Comments received on poems by spilleronsheet
A journey with deceptions
Caring dove said:
Brilliant spiller ! Very nicely expressed . One of my favourite poems from you 🙂
December 29th, 2021 03:56
Caring dove said:
Brilliant spiller ! Very nicely expressed . One of my favourite poems from you 🙂
December 29th, 2021 03:56
A disease called overthinking
Rozina said:
I am also guilty of overthinking sometimes. Good lines.
December 29th, 2021 01:23
Rozina said:
I am also guilty of overthinking sometimes. Good lines.
December 29th, 2021 01:23
A disease called overthinking
woundedheart said:
We all over think our own problems and miss the simple solution of the lateral thinkers . Love your message. ☺
December 28th, 2021 14:47
woundedheart said:
We all over think our own problems and miss the simple solution of the lateral thinkers . Love your message. ☺
December 28th, 2021 14:47
A disease called overthinking
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words spilleronsheet, I always say to people “thinking is dangerous”.
Andy
December 28th, 2021 14:42
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words spilleronsheet, I always say to people “thinking is dangerous”.
Andy
December 28th, 2021 14:42
A disease called overthinking
Neville said:
you know its good when one\'s mental muscle begs for mercy & submits before the concluding full stop is placed ............................... perfectly spilt my friend ............. N
December 28th, 2021 13:00
Neville said:
you know its good when one\'s mental muscle begs for mercy & submits before the concluding full stop is placed ............................... perfectly spilt my friend ............. N
December 28th, 2021 13:00
A disease called overthinking
Paul Bell said:
Over thinker, self-conscious, and probably a million other traits.
It\'s a tough life that one, but lived by many. In saying that, when I\'m at the football I\'m usually over thinking how bad this lot are.
December 28th, 2021 12:03
Paul Bell said:
Over thinker, self-conscious, and probably a million other traits.
It\'s a tough life that one, but lived by many. In saying that, when I\'m at the football I\'m usually over thinking how bad this lot are.
December 28th, 2021 12:03
A disease called overthinking
Vamsi Sudha said:
Dear Spiller, Awesome gripping one altogether. Your flow of words just grabs us into your world.
The medicine for overthinker is to enagage in an entirely new skill, or get into a new opportunity. The disease for sure cured :)
But pls keep thinking, else we would not get these masterpieces from you ......
December 28th, 2021 12:01
Vamsi Sudha said:
Dear Spiller, Awesome gripping one altogether. Your flow of words just grabs us into your world.
The medicine for overthinker is to enagage in an entirely new skill, or get into a new opportunity. The disease for sure cured :)
But pls keep thinking, else we would not get these masterpieces from you ......
December 28th, 2021 12:01
A disease called overthinking
orchidee said:
I \'think\' I will say it\'s a good poem. Doh! It\'s got me doing it now - overthinking, that is! lol.
December 28th, 2021 11:59
orchidee said:
I \'think\' I will say it\'s a good poem. Doh! It\'s got me doing it now - overthinking, that is! lol.
December 28th, 2021 11:59
A disease called overthinking
dusk arising said:
Yep, I\'d gleefully go along with all that (I think LOL).
December 28th, 2021 11:40
dusk arising said:
Yep, I\'d gleefully go along with all that (I think LOL).
December 28th, 2021 11:40
A disease called overthinking
Caring dove said:
Another great poem ! 🙂🙂especially like the ending verse …
Brilliant … nicely expressed , so engaging !
December 28th, 2021 11:20
Caring dove said:
Another great poem ! 🙂🙂especially like the ending verse …
Brilliant … nicely expressed , so engaging !
December 28th, 2021 11:20
Time a slave or master
Poetic Dan said:
Time is our own and you do marvels with yours! A true inspiration right down to the core leaving me with more words ready to explore!
What a delightful morning, thank you
December 28th, 2021 03:36
Poetic Dan said:
Time is our own and you do marvels with yours! A true inspiration right down to the core leaving me with more words ready to explore!
