Comments received on poems by spilleronsheet
The wooden plank
Caring dove said:
Feel sorry for the wooden plank .
Another great writing , spiller .. so engaging and well expressed ! 🙂🙂
January 27th, 2022 06:32
Caring dove said:
Feel sorry for the wooden plank .
Another great writing , spiller .. so engaging and well expressed ! 🙂🙂
January 27th, 2022 06:32
Shallow me or shallow thought of your life
Goldfinch60 said:
Being forced to do things that you do not want to do just to earn more money is so sad in this life.
Life is so good it does not need all that money to be at one with life.
Andy
January 26th, 2022 01:43
Goldfinch60 said:
Being forced to do things that you do not want to do just to earn more money is so sad in this life.
Life is so good it does not need all that money to be at one with life.
Andy
January 26th, 2022 01:43
Shallow me or shallow thought of your life
Rozina said:
I know of many young people forced by parents to take up courses (eg Medicine, engineering, law) that they have no interest in - just so that they can make money, have a certain ‘status’ in life. But they are miserable and later drop out of the profession. Your poem reflects this scenario very well.
January 26th, 2022 00:56
Rozina said:
I know of many young people forced by parents to take up courses (eg Medicine, engineering, law) that they have no interest in - just so that they can make money, have a certain ‘status’ in life. But they are miserable and later drop out of the profession. Your poem reflects this scenario very well.
January 26th, 2022 00:56
The deal
Rozina said:
Your poem truly resonates with me. We all have dreams. Some have to work harder than others to achieve them. We\'ll get there if we don\'t give up.
January 24th, 2022 22:12
Rozina said:
Your poem truly resonates with me. We all have dreams. Some have to work harder than others to achieve them. We\'ll get there if we don\'t give up.
January 24th, 2022 22:12
The deal
Paul Bell said:
Every kid is born equal. I\'m trying to remember what lying politician said that. Some sure will achieve brilliance, some will die young. Some rich kid will even become prime minister.
January 24th, 2022 12:09
Paul Bell said:
Every kid is born equal. I\'m trying to remember what lying politician said that. Some sure will achieve brilliance, some will die young. Some rich kid will even become prime minister.
January 24th, 2022 12:09
The deal
FallenAngel1🕊 said:
I don\'t know what to say now that Teddy has said it all😊 Good one✌️🕊
January 24th, 2022 12:04
FallenAngel1🕊 said:
I don\'t know what to say now that Teddy has said it all😊 Good one✌️🕊
January 24th, 2022 12:04
Petunia
Neville said:
tinged with sadness ... but this clearly demonstrates your increasing confidence as a fine poet and your versatility ... Neville x
January 23rd, 2022 06:11
Neville said:
tinged with sadness ... but this clearly demonstrates your increasing confidence as a fine poet and your versatility ... Neville x
January 23rd, 2022 06:11
Petunia
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words spilleronsheet but those blooms will return.
Andy
January 22nd, 2022 01:55
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words spilleronsheet but those blooms will return.
Andy
January 22nd, 2022 01:55
Petunia
Rozina said:
A lovely poem about a lovely flower. We have petunias growing here, of many colours usually sold in hanging pots.
January 21st, 2022 22:17
Rozina said:
A lovely poem about a lovely flower. We have petunias growing here, of many colours usually sold in hanging pots.
January 21st, 2022 22:17
Petunia
Vamsi Sudha said:
Petunia is a beautiful flower with contradictory symbolism. Resentment and anger gone away with the wind. So it all peace that prevails. So let the peace and soothing sunshine give rise to beautiful Sunflower in our lives !! Nice one Spiller.. !!
January 21st, 2022 20:07
Vamsi Sudha said:
Petunia is a beautiful flower with contradictory symbolism. Resentment and anger gone away with the wind. So it all peace that prevails. So let the peace and soothing sunshine give rise to beautiful Sunflower in our lives !! Nice one Spiller.. !!
January 21st, 2022 20:07
Petunia
Caring dove said:
Feel sorry for petunia (( just love your poems .
Great writing .. so nicely expressed )))
January 21st, 2022 17:38
Caring dove said:
Feel sorry for petunia (( just love your poems .
Great writing .. so nicely expressed )))
January 21st, 2022 17:38
The bridge
Caring dove said:
Really like this . Again , spiller .. another great poem . 🙂
January 21st, 2022 02:49
Caring dove said:
Really like this . Again , spiller .. another great poem . 🙂
January 21st, 2022 02:49
The bridge
Goldfinch60 said:
Super words spilleronsheet, to me a bridge joins all together, without bridges there would be so much loneliness in the world.
Andy
January 21st, 2022 02:40
Goldfinch60 said:
Super words spilleronsheet, to me a bridge joins all together, without bridges there would be so much loneliness in the world.
Andy
January 21st, 2022 02:40
The bridge
Rozina said:
Wonderful lines. Got me thinking about a lost soul, not in balance.... Thank you for this.
January 20th, 2022 21:42
Rozina said:
Wonderful lines. Got me thinking about a lost soul, not in balance.... Thank you for this.
January 20th, 2022 21:42
The bridge
L. B. Mek said:
very happy for you, my friend
an impressive display
of your poetic refinement and growth
wonderfully executed!
thanks for sharing, dear Poet
January 20th, 2022 07:25
L. B. Mek said:
very happy for you, my friend
an impressive display
of your poetic refinement and growth
wonderfully executed!
thanks for sharing, dear Poet
January 20th, 2022 07:25
The bridge
Paul Bell said:
Take the bridge away, does the space become the enemy or the challenge.
