Comments received on poems by spilleronsheet
Taking the next step
L. B. Mek said:
brilliant!
\'time kept him struggling
but he is determined to leap
even if breaking the only limbs left ….
February 1st, 2022 06:03
L. B. Mek said:
brilliant!
\'time kept him struggling
but he is determined to leap
even if breaking the only limbs left ….
February 1st, 2022 06:03
Taking the next step
Goldfinch60 said:
There are so many in that position spilleronsheet yet we live in a world where there is more than enough for everybody but those with the power wish to keep it all for themselves.
Andy
February 1st, 2022 02:23
Goldfinch60 said:
There are so many in that position spilleronsheet yet we live in a world where there is more than enough for everybody but those with the power wish to keep it all for themselves.
Andy
February 1st, 2022 02:23
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Neville said:
the more I run through these words, the more I like them .. fine ink spilled freely & muchly enjoyed .............. N x
January 31st, 2022 17:37
Neville said:
the more I run through these words, the more I like them .. fine ink spilled freely & muchly enjoyed .............. N x
January 31st, 2022 17:37
The yellow-orange fruit
Paul Bell said:
I suppose we never did stray far from the tree, evolving only to kill ourselves eventually off. Maybe the monkey knew his position and was happy with it.
January 31st, 2022 14:00
Paul Bell said:
I suppose we never did stray far from the tree, evolving only to kill ourselves eventually off. Maybe the monkey knew his position and was happy with it.
January 31st, 2022 14:00
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AuburnScribbler said:
A very relatable stanza here spilleronsheet, and emphatically written, with an understandable and most appropriate seething tone.
Manners do not cost anything, if someone says hello, then you should say hello back, but sadly, with the modern day mistrust forever growing, it ensures that a multitude of rude people remain.
Bravo, and I hope that all is well!
January 31st, 2022 09:52
AuburnScribbler said:
A very relatable stanza here spilleronsheet, and emphatically written, with an understandable and most appropriate seething tone.
Manners do not cost anything, if someone says hello, then you should say hello back, but sadly, with the modern day mistrust forever growing, it ensures that a multitude of rude people remain.
Bravo, and I hope that all is well!
January 31st, 2022 09:52
The yellow-orange fruit
Vamsi Sudha said:
Hey Spiller , you revealed your secret in the last para !! The Orb burning the Mankind.
Very deep thoughts of yours, Keep trying to reach your goals, though like plays a peek-a-boo with us sometimes...Never leave the Hope !! Keep trying ...wonderful inspiring and intriguing too :)
January 31st, 2022 05:12
Vamsi Sudha said:
Hey Spiller , you revealed your secret in the last para !! The Orb burning the Mankind.
Very deep thoughts of yours, Keep trying to reach your goals, though like plays a peek-a-boo with us sometimes...Never leave the Hope !! Keep trying ...wonderful inspiring and intriguing too :)
January 31st, 2022 05:12
The yellow-orange fruit
Rozina said:
This is a wonderful piece. Trying to reach a goal despite challenges. I can see that coconut or fruit high up and the difficulties faced in getting to it.
January 30th, 2022 21:55
Rozina said:
This is a wonderful piece. Trying to reach a goal despite challenges. I can see that coconut or fruit high up and the difficulties faced in getting to it.
January 30th, 2022 21:55
The yellow-orange fruit
Neville said:
Held my attention throughout so ya did ...
this was one almighty journey spiller .. I was immediately transported back to my time in Africa .. always woken by a monkey dropping fruit of all shapes and sizes from the surrounding trees on to my tin roof .. x
January 30th, 2022 16:28
Neville said:
Held my attention throughout so ya did ...
this was one almighty journey spiller .. I was immediately transported back to my time in Africa .. always woken by a monkey dropping fruit of all shapes and sizes from the surrounding trees on to my tin roof .. x
January 30th, 2022 16:28
The yellow-orange fruit
annonymouswonder said:
I really like what you’ve said here. Chasing towards your ambition without taking the time to take care of yourself can be a rough game, with no real fulfillment at the end.
January 30th, 2022 14:44
annonymouswonder said:
I really like what you’ve said here. Chasing towards your ambition without taking the time to take care of yourself can be a rough game, with no real fulfillment at the end.
January 30th, 2022 14:44
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Goldfinch60 said:
It is so important to look into peoples eyes to se their real selves.
Andy
January 30th, 2022 01:22
Goldfinch60 said:
It is so important to look into peoples eyes to se their real selves.
