Comments received on poems by spilleronsheet
Scar
Rocky Lagou said:
This is beyond. That line \"but those pains aren’t big, as your dreams\" literally made me smile. Our battle scars and past hurts can burden us so immensely, but your words today spoke directly to that pain and rejuvenated it. Everyone must read this, it\'ll help heal the wounds. Thank you for this marvel.
April 25th, 2022 10:30
Rocky Lagou said:
This is beyond. That line \"but those pains aren’t big, as your dreams\" literally made me smile. Our battle scars and past hurts can burden us so immensely, but your words today spoke directly to that pain and rejuvenated it. Everyone must read this, it\'ll help heal the wounds. Thank you for this marvel.
April 25th, 2022 10:30
Scar
Neville said:
I leave this page feeling a little bit sad .. maybe that\'s because you got such a strong message across today .. and although I rarely read what others have left behind, I couldn\'t help seeing orchidee\'s contribution to this page and find myself agreeing with every one of his words ...
... I will sign out now in the hope any residual scars heal regardless of cause .. and that as you journey through life and all the knocks, bumps and setbacks you may ever experience .. that you receive only the mildest of golden shaped bruises ............................ Neville x
April 25th, 2022 08:13
Neville said:
I leave this page feeling a little bit sad .. maybe that\'s because you got such a strong message across today .. and although I rarely read what others have left behind, I couldn\'t help seeing orchidee\'s contribution to this page and find myself agreeing with every one of his words ...
... I will sign out now in the hope any residual scars heal regardless of cause .. and that as you journey through life and all the knocks, bumps and setbacks you may ever experience .. that you receive only the mildest of golden shaped bruises ............................ Neville x
April 25th, 2022 08:13
Scar
L. B. Mek said:
\'but
*it\'s not easy
like
footprints on beach
instead, *it\'s the marking
on coral reefs, the movement
of waves on pebbles\'..
Brilliant!
April 25th, 2022 04:37
L. B. Mek said:
\'but
*it\'s not easy
like
footprints on beach
instead, *it\'s the marking
on coral reefs, the movement
of waves on pebbles\'..
Brilliant!
April 25th, 2022 04:37
Scar
Rozina said:
Powerful words. Emotional scars, hidden, may be harder to heal. I have seen women in my previous practice who had been abused verbally, emotionally and psychologically and after so many years they were still trying to overcome their pain.
April 25th, 2022 04:22
Rozina said:
Powerful words. Emotional scars, hidden, may be harder to heal. I have seen women in my previous practice who had been abused verbally, emotionally and psychologically and after so many years they were still trying to overcome their pain.
April 25th, 2022 04:22
Scar
orchidee said:
Good write S.
Can we \'unlearn\' some things? I don\'t think we can. But I think we can think different or new things - better things..
April 25th, 2022 01:55
orchidee said:
Good write S.
Can we \'unlearn\' some things? I don\'t think we can. But I think we can think different or new things - better things..
April 25th, 2022 01:55
Wings of dreams
Neville said:
the grass is not always greener on the other side .. but leaves it seems, often are .. what a delightfully wistful poem spills to be sure ........... Neville x
April 24th, 2022 06:55
Neville said:
the grass is not always greener on the other side .. but leaves it seems, often are .. what a delightfully wistful poem spills to be sure ........... Neville x
April 24th, 2022 06:55
Wings of dreams
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words spilleronsheet, we all become what we are meant to be in this life and all is good.
Andy
April 24th, 2022 00:44
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words spilleronsheet, we all become what we are meant to be in this life and all is good.
Andy
April 24th, 2022 00:44
Wings of dreams
Vamsi Sudha said:
Dear Spiller,
Wings of dreams. Named it beautifully...
Weaved so beautifully ,
Was carried to the virtual imaginary !!
Great one indeed !!
April 24th, 2022 00:25
Vamsi Sudha said:
Dear Spiller,
Wings of dreams. Named it beautifully...
Weaved so beautifully ,
Was carried to the virtual imaginary !!
Great one indeed !!
April 24th, 2022 00:25
Wings of dreams
Crowns4Christ said:
Very nice and nicely descriptive, beautiful imagery, I think moths are also beautiful as butterflies
April 23rd, 2022 18:12
Crowns4Christ said:
Very nice and nicely descriptive, beautiful imagery, I think moths are also beautiful as butterflies
April 23rd, 2022 18:12
Wings of dreams
Rozina said:
Oh dear, never mind, still able to fly like them! Really enjoyed reading this, but felt sorry for his feelings!
April 23rd, 2022 17:49
Rozina said:
Oh dear, never mind, still able to fly like them! Really enjoyed reading this, but felt sorry for his feelings!
April 23rd, 2022 17:49
Wings of dreams
Distant View said:
We are destined to be whatever we are destined to be. Each one having its own special place in this world. Nice poem!
April 23rd, 2022 06:20
Distant View said:
We are destined to be whatever we are destined to be. Each one having its own special place in this world. Nice poem!
