Comments received on poems by spilleronsheet
Knowledge, the golden orb
Neville said:
I just can not fault these words dear friend & poet ..
there are so many individual lines that are super in their very own write and which collectively make up something much greater and sublimely poetically profound ...
...................Neville .......... x
April 22nd, 2022 03:41
Neville said:
I just can not fault these words dear friend & poet ..
there are so many individual lines that are super in their very own write and which collectively make up something much greater and sublimely poetically profound ...
...................Neville .......... x
April 22nd, 2022 03:41
Knowledge, the golden orb
Goldfinch60 said:
Those \'pings\' of knowledge can strike us at any time.
Andy
April 22nd, 2022 00:30
Goldfinch60 said:
Those \'pings\' of knowledge can strike us at any time.
Andy
April 22nd, 2022 00:30
Knowledge, the golden orb
Rozina said:
The more I learn the more I realise I don\'t know much at all. Without this human curiosity so much would have remained discovered. At the same time, curiosity killed the cat. Your poem is thought provoking indeed. Thank you.
April 21st, 2022 17:53
Rozina said:
The more I learn the more I realise I don\'t know much at all. Without this human curiosity so much would have remained discovered. At the same time, curiosity killed the cat. Your poem is thought provoking indeed. Thank you.
April 21st, 2022 17:53
Knowledge, the golden orb
Vamsi Sudha said:
Know-ledge - \"Know\" the \"ledge\".
A supporting system for Human life..
A manifestation of intellect and surely the golden orb !!
you got it wisely !! Thank you spill..
Spill more and mysteriosly..
April 21st, 2022 13:59
Vamsi Sudha said:
Know-ledge - \"Know\" the \"ledge\".
A supporting system for Human life..
A manifestation of intellect and surely the golden orb !!
you got it wisely !! Thank you spill..
Spill more and mysteriosly..
April 21st, 2022 13:59
Hope, a blooming flower
Vamsi Sudha said:
HOPE , spills beautifully and let this lead us the way for a better tomorrow.
Great one, nothing to say...!!
April 21st, 2022 13:53
Vamsi Sudha said:
HOPE , spills beautifully and let this lead us the way for a better tomorrow.
Great one, nothing to say...!!
April 21st, 2022 13:53
Knowledge, the golden orb
Bella Shepard said:
I love how you have framed these questions of life. The thirst for knowledge propels us always forward, into a future we try to imagine. And as I think about what I know, I realize that on the whole, I don\'t know anything at all.
April 21st, 2022 13:26
Bella Shepard said:
I love how you have framed these questions of life. The thirst for knowledge propels us always forward, into a future we try to imagine. And as I think about what I know, I realize that on the whole, I don\'t know anything at all.
April 21st, 2022 13:26
Knowledge, the golden orb
Rocky Lagou said:
Yes. The human nature is all about acquiring knowledge and wanting to learn more and more. We\'re curious creatures and it\'s just embedded in our DNA. However, \"what was it?\" What is it really for? I love this examination into humanity. Great job!
April 21st, 2022 08:31
Rocky Lagou said:
Yes. The human nature is all about acquiring knowledge and wanting to learn more and more. We\'re curious creatures and it\'s just embedded in our DNA. However, \"what was it?\" What is it really for? I love this examination into humanity. Great job!
April 21st, 2022 08:31
Hope, a blooming flower
Rocky Lagou said:
Dear Spiller. This is immaculate. I mean the way you metaphorized hope as this \"blooming flower\" is so so gracious and beautiful. I adore this message and that final line \"they still are searching...\" truly shows the progress that needs to be made. An amazing write!
April 21st, 2022 08:25
Rocky Lagou said:
Dear Spiller. This is immaculate. I mean the way you metaphorized hope as this \"blooming flower\" is so so gracious and beautiful. I adore this message and that final line \"they still are searching...\" truly shows the progress that needs to be made. An amazing write!
April 21st, 2022 08:25
Knowledge, the golden orb
L. B. Mek said:
\'Sunrise, in midst
of a Winter\'s bleak
how do we, treasure it..
Lakeside oasis, beside
baron sand deserts
how to convey, its treasure..
Wisdom, pooling
from our life\'s carcass
of failures and regrets:
how dare we, Value it!\'
(another brilliant
and inspiringly introspective, poem
dear poet
just a privilege
to witness your artistry grow..
thank you!)
April 21st, 2022 06:28
L. B. Mek said:
\'Sunrise, in midst
of a Winter\'s bleak
how do we, treasure it..
Lakeside oasis, beside
baron sand deserts
how to convey, its treasure..
Wisdom, pooling
from our life\'s carcass
of failures and regrets:
how dare we, Value it!\'
(another brilliant
and inspiringly introspective, poem
dear poet
just a privilege
to witness your artistry grow..
thank you!)
