Comments received on poems by spilleronsheet
The king
Caring dove said:
Great ending lines spiller .
Good writing 🙂 the light and good should always win
January 19th, 2022 02:18
Caring dove said:
Great ending lines spiller .
Good writing 🙂 the light and good should always win
January 19th, 2022 02:18
The well
Goldfinch60 said:
Very intriguing write spilleronsheet, that well will revive with your words.
Andy
January 19th, 2022 01:58
Goldfinch60 said:
Very intriguing write spilleronsheet, that well will revive with your words.
Andy
January 19th, 2022 01:58
The well
Rozina said:
This gave me goosebumps. A wonderful spooky atmosphere. I love that dandelion seed at the end.
January 18th, 2022 21:17
Rozina said:
This gave me goosebumps. A wonderful spooky atmosphere. I love that dandelion seed at the end.
January 18th, 2022 21:17
The well
Neville said:
You have conjoured up so many possibilities here my mind is a riot with them .. from a psychoanalytical perspective, wells have a myriad of possible meanings ............ I simply love what you have done here & indeed to my imagination .................. N :) x
January 18th, 2022 17:23
Neville said:
You have conjoured up so many possibilities here my mind is a riot with them .. from a psychoanalytical perspective, wells have a myriad of possible meanings ............ I simply love what you have done here & indeed to my imagination .................. N :) x
January 18th, 2022 17:23
The well
Vamsi Sudha said:
Dear Spiller
Its Time the Well is \"Well\"
And its the best time to Tell
So here I foreTell :)
Good one and great visionary !! Its time you enter the field of screenplay too with your wonderful vision of events !! Good one Spiller as always !!
January 18th, 2022 14:09
Vamsi Sudha said:
Dear Spiller
Its Time the Well is \"Well\"
And its the best time to Tell
So here I foreTell :)
Good one and great visionary !! Its time you enter the field of screenplay too with your wonderful vision of events !! Good one Spiller as always !!
January 18th, 2022 14:09
The well
FallenAngel1🕊 said:
I couldn\'t help but to read this from a literal point of view,..I guess it\'s the urban explorer in me,..I\'ve been to abandoned places with old decaying wells. But something tells me this to be taken metiphorically,or maybe a little of both? Good imagery,..and reflective.😀✌️🕊
January 18th, 2022 12:51
FallenAngel1🕊 said:
I couldn\'t help but to read this from a literal point of view,..I guess it\'s the urban explorer in me,..I\'ve been to abandoned places with old decaying wells. But something tells me this to be taken metiphorically,or maybe a little of both? Good imagery,..and reflective.😀✌️🕊
January 18th, 2022 12:51
The one percent that matters
Paul Bell said:
I\'ve always loved medication, just sometimes saying buzzwords can have a relaxing feel about it. I\'ve just never managed to take it to a higher level, though I\'m still trying hard at it.
January 18th, 2022 10:58
Paul Bell said:
I\'ve always loved medication, just sometimes saying buzzwords can have a relaxing feel about it. I\'ve just never managed to take it to a higher level, though I\'m still trying hard at it.
January 18th, 2022 10:58
The one percent that matters
AuburnScribbler said:
Another masterful write here spilleronsheet.
Though it\'s clear, your poem leans towards the one vs. the many, when it comes to the \"crunch\" we are all in the same boat, and the way you remind us of that, particularly in the last two stanzas, is wonderfully achieved!
Bravo, and I hope that all is well!
January 18th, 2022 10:37
AuburnScribbler said:
Another masterful write here spilleronsheet.
Though it\'s clear, your poem leans towards the one vs. the many, when it comes to the \"crunch\" we are all in the same boat, and the way you remind us of that, particularly in the last two stanzas, is wonderfully achieved!
Bravo, and I hope that all is well!
January 18th, 2022 10:37
The one percent that matters
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good words spilleronsheet and that final stanza is so positive and that is the way life should be.
