Comments received on poems by spilleronsheet
Hope, a blooming flower
Neville said:
... no matter how hard or bad it gets, whilst we still have a semblance of hope, then all is not lost ...
April 19th, 2022 12:50
Neville said:
... no matter how hard or bad it gets, whilst we still have a semblance of hope, then all is not lost ...
April 19th, 2022 12:50
Infinite desires, less opportunities
Rozina said:
Thought provoking indeed. Your lines are still resonating......
April 18th, 2022 18:10
Rozina said:
Thought provoking indeed. Your lines are still resonating......
April 18th, 2022 18:10
Lingering
Rocky Lagou said:
Wow Spiller. I literally, LITERALLY, felt like I was experiencing each piece of imagery you\'ve presented. Those childhood memories, so sweet, in all the senses. Your keen and vivid realization of it all is magnificient. Yet the saddening, inevitable, fact, \"seems abandoned upon…..\" This is amazing.
April 18th, 2022 08:57
Rocky Lagou said:
Wow Spiller. I literally, LITERALLY, felt like I was experiencing each piece of imagery you\'ve presented. Those childhood memories, so sweet, in all the senses. Your keen and vivid realization of it all is magnificient. Yet the saddening, inevitable, fact, \"seems abandoned upon…..\" This is amazing.
April 18th, 2022 08:57
Infinite desires, less opportunities
Rocky Lagou said:
I mean right from the start with the title you had me.
\"how to protect
and how to be protected
depends on mankind\"
Spiller, SPILLERRRR. This is glorious. I feel we\'re all searching and seeking tirelessly for our goals, that \"desire,\" yet we\'re caught up as if in barbed wire trying to actually turn it into fruition. Love your words
April 18th, 2022 08:48
Rocky Lagou said:
I mean right from the start with the title you had me.
\"how to protect
and how to be protected
depends on mankind\"
Spiller, SPILLERRRR. This is glorious. I feel we\'re all searching and seeking tirelessly for our goals, that \"desire,\" yet we\'re caught up as if in barbed wire trying to actually turn it into fruition. Love your words
April 18th, 2022 08:48
Infinite desires, less opportunities
L. B. Mek said:
(all night, my poetic brethren
without fanaticising
over yield or prize
we shall labor, work, dig
wait steadfast, and think
free ourselves of society\'s
shackles
deliberately designed to stunt
our very, capacity
for what simple
happiness, and satisfaction
we may be afforded, by life..)
\'We can make our lives sublime,
And, departing, leave behind us
Footprints on the sands of time;
Footprints, that perhaps another,
Sailing o\'er life\'s solemn main,
A forlorn and shipwrecked brother,
Seeing, shall take heart again.
Let us, then, be up and doing,
With a heart for any fate;
Still achieving, still pursuing,
Learn to labor and to wait.\'
from Longfellow\'s: \'A psalm of life\'
( https://mypoeticside.com/show-classic-poem-17171
)
April 18th, 2022 05:39
L. B. Mek said:
(all night, my poetic brethren
without fanaticising
over yield or prize
we shall labor, work, dig
wait steadfast, and think
free ourselves of society\'s
shackles
deliberately designed to stunt
our very, capacity
for what simple
happiness, and satisfaction
we may be afforded, by life..)
\'We can make our lives sublime,
And, departing, leave behind us
Footprints on the sands of time;
Footprints, that perhaps another,
Sailing o\'er life\'s solemn main,
A forlorn and shipwrecked brother,
Seeing, shall take heart again.
Let us, then, be up and doing,
With a heart for any fate;
Still achieving, still pursuing,
Learn to labor and to wait.\'
from Longfellow\'s: \'A psalm of life\'
( https://mypoeticside.com/show-classic-poem-17171
)
April 18th, 2022 05:39
Infinite desires, less opportunities
dusk arising said:
I must agree with Teddy\'s comments. Whilst young adults our desires are way beyond our capabilities but mature into something more realistic with the years.
There are of course huge exceptions to this when we recall names such as hitler, polpot saddam hussein and their ilk who\'s egos seemed to run riot.
April 18th, 2022 05:20
dusk arising said:
I must agree with Teddy\'s comments. Whilst young adults our desires are way beyond our capabilities but mature into something more realistic with the years.
There are of course huge exceptions to this when we recall names such as hitler, polpot saddam hussein and their ilk who\'s egos seemed to run riot.
April 18th, 2022 05:20
Infinite desires, less opportunities
Vamsi Sudha said:
Dear Spiller,
Wait for the right Protection, time will tell...
Meanwhile gear yourself to wear your befitting armour !!
Good one , speaks your heart out !!
April 18th, 2022 01:54
Vamsi Sudha said:
Dear Spiller,
Wait for the right Protection, time will tell...
Meanwhile gear yourself to wear your befitting armour !!
Good one , speaks your heart out !!