April 21st, 2022 06:28
Hope, a blooming flower
Caring dove said:
Things can get better .. a great engaging writing spiller ))
April 21st, 2022 01:53
Caring dove said:
Things can get better .. a great engaging writing spiller ))
April 21st, 2022 01:53
Hope, a blooming flower
Goldfinch60 said:
We can but hope that hope will bring peace and love to all.
Andy
April 20th, 2022 00:54
Goldfinch60 said:
We can but hope that hope will bring peace and love to all.
Andy
April 20th, 2022 00:54
Hope, a blooming flower
Neville said:
... no matter how hard or bad it gets, whilst we still have a semblance of hope, then all is not lost ...
April 19th, 2022 12:50
Neville said:
... no matter how hard or bad it gets, whilst we still have a semblance of hope, then all is not lost ...
April 19th, 2022 12:50
Infinite desires, less opportunities
Rozina said:
Thought provoking indeed. Your lines are still resonating......
April 18th, 2022 18:10
Rozina said:
Thought provoking indeed. Your lines are still resonating......
April 18th, 2022 18:10
Lingering
Rocky Lagou said:
Wow Spiller. I literally, LITERALLY, felt like I was experiencing each piece of imagery you\'ve presented. Those childhood memories, so sweet, in all the senses. Your keen and vivid realization of it all is magnificient. Yet the saddening, inevitable, fact, \"seems abandoned upon…..\" This is amazing.
April 18th, 2022 08:57
Rocky Lagou said:
Wow Spiller. I literally, LITERALLY, felt like I was experiencing each piece of imagery you\'ve presented. Those childhood memories, so sweet, in all the senses. Your keen and vivid realization of it all is magnificient. Yet the saddening, inevitable, fact, \"seems abandoned upon…..\" This is amazing.
April 18th, 2022 08:57
Infinite desires, less opportunities
Rocky Lagou said:
I mean right from the start with the title you had me.
\"how to protect
and how to be protected
depends on mankind\"
Spiller, SPILLERRRR. This is glorious. I feel we\'re all searching and seeking tirelessly for our goals, that \"desire,\" yet we\'re caught up as if in barbed wire trying to actually turn it into fruition. Love your words
April 18th, 2022 08:48
Rocky Lagou said:
I mean right from the start with the title you had me.
\"how to protect
and how to be protected
depends on mankind\"
Spiller, SPILLERRRR. This is glorious. I feel we\'re all searching and seeking tirelessly for our goals, that \"desire,\" yet we\'re caught up as if in barbed wire trying to actually turn it into fruition. Love your words
April 18th, 2022 08:48
Infinite desires, less opportunities
L. B. Mek said:
(all night, my poetic brethren
without fanaticising
over yield or prize
we shall labor, work, dig
wait steadfast, and think
free ourselves of society\'s
shackles
deliberately designed to stunt
our very, capacity
for what simple
happiness, and satisfaction
we may be afforded, by life..)
\'We can make our lives sublime,
And, departing, leave behind us
Footprints on the sands of time;
Footprints, that perhaps another,
Sailing o\'er life\'s solemn main,
A forlorn and shipwrecked brother,
Seeing, shall take heart again.
Let us, then, be up and doing,
With a heart for any fate;
Still achieving, still pursuing,
Learn to labor and to wait.\'
from Longfellow\'s: \'A psalm of life\'
( https://mypoeticside.com/show-classic-poem-17171
)
April 18th, 2022 05:39
L. B. Mek said:
(all night, my poetic brethren
without fanaticising
over yield or prize
we shall labor, work, dig
wait steadfast, and think
free ourselves of society\'s
shackles
deliberately designed to stunt
our very, capacity
for what simple
happiness, and satisfaction
we may be afforded, by life..)
\'We can make our lives sublime,
And, departing, leave behind us
Footprints on the sands of time;
Footprints, that perhaps another,
Sailing o\'er life\'s solemn main,
A forlorn and shipwrecked brother,
Seeing, shall take heart again.
Let us, then, be up and doing,
With a heart for any fate;
Still achieving, still pursuing,
Learn to labor and to wait.\'
from Longfellow\'s: \'A psalm of life\'
( https://mypoeticside.com/show-classic-poem-17171
)
April 18th, 2022 05:39
Infinite desires, less opportunities
dusk arising said:
I must agree with Teddy\'s comments. Whilst young adults our desires are way beyond our capabilities but mature into something more realistic with the years.
There are of course huge exceptions to this when we recall names such as hitler, polpot saddam hussein and their ilk who\'s egos seemed to run riot.
