Comments received on poems by spilleronsheet
Untold
L. B. Mek said:
absolutely loved this stanza:
\'across the junction
facing the moon
watching the stars
welded in sky
the amber sky turns red
red to blue
blue to black
as pair of eyes searches for you….\'
Brilliant!
February 11th, 2022 07:08
L. B. Mek said:
absolutely loved this stanza:
\'across the junction
facing the moon
watching the stars
welded in sky
the amber sky turns red
red to blue
blue to black
as pair of eyes searches for you….\'
Brilliant!
February 11th, 2022 07:08
Untold
Fay Slimm. said:
A heart-touching piece of written grief dear Spills and so well captured those sad lines of missing.
February 11th, 2022 07:05
Fay Slimm. said:
A heart-touching piece of written grief dear Spills and so well captured those sad lines of missing.
February 11th, 2022 07:05
Untold
dusk arising said:
A sad and moving tale which, having just read Fay\'s post today, takes me mindfully to thoughts of war. The painful waiting, fretting, hoping, planning despairing of the home maker. Unaware. Living on.
Really touching piece.
February 11th, 2022 06:44
dusk arising said:
A sad and moving tale which, having just read Fay\'s post today, takes me mindfully to thoughts of war. The painful waiting, fretting, hoping, planning despairing of the home maker. Unaware. Living on.
Really touching piece.
February 11th, 2022 06:44
Pause
FallenAngel1🕊 said:
How would you feel about writing poetry for the queen? I heard she\'s looking,..beautiful,beautiful,beautiful...🌞🌹🕊
February 10th, 2022 20:28
FallenAngel1🕊 said:
How would you feel about writing poetry for the queen? I heard she\'s looking,..beautiful,beautiful,beautiful...🌞🌹🕊
February 10th, 2022 20:28
Pause
dusk arising said:
Cor! You dont half run into a lofty subject here spiller. Time the greatest enigma of them all. And yes you address so much here, not least the desire to stop it, to step off and glance around... or maybe that skin crawling desire when we have goofed to turn back time.. if only. But if we could, would we still grow older as we travelled back in time.... lol somehow that one makes me laugh, i\'ll set the dial so i can sit my exams again that i took aged 16... and whoosh... there you are at your present age sat among 16 year olds you knew back then... weird.
I really enjoyed your post and as you can see i enjoyed playing with the subject.
February 10th, 2022 06:27
dusk arising said:
Cor! You dont half run into a lofty subject here spiller. Time the greatest enigma of them all. And yes you address so much here, not least the desire to stop it, to step off and glance around... or maybe that skin crawling desire when we have goofed to turn back time.. if only. But if we could, would we still grow older as we travelled back in time.... lol somehow that one makes me laugh, i\'ll set the dial so i can sit my exams again that i took aged 16... and whoosh... there you are at your present age sat among 16 year olds you knew back then... weird.
I really enjoyed your post and as you can see i enjoyed playing with the subject.
February 10th, 2022 06:27
Pause
Rozina said:
So so true. If only we could press the pause button during those moments that we wish could go on and on….Beautiful.
February 10th, 2022 04:54
Rozina said:
So so true. If only we could press the pause button during those moments that we wish could go on and on….Beautiful.
February 10th, 2022 04:54
Pause
L. B. Mek said:
\'What a pleasure
to control the hourglass\'..
(like, when taking a Pause
from life
to read such words of eloquence)
Brilliant! dear Poet
what a joy it is
to witness your poetry soaring..
thank you!
February 10th, 2022 04:36
L. B. Mek said:
\'What a pleasure
to control the hourglass\'..
(like, when taking a Pause
from life
to read such words of eloquence)
Brilliant! dear Poet
what a joy it is
to witness your poetry soaring..
thank you!
February 10th, 2022 04:36
Pause
Fay Slimm. said:
Such a vivid and heart-moving read dear spills on the pace of life - - you capture the need of quiet so well with clever imagery.
February 10th, 2022 03:39
Fay Slimm. said:
Such a vivid and heart-moving read dear spills on the pace of life - - you capture the need of quiet so well with clever imagery.
February 10th, 2022 03:39
Pause
Vamsi Sudha said:
Dear Spiller, its always said we love savoring sweet candies and swallow the bitter pills. But then when it applies to food, why not for our thoughts too..
Let the sweet memories stay and swallow the bitter moments immediately....Its works wonder, believe me..!!! Nice emotional write and penned beautifully !!
Its time you PAUSE on the sweet memories.. :)
February 10th, 2022 03:33
Vamsi Sudha said:
Dear Spiller, its always said we love savoring sweet candies and swallow the bitter pills. But then when it applies to food, why not for our thoughts too..
Let the sweet memories stay and swallow the bitter moments immediately....Its works wonder, believe me..!!! Nice emotional write and penned beautifully !!
