Comments received on poems by spilleronsheet
Petunia
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Feel sorry for petunia (( just love your poems .
Great writing .. so nicely expressed )))
January 21st, 2022 17:38
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Feel sorry for petunia (( just love your poems .
Great writing .. so nicely expressed )))
January 21st, 2022 17:38
The bridge
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Really like this . Again , spiller .. another great poem . 🙂
January 21st, 2022 02:49
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Really like this . Again , spiller .. another great poem . 🙂
January 21st, 2022 02:49
The bridge
Goldfinch60 said:
Super words spilleronsheet, to me a bridge joins all together, without bridges there would be so much loneliness in the world.
Andy
January 21st, 2022 02:40
Goldfinch60 said:
Super words spilleronsheet, to me a bridge joins all together, without bridges there would be so much loneliness in the world.
Andy
January 21st, 2022 02:40
The bridge
Rozina said:
Wonderful lines. Got me thinking about a lost soul, not in balance.... Thank you for this.
January 20th, 2022 21:42
Rozina said:
Wonderful lines. Got me thinking about a lost soul, not in balance.... Thank you for this.
January 20th, 2022 21:42
The bridge
L. B. Mek said:
very happy for you, my friend
an impressive display
of your poetic refinement and growth
wonderfully executed!
thanks for sharing, dear Poet
January 20th, 2022 07:25
L. B. Mek said:
very happy for you, my friend
an impressive display
of your poetic refinement and growth
wonderfully executed!
thanks for sharing, dear Poet
January 20th, 2022 07:25
The bridge
Paul Bell said:
Take the bridge away, does the space become the enemy or the challenge.
Place a padlock on the bridge, throw the key in the river. Maybe one soul waiting to be released.
January 20th, 2022 06:56
Paul Bell said:
Take the bridge away, does the space become the enemy or the challenge.
Place a padlock on the bridge, throw the key in the river. Maybe one soul waiting to be released.
January 20th, 2022 06:56
The king
Vamsi Sudha said:
Dear Spiller !! Its time you start writing , I see another J.K.Rowling lurking inside...Time to wake it up :)
Wonderful fantasy and illustrated well....
January 19th, 2022 05:38
Vamsi Sudha said:
Dear Spiller !! Its time you start writing , I see another J.K.Rowling lurking inside...Time to wake it up :)
Wonderful fantasy and illustrated well....
January 19th, 2022 05:38
The king
Neville said:
Wow ... & wow again ... there are more morals woven, threaded & tied within these lines than the fabled moral mountain I keep in the back of my own mind ....... so good to know your imagination has no bounds ....................................... :) Neville
January 19th, 2022 04:27
Neville said:
Wow ... & wow again ... there are more morals woven, threaded & tied within these lines than the fabled moral mountain I keep in the back of my own mind ....... so good to know your imagination has no bounds ....................................... :) Neville
January 19th, 2022 04:27
The king
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Great ending lines spiller .
Good writing 🙂 the light and good should always win
January 19th, 2022 02:18
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Great ending lines spiller .
Good writing 🙂 the light and good should always win
January 19th, 2022 02:18
The well
Goldfinch60 said:
Very intriguing write spilleronsheet, that well will revive with your words.
Andy
January 19th, 2022 01:58
Goldfinch60 said:
Very intriguing write spilleronsheet, that well will revive with your words.
Andy
January 19th, 2022 01:58
The well
Rozina said:
This gave me goosebumps. A wonderful spooky atmosphere. I love that dandelion seed at the end.
January 18th, 2022 21:17
Rozina said:
This gave me goosebumps. A wonderful spooky atmosphere. I love that dandelion seed at the end.
January 18th, 2022 21:17
The well
Neville said:
You have conjoured up so many possibilities here my mind is a riot with them .. from a psychoanalytical perspective, wells have a myriad of possible meanings ............ I simply love what you have done here & indeed to my imagination .................. N :) x
January 18th, 2022 17:23
Neville said:
You have conjoured up so many possibilities here my mind is a riot with them .. from a psychoanalytical perspective, wells have a myriad of possible meanings ............ I simply love what you have done here & indeed to my imagination .................. N :) x
January 18th, 2022 17:23
The well
Vamsi Sudha said:
Dear Spiller
Its Time the Well is \"Well\"
And its the best time to Tell
So here I foreTell :)
Good one and great visionary !! Its time you enter the field of screenplay too with your wonderful vision of events !! Good one Spiller as always !!
January 18th, 2022 14:09
Vamsi Sudha said:
Dear Spiller
Its Time the Well is \"Well\"
And its the best time to Tell
So here I foreTell :)
Good one and great visionary !! Its time you enter the field of screenplay too with your wonderful vision of events !! Good one Spiller as always !!
January 18th, 2022 14:09
The well
FallenAngel1🕊 said:
I couldn\'t help but to read this from a literal point of view,..I guess it\'s the urban explorer in me,..I\'ve been to abandoned places with old decaying wells. But something tells me this to be taken metiphorically,or maybe a little of both? Good imagery,..and reflective.😀✌️🕊
January 18th, 2022 12:51
FallenAngel1🕊 said:
I couldn\'t help but to read this from a literal point of view,..I guess it\'s the urban explorer in me,..I\'ve been to abandoned places with old decaying wells. But something tells me this to be taken metiphorically,or maybe a little of both? Good imagery,..and reflective.😀✌️🕊
January 18th, 2022 12:51
The one percent that matters
Paul Bell said:
I\'ve always loved medication, just sometimes saying buzzwords can have a relaxing feel about it. I\'ve just never managed to take it to a higher level, though I\'m still trying hard at it.
