Comments received on poems by spilleronsheet
A million times
Goldfinch60 said:
True words spilleronsheet, just keep on moving on no matter what trys to stop you.
Andy
April 9th, 2022 00:34
Goldfinch60 said:
True words spilleronsheet, just keep on moving on no matter what trys to stop you.
Andy
April 9th, 2022 00:34
A million times
Christina8 said:
This is a great write, to keep going because one of these times....luck may be on our side. Aside from that you capture the essence of perserverance. Great job!
April 8th, 2022 16:06
Christina8 said:
This is a great write, to keep going because one of these times....luck may be on our side. Aside from that you capture the essence of perserverance. Great job!
April 8th, 2022 16:06
A million times
Bella Shepard said:
What a beautiful way to describe the path of life. As always you capture the essence of a thought and turn it into a poetic gem.
April 8th, 2022 13:57
Bella Shepard said:
What a beautiful way to describe the path of life. As always you capture the essence of a thought and turn it into a poetic gem.
April 8th, 2022 13:57
A million times
dusk arising said:
Absolutely bang on. Just keep picking yourself up and carrying on cos your path is a unique path and who knows what goodies await you.
Great spirit of perseverence runs through your words.
April 8th, 2022 11:55
dusk arising said:
Absolutely bang on. Just keep picking yourself up and carrying on cos your path is a unique path and who knows what goodies await you.
Great spirit of perseverence runs through your words.
April 8th, 2022 11:55
A million times
Caring dove said:
You have such a great poetic voice lol ! Another great writing that I loved reading 🙂I especially like the second verse and the words ‘ Lady Luck rolls ‘
April 8th, 2022 07:27
Caring dove said:
You have such a great poetic voice lol ! Another great writing that I loved reading 🙂I especially like the second verse and the words ‘ Lady Luck rolls ‘
April 8th, 2022 07:27
Chasing time
Caring dove said:
Really like this )) an interesting and engaging read .. liked reading this .. great words
April 8th, 2022 07:08
Caring dove said:
Really like this )) an interesting and engaging read .. liked reading this .. great words
April 8th, 2022 07:08
Black and white
theneophiles_words said:
What a candid introspection that evokes keenness about the true self of the world that we breathe. Wishing for more grey in the black and white that we see around. Engrossing as always.
April 6th, 2022 01:18
theneophiles_words said:
What a candid introspection that evokes keenness about the true self of the world that we breathe. Wishing for more grey in the black and white that we see around. Engrossing as always.
April 6th, 2022 01:18
Chasing time
theneophiles_words said:
Sometimes, we get duped just at the fingertips of Time and circumstances. Still, they have their significance as we unfurl. The first and the last three sentences sum up it all. Thank you so much for a lovely read.
April 5th, 2022 23:51
theneophiles_words said:
Sometimes, we get duped just at the fingertips of Time and circumstances. Still, they have their significance as we unfurl. The first and the last three sentences sum up it all. Thank you so much for a lovely read.
April 5th, 2022 23:51
Chasing time
FallenAngel1🕊 said:
Chasing time as it’s behind us,in front of us and all around us lol 😂 just make sure it doesn’t cause you to run in circles😂😂😂 it’s no fun seeing the same scenery over and over again. And yes take rest at times,..to smell the roses 🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🥂🕊🌞
April 3rd, 2022 07:45
FallenAngel1🕊 said:
Chasing time as it’s behind us,in front of us and all around us lol 😂 just make sure it doesn’t cause you to run in circles😂😂😂 it’s no fun seeing the same scenery over and over again. And yes take rest at times,..to smell the roses 🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🥂🕊🌞
April 3rd, 2022 07:45
Black and white
Paul Bell said:
Hopefully this is Putin at the Haig, getting hanged for the atrocities in Ukraine in his name.
April 3rd, 2022 04:07
Paul Bell said:
Hopefully this is Putin at the Haig, getting hanged for the atrocities in Ukraine in his name.
April 3rd, 2022 04:07
Black and white
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good words spilleronsheet but the light WILL shine again and all will be well.
Andy
April 3rd, 2022 01:11
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good words spilleronsheet but the light WILL shine again and all will be well.
Andy
April 3rd, 2022 01:11
Chasing time
Rocky Lagou said:
Yes! I love this sensation of yearning the past and attempting to retrieve the irretrievable. It\'s best to move on but that lingering wistful feeling will remain if we don\'t make an effort. You presented this gloriously!