April 23rd, 2022 06:20
Knowledge, the golden orb
Neville said:
I just can not fault these words dear friend & poet ..
there are so many individual lines that are super in their very own write and which collectively make up something much greater and sublimely poetically profound ...
...................Neville .......... x
April 22nd, 2022 03:41
Neville said:
I just can not fault these words dear friend & poet ..
there are so many individual lines that are super in their very own write and which collectively make up something much greater and sublimely poetically profound ...
...................Neville .......... x
April 22nd, 2022 03:41
Knowledge, the golden orb
Goldfinch60 said:
Those \'pings\' of knowledge can strike us at any time.
Andy
April 22nd, 2022 00:30
Goldfinch60 said:
Those \'pings\' of knowledge can strike us at any time.
Andy
April 22nd, 2022 00:30
Knowledge, the golden orb
Rozina said:
The more I learn the more I realise I don\'t know much at all. Without this human curiosity so much would have remained discovered. At the same time, curiosity killed the cat. Your poem is thought provoking indeed. Thank you.
April 21st, 2022 17:53
Rozina said:
The more I learn the more I realise I don\'t know much at all. Without this human curiosity so much would have remained discovered. At the same time, curiosity killed the cat. Your poem is thought provoking indeed. Thank you.
April 21st, 2022 17:53
Knowledge, the golden orb
Vamsi Sudha said:
Know-ledge - \"Know\" the \"ledge\".
A supporting system for Human life..
A manifestation of intellect and surely the golden orb !!
you got it wisely !! Thank you spill..
Spill more and mysteriosly..
April 21st, 2022 13:59
Vamsi Sudha said:
Know-ledge - \"Know\" the \"ledge\".
A supporting system for Human life..
A manifestation of intellect and surely the golden orb !!
you got it wisely !! Thank you spill..
Spill more and mysteriosly..
April 21st, 2022 13:59
Hope, a blooming flower
Vamsi Sudha said:
HOPE , spills beautifully and let this lead us the way for a better tomorrow.
Great one, nothing to say...!!
April 21st, 2022 13:53
Vamsi Sudha said:
HOPE , spills beautifully and let this lead us the way for a better tomorrow.
Great one, nothing to say...!!
April 21st, 2022 13:53
Knowledge, the golden orb
Bella Shepard said:
I love how you have framed these questions of life. The thirst for knowledge propels us always forward, into a future we try to imagine. And as I think about what I know, I realize that on the whole, I don\'t know anything at all.
April 21st, 2022 13:26
Bella Shepard said:
I love how you have framed these questions of life. The thirst for knowledge propels us always forward, into a future we try to imagine. And as I think about what I know, I realize that on the whole, I don\'t know anything at all.
April 21st, 2022 13:26
Knowledge, the golden orb
Rocky Lagou said:
Yes. The human nature is all about acquiring knowledge and wanting to learn more and more. We\'re curious creatures and it\'s just embedded in our DNA. However, \"what was it?\" What is it really for? I love this examination into humanity. Great job!
April 21st, 2022 08:31
Rocky Lagou said:
Yes. The human nature is all about acquiring knowledge and wanting to learn more and more. We\'re curious creatures and it\'s just embedded in our DNA. However, \"what was it?\" What is it really for? I love this examination into humanity. Great job!
April 21st, 2022 08:31
Hope, a blooming flower
Rocky Lagou said:
Dear Spiller. This is immaculate. I mean the way you metaphorized hope as this \"blooming flower\" is so so gracious and beautiful. I adore this message and that final line \"they still are searching...\" truly shows the progress that needs to be made. An amazing write!
April 21st, 2022 08:25
Rocky Lagou said:
Dear Spiller. This is immaculate. I mean the way you metaphorized hope as this \"blooming flower\" is so so gracious and beautiful. I adore this message and that final line \"they still are searching...\" truly shows the progress that needs to be made. An amazing write!
April 21st, 2022 08:25
Knowledge, the golden orb
L. B. Mek said:
\'Sunrise, in midst
of a Winter\'s bleak
how do we, treasure it..
Lakeside oasis, beside
baron sand deserts
how to convey, its treasure..
Wisdom, pooling
from our life\'s carcass
of failures and regrets:
how dare we, Value it!\'
(another brilliant
and inspiringly introspective, poem
dear poet
just a privilege
to witness your artistry grow..
thank you!)
April 21st, 2022 06:28
L. B. Mek said:
\'Sunrise, in midst
of a Winter\'s bleak
how do we, treasure it..
Lakeside oasis, beside
baron sand deserts
how to convey, its treasure..
Wisdom, pooling
from our life\'s carcass
of failures and regrets:
how dare we, Value it!\'
(another brilliant
and inspiringly introspective, poem
dear poet
just a privilege
to witness your artistry grow..
thank you!)
April 21st, 2022 06:28
Hope, a blooming flower
Caring dove said:
Things can get better .. a great engaging writing spiller ))
April 21st, 2022 01:53
Caring dove said:
Things can get better .. a great engaging writing spiller ))
April 21st, 2022 01:53
Hope, a blooming flower
Goldfinch60 said:
We can but hope that hope will bring peace and love to all.
