Comments received on poems by spilleronsheet
Memory palace
SureshG said:
The memories have not faded, it’s just that the reboot button is not functioning - most powerfully phrased
May 4th, 2022 13:01
SureshG said:
The memories have not faded, it’s just that the reboot button is not functioning - most powerfully phrased
May 4th, 2022 13:01
Memory palace
Goldfinch60 said:
Such emotive words spilleronsheet, my wife had dementia and passed away due to it so I know how this happens and affects all around.
Andy
May 3rd, 2022 00:32
Goldfinch60 said:
Such emotive words spilleronsheet, my wife had dementia and passed away due to it so I know how this happens and affects all around.
Andy
May 3rd, 2022 00:32
Memory palace
Rozina said:
An excellent 5/7/5 Spills, a summary of the tragedy of \'brain failure\'.
May 2nd, 2022 19:39
Rozina said:
An excellent 5/7/5 Spills, a summary of the tragedy of \'brain failure\'.
May 2nd, 2022 19:39
Memory palace
Vamsi Sudha said:
Another crisp, and thoughtful one dear Spiller !!
May 2nd, 2022 12:13
Vamsi Sudha said:
Another crisp, and thoughtful one dear Spiller !!
May 2nd, 2022 12:13
Memory palace
Rocky Lagou said:
Okay I didn\'t expect to walk into a senryu but I\'m so glad I did. My grandpa suffered from Alzheimer and I know just how saddening it is to watch someone practically \"fade away.\" They begin to forget even things like a beloved family member\'s name, it\'s a fight. Thanks you for this marvel.
May 2nd, 2022 09:08
Rocky Lagou said:
Okay I didn\'t expect to walk into a senryu but I\'m so glad I did. My grandpa suffered from Alzheimer and I know just how saddening it is to watch someone practically \"fade away.\" They begin to forget even things like a beloved family member\'s name, it\'s a fight. Thanks you for this marvel.
May 2nd, 2022 09:08
Memory palace
Neville said:
I wouldn\'t normally cut & paste but agree with every word Teddy said ...
this gave me goose-bumps Spills you have cracked both haiku and senryu flawless darling, so proud of you wow. Keep them coming 💖 💖💖💖💖💖 N :) x
May 2nd, 2022 07:56
Neville said:
I wouldn\'t normally cut & paste but agree with every word Teddy said ...
this gave me goose-bumps Spills you have cracked both haiku and senryu flawless darling, so proud of you wow. Keep them coming 💖 💖💖💖💖💖 N :) x
May 2nd, 2022 07:56
Memory palace
geekslutnerdgirl said:
i took care of my granny for years watching each painful step through the maze of Alzheimer’s. it is truly the worst disease.
May 2nd, 2022 07:26
geekslutnerdgirl said:
i took care of my granny for years watching each painful step through the maze of Alzheimer’s. it is truly the worst disease.
May 2nd, 2022 07:26
Memory palace
L. B. Mek said:
worded so eloquently
that timeless quality of brevity
exemplified, with such sincerity..
thank you! dear Poet
May 2nd, 2022 05:54
L. B. Mek said:
worded so eloquently
that timeless quality of brevity
exemplified, with such sincerity..
thank you! dear Poet
May 2nd, 2022 05:54
Memory palace
Fay Slimm. said:
Saw the tragedy of Alzheimer more clearly after reading this clever three liner my friend. A sad and more than familiar happening to many.
May 2nd, 2022 05:40
Fay Slimm. said:
Saw the tragedy of Alzheimer more clearly after reading this clever three liner my friend. A sad and more than familiar happening to many.
May 2nd, 2022 05:40
Waiting
Neville said:
... perfectly formed 575\'s dont come around that often .. this one truly is ..
May 1st, 2022 15:10
Neville said:
... perfectly formed 575\'s dont come around that often .. this one truly is ..
May 1st, 2022 15:10
Waiting
Fay Slimm. said:
Brilliant haiku that tells in three lines so very much - great read Spills.
May 1st, 2022 10:30
Fay Slimm. said:
Brilliant haiku that tells in three lines so very much - great read Spills.
May 1st, 2022 10:30
Waiting
dusk arising said:
Not a fan of these japanese poetry forms but that one is a cracker spiller and goes into my fav\'s.
May 1st, 2022 07:00
dusk arising said:
Not a fan of these japanese poetry forms but that one is a cracker spiller and goes into my fav\'s.
May 1st, 2022 07:00
Waiting
Paul Bell said:
If only my garden looked like that.
Oh well, back to the weeding.
May 1st, 2022 05:53
Paul Bell said:
If only my garden looked like that.
Oh well, back to the weeding.
May 1st, 2022 05:53
Waiting
Nicholas Browning said:
Even without the images the word paint a vivid picture. Colorful, observant lines.
May 1st, 2022 05:13
Nicholas Browning said:
Even without the images the word paint a vivid picture. Colorful, observant lines.
May 1st, 2022 05:13
Warning colouration
Rozina said:
I definitely agree. Haiku is not easy but you have said it all in that 5/7/5
April 30th, 2022 17:51
Rozina said:
I definitely agree. Haiku is not easy but you have said it all in that 5/7/5
April 30th, 2022 17:51
Warning colouration
Paul Bell said:
Nature does provide some beautiful killers. Haiku\'s sure are hard to do and get over to the reader, but you\'ve achieved it.