What a delightful morning, thank you
December 28th, 2021 03:36
Wandering and searching, yet resting
Poetic Dan said:
Absolutely loved this from start to end! Thank you my friend
December 28th, 2021 03:28
Poetic Dan said:
Absolutely loved this from start to end! Thank you my friend
December 28th, 2021 03:28
Wandering and searching, yet resting
Goldfinch60 said:
May that march to peace soon be ended spilleronsheet and peace becomes the way of our world.
Andy
December 28th, 2021 02:08
Goldfinch60 said:
May that march to peace soon be ended spilleronsheet and peace becomes the way of our world.
Andy
December 28th, 2021 02:08
Wandering and searching, yet resting
Rozina said:
So many unknowns, challenges to be faced. A great write.
December 27th, 2021 23:49
Rozina said:
So many unknowns, challenges to be faced. A great write.
December 27th, 2021 23:49
Wandering and searching, yet resting
woundedheart said:
Very nicely described emotional and deep. ☺
December 27th, 2021 16:53
woundedheart said:
Very nicely described emotional and deep. ☺
December 27th, 2021 16:53
Wandering and searching, yet resting
Paul Bell said:
Ah, 2022. Will it be a Boris free year.
Will we grow more arms for more jabs?
Will we be covid free?
It\'s such an exciting thought, I\'m going down the pub to drink to it.
Ok, the pub is shut. Cooking sherry it is then.
December 27th, 2021 14:11
Paul Bell said:
Ah, 2022. Will it be a Boris free year.
Will we grow more arms for more jabs?
Will we be covid free?
It\'s such an exciting thought, I\'m going down the pub to drink to it.
Ok, the pub is shut. Cooking sherry it is then.
December 27th, 2021 14:11
Wandering and searching, yet resting
Vamsi Sudha said:
An optimistic poem , and really likes these lines
\"A chaos outside
a melody inside
hearty it was
hearty it is
marching on its way to world peace…. \'
Yes !! inner peace should never be to pieces, whatever we are going through. That\'s the power which lies inherent in us, and its time you did tap that energy out..
Its time you shed out your old feathers and get a new flight like an Eagle. The sky is your limit..:)
Loved reading the lines again and again...Thanks Spiller...!!!
December 27th, 2021 13:14
Vamsi Sudha said:
An optimistic poem , and really likes these lines
\"A chaos outside
a melody inside
hearty it was
hearty it is
marching on its way to world peace…. \'
Yes !! inner peace should never be to pieces, whatever we are going through. That\'s the power which lies inherent in us, and its time you did tap that energy out..
Its time you shed out your old feathers and get a new flight like an Eagle. The sky is your limit..:)
Loved reading the lines again and again...Thanks Spiller...!!!
December 27th, 2021 13:14
Wandering and searching, yet resting
dusk arising said:
Your piece opens up like an adventure and closes with questions....
..... each will have their own honest resolution of those questions.......
...... for each one of us is the world, we cannot live for a better world unless we live that better world in our hearts right now, right here.
December 27th, 2021 10:03
dusk arising said:
Your piece opens up like an adventure and closes with questions....
..... each will have their own honest resolution of those questions.......
...... for each one of us is the world, we cannot live for a better world unless we live that better world in our hearts right now, right here.
