Comments received on poems by spilleronsheet
Black rose
Caring dove said:
Engaging great writing , spiller ., I liked reading your words ., ) I think even when we are different or not as far as others may be .. we can still bloom in our own way or reach a better place
April 12th, 2022 08:15
Caring dove said:
Engaging great writing , spiller ., I liked reading your words ., ) I think even when we are different or not as far as others may be .. we can still bloom in our own way or reach a better place
April 12th, 2022 08:15
The song
Neville said:
as far as poems go, this is so damned good .. the bar is clearly and cleanly raised and I most certainly, applaud thee ........... N
April 11th, 2022 16:13
Neville said:
as far as poems go, this is so damned good .. the bar is clearly and cleanly raised and I most certainly, applaud thee ........... N
April 11th, 2022 16:13
The song
Rocky Lagou said:
Quite the song, indeed. I must say that line about what we do becoming our religion is actually such a genius and wise line. What we often commit to becomes a tedious task that really reflects the religious rites. Very well done.
April 11th, 2022 09:13
Rocky Lagou said:
Quite the song, indeed. I must say that line about what we do becoming our religion is actually such a genius and wise line. What we often commit to becomes a tedious task that really reflects the religious rites. Very well done.
April 11th, 2022 09:13
Greed havocs the brain
Rocky Lagou said:
An amazing reflection on the cynicism that pervades humankind. I feel that greed is a self-destructive force that must be put to rest. Great job!
April 11th, 2022 09:09
Rocky Lagou said:
An amazing reflection on the cynicism that pervades humankind. I feel that greed is a self-destructive force that must be put to rest. Great job!
April 11th, 2022 09:09
Greed havocs the brain
Neville said:
Greed is not a friend of anyone .. some have nothing and others always wanting more .. the world is filled with different degrees and forms of desire .. a very serious topic covered with some equally serious satire and humour ......... N
April 11th, 2022 02:52
Neville said:
Greed is not a friend of anyone .. some have nothing and others always wanting more .. the world is filled with different degrees and forms of desire .. a very serious topic covered with some equally serious satire and humour ......... N
April 11th, 2022 02:52
Greed havocs the brain
esey said:
I love how you built your point by describing such situations like what you did at the first and second stanzas. Keep writing!
April 10th, 2022 13:21
esey said:
I love how you built your point by describing such situations like what you did at the first and second stanzas. Keep writing!
April 10th, 2022 13:21
The song
Poetic Dan said:
I do love a song on repeat, looping and reminder of a life so sweet!
Thanks for sharing
April 10th, 2022 02:02
Poetic Dan said:
I do love a song on repeat, looping and reminder of a life so sweet!
Thanks for sharing
April 10th, 2022 02:02
The song
Goldfinch60 said:
Music is like that it can bring such wonderful emotions to us.
Andy
April 10th, 2022 01:35
Goldfinch60 said:
Music is like that it can bring such wonderful emotions to us.
Andy
April 10th, 2022 01:35
The song
dusk arising said:
There is a lot wrong with the organised religions, not least the way they capture immature minds and ensnare them with clever use of fear.
Just as you portray, a thinking person will become a spiritual thinking person purely from living life. Life in all it\'s forms around us and our own path through life is a great teaching experience. Who among us would not sit among the hills or at the sea shore or beneath the stars and not be moved in a spiritual manner.
Love, be it romantic love, love of living or love of our planets gifts, is a spiritual sensation. Something a christian (I\'m not one) would call a gift from god.
April 9th, 2022 13:44
dusk arising said:
There is a lot wrong with the organised religions, not least the way they capture immature minds and ensnare them with clever use of fear.
Just as you portray, a thinking person will become a spiritual thinking person purely from living life. Life in all it\'s forms around us and our own path through life is a great teaching experience. Who among us would not sit among the hills or at the sea shore or beneath the stars and not be moved in a spiritual manner.
Love, be it romantic love, love of living or love of our planets gifts, is a spiritual sensation. Something a christian (I\'m not one) would call a gift from god.
April 9th, 2022 13:44
The song
Vamsi Sudha said:
Another great work from you..
Loved these line..
a person with no religion
but only her deeds
which became her religion
Good one as usual Spiller :)
April 9th, 2022 13:03
Vamsi Sudha said:
Another great work from you..
Loved these line..
a person with no religion
but only her deeds
which became her religion
Good one as usual Spiller :)
April 9th, 2022 13:03
The song
Caring dove said:
Another great poem spiller .. 🙂 I guess we can lose our calm in love .. especially love your mention of the shore yearning for the waves
April 9th, 2022 11:45
Caring dove said:
Another great poem spiller .. 🙂 I guess we can lose our calm in love .. especially love your mention of the shore yearning for the waves
April 9th, 2022 11:45
A million times
Goldfinch60 said:
True words spilleronsheet, just keep on moving on no matter what trys to stop you.