April 1st, 2022 10:39
Rocky Lagou said:
Yes! I love this sensation of yearning the past and attempting to retrieve the irretrievable. It\'s best to move on but that lingering wistful feeling will remain if we don\'t make an effort. You presented this gloriously!
April 1st, 2022 10:39
Chasing time
L. B. Mek said:
that last stanza! wow
what a write, worth the wait
lol
thank you! dear empathetic Poet
soar ever-higher
and let nothing, stifle
your limitless dreams..
(remember
scale is irrelevant, only
its distilled importance
governs
merited worth, in your life
so choose Boldly, and
Hope wisely
free yourself of expectation\'s
cages
let your wings, be at ease
my young friend)
April 1st, 2022 04:38
L. B. Mek said:
that last stanza! wow
what a write, worth the wait
lol
thank you! dear empathetic Poet
soar ever-higher
and let nothing, stifle
your limitless dreams..
(remember
scale is irrelevant, only
its distilled importance
governs
merited worth, in your life
so choose Boldly, and
Hope wisely
free yourself of expectation\'s
cages
let your wings, be at ease
my young friend)
April 1st, 2022 04:38
Chasing time
Vamsi Sudha said:
Hey Spiller !! you are magic at words .
This last paragraph is damn nice..
Chasing endlessly
Long buried dreams,
they call him “ prisoner of dreams”
a slave of ambitions
drinking wine of fantasies
on roof of reality
sleeping in midst of circumstances
as it breeds….
How beautifully you relate leaves me astounded ..
Great Write...
Chase your time
As it waits for None .. :)
April 1st, 2022 04:10
Vamsi Sudha said:
Hey Spiller !! you are magic at words .
This last paragraph is damn nice..
Chasing endlessly
Long buried dreams,
they call him “ prisoner of dreams”
a slave of ambitions
drinking wine of fantasies
on roof of reality
sleeping in midst of circumstances
as it breeds….
How beautifully you relate leaves me astounded ..
Great Write...
Chase your time
As it waits for None .. :)
April 1st, 2022 04:10
A note
Neville said:
Note to self ... don\'t dare mess with our spilleronsheet .. she knows what she is talking about .. Neville x
March 30th, 2022 12:58
Neville said:
Note to self ... don\'t dare mess with our spilleronsheet .. she knows what she is talking about .. Neville x
March 30th, 2022 12:58
A note
Bella Shepard said:
Your first two lines grab me. I am the poster child ( actually geriatric) for post-it notes, and reminders on bits of paper all over my kitchen counter. Somehow transferring Life\'s daily reminders to something tangible relieves some of the anxiety of possibly forgetting. As I complete each task that bit of paper is recycled and I go on to the next. Unfortunately it only works in my kitchen. I love the message of your poem, very beautifully said!
March 30th, 2022 09:59
Bella Shepard said:
Your first two lines grab me. I am the poster child ( actually geriatric) for post-it notes, and reminders on bits of paper all over my kitchen counter. Somehow transferring Life\'s daily reminders to something tangible relieves some of the anxiety of possibly forgetting. As I complete each task that bit of paper is recycled and I go on to the next. Unfortunately it only works in my kitchen. I love the message of your poem, very beautifully said!
March 30th, 2022 09:59
A note
Vamsi Sudha said:
Dear Spiller,
Your note
U really did transpose
Me to Juxtapose
Life deciding events so close !!
Beautiful and engrossing ! Loved each line to the core !!
All the best and you would do wonders !!
March 30th, 2022 09:44
Vamsi Sudha said:
Dear Spiller,
Your note
U really did transpose
Me to Juxtapose
Life deciding events so close !!
Beautiful and engrossing ! Loved each line to the core !!
All the best and you would do wonders !!