January 18th, 2022 10:58
Paul Bell said:
I\'ve always loved medication, just sometimes saying buzzwords can have a relaxing feel about it. I\'ve just never managed to take it to a higher level, though I\'m still trying hard at it.
January 18th, 2022 10:58
The one percent that matters
AuburnScribbler said:
Another masterful write here spilleronsheet.
Though it\'s clear, your poem leans towards the one vs. the many, when it comes to the \"crunch\" we are all in the same boat, and the way you remind us of that, particularly in the last two stanzas, is wonderfully achieved!
Bravo, and I hope that all is well!
January 18th, 2022 10:37
AuburnScribbler said:
Another masterful write here spilleronsheet.
Though it\'s clear, your poem leans towards the one vs. the many, when it comes to the \"crunch\" we are all in the same boat, and the way you remind us of that, particularly in the last two stanzas, is wonderfully achieved!
Bravo, and I hope that all is well!
January 18th, 2022 10:37
The one percent that matters
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good words spilleronsheet and that final stanza is so positive and that is the way life should be.
Andy
January 18th, 2022 01:49
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good words spilleronsheet and that final stanza is so positive and that is the way life should be.
Andy
January 18th, 2022 01:49
The one percent that matters
Rozina said:
Words that give me hope, thank you so much.
January 17th, 2022 22:52
Rozina said:
Words that give me hope, thank you so much.
January 17th, 2022 22:52
The one percent that matters
FallenAngel1🕊 said:
I\'ve tried meditation,but my mind always races with thoughts,..but I too am left with a little feeling of lightness from your words. Thanks🙂
January 17th, 2022 11:20
FallenAngel1🕊 said:
I\'ve tried meditation,but my mind always races with thoughts,..but I too am left with a little feeling of lightness from your words. Thanks🙂
January 17th, 2022 11:20
The one percent that matters
Neville said:
.. it works for me .. thanks for the nudge in the write direction .. left this page feeling a whole lot cleaner, better and generally lighter ... thank you ............... N x
January 17th, 2022 10:59
Neville said:
.. it works for me .. thanks for the nudge in the write direction .. left this page feeling a whole lot cleaner, better and generally lighter ... thank you ............... N x
January 17th, 2022 10:59
The one percent that matters
L. B. Mek said:
\'took
the dose of forgiveness
surpassed those;
those, negligent of pain
burned the letter
of fall and failures
took
the vaccine of ignorance
to those
needless criticisms
immune to blames
immune to stares\'..
write, ink it all out
till we can, distil any milk
as, an iota of a messy
theoretical, explanation
out of all
this abundance of senselessness
threatening, to drown-out
our sensibility\'s and sense...
(a great read, dear Poet
thank you)
January 17th, 2022 08:24
L. B. Mek said:
\'took
the dose of forgiveness
surpassed those;
those, negligent of pain
burned the letter
of fall and failures
took
the vaccine of ignorance
to those
needless criticisms
immune to blames
immune to stares\'..
write, ink it all out
till we can, distil any milk
as, an iota of a messy
theoretical, explanation
out of all
this abundance of senselessness
threatening, to drown-out
our sensibility\'s and sense...
(a great read, dear Poet
thank you)
January 17th, 2022 08:24
The one percent that matters
Fay Slimm. said:
What an inspiring read and thanking you more than you know for this posting Spills - -- every day is a sure gift to do with as we may.
January 17th, 2022 06:25
Fay Slimm. said:
What an inspiring read and thanking you more than you know for this posting Spills - -- every day is a sure gift to do with as we may.
January 17th, 2022 06:25
Unkind letter
Vamsi Sudha said:
Dear Spiller,
Your poems are so picturesque and its like you are at directing a movie. SO beautiful they fill my eyes completely. I really travel to the event many times. Very very unique of you, and the best lines of the poem ..
the hemlines of worries were closed
the blanket of hopes stitched
the pillows of reunion formed
and the bed sheet of luxury spread
thanks Spiller, Life is so beautiful with your poems !!!
January 16th, 2022 20:53
Vamsi Sudha said:
Dear Spiller,
Your poems are so picturesque and its like you are at directing a movie. SO beautiful they fill my eyes completely. I really travel to the event many times. Very very unique of you, and the best lines of the poem ..
the hemlines of worries were closed
the blanket of hopes stitched
the pillows of reunion formed
and the bed sheet of luxury spread
thanks Spiller, Life is so beautiful with your poems !!!
January 16th, 2022 20:53
Unkind letter
woundedheart said:
Very creative and very deep feeling throughout, wonderful my friend ☺
January 16th, 2022 17:02
woundedheart said:
Very creative and very deep feeling throughout, wonderful my friend ☺
January 16th, 2022 17:02
Unkind letter
Poetic Dan said:
Not sure where you took me but glad to be a part of it my friend. Keep sailing!
January 16th, 2022 13:37
Poetic Dan said:
Not sure where you took me but glad to be a part of it my friend. Keep sailing!
January 16th, 2022 13:37
Unkind letter
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
I love your writings recently , spiller 🙂
This is so engaging , and creative …
January 16th, 2022 12:14
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
I love your writings recently , spiller 🙂
This is so engaging , and creative …
January 16th, 2022 12:14
The lonely lane
Rozina said:
A sneeze, a cough, suddenly you\'re alone. The \'new world\'. Sad but true.
January 15th, 2022 23:51
Rozina said:
A sneeze, a cough, suddenly you\'re alone. The \'new world\'. Sad but true.
January 15th, 2022 23:51
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