April 18th, 2022 01:54
Infinite desires, less opportunities
FallenAngel1🕊 said:
“Countless desire’s
Scarce the resources
Tireless the efforts
Less the opportunities.”
That’s a poem in itself. Words of hardship 🤗🥂🌹🕊✌️🌞
April 18th, 2022 01:53
FallenAngel1🕊 said:
“Countless desire’s
Scarce the resources
Tireless the efforts
Less the opportunities.”
That’s a poem in itself. Words of hardship 🤗🥂🌹🕊✌️🌞
April 18th, 2022 01:53
Infinite desires, less opportunities
EmotionsOnwhitepaper said:
Very well said, and intresting words. Rally liked it.🤗
April 18th, 2022 01:51
EmotionsOnwhitepaper said:
Very well said, and intresting words. Rally liked it.🤗
April 18th, 2022 01:51
Infinite desires, less opportunities
Caring dove said:
Interesting words , spiller )) like your poem
April 18th, 2022 01:37
Caring dove said:
Interesting words , spiller )) like your poem
April 18th, 2022 01:37
Lingering
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful celebrations spilleronsheet. I haven\'t had candy floss for many, many years.
Andy
April 18th, 2022 00:38
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful celebrations spilleronsheet. I haven\'t had candy floss for many, many years.
Andy
April 18th, 2022 00:38
Lingering
Rozina said:
I remember this. Thank you for sharing your lovely memory which brought my childhood fun back into my mind.
April 17th, 2022 17:52
Rozina said:
I remember this. Thank you for sharing your lovely memory which brought my childhood fun back into my mind.
April 17th, 2022 17:52
Lingering
Vamsi Sudha said:
hey Spiller, you poem is really SWEET !!
Filled me with memories of candies and balloons time ..
Very virbant one indeed and cheerful one indeed !!
April 17th, 2022 10:33
Vamsi Sudha said:
hey Spiller, you poem is really SWEET !!
Filled me with memories of candies and balloons time ..
Very virbant one indeed and cheerful one indeed !!
April 17th, 2022 10:33
Lingering
Neville said:
that\'s one almighty celebration you have going on round your neck of the woods .......... wish I was there .. N
April 17th, 2022 02:47
Neville said:
that\'s one almighty celebration you have going on round your neck of the woods .......... wish I was there .. N
April 17th, 2022 02:47
Blooming under the sky
Goldfinch60 said:
I am sure that success will fill your world spilleronsheet.
Andy
April 17th, 2022 00:57
Goldfinch60 said:
I am sure that success will fill your world spilleronsheet.
Andy
April 17th, 2022 00:57
Blooming under the sky
Rozina said:
I can imagine this scene vividly. It\'s wonderful.
April 16th, 2022 18:27
Rozina said:
I can imagine this scene vividly. It\'s wonderful.
April 16th, 2022 18:27
Blooming under the sky
Bella Shepard said:
You blossom with each word. Within the confines of the room, the brain, you bring to life the thoughts, the words of that sweet success in the joy you give to those who read.
April 16th, 2022 12:49
Bella Shepard said:
You blossom with each word. Within the confines of the room, the brain, you bring to life the thoughts, the words of that sweet success in the joy you give to those who read.
April 16th, 2022 12:49
Blooming under the sky
Vamsi Sudha said:
Awesome poem And so much positivity showing up !!
Profoundly said
Great Work in Silence
And let success make the noise
Let you master in your excellence
Because great things always happen in silence....!!!
Words just flows your pen and they turned to be magic. !! Thanks Spiller for this yet another wonderful poem !!
April 16th, 2022 04:32
Vamsi Sudha said:
Awesome poem And so much positivity showing up !!
Profoundly said
Great Work in Silence
And let success make the noise
Let you master in your excellence
Because great things always happen in silence....!!!
Words just flows your pen and they turned to be magic. !! Thanks Spiller for this yet another wonderful poem !!
April 16th, 2022 04:32
In silence speaking with winds
Vamsi Sudha said:
Dear Spiller
Touched totally with these lines..
how to make a notice
is it a commodity that can be sold
if only pain could be sold
but why would anyone buy ?
the sufferings inside….
I could perceive the pain you have gone through and each word of yours speaks the pain which people are facing.
Everyone feels, but a poet feels and heals with his words. You poetry surely makes a difference. Keep writing because its what makes you so special. !!
April 16th, 2022 04:27
Vamsi Sudha said:
Dear Spiller
Touched totally with these lines..
how to make a notice
is it a commodity that can be sold
if only pain could be sold
but why would anyone buy ?
the sufferings inside….
I could perceive the pain you have gone through and each word of yours speaks the pain which people are facing.
Everyone feels, but a poet feels and heals with his words. You poetry surely makes a difference. Keep writing because its what makes you so special. !!
