Comments received on poems by spilleronsheet
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dusk arising said:
There are more questions to play with here. One day a UFO time machine will break down and well have some answers..... \"where does the time go?\"
Is satan time itself?
January 12th, 2022 20:16
dusk arising said:
There are more questions to play with here. One day a UFO time machine will break down and well have some answers..... \"where does the time go?\"
Is satan time itself?
January 12th, 2022 20:16
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FallenAngel1🕊 said:
Great work here spiller,..you inspired me to write and publish a fusioned poem called If You Had A Time Machine,Which Way Would You Go. Thanks😀
January 12th, 2022 17:56
FallenAngel1🕊 said:
Great work here spiller,..you inspired me to write and publish a fusioned poem called If You Had A Time Machine,Which Way Would You Go. Thanks😀
January 12th, 2022 17:56
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Paul Bell said:
I wonder if you asked the public what they would go back in time to find out.
Who shot, JFK. Maybe Marilyn Monroe. I suppose the list is endless.
January 12th, 2022 14:19
Paul Bell said:
I wonder if you asked the public what they would go back in time to find out.
Who shot, JFK. Maybe Marilyn Monroe. I suppose the list is endless.
January 12th, 2022 14:19
Some truth better be untold
Dhanya said:
What you say is true my friend. What a kind way to give back to those who are under the gun sometimes. We all are trying our best to build and grow from our true being. I see your true being shining in your poem. So nothing critical is necessary. Grow on!
January 11th, 2022 21:14
Dhanya said:
What you say is true my friend. What a kind way to give back to those who are under the gun sometimes. We all are trying our best to build and grow from our true being. I see your true being shining in your poem. So nothing critical is necessary. Grow on!
January 11th, 2022 21:14
Calamities of life
woundedheart said:
So many things could be avoided if man stopped destroying the earth and looked inside themselves to see the truth we all need to realise our problems big or small are made better by good friends and the caring words or hugs from others. Life is for living but to live life we need to heal, ourselves our loved ones our planet, great poem 👍
January 11th, 2022 17:25
woundedheart said:
So many things could be avoided if man stopped destroying the earth and looked inside themselves to see the truth we all need to realise our problems big or small are made better by good friends and the caring words or hugs from others. Life is for living but to live life we need to heal, ourselves our loved ones our planet, great poem 👍
January 11th, 2022 17:25
Calamities of life
Vamsi Sudha said:
Dear Spiller,
I really swayed with your poem, for a moment, you filled my eyes with the aftermath of a tornado..
But \"the Silence and Serenity \" after a storm is really needed, at some moments of life..
So let the storm , cyclones, hit our life, to get to a serene atmosphere...
Wonderfully woven poem....thanks spiller..
January 11th, 2022 09:37
Vamsi Sudha said:
Dear Spiller,
I really swayed with your poem, for a moment, you filled my eyes with the aftermath of a tornado..
But \"the Silence and Serenity \" after a storm is really needed, at some moments of life..
So let the storm , cyclones, hit our life, to get to a serene atmosphere...
Wonderfully woven poem....thanks spiller..
January 11th, 2022 09:37
Watch out for and look out for
Suman_Bhattacharya said:
\'Beware of green glares
beware of red satires
beware of blue shoulders
beware of orange stabs
beware of violet hits
\'
The most interesting part of the creation...beautifully colouring the \'not so happy\'\' experiences of life...
January 11th, 2022 07:57
Suman_Bhattacharya said:
\'Beware of green glares
beware of red satires
beware of blue shoulders
beware of orange stabs
beware of violet hits
\'
The most interesting part of the creation...beautifully colouring the \'not so happy\'\' experiences of life...
January 11th, 2022 07:57
The cycle of life
Suman_Bhattacharya said:
Sure it is..nice definition presented...but may be that\'s the beauty of \'life\'...
January 11th, 2022 07:51
Suman_Bhattacharya said:
Sure it is..nice definition presented...but may be that\'s the beauty of \'life\'...
January 11th, 2022 07:51
Calamities of life
L. B. Mek said:
\'Ebbing
on waves of challenges that hit
the shore
though the mind, wished
to conquer the world
yet why
was soul, overwhelmed
why
was it, scared
*why-question\'s:
layered\'..
