Comments received on poems by spilleronsheet
Past, a moment to look upon
Rozina said:
No the past is not that bad. Many wonderful memories too. And learning not to repeat mistakes made in the past is a great step forward. Your poem is really excellent.
February 23rd, 2022 21:16
Rozina said:
No the past is not that bad. Many wonderful memories too. And learning not to repeat mistakes made in the past is a great step forward. Your poem is really excellent.
February 23rd, 2022 21:16
Past, a moment to look upon
ProfessionalPaperDigester said:
Great use of spaces, it adds a weird sort of tension to reading, and your lines, as already mentioned by most, are really good. I definitely want to see more of this.
February 23rd, 2022 15:54
ProfessionalPaperDigester said:
Great use of spaces, it adds a weird sort of tension to reading, and your lines, as already mentioned by most, are really good. I definitely want to see more of this.
February 23rd, 2022 15:54
Past, a moment to look upon
Rocky Lagou said:
Okay can we just talk about the line: \"Bloomed in a furnace.\" Because I\'m not just going to overlook it as if it weren\'t a result of a genius mind. I mean WOW. Not only does it visually evoke an image onto the reader, like a blossoming rose in a stifling furnace. But it holds so much power when taking into consideration its connotative meanings. Like I personally think that that line implies an upbringing from a soft and sensitive person who was surrounded, and influenced, by chaotic figures in life. But also the evolution of this speaker (despite their ring of bad influence) into something \"not too brittle.\" Once again bouncing back to that furnace analogy, which one could conclude that if something is left in a furnace for too long it will eventually disintegrate, really ties in the idea that the past doesn\'t have the final say over your life. So although this poem could be interpreted as a fun nostalgic moment of recollection, I feel like the deeper meaning is that the past doesn\'t define you. Wow, powerful. ✨💖
February 23rd, 2022 14:02
Rocky Lagou said:
Okay can we just talk about the line: \"Bloomed in a furnace.\" Because I\'m not just going to overlook it as if it weren\'t a result of a genius mind. I mean WOW. Not only does it visually evoke an image onto the reader, like a blossoming rose in a stifling furnace. But it holds so much power when taking into consideration its connotative meanings. Like I personally think that that line implies an upbringing from a soft and sensitive person who was surrounded, and influenced, by chaotic figures in life. But also the evolution of this speaker (despite their ring of bad influence) into something \"not too brittle.\" Once again bouncing back to that furnace analogy, which one could conclude that if something is left in a furnace for too long it will eventually disintegrate, really ties in the idea that the past doesn\'t have the final say over your life. So although this poem could be interpreted as a fun nostalgic moment of recollection, I feel like the deeper meaning is that the past doesn\'t define you. Wow, powerful. ✨💖
February 23rd, 2022 14:02
Past, a moment to look upon
Neville said:
this is indeed charming & clever too methinks .. you just can\'t beat a bit of reflection to make things appear so much more cleaner & clearer .. unfortunately, too many people fail to even consider the many positives that can come from it ........ yes there is a lesson hidden here behind the obvious ..... very nicely poemed indeed ....... Neville
February 23rd, 2022 13:43
Neville said:
this is indeed charming & clever too methinks .. you just can\'t beat a bit of reflection to make things appear so much more cleaner & clearer .. unfortunately, too many people fail to even consider the many positives that can come from it ........ yes there is a lesson hidden here behind the obvious ..... very nicely poemed indeed ....... Neville
February 23rd, 2022 13:43
Past, a moment to look upon
dusk arising said:
True that one\'s past will meld with one\'s character and produce the \'you\' of today. I have flashbacks of my foot in mouth moments which to this day make me cringe but the positive, as you suggest, reigns supreme.... for me anyway.
I feel that most of us who have become hooked on self expression through our poetry are in constant contact with our positive drive and for us, the future hold a wholesomeness to look forward to when we may be able to look back at this very day as a marker point in our self assessment/judgement.
February 23rd, 2022 13:32
dusk arising said:
True that one\'s past will meld with one\'s character and produce the \'you\' of today. I have flashbacks of my foot in mouth moments which to this day make me cringe but the positive, as you suggest, reigns supreme.... for me anyway.
