Comments received on poems by spilleronsheet
In silence speaking with winds
Vamsi Sudha said:
Dear Spiller
Touched totally with these lines..
how to make a notice
is it a commodity that can be sold
if only pain could be sold
but why would anyone buy ?
the sufferings inside….
I could perceive the pain you have gone through and each word of yours speaks the pain which people are facing.
Everyone feels, but a poet feels and heals with his words. You poetry surely makes a difference. Keep writing because its what makes you so special. !!
April 16th, 2022 04:27
Vamsi Sudha said:
Dear Spiller
Touched totally with these lines..
how to make a notice
is it a commodity that can be sold
if only pain could be sold
but why would anyone buy ?
the sufferings inside….
I could perceive the pain you have gone through and each word of yours speaks the pain which people are facing.
Everyone feels, but a poet feels and heals with his words. You poetry surely makes a difference. Keep writing because its what makes you so special. !!
April 16th, 2022 04:27
In silence speaking with winds
theneophiles_words said:
I\'m captivated by this poem where pain and strain on the souls leave us walking dead. The last line, \'is a mere breathe of air\'; looks like the end and start. The ending; is why I still have a breath after all the ache and agony with the want to stop everything. The starting; where despite; all that, you have a chance to breathe for a change; Leading to new experiences. Poetic beauty!😊
April 16th, 2022 03:58
theneophiles_words said:
I\'m captivated by this poem where pain and strain on the souls leave us walking dead. The last line, \'is a mere breathe of air\'; looks like the end and start. The ending; is why I still have a breath after all the ache and agony with the want to stop everything. The starting; where despite; all that, you have a chance to breathe for a change; Leading to new experiences. Poetic beauty!😊
April 16th, 2022 03:58
Black and white
Neville said:
I oft ask my self .. where is the justice in this cruel world ...... I think this is one of those you needed to get out into the open and off your chest ... N x
April 16th, 2022 01:18
Neville said:
I oft ask my self .. where is the justice in this cruel world ...... I think this is one of those you needed to get out into the open and off your chest ... N x
April 16th, 2022 01:18
In silence speaking with winds
Neville said:
the message you post here is far bigger and more important than the page you pinned it to .. N
April 15th, 2022 03:38
Neville said:
the message you post here is far bigger and more important than the page you pinned it to .. N
April 15th, 2022 03:38
In silence speaking with winds
Goldfinch60 said:
May peace come to us all and we can breathe that fresh air in humility.
Andy
April 15th, 2022 00:38
Goldfinch60 said:
May peace come to us all and we can breathe that fresh air in humility.
Andy
April 15th, 2022 00:38
In silence speaking with winds
Rozina said:
A powerful message of the current despair. Unbearably sad times for so many.
April 14th, 2022 18:03
Rozina said:
A powerful message of the current despair. Unbearably sad times for so many.
April 14th, 2022 18:03
In silence speaking with winds
Bella Shepard said:
Maybe it\'s ageing, but the world I came of age in seems to have vanished. Technology is a wonderful thing, but the extent to which it has evolved seems to have robbed us of a sense of oneness, and we are now these independent entities vying for constant attention any way we can get it. Our ears hear, but don\'t listen. Our eyes see, but don\'t acknowledge. You\'ve said this in a very powerful way, and we need to keep listening and seeing what is right under our noses. Thank you!
April 14th, 2022 13:40
Bella Shepard said:
Maybe it\'s ageing, but the world I came of age in seems to have vanished. Technology is a wonderful thing, but the extent to which it has evolved seems to have robbed us of a sense of oneness, and we are now these independent entities vying for constant attention any way we can get it. Our ears hear, but don\'t listen. Our eyes see, but don\'t acknowledge. You\'ve said this in a very powerful way, and we need to keep listening and seeing what is right under our noses. Thank you!
