Comments received on poems by spilleronsheet
Black rose
theneophiles_words said:
I could visualize how a child(black rose) breaks through the monotonous expectations of society. Falling, making mistakes, still believing in self, playing with what he has, and blooming at the cliff. Indelible!
April 14th, 2022 08:18
theneophiles_words said:
I could visualize how a child(black rose) breaks through the monotonous expectations of society. Falling, making mistakes, still believing in self, playing with what he has, and blooming at the cliff. Indelible!
April 14th, 2022 08:18
In silence speaking with winds
Rocky Lagou said:
Wow. This is quite the poem dear Spiller. I feel so many will resonate with your words. Nowadays, the world has sadly fallen into madness and insensitivity, and it seems like it\'s only getting worse. People are drowning in their own sadness and that light at the end of the tunnel seems to be dying out for many. I can only hope for better days.
April 14th, 2022 08:13
Rocky Lagou said:
Wow. This is quite the poem dear Spiller. I feel so many will resonate with your words. Nowadays, the world has sadly fallen into madness and insensitivity, and it seems like it\'s only getting worse. People are drowning in their own sadness and that light at the end of the tunnel seems to be dying out for many. I can only hope for better days.
April 14th, 2022 08:13
Power and money
Dahlia said:
very profound, its interesting how human interactions are a double a jeopardy, sociologically speaking, because spiritually it was never meant for it all to be so complicated.
I liked reading your take on this subject!
Dahlia
April 13th, 2022 13:09
Dahlia said:
very profound, its interesting how human interactions are a double a jeopardy, sociologically speaking, because spiritually it was never meant for it all to be so complicated.
I liked reading your take on this subject!
Dahlia
April 13th, 2022 13:09
Black rose
Neville said:
I personally quite like to be different ..
this is an inspiring bit of poetry that will either shock or appeal greatly to those who stumble upon it .. I fall into the latter category ......... N x
April 13th, 2022 13:08
Neville said:
I personally quite like to be different ..
this is an inspiring bit of poetry that will either shock or appeal greatly to those who stumble upon it .. I fall into the latter category ......... N x
April 13th, 2022 13:08
Power and money
Neville said:
some of us have everything we need .. actually, I believe more people fall into that category than many would admit to ... this is a splendid poem that touches on several raw nerves .............. N x
April 13th, 2022 13:03
Neville said:
some of us have everything we need .. actually, I believe more people fall into that category than many would admit to ... this is a splendid poem that touches on several raw nerves .............. N x
April 13th, 2022 13:03
Power and money
Bella Shepard said:
I couldn\'t agree more about money and power. It seems to make some people feel invincible. I\'ve seen too much of that in many of our politicians and celebrities lately, and I wonder how we pull ourselves back from the brink. A very thoughtful and timely piece dear poet. Kudos!
April 13th, 2022 12:06
Bella Shepard said:
I couldn\'t agree more about money and power. It seems to make some people feel invincible. I\'ve seen too much of that in many of our politicians and celebrities lately, and I wonder how we pull ourselves back from the brink. A very thoughtful and timely piece dear poet. Kudos!
April 13th, 2022 12:06
Power and money
FallenAngel1🕊 said:
Weird! Not sure how my comment showed up twice?🧐😂
April 13th, 2022 09:02
FallenAngel1🕊 said:
Weird! Not sure how my comment showed up twice?🧐😂
April 13th, 2022 09:02
Power and money
FallenAngel1🕊 said:
On one hand I think,who doesn’t want to be rich.
Money buys comfort,security,health,..but for one to chase after such a desire and achieve it takes greed. But on the other hand,I must ask myself,what about those who chased it on chance. Like playing the lottery,or going to casinos in their attempt,a little less greedy perhaps? Or those who never chased it at’all,but was blessed with inheritance? But when it’s all said and done. I guess it really does depends on how they use it regardless of how the came into it. Cheers. Great write spills.🥂🕊🌞👍
April 13th, 2022 08:48
FallenAngel1🕊 said:
On one hand I think,who doesn’t want to be rich.
Money buys comfort,security,health,..but for one to chase after such a desire and achieve it takes greed. But on the other hand,I must ask myself,what about those who chased it on chance. Like playing the lottery,or going to casinos in their attempt,a little less greedy perhaps? Or those who never chased it at’all,but was blessed with inheritance? But when it’s all said and done. I guess it really does depends on how they use it regardless of how the came into it. Cheers. Great write spills.🥂🕊🌞👍
April 13th, 2022 08:48
Power and money
FallenAngel1🕊 said:
On one hand I think,who doesn’t want to be rich.
