Comments received on poems by spilleronsheet
Infinite desires, less opportunities
FallenAngel1🕊 said:
“Countless desire’s
Scarce the resources
Tireless the efforts
Less the opportunities.”
That’s a poem in itself. Words of hardship 🤗🥂🌹🕊✌️🌞
April 18th, 2022 01:53
FallenAngel1🕊 said:
“Countless desire’s
Scarce the resources
Tireless the efforts
Less the opportunities.”
That’s a poem in itself. Words of hardship 🤗🥂🌹🕊✌️🌞
April 18th, 2022 01:53
Infinite desires, less opportunities
EmotionsOnwhitepaper said:
Very well said, and intresting words. Rally liked it.🤗
April 18th, 2022 01:51
EmotionsOnwhitepaper said:
Very well said, and intresting words. Rally liked it.🤗
April 18th, 2022 01:51
Infinite desires, less opportunities
Caring dove said:
Interesting words , spiller )) like your poem
April 18th, 2022 01:37
Caring dove said:
Interesting words , spiller )) like your poem
April 18th, 2022 01:37
Lingering
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful celebrations spilleronsheet. I haven\'t had candy floss for many, many years.
Andy
April 18th, 2022 00:38
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful celebrations spilleronsheet. I haven\'t had candy floss for many, many years.
Andy
April 18th, 2022 00:38
Lingering
Rozina said:
I remember this. Thank you for sharing your lovely memory which brought my childhood fun back into my mind.
April 17th, 2022 17:52
Rozina said:
I remember this. Thank you for sharing your lovely memory which brought my childhood fun back into my mind.
April 17th, 2022 17:52
Lingering
Vamsi Sudha said:
hey Spiller, you poem is really SWEET !!
Filled me with memories of candies and balloons time ..
Very virbant one indeed and cheerful one indeed !!
April 17th, 2022 10:33
Vamsi Sudha said:
hey Spiller, you poem is really SWEET !!
Filled me with memories of candies and balloons time ..
Very virbant one indeed and cheerful one indeed !!
April 17th, 2022 10:33
Lingering
Neville said:
that\'s one almighty celebration you have going on round your neck of the woods .......... wish I was there .. N
April 17th, 2022 02:47
Neville said:
that\'s one almighty celebration you have going on round your neck of the woods .......... wish I was there .. N
April 17th, 2022 02:47
Blooming under the sky
Goldfinch60 said:
I am sure that success will fill your world spilleronsheet.
Andy
April 17th, 2022 00:57
Goldfinch60 said:
I am sure that success will fill your world spilleronsheet.
Andy
April 17th, 2022 00:57
Blooming under the sky
Rozina said:
I can imagine this scene vividly. It\'s wonderful.
April 16th, 2022 18:27
Rozina said:
I can imagine this scene vividly. It\'s wonderful.
April 16th, 2022 18:27
Blooming under the sky
Bella Shepard said:
You blossom with each word. Within the confines of the room, the brain, you bring to life the thoughts, the words of that sweet success in the joy you give to those who read.
April 16th, 2022 12:49
Bella Shepard said:
You blossom with each word. Within the confines of the room, the brain, you bring to life the thoughts, the words of that sweet success in the joy you give to those who read.
April 16th, 2022 12:49
Blooming under the sky
Vamsi Sudha said:
Awesome poem And so much positivity showing up !!
Profoundly said
Great Work in Silence
And let success make the noise
Let you master in your excellence
Because great things always happen in silence....!!!
Words just flows your pen and they turned to be magic. !! Thanks Spiller for this yet another wonderful poem !!
April 16th, 2022 04:32
Vamsi Sudha said:
Awesome poem And so much positivity showing up !!
Profoundly said
Great Work in Silence
And let success make the noise
Let you master in your excellence
Because great things always happen in silence....!!!
Words just flows your pen and they turned to be magic. !! Thanks Spiller for this yet another wonderful poem !!
April 16th, 2022 04:32
In silence speaking with winds
Vamsi Sudha said:
Dear Spiller
Touched totally with these lines..
how to make a notice
is it a commodity that can be sold
if only pain could be sold
but why would anyone buy ?
the sufferings inside….
I could perceive the pain you have gone through and each word of yours speaks the pain which people are facing.
Everyone feels, but a poet feels and heals with his words. You poetry surely makes a difference. Keep writing because its what makes you so special. !!
April 16th, 2022 04:27
Vamsi Sudha said:
Dear Spiller
Touched totally with these lines..
how to make a notice
is it a commodity that can be sold
if only pain could be sold
but why would anyone buy ?
the sufferings inside….
I could perceive the pain you have gone through and each word of yours speaks the pain which people are facing.
Everyone feels, but a poet feels and heals with his words. You poetry surely makes a difference. Keep writing because its what makes you so special. !!
