Comments received on poems by spilleronsheet
The lonely lane
Neville said:
a serious message wrapped up in a laugh .. exceptionally of the moment spiller .. in fact, quite brilliant ... N
January 15th, 2022 13:35
Neville said:
a serious message wrapped up in a laugh .. exceptionally of the moment spiller .. in fact, quite brilliant ... N
January 15th, 2022 13:35
The lonely lane
Suman_Bhattacharya said:
\'no soul meets the eye\'
\'how could sneeze bring her out
out of memory lane\'
\"she wasn’t walking alone anymore\"
It was humorous may be....but got stuck to these lines....
\'no soul meets the eye\'.... it is so true in today\'s world my friend...
January 15th, 2022 12:14
Suman_Bhattacharya said:
\'no soul meets the eye\'
\'how could sneeze bring her out
out of memory lane\'
\"she wasn’t walking alone anymore\"
It was humorous may be....but got stuck to these lines....
\'no soul meets the eye\'.... it is so true in today\'s world my friend...
January 15th, 2022 12:14
The lonely lane
woundedheart said:
We are all so sanitised that we\'ve made ourselves targets for new germs, this is a lovely poem and a little sad as so true. ☺
January 15th, 2022 11:44
woundedheart said:
We are all so sanitised that we\'ve made ourselves targets for new germs, this is a lovely poem and a little sad as so true. ☺
January 15th, 2022 11:44
The lonely lane
FallenAngel1🕊 said:
Ah,ah,ah,ahhhchhhooooo Oh,sorry bout that😂 Funny write spiiler🍻
January 15th, 2022 11:42
FallenAngel1🕊 said:
Ah,ah,ah,ahhhchhhooooo Oh,sorry bout that😂 Funny write spiiler🍻
January 15th, 2022 11:42
Flowers are flowers, to grow and bloom
Paul Bell said:
It\'s like you see a flower in bloom, and the winter takes a back seat. Hopefully this is the year we all bloom.
January 14th, 2022 10:00
Paul Bell said:
It\'s like you see a flower in bloom, and the winter takes a back seat. Hopefully this is the year we all bloom.
January 14th, 2022 10:00
Flowers are flowers, to grow and bloom
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
\'full of blooming roses
in all its hues
pink, red, orange, white, yellow
defining the measure of bonds\'
January 14th, 2022 06:35
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
\'full of blooming roses
in all its hues
pink, red, orange, white, yellow
defining the measure of bonds\'
January 14th, 2022 06:35
Flowers are flowers, to grow and bloom
woundedheart said:
Oh so longing for spring and nature\'s return, this is astoundingly beautiful 💟
January 14th, 2022 05:17
woundedheart said:
Oh so longing for spring and nature\'s return, this is astoundingly beautiful 💟
January 14th, 2022 05:17
Flowers are flowers, to grow and bloom
dusk arising said:
Brought to mind the fields of huge coloured stripes i used to live close to where a commercial flower seller (Harry Wheatcroft) grew his plants. A sight to behold when in glorious bloom. Acres/hectares of glorious natural colour.
January 14th, 2022 05:16
dusk arising said:
Brought to mind the fields of huge coloured stripes i used to live close to where a commercial flower seller (Harry Wheatcroft) grew his plants. A sight to behold when in glorious bloom. Acres/hectares of glorious natural colour.
January 14th, 2022 05:16
Flowers are flowers, to grow and bloom
Rozina said:
I can imagine all the beautiful flowers in all shapes and colours. Stunning!
January 14th, 2022 03:56
Rozina said:
I can imagine all the beautiful flowers in all shapes and colours. Stunning!
January 14th, 2022 03:56
Flowers are flowers, to grow and bloom
Caring dove said:
Beautiful poem , spiller .. love your words and I love flowers too 🌸🌸🌸
January 14th, 2022 02:36
Caring dove said:
Beautiful poem , spiller .. love your words and I love flowers too 🌸🌸🌸
January 14th, 2022 02:36
Flowers are flowers, to grow and bloom
Goldfinch60 said:
Mau those heirlooms be with us forever spilleronsheet.
