Comments received on poems by spilleronsheet
Absence
L. B. Mek said:
\'then look upon them
every opportunity you get
encase them in that carbon, memory
of your life\'s, mementos and worry
no more...!\'
(a wonderful shorty
thanks for the read, dear poet)
February 4th, 2022 06:12
L. B. Mek said:
\'then look upon them
every opportunity you get
encase them in that carbon, memory
of your life\'s, mementos and worry
no more...!\'
(a wonderful shorty
thanks for the read, dear poet)
February 4th, 2022 06:12
Absence
Rozina said:
Yes true. Some are replaceable, but some are not. Enjoy the moments as long as we can see, move, breathe!
February 4th, 2022 03:25
Rozina said:
Yes true. Some are replaceable, but some are not. Enjoy the moments as long as we can see, move, breathe!
February 4th, 2022 03:25
Absence
dusk arising said:
To easily we take so much of creation for granted, afterall it is like a backdrop to our selfish lives. Then one day we realise and cherish.
If those stars were taken away i should surely miss them, but if they were never there then there are plenty of other wonders all around us so capable of filling us with awe.
February 4th, 2022 03:06
dusk arising said:
To easily we take so much of creation for granted, afterall it is like a backdrop to our selfish lives. Then one day we realise and cherish.
If those stars were taken away i should surely miss them, but if they were never there then there are plenty of other wonders all around us so capable of filling us with awe.
February 4th, 2022 03:06
Absence
Goldfinch60 said:
They may well vanish but in life there will always be something to replace them and bring your life to fulfilment once again.
Andy
February 4th, 2022 02:29
Goldfinch60 said:
They may well vanish but in life there will always be something to replace them and bring your life to fulfilment once again.
Andy
February 4th, 2022 02:29
A blot on sheet
AuburnScribbler said:
I really loved reading this spilleronsheet, a very interesting concept, which has been excellently delivered.
May the blot write a song, for all to be proud of!
Bravo, and I hope that all is well!
February 3rd, 2022 12:56
AuburnScribbler said:
I really loved reading this spilleronsheet, a very interesting concept, which has been excellently delivered.
May the blot write a song, for all to be proud of!
Bravo, and I hope that all is well!
February 3rd, 2022 12:56
The end
Paul Bell said:
It\'s never the end till the fat lady sings.
Okay, that\'s been flagged up. It\'s never the end till the big-boned lady sings.
February 3rd, 2022 09:56
Paul Bell said:
It\'s never the end till the fat lady sings.
Okay, that\'s been flagged up. It\'s never the end till the big-boned lady sings.
February 3rd, 2022 09:56
The end
L. B. Mek said:
we fickle humanity
that throw away our heritage
and cultural pearls of wisdom
like we do
our daily clothes
then rush around
the very next morning, despairingly
questing
for that quintessential, shirt
woven
from the gleaned, experiences
of thousands of great minds
that managed
to conceptualise and then manufacture
shirt\'s
into this reality we inherited, brazenly;
while we
merely accessorise
those very same, shirt\'s
and deem ourselves, too
progressive, a modernity
to heed
their, painfully earned words
of caution...!
February 3rd, 2022 06:44
L. B. Mek said:
we fickle humanity
that throw away our heritage
and cultural pearls of wisdom
like we do
our daily clothes
then rush around
the very next morning, despairingly
questing
for that quintessential, shirt
woven
from the gleaned, experiences
of thousands of great minds
that managed
to conceptualise and then manufacture
shirt\'s
into this reality we inherited, brazenly;
while we
merely accessorise
those very same, shirt\'s
and deem ourselves, too
progressive, a modernity
to heed
their, painfully earned words
of caution...!
February 3rd, 2022 06:44
The end
dusk arising said:
Surely the most interesting parts of a story are not in it\'s beginning or end but rather on the adventures and passages along the way. Is love\'s beginning or ending more \'interesting\' than the love making in-between.... or, playing devil\'s advocate, are endings the thing which make us who we are?
February 3rd, 2022 03:48
dusk arising said:
Surely the most interesting parts of a story are not in it\'s beginning or end but rather on the adventures and passages along the way. Is love\'s beginning or ending more \'interesting\' than the love making in-between.... or, playing devil\'s advocate, are endings the thing which make us who we are?
