Comments received on poems by spilleronsheet
Unsettled
L. B. Mek said:
a wonderful effort
staying true, to Haiku\'s Nature roots
thanks for sharing, dear poet
February 28th, 2022 05:43
L. B. Mek said:
a wonderful effort
staying true, to Haiku\'s Nature roots
thanks for sharing, dear poet
February 28th, 2022 05:43
Unsettled
Vamsi Sudha said:
Dear Spiller, your first Haiku ..WOW. But I too feel the same way, haiku limits the expression....
Cute and precise !!
Fill it up....where destiny leads in your next poem ...awaiting :)
February 28th, 2022 01:17
Vamsi Sudha said:
Dear Spiller, your first Haiku ..WOW. But I too feel the same way, haiku limits the expression....
Cute and precise !!
Fill it up....where destiny leads in your next poem ...awaiting :)
February 28th, 2022 01:17
Missing
Doggerel Dave said:
No dreams... none possible in such a situation. A pure statement of fact. Thanks.
February 27th, 2022 19:46
Doggerel Dave said:
No dreams... none possible in such a situation. A pure statement of fact. Thanks.
February 27th, 2022 19:46
Missing
Rozina said:
I admire this so much as I now realise crafting 3 lines to put up a whole picture is not at all easy! Another senryu to learn from. Thank you.
February 27th, 2022 18:27
Rozina said:
I admire this so much as I now realise crafting 3 lines to put up a whole picture is not at all easy! Another senryu to learn from. Thank you.
February 27th, 2022 18:27
Missing
Crowns4Christ said:
I agree with dusk,so powerful for such few words.great job
February 27th, 2022 14:56
Crowns4Christ said:
I agree with dusk,so powerful for such few words.great job
February 27th, 2022 14:56
Missing
dusk arising said:
My thoughts went to the picture we have seen in the terrible news from Ukraine - the bloodied face of a schoolteacher lady outside the ruins of an attacked Kyiv apartment block.
You words say so much of her plight.
February 27th, 2022 14:38
dusk arising said:
My thoughts went to the picture we have seen in the terrible news from Ukraine - the bloodied face of a schoolteacher lady outside the ruins of an attacked Kyiv apartment block.
You words say so much of her plight.
February 27th, 2022 14:38
Missing
Neville said:
this little gem can not be faulted .. a real jewel if ever there was ........ N x
February 27th, 2022 14:00
Neville said:
this little gem can not be faulted .. a real jewel if ever there was ........ N x
February 27th, 2022 14:00
That one
Paul Bell said:
It never matters how far back in time it is, it\'s in the present. Some things you can change in the present, that suits your mood at that particular time, before it all has to drift back into the past.
February 27th, 2022 06:29
Paul Bell said:
It never matters how far back in time it is, it\'s in the present. Some things you can change in the present, that suits your mood at that particular time, before it all has to drift back into the past.
February 27th, 2022 06:29
That one
Rozina said:
Yes very beautiful lines of love. Thank you for sharing this.
February 26th, 2022 17:38
Rozina said:
Yes very beautiful lines of love. Thank you for sharing this.
February 26th, 2022 17:38
That one
Poetic Dan said:
Not sure where you draw your words from but it\'s from a soul that has lived and still trying to shine.
Thank you so much for sharing my friend
Much peace and respect
February 26th, 2022 15:59
Poetic Dan said:
Not sure where you draw your words from but it\'s from a soul that has lived and still trying to shine.
Thank you so much for sharing my friend
Much peace and respect
February 26th, 2022 15:59
That one
Neville said:
I think I must write out several thousand times ... \'I must not keep agreeing with Teddy\' .... but why not, I ask myself repeatedly .. she is so bloomin write ... that final stanza of yours is surely among the best I have read & considered for a very long while ................💖 and hereby awarded the Teddy heart of excellence ......... Neville :)
February 26th, 2022 12:44
Neville said:
I think I must write out several thousand times ... \'I must not keep agreeing with Teddy\' .... but why not, I ask myself repeatedly .. she is so bloomin write ... that final stanza of yours is surely among the best I have read & considered for a very long while ................💖 and hereby awarded the Teddy heart of excellence ......... Neville :)
February 26th, 2022 12:44
Flip
Neville said:
What a FAB title & I love the poem too
............................
a little bit of heaven soaked in tears
:)
February 26th, 2022 03:16
Neville said:
What a FAB title & I love the poem too
............................
a little bit of heaven soaked in tears
:)
February 26th, 2022 03:16
Flip
junia said:
really beautiful! your focus on nature and your ability to paint pictures actually remind me a bit of Emily Dickinson.
