Comments received on poems by spilleronsheet
Scar
arqios said:
Our scars remind us that we lived another day. To survivor in us moves on. Thanks for sharing.
May 11th, 2022 21:17
arqios said:
Our scars remind us that we lived another day. To survivor in us moves on. Thanks for sharing.
May 11th, 2022 21:17
Hope, a blooming flower
theneophiles_words said:
Solely stunning spilleronsheet. A beautiful message conveyed with utmost sincerity. I liked how this one shows a glimpse of everything humanity has suffered (from Wars to Vaccines). We are humans first with that never-ending hope and should stick to it till the end. Lastly, it very well mentions rather than looking out. It is us who we are searching for, A memorable one!
May 11th, 2022 14:29
theneophiles_words said:
Solely stunning spilleronsheet. A beautiful message conveyed with utmost sincerity. I liked how this one shows a glimpse of everything humanity has suffered (from Wars to Vaccines). We are humans first with that never-ending hope and should stick to it till the end. Lastly, it very well mentions rather than looking out. It is us who we are searching for, A memorable one!
May 11th, 2022 14:29
Wings of dreams
Caring dove said:
Nicely expressed poem spiller .. you made me feel really sorry for the caterpillar who cried and couldn’t be that butterfly she so wanted to be . (( sometimes we can look around so jealous of others , sad in our place in the world wanting to be something more than we are .. and that can cause us a lot of pain when we’re not in the place we want to be
A great poem 🙂
May 11th, 2022 14:22
Caring dove said:
Nicely expressed poem spiller .. you made me feel really sorry for the caterpillar who cried and couldn’t be that butterfly she so wanted to be . (( sometimes we can look around so jealous of others , sad in our place in the world wanting to be something more than we are .. and that can cause us a lot of pain when we’re not in the place we want to be
A great poem 🙂
May 11th, 2022 14:22
Searching the silver line
Rozina said:
I believe so in answer to your positive start.
May 7th, 2022 22:42
Rozina said:
I believe so in answer to your positive start.
May 7th, 2022 22:42
Searching the silver line
SureshG said:
If not now, then maybe in the next, or the one after that, a sun shall shine upon all of us. Uplifting poem indeed
May 7th, 2022 19:13
SureshG said:
If not now, then maybe in the next, or the one after that, a sun shall shine upon all of us. Uplifting poem indeed
May 7th, 2022 19:13
Searching the silver line
Bella Shepard said:
A question to ponder, but never find the answer to. You cause us to pause and reflect, I thank you for that.
May 7th, 2022 14:09
Bella Shepard said:
A question to ponder, but never find the answer to. You cause us to pause and reflect, I thank you for that.
May 7th, 2022 14:09
Searching the silver line
Nicholas Browning said:
The fulfillment of a daydream, or the reward of life that\'s promised upon death. Will sentience accompany that existence? A very formidable question. May you find your answer.
May 7th, 2022 03:02
Nicholas Browning said:
The fulfillment of a daydream, or the reward of life that\'s promised upon death. Will sentience accompany that existence? A very formidable question. May you find your answer.
May 7th, 2022 03:02
Searching the silver line
orchidee said:
Good write S.
I should think existence will be there to greet that heavenly morning.
I don\'t think that morning will come to just \'nothingness\' or annihilation, or as if one visits a friend but finds no one home.
May 7th, 2022 02:32
orchidee said:
Good write S.
I should think existence will be there to greet that heavenly morning.
I don\'t think that morning will come to just \'nothingness\' or annihilation, or as if one visits a friend but finds no one home.
May 7th, 2022 02:32
Searching the silver line
Vamsi Sudha said:
Yes it will be there., and you would be there to pen it beautifully..~ Good one spiller....
May 7th, 2022 01:35
Vamsi Sudha said:
Yes it will be there., and you would be there to pen it beautifully..~ Good one spiller....
May 7th, 2022 01:35
Searching the silver line
Goldfinch60 said:
Very intriguing question spilleronsheet.
Andy
May 7th, 2022 01:04
Goldfinch60 said:
Very intriguing question spilleronsheet.
Andy
May 7th, 2022 01:04
Memory palace
SureshG said:
The memories have not faded, it’s just that the reboot button is not functioning - most powerfully phrased
May 4th, 2022 13:01
SureshG said:
The memories have not faded, it’s just that the reboot button is not functioning - most powerfully phrased
May 4th, 2022 13:01
Memory palace
Goldfinch60 said:
Such emotive words spilleronsheet, my wife had dementia and passed away due to it so I know how this happens and affects all around.
Andy
May 3rd, 2022 00:32
Goldfinch60 said:
Such emotive words spilleronsheet, my wife had dementia and passed away due to it so I know how this happens and affects all around.