Place a padlock on the bridge, throw the key in the river. Maybe one soul waiting to be released.
January 20th, 2022 06:56
Paul Bell said:
Take the bridge away, does the space become the enemy or the challenge.
Place a padlock on the bridge, throw the key in the river. Maybe one soul waiting to be released.
January 20th, 2022 06:56
The king
Vamsi Sudha said:
Dear Spiller !! Its time you start writing , I see another J.K.Rowling lurking inside...Time to wake it up :)
Wonderful fantasy and illustrated well....
January 19th, 2022 05:38
Vamsi Sudha said:
Dear Spiller !! Its time you start writing , I see another J.K.Rowling lurking inside...Time to wake it up :)
Wonderful fantasy and illustrated well....
January 19th, 2022 05:38
The king
Neville said:
Wow ... & wow again ... there are more morals woven, threaded & tied within these lines than the fabled moral mountain I keep in the back of my own mind ....... so good to know your imagination has no bounds ....................................... :) Neville
January 19th, 2022 04:27
Neville said:
Wow ... & wow again ... there are more morals woven, threaded & tied within these lines than the fabled moral mountain I keep in the back of my own mind ....... so good to know your imagination has no bounds ....................................... :) Neville
January 19th, 2022 04:27
The king
Caring dove said:
Great ending lines spiller .
Good writing 🙂 the light and good should always win
January 19th, 2022 02:18
Caring dove said:
Great ending lines spiller .
Good writing 🙂 the light and good should always win
January 19th, 2022 02:18
The well
Goldfinch60 said:
Very intriguing write spilleronsheet, that well will revive with your words.
Andy
January 19th, 2022 01:58
Goldfinch60 said:
Very intriguing write spilleronsheet, that well will revive with your words.
Andy
January 19th, 2022 01:58
The well
Rozina said:
This gave me goosebumps. A wonderful spooky atmosphere. I love that dandelion seed at the end.
January 18th, 2022 21:17
Rozina said:
This gave me goosebumps. A wonderful spooky atmosphere. I love that dandelion seed at the end.
January 18th, 2022 21:17
The well
Neville said:
You have conjoured up so many possibilities here my mind is a riot with them .. from a psychoanalytical perspective, wells have a myriad of possible meanings ............ I simply love what you have done here & indeed to my imagination .................. N :) x
January 18th, 2022 17:23
Neville said:
You have conjoured up so many possibilities here my mind is a riot with them .. from a psychoanalytical perspective, wells have a myriad of possible meanings ............ I simply love what you have done here & indeed to my imagination .................. N :) x
January 18th, 2022 17:23
The well
Vamsi Sudha said:
Dear Spiller
Its Time the Well is \"Well\"
And its the best time to Tell
So here I foreTell :)
Good one and great visionary !! Its time you enter the field of screenplay too with your wonderful vision of events !! Good one Spiller as always !!
January 18th, 2022 14:09
Vamsi Sudha said:
Dear Spiller
Its Time the Well is \"Well\"
And its the best time to Tell
So here I foreTell :)
Good one and great visionary !! Its time you enter the field of screenplay too with your wonderful vision of events !! Good one Spiller as always !!
January 18th, 2022 14:09
The well
FallenAngel1🕊 said:
I couldn\'t help but to read this from a literal point of view,..I guess it\'s the urban explorer in me,..I\'ve been to abandoned places with old decaying wells. But something tells me this to be taken metiphorically,or maybe a little of both? Good imagery,..and reflective.😀✌️🕊
January 18th, 2022 12:51
FallenAngel1🕊 said:
I couldn\'t help but to read this from a literal point of view,..I guess it\'s the urban explorer in me,..I\'ve been to abandoned places with old decaying wells. But something tells me this to be taken metiphorically,or maybe a little of both? Good imagery,..and reflective.😀✌️🕊
January 18th, 2022 12:51
The one percent that matters
Paul Bell said:
I\'ve always loved medication, just sometimes saying buzzwords can have a relaxing feel about it. I\'ve just never managed to take it to a higher level, though I\'m still trying hard at it.
January 18th, 2022 10:58
Paul Bell said:
I\'ve always loved medication, just sometimes saying buzzwords can have a relaxing feel about it. I\'ve just never managed to take it to a higher level, though I\'m still trying hard at it.
January 18th, 2022 10:58
The one percent that matters
AuburnScribbler said:
Another masterful write here spilleronsheet.
Though it\'s clear, your poem leans towards the one vs. the many, when it comes to the \"crunch\" we are all in the same boat, and the way you remind us of that, particularly in the last two stanzas, is wonderfully achieved!
Bravo, and I hope that all is well!
January 18th, 2022 10:37
AuburnScribbler said:
Another masterful write here spilleronsheet.
Though it\'s clear, your poem leans towards the one vs. the many, when it comes to the \"crunch\" we are all in the same boat, and the way you remind us of that, particularly in the last two stanzas, is wonderfully achieved!
Bravo, and I hope that all is well!
January 18th, 2022 10:37
The one percent that matters
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good words spilleronsheet and that final stanza is so positive and that is the way life should be.
Andy
January 18th, 2022 01:49
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good words spilleronsheet and that final stanza is so positive and that is the way life should be.
Andy
January 18th, 2022 01:49
The one percent that matters
Rozina said:
Words that give me hope, thank you so much.
January 17th, 2022 22:52
Rozina said:
Words that give me hope, thank you so much.
January 17th, 2022 22:52
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