Comments received on poems by spilleronsheet
Watch out for and look out for
Suman_Bhattacharya said:
\'Beware of green glares
beware of red satires
beware of blue shoulders
beware of orange stabs
beware of violet hits
\'
The most interesting part of the creation...beautifully colouring the \'not so happy\'\' experiences of life...
January 11th, 2022 07:57
Suman_Bhattacharya said:
\'Beware of green glares
beware of red satires
beware of blue shoulders
beware of orange stabs
beware of violet hits
\'
The most interesting part of the creation...beautifully colouring the \'not so happy\'\' experiences of life...
January 11th, 2022 07:57
The cycle of life
Suman_Bhattacharya said:
Sure it is..nice definition presented...but may be that\'s the beauty of \'life\'...
January 11th, 2022 07:51
Suman_Bhattacharya said:
Sure it is..nice definition presented...but may be that\'s the beauty of \'life\'...
January 11th, 2022 07:51
Calamities of life
L. B. Mek said:
\'Ebbing
on waves of challenges that hit
the shore
though the mind, wished
to conquer the world
yet why
was soul, overwhelmed
why
was it, scared
*why-question\'s:
layered\'..
(wonderful in its abstract notes
while introducing such, realistically
everyday, themes and relatable ideas)
thanks for sharing, dear poet
January 11th, 2022 06:49
L. B. Mek said:
\'Ebbing
on waves of challenges that hit
the shore
though the mind, wished
to conquer the world
yet why
was soul, overwhelmed
why
was it, scared
*why-question\'s:
layered\'..
(wonderful in its abstract notes
while introducing such, realistically
everyday, themes and relatable ideas)
thanks for sharing, dear poet
January 11th, 2022 06:49
Calamities of life
dusk arising said:
Like Teddy, I was struck by those lines she brought forward. We were protected back then. Today we are the protectors. Yet the battle to be fought is within the minds of our worlds population. A message to a people we have estranged. Historic acorns of hate have matured and western words are never trusted. And here, at home in the west i ask.... are our words worth trusting?
January 11th, 2022 05:54
dusk arising said:
Like Teddy, I was struck by those lines she brought forward. We were protected back then. Today we are the protectors. Yet the battle to be fought is within the minds of our worlds population. A message to a people we have estranged. Historic acorns of hate have matured and western words are never trusted. And here, at home in the west i ask.... are our words worth trusting?
January 11th, 2022 05:54
Calamities of life
Rozina said:
Everyday the news is showing global scenes of calamities from floods to fires to train wrecks to shootings.....
And of course the virus everywhere.
You said it true - one at a time, that\'s what we need to do.
January 11th, 2022 04:03
Rozina said:
Everyday the news is showing global scenes of calamities from floods to fires to train wrecks to shootings.....
And of course the virus everywhere.
You said it true - one at a time, that\'s what we need to do.
January 11th, 2022 04:03
Calamities of life
Caring dove said:
Brilliant spiller , such strong great words . Loved the read !
January 11th, 2022 03:50
Caring dove said:
Brilliant spiller , such strong great words . Loved the read !
January 11th, 2022 03:50
When journey is savoured more than goal
spilleronsheet said:
Thanks dear Teddy
It’s high time that spring now shall come in life
Continuing autumns, had too many in life
January 10th, 2022 12:00
spilleronsheet said:
Thanks dear Teddy
It’s high time that spring now shall come in life
Continuing autumns, had too many in life
January 10th, 2022 12:00
When journey is savoured more than goal
dusk arising said:
Your positive thinking converted set backs into opportunities. Along the way wisdom came and made each step that bit easier. Just as it will when you become old and past it LOL like me. You\'ll have gained the wisdom to gracefully accept both what life brings and what it takes away. Self knowledge, well by then you\'ll know a lot about yourself.... you\'re a poet, you already know a lot about yourself.
January 10th, 2022 11:20
dusk arising said:
Your positive thinking converted set backs into opportunities. Along the way wisdom came and made each step that bit easier. Just as it will when you become old and past it LOL like me. You\'ll have gained the wisdom to gracefully accept both what life brings and what it takes away. Self knowledge, well by then you\'ll know a lot about yourself.... you\'re a poet, you already know a lot about yourself.
January 10th, 2022 11:20
When journey is savoured more than goal
L. B. Mek said:
reading your words
felt like, my eyes
were following, a gentle shoreline
ebbing and flowing
and with every line
your insightful point\'s
were inching closer, to that sand
of a past
you\'re trying to wash-out
and replace
with a refreshed, taste
of salted Sea: hope
that kind of salt
that makes our alcohol
taste evermore, bitter sweet
with each sip...
