Comments received on poems by spilleronsheet
Where are you Mr. Sun
Garth Rakumakoe said:
A charming and beautiful way with words dear writer. You carved out a beautiful piece with your pen there. A favorite!🤞🏼
January 7th, 2022 23:50
Garth Rakumakoe said:
A charming and beautiful way with words dear writer. You carved out a beautiful piece with your pen there. A favorite!🤞🏼
January 7th, 2022 23:50
Where are you Mr. Sun
Saxon Crow said:
What an imagery of feeling here Spiller. Very enjoyable poem
January 7th, 2022 11:04
Saxon Crow said:
What an imagery of feeling here Spiller. Very enjoyable poem
January 7th, 2022 11:04
Where are you Mr. Sun
CuteCrescent said:
the way you rhymed it all throughout the poem is amazing spiller. keep it up. you are amazing🤩🤩🤩
January 7th, 2022 08:08
CuteCrescent said:
the way you rhymed it all throughout the poem is amazing spiller. keep it up. you are amazing🤩🤩🤩
January 7th, 2022 08:08
Where are you Mr. Sun
L. B. Mek said:
\'alas
the sun wasn’t around
merry-go-round\'s, wondered
in crowd
Will it screech, on ground
The rooster ran
ran, in dismay
*for
there was no sun to greet
*that, day\'
(subtly, deep
and measured in its questing
for answers
to life\'s, greater
wonder\'s..
a really enjoyable read
especially liked your use of spacing and stanza breaks
to aid your flow
and highlight key, meaningful points)
an impressive first read of the year from you, dear Poet
thank you for choosing to share
your poetic journey with us
it\'s a privilege to read your poetic growth
January 7th, 2022 06:28
L. B. Mek said:
\'alas
the sun wasn’t around
merry-go-round\'s, wondered
in crowd
Will it screech, on ground
The rooster ran
ran, in dismay
*for
there was no sun to greet
*that, day\'
(subtly, deep
and measured in its questing
for answers
to life\'s, greater
wonder\'s..
a really enjoyable read
especially liked your use of spacing and stanza breaks
to aid your flow
and highlight key, meaningful points)
an impressive first read of the year from you, dear Poet
thank you for choosing to share
your poetic journey with us
it\'s a privilege to read your poetic growth
January 7th, 2022 06:28
Where are you Mr. Sun
AuburnScribbler said:
A wonderful written poetic plea here spillersonsheet, you paint a great scene with your words.
It may surprise you, I\'m a ginger, but I am a fan of the sun, so, sometimes when it\'s not shining as it should, I get a little miffed just like you do!
Bravo, and I hope that all is well!
January 7th, 2022 05:48
AuburnScribbler said:
A wonderful written poetic plea here spillersonsheet, you paint a great scene with your words.
It may surprise you, I\'m a ginger, but I am a fan of the sun, so, sometimes when it\'s not shining as it should, I get a little miffed just like you do!
Bravo, and I hope that all is well!
January 7th, 2022 05:48
Where are you Mr. Sun
woundedheart said:
This is England we don\'t get sunshine lol we are evolved from ducks to weather the rain. ☺
January 7th, 2022 04:58
woundedheart said:
This is England we don\'t get sunshine lol we are evolved from ducks to weather the rain. ☺
January 7th, 2022 04:58
Where are you Mr. Sun
Rozina said:
Which strain is the sun\'s corona?! Hope the sun shines soon and brings some warmth.
January 7th, 2022 03:39
Rozina said:
Which strain is the sun\'s corona?! Hope the sun shines soon and brings some warmth.
January 7th, 2022 03:39
Where are you Mr. Sun
Caring dove said:
Brilliant words , spiller 🙂 I found myself smiling a little as reading this ,
So many great lines . Loving the personification in this…
January 7th, 2022 01:47
Caring dove said:
Brilliant words , spiller 🙂 I found myself smiling a little as reading this ,
So many great lines . Loving the personification in this…
January 7th, 2022 01:47
Cold are the days
Garth Rakumakoe said:
Each season has its own special meaning to the heart, doesn\'t it? Very well captured dear writer. The sentiment is truly felt.
