Comments received on poems by spilleronsheet
Misconception of position
Rozina said:
In the desert mirages play tricks on the eyes. Your poem depicts this beautifully.
January 28th, 2022 04:30
Rozina said:
In the desert mirages play tricks on the eyes. Your poem depicts this beautifully.
January 28th, 2022 04:30
Misconception of position
Caring dove said:
Your recent poems are so engaging to read , spiller 🙂 great writing again , loving your mention of a princess
January 28th, 2022 03:54
Caring dove said:
Your recent poems are so engaging to read , spiller 🙂 great writing again , loving your mention of a princess
January 28th, 2022 03:54
The wooden plank
Goldfinch60 said:
So many questions when you see those planks.
Andy
January 28th, 2022 02:44
Goldfinch60 said:
So many questions when you see those planks.
Andy
January 28th, 2022 02:44
The wooden plank
FallenAngel1🕊 said:
Really touching spiller,that little plank has the heart of the little engine that could,...
🚂 juga,juga,juga,jug,..😃✌🕊
January 27th, 2022 13:39
FallenAngel1🕊 said:
Really touching spiller,that little plank has the heart of the little engine that could,...
🚂 juga,juga,juga,jug,..😃✌🕊
January 27th, 2022 13:39
The wooden plank
sophin said:
beautiful write, spiller. sometimes we do feel like wooden planks, drifting without control, hoping for life
January 27th, 2022 11:18
sophin said:
beautiful write, spiller. sometimes we do feel like wooden planks, drifting without control, hoping for life
January 27th, 2022 11:18
The wooden plank
Fay Slimm. said:
What an inspiring personlising you made of that wooden plank spills - my heart was touched at the efforts it made and not to shore itself seemed so sad........... you have a true poet\'s imagination and I really enjoyed the tale you told.
January 27th, 2022 09:16
Fay Slimm. said:
What an inspiring personlising you made of that wooden plank spills - my heart was touched at the efforts it made and not to shore itself seemed so sad........... you have a true poet\'s imagination and I really enjoyed the tale you told.
January 27th, 2022 09:16
Shallow me or shallow thought of your life
Neville said:
how well you draw attention to the kind of injustice that so often goes under and therefore avoids the moral radar ............. this was crying out to be posted ............. x
January 27th, 2022 08:43
Neville said:
how well you draw attention to the kind of injustice that so often goes under and therefore avoids the moral radar ............. this was crying out to be posted ............. x
January 27th, 2022 08:43
The wooden plank
Neville said:
you have done yourself & this craft of ours both proud today my friend .... x
January 27th, 2022 08:39
Neville said:
you have done yourself & this craft of ours both proud today my friend .... x
January 27th, 2022 08:39
The wooden plank
Buzz Bray said:
I agree with LB Mek. Also love the line \"It slowly giddied over to the lighthouse. \" Great imagery!
January 27th, 2022 08:02
Buzz Bray said:
I agree with LB Mek. Also love the line \"It slowly giddied over to the lighthouse. \" Great imagery!
January 27th, 2022 08:02
The wooden plank
L. B. Mek said:
\'On the whims
of waves, that carried on the sounds
of wind, that it heard on the guidance
of lighthouse, it moved
this lighthouse lay upon the rocks
the plank finally saw a light
years had passed by
lost its identity as it flowed by
what dreams
what ambitions
what desires
and now even what duties
after so long
it finally saw the shore of life\'
Brilliant!
January 27th, 2022 07:10
L. B. Mek said:
\'On the whims
of waves, that carried on the sounds
of wind, that it heard on the guidance
of lighthouse, it moved
this lighthouse lay upon the rocks
the plank finally saw a light
years had passed by
lost its identity as it flowed by
what dreams
what ambitions
what desires
and now even what duties
after so long
it finally saw the shore of life\'
Brilliant!
January 27th, 2022 07:10
The wooden plank
Caring dove said:
Feel sorry for the wooden plank .
Another great writing , spiller .. so engaging and well expressed ! 🙂🙂
January 27th, 2022 06:32
Caring dove said:
Feel sorry for the wooden plank .
Another great writing , spiller .. so engaging and well expressed ! 🙂🙂
January 27th, 2022 06:32
Shallow me or shallow thought of your life
Goldfinch60 said:
Being forced to do things that you do not want to do just to earn more money is so sad in this life.
Life is so good it does not need all that money to be at one with life.
Andy
January 26th, 2022 01:43
Goldfinch60 said:
Being forced to do things that you do not want to do just to earn more money is so sad in this life.
Life is so good it does not need all that money to be at one with life.
Andy
January 26th, 2022 01:43
Shallow me or shallow thought of your life
Rozina said:
I know of many young people forced by parents to take up courses (eg Medicine, engineering, law) that they have no interest in - just so that they can make money, have a certain ‘status’ in life. But they are miserable and later drop out of the profession. Your poem reflects this scenario very well.
January 26th, 2022 00:56
Rozina said:
I know of many young people forced by parents to take up courses (eg Medicine, engineering, law) that they have no interest in - just so that they can make money, have a certain ‘status’ in life. But they are miserable and later drop out of the profession. Your poem reflects this scenario very well.
January 26th, 2022 00:56
The deal
Rozina said:
Your poem truly resonates with me. We all have dreams. Some have to work harder than others to achieve them. We\'ll get there if we don\'t give up.