Its time you PAUSE on the sweet memories.. :)
February 10th, 2022 03:33
Tea/coffee, cookies and a book
FallenAngel1🕊 said:
\"Tea/coffee,cookies and a good book\",...and drift away....Cheers spiller☕️🍪📖✌️🕊
February 9th, 2022 23:12
FallenAngel1🕊 said:
\"Tea/coffee,cookies and a good book\",...and drift away....Cheers spiller☕️🍪📖✌️🕊
February 9th, 2022 23:12
Tea/coffee, cookies and a book
Goldfinch60 said:
Tea, cookies and a book is bliss in our busy lives spilleronsheet and will bring us contentment.
Andy
February 9th, 2022 01:38
Goldfinch60 said:
Tea, cookies and a book is bliss in our busy lives spilleronsheet and will bring us contentment.
Andy
February 9th, 2022 01:38
Tea/coffee, cookies and a book
Lorna said:
Felt this and more than just about coffee....it\'s other worldly.....
February 8th, 2022 14:40
Lorna said:
Felt this and more than just about coffee....it\'s other worldly.....
February 8th, 2022 14:40
Tea/coffee, cookies and a book
Paul Bell said:
Must admit, I think the world would end if coffee disappeared. Tea, on the other hand, us Brits would need to actually work instead of conquering the world with our tea breaks.
February 8th, 2022 11:02
Paul Bell said:
Must admit, I think the world would end if coffee disappeared. Tea, on the other hand, us Brits would need to actually work instead of conquering the world with our tea breaks.
February 8th, 2022 11:02
Tea/coffee, cookies and a book
dusk arising said:
Relax, have a nibble on that cookie - all else will wait, there\'s no enemy at your door - except time and the bosses\' whip..... but for now, read a page or two.... relaxation calming you... you\'ll feel much better.... how about that resignation letter... or a snooze by the river.... a downstream day comes highly recommended
February 8th, 2022 09:15
dusk arising said:
Relax, have a nibble on that cookie - all else will wait, there\'s no enemy at your door - except time and the bosses\' whip..... but for now, read a page or two.... relaxation calming you... you\'ll feel much better.... how about that resignation letter... or a snooze by the river.... a downstream day comes highly recommended
February 8th, 2022 09:15
Tea/coffee, cookies and a book
Rocky Lagou said:
Great poem! All we need sometimes is a good cup of coffee (or tea) and a good book to sponge up the dark nights. Nicely written! 💖👍☕
February 8th, 2022 09:01
Rocky Lagou said:
Great poem! All we need sometimes is a good cup of coffee (or tea) and a good book to sponge up the dark nights. Nicely written! 💖👍☕
February 8th, 2022 09:01
Re-engineering
FallenAngel1🕊 said:
John Lennon\'s Imagine comes to mind. No heaven,no hell,no countries,no religion,...well,I\'m sure you know the words. I read Teddys comment,..but had to wipe my eyes to read your replies,lol...I\'m always on.😂 But seriously,I did😭🤗🤗🤗🌹🌹🌹
February 7th, 2022 19:39
FallenAngel1🕊 said:
John Lennon\'s Imagine comes to mind. No heaven,no hell,no countries,no religion,...well,I\'m sure you know the words. I read Teddys comment,..but had to wipe my eyes to read your replies,lol...I\'m always on.😂 But seriously,I did😭🤗🤗🤗🌹🌹🌹
February 7th, 2022 19:39
Re-engineering
dusk arising said:
Well spiller, this poet lives behind locked doors and drinks water from a dammed stream in his fenced garden lit by an outside electric bulb.... none of which seems to interfere with my poetry.
I still see the beauty of the planet, am enchanted by the song of a blackbird and can blaize a trail to the wilderness, mountains or coast for spiritual nourishment.
Am I a victim?
February 7th, 2022 14:10
dusk arising said:
Well spiller, this poet lives behind locked doors and drinks water from a dammed stream in his fenced garden lit by an outside electric bulb.... none of which seems to interfere with my poetry.
I still see the beauty of the planet, am enchanted by the song of a blackbird and can blaize a trail to the wilderness, mountains or coast for spiritual nourishment.
Am I a victim?
February 7th, 2022 14:10
Re-engineering
Rocky Lagou said:
Beautiful! I loved this piece. No \"boundaries\" stand for the ones who truly desire to fulfill their purpose. 🙌👍Great job!
February 7th, 2022 13:51
Rocky Lagou said:
Beautiful! I loved this piece. No \"boundaries\" stand for the ones who truly desire to fulfill their purpose. 🙌👍Great job!
February 7th, 2022 13:51
Absence
Rocky Lagou said:
\"It\'s a song that we were born to sing, about the end of everything\" 💖👍 Lovely poem.
February 4th, 2022 10:03
Rocky Lagou said:
\"It\'s a song that we were born to sing, about the end of everything\" 💖👍 Lovely poem.