Andy
January 30th, 2022 01:22
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Buzz Bray said:
Well said. Wonderful use of language. So few words can convey such disappointment. Great read.
January 29th, 2022 11:27
Buzz Bray said:
Well said. Wonderful use of language. So few words can convey such disappointment. Great read.
January 29th, 2022 11:27
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FallenAngel1🕊 said:
\"It\'s their ignorance that makes them blunt\" Ignorance,..its a word that reminds me of something my sister said the other day,..\"Those who are full of love,confuse those who are full of shit.lol😊✌️🕊
January 29th, 2022 08:53
FallenAngel1🕊 said:
\"It\'s their ignorance that makes them blunt\" Ignorance,..its a word that reminds me of something my sister said the other day,..\"Those who are full of love,confuse those who are full of shit.lol😊✌️🕊
January 29th, 2022 08:53
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Paul Bell said:
Me, me, me comes to mind.
Sadly, they are plenty of them in the world.
January 29th, 2022 07:33
Paul Bell said:
Me, me, me comes to mind.
Sadly, they are plenty of them in the world.
January 29th, 2022 07:33
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Rozina said:
Yes, unfortunately there are people who are not interested, not bothered, in how others are faring. True words.
January 29th, 2022 06:14
Rozina said:
Yes, unfortunately there are people who are not interested, not bothered, in how others are faring. True words.
January 29th, 2022 06:14
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Neville said:
this is a tragedy .. and although I feel sure that there are so many other ways of describing what is essentially a hit in my book .. it remains a tragedy and in an ideal world, should never have happened ... but as many of us have long known .. it does .................. Neville x
January 29th, 2022 06:12
Neville said:
this is a tragedy .. and although I feel sure that there are so many other ways of describing what is essentially a hit in my book .. it remains a tragedy and in an ideal world, should never have happened ... but as many of us have long known .. it does .................. Neville x
January 29th, 2022 06:12
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Caring dove said:
Some people fail to notice or take interest in that which is before them .
A good writing , spiller )
January 29th, 2022 04:31
Caring dove said:
Some people fail to notice or take interest in that which is before them .
A good writing , spiller )
January 29th, 2022 04:31
Misconception of position
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words spilleronsheet, that chimera can lead us into the best and worst in our lives.
Andy
January 29th, 2022 01:24
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words spilleronsheet, that chimera can lead us into the best and worst in our lives.
Andy
January 29th, 2022 01:24
Misconception of position
FallenAngel1🕊 said:
The only desert I\'ve ever seen had these two really funny animals in it,and one was always chasing the other all over the place,..beep,beep🌵💥😂 The deserts really are places of wonder,forever changing,..making it impossible for us to map them. And the treasures of both wealth they hold and stories they could tell,..lol,can you imagine running into someone out in the middle of the desert building a boat,lol😂✌️🕊
January 28th, 2022 14:00
FallenAngel1🕊 said:
The only desert I\'ve ever seen had these two really funny animals in it,and one was always chasing the other all over the place,..beep,beep🌵💥😂 The deserts really are places of wonder,forever changing,..making it impossible for us to map them. And the treasures of both wealth they hold and stories they could tell,..lol,can you imagine running into someone out in the middle of the desert building a boat,lol😂✌️🕊
January 28th, 2022 14:00
Misconception of position
L. B. Mek said:
\'oh!!! Behold …
that dancing princess, was nothing but smoke n desert, mirages
the sand
moved in-tune, drifting
with the winds, changing
its score
as the traveller, heard
the folklore\'
\'a gust of chimera opened
yet nothing was found
traveller, despairingly transported
transported: back
to the shore
aboard a wooden boat
prancing, upon planks of wood with frustration
his unsteady leap, at destination
made him fall\'
\'to travel, the journeys of world
wondering
whether chimera shall ever
rise
or when reality\'s grey clouds
may creep in..\'
(really liked
how you gave this didactive tale
such an engaging narrative
as a flexible, spine
so your poetry
can be enjoyed, as a simple
entertaining read
or for those
with more time, can look closer
in a more discerning frame of mind
to reveal it\'s insightful, depths)
a great write!
