Comments received on poems by spilleronsheet
Reel may not be real
Coyote said:
Never too late. This is an awesome write S. Very impressive🙂
December 19th, 2021 12:48
Coyote said:
Never too late. This is an awesome write S. Very impressive🙂
December 19th, 2021 12:48
Sheep or blacksheep
Paul Bell said:
Does the black sheep ever want to be just a sheep, or is his role already been plotted.
December 19th, 2021 04:48
Paul Bell said:
Does the black sheep ever want to be just a sheep, or is his role already been plotted.
December 19th, 2021 04:48
Sheep or blacksheep
Nilanjana said:
Sharp lines with continuous stanzas suggest a pace to the poem .......It\'s incredible dear Spills..
December 18th, 2021 22:50
Nilanjana said:
Sharp lines with continuous stanzas suggest a pace to the poem .......It\'s incredible dear Spills..
December 18th, 2021 22:50
Sheep or blacksheep
Rozina said:
I was a black sheep. Now I\'m grey perhaps. Maybe whiter as I grow older? No matter. Such a good write. Thank you for sharing.
December 18th, 2021 22:45
Rozina said:
I was a black sheep. Now I\'m grey perhaps. Maybe whiter as I grow older? No matter. Such a good write. Thank you for sharing.
December 18th, 2021 22:45
Sheep or blacksheep
Saxon Crow said:
Life would be dull of it were always light and cheery.
And who\'s to say the black sheep isn\'t sometimes the white sheep. Good write Spills
December 18th, 2021 13:51
Saxon Crow said:
Life would be dull of it were always light and cheery.
And who\'s to say the black sheep isn\'t sometimes the white sheep. Good write Spills
December 18th, 2021 13:51
The letters
Goldfinch60 said:
Such very true words spilleronsheet, those letters we used to receive and send in the past have gone but the memories still can be there.
Andy
December 18th, 2021 01:32
Goldfinch60 said:
Such very true words spilleronsheet, those letters we used to receive and send in the past have gone but the memories still can be there.
Andy
December 18th, 2021 01:32
The letters
SureshG said:
Along with all those letters, what’s lost is the individual’s signature handwriting.
Thanks for the memories
December 17th, 2021 19:38
SureshG said:
Along with all those letters, what’s lost is the individual’s signature handwriting.
Thanks for the memories
December 17th, 2021 19:38
The letters
L. B. Mek said:
we smile at words
with empty hands,
we type our well wishes
devoid of distinctive
penmanship traits..
we click send and hope for a reply
knowing, all our wishes
have been whittled down
to binary relationships
and we\'ve forgotten so much
we assume
this, is as good it can get
in life...
(a lament for Time\'s
deemed archaic
but yearned for, by those
who know)
thanks for sharing, a really good message
but still a little room for poetic refinement, dear poet
(\'who types the letter now
who calligraphs *by hand, inside
who laces them *with well wishes,
*those long gone letters, waiting
in the post box, outside
*now, with technology at its peak
where an alphabet is typed
*and instantaneously
reaches the receiver on, the other side
no longer
*do we get coarse sheets
drenched
with a persons scent, inside*\')
December 17th, 2021 05:38
L. B. Mek said:
we smile at words
with empty hands,
we type our well wishes
devoid of distinctive
penmanship traits..
we click send and hope for a reply
knowing, all our wishes
have been whittled down
to binary relationships
and we\'ve forgotten so much
we assume
this, is as good it can get
in life...
(a lament for Time\'s
deemed archaic
but yearned for, by those
who know)
thanks for sharing, a really good message
but still a little room for poetic refinement, dear poet
(\'who types the letter now
who calligraphs *by hand, inside
who laces them *with well wishes,
*those long gone letters, waiting
in the post box, outside
*now, with technology at its peak
where an alphabet is typed
*and instantaneously
reaches the receiver on, the other side
no longer
*do we get coarse sheets
drenched
with a persons scent, inside*\')
December 17th, 2021 05:38
The letters
Rozina said:
Serendipity. I was decluttering and found very old beautifully written letters from my Dad. I was studying overseas then. Your lovely poem brought back memories.
December 17th, 2021 04:28
Rozina said:
Serendipity. I was decluttering and found very old beautifully written letters from my Dad. I was studying overseas then. Your lovely poem brought back memories.
December 17th, 2021 04:28
Amber light
SureshG said:
You have a way of stitching words together, that are spell binding
December 16th, 2021 21:28
SureshG said:
You have a way of stitching words together, that are spell binding
December 16th, 2021 21:28
Amber light
Rozina said:
I’ll be looking over my shoulder tonight. I’d better not look into a mirror too in case I see a shadow behind me. Spooky! Thanks for sharing!
December 16th, 2021 19:04
Rozina said:
I’ll be looking over my shoulder tonight. I’d better not look into a mirror too in case I see a shadow behind me. Spooky! Thanks for sharing!
December 16th, 2021 19:04
Amber light
woundedheart said:
Dark and eerie poem leaves the reader wondering is this auto biographical or simply the fear to leap for fear of falling.
December 16th, 2021 14:15
woundedheart said:
Dark and eerie poem leaves the reader wondering is this auto biographical or simply the fear to leap for fear of falling.
