Comments received on poems by spilleronsheet
Hide and seek
Paul Bell said:
Life sure does fly by, and youth can be fleeting, some will prosper, some will fail, it\'s the way of the world and always will be. In a way I feel sorry for kids today, they\'re denied the freedom that probably made us what we are today.
February 16th, 2022 14:44
Paul Bell said:
Life sure does fly by, and youth can be fleeting, some will prosper, some will fail, it\'s the way of the world and always will be. In a way I feel sorry for kids today, they\'re denied the freedom that probably made us what we are today.
February 16th, 2022 14:44
Alloy
Rocky Lagou said:
I love the way in which you combined emotional language with metallurgic lexicon to produce a poem so rich and living. The play on the double meaning of \"pure\" was utilized so skillfully and the end result is a glory. Bravo! 👏😊
February 16th, 2022 09:47
Rocky Lagou said:
I love the way in which you combined emotional language with metallurgic lexicon to produce a poem so rich and living. The play on the double meaning of \"pure\" was utilized so skillfully and the end result is a glory. Bravo! 👏😊
February 16th, 2022 09:47
Alloy
Vamsi Sudha said:
Dear Spiller,
An alloy is stronger than its its original form...
These lines were excellent...
\"An amalgam of emotions
an alloy of reactions
like a student before exam
anxious and nervous
like a lover in romance
excited and anticipating
like a professional in interview
scared and stressed
like an athlete in a marathon
stiff and flexible \"
Time you prove your mettle !! :) dear Alloy !!
February 16th, 2022 01:01
Vamsi Sudha said:
Dear Spiller,
An alloy is stronger than its its original form...
These lines were excellent...
\"An amalgam of emotions
an alloy of reactions
like a student before exam
anxious and nervous
like a lover in romance
excited and anticipating
like a professional in interview
scared and stressed
like an athlete in a marathon
stiff and flexible \"
Time you prove your mettle !! :) dear Alloy !!
February 16th, 2022 01:01
The hundredth
Rocky Lagou said:
I know I already commented, but the first time around I honestly oversaw the power that one particular line possesses:
\"if a poet can write
it’s not only the pen
he holds
but also upon the support\"
This should be pinned with the rest of the iconic quotes in history books. 💖🌟👏
February 15th, 2022 11:59
Rocky Lagou said:
I know I already commented, but the first time around I honestly oversaw the power that one particular line possesses:
\"if a poet can write
it’s not only the pen
he holds
but also upon the support\"
This should be pinned with the rest of the iconic quotes in history books. 💖🌟👏
February 15th, 2022 11:59
Lost and unfound
Rozina said:
Such a creative poem. Hiding until the time is right probably. I enjoyed it.
February 14th, 2022 21:48
Rozina said:
Such a creative poem. Hiding until the time is right probably. I enjoyed it.
February 14th, 2022 21:48
Lost and unfound
dusk arising said:
That mischievous muse... all mine wants to do is write limericks at the moment... i swear she\'s got another man.
February 14th, 2022 13:14
dusk arising said:
That mischievous muse... all mine wants to do is write limericks at the moment... i swear she\'s got another man.
February 14th, 2022 13:14
Lost and unfound
Rocky Lagou said:
Wow! Nice play on \"lost and found.\" This was a journey from hope to dismay. This \"lost soul and muse\" feels like an enigma yet something so tangible and real. Nice job! Happy Valentine\'s 👍💖.
February 14th, 2022 12:11
Rocky Lagou said:
Wow! Nice play on \"lost and found.\" This was a journey from hope to dismay. This \"lost soul and muse\" feels like an enigma yet something so tangible and real. Nice job! Happy Valentine\'s 👍💖.
February 14th, 2022 12:11
The hundredth
Paul Bell said:
100, and more to come.
I suppose now, the computer is mightier than the sword.
I bet you still get the same excitement when you post a poem.
February 14th, 2022 12:03
Paul Bell said:
100, and more to come.
I suppose now, the computer is mightier than the sword.
I bet you still get the same excitement when you post a poem.
February 14th, 2022 12:03
The hundredth
Rocky Lagou said:
Wow! Reading this makes me feel like a newborn to the MPS family, lol 😊. But no, all jokes aside, this was such a heartwarming tribute. Being able to share your own poetry and read other\'s poetry on this site is such a gift. Congrats on the hundredth! 💖🎈🌟👍
February 14th, 2022 09:36
Rocky Lagou said:
Wow! Reading this makes me feel like a newborn to the MPS family, lol 😊. But no, all jokes aside, this was such a heartwarming tribute. Being able to share your own poetry and read other\'s poetry on this site is such a gift. Congrats on the hundredth! 💖🎈🌟👍
February 14th, 2022 09:36
The hundredth
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Yay a lovely great tribute to all the poets here, you wrote a fine acknowledgement of poetry and poem pals pen pals wow! Kudos!