Andy
January 18th, 2022 01:49
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good words spilleronsheet and that final stanza is so positive and that is the way life should be.
Andy
January 18th, 2022 01:49
The one percent that matters
Rozina said:
Words that give me hope, thank you so much.
January 17th, 2022 22:52
Rozina said:
Words that give me hope, thank you so much.
January 17th, 2022 22:52
The one percent that matters
FallenAngel1🕊 said:
I\'ve tried meditation,but my mind always races with thoughts,..but I too am left with a little feeling of lightness from your words. Thanks🙂
January 17th, 2022 11:20
FallenAngel1🕊 said:
I\'ve tried meditation,but my mind always races with thoughts,..but I too am left with a little feeling of lightness from your words. Thanks🙂
January 17th, 2022 11:20
The one percent that matters
Neville said:
.. it works for me .. thanks for the nudge in the write direction .. left this page feeling a whole lot cleaner, better and generally lighter ... thank you ............... N x
January 17th, 2022 10:59
Neville said:
.. it works for me .. thanks for the nudge in the write direction .. left this page feeling a whole lot cleaner, better and generally lighter ... thank you ............... N x
January 17th, 2022 10:59
The one percent that matters
L. B. Mek said:
\'took
the dose of forgiveness
surpassed those;
those, negligent of pain
burned the letter
of fall and failures
took
the vaccine of ignorance
to those
needless criticisms
immune to blames
immune to stares\'..
write, ink it all out
till we can, distil any milk
as, an iota of a messy
theoretical, explanation
out of all
this abundance of senselessness
threatening, to drown-out
our sensibility\'s and sense...
(a great read, dear Poet
thank you)
January 17th, 2022 08:24
L. B. Mek said:
\'took
the dose of forgiveness
surpassed those;
those, negligent of pain
burned the letter
of fall and failures
took
the vaccine of ignorance
to those
needless criticisms
immune to blames
immune to stares\'..
write, ink it all out
till we can, distil any milk
as, an iota of a messy
theoretical, explanation
out of all
this abundance of senselessness
threatening, to drown-out
our sensibility\'s and sense...
(a great read, dear Poet
thank you)
January 17th, 2022 08:24
The one percent that matters
Fay Slimm. said:
What an inspiring read and thanking you more than you know for this posting Spills - -- every day is a sure gift to do with as we may.
January 17th, 2022 06:25
Fay Slimm. said:
What an inspiring read and thanking you more than you know for this posting Spills - -- every day is a sure gift to do with as we may.
January 17th, 2022 06:25
Unkind letter
Vamsi Sudha said:
Dear Spiller,
Your poems are so picturesque and its like you are at directing a movie. SO beautiful they fill my eyes completely. I really travel to the event many times. Very very unique of you, and the best lines of the poem ..
the hemlines of worries were closed
the blanket of hopes stitched
the pillows of reunion formed
and the bed sheet of luxury spread
thanks Spiller, Life is so beautiful with your poems !!!
January 16th, 2022 20:53
Vamsi Sudha said:
Dear Spiller,
Your poems are so picturesque and its like you are at directing a movie. SO beautiful they fill my eyes completely. I really travel to the event many times. Very very unique of you, and the best lines of the poem ..
the hemlines of worries were closed
the blanket of hopes stitched
the pillows of reunion formed
and the bed sheet of luxury spread
thanks Spiller, Life is so beautiful with your poems !!!
January 16th, 2022 20:53
Unkind letter
woundedheart said:
Very creative and very deep feeling throughout, wonderful my friend ☺
January 16th, 2022 17:02
woundedheart said:
Very creative and very deep feeling throughout, wonderful my friend ☺
January 16th, 2022 17:02
Unkind letter
Poetic Dan said:
Not sure where you took me but glad to be a part of it my friend. Keep sailing!
January 16th, 2022 13:37
Poetic Dan said:
Not sure where you took me but glad to be a part of it my friend. Keep sailing!
