Comments received on poems by spilleronsheet
Tea/coffee, cookies and a book
Lorna said:
Felt this and more than just about coffee....it\'s other worldly.....
February 8th, 2022 14:40
Lorna said:
Felt this and more than just about coffee....it\'s other worldly.....
February 8th, 2022 14:40
Tea/coffee, cookies and a book
Paul Bell said:
Must admit, I think the world would end if coffee disappeared. Tea, on the other hand, us Brits would need to actually work instead of conquering the world with our tea breaks.
February 8th, 2022 11:02
Paul Bell said:
Must admit, I think the world would end if coffee disappeared. Tea, on the other hand, us Brits would need to actually work instead of conquering the world with our tea breaks.
February 8th, 2022 11:02
Tea/coffee, cookies and a book
dusk arising said:
Relax, have a nibble on that cookie - all else will wait, there\'s no enemy at your door - except time and the bosses\' whip..... but for now, read a page or two.... relaxation calming you... you\'ll feel much better.... how about that resignation letter... or a snooze by the river.... a downstream day comes highly recommended
February 8th, 2022 09:15
dusk arising said:
Relax, have a nibble on that cookie - all else will wait, there\'s no enemy at your door - except time and the bosses\' whip..... but for now, read a page or two.... relaxation calming you... you\'ll feel much better.... how about that resignation letter... or a snooze by the river.... a downstream day comes highly recommended
February 8th, 2022 09:15
Tea/coffee, cookies and a book
Rocky Lagou said:
Great poem! All we need sometimes is a good cup of coffee (or tea) and a good book to sponge up the dark nights. Nicely written! 💖👍☕
February 8th, 2022 09:01
Rocky Lagou said:
Great poem! All we need sometimes is a good cup of coffee (or tea) and a good book to sponge up the dark nights. Nicely written! 💖👍☕
February 8th, 2022 09:01
Re-engineering
FallenAngel1🕊 said:
John Lennon\'s Imagine comes to mind. No heaven,no hell,no countries,no religion,...well,I\'m sure you know the words. I read Teddys comment,..but had to wipe my eyes to read your replies,lol...I\'m always on.😂 But seriously,I did😭🤗🤗🤗🌹🌹🌹
February 7th, 2022 19:39
FallenAngel1🕊 said:
John Lennon\'s Imagine comes to mind. No heaven,no hell,no countries,no religion,...well,I\'m sure you know the words. I read Teddys comment,..but had to wipe my eyes to read your replies,lol...I\'m always on.😂 But seriously,I did😭🤗🤗🤗🌹🌹🌹
February 7th, 2022 19:39
Re-engineering
dusk arising said:
Well spiller, this poet lives behind locked doors and drinks water from a dammed stream in his fenced garden lit by an outside electric bulb.... none of which seems to interfere with my poetry.
I still see the beauty of the planet, am enchanted by the song of a blackbird and can blaize a trail to the wilderness, mountains or coast for spiritual nourishment.
Am I a victim?
February 7th, 2022 14:10
dusk arising said:
Well spiller, this poet lives behind locked doors and drinks water from a dammed stream in his fenced garden lit by an outside electric bulb.... none of which seems to interfere with my poetry.
I still see the beauty of the planet, am enchanted by the song of a blackbird and can blaize a trail to the wilderness, mountains or coast for spiritual nourishment.
Am I a victim?
February 7th, 2022 14:10
Re-engineering
Rocky Lagou said:
Beautiful! I loved this piece. No \"boundaries\" stand for the ones who truly desire to fulfill their purpose. 🙌👍Great job!
February 7th, 2022 13:51
Rocky Lagou said:
Beautiful! I loved this piece. No \"boundaries\" stand for the ones who truly desire to fulfill their purpose. 🙌👍Great job!
February 7th, 2022 13:51
Absence
Rocky Lagou said:
\"It\'s a song that we were born to sing, about the end of everything\" 💖👍 Lovely poem.
February 4th, 2022 10:03
Rocky Lagou said:
\"It\'s a song that we were born to sing, about the end of everything\" 💖👍 Lovely poem.