Plz do read and comment my newest poem too.
And
Happy valentines day, poets.
February 14th, 2022 05:31
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Yay a lovely great tribute to all the poets here, you wrote a fine acknowledgement of poetry and poem pals pen pals wow! Kudos!
Plz do read and comment my newest poem too.
And
Happy valentines day, poets.
February 14th, 2022 05:31
The hundredth
Caring dove said:
Well done on the 100 th poem .. Kerp writing !
February 13th, 2022 01:53
Caring dove said:
Well done on the 100 th poem .. Kerp writing !
February 13th, 2022 01:53
The hundredth
Caring dove said:
Amazing spiller .. Thankyou for mentioning me ! I love this poem ., and I really do like your other poems . It’s so nice to feel comfortable and to Kerp receiving such nice support
I love this site .. 🌸
February 13th, 2022 01:52
Caring dove said:
Amazing spiller .. Thankyou for mentioning me ! I love this poem ., and I really do like your other poems . It’s so nice to feel comfortable and to Kerp receiving such nice support
I love this site .. 🌸
February 13th, 2022 01:52
The hundredth
Goldfinch60 said:
A good tribute spilleronsheet, there are some amazing poets on here and you are certainly one of them.
Andy
February 13th, 2022 01:46
Goldfinch60 said:
A good tribute spilleronsheet, there are some amazing poets on here and you are certainly one of them.
Andy
February 13th, 2022 01:46
The hundredth
Rozina said:
Congratulations on your 100th MPS posting. As a novice poet I received so much encouragement from the poets here.I learnt about various types of poetry and made new friends. This is a beautiful community. And may your wishes come true.
February 12th, 2022 19:16
Rozina said:
Congratulations on your 100th MPS posting. As a novice poet I received so much encouragement from the poets here.I learnt about various types of poetry and made new friends. This is a beautiful community. And may your wishes come true.
February 12th, 2022 19:16
The hundredth
Vamsi Sudha said:
Dear Spiller !
Congratulations and celebrations as you reach your 100th milestone. And many more to come..
That was a great tribute to all the wonderful poets at MPS !!!
And thank you for including me in your list of your poets. Do i really deserve it....I am humbled !!
Thank you Soo much !!!
February 12th, 2022 13:33
Vamsi Sudha said:
Dear Spiller !
Congratulations and celebrations as you reach your 100th milestone. And many more to come..
That was a great tribute to all the wonderful poets at MPS !!!
And thank you for including me in your list of your poets. Do i really deserve it....I am humbled !!
Thank you Soo much !!!
February 12th, 2022 13:33
The hundredth
dusk arising said:
I have learned so much from my fellow poets over my few years here on MPS. MInd you, nobody has taught me yet how not to put my foot in it. I live in hope.
Great tribute to all, or most, who contribute here.
February 12th, 2022 09:13
dusk arising said:
I have learned so much from my fellow poets over my few years here on MPS. MInd you, nobody has taught me yet how not to put my foot in it. I live in hope.
Great tribute to all, or most, who contribute here.
February 12th, 2022 09:13
Untold
Vamsi Sudha said:
Touchy to the soul !! these lines are lovely..
maybe the wind shall carry
carry the envelope of love
And what a way of expressing the moment !! Wonderful Spiller as usual !! Your poetry touches me always !!
February 11th, 2022 09:40
Vamsi Sudha said:
Touchy to the soul !! these lines are lovely..
maybe the wind shall carry
carry the envelope of love
And what a way of expressing the moment !! Wonderful Spiller as usual !! Your poetry touches me always !!
February 11th, 2022 09:40
Untold
L. B. Mek said:
absolutely loved this stanza:
\'across the junction
facing the moon
watching the stars
welded in sky
the amber sky turns red
red to blue
blue to black
as pair of eyes searches for you….\'
Brilliant!
February 11th, 2022 07:08
L. B. Mek said:
absolutely loved this stanza:
\'across the junction
facing the moon
watching the stars
welded in sky
the amber sky turns red
red to blue
blue to black
as pair of eyes searches for you….\'
Brilliant!
February 11th, 2022 07:08
Untold
Fay Slimm. said:
A heart-touching piece of written grief dear Spills and so well captured those sad lines of missing.
February 11th, 2022 07:05
Fay Slimm. said:
A heart-touching piece of written grief dear Spills and so well captured those sad lines of missing.
February 11th, 2022 07:05
Untold
dusk arising said:
A sad and moving tale which, having just read Fay\'s post today, takes me mindfully to thoughts of war. The painful waiting, fretting, hoping, planning despairing of the home maker. Unaware. Living on.