Money buys comfort,security,health,..but for one to chase after such a desire and achieve it takes greed. But on the other hand,I must ask myself,what about those who chased it on chance. Like playing the lottery,or going to casinos in their attempt,a little less greedy perhaps? Or those who never chased it at’all,but was blessed with inheritance? But when it’s all said and done. I guess it really does depends on how they use it regardless of how the came into it. Cheers. Great write spills.🥂🕊🌞👍
April 13th, 2022 08:45
FallenAngel1🕊 said:
On one hand I think,who doesn’t want to be rich.
Money buys comfort,security,health,..but for one to chase after such a desire and achieve it takes greed. But on the other hand,I must ask myself,what about those who chased it on chance. Like playing the lottery,or going to casinos in their attempt,a little less greedy perhaps? Or those who never chased it at’all,but was blessed with inheritance? But when it’s all said and done. I guess it really does depends on how they use it regardless of how the came into it. Cheers. Great write spills.🥂🕊🌞👍
April 13th, 2022 08:45
Power and money
Rocky Lagou said:
A very critical observation. In our world today, society seems to revolve around money and having a status, but in reality, they hold no weight when taking into account a person\'s true happiness. Like the saying goes, money can\'t buy happiness. A great examination into the corruptness.
April 13th, 2022 08:26
Rocky Lagou said:
A very critical observation. In our world today, society seems to revolve around money and having a status, but in reality, they hold no weight when taking into account a person\'s true happiness. Like the saying goes, money can\'t buy happiness. A great examination into the corruptness.
April 13th, 2022 08:26
Black rose
Rozina said:
I agree. Many of us \'fear\' to be or act different because of what people might think of us. It is this difference that has led to great ideas and creations...Enjoyed your poem.
April 12th, 2022 18:06
Rozina said:
I agree. Many of us \'fear\' to be or act different because of what people might think of us. It is this difference that has led to great ideas and creations...Enjoyed your poem.
April 12th, 2022 18:06
Black rose
Caring dove said:
Engaging great writing , spiller ., I liked reading your words ., ) I think even when we are different or not as far as others may be .. we can still bloom in our own way or reach a better place
April 12th, 2022 08:15
Caring dove said:
Engaging great writing , spiller ., I liked reading your words ., ) I think even when we are different or not as far as others may be .. we can still bloom in our own way or reach a better place
April 12th, 2022 08:15
The song
Neville said:
as far as poems go, this is so damned good .. the bar is clearly and cleanly raised and I most certainly, applaud thee ........... N
April 11th, 2022 16:13
Neville said:
as far as poems go, this is so damned good .. the bar is clearly and cleanly raised and I most certainly, applaud thee ........... N
April 11th, 2022 16:13
The song
Rocky Lagou said:
Quite the song, indeed. I must say that line about what we do becoming our religion is actually such a genius and wise line. What we often commit to becomes a tedious task that really reflects the religious rites. Very well done.
April 11th, 2022 09:13
Rocky Lagou said:
Quite the song, indeed. I must say that line about what we do becoming our religion is actually such a genius and wise line. What we often commit to becomes a tedious task that really reflects the religious rites. Very well done.
April 11th, 2022 09:13
Greed havocs the brain
Rocky Lagou said:
An amazing reflection on the cynicism that pervades humankind. I feel that greed is a self-destructive force that must be put to rest. Great job!
April 11th, 2022 09:09
Rocky Lagou said:
An amazing reflection on the cynicism that pervades humankind. I feel that greed is a self-destructive force that must be put to rest. Great job!
April 11th, 2022 09:09
Greed havocs the brain
Neville said:
Greed is not a friend of anyone .. some have nothing and others always wanting more .. the world is filled with different degrees and forms of desire .. a very serious topic covered with some equally serious satire and humour ......... N
April 11th, 2022 02:52
Neville said:
Greed is not a friend of anyone .. some have nothing and others always wanting more .. the world is filled with different degrees and forms of desire .. a very serious topic covered with some equally serious satire and humour ......... N
April 11th, 2022 02:52
Greed havocs the brain
esey said:
I love how you built your point by describing such situations like what you did at the first and second stanzas. Keep writing!
April 10th, 2022 13:21
esey said:
I love how you built your point by describing such situations like what you did at the first and second stanzas. Keep writing!
April 10th, 2022 13:21
The song
Poetic Dan said:
I do love a song on repeat, looping and reminder of a life so sweet!
Thanks for sharing
April 10th, 2022 02:02
Poetic Dan said:
I do love a song on repeat, looping and reminder of a life so sweet!
Thanks for sharing
April 10th, 2022 02:02
The song
Goldfinch60 said:
Music is like that it can bring such wonderful emotions to us.
Andy
April 10th, 2022 01:35
Goldfinch60 said:
Music is like that it can bring such wonderful emotions to us.