April 16th, 2022 04:27
In silence speaking with winds
theneophiles_words said:
I\'m captivated by this poem where pain and strain on the souls leave us walking dead. The last line, \'is a mere breathe of air\'; looks like the end and start. The ending; is why I still have a breath after all the ache and agony with the want to stop everything. The starting; where despite; all that, you have a chance to breathe for a change; Leading to new experiences. Poetic beauty!😊
April 16th, 2022 03:58
theneophiles_words said:
I\'m captivated by this poem where pain and strain on the souls leave us walking dead. The last line, \'is a mere breathe of air\'; looks like the end and start. The ending; is why I still have a breath after all the ache and agony with the want to stop everything. The starting; where despite; all that, you have a chance to breathe for a change; Leading to new experiences. Poetic beauty!😊
April 16th, 2022 03:58
Black and white
Neville said:
I oft ask my self .. where is the justice in this cruel world ...... I think this is one of those you needed to get out into the open and off your chest ... N x
April 16th, 2022 01:18
Neville said:
I oft ask my self .. where is the justice in this cruel world ...... I think this is one of those you needed to get out into the open and off your chest ... N x
April 16th, 2022 01:18
In silence speaking with winds
Neville said:
the message you post here is far bigger and more important than the page you pinned it to .. N
April 15th, 2022 03:38
Neville said:
the message you post here is far bigger and more important than the page you pinned it to .. N
April 15th, 2022 03:38
In silence speaking with winds
Goldfinch60 said:
May peace come to us all and we can breathe that fresh air in humility.
Andy
April 15th, 2022 00:38
Goldfinch60 said:
May peace come to us all and we can breathe that fresh air in humility.
Andy
April 15th, 2022 00:38
In silence speaking with winds
Rozina said:
A powerful message of the current despair. Unbearably sad times for so many.
April 14th, 2022 18:03
Rozina said:
A powerful message of the current despair. Unbearably sad times for so many.
April 14th, 2022 18:03
In silence speaking with winds
Bella Shepard said:
Maybe it\'s ageing, but the world I came of age in seems to have vanished. Technology is a wonderful thing, but the extent to which it has evolved seems to have robbed us of a sense of oneness, and we are now these independent entities vying for constant attention any way we can get it. Our ears hear, but don\'t listen. Our eyes see, but don\'t acknowledge. You\'ve said this in a very powerful way, and we need to keep listening and seeing what is right under our noses. Thank you!
April 14th, 2022 13:40
Bella Shepard said:
Maybe it\'s ageing, but the world I came of age in seems to have vanished. Technology is a wonderful thing, but the extent to which it has evolved seems to have robbed us of a sense of oneness, and we are now these independent entities vying for constant attention any way we can get it. Our ears hear, but don\'t listen. Our eyes see, but don\'t acknowledge. You\'ve said this in a very powerful way, and we need to keep listening and seeing what is right under our noses. Thank you!
April 14th, 2022 13:40
Power and money
theneophiles_words said:
At times, W. Somerset Maugham\'s Quote- \'Money is that sixth sense without which you cannot make a complete use of the other five\' does make sense in today\'s world. A fair depiction of P and M!
April 14th, 2022 08:43
theneophiles_words said:
At times, W. Somerset Maugham\'s Quote- \'Money is that sixth sense without which you cannot make a complete use of the other five\' does make sense in today\'s world. A fair depiction of P and M!
April 14th, 2022 08:43
Black rose
theneophiles_words said:
I could visualize how a child(black rose) breaks through the monotonous expectations of society. Falling, making mistakes, still believing in self, playing with what he has, and blooming at the cliff. Indelible!
April 14th, 2022 08:18
theneophiles_words said:
I could visualize how a child(black rose) breaks through the monotonous expectations of society. Falling, making mistakes, still believing in self, playing with what he has, and blooming at the cliff. Indelible!
April 14th, 2022 08:18
In silence speaking with winds
Rocky Lagou said:
Wow. This is quite the poem dear Spiller. I feel so many will resonate with your words. Nowadays, the world has sadly fallen into madness and insensitivity, and it seems like it\'s only getting worse. People are drowning in their own sadness and that light at the end of the tunnel seems to be dying out for many. I can only hope for better days.
April 14th, 2022 08:13
Rocky Lagou said:
Wow. This is quite the poem dear Spiller. I feel so many will resonate with your words. Nowadays, the world has sadly fallen into madness and insensitivity, and it seems like it\'s only getting worse. People are drowning in their own sadness and that light at the end of the tunnel seems to be dying out for many. I can only hope for better days.
April 14th, 2022 08:13
Power and money
Dahlia said:
very profound, its interesting how human interactions are a double a jeopardy, sociologically speaking, because spiritually it was never meant for it all to be so complicated.
I liked reading your take on this subject!
Dahlia
April 13th, 2022 13:09
Dahlia said:
very profound, its interesting how human interactions are a double a jeopardy, sociologically speaking, because spiritually it was never meant for it all to be so complicated.
I liked reading your take on this subject!
Dahlia
April 13th, 2022 13:09
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