February 25th, 2022 14:28
junia said:
really beautiful! your focus on nature and your ability to paint pictures actually remind me a bit of Emily Dickinson.
February 25th, 2022 14:28
Flip
Vamsi Sudha said:
Dear Spiller,
Let Emotions flow
And they leave you out of low
Giving way to newness to grow
And you would then mellow !
Deep feelings captured well with your poetic heart!!
February 25th, 2022 13:39
Vamsi Sudha said:
Dear Spiller,
Let Emotions flow
And they leave you out of low
Giving way to newness to grow
And you would then mellow !
Deep feelings captured well with your poetic heart!!
February 25th, 2022 13:39
Flip
Rocky Lagou said:
What a lovely poem! I love the imagery that your painting and the analogy between the passing of a day and humans and emotions. Great job on this one. 💖
February 25th, 2022 13:09
Rocky Lagou said:
What a lovely poem! I love the imagery that your painting and the analogy between the passing of a day and humans and emotions. Great job on this one. 💖
February 25th, 2022 13:09
Past, a moment to look upon
Goldfinch60 said:
So true spilleronsheet, looking back over our lives can show us the glorious times we have had.
Andy
February 24th, 2022 01:58
Goldfinch60 said:
So true spilleronsheet, looking back over our lives can show us the glorious times we have had.
Andy
February 24th, 2022 01:58
Past, a moment to look upon
Rozina said:
No the past is not that bad. Many wonderful memories too. And learning not to repeat mistakes made in the past is a great step forward. Your poem is really excellent.
February 23rd, 2022 21:16
Rozina said:
No the past is not that bad. Many wonderful memories too. And learning not to repeat mistakes made in the past is a great step forward. Your poem is really excellent.
February 23rd, 2022 21:16
Past, a moment to look upon
ProfessionalPaperDigester said:
Great use of spaces, it adds a weird sort of tension to reading, and your lines, as already mentioned by most, are really good. I definitely want to see more of this.
February 23rd, 2022 15:54
ProfessionalPaperDigester said:
Great use of spaces, it adds a weird sort of tension to reading, and your lines, as already mentioned by most, are really good. I definitely want to see more of this.
February 23rd, 2022 15:54
Past, a moment to look upon
Rocky Lagou said:
Okay can we just talk about the line: \"Bloomed in a furnace.\" Because I\'m not just going to overlook it as if it weren\'t a result of a genius mind. I mean WOW. Not only does it visually evoke an image onto the reader, like a blossoming rose in a stifling furnace. But it holds so much power when taking into consideration its connotative meanings. Like I personally think that that line implies an upbringing from a soft and sensitive person who was surrounded, and influenced, by chaotic figures in life. But also the evolution of this speaker (despite their ring of bad influence) into something \"not too brittle.\" Once again bouncing back to that furnace analogy, which one could conclude that if something is left in a furnace for too long it will eventually disintegrate, really ties in the idea that the past doesn\'t have the final say over your life. So although this poem could be interpreted as a fun nostalgic moment of recollection, I feel like the deeper meaning is that the past doesn\'t define you. Wow, powerful. ✨💖
February 23rd, 2022 14:02
Rocky Lagou said:
Okay can we just talk about the line: \"Bloomed in a furnace.\" Because I\'m not just going to overlook it as if it weren\'t a result of a genius mind. I mean WOW. Not only does it visually evoke an image onto the reader, like a blossoming rose in a stifling furnace. But it holds so much power when taking into consideration its connotative meanings. Like I personally think that that line implies an upbringing from a soft and sensitive person who was surrounded, and influenced, by chaotic figures in life. But also the evolution of this speaker (despite their ring of bad influence) into something \"not too brittle.\" Once again bouncing back to that furnace analogy, which one could conclude that if something is left in a furnace for too long it will eventually disintegrate, really ties in the idea that the past doesn\'t have the final say over your life. So although this poem could be interpreted as a fun nostalgic moment of recollection, I feel like the deeper meaning is that the past doesn\'t define you. Wow, powerful. ✨💖
February 23rd, 2022 14:02
Past, a moment to look upon
Neville said:
this is indeed charming & clever too methinks .. you just can\'t beat a bit of reflection to make things appear so much more cleaner & clearer .. unfortunately, too many people fail to even consider the many positives that can come from it ........ yes there is a lesson hidden here behind the obvious ..... very nicely poemed indeed ....... Neville
February 23rd, 2022 13:43
Neville said:
this is indeed charming & clever too methinks .. you just can\'t beat a bit of reflection to make things appear so much more cleaner & clearer .. unfortunately, too many people fail to even consider the many positives that can come from it ........ yes there is a lesson hidden here behind the obvious ..... very nicely poemed indeed ....... Neville
February 23rd, 2022 13:43
Past, a moment to look upon
dusk arising said:
True that one\'s past will meld with one\'s character and produce the \'you\' of today. I have flashbacks of my foot in mouth moments which to this day make me cringe but the positive, as you suggest, reigns supreme.... for me anyway.
