Comments received on poems by spilleronsheet
The one percent that matters
FallenAngel1🕊 said:
I\'ve tried meditation,but my mind always races with thoughts,..but I too am left with a little feeling of lightness from your words. Thanks🙂
January 17th, 2022 11:20
FallenAngel1🕊 said:
I\'ve tried meditation,but my mind always races with thoughts,..but I too am left with a little feeling of lightness from your words. Thanks🙂
January 17th, 2022 11:20
The one percent that matters
Neville said:
.. it works for me .. thanks for the nudge in the write direction .. left this page feeling a whole lot cleaner, better and generally lighter ... thank you ............... N x
January 17th, 2022 10:59
Neville said:
.. it works for me .. thanks for the nudge in the write direction .. left this page feeling a whole lot cleaner, better and generally lighter ... thank you ............... N x
January 17th, 2022 10:59
The one percent that matters
L. B. Mek said:
\'took
the dose of forgiveness
surpassed those;
those, negligent of pain
burned the letter
of fall and failures
took
the vaccine of ignorance
to those
needless criticisms
immune to blames
immune to stares\'..
write, ink it all out
till we can, distil any milk
as, an iota of a messy
theoretical, explanation
out of all
this abundance of senselessness
threatening, to drown-out
our sensibility\'s and sense...
(a great read, dear Poet
thank you)
January 17th, 2022 08:24
L. B. Mek said:
\'took
the dose of forgiveness
surpassed those;
those, negligent of pain
burned the letter
of fall and failures
took
the vaccine of ignorance
to those
needless criticisms
immune to blames
immune to stares\'..
write, ink it all out
till we can, distil any milk
as, an iota of a messy
theoretical, explanation
out of all
this abundance of senselessness
threatening, to drown-out
our sensibility\'s and sense...
(a great read, dear Poet
thank you)
January 17th, 2022 08:24
The one percent that matters
Fay Slimm. said:
What an inspiring read and thanking you more than you know for this posting Spills - -- every day is a sure gift to do with as we may.
January 17th, 2022 06:25
Fay Slimm. said:
What an inspiring read and thanking you more than you know for this posting Spills - -- every day is a sure gift to do with as we may.
January 17th, 2022 06:25
Unkind letter
Vamsi Sudha said:
Dear Spiller,
Your poems are so picturesque and its like you are at directing a movie. SO beautiful they fill my eyes completely. I really travel to the event many times. Very very unique of you, and the best lines of the poem ..
the hemlines of worries were closed
the blanket of hopes stitched
the pillows of reunion formed
and the bed sheet of luxury spread
thanks Spiller, Life is so beautiful with your poems !!!
January 16th, 2022 20:53
Vamsi Sudha said:
Dear Spiller,
Your poems are so picturesque and its like you are at directing a movie. SO beautiful they fill my eyes completely. I really travel to the event many times. Very very unique of you, and the best lines of the poem ..
the hemlines of worries were closed
the blanket of hopes stitched
the pillows of reunion formed
and the bed sheet of luxury spread
thanks Spiller, Life is so beautiful with your poems !!!
January 16th, 2022 20:53
Unkind letter
woundedheart said:
Very creative and very deep feeling throughout, wonderful my friend ☺
January 16th, 2022 17:02
woundedheart said:
Very creative and very deep feeling throughout, wonderful my friend ☺
January 16th, 2022 17:02
Unkind letter
Poetic Dan said:
Not sure where you took me but glad to be a part of it my friend. Keep sailing!
January 16th, 2022 13:37
Poetic Dan said:
Not sure where you took me but glad to be a part of it my friend. Keep sailing!
January 16th, 2022 13:37
Unkind letter
Caring dove said:
I love your writings recently , spiller 🙂
This is so engaging , and creative …
January 16th, 2022 12:14
Caring dove said:
I love your writings recently , spiller 🙂
This is so engaging , and creative …
January 16th, 2022 12:14
The lonely lane
Rozina said:
A sneeze, a cough, suddenly you\'re alone. The \'new world\'. Sad but true.
January 15th, 2022 23:51
Rozina said:
A sneeze, a cough, suddenly you\'re alone. The \'new world\'. Sad but true.
January 15th, 2022 23:51
The lonely lane
Neville said:
a serious message wrapped up in a laugh .. exceptionally of the moment spiller .. in fact, quite brilliant ... N
January 15th, 2022 13:35
Neville said:
a serious message wrapped up in a laugh .. exceptionally of the moment spiller .. in fact, quite brilliant ... N
January 15th, 2022 13:35
The lonely lane
Suman_Bhattacharya said:
\'no soul meets the eye\'
\'how could sneeze bring her out
out of memory lane\'
\"she wasn’t walking alone anymore\"
It was humorous may be....but got stuck to these lines....
\'no soul meets the eye\'.... it is so true in today\'s world my friend...
January 15th, 2022 12:14
Suman_Bhattacharya said:
\'no soul meets the eye\'
\'how could sneeze bring her out
out of memory lane\'
\"she wasn’t walking alone anymore\"
It was humorous may be....but got stuck to these lines....
\'no soul meets the eye\'.... it is so true in today\'s world my friend...
January 15th, 2022 12:14
The lonely lane
woundedheart said:
We are all so sanitised that we\'ve made ourselves targets for new germs, this is a lovely poem and a little sad as so true. ☺
January 15th, 2022 11:44
woundedheart said:
We are all so sanitised that we\'ve made ourselves targets for new germs, this is a lovely poem and a little sad as so true. ☺
January 15th, 2022 11:44
The lonely lane
FallenAngel1🕊 said:
Ah,ah,ah,ahhhchhhooooo Oh,sorry bout that😂 Funny write spiiler🍻
January 15th, 2022 11:42
FallenAngel1🕊 said:
Ah,ah,ah,ahhhchhhooooo Oh,sorry bout that😂 Funny write spiiler🍻
January 15th, 2022 11:42
Flowers are flowers, to grow and bloom
Paul Bell said:
It\'s like you see a flower in bloom, and the winter takes a back seat. Hopefully this is the year we all bloom.