April 16th, 2022 04:27
In silence speaking with winds
theneophiles_words said:
I\'m captivated by this poem where pain and strain on the souls leave us walking dead. The last line, \'is a mere breathe of air\'; looks like the end and start. The ending; is why I still have a breath after all the ache and agony with the want to stop everything. The starting; where despite; all that, you have a chance to breathe for a change; Leading to new experiences. Poetic beauty!😊
April 16th, 2022 03:58
theneophiles_words said:
I\'m captivated by this poem where pain and strain on the souls leave us walking dead. The last line, \'is a mere breathe of air\'; looks like the end and start. The ending; is why I still have a breath after all the ache and agony with the want to stop everything. The starting; where despite; all that, you have a chance to breathe for a change; Leading to new experiences. Poetic beauty!😊
April 16th, 2022 03:58
Black and white
Neville said:
I oft ask my self .. where is the justice in this cruel world ...... I think this is one of those you needed to get out into the open and off your chest ... N x
April 16th, 2022 01:18
Neville said:
I oft ask my self .. where is the justice in this cruel world ...... I think this is one of those you needed to get out into the open and off your chest ... N x
April 16th, 2022 01:18
In silence speaking with winds
Neville said:
the message you post here is far bigger and more important than the page you pinned it to .. N
April 15th, 2022 03:38
Neville said:
the message you post here is far bigger and more important than the page you pinned it to .. N
April 15th, 2022 03:38
In silence speaking with winds
Goldfinch60 said:
May peace come to us all and we can breathe that fresh air in humility.
Andy
April 15th, 2022 00:38
Goldfinch60 said:
May peace come to us all and we can breathe that fresh air in humility.
Andy
April 15th, 2022 00:38
In silence speaking with winds
Rozina said:
A powerful message of the current despair. Unbearably sad times for so many.
April 14th, 2022 18:03
Rozina said:
A powerful message of the current despair. Unbearably sad times for so many.
April 14th, 2022 18:03
In silence speaking with winds
Bella Shepard said:
Maybe it\'s ageing, but the world I came of age in seems to have vanished. Technology is a wonderful thing, but the extent to which it has evolved seems to have robbed us of a sense of oneness, and we are now these independent entities vying for constant attention any way we can get it. Our ears hear, but don\'t listen. Our eyes see, but don\'t acknowledge. You\'ve said this in a very powerful way, and we need to keep listening and seeing what is right under our noses. Thank you!
April 14th, 2022 13:40
Bella Shepard said:
Maybe it\'s ageing, but the world I came of age in seems to have vanished. Technology is a wonderful thing, but the extent to which it has evolved seems to have robbed us of a sense of oneness, and we are now these independent entities vying for constant attention any way we can get it. Our ears hear, but don\'t listen. Our eyes see, but don\'t acknowledge. You\'ve said this in a very powerful way, and we need to keep listening and seeing what is right under our noses. Thank you!
April 14th, 2022 13:40
Power and money
theneophiles_words said:
At times, W. Somerset Maugham\'s Quote- \'Money is that sixth sense without which you cannot make a complete use of the other five\' does make sense in today\'s world. A fair depiction of P and M!
April 14th, 2022 08:43
theneophiles_words said:
At times, W. Somerset Maugham\'s Quote- \'Money is that sixth sense without which you cannot make a complete use of the other five\' does make sense in today\'s world. A fair depiction of P and M!
April 14th, 2022 08:43
Black rose
theneophiles_words said:
I could visualize how a child(black rose) breaks through the monotonous expectations of society. Falling, making mistakes, still believing in self, playing with what he has, and blooming at the cliff. Indelible!
April 14th, 2022 08:18
theneophiles_words said:
I could visualize how a child(black rose) breaks through the monotonous expectations of society. Falling, making mistakes, still believing in self, playing with what he has, and blooming at the cliff. Indelible!
April 14th, 2022 08:18
In silence speaking with winds
Rocky Lagou said:
Wow. This is quite the poem dear Spiller. I feel so many will resonate with your words. Nowadays, the world has sadly fallen into madness and insensitivity, and it seems like it\'s only getting worse. People are drowning in their own sadness and that light at the end of the tunnel seems to be dying out for many. I can only hope for better days.
April 14th, 2022 08:13
Rocky Lagou said:
Wow. This is quite the poem dear Spiller. I feel so many will resonate with your words. Nowadays, the world has sadly fallen into madness and insensitivity, and it seems like it\'s only getting worse. People are drowning in their own sadness and that light at the end of the tunnel seems to be dying out for many. I can only hope for better days.
April 14th, 2022 08:13
Power and money
Dahlia said:
very profound, its interesting how human interactions are a double a jeopardy, sociologically speaking, because spiritually it was never meant for it all to be so complicated.
I liked reading your take on this subject!
Dahlia
April 13th, 2022 13:09
Dahlia said:
very profound, its interesting how human interactions are a double a jeopardy, sociologically speaking, because spiritually it was never meant for it all to be so complicated.
I liked reading your take on this subject!