April 30th, 2022 11:47
Paul Bell said:
Nature does provide some beautiful killers. Haiku\'s sure are hard to do and get over to the reader, but you\'ve achieved it.
April 30th, 2022 11:47
Warning colouration
Vamsi Sudha said:
Haiku Spiller, Few words and loads of meaning ..
Crisp, short and powerful !!
April 30th, 2022 00:38
Vamsi Sudha said:
Haiku Spiller, Few words and loads of meaning ..
Crisp, short and powerful !!
April 30th, 2022 00:38
Dreams
Goldfinch60 said:
May those dreams always be with you spilleronsheet.
Andy
April 29th, 2022 01:00
Goldfinch60 said:
May those dreams always be with you spilleronsheet.
Andy
April 29th, 2022 01:00
Dreams
Rozina said:
Simply stunning! I\'m inspired now to write about a dream I just woke up from.
April 28th, 2022 18:06
Rozina said:
Simply stunning! I\'m inspired now to write about a dream I just woke up from.
April 28th, 2022 18:06
Dreams
Bella Shepard said:
Our dreams are to our sleeping brain as food is to our body, necessary. They provide order, inspiration, resolution, and while we sleep our brains are more active than when we are awake. Such a beautiful expression of this in your poem. I loved every line.
April 28th, 2022 15:01
Bella Shepard said:
Our dreams are to our sleeping brain as food is to our body, necessary. They provide order, inspiration, resolution, and while we sleep our brains are more active than when we are awake. Such a beautiful expression of this in your poem. I loved every line.
April 28th, 2022 15:01
Dreams
Neville said:
there are so many great lines that weave in and out of \'Dreams\' I would be hard pushed to decide which among them were my favourites ..
now visited several times to try and make up my mind .. I now conclude that there could very easily be two distinctly separate or individual poems pinned to this particular page ... Neville
April 28th, 2022 14:19
Neville said:
there are so many great lines that weave in and out of \'Dreams\' I would be hard pushed to decide which among them were my favourites ..
now visited several times to try and make up my mind .. I now conclude that there could very easily be two distinctly separate or individual poems pinned to this particular page ... Neville
April 28th, 2022 14:19
Dreams
dusk arising said:
Indeed, just what are dreams for I have had some very strange ones over the last few nights... last night found me cutting up liver with scissors and feeling the texture and the blades progressed... very odd, followed my more oddness.
Reality of bridge like a quiz show in our minds eye yet we fall to sleep... fall being such a word in itself there.
Interesting poem upon which i dwelled reflecting upon my dream and waking condition.
April 28th, 2022 09:56
dusk arising said:
Indeed, just what are dreams for I have had some very strange ones over the last few nights... last night found me cutting up liver with scissors and feeling the texture and the blades progressed... very odd, followed my more oddness.
Reality of bridge like a quiz show in our minds eye yet we fall to sleep... fall being such a word in itself there.
Interesting poem upon which i dwelled reflecting upon my dream and waking condition.
April 28th, 2022 09:56
Dreams
Rocky Lagou said:
\"as heavy as boulders,\" wow talk about a simile. This is so so delicate and ready to be consumed by the eye. I literally love this. Those \"dreams\" or those apirations we hold so close to heart can truly leave us restless.
April 28th, 2022 08:41
Rocky Lagou said:
\"as heavy as boulders,\" wow talk about a simile. This is so so delicate and ready to be consumed by the eye. I literally love this. Those \"dreams\" or those apirations we hold so close to heart can truly leave us restless.
April 28th, 2022 08:41
Dreams
Saxon Crow said:
Another stunning piece of poetry. I must say I really do enjoy all your work
April 28th, 2022 06:39
Saxon Crow said:
Another stunning piece of poetry. I must say I really do enjoy all your work
April 28th, 2022 06:39
Dreams
Nicholas Browning said:
I gotta say the repetition of \"all night\" was a lovely touch. Dreams and desires burn like firewood sometimes. A thought provoking read and a unique use of language. Enjoyed!
April 28th, 2022 05:07
Nicholas Browning said:
I gotta say the repetition of \"all night\" was a lovely touch. Dreams and desires burn like firewood sometimes. A thought provoking read and a unique use of language. Enjoyed!
April 28th, 2022 05:07
Dreams
L. B. Mek said:
love! the poetic and
socio philosophical, ambitions
in this well considered write,
really unfurled your concept
covered its impact on such a wide spectrum
of societal, groups..
making your complex theory
that much easier to grasp and relate to..
great to see you challenging
those deeper, philosophical problems
sharing opinions on macro perspectives
instead of our generations
\'work our way back\'
from easy-fix, micro problems..
thanks for sharing, dear Poet
April 28th, 2022 04:57
L. B. Mek said:
love! the poetic and
socio philosophical, ambitions
in this well considered write,
really unfurled your concept
covered its impact on such a wide spectrum
of societal, groups..
making your complex theory
that much easier to grasp and relate to..
great to see you challenging
those deeper, philosophical problems
sharing opinions on macro perspectives
instead of our generations
\'work our way back\'
from easy-fix, micro problems..
thanks for sharing, dear Poet
April 28th, 2022 04:57
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