March 30th, 2022 09:44
A note
Rocky Lagou said:
I love the way you presented this: \"To the stickers aligned / to the to-do lists flapping with wind\" I mean you really transported I think almost about everybody to the disarray of \"real life.\" We\'re all constantly in a see-saw of time management and SELF-management. Like if we don\'t have a firm hold on ourselves that we can lose who we truly are. And I love the lines: \"a mind of distraction / a surge of anxiety / a swell of fear\" I mean it really hits the reader and makes them relate to the mental chaos that is going on. Great job! ✨
March 30th, 2022 08:31
Rocky Lagou said:
I love the way you presented this: \"To the stickers aligned / to the to-do lists flapping with wind\" I mean you really transported I think almost about everybody to the disarray of \"real life.\" We\'re all constantly in a see-saw of time management and SELF-management. Like if we don\'t have a firm hold on ourselves that we can lose who we truly are. And I love the lines: \"a mind of distraction / a surge of anxiety / a swell of fear\" I mean it really hits the reader and makes them relate to the mental chaos that is going on. Great job! ✨
March 30th, 2022 08:31
Slow burn
Rocky Lagou said:
Wow idk why but the word \"tingling\" came to mind when reading this piece. I love the way you described these strong feelings like fear in such interesting images and honestly this is richly portrayed. Maybe it\'s a feeling of tingling uncertainty. Well done!
March 28th, 2022 13:24
Rocky Lagou said:
Wow idk why but the word \"tingling\" came to mind when reading this piece. I love the way you described these strong feelings like fear in such interesting images and honestly this is richly portrayed. Maybe it\'s a feeling of tingling uncertainty. Well done!
March 28th, 2022 13:24
Bend and blend
theneophiles_words said:
This one is fine as the blade of a knife! Sharp yet nuanced. Fate does come looking like a coincidence. So If you let it pass by, it is a coincidence. And if you grab on to it, it is fate.
March 28th, 2022 12:36
theneophiles_words said:
This one is fine as the blade of a knife! Sharp yet nuanced. Fate does come looking like a coincidence. So If you let it pass by, it is a coincidence. And if you grab on to it, it is fate.
March 28th, 2022 12:36
Silence
theneophiles_words said:
Wonderful work! Use of words as clever as ever! But that last sentence explains it all.
March 28th, 2022 12:27
theneophiles_words said:
Wonderful work! Use of words as clever as ever! But that last sentence explains it all.
March 28th, 2022 12:27
Slow burn
Neville said:
a brilliant title for a great post that
I am sure will burn long ................. N
March 26th, 2022 14:29
Neville said:
a brilliant title for a great post that
I am sure will burn long ................. N
March 26th, 2022 14:29
Slow burn
Poetic Dan said:
Many directions in this inspiring write my friend..
Thank you
March 26th, 2022 03:42
Poetic Dan said:
Many directions in this inspiring write my friend..
Thank you
March 26th, 2022 03:42
Lines
Bella Shepard said:
Love the allusion to \"the coast of desires, built upon the dream of childhood\". Those dreams were sweet and ours to strive for. Beautiful!
March 23rd, 2022 14:56
Bella Shepard said:
Love the allusion to \"the coast of desires, built upon the dream of childhood\". Those dreams were sweet and ours to strive for. Beautiful!
March 23rd, 2022 14:56
Lines
Fay Slimm. said:
Love this take on palmistry with its lines leading to fate etc. An inspiring read spills that urges us run our own course to define our own future.
March 23rd, 2022 07:29
Fay Slimm. said:
Love this take on palmistry with its lines leading to fate etc. An inspiring read spills that urges us run our own course to define our own future.
March 23rd, 2022 07:29
Rare the sight
Neville said:
any poem with a hare incorporated in it is gonna be loved by me .. they are such sacred creatures and I truly have a thing for them ..
Personally, I am a tawny owl ........ :)
March 22nd, 2022 17:34
Neville said:
any poem with a hare incorporated in it is gonna be loved by me .. they are such sacred creatures and I truly have a thing for them ..
Personally, I am a tawny owl ........ :)
March 22nd, 2022 17:34
Rare the sight
Bella Shepard said:
Your words are tumbling around in my brain in the most delightful way, beckoning and challenging. A great write!
March 22nd, 2022 12:41
Bella Shepard said:
Your words are tumbling around in my brain in the most delightful way, beckoning and challenging. A great write!
March 22nd, 2022 12:41
The greatest player
L. B. Mek said:
indeed, and conditioning of that mind
rewarding us
with our most valuable gifts in life..
wise words, and a meditative reading experience
thanks for sharing, dear poet
March 21st, 2022 07:01
L. B. Mek said:
indeed, and conditioning of that mind
rewarding us
with our most valuable gifts in life..
wise words, and a meditative reading experience
thanks for sharing, dear poet
March 21st, 2022 07:01
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