(wonderful in its abstract notes
while introducing such, realistically
everyday, themes and relatable ideas)
thanks for sharing, dear poet
January 11th, 2022 06:49
L. B. Mek said:
\'Ebbing
on waves of challenges that hit
the shore
though the mind, wished
to conquer the world
yet why
was soul, overwhelmed
why
was it, scared
*why-question\'s:
layered\'..
(wonderful in its abstract notes
while introducing such, realistically
everyday, themes and relatable ideas)
thanks for sharing, dear poet
January 11th, 2022 06:49
Calamities of life
dusk arising said:
Like Teddy, I was struck by those lines she brought forward. We were protected back then. Today we are the protectors. Yet the battle to be fought is within the minds of our worlds population. A message to a people we have estranged. Historic acorns of hate have matured and western words are never trusted. And here, at home in the west i ask.... are our words worth trusting?
January 11th, 2022 05:54
dusk arising said:
Like Teddy, I was struck by those lines she brought forward. We were protected back then. Today we are the protectors. Yet the battle to be fought is within the minds of our worlds population. A message to a people we have estranged. Historic acorns of hate have matured and western words are never trusted. And here, at home in the west i ask.... are our words worth trusting?
January 11th, 2022 05:54
Calamities of life
Rozina said:
Everyday the news is showing global scenes of calamities from floods to fires to train wrecks to shootings.....
And of course the virus everywhere.
You said it true - one at a time, that\'s what we need to do.
January 11th, 2022 04:03
Rozina said:
Everyday the news is showing global scenes of calamities from floods to fires to train wrecks to shootings.....
And of course the virus everywhere.
You said it true - one at a time, that\'s what we need to do.
January 11th, 2022 04:03
Calamities of life
Caring dove said:
Brilliant spiller , such strong great words . Loved the read !
January 11th, 2022 03:50
Caring dove said:
Brilliant spiller , such strong great words . Loved the read !
January 11th, 2022 03:50
When journey is savoured more than goal
spilleronsheet said:
Thanks dear Teddy
It’s high time that spring now shall come in life
Continuing autumns, had too many in life
January 10th, 2022 12:00
spilleronsheet said:
Thanks dear Teddy
It’s high time that spring now shall come in life
Continuing autumns, had too many in life
January 10th, 2022 12:00
When journey is savoured more than goal
dusk arising said:
Your positive thinking converted set backs into opportunities. Along the way wisdom came and made each step that bit easier. Just as it will when you become old and past it LOL like me. You\'ll have gained the wisdom to gracefully accept both what life brings and what it takes away. Self knowledge, well by then you\'ll know a lot about yourself.... you\'re a poet, you already know a lot about yourself.
January 10th, 2022 11:20
dusk arising said:
Your positive thinking converted set backs into opportunities. Along the way wisdom came and made each step that bit easier. Just as it will when you become old and past it LOL like me. You\'ll have gained the wisdom to gracefully accept both what life brings and what it takes away. Self knowledge, well by then you\'ll know a lot about yourself.... you\'re a poet, you already know a lot about yourself.
January 10th, 2022 11:20
When journey is savoured more than goal
L. B. Mek said:
reading your words
felt like, my eyes
were following, a gentle shoreline
ebbing and flowing
and with every line
your insightful point\'s
were inching closer, to that sand
of a past
you\'re trying to wash-out
and replace
with a refreshed, taste
of salted Sea: hope
that kind of salt
that makes our alcohol
taste evermore, bitter sweet
with each sip...
(another great write! dear Poet
remember to let you poetry
breath
so that your readers, can easily
identify
your most pertinent points..)
January 10th, 2022 06:52
L. B. Mek said:
reading your words
felt like, my eyes
were following, a gentle shoreline
ebbing and flowing
and with every line
your insightful point\'s
were inching closer, to that sand
of a past
you\'re trying to wash-out
and replace
with a refreshed, taste
of salted Sea: hope
that kind of salt
that makes our alcohol
taste evermore, bitter sweet
with each sip...
(another great write! dear Poet
remember to let you poetry
breath
so that your readers, can easily
identify
your most pertinent points..)
January 10th, 2022 06:52
When journey is savoured more than goal
Paul Bell said:
The greatest end to any goal is life, its self. Anything in-between is probably inconsequential. The January diet, keep fit, is testament to that. When I set goals, I fail. So I find myself just doing things and getting them out the way.