Andy
January 14th, 2022 02:25
Goldfinch60 said:
Mau those heirlooms be with us forever spilleronsheet.
Andy
January 14th, 2022 02:25
Let the game begin
Vamsi Sudha said:
Dear Spiller, You started your game and please don\'t stop it...Let it go on...Wonderful interweave of words and notion !! Thanks for spilling such wonderful lines for us ...And looking for more from you !!
January 13th, 2022 08:26
Vamsi Sudha said:
Dear Spiller, You started your game and please don\'t stop it...Let it go on...Wonderful interweave of words and notion !! Thanks for spilling such wonderful lines for us ...And looking for more from you !!
January 13th, 2022 08:26
Let the game begin
woundedheart said:
If we have our health we are already winners better not to gamble on it and rather keep it safe. ☺
January 13th, 2022 07:12
woundedheart said:
If we have our health we are already winners better not to gamble on it and rather keep it safe. ☺
January 13th, 2022 07:12
Let the game begin
L. B. Mek said:
\'in race of reaching peak
don’t forget;
why you started please
the game started with caution
but, an over enthusiastic self
may ignore that crucial notion\'..
(another intriguing write
demonstrating some deep levels
of self-reflection and insight)
wording, may need slight refringent
but your poetry
is perfectly fine, just as it is
thanks for sharing, dear Poet
January 13th, 2022 06:21
L. B. Mek said:
\'in race of reaching peak
don’t forget;
why you started please
the game started with caution
but, an over enthusiastic self
may ignore that crucial notion\'..
(another intriguing write
demonstrating some deep levels
of self-reflection and insight)
wording, may need slight refringent
but your poetry
is perfectly fine, just as it is
thanks for sharing, dear Poet
January 13th, 2022 06:21
Let the game begin
AuburnScribbler said:
A fantastic poetical tale of caution and realisation here spilleronsheet.
I used to be a \"horse man\", but as you\'ve beautifully outlined in this poem, it\'s important to follow your own code of conduct/common sense, rather than follow the \"rules\" of their dangerous game.
Bravo, and I hope that all is well!
January 13th, 2022 04:42
AuburnScribbler said:
A fantastic poetical tale of caution and realisation here spilleronsheet.
I used to be a \"horse man\", but as you\'ve beautifully outlined in this poem, it\'s important to follow your own code of conduct/common sense, rather than follow the \"rules\" of their dangerous game.
Bravo, and I hope that all is well!
January 13th, 2022 04:42
Let the game begin
Saxon Crow said:
Very true Spiller and I hear your words. But my cynical nature always thinks that there\'s some one out there who knows the rules better than me haha
January 13th, 2022 03:46
Saxon Crow said:
Very true Spiller and I hear your words. But my cynical nature always thinks that there\'s some one out there who knows the rules better than me haha
January 13th, 2022 03:46
Let the game begin
Goldfinch60 said:
That last stanza is so very true spilleronsheet.
Andy
January 13th, 2022 02:46
Goldfinch60 said:
That last stanza is so very true spilleronsheet.
Andy
January 13th, 2022 02:46
Running time
dusk arising said:
There are more questions to play with here. One day a UFO time machine will break down and well have some answers..... \"where does the time go?\"
Is satan time itself?
January 12th, 2022 20:16
dusk arising said:
There are more questions to play with here. One day a UFO time machine will break down and well have some answers..... \"where does the time go?\"
Is satan time itself?
January 12th, 2022 20:16
Running time
FallenAngel1🕊 said:
Great work here spiller,..you inspired me to write and publish a fusioned poem called If You Had A Time Machine,Which Way Would You Go. Thanks😀
January 12th, 2022 17:56
FallenAngel1🕊 said:
Great work here spiller,..you inspired me to write and publish a fusioned poem called If You Had A Time Machine,Which Way Would You Go. Thanks😀
January 12th, 2022 17:56
Running time
Paul Bell said:
I wonder if you asked the public what they would go back in time to find out.
