Comments received on poems by spilleronsheet
When journey is savoured more than goal
orchidee said:
Good write S.
Maybe in reaching some goals, we may say \'Hmm, what next? I\'ve arrived now!\'
January 10th, 2022 03:05
orchidee said:
Good write S.
Maybe in reaching some goals, we may say \'Hmm, what next? I\'ve arrived now!\'
January 10th, 2022 03:05
The shout of courage
woundedheart said:
Very insightful themed piece here my friend you capture the feeling and theme perfectly ☺
January 9th, 2022 12:50
woundedheart said:
Very insightful themed piece here my friend you capture the feeling and theme perfectly ☺
January 9th, 2022 12:50
The shout of courage
Poetic Dan said:
Wow...I didn\'t take a breath all the way down until the end and take intake honestly to me by surprise.
As if I\'d just be renewed, I am a star and I\'ll see you the other side off the moon!
Always a pleasure
January 9th, 2022 12:24
Poetic Dan said:
Wow...I didn\'t take a breath all the way down until the end and take intake honestly to me by surprise.
As if I\'d just be renewed, I am a star and I\'ll see you the other side off the moon!
Always a pleasure
January 9th, 2022 12:24
The shout of courage
Rozina said:
Inspiring. Yes we can do it. Thank you for sharing this very positive message with us.
January 9th, 2022 09:01
Rozina said:
Inspiring. Yes we can do it. Thank you for sharing this very positive message with us.
January 9th, 2022 09:01
The shout of courage
Vamsi Sudha said:
Dear Spiller !!
you did take the courage to shout your heart out !!
Its time you SHINE bright
And its time THINGS are all Right !!
Shine incessantly !!
January 9th, 2022 08:31
Vamsi Sudha said:
Dear Spiller !!
you did take the courage to shout your heart out !!
Its time you SHINE bright
And its time THINGS are all Right !!
Shine incessantly !!
January 9th, 2022 08:31
The shout of courage
Goldfinch60 said:
We shall always survive in our wonderful life spilleronsheet.
Andy
January 8th, 2022 14:36
Goldfinch60 said:
We shall always survive in our wonderful life spilleronsheet.
Andy
January 8th, 2022 14:36
The shout of courage
orchidee said:
I\'m gonna sing, not shout! Agghhh, Oh nooooo, they say! heehee.
Well, I might shout too! lol.
January 8th, 2022 14:23
orchidee said:
I\'m gonna sing, not shout! Agghhh, Oh nooooo, they say! heehee.
Well, I might shout too! lol.
January 8th, 2022 14:23
The shout of courage
Caring dove said:
Such great words … loving your poems recently ! 🙂🙂
January 8th, 2022 12:31
Caring dove said:
Such great words … loving your poems recently ! 🙂🙂
January 8th, 2022 12:31
The shout of courage
Paul Bell said:
Generally in Britain, they build you up, and then they knock you down.
It really does take a thick skin these days to survive in the jungle.
January 8th, 2022 11:26
Paul Bell said:
Generally in Britain, they build you up, and then they knock you down.
It really does take a thick skin these days to survive in the jungle.
January 8th, 2022 11:26
The shout of courage
FallenAngel1🕊 said:
I love this. Such a strong message,..I\'d like to go on but I\'m pressed for time,just dropped in to see what condition my condition was in,lol great one🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟
January 8th, 2022 11:12
FallenAngel1🕊 said:
I love this. Such a strong message,..I\'d like to go on but I\'m pressed for time,just dropped in to see what condition my condition was in,lol great one🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟
January 8th, 2022 11:12
Where are you Mr. Sun
Suman_Bhattacharya said:
To me, the poetry appeared to be several short events woven into one... truly a nice read...thank you
January 8th, 2022 00:08
Suman_Bhattacharya said:
To me, the poetry appeared to be several short events woven into one... truly a nice read...thank you
January 8th, 2022 00:08
Where are you Mr. Sun
Garth Rakumakoe said:
A charming and beautiful way with words dear writer. You carved out a beautiful piece with your pen there. A favorite!🤞🏼
January 7th, 2022 23:50
Garth Rakumakoe said:
A charming and beautiful way with words dear writer. You carved out a beautiful piece with your pen there. A favorite!🤞🏼
January 7th, 2022 23:50
Where are you Mr. Sun
Saxon Crow said:
What an imagery of feeling here Spiller. Very enjoyable poem
January 7th, 2022 11:04
Saxon Crow said:
What an imagery of feeling here Spiller. Very enjoyable poem
January 7th, 2022 11:04
Where are you Mr. Sun
CuteCrescent said:
the way you rhymed it all throughout the poem is amazing spiller. keep it up. you are amazing🤩🤩🤩
January 7th, 2022 08:08
CuteCrescent said:
the way you rhymed it all throughout the poem is amazing spiller. keep it up. you are amazing🤩🤩🤩
January 7th, 2022 08:08
Where are you Mr. Sun
L. B. Mek said:
\'alas
the sun wasn’t around
merry-go-round\'s, wondered
in crowd
Will it screech, on ground
The rooster ran
ran, in dismay
*for
there was no sun to greet
*that, day\'
(subtly, deep
and measured in its questing
for answers
to life\'s, greater
wonder\'s..
a really enjoyable read
especially liked your use of spacing and stanza breaks
to aid your flow
and highlight key, meaningful points)
an impressive first read of the year from you, dear Poet
thank you for choosing to share
your poetic journey with us
it\'s a privilege to read your poetic growth
January 7th, 2022 06:28
L. B. Mek said:
\'alas
the sun wasn’t around
merry-go-round\'s, wondered
in crowd
Will it screech, on ground
The rooster ran
ran, in dismay
*for
there was no sun to greet
*that, day\'
(subtly, deep
and measured in its questing
for answers
to life\'s, greater
wonder\'s..
a really enjoyable read
especially liked your use of spacing and stanza breaks
to aid your flow
and highlight key, meaningful points)
an impressive first read of the year from you, dear Poet
thank you for choosing to share
your poetic journey with us
it\'s a privilege to read your poetic growth
January 7th, 2022 06:28
Where are you Mr. Sun
AuburnScribbler said:
A wonderful written poetic plea here spillersonsheet, you paint a great scene with your words.