April 14th, 2022 13:40
Power and money
theneophiles_words said:
At times, W. Somerset Maugham\'s Quote- \'Money is that sixth sense without which you cannot make a complete use of the other five\' does make sense in today\'s world. A fair depiction of P and M!
April 14th, 2022 08:43
theneophiles_words said:
At times, W. Somerset Maugham\'s Quote- \'Money is that sixth sense without which you cannot make a complete use of the other five\' does make sense in today\'s world. A fair depiction of P and M!
April 14th, 2022 08:43
Black rose
theneophiles_words said:
I could visualize how a child(black rose) breaks through the monotonous expectations of society. Falling, making mistakes, still believing in self, playing with what he has, and blooming at the cliff. Indelible!
April 14th, 2022 08:18
theneophiles_words said:
I could visualize how a child(black rose) breaks through the monotonous expectations of society. Falling, making mistakes, still believing in self, playing with what he has, and blooming at the cliff. Indelible!
April 14th, 2022 08:18
In silence speaking with winds
Rocky Lagou said:
Wow. This is quite the poem dear Spiller. I feel so many will resonate with your words. Nowadays, the world has sadly fallen into madness and insensitivity, and it seems like it\'s only getting worse. People are drowning in their own sadness and that light at the end of the tunnel seems to be dying out for many. I can only hope for better days.
April 14th, 2022 08:13
Rocky Lagou said:
Wow. This is quite the poem dear Spiller. I feel so many will resonate with your words. Nowadays, the world has sadly fallen into madness and insensitivity, and it seems like it\'s only getting worse. People are drowning in their own sadness and that light at the end of the tunnel seems to be dying out for many. I can only hope for better days.
April 14th, 2022 08:13
Power and money
Dahlia said:
very profound, its interesting how human interactions are a double a jeopardy, sociologically speaking, because spiritually it was never meant for it all to be so complicated.
I liked reading your take on this subject!
Dahlia
April 13th, 2022 13:09
Dahlia said:
very profound, its interesting how human interactions are a double a jeopardy, sociologically speaking, because spiritually it was never meant for it all to be so complicated.
I liked reading your take on this subject!
Dahlia
April 13th, 2022 13:09
Black rose
Neville said:
I personally quite like to be different ..
this is an inspiring bit of poetry that will either shock or appeal greatly to those who stumble upon it .. I fall into the latter category ......... N x
April 13th, 2022 13:08
Neville said:
I personally quite like to be different ..
this is an inspiring bit of poetry that will either shock or appeal greatly to those who stumble upon it .. I fall into the latter category ......... N x
April 13th, 2022 13:08
Power and money
Neville said:
some of us have everything we need .. actually, I believe more people fall into that category than many would admit to ... this is a splendid poem that touches on several raw nerves .............. N x
April 13th, 2022 13:03
Neville said:
some of us have everything we need .. actually, I believe more people fall into that category than many would admit to ... this is a splendid poem that touches on several raw nerves .............. N x
April 13th, 2022 13:03
Power and money
Bella Shepard said:
I couldn\'t agree more about money and power. It seems to make some people feel invincible. I\'ve seen too much of that in many of our politicians and celebrities lately, and I wonder how we pull ourselves back from the brink. A very thoughtful and timely piece dear poet. Kudos!
April 13th, 2022 12:06
Bella Shepard said:
I couldn\'t agree more about money and power. It seems to make some people feel invincible. I\'ve seen too much of that in many of our politicians and celebrities lately, and I wonder how we pull ourselves back from the brink. A very thoughtful and timely piece dear poet. Kudos!
April 13th, 2022 12:06
Power and money
FallenAngel1🕊 said:
Weird! Not sure how my comment showed up twice?🧐😂
April 13th, 2022 09:02
FallenAngel1🕊 said:
Weird! Not sure how my comment showed up twice?🧐😂
April 13th, 2022 09:02
Power and money
FallenAngel1🕊 said:
On one hand I think,who doesn’t want to be rich.
