th, 2022 08:55
Neville said:
I know for a fact these are not easy .. not even bad ones are easy .. but you make it look so bloomin easy and my word ... this is so much better than just GOOD ........ Neville :)
February 28th, 2022 08:55
Unsettled
L. B. Mek said:
a wonderful effort
staying true, to Haiku\'s Nature roots
thanks for sharing, dear poet
February 28th, 2022 05:43
L. B. Mek said:
a wonderful effort
staying true, to Haiku\'s Nature roots
thanks for sharing, dear poet
February 28th, 2022 05:43
Unsettled
Vamsi Sudha said:
Dear Spiller, your first Haiku ..WOW. But I too feel the same way, haiku limits the expression....
Cute and precise !!
Fill it up....where destiny leads in your next poem ...awaiting :)
February 28th, 2022 01:17
Vamsi Sudha said:
Dear Spiller, your first Haiku ..WOW. But I too feel the same way, haiku limits the expression....
Cute and precise !!
Fill it up....where destiny leads in your next poem ...awaiting :)
February 28th, 2022 01:17
Missing
Doggerel Dave said:
No dreams... none possible in such a situation. A pure statement of fact. Thanks.
February 27th, 2022 19:46
Doggerel Dave said:
No dreams... none possible in such a situation. A pure statement of fact. Thanks.
February 27th, 2022 19:46
Missing
Rozina said:
I admire this so much as I now realise crafting 3 lines to put up a whole picture is not at all easy! Another senryu to learn from. Thank you.
February 27th, 2022 18:27
Rozina said:
I admire this so much as I now realise crafting 3 lines to put up a whole picture is not at all easy! Another senryu to learn from. Thank you.
February 27th, 2022 18:27
Missing
Crowns4Christ said:
I agree with dusk,so powerful for such few words.great job
February 27th, 2022 14:56
Crowns4Christ said:
I agree with dusk,so powerful for such few words.great job
February 27th, 2022 14:56
Missing
dusk arising said:
My thoughts went to the picture we have seen in the terrible news from Ukraine - the bloodied face of a schoolteacher lady outside the ruins of an attacked Kyiv apartment block.
You words say so much of her plight.
February 27th, 2022 14:38
dusk arising said:
My thoughts went to the picture we have seen in the terrible news from Ukraine - the bloodied face of a schoolteacher lady outside the ruins of an attacked Kyiv apartment block.
You words say so much of her plight.
February 27th, 2022 14:38
Missing
Neville said:
this little gem can not be faulted .. a real jewel if ever there was ........ N x
February 27th, 2022 14:00
Neville said:
this little gem can not be faulted .. a real jewel if ever there was ........ N x
February 27th, 2022 14:00
That one
Paul Bell said:
It never matters how far back in time it is, it\'s in the present. Some things you can change in the present, that suits your mood at that particular time, before it all has to drift back into the past.
February 27th, 2022 06:29
Paul Bell said:
It never matters how far back in time it is, it\'s in the present. Some things you can change in the present, that suits your mood at that particular time, before it all has to drift back into the past.
February 27th, 2022 06:29
That one
Rozina said:
Yes very beautiful lines of love. Thank you for sharing this.
February 26th, 2022 17:38
Rozina said:
Yes very beautiful lines of love. Thank you for sharing this.
February 26th, 2022 17:38
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