February 4th, 2022 10:03
Absence
L. B. Mek said:
\'then look upon them
every opportunity you get
encase them in that carbon, memory
of your life\'s, mementos and worry
no more...!\'
(a wonderful shorty
thanks for the read, dear poet)
February 4th, 2022 06:12
L. B. Mek said:
\'then look upon them
every opportunity you get
encase them in that carbon, memory
of your life\'s, mementos and worry
no more...!\'
(a wonderful shorty
thanks for the read, dear poet)
February 4th, 2022 06:12
Absence
Rozina said:
Yes true. Some are replaceable, but some are not. Enjoy the moments as long as we can see, move, breathe!
February 4th, 2022 03:25
Rozina said:
Yes true. Some are replaceable, but some are not. Enjoy the moments as long as we can see, move, breathe!
February 4th, 2022 03:25
Absence
dusk arising said:
To easily we take so much of creation for granted, afterall it is like a backdrop to our selfish lives. Then one day we realise and cherish.
If those stars were taken away i should surely miss them, but if they were never there then there are plenty of other wonders all around us so capable of filling us with awe.
February 4th, 2022 03:06
dusk arising said:
To easily we take so much of creation for granted, afterall it is like a backdrop to our selfish lives. Then one day we realise and cherish.
If those stars were taken away i should surely miss them, but if they were never there then there are plenty of other wonders all around us so capable of filling us with awe.
February 4th, 2022 03:06
Absence
Goldfinch60 said:
They may well vanish but in life there will always be something to replace them and bring your life to fulfilment once again.
Andy
February 4th, 2022 02:29
Goldfinch60 said:
They may well vanish but in life there will always be something to replace them and bring your life to fulfilment once again.
Andy
February 4th, 2022 02:29
A blot on sheet
AuburnScribbler said:
I really loved reading this spilleronsheet, a very interesting concept, which has been excellently delivered.
May the blot write a song, for all to be proud of!
Bravo, and I hope that all is well!
February 3rd, 2022 12:56
AuburnScribbler said:
I really loved reading this spilleronsheet, a very interesting concept, which has been excellently delivered.
May the blot write a song, for all to be proud of!
Bravo, and I hope that all is well!
February 3rd, 2022 12:56
The end
Paul Bell said:
It\'s never the end till the fat lady sings.
Okay, that\'s been flagged up. It\'s never the end till the big-boned lady sings.
February 3rd, 2022 09:56
Paul Bell said:
It\'s never the end till the fat lady sings.
Okay, that\'s been flagged up. It\'s never the end till the big-boned lady sings.
February 3rd, 2022 09:56
The end
L. B. Mek said:
we fickle humanity
that throw away our heritage
and cultural pearls of wisdom
like we do
our daily clothes
then rush around
the very next morning, despairingly
questing
for that quintessential, shirt
woven
from the gleaned, experiences
of thousands of great minds
that managed
to conceptualise and then manufacture
shirt\'s
into this reality we inherited, brazenly;
while we
merely accessorise
those very same, shirt\'s
and deem ourselves, too
progressive, a modernity
to heed
their, painfully earned words
of caution...!
February 3rd, 2022 06:44
L. B. Mek said:
we fickle humanity
that throw away our heritage
and cultural pearls of wisdom
like we do
our daily clothes
then rush around
the very next morning, despairingly
questing
for that quintessential, shirt
woven
from the gleaned, experiences
of thousands of great minds
that managed
to conceptualise and then manufacture
shirt\'s
into this reality we inherited, brazenly;
while we
merely accessorise
those very same, shirt\'s
and deem ourselves, too
progressive, a modernity
to heed
their, painfully earned words
of caution...!
February 3rd, 2022 06:44
The end
dusk arising said:
Surely the most interesting parts of a story are not in it\'s beginning or end but rather on the adventures and passages along the way. Is love\'s beginning or ending more \'interesting\' than the love making in-between.... or, playing devil\'s advocate, are endings the thing which make us who we are?
February 3rd, 2022 03:48
dusk arising said:
Surely the most interesting parts of a story are not in it\'s beginning or end but rather on the adventures and passages along the way. Is love\'s beginning or ending more \'interesting\' than the love making in-between.... or, playing devil\'s advocate, are endings the thing which make us who we are?
February 3rd, 2022 03:48
The end
Rozina said:
Very relatable. It\'s common sense sometimes to put a stop to a situation that has no future.
February 3rd, 2022 03:40
Rozina said:
Very relatable. It\'s common sense sometimes to put a stop to a situation that has no future.
February 3rd, 2022 03:40
The end
Goldfinch60 said:
That future will be there but we will never know what it will be.