Andy
May 3rd, 2022 00:32
Memory palace
Rozina said:
An excellent 5/7/5 Spills, a summary of the tragedy of \'brain failure\'.
May 2nd, 2022 19:39
Rozina said:
An excellent 5/7/5 Spills, a summary of the tragedy of \'brain failure\'.
May 2nd, 2022 19:39
Memory palace
Vamsi Sudha said:
Another crisp, and thoughtful one dear Spiller !!
May 2nd, 2022 12:13
Vamsi Sudha said:
Another crisp, and thoughtful one dear Spiller !!
May 2nd, 2022 12:13
Memory palace
Rocky Lagou said:
Okay I didn\'t expect to walk into a senryu but I\'m so glad I did. My grandpa suffered from Alzheimer and I know just how saddening it is to watch someone practically \"fade away.\" They begin to forget even things like a beloved family member\'s name, it\'s a fight. Thanks you for this marvel.
May 2nd, 2022 09:08
Rocky Lagou said:
Okay I didn\'t expect to walk into a senryu but I\'m so glad I did. My grandpa suffered from Alzheimer and I know just how saddening it is to watch someone practically \"fade away.\" They begin to forget even things like a beloved family member\'s name, it\'s a fight. Thanks you for this marvel.
May 2nd, 2022 09:08
Memory palace
Neville said:
I wouldn\'t normally cut & paste but agree with every word Teddy said ...
this gave me goose-bumps Spills you have cracked both haiku and senryu flawless darling, so proud of you wow. Keep them coming 💖 💖💖💖💖💖 N :) x
May 2nd, 2022 07:56
Neville said:
I wouldn\'t normally cut & paste but agree with every word Teddy said ...
this gave me goose-bumps Spills you have cracked both haiku and senryu flawless darling, so proud of you wow. Keep them coming 💖 💖💖💖💖💖 N :) x
May 2nd, 2022 07:56
Memory palace
geekslutnerdgirl said:
i took care of my granny for years watching each painful step through the maze of Alzheimer’s. it is truly the worst disease.
May 2nd, 2022 07:26
geekslutnerdgirl said:
i took care of my granny for years watching each painful step through the maze of Alzheimer’s. it is truly the worst disease.
May 2nd, 2022 07:26
Memory palace
L. B. Mek said:
worded so eloquently
that timeless quality of brevity
exemplified, with such sincerity..
thank you! dear Poet
May 2nd, 2022 05:54
L. B. Mek said:
worded so eloquently
that timeless quality of brevity
exemplified, with such sincerity..
thank you! dear Poet
May 2nd, 2022 05:54
Memory palace
Fay Slimm. said:
Saw the tragedy of Alzheimer more clearly after reading this clever three liner my friend. A sad and more than familiar happening to many.
May 2nd, 2022 05:40
Fay Slimm. said:
Saw the tragedy of Alzheimer more clearly after reading this clever three liner my friend. A sad and more than familiar happening to many.
May 2nd, 2022 05:40
Waiting
Neville said:
... perfectly formed 575\'s dont come around that often .. this one truly is ..
May 1st, 2022 15:10
Neville said:
... perfectly formed 575\'s dont come around that often .. this one truly is ..
May 1st, 2022 15:10
Waiting
Fay Slimm. said:
Brilliant haiku that tells in three lines so very much - great read Spills.
May 1st, 2022 10:30
Fay Slimm. said:
Brilliant haiku that tells in three lines so very much - great read Spills.
May 1st, 2022 10:30
Waiting
dusk arising said:
Not a fan of these japanese poetry forms but that one is a cracker spiller and goes into my fav\'s.
May 1st, 2022 07:00
dusk arising said:
Not a fan of these japanese poetry forms but that one is a cracker spiller and goes into my fav\'s.
May 1st, 2022 07:00
Waiting
Paul Bell said:
If only my garden looked like that.
Oh well, back to the weeding.
May 1st, 2022 05:53
Paul Bell said:
If only my garden looked like that.
Oh well, back to the weeding.
May 1st, 2022 05:53
Waiting
Nicholas Browning said:
Even without the images the word paint a vivid picture. Colorful, observant lines.
May 1st, 2022 05:13
Nicholas Browning said:
Even without the images the word paint a vivid picture. Colorful, observant lines.
May 1st, 2022 05:13
Warning colouration
Rozina said:
I definitely agree. Haiku is not easy but you have said it all in that 5/7/5
April 30th, 2022 17:51
Rozina said:
I definitely agree. Haiku is not easy but you have said it all in that 5/7/5
April 30th, 2022 17:51
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