January 16th, 2022 13:37
Unkind letter
Caring dove said:
I love your writings recently , spiller 🙂
This is so engaging , and creative …
January 16th, 2022 12:14
Caring dove said:
I love your writings recently , spiller 🙂
This is so engaging , and creative …
January 16th, 2022 12:14
The lonely lane
Rozina said:
A sneeze, a cough, suddenly you\'re alone. The \'new world\'. Sad but true.
January 15th, 2022 23:51
Rozina said:
A sneeze, a cough, suddenly you\'re alone. The \'new world\'. Sad but true.
January 15th, 2022 23:51
The lonely lane
Neville said:
a serious message wrapped up in a laugh .. exceptionally of the moment spiller .. in fact, quite brilliant ... N
January 15th, 2022 13:35
Neville said:
a serious message wrapped up in a laugh .. exceptionally of the moment spiller .. in fact, quite brilliant ... N
January 15th, 2022 13:35
The lonely lane
Suman_Bhattacharya said:
\'no soul meets the eye\'
\'how could sneeze bring her out
out of memory lane\'
\"she wasn’t walking alone anymore\"
It was humorous may be....but got stuck to these lines....
\'no soul meets the eye\'.... it is so true in today\'s world my friend...
January 15th, 2022 12:14
Suman_Bhattacharya said:
\'no soul meets the eye\'
\'how could sneeze bring her out
out of memory lane\'
\"she wasn’t walking alone anymore\"
It was humorous may be....but got stuck to these lines....
\'no soul meets the eye\'.... it is so true in today\'s world my friend...
January 15th, 2022 12:14
The lonely lane
woundedheart said:
We are all so sanitised that we\'ve made ourselves targets for new germs, this is a lovely poem and a little sad as so true. ☺
January 15th, 2022 11:44
woundedheart said:
We are all so sanitised that we\'ve made ourselves targets for new germs, this is a lovely poem and a little sad as so true. ☺
January 15th, 2022 11:44
The lonely lane
FallenAngel1🕊 said:
Ah,ah,ah,ahhhchhhooooo Oh,sorry bout that😂 Funny write spiiler🍻
January 15th, 2022 11:42
FallenAngel1🕊 said:
Ah,ah,ah,ahhhchhhooooo Oh,sorry bout that😂 Funny write spiiler🍻
January 15th, 2022 11:42
Flowers are flowers, to grow and bloom
Paul Bell said:
It\'s like you see a flower in bloom, and the winter takes a back seat. Hopefully this is the year we all bloom.
January 14th, 2022 10:00
Paul Bell said:
It\'s like you see a flower in bloom, and the winter takes a back seat. Hopefully this is the year we all bloom.
January 14th, 2022 10:00
Flowers are flowers, to grow and bloom
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
\'full of blooming roses
in all its hues
pink, red, orange, white, yellow
defining the measure of bonds\'
January 14th, 2022 06:35
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
\'full of blooming roses
in all its hues
pink, red, orange, white, yellow
defining the measure of bonds\'
January 14th, 2022 06:35
Flowers are flowers, to grow and bloom
woundedheart said:
Oh so longing for spring and nature\'s return, this is astoundingly beautiful 💟
January 14th, 2022 05:17
woundedheart said:
Oh so longing for spring and nature\'s return, this is astoundingly beautiful 💟
January 14th, 2022 05:17
Flowers are flowers, to grow and bloom
dusk arising said:
Brought to mind the fields of huge coloured stripes i used to live close to where a commercial flower seller (Harry Wheatcroft) grew his plants. A sight to behold when in glorious bloom. Acres/hectares of glorious natural colour.
January 14th, 2022 05:16
dusk arising said:
Brought to mind the fields of huge coloured stripes i used to live close to where a commercial flower seller (Harry Wheatcroft) grew his plants. A sight to behold when in glorious bloom. Acres/hectares of glorious natural colour.
January 14th, 2022 05:16
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