Who shot, JFK. Maybe Marilyn Monroe. I suppose the list is endless.
January 12th, 2022 14:19
Paul Bell said:
I wonder if you asked the public what they would go back in time to find out.
Who shot, JFK. Maybe Marilyn Monroe. I suppose the list is endless.
January 12th, 2022 14:19
Some truth better be untold
Dhanya said:
What you say is true my friend. What a kind way to give back to those who are under the gun sometimes. We all are trying our best to build and grow from our true being. I see your true being shining in your poem. So nothing critical is necessary. Grow on!
January 11th, 2022 21:14
Dhanya said:
What you say is true my friend. What a kind way to give back to those who are under the gun sometimes. We all are trying our best to build and grow from our true being. I see your true being shining in your poem. So nothing critical is necessary. Grow on!
January 11th, 2022 21:14
Calamities of life
woundedheart said:
So many things could be avoided if man stopped destroying the earth and looked inside themselves to see the truth we all need to realise our problems big or small are made better by good friends and the caring words or hugs from others. Life is for living but to live life we need to heal, ourselves our loved ones our planet, great poem 👍
January 11th, 2022 17:25
woundedheart said:
So many things could be avoided if man stopped destroying the earth and looked inside themselves to see the truth we all need to realise our problems big or small are made better by good friends and the caring words or hugs from others. Life is for living but to live life we need to heal, ourselves our loved ones our planet, great poem 👍
January 11th, 2022 17:25
Calamities of life
Vamsi Sudha said:
Dear Spiller,
I really swayed with your poem, for a moment, you filled my eyes with the aftermath of a tornado..
But \"the Silence and Serenity \" after a storm is really needed, at some moments of life..
So let the storm , cyclones, hit our life, to get to a serene atmosphere...
Wonderfully woven poem....thanks spiller..
January 11th, 2022 09:37
Vamsi Sudha said:
Dear Spiller,
I really swayed with your poem, for a moment, you filled my eyes with the aftermath of a tornado..
But \"the Silence and Serenity \" after a storm is really needed, at some moments of life..
So let the storm , cyclones, hit our life, to get to a serene atmosphere...
Wonderfully woven poem....thanks spiller..
January 11th, 2022 09:37
Watch out for and look out for
Suman_Bhattacharya said:
\'Beware of green glares
beware of red satires
beware of blue shoulders
beware of orange stabs
beware of violet hits
\'
The most interesting part of the creation...beautifully colouring the \'not so happy\'\' experiences of life...
January 11th, 2022 07:57
Suman_Bhattacharya said:
\'Beware of green glares
beware of red satires
beware of blue shoulders
beware of orange stabs
beware of violet hits
\'
The most interesting part of the creation...beautifully colouring the \'not so happy\'\' experiences of life...
January 11th, 2022 07:57
The cycle of life
Suman_Bhattacharya said:
Sure it is..nice definition presented...but may be that\'s the beauty of \'life\'...
January 11th, 2022 07:51
Suman_Bhattacharya said:
Sure it is..nice definition presented...but may be that\'s the beauty of \'life\'...
January 11th, 2022 07:51
Calamities of life
L. B. Mek said:
\'Ebbing
on waves of challenges that hit
the shore
though the mind, wished
to conquer the world
yet why
was soul, overwhelmed
why
was it, scared
*why-question\'s:
layered\'..
(wonderful in its abstract notes
while introducing such, realistically
everyday, themes and relatable ideas)
thanks for sharing, dear poet
January 11th, 2022 06:49
L. B. Mek said:
\'Ebbing
on waves of challenges that hit
the shore
though the mind, wished
to conquer the world
yet why
was soul, overwhelmed
why
was it, scared
*why-question\'s:
layered\'..
(wonderful in its abstract notes
while introducing such, realistically
everyday, themes and relatable ideas)
thanks for sharing, dear poet
January 11th, 2022 06:49
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