Andy
April 20th, 2022 00:54
Goldfinch60 said:
We can but hope that hope will bring peace and love to all.
Andy
April 20th, 2022 00:54
Hope, a blooming flower
Neville said:
... no matter how hard or bad it gets, whilst we still have a semblance of hope, then all is not lost ...
April 19th, 2022 12:50
Neville said:
... no matter how hard or bad it gets, whilst we still have a semblance of hope, then all is not lost ...
April 19th, 2022 12:50
Infinite desires, less opportunities
Rozina said:
Thought provoking indeed. Your lines are still resonating......
April 18th, 2022 18:10
Rozina said:
Thought provoking indeed. Your lines are still resonating......
April 18th, 2022 18:10
Lingering
Rocky Lagou said:
Wow Spiller. I literally, LITERALLY, felt like I was experiencing each piece of imagery you\'ve presented. Those childhood memories, so sweet, in all the senses. Your keen and vivid realization of it all is magnificient. Yet the saddening, inevitable, fact, \"seems abandoned upon…..\" This is amazing.
April 18th, 2022 08:57
Rocky Lagou said:
Wow Spiller. I literally, LITERALLY, felt like I was experiencing each piece of imagery you\'ve presented. Those childhood memories, so sweet, in all the senses. Your keen and vivid realization of it all is magnificient. Yet the saddening, inevitable, fact, \"seems abandoned upon…..\" This is amazing.
April 18th, 2022 08:57
Infinite desires, less opportunities
Rocky Lagou said:
I mean right from the start with the title you had me.
\"how to protect
and how to be protected
depends on mankind\"
Spiller, SPILLERRRR. This is glorious. I feel we\'re all searching and seeking tirelessly for our goals, that \"desire,\" yet we\'re caught up as if in barbed wire trying to actually turn it into fruition. Love your words
April 18th, 2022 08:48
Rocky Lagou said:
I mean right from the start with the title you had me.
\"how to protect
and how to be protected
depends on mankind\"
Spiller, SPILLERRRR. This is glorious. I feel we\'re all searching and seeking tirelessly for our goals, that \"desire,\" yet we\'re caught up as if in barbed wire trying to actually turn it into fruition. Love your words
April 18th, 2022 08:48
Infinite desires, less opportunities
L. B. Mek said:
(all night, my poetic brethren
without fanaticising
over yield or prize
we shall labor, work, dig
wait steadfast, and think
free ourselves of society\'s
shackles
deliberately designed to stunt
our very, capacity
for what simple
happiness, and satisfaction
we may be afforded, by life..)
\'We can make our lives sublime,
And, departing, leave behind us
Footprints on the sands of time;
Footprints, that perhaps another,
Sailing o\'er life\'s solemn main,
A forlorn and shipwrecked brother,
Seeing, shall take heart again.
Let us, then, be up and doing,
With a heart for any fate;
Still achieving, still pursuing,
Learn to labor and to wait.\'
from Longfellow\'s: \'A psalm of life\'
( https://mypoeticside.com/show-classic-poem-17171
)
April 18th, 2022 05:39
L. B. Mek said:
(all night, my poetic brethren
without fanaticising
over yield or prize
we shall labor, work, dig
wait steadfast, and think
free ourselves of society\'s
shackles
deliberately designed to stunt
our very, capacity
for what simple
happiness, and satisfaction
we may be afforded, by life..)
\'We can make our lives sublime,
And, departing, leave behind us
Footprints on the sands of time;
Footprints, that perhaps another,
Sailing o\'er life\'s solemn main,
A forlorn and shipwrecked brother,
Seeing, shall take heart again.
Let us, then, be up and doing,
With a heart for any fate;
Still achieving, still pursuing,
Learn to labor and to wait.\'
from Longfellow\'s: \'A psalm of life\'
( https://mypoeticside.com/show-classic-poem-17171
)
April 18th, 2022 05:39
Infinite desires, less opportunities
dusk arising said:
I must agree with Teddy\'s comments. Whilst young adults our desires are way beyond our capabilities but mature into something more realistic with the years.
There are of course huge exceptions to this when we recall names such as hitler, polpot saddam hussein and their ilk who\'s egos seemed to run riot.
April 18th, 2022 05:20
dusk arising said:
I must agree with Teddy\'s comments. Whilst young adults our desires are way beyond our capabilities but mature into something more realistic with the years.
There are of course huge exceptions to this when we recall names such as hitler, polpot saddam hussein and their ilk who\'s egos seemed to run riot.
April 18th, 2022 05:20
Infinite desires, less opportunities
Vamsi Sudha said:
Dear Spiller,
Wait for the right Protection, time will tell...
Meanwhile gear yourself to wear your befitting armour !!
Good one , speaks your heart out !!
April 18th, 2022 01:54
Vamsi Sudha said:
Dear Spiller,
Wait for the right Protection, time will tell...
Meanwhile gear yourself to wear your befitting armour !!
Good one , speaks your heart out !!
April 18th, 2022 01:54
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