I feel that most of us who have become hooked on self expression through our poetry are in constant contact with our positive drive and for us, the future hold a wholesomeness to look forward to when we may be able to look back at this very day as a marker point in our self assessment/judgement.
February 23rd, 2022 13:32
Confrontation
Bella Shepard said:
It\'s amazing that we yearn to explore the world, the space around us and yet often don\'t realize that there is an inner space often waiting to be explored. Bravo for such an awakening. Thank you !
February 23rd, 2022 07:12
Bella Shepard said:
It\'s amazing that we yearn to explore the world, the space around us and yet often don\'t realize that there is an inner space often waiting to be explored. Bravo for such an awakening. Thank you !
February 23rd, 2022 07:12
Confrontation
Goldfinch60 said:
So much wonder is hidden inside us spilleronsheet that it sometimes surprises us how wonderful life is.
Andy
February 23rd, 2022 02:23
Goldfinch60 said:
So much wonder is hidden inside us spilleronsheet that it sometimes surprises us how wonderful life is.
Andy
February 23rd, 2022 02:23
Confrontation
Rozina said:
Sometimes because of circumstances we have to keep much within ourselves. And then it erupts! A wonderful poem.
February 23rd, 2022 01:00
Rozina said:
Sometimes because of circumstances we have to keep much within ourselves. And then it erupts! A wonderful poem.
February 23rd, 2022 01:00
Confrontation
Fay Slimm. said:
Yes the hidden inner has much to teach dear spills - your lead up to finding its secrets is fascinatingly creative my friend.
February 22nd, 2022 16:54
Fay Slimm. said:
Yes the hidden inner has much to teach dear spills - your lead up to finding its secrets is fascinatingly creative my friend.
February 22nd, 2022 16:54
Confrontation
FallenAngel1🕊 said:
They say the beauty of lava,is that even as it destroys,it also creates. Just as love conquers hate. Creation conquers destruction. I guess what I got from this,is that we have to look within ourselves to create the best creation of ourselves.🤗🍻🌞🕊
February 22nd, 2022 16:25
FallenAngel1🕊 said:
They say the beauty of lava,is that even as it destroys,it also creates. Just as love conquers hate. Creation conquers destruction. I guess what I got from this,is that we have to look within ourselves to create the best creation of ourselves.🤗🍻🌞🕊
February 22nd, 2022 16:25
Confrontation
Rocky Lagou said:
Wow! What a potent thought delivered with excellence. \"The hidden us adapted to outside.\" I mean you really said it all with those lines. We are an ever-adapting being and we tend to lose our true self within these metamorphoses. 👏🦋🌠
February 22nd, 2022 12:10
Rocky Lagou said:
Wow! What a potent thought delivered with excellence. \"The hidden us adapted to outside.\" I mean you really said it all with those lines. We are an ever-adapting being and we tend to lose our true self within these metamorphoses. 👏🦋🌠
February 22nd, 2022 12:10
The so called sheep
Rocky Lagou said:
I find this poem beautifully parallel to my ethical standpoints. I strive to promote the notion that \"you have to live for YOURSELF\" in my poetry and my works. Although it may seem egocentric, at the end of the day, it is \"survival of the fittest.\" If you decide to follow leaders and join the bandwagon, you will never stand out or make YOUR voice heard. So I love the way you expressed that message through this poem! Bravo! 💖💖
February 22nd, 2022 09:29
Rocky Lagou said:
I find this poem beautifully parallel to my ethical standpoints. I strive to promote the notion that \"you have to live for YOURSELF\" in my poetry and my works. Although it may seem egocentric, at the end of the day, it is \"survival of the fittest.\" If you decide to follow leaders and join the bandwagon, you will never stand out or make YOUR voice heard. So I love the way you expressed that message through this poem! Bravo! 💖💖
February 22nd, 2022 09:29
Confrontation
Neville said:
I am a great believer in the concept of the unity of opposites or kenzen inchinyo .. these fine words made me think along such lines ........ N
February 22nd, 2022 08:08
Neville said:
I am a great believer in the concept of the unity of opposites or kenzen inchinyo .. these fine words made me think along such lines ........ N
February 22nd, 2022 08:08
Confrontation
L. B. Mek said:
an introvert
is only, one action
or sentence, away
from evolving
into an extrovert...
and a bookworm
is simply short of self-belief
from utilising
that same creativity
they\'ve been cultivating
in all those imagined scenes
they brought to life, in their mind\'s - eye...