February 4th, 2022 10:03
Absence
L. B. Mek said:
\'then look upon them
every opportunity you get
encase them in that carbon, memory
of your life\'s, mementos and worry
no more...!\'
(a wonderful shorty
thanks for the read, dear poet)
February 4th, 2022 06:12
L. B. Mek said:
\'then look upon them
every opportunity you get
encase them in that carbon, memory
of your life\'s, mementos and worry
no more...!\'
(a wonderful shorty
thanks for the read, dear poet)
February 4th, 2022 06:12
Absence
Rozina said:
Yes true. Some are replaceable, but some are not. Enjoy the moments as long as we can see, move, breathe!
February 4th, 2022 03:25
Rozina said:
Yes true. Some are replaceable, but some are not. Enjoy the moments as long as we can see, move, breathe!
February 4th, 2022 03:25
Absence
dusk arising said:
To easily we take so much of creation for granted, afterall it is like a backdrop to our selfish lives. Then one day we realise and cherish.
If those stars were taken away i should surely miss them, but if they were never there then there are plenty of other wonders all around us so capable of filling us with awe.
February 4th, 2022 03:06
dusk arising said:
To easily we take so much of creation for granted, afterall it is like a backdrop to our selfish lives. Then one day we realise and cherish.
If those stars were taken away i should surely miss them, but if they were never there then there are plenty of other wonders all around us so capable of filling us with awe.
February 4th, 2022 03:06
Absence
Goldfinch60 said:
They may well vanish but in life there will always be something to replace them and bring your life to fulfilment once again.
Andy
February 4th, 2022 02:29
Goldfinch60 said:
They may well vanish but in life there will always be something to replace them and bring your life to fulfilment once again.
Andy
February 4th, 2022 02:29
A blot on sheet
AuburnScribbler said:
I really loved reading this spilleronsheet, a very interesting concept, which has been excellently delivered.
May the blot write a song, for all to be proud of!
Bravo, and I hope that all is well!
February 3rd, 2022 12:56
AuburnScribbler said:
I really loved reading this spilleronsheet, a very interesting concept, which has been excellently delivered.
May the blot write a song, for all to be proud of!
Bravo, and I hope that all is well!
February 3rd, 2022 12:56
The end
Paul Bell said:
It\'s never the end till the fat lady sings.
Okay, that\'s been flagged up. It\'s never the end till the big-boned lady sings.
February 3rd, 2022 09:56
Paul Bell said:
It\'s never the end till the fat lady sings.
Okay, that\'s been flagged up. It\'s never the end till the big-boned lady sings.
February 3rd, 2022 09:56
The end
L. B. Mek said:
we fickle humanity
that throw away our heritage
and cultural pearls of wisdom
like we do
our daily clothes
then rush around
the very next morning, despairingly
questing
for that quintessential, shirt
woven
from the gleaned, experiences
of thousands of great minds
that managed
to conceptualise and then manufacture
shirt\'s
into this reality we inherited, brazenly;
while we
merely accessorise
those very same, shirt\'s
and deem ourselves, too
progressive, a modernity
to heed
their, painfully earned words
of caution...!
February 3rd, 2022 06:44
L. B. Mek said:
we fickle humanity
that throw away our heritage
and cultural pearls of wisdom
like we do
our daily clothes
then rush around
the very next morning, despairingly
questing
for that quintessential, shirt
woven
from the gleaned, experiences
of thousands of great minds
that managed
to conceptualise and then manufacture
shirt\'s
into this reality we inherited, brazenly;
while we
merely accessorise
those very same, shirt\'s
and deem ourselves, too
progressive, a modernity
to heed
their, painfully earned words
of caution...!
February 3rd, 2022 06:44
The end
dusk arising said:
Surely the most interesting parts of a story are not in it\'s beginning or end but rather on the adventures and passages along the way. Is love\'s beginning or ending more \'interesting\' than the love making in-between.... or, playing devil\'s advocate, are endings the thing which make us who we are?
February 3rd, 2022 03:48
dusk arising said:
Surely the most interesting parts of a story are not in it\'s beginning or end but rather on the adventures and passages along the way. Is love\'s beginning or ending more \'interesting\' than the love making in-between.... or, playing devil\'s advocate, are endings the thing which make us who we are?
February 3rd, 2022 03:48
The end
Rozina said:
Very relatable. It\'s common sense sometimes to put a stop to a situation that has no future.
February 3rd, 2022 03:40
Rozina said:
Very relatable. It\'s common sense sometimes to put a stop to a situation that has no future.
February 3rd, 2022 03:40
The end
Goldfinch60 said:
That future will be there but we will never know what it will be.
Andy
February 3rd, 2022 02:34
Goldfinch60 said:
That future will be there but we will never know what it will be.
Andy
February 3rd, 2022 02:34
The end
Vamsi Sudha said:
Dear Spiller, Every Ending has a new beginning..Look into it....!! Don\'t give up!!
February 3rd, 2022 00:57
Vamsi Sudha said:
Dear Spiller, Every Ending has a new beginning..Look into it....!! Don\'t give up!!
February 3rd, 2022 00:57
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