January 24th, 2022 22:12
Rozina said:
Your poem truly resonates with me. We all have dreams. Some have to work harder than others to achieve them. We\'ll get there if we don\'t give up.
January 24th, 2022 22:12
The deal
Paul Bell said:
Every kid is born equal. I\'m trying to remember what lying politician said that. Some sure will achieve brilliance, some will die young. Some rich kid will even become prime minister.
January 24th, 2022 12:09
Paul Bell said:
Every kid is born equal. I\'m trying to remember what lying politician said that. Some sure will achieve brilliance, some will die young. Some rich kid will even become prime minister.
January 24th, 2022 12:09
The deal
FallenAngel1🕊 said:
I don\'t know what to say now that Teddy has said it all😊 Good one✌️🕊
January 24th, 2022 12:04
FallenAngel1🕊 said:
I don\'t know what to say now that Teddy has said it all😊 Good one✌️🕊
January 24th, 2022 12:04
Petunia
Neville said:
tinged with sadness ... but this clearly demonstrates your increasing confidence as a fine poet and your versatility ... Neville x
January 23rd, 2022 06:11
Neville said:
tinged with sadness ... but this clearly demonstrates your increasing confidence as a fine poet and your versatility ... Neville x
January 23rd, 2022 06:11
Petunia
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words spilleronsheet but those blooms will return.
Andy
January 22nd, 2022 01:55
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words spilleronsheet but those blooms will return.
Andy
January 22nd, 2022 01:55
Petunia
Rozina said:
A lovely poem about a lovely flower. We have petunias growing here, of many colours usually sold in hanging pots.
January 21st, 2022 22:17
Rozina said:
A lovely poem about a lovely flower. We have petunias growing here, of many colours usually sold in hanging pots.
January 21st, 2022 22:17
Petunia
Vamsi Sudha said:
Petunia is a beautiful flower with contradictory symbolism. Resentment and anger gone away with the wind. So it all peace that prevails. So let the peace and soothing sunshine give rise to beautiful Sunflower in our lives !! Nice one Spiller.. !!
January 21st, 2022 20:07
Vamsi Sudha said:
Petunia is a beautiful flower with contradictory symbolism. Resentment and anger gone away with the wind. So it all peace that prevails. So let the peace and soothing sunshine give rise to beautiful Sunflower in our lives !! Nice one Spiller.. !!
January 21st, 2022 20:07
Petunia
Caring dove said:
Feel sorry for petunia (( just love your poems .
Great writing .. so nicely expressed )))
January 21st, 2022 17:38
Caring dove said:
Feel sorry for petunia (( just love your poems .
Great writing .. so nicely expressed )))
January 21st, 2022 17:38
The bridge
Caring dove said:
Really like this . Again , spiller .. another great poem . 🙂
January 21st, 2022 02:49
Caring dove said:
Really like this . Again , spiller .. another great poem . 🙂
January 21st, 2022 02:49
The bridge
Goldfinch60 said:
Super words spilleronsheet, to me a bridge joins all together, without bridges there would be so much loneliness in the world.
Andy
January 21st, 2022 02:40
Goldfinch60 said:
Super words spilleronsheet, to me a bridge joins all together, without bridges there would be so much loneliness in the world.
Andy
January 21st, 2022 02:40
The bridge
Rozina said:
Wonderful lines. Got me thinking about a lost soul, not in balance.... Thank you for this.
January 20th, 2022 21:42
Rozina said:
Wonderful lines. Got me thinking about a lost soul, not in balance.... Thank you for this.
January 20th, 2022 21:42
The bridge
L. B. Mek said:
very happy for you, my friend
an impressive display
of your poetic refinement and growth
wonderfully executed!
thanks for sharing, dear Poet
January 20th, 2022 07:25
L. B. Mek said:
very happy for you, my friend
an impressive display
of your poetic refinement and growth
wonderfully executed!
thanks for sharing, dear Poet
January 20th, 2022 07:25
The bridge
Paul Bell said:
Take the bridge away, does the space become the enemy or the challenge.
Place a padlock on the bridge, throw the key in the river. Maybe one soul waiting to be released.
January 20th, 2022 06:56
Paul Bell said:
Take the bridge away, does the space become the enemy or the challenge.
Place a padlock on the bridge, throw the key in the river. Maybe one soul waiting to be released.
January 20th, 2022 06:56
The king
Vamsi Sudha said:
Dear Spiller !! Its time you start writing , I see another J.K.Rowling lurking inside...Time to wake it up :)
Wonderful fantasy and illustrated well....
January 19th, 2022 05:38
Vamsi Sudha said:
Dear Spiller !! Its time you start writing , I see another J.K.Rowling lurking inside...Time to wake it up :)
Wonderful fantasy and illustrated well....
January 19th, 2022 05:38
The king
Neville said:
Wow ... & wow again ... there are more morals woven, threaded & tied within these lines than the fabled moral mountain I keep in the back of my own mind ....... so good to know your imagination has no bounds ....................................... :) Neville
January 19th, 2022 04:27
Neville said:
Wow ... & wow again ... there are more morals woven, threaded & tied within these lines than the fabled moral mountain I keep in the back of my own mind ....... so good to know your imagination has no bounds ....................................... :) Neville
January 19th, 2022 04:27
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