thanks for sharing, dear Poet
January 28th, 2022 06:49
L. B. Mek said:
\'oh!!! Behold …
that dancing princess, was nothing but smoke n desert, mirages
the sand
moved in-tune, drifting
with the winds, changing
its score
as the traveller, heard
the folklore\'
\'a gust of chimera opened
yet nothing was found
traveller, despairingly transported
transported: back
to the shore
aboard a wooden boat
prancing, upon planks of wood with frustration
his unsteady leap, at destination
made him fall\'
\'to travel, the journeys of world
wondering
whether chimera shall ever
rise
or when reality\'s grey clouds
may creep in..\'
(really liked
how you gave this didactive tale
such an engaging narrative
as a flexible, spine
so your poetry
can be enjoyed, as a simple
entertaining read
or for those
with more time, can look closer
in a more discerning frame of mind
to reveal it\'s insightful, depths)
a great write!
thanks for sharing, dear Poet
January 28th, 2022 06:49
Misconception of position
Rozina said:
In the desert mirages play tricks on the eyes. Your poem depicts this beautifully.
January 28th, 2022 04:30
Rozina said:
In the desert mirages play tricks on the eyes. Your poem depicts this beautifully.
January 28th, 2022 04:30
Misconception of position
Caring dove said:
Your recent poems are so engaging to read , spiller 🙂 great writing again , loving your mention of a princess
January 28th, 2022 03:54
Caring dove said:
Your recent poems are so engaging to read , spiller 🙂 great writing again , loving your mention of a princess
January 28th, 2022 03:54
The wooden plank
Goldfinch60 said:
So many questions when you see those planks.
Andy
January 28th, 2022 02:44
Goldfinch60 said:
So many questions when you see those planks.
Andy
January 28th, 2022 02:44
The wooden plank
FallenAngel1🕊 said:
Really touching spiller,that little plank has the heart of the little engine that could,...
🚂 juga,juga,juga,jug,..😃✌🕊
January 27th, 2022 13:39
FallenAngel1🕊 said:
Really touching spiller,that little plank has the heart of the little engine that could,...
🚂 juga,juga,juga,jug,..😃✌🕊
January 27th, 2022 13:39
The wooden plank
sophin said:
beautiful write, spiller. sometimes we do feel like wooden planks, drifting without control, hoping for life
January 27th, 2022 11:18
sophin said:
beautiful write, spiller. sometimes we do feel like wooden planks, drifting without control, hoping for life
January 27th, 2022 11:18
The wooden plank
Fay Slimm. said:
What an inspiring personlising you made of that wooden plank spills - my heart was touched at the efforts it made and not to shore itself seemed so sad........... you have a true poet\'s imagination and I really enjoyed the tale you told.
January 27th, 2022 09:16
Fay Slimm. said:
What an inspiring personlising you made of that wooden plank spills - my heart was touched at the efforts it made and not to shore itself seemed so sad........... you have a true poet\'s imagination and I really enjoyed the tale you told.
January 27th, 2022 09:16
Shallow me or shallow thought of your life
Neville said:
how well you draw attention to the kind of injustice that so often goes under and therefore avoids the moral radar ............. this was crying out to be posted ............. x
January 27th, 2022 08:43
Neville said:
how well you draw attention to the kind of injustice that so often goes under and therefore avoids the moral radar ............. this was crying out to be posted ............. x
January 27th, 2022 08:43
The wooden plank
Neville said:
you have done yourself & this craft of ours both proud today my friend .... x
January 27th, 2022 08:39
Neville said:
you have done yourself & this craft of ours both proud today my friend .... x
January 27th, 2022 08:39
The wooden plank
Buzz Bray said:
I agree with LB Mek. Also love the line \"It slowly giddied over to the lighthouse. \" Great imagery!
January 27th, 2022 08:02
Buzz Bray said:
I agree with LB Mek. Also love the line \"It slowly giddied over to the lighthouse. \" Great imagery!
January 27th, 2022 08:02
The wooden plank
L. B. Mek said:
\'On the whims
of waves, that carried on the sounds
of wind, that it heard on the guidance
of lighthouse, it moved
this lighthouse lay upon the rocks
the plank finally saw a light
years had passed by
lost its identity as it flowed by
what dreams
what ambitions
what desires
and now even what duties
after so long
it finally saw the shore of life\'
Brilliant!
January 27th, 2022 07:10
L. B. Mek said:
\'On the whims
of waves, that carried on the sounds
of wind, that it heard on the guidance
of lighthouse, it moved
this lighthouse lay upon the rocks
the plank finally saw a light
years had passed by
lost its identity as it flowed by
what dreams
what ambitions
what desires
and now even what duties
after so long
it finally saw the shore of life\'
Brilliant!
January 27th, 2022 07:10
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