(another great write! dear Poet
remember to let you poetry
breath
so that your readers, can easily
identify
your most pertinent points..)
January 10th, 2022 06:52
L. B. Mek said:
reading your words
felt like, my eyes
were following, a gentle shoreline
ebbing and flowing
and with every line
your insightful point\'s
were inching closer, to that sand
of a past
you\'re trying to wash-out
and replace
with a refreshed, taste
of salted Sea: hope
that kind of salt
that makes our alcohol
taste evermore, bitter sweet
with each sip...
(another great write! dear Poet
remember to let you poetry
breath
so that your readers, can easily
identify
your most pertinent points..)
January 10th, 2022 06:52
When journey is savoured more than goal
Paul Bell said:
The greatest end to any goal is life, its self. Anything in-between is probably inconsequential. The January diet, keep fit, is testament to that. When I set goals, I fail. So I find myself just doing things and getting them out the way.
January 10th, 2022 04:50
Paul Bell said:
The greatest end to any goal is life, its self. Anything in-between is probably inconsequential. The January diet, keep fit, is testament to that. When I set goals, I fail. So I find myself just doing things and getting them out the way.
January 10th, 2022 04:50
When journey is savoured more than goal
Poetic Dan said:
Unbelievable ending that said its OK as long as I know myself by the end of the day!
Fantastic as ever my friend
January 10th, 2022 03:12
Poetic Dan said:
Unbelievable ending that said its OK as long as I know myself by the end of the day!
Fantastic as ever my friend
January 10th, 2022 03:12
When journey is savoured more than goal
orchidee said:
Good write S.
Maybe in reaching some goals, we may say \'Hmm, what next? I\'ve arrived now!\'
January 10th, 2022 03:05
orchidee said:
Good write S.
Maybe in reaching some goals, we may say \'Hmm, what next? I\'ve arrived now!\'
January 10th, 2022 03:05
The shout of courage
woundedheart said:
Very insightful themed piece here my friend you capture the feeling and theme perfectly ☺
January 9th, 2022 12:50
woundedheart said:
Very insightful themed piece here my friend you capture the feeling and theme perfectly ☺
January 9th, 2022 12:50
The shout of courage
Poetic Dan said:
Wow...I didn\'t take a breath all the way down until the end and take intake honestly to me by surprise.
As if I\'d just be renewed, I am a star and I\'ll see you the other side off the moon!
Always a pleasure
January 9th, 2022 12:24
Poetic Dan said:
Wow...I didn\'t take a breath all the way down until the end and take intake honestly to me by surprise.
As if I\'d just be renewed, I am a star and I\'ll see you the other side off the moon!
Always a pleasure
January 9th, 2022 12:24
The shout of courage
Rozina said:
Inspiring. Yes we can do it. Thank you for sharing this very positive message with us.
January 9th, 2022 09:01
Rozina said:
Inspiring. Yes we can do it. Thank you for sharing this very positive message with us.
January 9th, 2022 09:01
The shout of courage
Vamsi Sudha said:
Dear Spiller !!
you did take the courage to shout your heart out !!
Its time you SHINE bright
And its time THINGS are all Right !!
Shine incessantly !!
January 9th, 2022 08:31
Vamsi Sudha said:
Dear Spiller !!
you did take the courage to shout your heart out !!
Its time you SHINE bright
And its time THINGS are all Right !!
Shine incessantly !!
January 9th, 2022 08:31
The shout of courage
Goldfinch60 said:
We shall always survive in our wonderful life spilleronsheet.
Andy
January 8th, 2022 14:36
Goldfinch60 said:
We shall always survive in our wonderful life spilleronsheet.
Andy
January 8th, 2022 14:36
The shout of courage
orchidee said:
I\'m gonna sing, not shout! Agghhh, Oh nooooo, they say! heehee.
Well, I might shout too! lol.
January 8th, 2022 14:23
orchidee said:
I\'m gonna sing, not shout! Agghhh, Oh nooooo, they say! heehee.
Well, I might shout too! lol.
January 8th, 2022 14:23
The shout of courage
Caring dove said:
Such great words … loving your poems recently ! 🙂🙂
January 8th, 2022 12:31
Caring dove said:
Such great words … loving your poems recently ! 🙂🙂
January 8th, 2022 12:31
The shout of courage
Paul Bell said:
Generally in Britain, they build you up, and then they knock you down.
It really does take a thick skin these days to survive in the jungle.
January 8th, 2022 11:26
Paul Bell said:
Generally in Britain, they build you up, and then they knock you down.
It really does take a thick skin these days to survive in the jungle.