December 27th, 2021 10:03
Wandering and searching, yet resting
Caring dove said:
Great words , spiller ! 🙂 such an engaging read .. nicely expressed , good flow too
December 27th, 2021 08:39
Caring dove said:
Great words , spiller ! 🙂 such an engaging read .. nicely expressed , good flow too
December 27th, 2021 08:39
Time a slave or master
Vamsi Sudha said:
Dear Spiller, You did Spill your good beans today. A fine write and never knew how time tiptoed reading your poem. For a moment got absorbed in your Time. Wonderful and no wonder we are slaves of Time !!! :)
December 25th, 2021 21:53
Vamsi Sudha said:
Dear Spiller, You did Spill your good beans today. A fine write and never knew how time tiptoed reading your poem. For a moment got absorbed in your Time. Wonderful and no wonder we are slaves of Time !!! :)
December 25th, 2021 21:53
Time a slave or master
Neville said:
I wish I had an answer but you pose such an age old question, I fear I will still be pondering when my last breath is drawn … x
December 25th, 2021 03:01
Neville said:
I wish I had an answer but you pose such an age old question, I fear I will still be pondering when my last breath is drawn … x
December 25th, 2021 03:01
Sheep or blacksheep
Neville said:
I am proud to be the black sheep in a flock of polar opposites …. 👍😎❣️
December 25th, 2021 03:01
Neville said:
I am proud to be the black sheep in a flock of polar opposites …. 👍😎❣️
December 25th, 2021 03:01
Time a slave or master
Nilanjana Singh said:
Time and the life are two best teachers. Life teaches us to make good use of time and time teaches us the value of life..... Thanks Dear Spills for sharing such a beautiful poem.
December 25th, 2021 00:22
Nilanjana Singh said:
Time and the life are two best teachers. Life teaches us to make good use of time and time teaches us the value of life..... Thanks Dear Spills for sharing such a beautiful poem.
December 25th, 2021 00:22
Sheep or blacksheep
Neville said:
I am proud to be the black sheep in a flock of polar opposites …. 👍😎❣️
December 24th, 2021 16:53
Neville said:
I am proud to be the black sheep in a flock of polar opposites …. 👍😎❣️
December 24th, 2021 16:53
Time a slave or master
Neville said:
I wish I had an answer but you pose such an age old question, I fear I will still be pondering when my last breath is drawn … x
December 24th, 2021 16:33
Neville said:
I wish I had an answer but you pose such an age old question, I fear I will still be pondering when my last breath is drawn … x
December 24th, 2021 16:33
Time a slave or master
woundedheart said:
Time is an illusion a mere marketing trick invented by those clever Swiss cookoo clock makers lol. Very deep piece makes one pause and think. Merry Christmas 🎅
December 24th, 2021 05:49
woundedheart said:
Time is an illusion a mere marketing trick invented by those clever Swiss cookoo clock makers lol. Very deep piece makes one pause and think. Merry Christmas 🎅
December 24th, 2021 05:49
Time a slave or master
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
You\'ve done so well
to ink your concept, so accessible
and worded so poetically, relatable
showing real growth in your spacing and natural flow;
a fantastic execution
of a testing, theoretical dialectic
written with, practised ease
of a Poet, full of ambition
to share
to explore
to Perfect
his chosen Art...
Happy Holidays, my friend
December 24th, 2021 05:24
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
You\'ve done so well
to ink your concept, so accessible
and worded so poetically, relatable
showing real growth in your spacing and natural flow;
a fantastic execution
of a testing, theoretical dialectic
written with, practised ease
of a Poet, full of ambition
to share
to explore
to Perfect
his chosen Art...
Happy Holidays, my friend
December 24th, 2021 05:24
Time a slave or master
Paul Bell said:
Spot on, the heart, the engine room.
I think all hearts run on delayed time, never looking too far into the future, and rightly so, something so delicate may stop at any time.
December 24th, 2021 05:16
Paul Bell said:
Spot on, the heart, the engine room.
I think all hearts run on delayed time, never looking too far into the future, and rightly so, something so delicate may stop at any time.
December 24th, 2021 05:16
Time a slave or master
dusk arising said:
Where does the time go?
A poem of this enigmatic ever driving force posing unanswerable questions for us to juggle. Reminding us elders perhaps how time can be seen as ruin of so much as it passed over things we held beautiful now gone or decayed.
December 24th, 2021 05:04
dusk arising said:
Where does the time go?
A poem of this enigmatic ever driving force posing unanswerable questions for us to juggle. Reminding us elders perhaps how time can be seen as ruin of so much as it passed over things we held beautiful now gone or decayed.
December 24th, 2021 05:04
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