(such is the gap
between our hopeful wishes
and those dreams
we realised, in-to our reality....)
February 22nd, 2022 05:26
L. B. Mek said:
an introvert
is only, one action
or sentence, away
from evolving
into an extrovert...
and a bookworm
is simply short of self-belief
from utilising
that same creativity
they\'ve been cultivating
in all those imagined scenes
they brought to life, in their mind\'s - eye...
(such is the gap
between our hopeful wishes
and those dreams
we realised, in-to our reality....)
February 22nd, 2022 05:26
Confrontation
Vamsi Sudha said:
Nice lines
the magma of anguish
the lava of grief
what was beneath ?
beautiful analogy , magma is hidden and lava flows out...wow !!
Let the eruptions give us wonderful poems :)) LAVA is a surely a fertile one !!
February 22nd, 2022 02:48
Vamsi Sudha said:
Nice lines
the magma of anguish
the lava of grief
what was beneath ?
beautiful analogy , magma is hidden and lava flows out...wow !!
Let the eruptions give us wonderful poems :)) LAVA is a surely a fertile one !!
February 22nd, 2022 02:48
Confrontation
Caring dove said:
Another great writing spiller ..🙂 there is so much more to us , than our difficult emotions .. as you express in your poem . It’s what’s underneath that matters and our true self
February 22nd, 2022 02:34
Caring dove said:
Another great writing spiller ..🙂 there is so much more to us , than our difficult emotions .. as you express in your poem . It’s what’s underneath that matters and our true self
February 22nd, 2022 02:34
The so called sheep
Rozina said:
Great lines. Yes always easier to follow the crowd. It needs guts to stand up and speak out one’s own beliefs.
February 21st, 2022 21:52
Rozina said:
Great lines. Yes always easier to follow the crowd. It needs guts to stand up and speak out one’s own beliefs.
February 21st, 2022 21:52
The so called sheep
Neville said:
there is more to this page than first meets the eye .. once the brain is engaged and an imagination is added, it is possible to interpret this fine work in many ways that go far beyond the obvious ......... super spiller ................ Neville
February 21st, 2022 15:49
Neville said:
there is more to this page than first meets the eye .. once the brain is engaged and an imagination is added, it is possible to interpret this fine work in many ways that go far beyond the obvious ......... super spiller ................ Neville
February 21st, 2022 15:49
The so called sheep
Poetic Dan said:
Yes! What and ending and once truly connected to that inner raw, the heart no longer feels the need for more.
Whatever will be will be..
Fantastic stuff, write on!
February 21st, 2022 13:30
Poetic Dan said:
Yes! What and ending and once truly connected to that inner raw, the heart no longer feels the need for more.
Whatever will be will be..
Fantastic stuff, write on!
February 21st, 2022 13:30
The so called sheep
L. B. Mek said:
\'Negligence and so aloof
never to speak
Deep inside were words of displease
obedience of years
tagged as sheep
middle of somewhere
in sudden breeze
the rebel broke out
frustrated lion
roared across streets
docile was it ?\'
loved these stanzas
wonderfully worded, showcasing
that less is more
succinctly inked, wonder of poetry..
thanks for sharing, dear Poet
February 21st, 2022 06:55
L. B. Mek said:
\'Negligence and so aloof
never to speak
Deep inside were words of displease
obedience of years
tagged as sheep
middle of somewhere
in sudden breeze
the rebel broke out
frustrated lion
roared across streets
docile was it ?\'
loved these stanzas
wonderfully worded, showcasing
that less is more
succinctly inked, wonder of poetry..
thanks for sharing, dear Poet
February 21st, 2022 06:55
The so called sheep
Goldfinch60 said:
Clever words spilleronsheet, so much meaning for which to contemplate.