Money buys comfort,security,health,..but for one to chase after such a desire and achieve it takes greed. But on the other hand,I must ask myself,what about those who chased it on chance. Like playing the lottery,or going to casinos in their attempt,a little less greedy perhaps? Or those who never chased it at’all,but was blessed with inheritance? But when it’s all said and done. I guess it really does depends on how they use it regardless of how the came into it. Cheers. Great write spills.🥂🕊🌞👍
April 13th, 2022 08:48
FallenAngel1🕊 said:
On one hand I think,who doesn’t want to be rich.
Money buys comfort,security,health,..but for one to chase after such a desire and achieve it takes greed. But on the other hand,I must ask myself,what about those who chased it on chance. Like playing the lottery,or going to casinos in their attempt,a little less greedy perhaps? Or those who never chased it at’all,but was blessed with inheritance? But when it’s all said and done. I guess it really does depends on how they use it regardless of how the came into it. Cheers. Great write spills.🥂🕊🌞👍
April 13th, 2022 08:48
Power and money
FallenAngel1🕊 said:
On one hand I think,who doesn’t want to be rich.
Money buys comfort,security,health,..but for one to chase after such a desire and achieve it takes greed. But on the other hand,I must ask myself,what about those who chased it on chance. Like playing the lottery,or going to casinos in their attempt,a little less greedy perhaps? Or those who never chased it at’all,but was blessed with inheritance? But when it’s all said and done. I guess it really does depends on how they use it regardless of how the came into it. Cheers. Great write spills.🥂🕊🌞👍
April 13th, 2022 08:45
FallenAngel1🕊 said:
On one hand I think,who doesn’t want to be rich.
Money buys comfort,security,health,..but for one to chase after such a desire and achieve it takes greed. But on the other hand,I must ask myself,what about those who chased it on chance. Like playing the lottery,or going to casinos in their attempt,a little less greedy perhaps? Or those who never chased it at’all,but was blessed with inheritance? But when it’s all said and done. I guess it really does depends on how they use it regardless of how the came into it. Cheers. Great write spills.🥂🕊🌞👍
April 13th, 2022 08:45
Power and money
Rocky Lagou said:
A very critical observation. In our world today, society seems to revolve around money and having a status, but in reality, they hold no weight when taking into account a person\'s true happiness. Like the saying goes, money can\'t buy happiness. A great examination into the corruptness.
April 13th, 2022 08:26
Rocky Lagou said:
A very critical observation. In our world today, society seems to revolve around money and having a status, but in reality, they hold no weight when taking into account a person\'s true happiness. Like the saying goes, money can\'t buy happiness. A great examination into the corruptness.
April 13th, 2022 08:26
Black rose
Rozina said:
I agree. Many of us \'fear\' to be or act different because of what people might think of us. It is this difference that has led to great ideas and creations...Enjoyed your poem.
April 12th, 2022 18:06
Rozina said:
I agree. Many of us \'fear\' to be or act different because of what people might think of us. It is this difference that has led to great ideas and creations...Enjoyed your poem.
April 12th, 2022 18:06
Black rose
Caring dove said:
Engaging great writing , spiller ., I liked reading your words ., ) I think even when we are different or not as far as others may be .. we can still bloom in our own way or reach a better place
April 12th, 2022 08:15
Caring dove said:
Engaging great writing , spiller ., I liked reading your words ., ) I think even when we are different or not as far as others may be .. we can still bloom in our own way or reach a better place
April 12th, 2022 08:15
The song
Neville said:
as far as poems go, this is so damned good .. the bar is clearly and cleanly raised and I most certainly, applaud thee ........... N
April 11th, 2022 16:13
Neville said:
as far as poems go, this is so damned good .. the bar is clearly and cleanly raised and I most certainly, applaud thee ........... N
April 11th, 2022 16:13
The song
Rocky Lagou said:
Quite the song, indeed. I must say that line about what we do becoming our religion is actually such a genius and wise line. What we often commit to becomes a tedious task that really reflects the religious rites. Very well done.