I feel that most of us who have become hooked on self expression through our poetry are in constant contact with our positive drive and for us, the future hold a wholesomeness to look forward to when we may be able to look back at this very day as a marker point in our self assessment/judgement.
February 23rd, 2022 13:32
dusk arising said:
True that one\'s past will meld with one\'s character and produce the \'you\' of today. I have flashbacks of my foot in mouth moments which to this day make me cringe but the positive, as you suggest, reigns supreme.... for me anyway.
I feel that most of us who have become hooked on self expression through our poetry are in constant contact with our positive drive and for us, the future hold a wholesomeness to look forward to when we may be able to look back at this very day as a marker point in our self assessment/judgement.
February 23rd, 2022 13:32
Confrontation
Bella Shepard said:
It\'s amazing that we yearn to explore the world, the space around us and yet often don\'t realize that there is an inner space often waiting to be explored. Bravo for such an awakening. Thank you !
February 23rd, 2022 07:12
Bella Shepard said:
It\'s amazing that we yearn to explore the world, the space around us and yet often don\'t realize that there is an inner space often waiting to be explored. Bravo for such an awakening. Thank you !
February 23rd, 2022 07:12
Confrontation
Goldfinch60 said:
So much wonder is hidden inside us spilleronsheet that it sometimes surprises us how wonderful life is.
Andy
February 23rd, 2022 02:23
Goldfinch60 said:
So much wonder is hidden inside us spilleronsheet that it sometimes surprises us how wonderful life is.
Andy
February 23rd, 2022 02:23
Confrontation
Rozina said:
Sometimes because of circumstances we have to keep much within ourselves. And then it erupts! A wonderful poem.
February 23rd, 2022 01:00
Rozina said:
Sometimes because of circumstances we have to keep much within ourselves. And then it erupts! A wonderful poem.
February 23rd, 2022 01:00
Confrontation
Fay Slimm. said:
Yes the hidden inner has much to teach dear spills - your lead up to finding its secrets is fascinatingly creative my friend.
February 22nd, 2022 16:54
Fay Slimm. said:
Yes the hidden inner has much to teach dear spills - your lead up to finding its secrets is fascinatingly creative my friend.
February 22nd, 2022 16:54
Confrontation
FallenAngel1🕊 said:
They say the beauty of lava,is that even as it destroys,it also creates. Just as love conquers hate. Creation conquers destruction. I guess what I got from this,is that we have to look within ourselves to create the best creation of ourselves.🤗🍻🌞🕊
February 22nd, 2022 16:25
FallenAngel1🕊 said:
They say the beauty of lava,is that even as it destroys,it also creates. Just as love conquers hate. Creation conquers destruction. I guess what I got from this,is that we have to look within ourselves to create the best creation of ourselves.🤗🍻🌞🕊
February 22nd, 2022 16:25
Confrontation
Rocky Lagou said:
Wow! What a potent thought delivered with excellence. \"The hidden us adapted to outside.\" I mean you really said it all with those lines. We are an ever-adapting being and we tend to lose our true self within these metamorphoses. 👏🦋🌠
February 22nd, 2022 12:10
Rocky Lagou said:
Wow! What a potent thought delivered with excellence. \"The hidden us adapted to outside.\" I mean you really said it all with those lines. We are an ever-adapting being and we tend to lose our true self within these metamorphoses. 👏🦋🌠
February 22nd, 2022 12:10
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