Andy
February 21st, 2022 03:55
Goldfinch60 said:
Clever words spilleronsheet, so much meaning for which to contemplate.
Andy
February 21st, 2022 03:55
The so called sheep
Caring dove said:
Sometimes we have to follow the heart .. not just follow everyone ejse whilst making ourselves unhappy
Great writing again , spiller ))
February 21st, 2022 03:18
Caring dove said:
Sometimes we have to follow the heart .. not just follow everyone ejse whilst making ourselves unhappy
Great writing again , spiller ))
February 21st, 2022 03:18
The so called sheep
Vamsi Sudha said:
Dear Spiller, So many interpretations strike at once. But
Let not the SHEEP not Sleep,
The journey is surely Steep
Not the time to Weep
Face the Lion with a LEAP !!
Good one !! But Poignant one ofcourse !!
February 21st, 2022 02:58
Vamsi Sudha said:
Dear Spiller, So many interpretations strike at once. But
Let not the SHEEP not Sleep,
The journey is surely Steep
Not the time to Weep
Face the Lion with a LEAP !!
Good one !! But Poignant one ofcourse !!
February 21st, 2022 02:58
Hide and seek
AuburnScribbler said:
A wonderfully constructed evolution of \"Hide and Seek\" here spilleronsheet.
In your your poem, you have succinctly tied certain phases down, and I really do hope in time, that the \"seeking\" will outweigh the \"hiding!\"
Bravo, and I hope that all is well!
February 19th, 2022 13:27
AuburnScribbler said:
A wonderfully constructed evolution of \"Hide and Seek\" here spilleronsheet.
In your your poem, you have succinctly tied certain phases down, and I really do hope in time, that the \"seeking\" will outweigh the \"hiding!\"
Bravo, and I hope that all is well!
February 19th, 2022 13:27
Fishing
Rocky Lagou said:
Love the analogy between fishing and life. I personally saw it as a metaphor for writing.
\"holding the steady ink of rod
placing the brush in strokes\"
\"the more fishes in basket
pleases the stomach
the more marks on sheet
appeases the ambitions\"
Are you fishing for a poem? 👀😊
February 18th, 2022 11:32
Rocky Lagou said:
Love the analogy between fishing and life. I personally saw it as a metaphor for writing.
\"holding the steady ink of rod
placing the brush in strokes\"
\"the more fishes in basket
pleases the stomach
the more marks on sheet
appeases the ambitions\"
Are you fishing for a poem? 👀😊
February 18th, 2022 11:32
Fishing
Rozina said:
I enjoyed this poem. Many interesting and memorable lines.
February 18th, 2022 09:14
Rozina said:
I enjoyed this poem. Many interesting and memorable lines.
February 18th, 2022 09:14
Fishing
Vamsi Sudha said:
Best lines of the poem
\"come to the pond of fate
the pond of divinity that is laid
but remember to leave the burdens at home
cause happiness can’t live without peace on its own\"
Nice allegory !!
February 18th, 2022 06:40
Vamsi Sudha said:
Best lines of the poem
\"come to the pond of fate
the pond of divinity that is laid
but remember to leave the burdens at home
cause happiness can’t live without peace on its own\"
Nice allegory !!
February 18th, 2022 06:40
Fishing
L. B. Mek said:
this is really good
great job weaving your image/metaphor
of fishing, throughout your poem..
thanks for sharing, dear Poet
February 18th, 2022 06:25
L. B. Mek said:
this is really good
great job weaving your image/metaphor
of fishing, throughout your poem..
thanks for sharing, dear Poet
February 18th, 2022 06:25
Hide and seek
Vamsi Sudha said:
Hide and Seek
Another silver Streak
From Spiller at Peak
And nothing more to Tweak
And your poem is Classic :)
February 18th, 2022 02:18
Vamsi Sudha said:
Hide and Seek
Another silver Streak
From Spiller at Peak
And nothing more to Tweak
And your poem is Classic :)
February 18th, 2022 02:18
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