April 18th, 2022 05:20
dusk arising said:
I must agree with Teddy\'s comments. Whilst young adults our desires are way beyond our capabilities but mature into something more realistic with the years.
There are of course huge exceptions to this when we recall names such as hitler, polpot saddam hussein and their ilk who\'s egos seemed to run riot.
April 18th, 2022 05:20
Infinite desires, less opportunities
Vamsi Sudha said:
Dear Spiller,
Wait for the right Protection, time will tell...
Meanwhile gear yourself to wear your befitting armour !!
Good one , speaks your heart out !!
April 18th, 2022 01:54
Vamsi Sudha said:
Dear Spiller,
Wait for the right Protection, time will tell...
Meanwhile gear yourself to wear your befitting armour !!
Good one , speaks your heart out !!
April 18th, 2022 01:54
Infinite desires, less opportunities
FallenAngel1🕊 said:
“Countless desire’s
Scarce the resources
Tireless the efforts
Less the opportunities.”
That’s a poem in itself. Words of hardship 🤗🥂🌹🕊✌️🌞
April 18th, 2022 01:53
FallenAngel1🕊 said:
“Countless desire’s
Scarce the resources
Tireless the efforts
Less the opportunities.”
That’s a poem in itself. Words of hardship 🤗🥂🌹🕊✌️🌞
April 18th, 2022 01:53
Infinite desires, less opportunities
EmotionsOnwhitepaper said:
Very well said, and intresting words. Rally liked it.🤗
April 18th, 2022 01:51
EmotionsOnwhitepaper said:
Very well said, and intresting words. Rally liked it.🤗
April 18th, 2022 01:51
Infinite desires, less opportunities
Caring dove said:
Interesting words , spiller )) like your poem
April 18th, 2022 01:37
Caring dove said:
Interesting words , spiller )) like your poem
April 18th, 2022 01:37
Lingering
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful celebrations spilleronsheet. I haven\'t had candy floss for many, many years.
Andy
April 18th, 2022 00:38
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful celebrations spilleronsheet. I haven\'t had candy floss for many, many years.
Andy
April 18th, 2022 00:38
Lingering
Rozina said:
I remember this. Thank you for sharing your lovely memory which brought my childhood fun back into my mind.
April 17th, 2022 17:52
Rozina said:
I remember this. Thank you for sharing your lovely memory which brought my childhood fun back into my mind.
April 17th, 2022 17:52
Lingering
Vamsi Sudha said:
hey Spiller, you poem is really SWEET !!
Filled me with memories of candies and balloons time ..
Very virbant one indeed and cheerful one indeed !!
April 17th, 2022 10:33
Vamsi Sudha said:
hey Spiller, you poem is really SWEET !!
Filled me with memories of candies and balloons time ..
Very virbant one indeed and cheerful one indeed !!
April 17th, 2022 10:33
Lingering
Neville said:
that\'s one almighty celebration you have going on round your neck of the woods .......... wish I was there .. N
April 17th, 2022 02:47
Neville said:
that\'s one almighty celebration you have going on round your neck of the woods .......... wish I was there .. N
April 17th, 2022 02:47
Blooming under the sky
Goldfinch60 said:
I am sure that success will fill your world spilleronsheet.
Andy
April 17th, 2022 00:57
Goldfinch60 said:
I am sure that success will fill your world spilleronsheet.
Andy
April 17th, 2022 00:57
Blooming under the sky
Rozina said:
I can imagine this scene vividly. It\'s wonderful.
April 16th, 2022 18:27
Rozina said:
I can imagine this scene vividly. It\'s wonderful.
April 16th, 2022 18:27
Blooming under the sky
Bella Shepard said:
You blossom with each word. Within the confines of the room, the brain, you bring to life the thoughts, the words of that sweet success in the joy you give to those who read.
April 16th, 2022 12:49
Bella Shepard said:
You blossom with each word. Within the confines of the room, the brain, you bring to life the thoughts, the words of that sweet success in the joy you give to those who read.
April 16th, 2022 12:49
Blooming under the sky
Vamsi Sudha said:
Awesome poem And so much positivity showing up !!
Profoundly said
Great Work in Silence
And let success make the noise
Let you master in your excellence
Because great things always happen in silence....!!!
Words just flows your pen and they turned to be magic. !! Thanks Spiller for this yet another wonderful poem !!
April 16th, 2022 04:32
Vamsi Sudha said:
Awesome poem And so much positivity showing up !!
Profoundly said
Great Work in Silence
And let success make the noise
Let you master in your excellence
Because great things always happen in silence....!!!
Words just flows your pen and they turned to be magic. !! Thanks Spiller for this yet another wonderful poem !!
April 16th, 2022 04:32
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