January 10th, 2022 04:50
Paul Bell said:
The greatest end to any goal is life, its self. Anything in-between is probably inconsequential. The January diet, keep fit, is testament to that. When I set goals, I fail. So I find myself just doing things and getting them out the way.
January 10th, 2022 04:50
When journey is savoured more than goal
Poetic Dan said:
Unbelievable ending that said its OK as long as I know myself by the end of the day!
Fantastic as ever my friend
January 10th, 2022 03:12
Poetic Dan said:
Unbelievable ending that said its OK as long as I know myself by the end of the day!
Fantastic as ever my friend
January 10th, 2022 03:12
When journey is savoured more than goal
orchidee said:
Good write S.
Maybe in reaching some goals, we may say \'Hmm, what next? I\'ve arrived now!\'
January 10th, 2022 03:05
orchidee said:
Good write S.
Maybe in reaching some goals, we may say \'Hmm, what next? I\'ve arrived now!\'
January 10th, 2022 03:05
The shout of courage
woundedheart said:
Very insightful themed piece here my friend you capture the feeling and theme perfectly ☺
January 9th, 2022 12:50
woundedheart said:
Very insightful themed piece here my friend you capture the feeling and theme perfectly ☺
January 9th, 2022 12:50
The shout of courage
Poetic Dan said:
Wow...I didn\'t take a breath all the way down until the end and take intake honestly to me by surprise.
As if I\'d just be renewed, I am a star and I\'ll see you the other side off the moon!
Always a pleasure
January 9th, 2022 12:24
Poetic Dan said:
Wow...I didn\'t take a breath all the way down until the end and take intake honestly to me by surprise.
As if I\'d just be renewed, I am a star and I\'ll see you the other side off the moon!
Always a pleasure
January 9th, 2022 12:24
The shout of courage
Rozina said:
Inspiring. Yes we can do it. Thank you for sharing this very positive message with us.
January 9th, 2022 09:01
Rozina said:
Inspiring. Yes we can do it. Thank you for sharing this very positive message with us.
January 9th, 2022 09:01
The shout of courage
Vamsi Sudha said:
Dear Spiller !!
you did take the courage to shout your heart out !!
Its time you SHINE bright
And its time THINGS are all Right !!
Shine incessantly !!
January 9th, 2022 08:31
Vamsi Sudha said:
Dear Spiller !!
you did take the courage to shout your heart out !!
Its time you SHINE bright
And its time THINGS are all Right !!
Shine incessantly !!
January 9th, 2022 08:31
The shout of courage
Goldfinch60 said:
We shall always survive in our wonderful life spilleronsheet.
Andy
January 8th, 2022 14:36
Goldfinch60 said:
We shall always survive in our wonderful life spilleronsheet.
Andy
January 8th, 2022 14:36
The shout of courage
orchidee said:
I\'m gonna sing, not shout! Agghhh, Oh nooooo, they say! heehee.
Well, I might shout too! lol.
January 8th, 2022 14:23
orchidee said:
I\'m gonna sing, not shout! Agghhh, Oh nooooo, they say! heehee.
Well, I might shout too! lol.
January 8th, 2022 14:23
The shout of courage
Caring dove said:
Such great words … loving your poems recently ! 🙂🙂
January 8th, 2022 12:31
Caring dove said:
Such great words … loving your poems recently ! 🙂🙂
January 8th, 2022 12:31
The shout of courage
Paul Bell said:
Generally in Britain, they build you up, and then they knock you down.
It really does take a thick skin these days to survive in the jungle.
January 8th, 2022 11:26
Paul Bell said:
Generally in Britain, they build you up, and then they knock you down.
It really does take a thick skin these days to survive in the jungle.
January 8th, 2022 11:26
The shout of courage
FallenAngel1🕊 said:
I love this. Such a strong message,..I\'d like to go on but I\'m pressed for time,just dropped in to see what condition my condition was in,lol great one🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟
January 8th, 2022 11:12
FallenAngel1🕊 said:
I love this. Such a strong message,..I\'d like to go on but I\'m pressed for time,just dropped in to see what condition my condition was in,lol great one🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟
January 8th, 2022 11:12
Where are you Mr. Sun
Suman_Bhattacharya said:
To me, the poetry appeared to be several short events woven into one... truly a nice read...thank you
January 8th, 2022 00:08
Suman_Bhattacharya said:
To me, the poetry appeared to be several short events woven into one... truly a nice read...thank you
January 8th, 2022 00:08
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