Comments received on poems by spilleronsheet



A journey with deceptions
Rozina said:

It’s never easy. Inching forward bit by bit. Yes have a rest then on again. A wonderful message.

December 30th, 2021 02:05

Some truth better be untold
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:

Lovely words , spiller ) nice expression . And so true ! We are part of the universe ..

December 30th, 2021 01:51

Some truth better be untold
Goldfinch60 said:

We are all part of this vast universe, maybe just an iota but we are very important to those iotas around us.

Andy

December 30th, 2021 01:51

A journey with deceptions
Goldfinch60 said:

Very good and very true spilleronsheet but when you reach my age you can look back on your life and realise how well you have done to reach old age and have had a good life.

Andy

December 30th, 2021 01:29

A journey with deceptions
Vamsi Sudha said:

Dear Spiller !!
Sincerely I feel , passion when its at peak, the lonely journey is what matters.
REST , but don\'t RUST !!
Rest to Recharge, but don\'t Discharge
REST is a break between a great ending and a great beginning.

So Rest enough to Usher a New beginning !!!

December 29th, 2021 07:30

A journey with deceptions
Rainbow said:

Very nice poem well expressed .

December 29th, 2021 05:00

A journey with deceptions
dusk arising said:

Take a rest indeed and raise the questions.... is the road you are upon really the road for you.... is there more to be gained of life\'s riches by travelling a different road?

December 29th, 2021 04:58

A journey with deceptions
woundedheart said:

Looking forward to lockdown and an excuse to stay in bed lol. We all need to pause and reflect and not push our selves so hard its not a race it is a gentle stroll taking time to enjoy the veiw. Love this piece. 💜

December 29th, 2021 04:22

A journey with deceptions
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:

Brilliant spiller ! Very nicely expressed . One of my favourite poems from you 🙂

December 29th, 2021 03:56

A disease called overthinking
Rozina said:

I am also guilty of overthinking sometimes. Good lines.

December 29th, 2021 01:23

A disease called overthinking
woundedheart said:

We all over think our own problems and miss the simple solution of the lateral thinkers . Love your message. ☺

December 28th, 2021 14:47

A disease called overthinking
Goldfinch60 said:

Good words spilleronsheet, I always say to people “thinking is dangerous”.

Andy

December 28th, 2021 14:42

A disease called overthinking
Neville said:


you know its good when one\'s mental muscle begs for mercy & submits before the concluding full stop is placed ............................... perfectly spilt my friend ............. N

December 28th, 2021 13:00

A disease called overthinking
Paul Bell said:

Over thinker, self-conscious, and probably a million other traits.
It\'s a tough life that one, but lived by many. In saying that, when I\'m at the football I\'m usually over thinking how bad this lot are.

December 28th, 2021 12:03

A disease called overthinking
Vamsi Sudha said:

Dear Spiller, Awesome gripping one altogether. Your flow of words just grabs us into your world.
The medicine for overthinker is to enagage in an entirely new skill, or get into a new opportunity. The disease for sure cured :)
But pls keep thinking, else we would not get these masterpieces from you ......

December 28th, 2021 12:01

A disease called overthinking
orchidee said:

I \'think\' I will say it\'s a good poem. Doh! It\'s got me doing it now - overthinking, that is! lol.

December 28th, 2021 11:59

A disease called overthinking
dusk arising said:

Yep, I\'d gleefully go along with all that (I think LOL).

December 28th, 2021 11:40

A disease called overthinking
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:

Another great poem ! 🙂🙂especially like the ending verse …

Brilliant … nicely expressed , so engaging !

December 28th, 2021 11:20

Time a slave or master
Poetic Dan said:

Time is our own and you do marvels with yours! A true inspiration right down to the core leaving me with more words ready to explore!

What a delightful morning, thank you

December 28th, 2021 03:36

Wandering and searching, yet resting
Poetic Dan said:

Absolutely loved this from start to end! Thank you my friend

December 28th, 2021 03:28

Wandering and searching, yet resting
Goldfinch60 said:

May that march to peace soon be ended spilleronsheet and peace becomes the way of our world.

Andy

December 28th, 2021 02:08

Wandering and searching, yet resting
Rozina said:

So many unknowns, challenges to be faced. A great write.

December 27th, 2021 23:49

Wandering and searching, yet resting
woundedheart said:

Very nicely described emotional and deep. ☺

December 27th, 2021 16:53

Wandering and searching, yet resting
orchidee said:

Good write S.

December 27th, 2021 14:35

Wandering and searching, yet resting
Paul Bell said:

Ah, 2022. Will it be a Boris free year.
Will we grow more arms for more jabs?
Will we be covid free?
It\'s such an exciting thought, I\'m going down the pub to drink to it.
Ok, the pub is shut. Cooking sherry it is then.




December 27th, 2021 14:11

Wandering and searching, yet resting
Vamsi Sudha said:

An optimistic poem , and really likes these lines
\"A chaos outside
a melody inside
hearty it was
hearty it is

marching on its way to world peace…. \'

Yes !! inner peace should never be to pieces, whatever we are going through. That\'s the power which lies inherent in us, and its time you did tap that energy out..

Its time you shed out your old feathers and get a new flight like an Eagle. The sky is your limit..:)

Loved reading the lines again and again...Thanks Spiller...!!!



December 27th, 2021 13:14

Wandering and searching, yet resting
dusk arising said:

Your piece opens up like an adventure and closes with questions....
..... each will have their own honest resolution of those questions.......
...... for each one of us is the world, we cannot live for a better world unless we live that better world in our hearts right now, right here.

December 27th, 2021 10:03

Wandering and searching, yet resting
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:

Great words , spiller ! 🙂 such an engaging read .. nicely expressed , good flow too

December 27th, 2021 08:39

Time a slave or master
Vamsi Sudha said:

Dear Spiller, You did Spill your good beans today. A fine write and never knew how time tiptoed reading your poem. For a moment got absorbed in your Time. Wonderful and no wonder we are slaves of Time !!! :)

December 25th, 2021 21:53

Time a slave or master
Neville said:

I wish I had an answer but you pose such an age old question, I fear I will still be pondering when my last breath is drawn … x

December 25th, 2021 03:01



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