January 6th, 2022 04:40
Garth Rakumakoe said:
Each season has its own special meaning to the heart, doesn\'t it? Very well captured dear writer. The sentiment is truly felt.
January 6th, 2022 04:40
Cold are the days
Goldfinch60 said:
It may be cold but the warmth inside us can fulfil all our dreams.
Andy
January 6th, 2022 01:37
Goldfinch60 said:
It may be cold but the warmth inside us can fulfil all our dreams.
Andy
January 6th, 2022 01:37
Cold are the days
Rozina said:
I can visualise so many scenes from your cold poem. I don\'t experience this in my country but I would love to, for short while.
January 6th, 2022 00:58
Rozina said:
I can visualise so many scenes from your cold poem. I don\'t experience this in my country but I would love to, for short while.
January 6th, 2022 00:58
Cold are the days
Paul Bell said:
We are a nation of moaners.
Too hot, too cold, horizontal rain, snow. We can\'t cope with snow.
If moaning was an Olympic sport, we\'re gold all the way.
January 5th, 2022 13:40
Paul Bell said:
We are a nation of moaners.
Too hot, too cold, horizontal rain, snow. We can\'t cope with snow.
If moaning was an Olympic sport, we\'re gold all the way.
January 5th, 2022 13:40
Cold are the days
woundedheart said:
Winter is beautiful and yet demonstrates the truth force of nature transmuting water to ice rain to snow wind to blades that cut to the marrow, beautifully penned ☺
January 5th, 2022 13:26
woundedheart said:
Winter is beautiful and yet demonstrates the truth force of nature transmuting water to ice rain to snow wind to blades that cut to the marrow, beautifully penned ☺
January 5th, 2022 13:26
The cycle of life
Goldfinch60 said:
That cycle of life can give us so very much to be grateful for spilleronsheet, enjoy every moment of it.
Andy
January 5th, 2022 01:42
Goldfinch60 said:
That cycle of life can give us so very much to be grateful for spilleronsheet, enjoy every moment of it.
Andy
January 5th, 2022 01:42
The cycle of life
Fay Slimm. said:
Yes dear spills - You cornered the truth about us all being fated and meanwhile may our choices be mixed with endurance and hope that life in 2022 throws better deals.
January 4th, 2022 16:51
Fay Slimm. said:
Yes dear spills - You cornered the truth about us all being fated and meanwhile may our choices be mixed with endurance and hope that life in 2022 throws better deals.
January 4th, 2022 16:51
The cycle of life
dusk arising said:
Life, comparable to riding upon a leaf atop a gentle stream current. How could the weather become such a threat to this bliss. On which day will the storm ride in from the ocean? Should we worry.... or enjoy the blissful ride.
January 4th, 2022 15:09
dusk arising said:
Life, comparable to riding upon a leaf atop a gentle stream current. How could the weather become such a threat to this bliss. On which day will the storm ride in from the ocean? Should we worry.... or enjoy the blissful ride.
January 4th, 2022 15:09
The cycle of life
Poetic Dan said:
Fantastic ending and a journey well written thank you for your unique expression!
January 4th, 2022 11:05
Poetic Dan said:
Fantastic ending and a journey well written thank you for your unique expression!
January 4th, 2022 11:05
Watch out for and look out for
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good words spilleronsheet.
Andy
January 4th, 2022 01:36
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good words spilleronsheet.
Andy
January 4th, 2022 01:36
Watch out for and look out for
Rozina said:
Ups and downs of life but always trying to find something positive. Strong beautiful message.
January 3rd, 2022 22:23
Rozina said:
Ups and downs of life but always trying to find something positive. Strong beautiful message.
January 3rd, 2022 22:23
Motivation, what it is to sleepy eyes?