December 16th, 2021 14:15
Amber light
Neville said:
this is horrorful ........................... :)
December 16th, 2021 13:51
Neville said:
this is horrorful ........................... :)
December 16th, 2021 13:51
Amber light
AuburnScribbler said:
A beautiful, gothic Poe like piece here spilleronsheet.
I love the way you\'ve weaved the stillness of night and the active nature of the dawn together.
Bravo and I hope all is well!
December 16th, 2021 13:50
AuburnScribbler said:
A beautiful, gothic Poe like piece here spilleronsheet.
I love the way you\'ve weaved the stillness of night and the active nature of the dawn together.
Bravo and I hope all is well!
December 16th, 2021 13:50
Two fragrances
L. B. Mek said:
the interconnectivity of matter
the likenesses in all humanity
the abundant disparity in universality,
a surreal depiction
a poetic dialectic
a serenely scenic scene..
(what a wonderful read
great to see your imagination
playing around with wordplay,
a brilliantly creative write!
thanks for sharing, dear poet)
December 16th, 2021 03:24
L. B. Mek said:
the interconnectivity of matter
the likenesses in all humanity
the abundant disparity in universality,
a surreal depiction
a poetic dialectic
a serenely scenic scene..
(what a wonderful read
great to see your imagination
playing around with wordplay,
a brilliantly creative write!
thanks for sharing, dear poet)
December 16th, 2021 03:24
Two fragrances
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words spilleronsheet, we get inspiration from many on this site.
Andy
December 16th, 2021 01:55
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words spilleronsheet, we get inspiration from many on this site.
Andy
December 16th, 2021 01:55
Two fragrances
Rozina said:
Beautiful. The inspired and the inspirer, thank you. I am learning so much from here.
December 15th, 2021 18:15
Rozina said:
Beautiful. The inspired and the inspirer, thank you. I am learning so much from here.
December 15th, 2021 18:15
Two fragrances
woundedheart said:
Wonderful piece inspired i feel by something we both read earlier but penned with elegance and panache you have a real way with words my friend, pray pen on ✒
December 15th, 2021 13:33
woundedheart said:
Wonderful piece inspired i feel by something we both read earlier but penned with elegance and panache you have a real way with words my friend, pray pen on ✒
December 15th, 2021 13:33
A circle of confusion
Neville said:
as we journey along this rocky path we must learn to take the rough with the smooth .. a mighty fine poem to read and reflect upon .. full marks from me my friend ....... N x
December 15th, 2021 12:20
Neville said:
as we journey along this rocky path we must learn to take the rough with the smooth .. a mighty fine poem to read and reflect upon .. full marks from me my friend ....... N x
December 15th, 2021 12:20
A circle of confusion
Paul Bell said:
I suppose the greatest circle is the one we live on. This brings wonderment, and at times, total confusion, but would we have it any other way.
December 15th, 2021 06:24
Paul Bell said:
I suppose the greatest circle is the one we live on. This brings wonderment, and at times, total confusion, but would we have it any other way.
December 15th, 2021 06:24
A circle of confusion
Rozina said:
So very true that some problems go round and round, never seem to end leaving us confused and down. Yet others are resolved quite simply! Great lines.
December 15th, 2021 01:17
Rozina said:
So very true that some problems go round and round, never seem to end leaving us confused and down. Yet others are resolved quite simply! Great lines.
December 15th, 2021 01:17
A circle of confusion
Vamsi Sudha said:
Circle of Confusion !! What a wonderful correlation.
Circles don\'t end, but you can surely come out of the circle with your centrifugal force of optimism.
So break the the centripetal force of confusion and its time, to see the life beyond the Circle of Confusion.
Amazing write and your poem touches the depths of your inner core. !! Thanks Spiller !!
December 14th, 2021 23:22
Vamsi Sudha said:
Circle of Confusion !! What a wonderful correlation.
Circles don\'t end, but you can surely come out of the circle with your centrifugal force of optimism.
So break the the centripetal force of confusion and its time, to see the life beyond the Circle of Confusion.
Amazing write and your poem touches the depths of your inner core. !! Thanks Spiller !!
December 14th, 2021 23:22
A circle of confusion
woundedheart said:
What goes around comes around just like fashion every 30yrs or so the mini skirt returns. Love theme very thought provoking and deep.
December 14th, 2021 12:43
woundedheart said:
What goes around comes around just like fashion every 30yrs or so the mini skirt returns. Love theme very thought provoking and deep.
December 14th, 2021 12:43
Tears of joy
Lorna said:
So what could tears do about it.... great line! Really got to me SOS.... sweet resignation.
December 14th, 2021 05:57
Lorna said:
So what could tears do about it.... great line! Really got to me SOS.... sweet resignation.
December 14th, 2021 05:57
Tears of joy
Goldfinch60 said:
Tears of joy are so wonderful in our lives spilleronsheet, may they ever be so.
Andy
December 14th, 2021 01:43
Goldfinch60 said:
Tears of joy are so wonderful in our lives spilleronsheet, may they ever be so.
Andy
December 14th, 2021 01:43
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