February 3rd, 2022 03:48
The end
Rozina said:
Very relatable. It\'s common sense sometimes to put a stop to a situation that has no future.
February 3rd, 2022 03:40
Rozina said:
Very relatable. It\'s common sense sometimes to put a stop to a situation that has no future.
February 3rd, 2022 03:40
The end
Goldfinch60 said:
That future will be there but we will never know what it will be.
Andy
February 3rd, 2022 02:34
Goldfinch60 said:
That future will be there but we will never know what it will be.
Andy
February 3rd, 2022 02:34
The end
Vamsi Sudha said:
Dear Spiller, Every Ending has a new beginning..Look into it....!! Don\'t give up!!
February 3rd, 2022 00:57
Vamsi Sudha said:
Dear Spiller, Every Ending has a new beginning..Look into it....!! Don\'t give up!!
February 3rd, 2022 00:57
A blot on sheet
Rocky Lagou said:
Talk about metapoetry, this right there was lovely. Bravo!👍
February 2nd, 2022 13:46
Rocky Lagou said:
Talk about metapoetry, this right there was lovely. Bravo!👍
February 2nd, 2022 13:46
A blot on sheet
Vamsi Sudha said:
Wow !! that was a great ending
\"the blot
spilled on the sheet
to be a dandelion on street…..\"
Let the thoughts be set free and have their way !! And ofcourse a blot on the sheets , can create such wonderful poems, like yours.....thanks spiller, U did spill well today :)
February 2nd, 2022 13:02
Vamsi Sudha said:
Wow !! that was a great ending
\"the blot
spilled on the sheet
to be a dandelion on street…..\"
Let the thoughts be set free and have their way !! And ofcourse a blot on the sheets , can create such wonderful poems, like yours.....thanks spiller, U did spill well today :)
February 2nd, 2022 13:02
A blot on sheet
Paul Bell said:
The man with the gun is truly powerful.
The man with the pen will take your life.
Such an amazing little device, especially when you sign without checking the small print.
February 2nd, 2022 12:39
Paul Bell said:
The man with the gun is truly powerful.
The man with the pen will take your life.
Such an amazing little device, especially when you sign without checking the small print.
February 2nd, 2022 12:39
A blot on sheet
dusk arising said:
The pen is mightier than the sword... so goes the wise old saying but alas they seem to have missed out the most important finishing flourish \"in the right hand\".
February 2nd, 2022 12:17
dusk arising said:
The pen is mightier than the sword... so goes the wise old saying but alas they seem to have missed out the most important finishing flourish \"in the right hand\".
February 2nd, 2022 12:17
Taking the next step
AuburnScribbler said:
A superlative poem here spilleronsheet.
Though the story you\'ve told is full of woe, the brightness dwells; in the way you have delivered it so masterfully.
My best wishes go out to those, who are in this situation, as it could so easily be me, as freelancing isn\'t easy at the moment.
Bravo, and I hope that all is well!
February 2nd, 2022 07:56
AuburnScribbler said:
A superlative poem here spilleronsheet.
Though the story you\'ve told is full of woe, the brightness dwells; in the way you have delivered it so masterfully.
My best wishes go out to those, who are in this situation, as it could so easily be me, as freelancing isn\'t easy at the moment.
Bravo, and I hope that all is well!
February 2nd, 2022 07:56
Taking the next step
dusk arising said:
The first verse made me think you had been in my home.... rather bleak here. I\'ve been up and down that ladder and played tunes upon it but in the end all that matters is a modicum of peace of mind. Well.... it works for me anyhow.
February 2nd, 2022 07:09
dusk arising said:
The first verse made me think you had been in my home.... rather bleak here. I\'ve been up and down that ladder and played tunes upon it but in the end all that matters is a modicum of peace of mind. Well.... it works for me anyhow.
February 2nd, 2022 07:09
Taking the next step
Rozina said:
Yes, a real struggle for some. I enjoyed your poem very much.
February 1st, 2022 22:47
Rozina said:
Yes, a real struggle for some. I enjoyed your poem very much.
February 1st, 2022 22:47
Taking the next step
Vamsi Sudha said:
A heart grieving situation, very well narrated and you conceptualize beyond words. Festoon of events well narrated !!
But its time for Taking the Next Step !!