Andy
April 9th, 2022 00:34
Goldfinch60 said:
True words spilleronsheet, just keep on moving on no matter what trys to stop you.
Andy
April 9th, 2022 00:34
A million times
Christina8 said:
This is a great write, to keep going because one of these times....luck may be on our side. Aside from that you capture the essence of perserverance. Great job!
April 8th, 2022 16:06
Christina8 said:
This is a great write, to keep going because one of these times....luck may be on our side. Aside from that you capture the essence of perserverance. Great job!
April 8th, 2022 16:06
A million times
Bella Shepard said:
What a beautiful way to describe the path of life. As always you capture the essence of a thought and turn it into a poetic gem.
April 8th, 2022 13:57
Bella Shepard said:
What a beautiful way to describe the path of life. As always you capture the essence of a thought and turn it into a poetic gem.
April 8th, 2022 13:57
A million times
dusk arising said:
Absolutely bang on. Just keep picking yourself up and carrying on cos your path is a unique path and who knows what goodies await you.
Great spirit of perseverence runs through your words.
April 8th, 2022 11:55
dusk arising said:
Absolutely bang on. Just keep picking yourself up and carrying on cos your path is a unique path and who knows what goodies await you.
Great spirit of perseverence runs through your words.
April 8th, 2022 11:55
A million times
Caring dove said:
You have such a great poetic voice lol ! Another great writing that I loved reading 🙂I especially like the second verse and the words ‘ Lady Luck rolls ‘
April 8th, 2022 07:27
Caring dove said:
You have such a great poetic voice lol ! Another great writing that I loved reading 🙂I especially like the second verse and the words ‘ Lady Luck rolls ‘
April 8th, 2022 07:27
Chasing time
Caring dove said:
Really like this )) an interesting and engaging read .. liked reading this .. great words
April 8th, 2022 07:08
Caring dove said:
Really like this )) an interesting and engaging read .. liked reading this .. great words
April 8th, 2022 07:08
Black and white
theneophiles_words said:
What a candid introspection that evokes keenness about the true self of the world that we breathe. Wishing for more grey in the black and white that we see around. Engrossing as always.
April 6th, 2022 01:18
theneophiles_words said:
What a candid introspection that evokes keenness about the true self of the world that we breathe. Wishing for more grey in the black and white that we see around. Engrossing as always.
April 6th, 2022 01:18
Chasing time
theneophiles_words said:
Sometimes, we get duped just at the fingertips of Time and circumstances. Still, they have their significance as we unfurl. The first and the last three sentences sum up it all. Thank you so much for a lovely read.
April 5th, 2022 23:51
theneophiles_words said:
Sometimes, we get duped just at the fingertips of Time and circumstances. Still, they have their significance as we unfurl. The first and the last three sentences sum up it all. Thank you so much for a lovely read.
April 5th, 2022 23:51
Chasing time
FallenAngel1🕊 said:
Chasing time as it’s behind us,in front of us and all around us lol 😂 just make sure it doesn’t cause you to run in circles😂😂😂 it’s no fun seeing the same scenery over and over again. And yes take rest at times,..to smell the roses 🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🥂🕊🌞
April 3rd, 2022 07:45
FallenAngel1🕊 said:
Chasing time as it’s behind us,in front of us and all around us lol 😂 just make sure it doesn’t cause you to run in circles😂😂😂 it’s no fun seeing the same scenery over and over again. And yes take rest at times,..to smell the roses 🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🥂🕊🌞
April 3rd, 2022 07:45
Black and white
Paul Bell said:
Hopefully this is Putin at the Haig, getting hanged for the atrocities in Ukraine in his name.
April 3rd, 2022 04:07
Paul Bell said:
Hopefully this is Putin at the Haig, getting hanged for the atrocities in Ukraine in his name.
April 3rd, 2022 04:07
Black and white
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good words spilleronsheet but the light WILL shine again and all will be well.
Andy
April 3rd, 2022 01:11
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good words spilleronsheet but the light WILL shine again and all will be well.
Andy
April 3rd, 2022 01:11
Chasing time
Rocky Lagou said:
Yes! I love this sensation of yearning the past and attempting to retrieve the irretrievable. It\'s best to move on but that lingering wistful feeling will remain if we don\'t make an effort. You presented this gloriously!
April 1st, 2022 10:39
Rocky Lagou said:
Yes! I love this sensation of yearning the past and attempting to retrieve the irretrievable. It\'s best to move on but that lingering wistful feeling will remain if we don\'t make an effort. You presented this gloriously!