January 14th, 2022 10:00
Paul Bell said:
It\'s like you see a flower in bloom, and the winter takes a back seat. Hopefully this is the year we all bloom.
January 14th, 2022 10:00
Flowers are flowers, to grow and bloom
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
\'full of blooming roses
in all its hues
pink, red, orange, white, yellow
defining the measure of bonds\'
January 14th, 2022 06:35
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
\'full of blooming roses
in all its hues
pink, red, orange, white, yellow
defining the measure of bonds\'
January 14th, 2022 06:35
Flowers are flowers, to grow and bloom
woundedheart said:
Oh so longing for spring and nature\'s return, this is astoundingly beautiful 💟
January 14th, 2022 05:17
woundedheart said:
Oh so longing for spring and nature\'s return, this is astoundingly beautiful 💟
January 14th, 2022 05:17
Flowers are flowers, to grow and bloom
dusk arising said:
Brought to mind the fields of huge coloured stripes i used to live close to where a commercial flower seller (Harry Wheatcroft) grew his plants. A sight to behold when in glorious bloom. Acres/hectares of glorious natural colour.
January 14th, 2022 05:16
dusk arising said:
Brought to mind the fields of huge coloured stripes i used to live close to where a commercial flower seller (Harry Wheatcroft) grew his plants. A sight to behold when in glorious bloom. Acres/hectares of glorious natural colour.
January 14th, 2022 05:16
Flowers are flowers, to grow and bloom
Rozina said:
I can imagine all the beautiful flowers in all shapes and colours. Stunning!
January 14th, 2022 03:56
Rozina said:
I can imagine all the beautiful flowers in all shapes and colours. Stunning!
January 14th, 2022 03:56
Flowers are flowers, to grow and bloom
Caring dove said:
Beautiful poem , spiller .. love your words and I love flowers too 🌸🌸🌸
January 14th, 2022 02:36
Caring dove said:
Beautiful poem , spiller .. love your words and I love flowers too 🌸🌸🌸
January 14th, 2022 02:36
Flowers are flowers, to grow and bloom
Goldfinch60 said:
Mau those heirlooms be with us forever spilleronsheet.
Andy
January 14th, 2022 02:25
Goldfinch60 said:
Mau those heirlooms be with us forever spilleronsheet.
Andy
January 14th, 2022 02:25
Let the game begin
Vamsi Sudha said:
Dear Spiller, You started your game and please don\'t stop it...Let it go on...Wonderful interweave of words and notion !! Thanks for spilling such wonderful lines for us ...And looking for more from you !!
January 13th, 2022 08:26
Vamsi Sudha said:
Dear Spiller, You started your game and please don\'t stop it...Let it go on...Wonderful interweave of words and notion !! Thanks for spilling such wonderful lines for us ...And looking for more from you !!
January 13th, 2022 08:26
Let the game begin
woundedheart said:
If we have our health we are already winners better not to gamble on it and rather keep it safe. ☺
January 13th, 2022 07:12
woundedheart said:
If we have our health we are already winners better not to gamble on it and rather keep it safe. ☺
January 13th, 2022 07:12
Let the game begin
L. B. Mek said:
\'in race of reaching peak
don’t forget;
why you started please
the game started with caution
but, an over enthusiastic self
may ignore that crucial notion\'..
(another intriguing write
demonstrating some deep levels
of self-reflection and insight)
wording, may need slight refringent
but your poetry
is perfectly fine, just as it is
thanks for sharing, dear Poet
January 13th, 2022 06:21
L. B. Mek said:
\'in race of reaching peak
don’t forget;
why you started please
the game started with caution
but, an over enthusiastic self
may ignore that crucial notion\'..
(another intriguing write
demonstrating some deep levels
of self-reflection and insight)
wording, may need slight refringent
but your poetry
is perfectly fine, just as it is
thanks for sharing, dear Poet
January 13th, 2022 06:21
Let the game begin
AuburnScribbler said:
A fantastic poetical tale of caution and realisation here spilleronsheet.
I used to be a \"horse man\", but as you\'ve beautifully outlined in this poem, it\'s important to follow your own code of conduct/common sense, rather than follow the \"rules\" of their dangerous game.
Bravo, and I hope that all is well!
January 13th, 2022 04:42
AuburnScribbler said:
A fantastic poetical tale of caution and realisation here spilleronsheet.
I used to be a \"horse man\", but as you\'ve beautifully outlined in this poem, it\'s important to follow your own code of conduct/common sense, rather than follow the \"rules\" of their dangerous game.
Bravo, and I hope that all is well!
January 13th, 2022 04:42
Let the game begin
Saxon Crow said:
Very true Spiller and I hear your words. But my cynical nature always thinks that there\'s some one out there who knows the rules better than me haha
January 13th, 2022 03:46
Saxon Crow said:
Very true Spiller and I hear your words. But my cynical nature always thinks that there\'s some one out there who knows the rules better than me haha
January 13th, 2022 03:46
Let the game begin
Goldfinch60 said:
That last stanza is so very true spilleronsheet.
Andy
January 13th, 2022 02:46
Goldfinch60 said:
That last stanza is so very true spilleronsheet.
Andy
January 13th, 2022 02:46
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