January 8th, 2022 11:26
The shout of courage
FallenAngel1🕊 said:
I love this. Such a strong message,..I\'d like to go on but I\'m pressed for time,just dropped in to see what condition my condition was in,lol great one🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟
January 8th, 2022 11:12
FallenAngel1🕊 said:
I love this. Such a strong message,..I\'d like to go on but I\'m pressed for time,just dropped in to see what condition my condition was in,lol great one🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟
January 8th, 2022 11:12
Where are you Mr. Sun
Suman_Bhattacharya said:
To me, the poetry appeared to be several short events woven into one... truly a nice read...thank you
January 8th, 2022 00:08
Suman_Bhattacharya said:
To me, the poetry appeared to be several short events woven into one... truly a nice read...thank you
January 8th, 2022 00:08
Where are you Mr. Sun
Garth Rakumakoe said:
A charming and beautiful way with words dear writer. You carved out a beautiful piece with your pen there. A favorite!🤞🏼
January 7th, 2022 23:50
Garth Rakumakoe said:
A charming and beautiful way with words dear writer. You carved out a beautiful piece with your pen there. A favorite!🤞🏼
January 7th, 2022 23:50
Where are you Mr. Sun
Saxon Crow said:
What an imagery of feeling here Spiller. Very enjoyable poem
January 7th, 2022 11:04
Saxon Crow said:
What an imagery of feeling here Spiller. Very enjoyable poem
January 7th, 2022 11:04
Where are you Mr. Sun
CuteCrescent said:
the way you rhymed it all throughout the poem is amazing spiller. keep it up. you are amazing🤩🤩🤩
January 7th, 2022 08:08
CuteCrescent said:
the way you rhymed it all throughout the poem is amazing spiller. keep it up. you are amazing🤩🤩🤩
January 7th, 2022 08:08
Where are you Mr. Sun
L. B. Mek said:
\'alas
the sun wasn’t around
merry-go-round\'s, wondered
in crowd
Will it screech, on ground
The rooster ran
ran, in dismay
*for
there was no sun to greet
*that, day\'
(subtly, deep
and measured in its questing
for answers
to life\'s, greater
wonder\'s..
a really enjoyable read
especially liked your use of spacing and stanza breaks
to aid your flow
and highlight key, meaningful points)
an impressive first read of the year from you, dear Poet
thank you for choosing to share
your poetic journey with us
it\'s a privilege to read your poetic growth
January 7th, 2022 06:28
L. B. Mek said:
\'alas
the sun wasn’t around
merry-go-round\'s, wondered
in crowd
Will it screech, on ground
The rooster ran
ran, in dismay
*for
there was no sun to greet
*that, day\'
(subtly, deep
and measured in its questing
for answers
to life\'s, greater
wonder\'s..
a really enjoyable read
especially liked your use of spacing and stanza breaks
to aid your flow
and highlight key, meaningful points)
an impressive first read of the year from you, dear Poet
thank you for choosing to share
your poetic journey with us
it\'s a privilege to read your poetic growth
January 7th, 2022 06:28
Where are you Mr. Sun
AuburnScribbler said:
A wonderful written poetic plea here spillersonsheet, you paint a great scene with your words.
It may surprise you, I\'m a ginger, but I am a fan of the sun, so, sometimes when it\'s not shining as it should, I get a little miffed just like you do!
Bravo, and I hope that all is well!
January 7th, 2022 05:48
AuburnScribbler said:
A wonderful written poetic plea here spillersonsheet, you paint a great scene with your words.
It may surprise you, I\'m a ginger, but I am a fan of the sun, so, sometimes when it\'s not shining as it should, I get a little miffed just like you do!
Bravo, and I hope that all is well!
January 7th, 2022 05:48
Where are you Mr. Sun
woundedheart said:
This is England we don\'t get sunshine lol we are evolved from ducks to weather the rain. ☺
January 7th, 2022 04:58
woundedheart said:
This is England we don\'t get sunshine lol we are evolved from ducks to weather the rain. ☺
January 7th, 2022 04:58
Where are you Mr. Sun
Rozina said:
Which strain is the sun\'s corona?! Hope the sun shines soon and brings some warmth.
January 7th, 2022 03:39
Rozina said:
Which strain is the sun\'s corona?! Hope the sun shines soon and brings some warmth.
January 7th, 2022 03:39
Where are you Mr. Sun
Caring dove said:
Brilliant words , spiller 🙂 I found myself smiling a little as reading this ,
So many great lines . Loving the personification in this…
January 7th, 2022 01:47
Caring dove said:
Brilliant words , spiller 🙂 I found myself smiling a little as reading this ,
So many great lines . Loving the personification in this…
January 7th, 2022 01:47
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