February 1st, 2022 10:48
Vamsi Sudha said:
A heart grieving situation, very well narrated and you conceptualize beyond words. Festoon of events well narrated !!
But its time for Taking the Next Step !!
February 1st, 2022 10:48
Taking the next step
Neville said:
sadly, the world is full of em .. sad souls indeed .. now given a poetic voice & loudly ................. Neville
February 1st, 2022 08:02
Neville said:
sadly, the world is full of em .. sad souls indeed .. now given a poetic voice & loudly ................. Neville
February 1st, 2022 08:02
Taking the next step
L. B. Mek said:
brilliant!
\'time kept him struggling
but he is determined to leap
even if breaking the only limbs left ….
February 1st, 2022 06:03
L. B. Mek said:
brilliant!
\'time kept him struggling
but he is determined to leap
even if breaking the only limbs left ….
February 1st, 2022 06:03
Taking the next step
Goldfinch60 said:
There are so many in that position spilleronsheet yet we live in a world where there is more than enough for everybody but those with the power wish to keep it all for themselves.
Andy
February 1st, 2022 02:23
Goldfinch60 said:
There are so many in that position spilleronsheet yet we live in a world where there is more than enough for everybody but those with the power wish to keep it all for themselves.
Andy
February 1st, 2022 02:23
Closed
Neville said:
the more I run through these words, the more I like them .. fine ink spilled freely & muchly enjoyed .............. N x
January 31st, 2022 17:37
Neville said:
the more I run through these words, the more I like them .. fine ink spilled freely & muchly enjoyed .............. N x
January 31st, 2022 17:37
The yellow-orange fruit
Paul Bell said:
I suppose we never did stray far from the tree, evolving only to kill ourselves eventually off. Maybe the monkey knew his position and was happy with it.
January 31st, 2022 14:00
Paul Bell said:
I suppose we never did stray far from the tree, evolving only to kill ourselves eventually off. Maybe the monkey knew his position and was happy with it.
January 31st, 2022 14:00
Closed
AuburnScribbler said:
A very relatable stanza here spilleronsheet, and emphatically written, with an understandable and most appropriate seething tone.
Manners do not cost anything, if someone says hello, then you should say hello back, but sadly, with the modern day mistrust forever growing, it ensures that a multitude of rude people remain.
Bravo, and I hope that all is well!
January 31st, 2022 09:52
AuburnScribbler said:
A very relatable stanza here spilleronsheet, and emphatically written, with an understandable and most appropriate seething tone.
Manners do not cost anything, if someone says hello, then you should say hello back, but sadly, with the modern day mistrust forever growing, it ensures that a multitude of rude people remain.
Bravo, and I hope that all is well!
January 31st, 2022 09:52
The yellow-orange fruit
Vamsi Sudha said:
Hey Spiller , you revealed your secret in the last para !! The Orb burning the Mankind.
Very deep thoughts of yours, Keep trying to reach your goals, though like plays a peek-a-boo with us sometimes...Never leave the Hope !! Keep trying ...wonderful inspiring and intriguing too :)
January 31st, 2022 05:12
Vamsi Sudha said:
Hey Spiller , you revealed your secret in the last para !! The Orb burning the Mankind.
Very deep thoughts of yours, Keep trying to reach your goals, though like plays a peek-a-boo with us sometimes...Never leave the Hope !! Keep trying ...wonderful inspiring and intriguing too :)
January 31st, 2022 05:12
The yellow-orange fruit
Rozina said:
This is a wonderful piece. Trying to reach a goal despite challenges. I can see that coconut or fruit high up and the difficulties faced in getting to it.
January 30th, 2022 21:55
Rozina said:
This is a wonderful piece. Trying to reach a goal despite challenges. I can see that coconut or fruit high up and the difficulties faced in getting to it.
January 30th, 2022 21:55
The yellow-orange fruit
Neville said:
Held my attention throughout so ya did ...
this was one almighty journey spiller .. I was immediately transported back to my time in Africa .. always woken by a monkey dropping fruit of all shapes and sizes from the surrounding trees on to my tin roof .. x
January 30th, 2022 16:28
Neville said:
Held my attention throughout so ya did ...
this was one almighty journey spiller .. I was immediately transported back to my time in Africa .. always woken by a monkey dropping fruit of all shapes and sizes from the surrounding trees on to my tin roof .. x
January 30th, 2022 16:28
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