April 1st, 2022 10:39
Chasing time
L. B. Mek said:
that last stanza! wow
what a write, worth the wait
lol
thank you! dear empathetic Poet
soar ever-higher
and let nothing, stifle
your limitless dreams..
(remember
scale is irrelevant, only
its distilled importance
governs
merited worth, in your life
so choose Boldly, and
Hope wisely
free yourself of expectation\'s
cages
let your wings, be at ease
my young friend)
April 1st, 2022 04:38
L. B. Mek said:
that last stanza! wow
what a write, worth the wait
lol
thank you! dear empathetic Poet
soar ever-higher
and let nothing, stifle
your limitless dreams..
(remember
scale is irrelevant, only
its distilled importance
governs
merited worth, in your life
so choose Boldly, and
Hope wisely
free yourself of expectation\'s
cages
let your wings, be at ease
my young friend)
April 1st, 2022 04:38
Chasing time
Vamsi Sudha said:
Hey Spiller !! you are magic at words .
This last paragraph is damn nice..
Chasing endlessly
Long buried dreams,
they call him “ prisoner of dreams”
a slave of ambitions
drinking wine of fantasies
on roof of reality
sleeping in midst of circumstances
as it breeds….
How beautifully you relate leaves me astounded ..
Great Write...
Chase your time
As it waits for None .. :)
April 1st, 2022 04:10
Vamsi Sudha said:
Hey Spiller !! you are magic at words .
This last paragraph is damn nice..
Chasing endlessly
Long buried dreams,
they call him “ prisoner of dreams”
a slave of ambitions
drinking wine of fantasies
on roof of reality
sleeping in midst of circumstances
as it breeds….
How beautifully you relate leaves me astounded ..
Great Write...
Chase your time
As it waits for None .. :)
April 1st, 2022 04:10
A note
Neville said:
Note to self ... don\'t dare mess with our spilleronsheet .. she knows what she is talking about .. Neville x
March 30th, 2022 12:58
Neville said:
Note to self ... don\'t dare mess with our spilleronsheet .. she knows what she is talking about .. Neville x
March 30th, 2022 12:58
A note
Bella Shepard said:
Your first two lines grab me. I am the poster child ( actually geriatric) for post-it notes, and reminders on bits of paper all over my kitchen counter. Somehow transferring Life\'s daily reminders to something tangible relieves some of the anxiety of possibly forgetting. As I complete each task that bit of paper is recycled and I go on to the next. Unfortunately it only works in my kitchen. I love the message of your poem, very beautifully said!
March 30th, 2022 09:59
Bella Shepard said:
Your first two lines grab me. I am the poster child ( actually geriatric) for post-it notes, and reminders on bits of paper all over my kitchen counter. Somehow transferring Life\'s daily reminders to something tangible relieves some of the anxiety of possibly forgetting. As I complete each task that bit of paper is recycled and I go on to the next. Unfortunately it only works in my kitchen. I love the message of your poem, very beautifully said!
March 30th, 2022 09:59
A note
Vamsi Sudha said:
Dear Spiller,
Your note
U really did transpose
Me to Juxtapose
Life deciding events so close !!
Beautiful and engrossing ! Loved each line to the core !!
All the best and you would do wonders !!
March 30th, 2022 09:44
Vamsi Sudha said:
Dear Spiller,
Your note
U really did transpose
Me to Juxtapose
Life deciding events so close !!
Beautiful and engrossing ! Loved each line to the core !!
All the best and you would do wonders !!
March 30th, 2022 09:44
A note
Rocky Lagou said:
I love the way you presented this: \"To the stickers aligned / to the to-do lists flapping with wind\" I mean you really transported I think almost about everybody to the disarray of \"real life.\" We\'re all constantly in a see-saw of time management and SELF-management. Like if we don\'t have a firm hold on ourselves that we can lose who we truly are. And I love the lines: \"a mind of distraction / a surge of anxiety / a swell of fear\" I mean it really hits the reader and makes them relate to the mental chaos that is going on. Great job! ✨
March 30th, 2022 08:31
Rocky Lagou said:
I love the way you presented this: \"To the stickers aligned / to the to-do lists flapping with wind\" I mean you really transported I think almost about everybody to the disarray of \"real life.\" We\'re all constantly in a see-saw of time management and SELF-management. Like if we don\'t have a firm hold on ourselves that we can lose who we truly are. And I love the lines: \"a mind of distraction / a surge of anxiety / a swell of fear\" I mean it really hits the reader and makes them relate to the mental chaos that is going on. Great job! ✨
March 30th, 2022 08:31
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