Andy
April 10th, 2022 01:35
The song
dusk arising said:
There is a lot wrong with the organised religions, not least the way they capture immature minds and ensnare them with clever use of fear.
Just as you portray, a thinking person will become a spiritual thinking person purely from living life. Life in all it\'s forms around us and our own path through life is a great teaching experience. Who among us would not sit among the hills or at the sea shore or beneath the stars and not be moved in a spiritual manner.
Love, be it romantic love, love of living or love of our planets gifts, is a spiritual sensation. Something a christian (I\'m not one) would call a gift from god.
April 9th, 2022 13:44
dusk arising said:
There is a lot wrong with the organised religions, not least the way they capture immature minds and ensnare them with clever use of fear.
Just as you portray, a thinking person will become a spiritual thinking person purely from living life. Life in all it\'s forms around us and our own path through life is a great teaching experience. Who among us would not sit among the hills or at the sea shore or beneath the stars and not be moved in a spiritual manner.
Love, be it romantic love, love of living or love of our planets gifts, is a spiritual sensation. Something a christian (I\'m not one) would call a gift from god.
April 9th, 2022 13:44
The song
Vamsi Sudha said:
Another great work from you..
Loved these line..
a person with no religion
but only her deeds
which became her religion
Good one as usual Spiller :)
April 9th, 2022 13:03
Vamsi Sudha said:
Another great work from you..
Loved these line..
a person with no religion
but only her deeds
which became her religion
Good one as usual Spiller :)
April 9th, 2022 13:03
The song
Caring dove said:
Another great poem spiller .. 🙂 I guess we can lose our calm in love .. especially love your mention of the shore yearning for the waves
April 9th, 2022 11:45
Caring dove said:
Another great poem spiller .. 🙂 I guess we can lose our calm in love .. especially love your mention of the shore yearning for the waves
April 9th, 2022 11:45
A million times
Goldfinch60 said:
True words spilleronsheet, just keep on moving on no matter what trys to stop you.
Andy
April 9th, 2022 00:34
Goldfinch60 said:
True words spilleronsheet, just keep on moving on no matter what trys to stop you.
Andy
April 9th, 2022 00:34
A million times
Christina8 said:
This is a great write, to keep going because one of these times....luck may be on our side. Aside from that you capture the essence of perserverance. Great job!
April 8th, 2022 16:06
Christina8 said:
This is a great write, to keep going because one of these times....luck may be on our side. Aside from that you capture the essence of perserverance. Great job!
April 8th, 2022 16:06
A million times
Bella Shepard said:
What a beautiful way to describe the path of life. As always you capture the essence of a thought and turn it into a poetic gem.
April 8th, 2022 13:57
Bella Shepard said:
What a beautiful way to describe the path of life. As always you capture the essence of a thought and turn it into a poetic gem.
April 8th, 2022 13:57
A million times
dusk arising said:
Absolutely bang on. Just keep picking yourself up and carrying on cos your path is a unique path and who knows what goodies await you.
Great spirit of perseverence runs through your words.
April 8th, 2022 11:55
dusk arising said:
Absolutely bang on. Just keep picking yourself up and carrying on cos your path is a unique path and who knows what goodies await you.
Great spirit of perseverence runs through your words.
April 8th, 2022 11:55
A million times
Caring dove said:
You have such a great poetic voice lol ! Another great writing that I loved reading 🙂I especially like the second verse and the words ‘ Lady Luck rolls ‘
April 8th, 2022 07:27
Caring dove said:
You have such a great poetic voice lol ! Another great writing that I loved reading 🙂I especially like the second verse and the words ‘ Lady Luck rolls ‘
April 8th, 2022 07:27
Chasing time
Caring dove said:
Really like this )) an interesting and engaging read .. liked reading this .. great words
April 8th, 2022 07:08
Caring dove said:
Really like this )) an interesting and engaging read .. liked reading this .. great words
April 8th, 2022 07:08
Black and white
theneophiles_words said:
What a candid introspection that evokes keenness about the true self of the world that we breathe. Wishing for more grey in the black and white that we see around. Engrossing as always.
April 6th, 2022 01:18
theneophiles_words said:
What a candid introspection that evokes keenness about the true self of the world that we breathe. Wishing for more grey in the black and white that we see around. Engrossing as always.
April 6th, 2022 01:18
Chasing time
theneophiles_words said:
Sometimes, we get duped just at the fingertips of Time and circumstances. Still, they have their significance as we unfurl. The first and the last three sentences sum up it all. Thank you so much for a lovely read.
April 5th, 2022 23:51
theneophiles_words said:
Sometimes, we get duped just at the fingertips of Time and circumstances. Still, they have their significance as we unfurl. The first and the last three sentences sum up it all. Thank you so much for a lovely read.
April 5th, 2022 23:51
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