April 11th, 2022 09:13
Rocky Lagou said:
Quite the song, indeed. I must say that line about what we do becoming our religion is actually such a genius and wise line. What we often commit to becomes a tedious task that really reflects the religious rites. Very well done.
April 11th, 2022 09:13
Greed havocs the brain
Rocky Lagou said:
An amazing reflection on the cynicism that pervades humankind. I feel that greed is a self-destructive force that must be put to rest. Great job!
April 11th, 2022 09:09
Rocky Lagou said:
An amazing reflection on the cynicism that pervades humankind. I feel that greed is a self-destructive force that must be put to rest. Great job!
April 11th, 2022 09:09
Greed havocs the brain
Neville said:
Greed is not a friend of anyone .. some have nothing and others always wanting more .. the world is filled with different degrees and forms of desire .. a very serious topic covered with some equally serious satire and humour ......... N
April 11th, 2022 02:52
Neville said:
Greed is not a friend of anyone .. some have nothing and others always wanting more .. the world is filled with different degrees and forms of desire .. a very serious topic covered with some equally serious satire and humour ......... N
April 11th, 2022 02:52
Greed havocs the brain
esey said:
I love how you built your point by describing such situations like what you did at the first and second stanzas. Keep writing!
April 10th, 2022 13:21
esey said:
I love how you built your point by describing such situations like what you did at the first and second stanzas. Keep writing!
April 10th, 2022 13:21
The song
Poetic Dan said:
I do love a song on repeat, looping and reminder of a life so sweet!
Thanks for sharing
April 10th, 2022 02:02
Poetic Dan said:
I do love a song on repeat, looping and reminder of a life so sweet!
Thanks for sharing
April 10th, 2022 02:02
The song
Goldfinch60 said:
Music is like that it can bring such wonderful emotions to us.
Andy
April 10th, 2022 01:35
Goldfinch60 said:
Music is like that it can bring such wonderful emotions to us.
Andy
April 10th, 2022 01:35
The song
dusk arising said:
There is a lot wrong with the organised religions, not least the way they capture immature minds and ensnare them with clever use of fear.
Just as you portray, a thinking person will become a spiritual thinking person purely from living life. Life in all it\'s forms around us and our own path through life is a great teaching experience. Who among us would not sit among the hills or at the sea shore or beneath the stars and not be moved in a spiritual manner.
Love, be it romantic love, love of living or love of our planets gifts, is a spiritual sensation. Something a christian (I\'m not one) would call a gift from god.
April 9th, 2022 13:44
dusk arising said:
There is a lot wrong with the organised religions, not least the way they capture immature minds and ensnare them with clever use of fear.
Just as you portray, a thinking person will become a spiritual thinking person purely from living life. Life in all it\'s forms around us and our own path through life is a great teaching experience. Who among us would not sit among the hills or at the sea shore or beneath the stars and not be moved in a spiritual manner.
Love, be it romantic love, love of living or love of our planets gifts, is a spiritual sensation. Something a christian (I\'m not one) would call a gift from god.
April 9th, 2022 13:44
The song
Vamsi Sudha said:
Another great work from you..
Loved these line..
a person with no religion
but only her deeds
which became her religion
Good one as usual Spiller :)
April 9th, 2022 13:03
Vamsi Sudha said:
Another great work from you..
Loved these line..
a person with no religion
but only her deeds
which became her religion
Good one as usual Spiller :)
April 9th, 2022 13:03
The song
Caring dove said:
Another great poem spiller .. 🙂 I guess we can lose our calm in love .. especially love your mention of the shore yearning for the waves
April 9th, 2022 11:45
Caring dove said:
Another great poem spiller .. 🙂 I guess we can lose our calm in love .. especially love your mention of the shore yearning for the waves
April 9th, 2022 11:45
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