Dahlia
April 13th, 2022 13:09
Black rose
Neville said:
I personally quite like to be different ..
this is an inspiring bit of poetry that will either shock or appeal greatly to those who stumble upon it .. I fall into the latter category ......... N x
April 13th, 2022 13:08
Neville said:
I personally quite like to be different ..
this is an inspiring bit of poetry that will either shock or appeal greatly to those who stumble upon it .. I fall into the latter category ......... N x
April 13th, 2022 13:08
Power and money
Neville said:
some of us have everything we need .. actually, I believe more people fall into that category than many would admit to ... this is a splendid poem that touches on several raw nerves .............. N x
April 13th, 2022 13:03
Neville said:
some of us have everything we need .. actually, I believe more people fall into that category than many would admit to ... this is a splendid poem that touches on several raw nerves .............. N x
April 13th, 2022 13:03
Power and money
Bella Shepard said:
I couldn\'t agree more about money and power. It seems to make some people feel invincible. I\'ve seen too much of that in many of our politicians and celebrities lately, and I wonder how we pull ourselves back from the brink. A very thoughtful and timely piece dear poet. Kudos!
April 13th, 2022 12:06
Bella Shepard said:
I couldn\'t agree more about money and power. It seems to make some people feel invincible. I\'ve seen too much of that in many of our politicians and celebrities lately, and I wonder how we pull ourselves back from the brink. A very thoughtful and timely piece dear poet. Kudos!
April 13th, 2022 12:06
Power and money
FallenAngel1🕊 said:
Weird! Not sure how my comment showed up twice?🧐😂
April 13th, 2022 09:02
FallenAngel1🕊 said:
Weird! Not sure how my comment showed up twice?🧐😂
April 13th, 2022 09:02
Power and money
FallenAngel1🕊 said:
On one hand I think,who doesn’t want to be rich.
Money buys comfort,security,health,..but for one to chase after such a desire and achieve it takes greed. But on the other hand,I must ask myself,what about those who chased it on chance. Like playing the lottery,or going to casinos in their attempt,a little less greedy perhaps? Or those who never chased it at’all,but was blessed with inheritance? But when it’s all said and done. I guess it really does depends on how they use it regardless of how the came into it. Cheers. Great write spills.🥂🕊🌞👍
April 13th, 2022 08:48
FallenAngel1🕊 said:
On one hand I think,who doesn’t want to be rich.
Money buys comfort,security,health,..but for one to chase after such a desire and achieve it takes greed. But on the other hand,I must ask myself,what about those who chased it on chance. Like playing the lottery,or going to casinos in their attempt,a little less greedy perhaps? Or those who never chased it at’all,but was blessed with inheritance? But when it’s all said and done. I guess it really does depends on how they use it regardless of how the came into it. Cheers. Great write spills.🥂🕊🌞👍
April 13th, 2022 08:48
Power and money
FallenAngel1🕊 said:
On one hand I think,who doesn’t want to be rich.
Money buys comfort,security,health,..but for one to chase after such a desire and achieve it takes greed. But on the other hand,I must ask myself,what about those who chased it on chance. Like playing the lottery,or going to casinos in their attempt,a little less greedy perhaps? Or those who never chased it at’all,but was blessed with inheritance? But when it’s all said and done. I guess it really does depends on how they use it regardless of how the came into it. Cheers. Great write spills.🥂🕊🌞👍
April 13th, 2022 08:45
FallenAngel1🕊 said:
On one hand I think,who doesn’t want to be rich.
Money buys comfort,security,health,..but for one to chase after such a desire and achieve it takes greed. But on the other hand,I must ask myself,what about those who chased it on chance. Like playing the lottery,or going to casinos in their attempt,a little less greedy perhaps? Or those who never chased it at’all,but was blessed with inheritance? But when it’s all said and done. I guess it really does depends on how they use it regardless of how the came into it. Cheers. Great write spills.🥂🕊🌞👍
April 13th, 2022 08:45
Power and money
Rocky Lagou said:
A very critical observation. In our world today, society seems to revolve around money and having a status, but in reality, they hold no weight when taking into account a person\'s true happiness. Like the saying goes, money can\'t buy happiness. A great examination into the corruptness.
April 13th, 2022 08:26
Rocky Lagou said:
A very critical observation. In our world today, society seems to revolve around money and having a status, but in reality, they hold no weight when taking into account a person\'s true happiness. Like the saying goes, money can\'t buy happiness. A great examination into the corruptness.
April 13th, 2022 08:26
Black rose
Rozina said:
I agree. Many of us \'fear\' to be or act different because of what people might think of us. It is this difference that has led to great ideas and creations...Enjoyed your poem.
April 12th, 2022 18:06
Rozina said:
I agree. Many of us \'fear\' to be or act different because of what people might think of us. It is this difference that has led to great ideas and creations...Enjoyed your poem.
April 12th, 2022 18:06
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