It may surprise you, I\'m a ginger, but I am a fan of the sun, so, sometimes when it\'s not shining as it should, I get a little miffed just like you do!
Bravo, and I hope that all is well!
January 7th, 2022 05:48
AuburnScribbler said:
A wonderful written poetic plea here spillersonsheet, you paint a great scene with your words.
It may surprise you, I\'m a ginger, but I am a fan of the sun, so, sometimes when it\'s not shining as it should, I get a little miffed just like you do!
Bravo, and I hope that all is well!
January 7th, 2022 05:48
Where are you Mr. Sun
woundedheart said:
This is England we don\'t get sunshine lol we are evolved from ducks to weather the rain. ☺
January 7th, 2022 04:58
woundedheart said:
This is England we don\'t get sunshine lol we are evolved from ducks to weather the rain. ☺
January 7th, 2022 04:58
Where are you Mr. Sun
Rozina said:
Which strain is the sun\'s corona?! Hope the sun shines soon and brings some warmth.
January 7th, 2022 03:39
Rozina said:
Which strain is the sun\'s corona?! Hope the sun shines soon and brings some warmth.
January 7th, 2022 03:39
Where are you Mr. Sun
Caring dove said:
Brilliant words , spiller 🙂 I found myself smiling a little as reading this ,
So many great lines . Loving the personification in this…
January 7th, 2022 01:47
Caring dove said:
Brilliant words , spiller 🙂 I found myself smiling a little as reading this ,
So many great lines . Loving the personification in this…
January 7th, 2022 01:47
Cold are the days
Garth Rakumakoe said:
Each season has its own special meaning to the heart, doesn\'t it? Very well captured dear writer. The sentiment is truly felt.
January 6th, 2022 04:40
Garth Rakumakoe said:
Each season has its own special meaning to the heart, doesn\'t it? Very well captured dear writer. The sentiment is truly felt.
January 6th, 2022 04:40
Cold are the days
Goldfinch60 said:
It may be cold but the warmth inside us can fulfil all our dreams.
Andy
January 6th, 2022 01:37
Goldfinch60 said:
It may be cold but the warmth inside us can fulfil all our dreams.
Andy
January 6th, 2022 01:37
Cold are the days
Rozina said:
I can visualise so many scenes from your cold poem. I don\'t experience this in my country but I would love to, for short while.
January 6th, 2022 00:58
Rozina said:
I can visualise so many scenes from your cold poem. I don\'t experience this in my country but I would love to, for short while.
January 6th, 2022 00:58
Cold are the days
Paul Bell said:
We are a nation of moaners.
Too hot, too cold, horizontal rain, snow. We can\'t cope with snow.
If moaning was an Olympic sport, we\'re gold all the way.
January 5th, 2022 13:40
Paul Bell said:
We are a nation of moaners.
Too hot, too cold, horizontal rain, snow. We can\'t cope with snow.
If moaning was an Olympic sport, we\'re gold all the way.
January 5th, 2022 13:40
Cold are the days
woundedheart said:
Winter is beautiful and yet demonstrates the truth force of nature transmuting water to ice rain to snow wind to blades that cut to the marrow, beautifully penned ☺
January 5th, 2022 13:26
woundedheart said:
Winter is beautiful and yet demonstrates the truth force of nature transmuting water to ice rain to snow wind to blades that cut to the marrow, beautifully penned ☺
January 5th, 2022 13:26
The cycle of life
Goldfinch60 said:
That cycle of life can give us so very much to be grateful for spilleronsheet, enjoy every moment of it.
Andy
January 5th, 2022 01:42
Goldfinch60 said:
That cycle of life can give us so very much to be grateful for spilleronsheet, enjoy every moment of it.
Andy
January 5th, 2022 01:42
The cycle of life
Fay Slimm. said:
Yes dear spills - You cornered the truth about us all being fated and meanwhile may our choices be mixed with endurance and hope that life in 2022 throws better deals.
January 4th, 2022 16:51
Fay Slimm. said:
Yes dear spills - You cornered the truth about us all being fated and meanwhile may our choices be mixed with endurance and hope that life in 2022 throws better deals.
January 4th, 2022 16:51
The cycle of life
dusk arising said:
Life, comparable to riding upon a leaf atop a gentle stream current. How could the weather become such a threat to this bliss. On which day will the storm ride in from the ocean? Should we worry.... or enjoy the blissful ride.
January 4th, 2022 15:09
dusk arising said:
Life, comparable to riding upon a leaf atop a gentle stream current. How could the weather become such a threat to this bliss. On which day will the storm ride in from the ocean? Should we worry.... or enjoy the blissful ride.
January 4th, 2022 15:09
The cycle of life
Poetic Dan said:
Fantastic ending and a journey well written thank you for your unique expression!
January 4th, 2022 11:05
Poetic Dan said:
Fantastic ending and a journey well written thank you for your unique expression!
January 4th, 2022 11:05
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