Poetic Dan said:
You\'ve just reminded me to put a new little ribbon on my front door.... did a poem a few years back
It\'s for the kids and me lol to leave our worries behind and let magical ribbon lighten our loads ;)
Fantastic stuff!
January 3rd, 2022 15:50
Poetic Dan said:
You\'ve just reminded me to put a new little ribbon on my front door.... did a poem a few years back
It\'s for the kids and me lol to leave our worries behind and let magical ribbon lighten our loads ;)
Fantastic stuff!
January 3rd, 2022 15:50
Watch out for and look out for
Fay Slimm. said:
I love your use of metaphor in this little warning of what might arise - - my favourite phrase has to be - -
\"keep writing the beautiful laughs
store and keep them in chits
n the jar called life \" - -oh I must save this lovely read spills.
January 3rd, 2022 13:47
Fay Slimm. said:
I love your use of metaphor in this little warning of what might arise - - my favourite phrase has to be - -
\"keep writing the beautiful laughs
store and keep them in chits
n the jar called life \" - -oh I must save this lovely read spills.
January 3rd, 2022 13:47
Watch out for and look out for
Neville said:
food for thought .. I\'m fit to burst but happy having had my fill of a rainbow shared .............................................. N
January 3rd, 2022 13:30
Neville said:
food for thought .. I\'m fit to burst but happy having had my fill of a rainbow shared .............................................. N
January 3rd, 2022 13:30
Watch out for and look out for
Caring dove said:
Wow … such strong creative words , spiller ! Love this … 🙂🙂
January 3rd, 2022 13:01
Caring dove said:
Wow … such strong creative words , spiller ! Love this … 🙂🙂
January 3rd, 2022 13:01
Watch out for and look out for
Paul Bell said:
2020, thank god that\'s over.
2021, thank god that\'s over.
Okay, 2022, I\'m going all out positive.
Green glares, red satires, bring it on.
January 3rd, 2022 11:01
Paul Bell said:
2020, thank god that\'s over.
2021, thank god that\'s over.
Okay, 2022, I\'m going all out positive.
Green glares, red satires, bring it on.
January 3rd, 2022 11:01
Watch out for and look out for
dusk arising said:
A lesson maybe in conversion therapy..... from every negative thought a positive can be developed.
January 3rd, 2022 10:19
dusk arising said:
A lesson maybe in conversion therapy..... from every negative thought a positive can be developed.
January 3rd, 2022 10:19
Motivation, what it is to sleepy eyes?
Goldfinch60 said:
That motivation was there at one time but now in retirement the only motivation I need it to see the next day.
Andy
January 3rd, 2022 01:29
Goldfinch60 said:
That motivation was there at one time but now in retirement the only motivation I need it to see the next day.
Andy
January 3rd, 2022 01:29
Motivation, what it is to sleepy eyes?
Rozina said:
Sometimes there is no choice. A struggle but may be worthwhile. Happy New Year, hopefully an easier year.
January 2nd, 2022 21:58
Rozina said:
Sometimes there is no choice. A struggle but may be worthwhile. Happy New Year, hopefully an easier year.
January 2nd, 2022 21:58
Motivation, what it is to sleepy eyes?
dusk arising said:
Hmm once life was like that until i became my own boss.... life then became an adventure..... I\'m reflecting now upon the stages of life for ive moved on from a mature adventure frame of mind and into a relaxed laid back self repairing state but with still a glint in the eye for tomorrows quests... gently goes it
It\'s always good to be traken on a mini mind trip by someone elses poetry.... see what you did....
January 2nd, 2022 16:58
dusk arising said:
Hmm once life was like that until i became my own boss.... life then became an adventure..... I\'m reflecting now upon the stages of life for ive moved on from a mature adventure frame of mind and into a relaxed laid back self repairing state but with still a glint in the eye for tomorrows quests... gently goes it
It\'s always good to be traken on a mini mind trip by someone elses poetry.... see what you did....
January 2nd, 2022 16:58
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