Really touching piece.
February 11th, 2022 06:44
dusk arising said:
A sad and moving tale which, having just read Fay\'s post today, takes me mindfully to thoughts of war. The painful waiting, fretting, hoping, planning despairing of the home maker. Unaware. Living on.
Really touching piece.
February 11th, 2022 06:44
Pause
FallenAngel1🕊 said:
How would you feel about writing poetry for the queen? I heard she\'s looking,..beautiful,beautiful,beautiful...🌞🌹🕊
February 10th, 2022 20:28
FallenAngel1🕊 said:
How would you feel about writing poetry for the queen? I heard she\'s looking,..beautiful,beautiful,beautiful...🌞🌹🕊
February 10th, 2022 20:28
Pause
dusk arising said:
Cor! You dont half run into a lofty subject here spiller. Time the greatest enigma of them all. And yes you address so much here, not least the desire to stop it, to step off and glance around... or maybe that skin crawling desire when we have goofed to turn back time.. if only. But if we could, would we still grow older as we travelled back in time.... lol somehow that one makes me laugh, i\'ll set the dial so i can sit my exams again that i took aged 16... and whoosh... there you are at your present age sat among 16 year olds you knew back then... weird.
I really enjoyed your post and as you can see i enjoyed playing with the subject.
February 10th, 2022 06:27
dusk arising said:
Cor! You dont half run into a lofty subject here spiller. Time the greatest enigma of them all. And yes you address so much here, not least the desire to stop it, to step off and glance around... or maybe that skin crawling desire when we have goofed to turn back time.. if only. But if we could, would we still grow older as we travelled back in time.... lol somehow that one makes me laugh, i\'ll set the dial so i can sit my exams again that i took aged 16... and whoosh... there you are at your present age sat among 16 year olds you knew back then... weird.
I really enjoyed your post and as you can see i enjoyed playing with the subject.
February 10th, 2022 06:27
Pause
Rozina said:
So so true. If only we could press the pause button during those moments that we wish could go on and on….Beautiful.
February 10th, 2022 04:54
Rozina said:
So so true. If only we could press the pause button during those moments that we wish could go on and on….Beautiful.
February 10th, 2022 04:54
Pause
L. B. Mek said:
\'What a pleasure
to control the hourglass\'..
(like, when taking a Pause
from life
to read such words of eloquence)
Brilliant! dear Poet
what a joy it is
to witness your poetry soaring..
thank you!
February 10th, 2022 04:36
L. B. Mek said:
\'What a pleasure
to control the hourglass\'..
(like, when taking a Pause
from life
to read such words of eloquence)
Brilliant! dear Poet
what a joy it is
to witness your poetry soaring..
thank you!
February 10th, 2022 04:36
Pause
Fay Slimm. said:
Such a vivid and heart-moving read dear spills on the pace of life - - you capture the need of quiet so well with clever imagery.
February 10th, 2022 03:39
Fay Slimm. said:
Such a vivid and heart-moving read dear spills on the pace of life - - you capture the need of quiet so well with clever imagery.
February 10th, 2022 03:39
Pause
Vamsi Sudha said:
Dear Spiller, its always said we love savoring sweet candies and swallow the bitter pills. But then when it applies to food, why not for our thoughts too..
Let the sweet memories stay and swallow the bitter moments immediately....Its works wonder, believe me..!!! Nice emotional write and penned beautifully !!
Its time you PAUSE on the sweet memories.. :)
February 10th, 2022 03:33
Vamsi Sudha said:
Dear Spiller, its always said we love savoring sweet candies and swallow the bitter pills. But then when it applies to food, why not for our thoughts too..
Let the sweet memories stay and swallow the bitter moments immediately....Its works wonder, believe me..!!! Nice emotional write and penned beautifully !!
Its time you PAUSE on the sweet memories.. :)
February 10th, 2022 03:33
Tea/coffee, cookies and a book
FallenAngel1🕊 said:
\"Tea/coffee,cookies and a good book\",...and drift away....Cheers spiller☕️🍪📖✌️🕊
February 9th, 2022 23:12
FallenAngel1🕊 said:
\"Tea/coffee,cookies and a good book\",...and drift away....Cheers spiller☕️🍪📖✌️🕊
February 9th, 2022 23:12
Tea/coffee, cookies and a book
Goldfinch60 said:
Tea, cookies and a book is bliss in our busy lives spilleronsheet and will bring us contentment.
Andy
February 9th, 2022 01:38
Goldfinch60 said:
Tea, cookies and a book is bliss in our busy lives spilleronsheet and will bring us contentment.
Andy
February 9th, 2022 01:38
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