Andy
February 3rd, 2022 02:34
Goldfinch60 said:
That future will be there but we will never know what it will be.
Andy
February 3rd, 2022 02:34
The end
Vamsi Sudha said:
Dear Spiller, Every Ending has a new beginning..Look into it....!! Don\'t give up!!
February 3rd, 2022 00:57
Vamsi Sudha said:
Dear Spiller, Every Ending has a new beginning..Look into it....!! Don\'t give up!!
February 3rd, 2022 00:57
A blot on sheet
Rocky Lagou said:
Talk about metapoetry, this right there was lovely. Bravo!👍
February 2nd, 2022 13:46
Rocky Lagou said:
Talk about metapoetry, this right there was lovely. Bravo!👍
February 2nd, 2022 13:46
A blot on sheet
Vamsi Sudha said:
Wow !! that was a great ending
\"the blot
spilled on the sheet
to be a dandelion on street…..\"
Let the thoughts be set free and have their way !! And ofcourse a blot on the sheets , can create such wonderful poems, like yours.....thanks spiller, U did spill well today :)
February 2nd, 2022 13:02
Vamsi Sudha said:
Wow !! that was a great ending
\"the blot
spilled on the sheet
to be a dandelion on street…..\"
Let the thoughts be set free and have their way !! And ofcourse a blot on the sheets , can create such wonderful poems, like yours.....thanks spiller, U did spill well today :)
February 2nd, 2022 13:02
A blot on sheet
Paul Bell said:
The man with the gun is truly powerful.
The man with the pen will take your life.
Such an amazing little device, especially when you sign without checking the small print.
February 2nd, 2022 12:39
Paul Bell said:
The man with the gun is truly powerful.
The man with the pen will take your life.
Such an amazing little device, especially when you sign without checking the small print.
February 2nd, 2022 12:39
A blot on sheet
dusk arising said:
The pen is mightier than the sword... so goes the wise old saying but alas they seem to have missed out the most important finishing flourish \"in the right hand\".
February 2nd, 2022 12:17
dusk arising said:
The pen is mightier than the sword... so goes the wise old saying but alas they seem to have missed out the most important finishing flourish \"in the right hand\".
February 2nd, 2022 12:17
Taking the next step
AuburnScribbler said:
A superlative poem here spilleronsheet.
Though the story you\'ve told is full of woe, the brightness dwells; in the way you have delivered it so masterfully.
My best wishes go out to those, who are in this situation, as it could so easily be me, as freelancing isn\'t easy at the moment.
Bravo, and I hope that all is well!
February 2nd, 2022 07:56
AuburnScribbler said:
A superlative poem here spilleronsheet.
Though the story you\'ve told is full of woe, the brightness dwells; in the way you have delivered it so masterfully.
My best wishes go out to those, who are in this situation, as it could so easily be me, as freelancing isn\'t easy at the moment.
Bravo, and I hope that all is well!
February 2nd, 2022 07:56
Taking the next step
dusk arising said:
The first verse made me think you had been in my home.... rather bleak here. I\'ve been up and down that ladder and played tunes upon it but in the end all that matters is a modicum of peace of mind. Well.... it works for me anyhow.
February 2nd, 2022 07:09
dusk arising said:
The first verse made me think you had been in my home.... rather bleak here. I\'ve been up and down that ladder and played tunes upon it but in the end all that matters is a modicum of peace of mind. Well.... it works for me anyhow.
February 2nd, 2022 07:09
Taking the next step
Rozina said:
Yes, a real struggle for some. I enjoyed your poem very much.
February 1st, 2022 22:47
Rozina said:
Yes, a real struggle for some. I enjoyed your poem very much.
February 1st, 2022 22:47
Taking the next step
Vamsi Sudha said:
A heart grieving situation, very well narrated and you conceptualize beyond words. Festoon of events well narrated !!
But its time for Taking the Next Step !!
February 1st, 2022 10:48
Vamsi Sudha said:
A heart grieving situation, very well narrated and you conceptualize beyond words. Festoon of events well narrated !!
But its time for Taking the Next Step !!
February 1st, 2022 10:48
Taking the next step
Neville said:
sadly, the world is full of em .. sad souls indeed .. now given a poetic voice & loudly ................. Neville
February 1st, 2022 08:02
Neville said:
sadly, the world is full of em .. sad souls indeed .. now given a poetic voice & loudly ................. Neville
February 1st, 2022 08:02
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